.應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作給報(bào)刊投稿(2021·天津卷3)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目,請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿,介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括:1.該地方的基本情況(如名稱(chēng)、地理位置等); 2.該地方的特色(如文化、景點(diǎn)等);3.你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于100;2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li Jin     A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li JinSichuan Province is located in the southwestern part of ChinaIt enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhai Valley and Dujiangyan Irrigation SystemJiuzhai Valley National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan ProvinceWhat is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colourful lakesWhat's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas and golden monkeysThere are also many species of rare plants protected thereAnother famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation SystemIt dates from over 2,000 years agoHowever, it is still playing an important part in irrigation todaySichuan is a wonderful placeI'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhai Valley as well as the construction of Dujiangyan Irrigation System1.詞匯美:文章運(yùn)用了很多高級(jí)詞匯,如be located in, world-famous, places of interest, a nature reserve, impressive, multi-level waterfalls, have a chance to do sth, rare animals, scenic spot, date from, play an important part in, be amazed by 等。2.句式美:What is the most impressiveWhat引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句。walking in the nature reserve是動(dòng)詞-ing形式短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ),to see rare animals是不定式作后置定語(yǔ)。句中的However表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。此外,文中多處巧妙運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~語(yǔ),比如What's more表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系;such as, like表示列舉等。假定你是李華。上周你校組織了嘉興南湖一日游學(xué)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給校報(bào)英文版投稿,介紹該活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括:1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間、參加人員;2.游學(xué)活動(dòng)安排(坐游船、參觀紀(jì)念館等);3.活動(dòng)反響。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:Memorial Hall紀(jì)念館    【參考范文】Last week, our school organised a one-day study tour in Nanhu, JiaxingAll the teachers and students of our school took part in the activityOn Wednesday, we gathered at the school gate at 7 o'clock in the morning, and then went there by busIn order to review the history of the founding of the Party and appreciate the spirit of the Red Boat, we took a cruise ship and visited the Memorial HallWe listened carefully to the teacher's explanation of the history of the Party BuildingOne hundred years ago, the older generation made continuous efforts to revitalise China, which made us very movedWe will work harder for the happiness of mankind in the future.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhoodIt was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetfulOne strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells us a lot about her[懸念1]My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the wayAs the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said goodbye to all of our friendsWho knew if we'd ever see them again! Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove offWe bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveller's checks Mum had forgotten[懸念2]David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mum was driving while Dad sleptYou stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I will stand outside the door and play lookout while you go I had terrible pictures in my mindHoney, where are the kids? What?! Oh, I thought they were being awfully quiet We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren't about to take any chancesOn the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy (空房間)After driving in vain for some time, Mum suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and asked if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous[懸念3] To our great relief, Dad turned down the ideaMum never could understand our objections (反對(duì))If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mum would have been delightedShe thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she isWe finally found a vacancy in the next town注意:續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。The next day we remembered the brand new (嶄新) tent we brought with us                                                                          We drove through several states and saw lots of sights along the way                                                                          一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵:Who: the author's familyWhere: on the journeyWhen: when the author was elevenWhat: They drove to Colorado and North DakotaHow: The author experienced many strange and interesting things大意:本文敘述了作者的母親很健忘,一家四口自駕旅游去祖父母和外祖父母所居住的地方,途中發(fā)生了很多有趣的事情。二、挖掘文中懸念點(diǎn)懸念1思考:為什么作者說(shuō)他們的家庭旅游是奇怪的?懸念2思考:為什么作者說(shuō)他們勇敢地開(kāi)車(chē)離開(kāi)?懸念3思考:作者和大衛(wèi)為什么緊張?三、分析段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)段首句1思考:他們帶帳篷了嗎? 媽媽是健忘的,途中會(huì)不會(huì)有什么麻煩?假如爸爸不在場(chǎng),孩子們會(huì)怎樣?段首句2思考:他們帶的帳篷會(huì)發(fā)揮作用嗎? 野營(yíng)時(shí),媽媽會(huì)怎么做?作者對(duì)這次旅行的感悟是什么?通過(guò)以上思路,預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)如下:Paragraph 1:沒(méi)有忘記帶帳篷媽媽健忘把爸爸丟了媽媽決定路邊露營(yíng)等他孩子們害怕母愛(ài)Paragraph 2:露營(yíng)母愛(ài)的力量見(jiàn)到了爸爸作者的感悟The next day we remembered the brand new(嶄新) tent we brought with usWe were happy to see it all still packed, and hoped it would be packed foreverHowever, things came to its turning pointMum lost Dad in the gas station when we were sleepingWhat's more, as the dark approached, we met the same trouble againFearful as Mum was, she decided to camp near the road waiting for DadThe wind blew wildly like a monsterTears took control of usMum embraced us tightly singing a soft song, which really relaxed usWe didn't meet Dad in the last few days, but we felt comfortable staying with MumWe drove through several states and saw lots of sights along the wayThe tent became a close friend thenEvery time we camped, Mum would read a book or sing a soft songThe warmth of her arms never faded away in my memoryThough she was forgetful, laughter accompanied us along the wayWe finally met poor Dad in our destinationThis trip made me realise that love may have many ways, but it can always warm people in the dark1.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫(xiě)更加生動(dòng)。forever暗示作者不喜歡露營(yíng)。the same表明途中爸爸走散了,他們不得不黑夜路邊露營(yíng)。blew wildly like a monster烘托了讓作者害怕的自然環(huán)境。poor一詞照應(yīng)Mum lost Dad,在孩子的眼里,媽媽因?yàn)榻⊥寻职峙獊G了,爸爸好可憐。2.詞匯與語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。still, things come to its turning point, approach, take control of, embrace, fade away, accompany等堪稱(chēng)經(jīng)典。Fearful as Mum wasas導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。which really relaxed uswhich引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。staying with Mum為動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)。閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。A boulder (巨石), as big as a houseThat's how the guidebook described Giant RockDad said it arrived here millions of years agoI was finally going to see it, in snowshoes, with my two older cousins, my dad, and my uncle DonI'd been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snowAt the parking area, after putting on our snowshoes, we studied the mapDue to the geographical location, electrical devices are inaccessible hereThe map is our only guideWe start here, Dad saidOn the red trail (小路)Then we turn left onto the purple roadThat's where Giant Rock is Remember to stick together and don't wander off, guys, Uncle Don saidThe trail ran uphill alongside a stone wallIt was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikersAt the top of the hill, we turned onto the purple trailWe settled into a pattern, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back,crunching (嘎吱嘎吱地行進(jìn)) through the snowI saw lots of animal tracks — mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit printsAs the trail wound down, my cousin Andrew said what I'd been thinkingWill we ever reach Giant Rock? My cousin Aiden smiled and turned to me, Luke, do you think your dad invented this idea just to get us away from the TV for a while I laughed“You never knowFinally, we climbed a hill and saw the massive boulder sitting alone in the forestIt really is as big as a house! My cousins and I high-fived each other and jogged until we stood at the base, breathlessStanding in the boulder's broad shadow, I noticed the sun had sunk lowerLet's head back, Dad said after a few minutes“There will be several crossroads on the way backGuys, keep up with the team” Soon we were crunch-crunch-crunching our way homeI was a little behind the group when we approached a crossroadsAnd I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn't recognise, so I followed them for a closer look注意:續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。I looked up when I suddenly realised how quiet it had gotten                                                                          As going worriedly, I heard voices, someone calling far away                                                                           【參考范文】I looked up when I suddenly realised how quiet it had gottenWhere is everyone? I shoutedNothingThey couldn't have gone farI'll catch up if I hurry I comforted myselfAfter a short walk, I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go straight, but both trails had red markersI turned to the left which looked familiarUnfortunately, it got quieter and quieterSoon it might be too dark to tell what colour the markers wereWhat if I couldn't find my way back?As going worriedly, I heard voices, someone calling far awayFollowing the voices, I noticed the stone wall, the trail running alongside itIt must be the right way back! I rushed downhill with big stepsThen, I saw the parking area, and my family! I shouted as I ran towards themLuke? Are you OK? The voice of Dad was urgentI'd only been lost for minutes, but it seemed like foreverNow all I wanted was a bear hug from Dad and to make tracks for home 

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