.應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作推薦信(2020·北京卷)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)戲劇俱樂(lè)部外籍指導(dǎo)教師Jim因疫情滯留英國(guó)。復(fù)學(xué)在即,作為俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人,你給Jim寫(xiě)一封電子郵件,請(qǐng)他推薦一名外籍指導(dǎo)教師,內(nèi)容包括:1.條件及要求;2.表示感謝并提醒注意防護(hù)。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50;2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim     Yours,Li HuaDear JimHow are you doing? I hope everything's OK with youOur school's drama club plans to start practisingSince you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your placeWould you please recommend one for us? He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teachingThank you for your helpPlease take care of yourselfRemember to wear a mask when necessaryBest wishes!Yours,Li Hua1.詞匯美:文章運(yùn)用了很多高級(jí)詞匯,如be away, be in one's place, recommend, native English speaker, currently, experienced, take care of等。2.句式美:Since you're away in BritainSince引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。Would you please recommend one for us?是委婉請(qǐng)求的高分句式。when necessarywhen引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的省略句,其中省略了it is。假定你是李華,你的筆友Chris 想申請(qǐng)加入學(xué)校的漢語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部,需要展示一項(xiàng)中國(guó)特色的才藝,他寫(xiě)信向你求助,希望你能推薦一項(xiàng)中國(guó)特色的才藝展示。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封回信。內(nèi)容包括:1.推薦才藝;2.推薦理由;3.表達(dá)祝福。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Dear Chris,    Yours,Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Chris,I know that you want to participate in the Chinese club in our school, where you need to show talents with characteristicsAnd I am writing to advise you to take up a cooking course full of the Chinese tasteSuch a choice can arouse Chinese people's great awareness to Chinese foodAs we all know, our Chinese people attach great importance to eatingIf you can introduce a dish, I believe they can be attracted a lotMoreover, learning to cook is an amazing thing for all of usBest wishes to you! I hope you can achieve it successfullyYoursLi Hua.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。I am a doctor, so I love my jobI always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment[懸念1] With a pandemic sweeping through the world, people are avoiding hospitals as possible as they canHowever, pregnant women still need to come into the hospitalBabies still need to be bornRight now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightenedTheir families are separated from them due to safety measuresWe've always provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional supportUnfortunately, some of the women have caught coronavirus, and being at the hospital puts me at riskPersonally, I feel protected because we have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shiftsYou don't know if someone is carrying coronavirus or notI didn't want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to themAs a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realised I had to make a very tough decision about my family's safety when the country went into lockdownGiving up work wasn't an option for meI wanted to be able to look after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little children behind either[懸念2]At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to my hospital dutiesI thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them upWhen I explained the situation to my children and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to goOn the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen[懸念3]注意:續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150右。After that, my workload increased because some of my co-workers fell ill                                                                         A week later, it came to Xiaoyong's birthday   一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵:Who: a doctorWhere: in the hospitalWhen: while a pandemic sweeping through the worldWhat: During the epidemic period, the author had to make a choiceHow: The author left her children to her sister大意:本文講述了作者是一位有著兩個(gè)孩子的單親母親,也是一位醫(yī)生,在疫情期間,在工作和家人之間難以抉擇,最后選擇去醫(yī)院工作,把孩子交給她妹妹一家照顧。二、挖掘文中懸念點(diǎn)懸念1思考:作者此刻為什么感到當(dāng)醫(yī)生特別驕傲?懸念2思考:作者會(huì)想出兩全的辦法嗎?懸念3思考:孩子會(huì)適應(yīng)媽媽不在場(chǎng)的生活嗎?三、分析段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)段首句1思考:工作量具體增加了多少? 作者都做些什么?她有時(shí)間陪孩子嗎?作者還記得兒子小勇的生日嗎?段首句2思考:作者在兒子生日時(shí)能回家嗎?不能的話,是不是要拍照,和家人視頻慶祝生日呢? 家人會(huì)怎么安慰和鼓勵(lì)作者?作者有什么感受?通過(guò)以上思路,預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)如下:Paragraph 1:工作量增加全身心投入工作沒(méi)時(shí)間留給孩子為孩子生日做補(bǔ)償Paragraph 2:在醫(yī)院和家人視頻聊天和同事一起為兒子唱生日歌感想After that, my workload increased because some of my co-workers fell illWe had to work double shifts and my life was dedicated to nothing but workEvery day I came back home completely exhausted and fell fast asleepAs soon as I woke up, I needed to go to the hospitalI poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewardingHowever, it troubled me that I didn't have time for my own kidsXiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soonI had to do something to make up for himA week later, it came to Xiaoyong's birthdayI made a video call to them from the hospitalI greeted them on the screen with mask and goggles onSurprisingly, they recognised me at once, shouting excitedlyI took the phone to the hall, where my co-workers sang Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong! They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his faceMy children's understanding and my co-workers' support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever truly separate me and my beloved onesWe are sure to win1.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫(xiě)更加生動(dòng)。nothing but用得恰到好處,表現(xiàn)出主人公全力以赴投入工作。completely exhausted表明主人公工作辛苦。warm一詞用得精妙,概括了醫(yī)生大家庭的溫暖,人們互助、互愛(ài),共渡疫情難關(guān)。2.詞匯與語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。be dedicated tobe devoted to的高級(jí)表達(dá)。poured all my efforts into是一個(gè)增分點(diǎn)。As soon as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。with mask and goggles onwith復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),是一個(gè)增分點(diǎn)。閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。As we get older, there are certain gifts standing out in our memories for a variety of reasonsOne gift I was given and treasured most was a doll named PatsyShe wasn't originally mine but was my younger sister's New Year gift, but on holding Patsy I immediately fell in love with her and couldn't bear to part with herLuckily, my sister was quite happy to exchange dollsFrom then on Patsy was my baby and I continued to love her dearlyAnother gift I offered my Mum has been shining in my mindOn a Saturday, I was on my way to the local cinema when I happened to glimpse (一瞥) at the window of the gift shop at the corner of our streetThere were lovely gloves, pretty flowered handkerchiefs, and rose patterned teacups and saucers, all in pretty boxesSeeing all these lovely gifts reminded me that it would soon be Mother's Day and my mother's birthdayWouldn't it be nice, I thought, if I could give my mother something really special, something I'd bought myself? So I stepped inside the shop and admired a dressing table set, which was a green cut glass with ornamental tray (裝飾托盤(pán)) and several matching piecesI was sure my mother would love itThe lady must have seen my disappointment when she told me the priceBut she had a suggestion which immediately lifted my spiritsShe pulled out a large notebook and wrote my name in it and the gift I wanted to buy, and in return I paid her a penny from my pocket moneyIt meant no sweets that day but I didn't careAt the age of nine, I'd made my very first lay-by (分期付款) ...and felt like a grown-upFrom then on, every Saturday I dropped in at the shop on schedule and paid a penny, which the lady dutifully recorded in her notebook注意:續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。The day before Mother's Day I paid the last two pence                                                                           Too excited to wait till Sunday, I excitedly presented the gift to my mother      【參考范文】The day before Mother's Day I paid the last two penceAs the lady wrapped the gift in brown paper and tied it with string, I attentively signed the notebook to say I had completed my lay-byI thanked her and excitedly left the shopBe careful not to drop it, she called after meSecurely, the gift tucked under my arm, I skipped the short distance homeToo excited to wait till Sunday, I excitedly presented the gift to my motherI placed the parcel on my mother's lap and I stood by her side, hopping from one foot to the other, as she painstakingly untied every single knot in the string and slowly peeled away the brown paper as if she were unfolding butterfly wings, to reveal the boxMy heart was racingThen, as I bit into my bottom lip, she carefully began to lift the lidDo you like it, do you like it I asked excitedly, Yes, I love it so much and I'll keep it with me, said my motherShe was delighted, smiling sweetlyThe special gift survived many house moves, and it was still sitting on my mother's dressing table 

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