.應(yīng)用文寫作演講稿(2021·全國(guó)乙卷)你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以Be Smart Online Learners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽,內(nèi)容包括:1.分析優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足;2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。Be Smart Online LearnersGood morning, everyone                                                                           Be Smart Online LearnersGood morning, everyoneIt is nice to deliver a speech titled “Be smart online learners” Nowadays, with the rapid development of the Internet, online learning brings us significant advantages in furthering our studyFor instance, its flexibility enables us to learn at our own pace and learn repeatedly until we master what we are learningHowever, online learning presents challenges, the biggest of which is low efficiency caused by a lack of self-disciplineTherefore, I would like to recommend ways to be smart online learnersClosing other social media comes firstAdvance planning and good time management will also contribute to our productivityAt last, hope all of us can be smart online learnersThank you for listening!1.詞匯美:文章運(yùn)用了很多高級(jí)詞匯,如with the rapid development of, further, enable ...to ..., at our own pace, present, a lack of, contribute to等。2.句式美:until we master what we are learninguntil引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,其中又包含一個(gè)what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。the biggest of which is low efficiency caused by a lack of self-disciplinewhich引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,定語(yǔ)從句中caused by a lack of self-discipline是過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)修飾low efficiency。Closing other social media是動(dòng)詞-ing形式短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。你校正在舉行主題為Hi-tech in My Life的英語(yǔ)演講比賽,請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷寫一篇演講稿參賽,談?wù)勑驴萍紟?lái)的變化。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息。      【參考范文】Nowadays, hi-tech has been impacting on our daily life greatlyTake visiting museums for exampleThey are not merely places of looking and learning any longerThanks to modern technology, they allow visitors to participate and interact with exhibits, insteadLast summer, I went on a visit to the Shanghai Natural History Museum, where I experienced its immersive multi-media display for the first timeI really got a kick out of walking into history, experiencing the rise and fall of human civilisation in personApparently, it is the advance of technology that is making static exhibits more interesting and attractive.讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Are you ready for our walk? Grandma asked the usual question every Friday evening[懸念1]Of course, we are! we shouted excitedly, ready to talk about the end of the week and fill Grandma in about our weekGrowing up, my sisters and I always knew Grandma had heart problems and couldn't do anything hard, but we did know she would do anything to spend more time with usWhether it was a wander around the block or a walk to the library, Grandma was there by our sideWhen I was going into sixth grade, we were told that Grandma only had 2% heart functionHer heart wasn't benefiting her anymore, but she found out that there was a way to live longer: an IVADIt is a heart pump (起搏器) that replaces the heart, basically, a battery instead of a heart and it's connected to a battery pack by a tube that comes out of the sideGrandma would become a robot with no heart! The Toledo Hospital, the only hospital near us that could do this surgery, offered to do it for GrandmaShe, obviously, agreedThe grey morning of the surgery was rough for our family, as we woke up bright and early to drive to the hospital[懸念2] That car ride left me with worried thoughts racing through my mind: Will Grandma be okay? Will we ever take another walk around the block?When we arrived at the hospital, we knew exactly where to go, as we'd been there many times beforeAfter going through those familiar doors and up the stairs, my mum and I walked up to the nurses' desk and asked for GrandmaOh, Mary? A nurse answered“She's one of the nicest patients we've had[懸念3] Then she directed us to the waiting room and told us that only two of us were permitted to go into the ward (病房) at a time to say goodbye to Grandma before she went in for surgery注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。The last two people were Grandpa and me                                                                         Finally, after the longest morning of my life, the doctor entered the waiting room, smiling   一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵:Who: GrandmaWhere: in the hospitalWhen: when the author was going into sixth gradeWhat: Grandma's heart problemHow: Grandma was in hospital for surgery大意:奶奶心臟有問(wèn)題,不得不做手術(shù),作者和她的家人們都非常擔(dān)心。二、挖掘文中懸念點(diǎn)懸念1 思考:奶奶為什么每周五晚上就會(huì)問(wèn)這個(gè)問(wèn)題?懸念2思考:作者為什么說(shuō)奶奶動(dòng)手術(shù)的那天早晨的天是灰色的,有什么寓意嗎?懸念3思考:這句話除了說(shuō)明奶奶經(jīng)常住院治療,還能說(shuō)明奶奶是什么樣的性格?三、分析段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)段首句1思考:作者看到奶奶了嗎?會(huì)擁抱奶奶嗎?奶奶會(huì)對(duì)作者說(shuō)些什么? 爺爺會(huì)安慰奶奶嗎?奶奶會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)?段首句2思考:醫(yī)生會(huì)怎樣說(shuō)? 作者他們會(huì)有什么樣的反應(yīng)?奶奶手術(shù)后的狀態(tài)怎樣?通過(guò)以上思路,預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下:Paragraph 1:作者看見(jiàn)手術(shù)前的奶奶含淚擁抱奶奶安慰作者爺爺安慰奶奶Paragraph 2:醫(yī)生允許探視病人家人放心進(jìn)病房探視奶奶奶奶手術(shù)后狀況良好The last two people were Grandpa and meEntering the room, I saw Grandma sitting on the bed with a blanket around herI ran forward and gave her the biggest hug with tearful eyesGrandma, holding me tightly in her arms, said, “I know there's a chance I won't make it, but I love you forever” Grandpa patted Grandma on the back and comforted her, “Don't worry, honeyWe are all waiting for you here” Grandma nodded with her usual smileThen she was wheeled away, leaving us waiting and praying anxiouslyFinally, after the longest morning of my life, the doctor entered the waiting room, smilingMary is out of surgeryYou're allowed to visit her as long as you're quiet he saidRelief swept over my body and tears began rolling down my faceOnce we walked into the room, there lay Grandma, looking peaceful yet painful with so many tubes attached to herI felt so shocked but so happyGrandma would be okayShe was taking the first step to becoming better and going on another walk with us one day1.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動(dòng)。biggesttearful將作者擔(dān)心奶奶手術(shù)和對(duì)奶奶的愛(ài)表現(xiàn)得淋漓盡致。usual修飾smile,表明奶奶平時(shí)就很堅(jiān)強(qiáng)樂(lè)觀。so修飾shockedhappy,更能凸顯作者當(dāng)時(shí)吃驚和高興的程度。2.詞匯與語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。文章中高級(jí)詞匯make it, anxiously, allow, roll down, attach等的運(yùn)用貼切生動(dòng)。動(dòng)詞-ing形式Entering the room作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ),saw后接動(dòng)詞-ing形式作賓語(yǔ),holding me tightly ...leaving us waiting ...等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用使得續(xù)寫簡(jiǎn)潔流暢。chance后接省略that的同位語(yǔ)從句,這是一個(gè)增分點(diǎn)。as long asonce引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,彰顯了考生扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。A worried call came into Jimmy Gill's bar this past MarchA newly married woman who had spent the afternoon at the beach bar couldn't find her walletShe didn't care about her ID, credit cards, or $150 in cash — but her wedding ring was put insideGill didn't like the idea that a theft could have occurred at his placeSo he set out to find the walletHe spent hours scanning footage (影片片段) from 16 different surveillance (監(jiān)控), cameras, watching the woman's every step in the bar until she went to sit on a bench outside and left when her ride arrivedWithin minutes, a young man in a jacket approached the bench, quickly put something in his pocket, and walked offGill posted a clip on the bar's Facebook pageI didn't want to accuse him, he said“I just asked if anybody knew who the guy wasWithin hours, Gill got a text from 17-year-old Rivers Prather, who'd heard about the post from one of his friendsPrather admitted having taken the wallet and told Gill he'd done it because he hadn't eaten in two daysHe said he saw the ring but thought it was fake, so he took the money and threw the wallet off the dock (碼頭) into the oceanThen he bought a sandwichGill, unsure whether he believed Prather, told the teen to meet him at the dockThere, they got to talking, and Prather revealed that he wasn't getting along with his family and had been living in the woods for a weekGill, a father of two with another on the way, looked closely at Prather — his small build, his pale cheeks — and saw him for what he was: more of a kid than a criminalBut the police were already on the case, and because of the missing ring, Prather could be facing chargesHe would be going to jail, Gill says“I had to help him somehow注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。The next day, Gill hired two divers to search the waters                                                                             Suddenly a diver came out of the water                                                                             【參考范文】The next day, Gill hired two divers to search the watersA police was waiting for them thereA crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong currentMore than an hour passed with no sign of the ringGill grew worried, especially when the police began questioning Prather, trying to get him to admit keeping the ringSuddenly a diver came out of the waterIn his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ringCheers broke out in the crowdWhen Gill called the wallet's owner, the woman burst into tearsShe was more than delighted and promptly dropped the charge against the Prather for stealing the ringBut it wasn't over for GillHe'd been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woodsGill knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live in for a whileHe told the teen he could stay with his family until the boy got on his feet again 

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