.應用文寫作感謝信(2019·浙江卷6)假定你是李華,經(jīng)常幫助你學習英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表示感謝;2.回顧Alex對你的幫助; 3.臨別祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。    Dear Alex,Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon, I'm eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your helpHonestly speaking, it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skillsUnder your professional guidance, I have made unbelievable progress in EnglishIt's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contestWhenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm and confidenceNo words are strong enough to convey how grateful I amThanks again and wish you a pleasant journey homeYoursLi Hua1.詞匯美:文章運用了很多高級詞匯,如leave for, eagerly, express one's heartfelt gratitude to, honestly speaking, under one's professional guidance, make progress, unbelievable, rank first, encounter, cheer sbup, help sbout, fuel, enthusiasm, convey等。2.句式美:Learning that ...是動詞-ing形式短語作狀語。Whenever引導讓步狀語從句,which引導非限制性定語從句。enough后接不定式作結(jié)果狀語,同時運用了how引導賓語從句,這兩處表達增強了感情色彩。(2022·郴州一模)假定你是校學生會成員李華,你校學生會組織了圖書捐贈及互換活動,外教Smith先生捐贈了許多英文圖書。請你代表學生會給他寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表達感激之情;2.回顧活動以及 Smith 給予的幫助。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr Smith    Yours sincerely, Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Mr Smith,On behalf of the Student Union, I'm writing to express our heartfelt gratitude for your generous donation of so many English booksLast Friday, we organised a book donation and exchange eventMany students and teachers took an active part in itIt's so kind of you to bring books covering a wide range of topicsBesides, the books you donated were very popular, all of which were taken away in a short timeThere is no denying that your generosity and contribution made a big difference to our event, which turned out to be a great successThank you once again for your supportYours sincerely,Li Hua.讀后續(xù)寫(2020·新高考)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small communityAs the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs[懸念1] Many of their families were struggling to make ends meetPeople were trying to help each other meet the challengesMrs Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful womanShe spent a great deal of time visiting the poorShe knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of helpWhen she had time, she would bring food and medicine to themOne morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day beforeThere was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boyThe little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very muchI wish you could see him, she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara“He is such a help to his motherHe wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do[懸念2]After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about BernardI wish we could help him to earn money, said Clara“His family is suffering so muchSo do I, said Harry“We really should do something to assist themFor some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成)The other children also jumped up all attentionWhen John had an idea, it was sure to be a good oneI tell you what we can do, said JohnYou know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it[懸念3]注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右。When Mrs Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too                                                                          With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business                                                                          一、理清文章大意關鍵:Who: the Meredith familyWhere: in a small communityWhen: one morningWhat: The family wanted to help a poor familyHow: They decided to make popcorn大意:善良的Meredith一家?guī)椭粋€貧困家庭的故事。Meredith的孩子想出了一個主意,讓貧困家庭的孩子Bernard去賣爆米花。二、挖掘文中懸念點懸念1 思考:Meredith一家生活沒有受到經(jīng)濟滑坡的影響嗎?懸念2思考:媽媽為什么回家跟孩子們說這些事情?懸念3思考:孩子們的主意媽媽會同意嗎?三、分析段落開頭語段首句1思考:媽媽同意孩子的想法,他們會做哪些準備呢?到家做完爆米花之后會送到Bernard家嗎?他們將怎樣指導Bernard賣爆米花?Bernard一家收到爆米花會有什么反應?段首句2思考:Bernard會怎樣賣爆米花?會賺到錢嗎? Bernard會自己做爆米花嗎?Bernard長大后會成為成功人士嗎?通過以上思路,預設續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下:Paragraph 1:買裝爆米花的紙袋做爆米花送到BernardBernard如何賣Bernard一家的感受Paragraph 2Bernard賣爆米花Bernard學做爆米花并改良口味取得成功回報社會When Mrs Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, tooSo, they went to the local supermarket to buy paper bagsWhen they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the paper bagsWith the popcorn, they went to Bernard's homeThey told Bernard how to sell the popcornBernard and his parents were very gratefulAnd the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this familyWith everything ready, Bernard started out on his new businessHe took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcornHe earned a lot of moneyThen, he wanted to be self-dependentTherefore, he asked Mrs Meredith to teach him how to make popcornAfter that, not only did he make plain popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste betterBernard grew up to be a remarkable manHe did not forget the help of the Meredith family, and he also did what he could to help those in need1.使用恰當?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動。第一段中副詞very的運用凸顯了當時人物的心情。第二段中形容詞remarkable的運用形象表明了Meredith一家的幫助給Bernard帶來的影響。2.詞匯與語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準確。文章中高級詞匯grateful, earn money, add ...to ...的使用為文章的一大亮點。not only ...but also ...倒裝句的使用是文章的增分點。文章多處使用不定式,語言簡潔明快。閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Over the years, I've been guilty of hurriedly shutting the front door to many strangers when they came to my home knocking with the intention of selling thingsI hated it when they tried their best to persuade me to buy the things they promotedBut earlier this year, a dear friend of mine, Linda, had an experience that changed my mind and attitude towards these “intruders”Last winter, Linda went through a very messy divorce and was very depressedSo she quit her job and left Los Angeles, where she encountered her ex-husband in collegeShe flew to Boston on the east coast of the USLater, she settled in a new neighbourhood in East BostonHowever, shortly afterwards, the company where she worked went bankrupt (破產(chǎn))Suffering a series of bitter blows, she fell ill, a severe case of fluShe had to stay at home for the whole week, feeling extremely bad and hopelessEarly one morning, Linda lay in bed, feeling painful all overThen all of a sudden, there was an upsetting knock on her front doorStruggling out of the bed, she dragged herself to the windowThere, outside, she saw a young lady carefully holding some leaflets (傳單) and a TV set modelShe knew of a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was about to be gently deliveredThis is the last thing I need today, she muttered to herself and hesitantly opened the doorCoughing bitterly, Linda stuck her head out“Excuse me, madam ...” the young lady said with a smile“I'm sorry but I am not the slightest bit interested in any TV whatever” Linda interrupted her impatiently“As a matter of fact, I am feeling terribly awfulIs there anything I can do for you, madam? the young lady asked with concern“No thanks, just leave me alone” Linda then shut the door in her faceThe young lady politely turned and left in silence注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右。A few hours later, another knock                                                                           Linda was surprised by this lovely action                                                                            【參考范文】A few hours later, another knockLinda glanced out of the window and to her surprise, there at the door was the same lady, back againReally annoyed this time, Linda opened the door but before she could speak, with a concerned look on her face, the young lady handed Linda a warm pot, saying, “I'm so sorry I disturbed you earlierI thought you may like this homemade chicken soupHopefully it might make you feel a little betterLinda was surprised by this lovely actionBeing new to the area, she didn't know any neighbours, so the gesture was all the more appreciatedShe could only smile embarrassedly and sincerely thanked herWith that, the lady leftAfter she related this story to me, I thought about how touching this deed really wasEspecially in today's world where, sadly, kindness and thoughtfulness seem so rareI also realised that thinking about others and showing kindness is the real meaning of love 

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