
詳細講解:
一、讀后續(xù)寫的特點與要求
閱讀理解是基礎(chǔ)
1、首先要對給定的閱讀材料進行深入理解。包括把握故事的主題、人物性格、情節(jié)發(fā)展脈絡(luò)、
情感基調(diào)等諸多方面。
例如,在一篇以友情為主題的故事中,要注意文中體現(xiàn)朋友之間相互關(guān)心、支持的細節(jié),這將為續(xù)寫部分奠定情感基礎(chǔ)。
2、關(guān)注故事中的關(guān)鍵信息,如時間、地點、人物關(guān)系等設(shè)定。比如,如果故事發(fā)生在一個古老的小鎮(zhèn),續(xù)寫時也要考慮這個環(huán)境背景對情節(jié)的潛在影響,如古老建筑可能成為情節(jié)發(fā)展的場景,小鎮(zhèn)的傳統(tǒng)習俗可能左右人物的行為。
3、續(xù)寫情節(jié)的合理性
續(xù)寫的情節(jié)要與原文自然銜接。不能脫離原文的情節(jié)線索和邏輯,應是原文情節(jié)的合理延續(xù)。例如,原文中主人公遇到了一個難題,續(xù)寫部分就應該圍繞主人公如何解決這個難題或者難題帶來的進一步影響來展開。
4、情節(jié)發(fā)展要符合生活實際和常識。避免出現(xiàn)過于離奇、不符合邏輯的情節(jié)。比如,在一個現(xiàn)實題材的故事中,人物不能突然擁有超自然的能力來解決問題,除非原文有相關(guān)的伏筆。
5、人物塑造的連貫性
續(xù)寫過程中,人物的性格和形象要與原文保持一致。如果原文中的人物是勇敢、樂觀的,續(xù)寫部分也應該體現(xiàn)這些性格特點。例如,原文中的主人公面對困難總是勇往直前,那么在續(xù)寫遇到新的挑戰(zhàn)時,也應該展現(xiàn)出他 / 她的勇敢品質(zhì)。
6、人物的情感變化要符合情節(jié)發(fā)展。隨著情節(jié)的推進,人物的情感應該是自然過渡的。比如,主人公在經(jīng)歷挫折后會感到沮喪,但在得到朋友的鼓勵后,又會重拾信心。
7、語言風格的一致性
續(xù)寫部分的語言風格要和原文相匹配。如果原文是輕松幽默的風格,續(xù)寫也應該用詼諧的語言來保持整體風格;如果原文是嚴肅深沉的,續(xù)寫語言也要莊重、沉穩(wěn)。例如,原文使用了大量的對話來推動情節(jié),續(xù)寫時也可以適當通過人物對話來延續(xù)故事。
二、讀后續(xù)寫做題步驟
1、仔細閱讀原文,把握關(guān)鍵細節(jié)
閱讀原文時,可以通過標記重要信息來加深理解。如標記人物的性格特點相關(guān)的語句(“她總是樂于助人,臉上時常帶著微笑”)、情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折點(“然而,在關(guān)鍵時刻,他的車卻拋錨了”)、環(huán)境描寫(“夜幕降臨,寒風呼嘯,整個森林顯得格外陰森”)等。
2、梳理故事的情節(jié)線索,最好能簡單地列出故事的發(fā)展脈絡(luò)。例如,故事的線索可能是 “主人公出發(fā)去探 險→遇到困難→得到初步幫助→又面臨新挑戰(zhàn)”,這樣在續(xù)寫時就可以沿著這條線索繼續(xù)構(gòu)思情節(jié)。
3、合理構(gòu)思情節(jié),制造沖突與高潮
在構(gòu)思情節(jié)時,可以從不同角度思考。比如,從人物關(guān)系角度,可以讓人物之間產(chǎn)生誤會然后化解;從環(huán)境角度,可以利用惡劣的環(huán)境增加人物的困難,然后讓人物克服困難。
4、適當制造沖突來吸引讀者。沖突可以是人物之間的矛盾、人物與環(huán)境的對抗或者人物內(nèi)心的掙扎。例如,主人公想要完成一個任務,但身邊的人都不理解并加以阻止,這就形成了人物之間的沖突。
設(shè)置情節(jié)高潮,讓故事更加跌宕起伏。高潮部分可以是主人公面臨最大的挑戰(zhàn)或者做出關(guān)鍵的抉擇。比如,主人公在生死關(guān)頭決定犧牲自己拯救他人,這就是一個情節(jié)高潮。
5、生動描寫人物,體現(xiàn)性格與情感
通過人物的語言、動作、神態(tài)、心理等方面的描寫來塑造人物形象。例如,“他緊握著拳頭,漲紅了臉,大聲說道:‘我絕對不會放棄的!’” 通過動作(緊握拳頭)、神態(tài)(漲紅了臉)和語言描寫,生動地展現(xiàn)了一個性格倔強、意志堅定的人物形象。
6、描寫人物情感變化時,要細膩入微。可以使用一些情感詞匯來增強表達效果。比如,從 “起初,她滿心歡喜,期待著即將到來的聚會” 到 “當她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被朋友遺忘時,心中滿是失落和孤獨”,這樣的情感變化描寫能讓人物更加真實。
7、巧妙運用環(huán)境描寫,烘托氛圍
環(huán)境描寫可以為故事營造氛圍,推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。在緊張的情節(jié)中,可以用黑暗、寂靜的環(huán)境來烘托緊張氣氛。例如,“黑暗中,只有他的腳步聲在空蕩蕩的走廊里回響,每一步都仿佛敲在他的心上,讓他愈發(fā)緊張?!?br>環(huán)境描寫還可以暗示人物的命運或者情節(jié)的走向。比如,“陽光透過云層灑在大地上,似乎預示著主人公即將走出困境,迎來希望?!?br>8、豐富語言表達,注意語法和詞匯
積累豐富的詞匯和多樣的句式,避免語言的單調(diào)??梢允褂猛x詞替換來增加文采。比如,用 “疾馳” 代替 “快速跑”,用 “靜謐” 代替 “安靜”。
9、運用各種句式,如倒裝句、強調(diào)句、復合句等。例如,“Never had he felt s desperate as in that mment.(他從來沒有像那一刻那樣絕望。)” 使用倒裝句增強了語言的表現(xiàn)力。
注意語法的正確使用,避免出現(xiàn)時態(tài)混亂、主謂不一致等錯誤。在寫作過程中,要仔細檢查語法,確保句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整、合理。
三、讀后續(xù)寫提升訣竅
(一)深度理解原文
1、剖析情節(jié)線索:仔細梳理原文的故事情節(jié),明確故事的開端、發(fā)展和暫時的結(jié)尾狀態(tài)。例如,原文是一個冒險故事,要找出主人公冒險的起因(如尋找寶藏)、途中遇到的阻礙(如惡劣天氣、敵人等)以及目前所處的困境(如被困在山洞)。將這些情節(jié)節(jié)點記錄下來,為續(xù)寫提供清晰的線索方向。
把握人物形象:深入分析人物的性格、動機和情感。注意文中描述人物性格的關(guān)鍵詞,如 “勇敢”“善良”“膽小” 等,以及人物的行為和語言細節(jié)。比如,一個總是在關(guān)鍵時刻幫助他人的人物,其性格核心可能是善良和樂于助人。在續(xù)寫中,要讓人物的行為符合這些已有的性格特征。
2、領(lǐng)會主題思想:理解原文想要傳達的主題,如友誼的珍貴、堅持的力量、自我成長等。主題是續(xù)寫的靈魂,續(xù)寫的情節(jié)和人物發(fā)展都應圍繞主題展開。例如,如果主題是自我成長,續(xù)寫可以寫主人公在后續(xù)的經(jīng)歷中如何克服自己的弱點,實現(xiàn)心智的成熟。
3、關(guān)注細節(jié)描寫:留意原文中的環(huán)境、動作、神態(tài)、語言等細節(jié)描寫。這些細節(jié)可能會為續(xù)寫提供靈感,或者成為續(xù)寫部分與原文銜接的重要線索。例如,原文提到了 “古老城堡墻壁上神秘的符號”,續(xù)寫時就可以圍繞這些符號展開情節(jié),比如主人公解讀符號,發(fā)現(xiàn)寶藏的線索。
(二)巧妙構(gòu)思情節(jié)
1、延續(xù)情節(jié)發(fā)展:基于原文的情節(jié)線索,自然流暢地延續(xù)故事??梢詮慕鉀Q原文留下的問題或懸念入手。比如,原文主人公被困在山洞,續(xù)寫就可以寫主人公如何尋找出口,或者等待救援的過程中發(fā)生的事情。
2、制造情節(jié)沖突:合理地設(shè)置沖突,使故事更具吸引力。沖突可以是外部沖突,如人物與環(huán)境、人物與他人之間的矛盾;也可以是內(nèi)部沖突,即人物內(nèi)心的掙扎。例如,續(xù)寫中讓主人公在尋找出口的過程中遭遇另一個尋寶者的搶奪,這就是外部沖突;或者主人公在面臨危險時,內(nèi)心產(chǎn)生了退縮和堅持的斗爭,這是內(nèi)部沖突。
3、構(gòu)建情節(jié)高潮:安排情節(jié)的高潮部分,讓故事達到緊張或感人的頂點。高潮可以是主人公面臨生死抉擇、情感爆發(fā)或者真相大白的時刻。例如,在與搶奪者的斗爭中,主人公被逼到懸崖邊,此時就是情節(jié)的高潮,讀者會非常關(guān)注主人公的命運。
4、設(shè)置圓滿結(jié)局:雖然結(jié)局不一定要皆大歡喜,但應該讓故事有一個合理的、令人滿意的結(jié)束。結(jié)局可以是主人公成功解決問題、實現(xiàn)目標,也可以是在失敗中得到了寶貴的經(jīng)驗教訓。比如,主人公最終找到了寶藏,或者雖然沒有找到寶藏,但明白了冒險的真正意義。
(三)生動刻畫人物
1、通過多種描寫手法展現(xiàn)人物:運用語言、動作、神態(tài)、心理描寫來豐富人物形象。例如,“他的嘴唇顫抖著,聲音沙啞地說:‘我不能放棄。’雙手緊緊地握住工具,額頭上青筋暴起。” 這里通過語言、動作和神態(tài)描寫,生動地表現(xiàn)了人物的緊張和堅定。
2、展現(xiàn)人物情感變化:讓人物的情感隨著情節(jié)的發(fā)展而自然變化??梢酝ㄟ^細膩的心理描寫來體現(xiàn)。比如,主人公一開始充滿希望地尋找寶藏,當遇到困難時感到焦慮和沮喪,在關(guān)鍵時刻又重新燃起希望,這些情感變化使人物更加立體真實。
3、突出人物性格成長:如果原文有體現(xiàn)人物成長的線索,續(xù)寫時要進一步強化這一點。例如,一個原本膽小的主人公,在經(jīng)歷一系列冒險后,逐漸變得勇敢,續(xù)寫可以通過具體的情節(jié)和細節(jié)描寫來展現(xiàn)這種性格的轉(zhuǎn)變,如主人公主動面對危險,保護他人。
(四)靈活運用環(huán)境描寫
1、烘托氛圍:根據(jù)情節(jié)的需要,用環(huán)境描寫來營造不同的氛圍。在緊張的情節(jié)中,可以用黑暗、寂靜、狂風暴雨等環(huán)境來增強緊張感。比如,“夜幕籠罩著森林,四周寂靜得可怕,只有樹枝被風吹動發(fā)出的‘沙沙’聲,仿佛有無數(shù)雙眼睛在黑暗中窺視著他?!?br>2、推動情節(jié)發(fā)展:環(huán)境可以成為情節(jié)發(fā)展的一個因素。例如,惡劣的天氣可能阻礙主人公的行動,或者特殊的地理環(huán)境(如河流漲水阻斷道路)可以為故事帶來新的挑戰(zhàn)或轉(zhuǎn)機。
3、暗示人物命運和主題:環(huán)境描寫有時可以暗示人物的命運或故事的主題。例如,陽光明媚的環(huán)境可能暗示主人公的前途光明,或者在困難時刻出現(xiàn)的一縷陽光象征著希望和轉(zhuǎn)機。
(五)優(yōu)化語言表達
1、積累高級詞匯和短語:平時多積累能夠準確、生動地表達意思的詞匯和短語,避免使用過于簡單和平庸的表達。例如,用 “疾馳” 代替 “快速跑”,用 “靜謐” 代替 “安靜”,用 “怒目圓睜” 代替 “生氣地看著”。
2、運用多樣化句式:使用不同類型的句子結(jié)構(gòu),如復合句、并列句、倒裝句、強調(diào)句等,使語言更富有變化。例如,“Nt nly did he vercme the difficulties, but he als helped thers.(他不僅克服了困難,還幫3助了別人。)” 使用倒裝句增強了表達效果。
3、注意語言風格統(tǒng)一:續(xù)寫的語言風格要與原文保持一致。如果原文是正式、嚴謹?shù)娘L格,續(xù)寫也應如此;如果原文是輕松、幽默的風格,續(xù)寫也要保持這種風格。同時,要注意語法正確、拼寫無誤,使文章更加通順流暢。
1.(23-24高二上·河南·期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Once, a small village farmer had the misfrtune f wing a large sum f mney t a village mney lender. The mney lender was ld, unmarried and fancied f marrying the farmer’s beautiful daughter.
One day, the farmer went t the mney lender t ask him fr sme mre time t return the lan. The mney lender pretended t be angry fr a while and then prpsed a bargain (交易). The mney lender said that if the farmer culd nt repay his debt, he wuld be punished r he had an ptin t let him marry his daughter and all his debt wuld be frgiven.
Bth the farmer and his daughter were frightened by the prpsal. There was n way the farmer culd pay back the mney sn but he did nt want his beautiful daughter t marry the ld and cruel mney lender.
In an attempt t persuade the farmer t accept his deal, the tricky mney lender made an attractive cnditin in deciding the fate (命運) f the father and daughter. He wuld keep a black and a white pebble (鵝卵石) in a bag. The girl then had t chse a pebble which wuld decide her fate. If she picked the black pebble, she wuld have t marry the mney lender and her father’s debt wuld be frgiven. If she picked the white pebble, she did nt need t marry the mney lender and her father’s debt wuld still be frgiven. If she refused t pick the pebble, the farmer wuld be thrwn int prisn.
They were standing n a path filled with pebbles. The mney lender even called the nearby villagers t witness the event, s that n party culd walk away frm their wrds. The mney lender bent ver, picked tw pebbles and kept them in a mney bag. The sharp-eyed girl nticed that he had picked tw black pebbles instead f a black and a white. He then asked the girl t pick a pebble frm the bag.
注意:1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
The girl was cnfused abut what t d.
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The mney lender dared nt admit his dishnesty in frnt f the villagers.
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2.(23-24高二下·江蘇鎮(zhèn)江·期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
My friend Carle’s birthday was appraching and I wndered what t give her as a gift. I had tw pts f beautiful flwers and I knew Carle liked flwers. Hwever, the tw pts f flwers were rare and I brught them frm a frest very far away, which tk me great effrt. S, I hesitated.
There wasn’t a clud in the sky n ne warm June mrning when Carl e and I started ut fr a day f shpping. We had learned f a quilt (被子) shp which had unique quilts created by skilled wmen frm a nearby cmpany. Carle’s heart was set n finding a blue- and- white quilt t put the finishing tuch n her guest bedrm.
We parked the car next t the nly traffic light in twn, heading twards the quilt shp. But next dr, a newly pened small stre that sld pretty clthes, shes, etc. attracted us. S we first walked int this stre, where we admired the mst wnderful cllectin f umbrella s we had ever seen. As I ran my fingers acrss ne special umbrella, I heard myself whisper, “These are the mst beautiful umbrellas...”I lved the items s much.
A sales clerk hurried t my side. “Perhaps yu’d like t try ne f them ut,” she suggested. I pened the attractive umbrella. Underneath it, I felt wnderfully carefree and sheltered frm the whle wrld. But with new things t buy, there was n mney fr expensive umbrellas. Besides, even if I culd affrd ne, it wuldn’t be a practical purchase. Back in the secnd grade, I had nce eyed a beautiful, pink umbrella in a department stre windw. “I need a beautiful umbrella,” I said t my mther. “N, yu need a practical umbrella,” she said. “Besides, yu might lse it.” With tears in my eyes, I put dwn that pink umbrella!
Cming back frm my memry, I tld the clerk, “Thanks fr shwing me the umbrella.” Then, I headed next dr t the quilt shp, a few steps ahead f Carle.
注意:Ⅰ.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式作答。
When her steps caught up with mine, I nticed a lng, thin bx under her arm.
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Back hme, I tk the umbrella sent by Carle and walked twards my flwers.
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3.(23-24高二下·吉林松原·期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
It started with a phne call frm my sn, Nate. “Mm, there’s a dg here. She needs help. She’s lst, hungry and afraid f peple. Nbdy can catch her. We tried, but she runs.
I bet yu can catch her. Please?” My teenage sn’s dramatic plea (懇求) came frm a visitr center where he vlunteered.
“Nt nw,” I bjected. I lve dgs, but at that mment I did nt want t take n anther prject.
“Can yu please just take a lk at her when yu cme pick me up?” He had cnfidence in my abilities.
When I arrived t pick Nate up, I fund the dg he described. Her state was bad with all the diseases in a stray dg. She watched us cautiusly, her tail giving the ccasinal hpeful wag befre retreating between her legs as she shied away frm any apprach. Her eyes, hwever, were warm and pleading. She wanted t cnnect but she was afraid.
Many years f wrking with all kinds f distressed animals had hardened my heart. I thught f a thusand reasns why I culd nt take a dirty dg hme. I wanted t get a dg that I culd use as a therapy (治療) dg. I culd see that this sad dg was nt therapy dg material. Therapy dgs cnnect t peple in ways that can understand human better. I turned and walked away.
I cnvinced Nate t wait a few days t see if the dg’s wner wuld magically appear. Secretly, I was expecting the dg wuld disappear. But she didn’t.
A friend with a small animal rescue shelter tk her fr quarantine (檢疫) and treatment. I knew she was safe but the dg’s eyes haunted me. That lnging lk kept returning t my mind, pleading fr cnnectin. After a cuple f weeks, I gave in and brught the dg hme with me. She was quickly accepted by ther dgs in my hme. Cleaned up and fed, she lked like a shrt and strng Brder Cllie (博得牧羊犬) with gld and white fur. I named her Leala.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
A mnth r s later, at a rutine checkup, what the vet (獸醫(yī)) said excited me.
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Within anther mnth, Leala and I were in a therapy dg training class.
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4.(23-24高二下·江西·期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Years later, I might still remember that small library. It was a winter day when I came t the library. The sunlight was bright but nt warm. It was a typical suthern winter day, windless but cld.
The winter vacatin was crucial fr me, and studying in the library culd efficiently imprve my studies. I std in frnt f the dr with my backpack. On the bard n the dr read: “Cmmunity Library”. I pushed the dr pen. Behind the service desk sat an ld man with gray hair and dark skin, wearing reading glasses. When he saw me, he pushed his glasses up.
“Hell, I live nearby. My hme is small and nisy. Can I study here?” I asked. The ld man lked me ver and ndded. I then mved t a table in the crner. After lunch every day, I wuld cme t the library. Mst f the time, it was just the ld man and me, and the nly sund was the hum (嗡嗡聲) f the ld air cnditiner.
When I felt t cld r tired f reading, I wuld get up and mve arund. Gradually, the ld man wuld ask me if I needed ht water. Smetimes he brught me subject-related bks. We had brief cnversatins smetimes. The ld man grew up in the cuntryside and didn’t have much educatin. He wrked in a factry when he was yung, and after retiring, he came t the cmmunity library t wrk.
Every day, I studied until sunset. When it was abut time fr the ld man t get ff wrk, I wuld pack up and get ready t leave. He wuld als stand up and tidy up. After I left, he wuld clse the dr, ending his day’s wrk.
One afternn, I went t the library t return sme bks. The ld man was very happy that day and handed me a bk, saying, “I fund a bk n the far right f the shelf in the crner. I’m sure yu’ll like it” I ndded, tk the bk, and thanked him.
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1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
A week later, I went t return the bk, nly t find an ld lady lcking the dr.
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“Then why did the library clse arund 4 pm during the last few weeks?” I asked.
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