
(2022·福建省龍巖一中高一下月考) 閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Peter wke up early in the mrning. He went dwnstairs in a hurry and started t have his breakfast as quickly as pssible. “Why are yu in such a hurry, early bird?” Mum asked him. “We will have an English spelling test tday, Mum,” Peter said. “Mr. White prmised t ffer prizes t thse wh get 100%. I’ve been studying the wrd list since last week. Althugh the wrds are difficult, I am well prepared fr them.” Peter reviewed the spelling f each wrd nce mre carefully when Dad drve him t schl. At last, it was time fr the students t have a test. “Respnsibility,” Mr. White started. Peter wrte it n his test paper quickly and cnfidently. “The secnd wrd: cntributin,” Mr. White said. “S easy,” Peter thught. He quickly wrte the wrd dwn. Thirty minutes later, the test papers were cllected by Mr. White. “I am t mark yur papers nw,” he tld the class. After marking the test papers, Mr. White said, “Three f yu wn a prize tday fr excellent test scres. Peter, David and Mary gt 100 percent n the spelling test!” Mr. White praised them. Meanwhile, he gave the three students each a dictinary. Peter’s was an English-Chinese
dictinary—the ne he liked best. Peter was s excited that he held it high when his classmates cheered. “This is my happiest mment,” Peter thught. After Mr. White gave the test paper back, Peter had a lk at the wrds, feeling prud f his spelling. All f a sudden, the wrd “cntributin” cnfused him. It didn’t seem right. Peter began t cmpare them after taking ut the wrd list. “C-O-N-T-R-I-B-U-S-I-O-N,” he whispered. He had spelled it wrng. “What am I t d?” Peter said t himself. “I expect my classmates t think I’m a master in spelling. If I tell Mr. White ne f my spelling wrds is wrng, I’ll have t give my prize back, r I will becme an example fr telling a lie.” Staring at the red sign “100%” which was written n his test paper, Peter was lst in thught. After a while, he remembered a lessn Mum used t teach him, “We ught t be an hnest persn.”注意: 1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右; 2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph 1: Slwly, Peter raised his hand._________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Peter lked arund and fund many f his classmates were smiling at him._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文是一篇記敘文。文章講述了主人公Peter認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備單詞拼寫測試,得到“滿分”并獲得老師的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì),但是,試卷發(fā)下來后,他發(fā)現(xiàn)自己拼寫錯(cuò)一個(gè)單詞。經(jīng)過思考,最終Peter選擇做一個(gè)誠實(shí)的人。
If I tell Mr. White ne f my spelling wrds is wrng, I’ll have t give my prize back, r I will becme an example fr telling a lie. 如果我告訴懷特老師有一個(gè)單詞我拼錯(cuò)了,我就得把獎(jiǎng)品還給他,否則我就會(huì)成為說謊的典型。 本句是并列復(fù)合句。if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句;“ne f my spelling wrds is wrng”是省略that的賓語從句;r為并列連詞,意為“否則,不然”。
續(xù)寫第一段開頭:“慢慢地,Peter舉起了手?!盤eter的這個(gè)舉動(dòng)說明,在說出實(shí)情與隱瞞錯(cuò)誤之間,他選擇了前者。那么,接下來可以寫:Peter向老師說明自己拼錯(cuò)了一個(gè)單詞并退還了獎(jiǎng)品,然后是同學(xué)和老師的反應(yīng),等等。 續(xù)寫第二段開頭:“Peter向四周看了看,發(fā)現(xiàn)許多同學(xué)在沖他微笑?!北径谓酉聛砜梢赃@樣構(gòu)思:老師的做法——表揚(yáng)Peter的誠實(shí)行為,并且不打算收回獎(jiǎng)品。材料的最后提到“Peter想起媽媽教他做人要誠實(shí)”,續(xù)寫中可以很自然地出現(xiàn)Peter的媽媽,比如可以寫Peter回家后與媽媽分享這件事,并展示自己的獎(jiǎng)品。再寫Peter媽媽的心情,如為Peter的誠實(shí)感到欣慰或?qū)λ谋頁P(yáng)。
Paragraph 1: Slwly, Peter raised his hand. “Mr. White, I didn’t get 100 percent n the test because I misspelled a wrd.” He ①std up, walked t his teacher, handed him the dictinary and his test paper and said, “I spelled cntributin with ‘s-i’ instead f ‘t-i’.” Peter culd feel his classmates lking at him ②with surprise as he walked back t his seat. Hlding up Peter’s test paper, Mr. White said, “Class, Peter did smething even mre imprtant than spelling every wrd crrectly n a test.” Mr. White ③smiled at Peter. “He taught us all a lessn n being hnest.”
①動(dòng)作描寫:“std up”“walked”和“handed”與提示句中的“raised”構(gòu)成一串連續(xù)的動(dòng)作,表現(xiàn)了Peter毅然地選擇了做一個(gè)誠實(shí)的人。 ②神態(tài)描寫:“with surprise”表現(xiàn)出其他學(xué)生對于Peter的行為感到驚訝,這也襯托了誠實(shí)的可貴。 ③神態(tài)描寫:“smiled at”說明老師贊賞Peter的行為,與老師的評價(jià)相符,也為下文老師拒絕收回獎(jiǎng)品做了鋪墊。
Paragraph 2: Peter lked arund and fund many f his classmates were smiling at him. “Peter, I want yu t keep this dictinary because yu set an example fr all f us,” said Mr. White. Peter tk the dictinary frm his teacher and expressed his thanks t him. Meanwhile, he ④culdn’t wait t shw it t Mum and tell her ne f his best days ever. On arriving hme, he tld Mum what had happened. ⑤“Yu did the right thing. Hnesty is the best plicy,” said his mther prudly.(173 wrds)
④心理描寫:通過“culdn’t wait t”表現(xiàn)出Peter當(dāng)時(shí)的心情應(yīng)該是激動(dòng)、喜悅的,他迫不及待地想與母親分享這件事。⑤語言描寫:結(jié)尾借Peter母親的話再次點(diǎn)題,引用諺語“誠實(shí)為上策”來教導(dǎo)大家為人要誠實(shí),同時(shí)與材料的最后一句呼應(yīng)?!皃rudly”形容的是母親說話的語氣,表達(dá)出母親為兒子的行為而自豪。
1. Peter culd feel his classmates lking at him with surprise as he walked back t his seat. (as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句) Peter走回自己的座位時(shí)能感受到同學(xué)們在用驚訝的目光看著他。2. “Peter, I want yu t keep this dictinary because yu set an example fr all f us,” said Mr. White. (because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句) 懷特老師說:“Peter,我想要你留著這本詞典,因?yàn)槟銥槲覀兇蠹覙淞⒘税駱??!?br/>1. hand sb. sth. 把某物遞給某人 2. instead f 而不是3. set an example fr sb. 給某人樹立榜樣 4. express ne’s thanks t sb. 向某人表示感謝5. can’t wait t d sth. 迫不及待做某事 6. shw sth. t sb. 把某物給某人看
caring adj. 關(guān)心別人的,體貼的lving adj. 有愛的cnsiderate adj. 體貼的thughtful adj. 考慮周到的warm-hearted adj. 熱心腸的earnest adj. 認(rèn)真的respnsible adj. 負(fù)責(zé)任的→irrespnsible 不負(fù)責(zé)任的mature adj. 成熟的→immature adj. 不成熟的independent adj. 獨(dú)立的
generus adj. 大方的,慷慨的mean adj. 吝嗇的→miser n. 守財(cái)奴utging adj. 外向的intrverted adj. 內(nèi)向的active adj. 活躍的psitive adj. 積極的→negative adj. 消極的ptimistic adj. 樂觀的→pessimistic adj. 悲觀的energetic adj. 精力充沛的easy-ging adj. 隨和的
plite adj. 禮貌的gentle adj. 溫柔的creative adj. 有創(chuàng)造力的talented adj. 有才華的cmpetent adj. 稱職的;有能力的intelligent adj. 聰明的wise adj. 智慧的bright adj. 聰明的brave/curageus adj. 勇敢的tugh adj. 堅(jiān)韌的,堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的
dedicated/devted adj. 專心致志的,全心全意的,投入的faithful adj. 有信仰的diligent adj. 勤勉的ambitius adj. 有志向的aggressive adj. 好斗的adventurus adj. 愛冒險(xiǎn)的;有冒險(xiǎn)精神的knwledgeable adj. 知識(shí)淵博的well-educated adj. 受過良好教育的well-behaved adj. 舉止得體的
passinate/enthusiastic adj. 有熱情的lvable/adrable adj. 可愛的shy adj. 害羞的,靦腆的reserve n. 寡言少語,矜持cld/cruel/heartless adj. 冷酷無情的bad-tempered adj. 脾氣差的rude adj. 粗魯?shù)膕elf-centered adj. 利己主義的,自我中心的selfish adj. 自私的childish adj. 孩子氣的
hnest adj. 誠實(shí)的mdest/humble adj. 謙虛的,謙卑的patient adj. 耐心的tlerant adj. 容忍的humrus adj. 幽默的,搞笑的determined/strng-willed/firm adj. 堅(jiān)定的sensible adj. 理智的sensitive adj. 善解人意的emtinal adj. 易動(dòng)情的mdy adj. 情緒多變的,喜怒無常的
greedy adj. 貪婪的lazy adj. 慵懶的stubbrn adj. 固執(zhí)的dd adj. 古怪的peculiar adj. 古怪的shallw adj. 膚淺的arrgant adj. 驕傲自大的critical adj. 挑剔的demanding adj. 要求高的stupid/flish adj. 愚蠢的
narrw-minded adj. 小心眼的cnservative adj. 保守的pen-minded adj. 思想開明的straight adj. 直率的,坦誠的rebellius adj. 叛逆的 prudent adj. 謹(jǐn)慎的idealistic adj. 理想主義的realistic adj. 現(xiàn)實(shí)的,務(wù)實(shí)的reliable/trustwrthy adj. 可靠的
He is fairly utging. Talking with him is a pleasant thing. 他很外向,與他交談是一件很愉快的事。Thugh he cmes frm a pr family, he is a persn f great curage and determinatin. 雖出身貧寒,但他是一個(gè)擁有很大勇氣和決心的人。She is fairly thughtful and easy-ging. 她很體貼,也很隨和。His gentle manner, his elquence, and his ability t make all the peple feel at hme surprised me very much. 他溫文爾雅的舉止、他的口才,以及那種令人感到賓至如歸的能力令我驚嘆。He enjys the cmpany f children and shares varius interests with them. It seems he never grws up. 他喜歡與孩子們?yōu)槲椋c他們分享各種興趣。他似乎永遠(yuǎn)也長不大。
Plucking up his curage and clearing his thrat, Tm started t recite the pem he had slaved ver. Surprisingly, he recited it very fluently, which was beynd his wildest dream. 湯姆鼓起勇氣,清了清嗓子,開始背誦他辛辛苦苦準(zhǔn)備的那首詩。令人驚訝的是,他 背誦得非常流利,這是他做夢也想不到的。With grwing cnfidence, he cntinued his recitatin until he finished it perfectly. 由于信心越來越強(qiáng),他繼續(xù)背誦,直到完美地完成為止。He was a lyal, distinguished and very cmpetent pliceman. 他是一位敬業(yè)、優(yōu)秀且非常稱職的警察。He was always ptimistic, even when things were at their wrst. 他即使是在事情最糟糕的時(shí)候,也總是很樂觀。
He brught t the jb nt just cnsiderable experience but great enthusiasm. 他不僅給這份工作帶來了豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn),而且傾注了極大的熱情。Her father was an dd man. 他父親是一個(gè)古怪的人。She’s nt intentinally unkind—she’s just a little thughtless smetimes. 她并不是故意對人不好,只是有時(shí)候有點(diǎn)欠考慮。She said that Jhn was plite/generus t a fault. 她說約翰過分禮貌/慷慨。The bss is greedy and selfish. 那個(gè)老板自私又貪婪。He’s an easy-ging, friendly yung man wh desn’t care much abut mney. 他是個(gè)隨和、友善的年輕人,不太在意金錢。
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