一、描寫佳句
矛盾塑造（尷尬+緊張）
1.S nervus was he that (他太緊張了) he drpped the electric carving knife.他太緊張了，他太緊張了，他掉下了電動(dòng)雕刻刀。
2.I gt int a panic(陷入驚慌之中) as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use.當(dāng)我緊緊地壓在桌子上，我的頭移動(dòng)試圖找到正確的角度時(shí)，我陷入了恐慌(陷入驚慌之中)，但這是沒(méi)有用的。
3.Sweating and nearly tearing (汗流浹背，眼淚差點(diǎn)流下來(lái)),I culd imagine hw silly and strange I was at that mment based n the cntinuing laughter frm my parents and Jasn.汗流浹背，眼淚差點(diǎn)流下來(lái)，根據(jù)我父母和杰森持續(xù)的笑聲，我可以想象出我當(dāng)時(shí)是多么的愚蠢和奇怪。
4.Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almst wreathed her entirely.她立刻漲紅了臉，感到尷尬幾乎把她整個(gè)包圍起來(lái)。
5.Tina, blushing with embarrassment, started t stammer ut the truth.蒂娜尷尬得滿臉通紅，開(kāi)始結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說(shuō)出真相。
快樂(lè)結(jié)局塑造（感激+開(kāi)心+升華）
1.Dad's calm smile reflected his mtt "All's well with us, never fear."爸爸平靜的微笑反映了他的座右銘"一切都好，永遠(yuǎn)不要害怕。"
2.It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning f patience.這是我第一次真正意識(shí)到耐心的意義。
3.We usually take life fr granted, but the stry shws us that there is always beauty in ur heart.我們通常認(rèn)為生活是理所當(dāng)然的，但這個(gè)故事告訴我們，在我們的心中永遠(yuǎn)有美麗。
4.The wrds brught warmth t my heart and tears t my eyes.I felt lucky t be a part f this mischievus yet lving family.這些話讓我心中滿是溫暖，也讓我熱淚盈眶。我很幸運(yùn)能成為這個(gè)淘氣而又充滿愛(ài)的家庭的一員。
二、萬(wàn)能句式
句型一：It is ften in…that…
It is ften in life’s little blunders that we discver the jy f laughter and the warmth f shared mments.
（往往在生活的小失誤中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)了歡笑的快樂(lè)和共享時(shí)刻的溫暖。）
句型二：The unexpected turn f events…
The unexpected turn f events turned a simple day int an unfrgettable memry filled with laughter and cnnectin.
（意料之外的轉(zhuǎn)折讓這平凡的一天變成了充滿歡笑與連結(jié)的難忘記憶。）
句型三：Only when…d we realize…
Only when we let g f perfectin d we realize the beauty in life’s imperfect mments.
（只有當(dāng)我們放下對(duì)完美的執(zhí)著時(shí)，才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)生活中不完美瞬間的美好。）
句型四：It was in the midst f…that…
It was in the midst f a seemingly rdinary day that we fund urselves laughing uncntrllably, reminded f the unexpected jy life brings.
（正是在看似平凡的一天中，我們?nèi)炭〔唤?，重新體會(huì)到生活帶來(lái)的意外之喜。）
句型五：Nthing reveals…quite like…
Nthing reveals the simple charm f life quite like a shared mment f laughter ver a silly mistake.
（沒(méi)有什么比對(duì)一個(gè)愚蠢小錯(cuò)的會(huì)心一笑更能體現(xiàn)生活的簡(jiǎn)單魅力。）
句型六：The beauty f…lies nt in…, but in…
The beauty f these little mishaps lies nt in their humr alne, but in the cnnectins they strengthen and the memries they create.
（這些小插曲的美不僅在于它們的幽默，更在于它們加強(qiáng)的連結(jié)和創(chuàng)造的回憶。）
三、真題再現(xiàn)
（2024 年湖南省百所學(xué)校高三聯(lián)考卷）
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
A deliveryman kncked n the dr f a huse and said, “Yur delivery!”
“I’m wait.” A little girl’s vice came frm inside, but even after 5 minutes, n ne came.The deliveryman said again, “Is there anyne taking the parcel? I have t g t ther places.” The girl replied, “Uncle, if yu’re in a hurry, please put the letter under the dr.It’ll take sme mre time.” The deliveryman replied, “N, I’m waiting.It’s a registered delivery, s yur signature is als needed.”
After abut 10 minutes, the dr pened.The deliveryman was a little angry.He was abut t shut at the girl when the dr pened.He was shcked t see in frnt f him was a little disabled girl withut legs.The deliveryman quietly gave the parcel t the girl, tk her signature and then left.
The little girl ften lived alne in her huse.Her mther and father wrked far away.T take care f the girl, a servant stayed in the huse with her in the mrnings and evenings but the girl lived alne during the days.
Later, whenever the parcel came, the deliveryman wuld knck n the dr, call the girl and then wait patiently at the dr.Gradually, interactin and attachment grew between them.The little girl nticed that the deliveryman wre an ld pair f wrn shes t deliver parcels.
The rainy seasn came.One day, when the deliveryman left, his ftprints were left n the wet sil.The girl came ut with a paper and put it n the print and tk dwn a picture f his feet.The next day, she asked the servant t buy a pair f shes f that size and keep them in her huse.
Thanksgiving Day was cming.The deliveryman went t the huses where he used t deliver parcels as usual.Thinking f the little girl, he culdn't help speaking t himself, “I shuldn't meet the girl empty - handed during the festival.”
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置
作答。
Then he bught a bar f sweet chclate fr the little girl.___________
The deliveryman was surprised t see the bx.___________
參考答案：
Then he bught a bar f sweet chclate fr the little girl.On the early mrning f the Thanksgiving Day, he kncked at the girl's dr t give her a surprise.① Of curse she was astnished and asked, “Why d yu give me the chclate?”The deliveryman smiled and said, “Tday is the Thanksgiving Day, but yur parents aren’t with yu.② I hpe yu can like my gift and be happy.” The girl was very pleased and tld him, “Uncle, I als want t give yu a gift fr this festival.”Then the girl tk a bx t him.
The deliveryman was surprised t see the bx.Seeing the bx, he didn't knw why the girl sent him the gift.③ The girl saw him cnfused and said, “Yu have t wait fr me fr a lng time every time yu deliver my pst.Thanks a lt fr it.Please accept it.”The deliveryman brught the gift t his huse and pened it.When he saw a new pair f shes in it, he was s mved that he burst int tears.
亮點(diǎn)評(píng)析
①不定式 t give...的運(yùn)用把快遞員給小女孩送禮物的初衷交待得一清二楚，字短情長(zhǎng)。
② but 連接的并列句進(jìn)一步向小女孩解釋了送禮物的原因，使小女孩的心在節(jié)日得到慰藉。
③現(xiàn)在分詞傳神地表現(xiàn)出快遞員看到盒子但不知道小女孩用意的迷惑，加之 why 引
導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，使語(yǔ)言表述更為清楚。

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