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(2019·天津卷)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動?；顒悠陂g，英方教師Chris將做一個有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座?，F(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件：1．你喜歡的講座話題(從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一)；2．選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；3．希望從中有何收獲。注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Chris，I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School． Thank you for your time．Yours，Li Jin
Dear Chris，I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School．①I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange．During the activity, you will give a lecture on Western art．②You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about．From my personal note, music is my priority．③I am interested in all kinds of music, among which jazz is my favourite．I want to know about the history of jazz, and some famous jazz singers．I would appreciate it if you could add some sessions of enjoying jazz．Thank you for your time．Yours，Li Jin
1．詞匯美：文章運用了很多高級詞匯，如week-long, give a lecture on, seek for advice on, from one's personal note, priority, be interested in, session等。2．句式美：①句that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange是that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，用來說明news的具體內(nèi)容。②句what topic the lecture will be about是由what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作介詞on的賓語。③句among which jazz is my favourite是非限制性定語從句，這是一個增分點。
假如你是李華，你班計劃在藝術(shù)節(jié)期間表演英語情景劇(sitcom)，并想請對此頗有興趣的外教Mr Smith給予指導(dǎo)?，F(xiàn)請你給他寫一郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．提出請求；2．指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3．期待回復(fù)。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 【參考范文】Dear Mr Smith，We are to put on an English sitcom during the Art Festival．So I'm writing to ask if you would be kind enough to give us some guidance．The sitcom is set in a nuclear family where a series of amusing incidents happen．Its plots and lines have already been in place, but considering the possible problems, we still long for your expertise to polish them．Additionally, the performers being inexperienced, we expect your guidance with performing skills．Your help with the sitcom will be much appreciated．Looking forward to your favourable reply．Yours sincerely，Li HuaⅡ．讀后續(xù)寫
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。My name is Manan, and I am in the sixth grade．Of all the festivals, Diwali, a Hindu festival that is celebrated in autumn, is my favourite because I can set off fireworks and eat delicious foods during the festival．One day, I went shopping for fireworks with my grandfather．I was looking at the brightly coloured fireworks when suddenly I bumped into a little boy．All my fireworks scattered out of the bag．[懸念1] I quickly bent down to pick them up．Then I noticed the boy's face was full of wonder and amazement as he stared at my fireworks．It appeared as though he had never seen any this closely．When he bent down to pick them up, I snatched them from him and quickly put them back in my bag．As I stood there looking at him, I realised there was something different about this boy．His clothes were old and torn; he looked as though he had not eaten for a few days．[懸念2] On reaching home, I finished my dinner quickly and ran out to set off the fireworks．I was fascinated by the variety of colours that burst open from the fireworks and lit up the sky, but my wonder was short-lived．I noticed that my grandfather had gone inside the house coughing．Wondering why, I looked around and noticed all the smoke that may have been irritating his throat．Feeling bad for only a second, I continued lighting the fireworks one after another．But, inside me, it felt different — I felt guilty about taking pleasure from bursting the fireworks．I could feel my conscience pricking me, “Manan! How can you do this? It just takes a few minutes for all the money to disappear in smoke, but the boy you met today looked like he did not even have the basic necessities of life．The children in orphanages also need love and help．Didn't you see how your fireworks have affected Grandpa, too? Can you still ignore these things and indulge in this kind of fun？” Realising the worthlessness of this temporary pleasure, I really wanted to use the money in a more rewarding way．I started thinking about my own way to celebrate Diwali．[懸念3]注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。I went up to my grandfather and told him about my plan． Soon enough, the orphanage was filled with laughter, joy and celebration． 
一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵：Who: MananWhere: at homeWhen: during DiwaliWhat: celebrating DiwaliHow: The author celebrated Diwali in a meaningful way．大意：作者通過買煙花和放煙花的經(jīng)歷意識到應(yīng)該把錢用在更有意義的地方。二、挖掘文中懸念點懸念1思考：煙花散落，別人看到會怎么想？那個孩子會撿煙花嗎？懸念2思考：那個男孩子這么可憐，對比中會讓作者有何感悟？懸念3思考：那么作者會想出什么有意義的方式來過排燈節(jié)呢？三、分析段落開頭語段首句1思考：①爺爺會贊成作者的想法嗎？②作者會和父母討論他的想法嗎？③作者他們?nèi)ス聝涸簯?yīng)該買什么，帶什么去？段首句2思考：①作者他們在孤兒院怎么慶祝節(jié)日？ ②孤兒院的孩子會說些什么？③作者有什么感悟？通過以上思路，預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下：Paragraph 1：爺爺贊成作者的想法→和父母討論想法→決定去孤兒院→采購所需物品Paragraph 2：在孤兒院聯(lián)歡→放煙花→孤兒院的一個兒童發(fā)表了感言→作者感悟I went up to my grandfather and told him about my plan．He said it was a good idea for me to go to an orphanage and celebrate the festival with kids there．Later that day, we discussed the idea with my parents and they applauded it．After some research, my whole family decided to visit “Happy Home”．Finally, on Diwali we arrived there with cake, clothes, sweets, games, and gifts for everyone．Soon enough, the orphanage was filled with laughter, joy and celebration．We sang songs, danced, told jokes, and played games．And we even set off fireworks together! Just then, a boy walked up to me and said, “Thank you so much! We've never had so much fun before．” Feeling satisfied from within, I looked at my grandfather who was telling stories to them．Even before we realised, it was already time for us to leave．We said goodbye to them, promising to come back again soon．I felt very happy because this Diwali was celebrated in such a rewarding way．
1．使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動。①用even引出放煙花，呼應(yīng)了原文的細(xì)節(jié)，又加強了語氣，突出了煙花這一線索。②never一詞凸顯孩子們的快樂、欣喜之情。③用indeed加強語氣，用best概括這種過節(jié)方式的意義。2．詞匯與語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。①sang songs, danced, told jokes, and played games連動式描寫，恰到好處。②Feeling satisfied from within和promising to come back again soon兩處為動詞-ing形式作狀語。③文中用了定語從句who was telling stories to them。閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。I always prided myself on being a wise shopper and having a good nose for bargains．So when I came across a sporting goods store with a sign “Going Out of Business Sale”，I marched into the crowded store．Up and down the aisles (通道), I wandered, humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale．All of a sudden, there, at the back of the store sat a canoe (輕舟) exactly like my husband's dream Supremo Numero-Uno, whose picture had been stuck on the bathroom mirror for years．My heart beat wildly．I pushed my way through the crowds, and nearly fell into the canoe looking for the price tag．There it was, with the manufacturer's suggested price at $6，750 plus tax crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR $750 AS IS．Must be a mistake．$6，000 off? Salesman．I had to talk to a salesman．I spotted a young fellow with a “Hi．I'm Mathew”．“Mathew, tell me about this El Supremo canoe．What's wrong with it? Why is it only $750？”“Oh．There's nothing wrong with it．It's brand new．We're closing the store．It's on clearance like everything else．I'll go check．” A few minutes later he came back and said, “I'm sorry, ma'am．Someone made a mistake on the sale tag．It should be $4，750 for the whole package．”I felt tears well up in my eyes．“Oh well，” I said sadly．“Of course, it was too good to be true．This is exactly like my husband's dream boat．I guess I started to dream myself when I saw that price tag．He's going to be 62 years old Friday．Had to retire early for his health．It's been hard on just the pension but the stubborn old fool has been saving $10 every week for years to buy one just like this．I promise I won't buy anything, but it's just an old man's silly dream, you know．Always said he wanted to fish in a canoe after he retired，” my voice lowered and I turned and walked away．注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me．“Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery, ma'am？” “Ma'am, there's something you should know．This store was my grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him． 【參考范文】I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me．“Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery, ma'am？” “Yes．Yes．That's about all I have．” “Well then, you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe．We'll even put a bow on it for his birthday．” I started to cry．My old hand shook as I wrote out my cheque．“Ma'am, there's something you should know．This store was my grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him．He always promised to retire one day and said he wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe．” He swallowed hard．“My grandpa died, sudden-like, just last week．He was only 68 years old．I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe．You just have to make sure he uses it a lot, okay? Promise？” “I promise，” I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband．
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