高中英語(yǔ)外研版 (2019)必修第一冊(cè)Unit 6 At one with nature獲獎(jiǎng)ppt課件-課件下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

Period Five　Writing—Writing a summary 本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)摘要。主要包括以下方面：摘要是對(duì)一篇文章的主題思想的簡(jiǎn)單陳述。它用最簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言概括了原文的主題。寫(xiě)摘要主要包括三個(gè)步驟：1.閱讀；2.寫(xiě)作；3.修改成文。第一步：閱讀認(rèn)真閱讀給定的原文材料。如果一遍不能理解，就多讀兩遍。閱讀次數(shù)越多，你對(duì)原文的理解就越深刻。第二步：動(dòng)手寫(xiě)作摘要應(yīng)全部用自己的話完成，不要引用原文語(yǔ)句，必須全面、清晰地表明原文信息。第三步：修改成文草稿擬好以后，對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。首先，與原文比較看是否把所有重要的觀點(diǎn)都概括了，摘要中的觀點(diǎn)是否與原文中的完全一致。其次，如果摘要中出現(xiàn)了不必要的詞匯、短語(yǔ)或長(zhǎng)句子，將其刪除。再次，檢查拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的錯(cuò)誤。最后，保持語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)單明了。1.This article/passage mainly tells (a story) about...2.This passage mainly deals with/discusses/explores...3.This article focuses on the topics of...4.This essay presents knowledge that...5.This paper provides/gives an overview of...6.In this passage (about...)，the author...7.The author began the essay/passage by telling/presenting...8.First/Firstly/In the beginning/In the first part，the author argues/explains/mentions/states/points out (that)...9.Secondly/Next/Further on/Then/In the next part/In the main part，the author goes on with...10.Finally/As a conclusion，the author concludes/adds/stresses that...11.Finally，the author summarizes that... 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。It’s the first day of school and you have to find the perfect clothes to make a good impression.Lucky for me，I don’t have this problem：my private school requires I wear a uniform.Some may think this is not a good idea，but I think it is very positive.In school，one of the most important things is your style.The more you have，the more popular you will probably be.With uniforms，there’s no discrimination(歧視) because of what you’re wearing.Everyone is united under the same style.Clothing often reflects who you are.In most schools，there are groups of students who dress alike.You may even avoid a particular person because of what they are wearing.Uniforms require students to get to know each other by finding out who they really are.There are many styles of clothing，some appropriate(合適的) for school and others not.Peers and the media pressure us to dress and look a certain way.Some clothing contains logos(標(biāo)志) promoting drugs，alcohol or even violence.Since some students want to fit in and be cool，they tend to wear this type of clothing.In most school systems，however，it is not allowed.Uniforms help remove these problems.All students look similar.They all fit in.There are no distractions(使人分心的事物).Uniforms allow students to concentrate on learning instead of what they are wearing.Money also plays a big part in the clothing we wear.Not all styles are affordable.Some students may even feel pressured to steal to get the right clothing.Although uniforms are initially expensive，they can be worn for years，making them cost less than regular clothes.I believe uniforms help unite us in a common goal：to do well in school.They are a symbol of our unity.They make it clear to everyone that we are more than just our clothes：we are all individuals.審題本文的要求是寫(xiě)一篇摘要，屬于說(shuō)明文范疇，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：1.確定文體：這是一篇說(shuō)明文的摘要，結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)該為“總—分”模式。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3.主體人稱(chēng)：以第三人稱(chēng)為主。謀篇要點(diǎn)1：Para 1.主旨句(穿校服有好處)要點(diǎn)2：Para 2.主旨句(穿校服有助于消除歧視，認(rèn)識(shí)自己)要點(diǎn)3：Para 3.主旨句(穿校服能讓學(xué)生關(guān)注自己的學(xué)習(xí)而不是穿著)要點(diǎn)4：Para 4.主旨句(穿校服經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)惠，還能讓學(xué)生牢記學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo))必備詞匯1.益處多多of great benefit2.有助于contribute to3.去除；消除get rid of4.顯示；揭示reveal5.避免avoid6.專(zhuān)注于focus on7.經(jīng)受；承受withstand8.提醒某人某事remind sb.of sth.關(guān)鍵句式1.我認(rèn)為穿校服有很多好處。I think wearing school uniforms has many benefits.2.盡管有些人認(rèn)為穿校服有一些負(fù)面效應(yīng)，我還是強(qiáng)烈支持穿校服的。Although some people consider school uniforms have some negative effects，I am strongly for wearing uniforms.3.穿校服不但可以消除歧視，還可以展示學(xué)生的本性。Wearing school uniforms can not only help to get rid of discrimination，but it can also show the true nature of students.4.校服很耐穿，能為學(xué)生節(jié)約一大筆錢(qián)。School uniforms withstand wear and tear，so they can save a lot of money for students.句式升級(jí)1.用“be of＋名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)句1。As far as I am concerned，wearing school uniforms is of great benefit.2.用as引導(dǎo)的倒裝句改寫(xiě)句2。Negative as some people consider school uniforms，I am strongly for wearing uniforms.3.用not only...，but also...的倒裝句式改寫(xiě)句3。Not only do school uniforms contribute to getting rid of discrimination，but also reveal the true nature of students.4.用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句4。School uniforms withstand wear and tear，thus saving a fortune for students.為使各要點(diǎn)之間完整連貫，可利用銜接過(guò)渡詞匯firstly，secondly，lastly，to begin with，moreover等，連接成一篇60詞左右的摘要。參考范文1 As far as I’m concerned，wearing school uniforms is of great benefit.Firstly，not only do school uniforms contribute to getting rid of discrimination，but also reveal the true nature of students.Secondly，uniforms benefit students by avoiding some inappropriate clothing styles，and help them focus on learning instead of fashion.Lastly，wearing uniforms saves students quite a large sum of money and also reminds them of their common goal in school.參考范文2 Negative as some people consider school uniforms，I’m strongly for wearing uniforms.To begin with，uniforms make prejudice impossible and encourage students to judge people by their characteristics.Moreover，getting rid of the negative influences of improper clothes，uniforms contribute to fixing students’ attention on learning.Lastly，school uniforms withstand wear and tear，thus saving a fortune for students.

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