高考讀后續(xù)寫真題匯總 （適合新高考卷、浙江卷）TOC \o "1-3" \h \u   HYPERLINK \l _Toc29729 2021年6月浙江卷 （第一份工資）  PAGEREF _Toc29729 \h 1  HYPERLINK \l _Toc20437 2021年6月新高考1卷 （母親節(jié)的驚喜）  PAGEREF _Toc20437 \h 3  HYPERLINK \l _Toc3347 2021年1月八省聯(lián)考 （好心家庭幫我修車）  PAGEREF _Toc3347 \h 5  HYPERLINK \l _Toc1467 2021年1月浙江卷 （圣誕節(jié)的尷尬）  PAGEREF _Toc1467 \h 7  HYPERLINK \l _Toc26186 2020年7月山東卷 （爆米花救助窮人）  PAGEREF _Toc26186 \h 9  HYPERLINK \l _Toc4600 2020年7月浙江卷 （拍照北極熊遇險）  PAGEREF _Toc4600 \h 11  HYPERLINK \l _Toc24586 2020年1月浙江卷 （小狗Ponny的新玩伴）  PAGEREF _Toc24586 \h 12  HYPERLINK \l _Toc5877 2018年6月浙江卷 （山中遇險）  PAGEREF _Toc5877 \h 16  HYPERLINK \l _Toc4482 2017年11月浙江卷 （健忘的媽媽）  PAGEREF _Toc4482 \h 18  HYPERLINK \l _Toc31714 2017年6月浙江卷 （狼口脫險）  PAGEREF _Toc31714 \h 20  HYPERLINK \l _Toc18137 2016年10月浙江卷 （森林遇險）  PAGEREF _Toc18137 \h 23  HYPERLINK \l _Toc16159 浙江卷樣題 （銀行搶劫）  PAGEREF _Toc16159 \h 25  2021年6月浙江卷（第一份工資） My?dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he?worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay?family?expenses. I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超過） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation. Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my?future?as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（長號）. The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring?farmer?hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon?learned?to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was?tiring?work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to. At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to?growing up.?I'm glad you will be contributing to the household."?My dad's words made me?realize?that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished. My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not?fair?that l had to contribute my money. 注意： 1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4．續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I understood immediately what my parents were?worried about. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 題型解讀 這是一篇記敘文的讀后續(xù)寫，要求考生在所給短文的基礎(chǔ)上續(xù)寫，并且結(jié)合劃線詞，構(gòu)成一篇合理的完整故事。讀后續(xù)寫對學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)語言知識的綜合運用能力有著較高的要求。同時也考查學(xué)生們的發(fā)散思維能力和創(chuàng)造性思維能力。續(xù)寫故事時，要求考生讀懂文章，然后明白故事的發(fā)展進程、前因后果、人物特征和情感等。在此基礎(chǔ)上，考生必須沿著文章的思路，根據(jù)提供的線索，恰當(dāng)進行發(fā)揮，并且要使用給出的至少5個詞語等。故事的結(jié)尾也必須符合原文的主題意義。 寫作分析 本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者高中畢業(yè)后，參加農(nóng)場工作，辛辛苦苦掙到的錢，不情愿貢獻給家庭，后來在看到父親的辛勞之后，理解了父母擔(dān)心的是自己太過自私而不知奉獻，終于想通，并自豪地將自己勞動所得交給父親的故事。 參考答案 Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.” 發(fā)薪日終于到了。我很高興，在我努力工作了兩周后，我終于得到了報酬。一邊興奮地走回家。我構(gòu)思了許多關(guān)于如何處理它的計劃。我需要一個新的足球，因為我們踢的舊足球已經(jīng)用壞了。我打算買我最喜歡的巧克力。走近房子，我注意到我爸爸和媽媽站在舊卡車旁邊，悲傷地看著。似乎發(fā)生了一些不愉快的事情?！拔覀兿胭I一輛新卡車還得付多少錢？”。我媽媽問。300美元，但我們只剩下200美元了?！?Paragraph 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I?received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I?said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up. 我立刻明白了我的父母在擔(dān)心什么。真的，我爸爸開的卡車在路上經(jīng)常壞了，這給我爸爸惹上了麻煩。我父母本來打算買一輛新卡車，但買不起。突然，我意識到我應(yīng)該做什么。我走上前去，說：“爸爸，這是我工作的回報。我想這會對你有幫助。我說的話有點驚訝，媽媽緊緊地擁抱著我。那天晚上，在我睡覺之前，我想第二天我會告訴農(nóng)夫，在我長大了之后，我將繼續(xù)我的工作。 2021年6月新高考全國1卷（母親節(jié)的驚喜） 第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. Para1： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para2： The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.?One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made some French toast and chicken porridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed for their parents'?bedroom. 當(dāng)這對雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。他看了一眼，他就知道他們在做什么?？吹剿麄兙趩实哪?，他讓他們打掃廚房，同時幫他們?yōu)槟赣H做早餐。這對雙胞胎高興起來，照做了。不到一個小時，廚房就打掃干凈了，父親按照孩子們的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和雞肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。雙胞胎準備了早餐托盤，加了一張他們做的卡片，然后前往他們父母的臥室。 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.?"Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy!" ?thrilled voice yelling from their throat, the twins hugged their mom tightly. Moved and excited, mother held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to snore. He whistled in astonishment when seeing the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said she had never??tasted a better one. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly. 這對雙胞胎把早餐帶到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親。“母親節(jié)快樂，親愛的媽媽！”激動的聲音從他們的喉嚨里叫喊著，雙胞胎緊緊地擁抱著他們的媽媽。母親感動而激動，也用她溫暖的胳膊抱著這對雙胞胎。一看到早餐托盤，她就睜大了眼睛。她搖著假裝打鼾的父親。當(dāng)他看到早餐時，他驚訝地吹著口哨。媽媽咬了咬三明治，說她從來沒有嘗過比這更好的三明治過。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父親的目光，他們偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。 2021年1月八省聯(lián)考（好心家庭幫我修車） 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤頂), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out. He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (鋸子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business. I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man. The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home. 注意： 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Possible version 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shook my head and said no, wondering why she asked such a question — was she going to treat me to lunch or something? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back to the truck. After a few minutes she came back with a paper bag. “Here are some Mexican snacks and you can have some when you are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was so surprised and touched that words almost failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead of a “Thank you!” when I took the bag. After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. When I saw what was in the bag, I was overcome with a mixture of respect and gratefulness. In addition to the snacks, there was the $20 bill. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example of what kindness really means. And I’m sure I will pay it forward. （145） 當(dāng)我正要說別時，女孩問我是否吃過午飯。我搖搖頭，說不，不知道她為什么會問這樣一個問題——她會給我吃午飯什么嗎？“等一下，”女孩說，然后她回到卡車上。幾分鐘后，她帶著一個紙袋回來了?！斑@里有一些墨西哥小吃，你餓的時候可以吃一些，”女孩笑著說。我很驚訝，也很感動，那句話幾乎讓我失望了。我只是說了一聲“哇！”而不是一聲“謝謝你！”當(dāng)我拿起包的時候。 他們離開后，我上了吉普車，打開了紙袋。當(dāng)我看到包里有什么東西時，我被一種尊重和感激所征服了。除了這些零食，還有$20的賬單。一個多么善良、值得尊敬的家庭?。∷鼈兪巧屏颊嬲饬x的完美例子。我相信我會提前付錢的。 Possible version 2: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. Of course not, for I had been trapped there for quite a few hours. She then had a word with her parents and went back to their truck. A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “That’s Mommy’s hand-made taco,” explained the girl. “It’s so yummy that you must love it.” I was starving to death after all that exhausting work so I took the Mexico-originated food, grateful and deeply moved. Then we waved goodbye to each other. After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world. （163） 當(dāng)我正要說別時，女孩問我是否吃過午飯。當(dāng)然不是，因為我已經(jīng)被困在那里好幾個小時了。然后她和父母說了句話，回到了他們的卡車上。幾分鐘后，她帶著一個紙袋回來了。“那是媽媽手工做的墨西哥玉米卷，”女孩解釋說?！斑@太美味了，你一定喜歡它?！霸诟闪四敲蠢鄣墓ぷ髦螅茵I死了，所以我吃了墨西哥風(fēng)味的食物，感激和感動。然后我們互相揮手道別。 他們離開后，我上了吉普車，打開了紙袋。袋子里有一個雞肉玉米餅。接下來的幾分鐘，我狼吞虎咽地吃了美味的食物。當(dāng)我在咀嚼時，眼淚涌了起來。雖然很多人傾向于忽視那些有需要的人，但有些善良的人會特意伸出援手，這真是太棒了。這個外國家庭所做的好事永遠無法逃避我。我要把它傳下來，創(chuàng)造一個更友好的世界。 2021年1月浙江卷（圣誕節(jié)的尷尬） 第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (軟木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. ________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Growing more panic, I began to cry. Fortunately, hearing me crying, dad came and helped me lay my head on the table, so my neck could rest for a while. Then he said to me “Listen, honey. I have to cut this pumpkin in half. ” I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed and listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin. Moments later, my head was finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage. Then mom told me she had just filmed me managing to pull my head out of the pumpkin. Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. Actually my mom had asked whether she could post it on the Internet, because after all I was so embarrassed and looked so silly in it. Anyway, I nodded and supported her idea. It turned out that people liked and forwarded it crazily on the Internet, only to make me an Internet celebrity. (續(xù)寫152詞) 第1段 我被困了五六分鐘，雖然感覺要長得多了。我越來越恐慌，我開始哭了起來。幸運的是，聽到我哭了，爸爸過來幫我把頭放在桌子上，這樣我的脖子就可以休息一會兒了。然后他對我說：“聽著，親愛的?！蔽业冒堰@個南瓜切成兩半?！拔覄e無選擇，只能閉上眼睛，聽著刀在南瓜上的移動。過了一會兒，我的頭終于從這個可怕的南瓜籠子里被釋放出來了。然后媽媽告訴我，她剛剛拍下了我設(shè)法把頭從南瓜里拉出來的照片。 第2段 那個視頻是在萬圣節(jié)的前一天發(fā)布的。實際上，我媽媽問她是否可以把它貼在網(wǎng)上，因為畢竟我很尷尬，看起來很傻。不管怎樣，我點了點頭，支持她的想法。結(jié)果，人們瘋狂地喜歡并轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)它，卻讓我成為了網(wǎng)絡(luò)名人。 2020年7月山東卷（爆米花救助窮人） 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much. “I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.” After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.” “So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.” For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .” The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.” 注意： 1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. 當(dāng)梅雷迪思太太聽到這個想法時，她認為這也是件好事。然后，梅雷迪思太太在網(wǎng)上搜索了一下，訂購了一臺家用爆米花機。在那之后，梅雷迪思太太和她的三個孩子又去拜訪了他們家，并告訴了他們爆米花的計劃。不用說，他們非常感動，尤其是伯納德，他終于找到了為家人賺錢的方法。幾天后，機器被送到了梅雷迪思太太的家門口。沒過多久，他們就掌握了用機器做爆米花。 一切都準備好了，伯納德開始了他的新生意。雖然這是一段艱難的時期，事情對每個人來說都很緊張，但伯納德的生意還是很順利。他騎著小自行車拿著爆米花，挨家挨戶地賣。人們驚訝地看到這樣一個衣著不良的小男孩在門口賣爆米花，但最終幾乎所有人都買了一兩個包。是愛使世界四處運轉(zhuǎn)，伯納德深深地感受到了他的小心靈深處。 2020年7月浙江卷（拍照北極熊遇險） 第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again. Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! 幾分鐘后，這只熊回到了我們的營地。然后我們意識到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因為這次他似乎更兇狠了，而且像瘋了一樣猛烈地推了推籬笆。我的心狂狂，不知道該怎么辦。在這個關(guān)鍵時刻，埃利抓起幾塊蒜蓉面包，扔過了柵欄。它已經(jīng)成功了！熊阻止了進攻，跑到面包邊。但沒過多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回來了。 第2部分： 就在那一刻，直升機來了?！爸x天謝地，我們得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升機一降落，我們很快就上了飛機，興奮而松了一口氣。當(dāng)我們安全地坐在直升機上時，我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)這只熊終于撕掉了柵欄，向我們留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相機，拍攝了這個罕見的場景，我們被一只北極熊搶劫了！ 2020年1月浙江卷（小狗Ponny的新玩伴） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 “I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情緒) get the better of him. His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed. The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.” The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn’t. They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.” It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging (擺動) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell. 注意： 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考答案1】 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other. 爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了。波比一看到這只小狗就高興地跳了起來。她低下頭，好奇地看著它。然后她變得非常興奮，她不小心撞倒了盒子，試圖靠近。盒子翻了過來，小家伙走了出來，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。沒過多久，兩人就在房子里玩耍，高高興興地互相跑著。 A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom. (155) 幾周后，這個男孩從大學(xué)走回家了。自從他第一次離家這么長時間以來，他就一直在想念父母和狗。當(dāng)男孩看到波比時，他沖向狗，彎下腰給她一個大大的擁抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗?！芭?，天哪，這是誰？”他的父母嘲笑他臉上驚訝的表情?！斑@是波比的新伴侶?！薄眿寢屨f。 【參考答案2】 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.It was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. "Poppy, isn′t it a sweet dog? It's for you!" Mom said in a soft voice."It's your companion." Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend. 爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了。它藏在盒子的一個角落里，眼睛里有一種奇怪的神情。它搖著尾巴，試圖爬出盒子，但背部倒了下來，站不起來。一看到這一點，他的父母就忍不住笑了起來。媽媽輕輕地把它從盒子里拿起來，放在地板上。“這不是一只可愛的狗嗎？”這是給你準備的！”媽媽用一種溫柔的聲音說?！斑@是你的同伴?！辈ū群芨吲d，但又有點緊張，不停地跑著新家庭成員吠叫。但讓他的父母松了一口氣的是，不久之后它們就像豌豆和胡蘿卜一樣，羅普似乎已經(jīng)忘記了她的老朋友。 A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy,growling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent down,stroked its head and asked,"What an adorable puppy! Whose is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We got it for Puppy because.." Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms.Tears burred his vision as he murmured,"Poppy,I miss you, too." And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like xWaby in his arms. 幾周后，男孩從大學(xué)回家。 波比撲向他，興奮地舔著他的手和臉，她的眼睛閃閃發(fā)光，她的尾巴劇烈地擺動。 男孩花了很長時間才注意到波比旁邊有一只可愛的小狗，在他的腳邊咆哮和嗅。 他立刻彎下腰，撫摸它的頭，問：“多么可愛的小狗?。?是誰的？” 他的父母笑了笑，回答說：“我們給波比買的，因為......”他知道波比在大學(xué)時發(fā)生了什么很感動，把那個老女孩抱在懷里。 他喃喃地說：“波比，我也想你?！?然后靜靜地，波比抬起頭，看著那年輕的少年在他懷里。 【參考答案3】 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. It lifted and lowered its head alternately with caution, its eyes shining out of curiosity."Say hello to your new friend, Poppy." Dad said in an encouraging voice. Poppy gave him a seemingly knowing look, scratching the box with its front paw. The little creature slowly stood up, jumped out with pains-taking efforts and yapped around Poppy. They sniffed each other like old friends. The parents gasped in surprise even with kind of envy. They cannot imagine the two dogs enjoyed each other's company in a blink of an eye. 爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了。它小心地抬起頭，眼睛因為好奇而閃閃發(fā)光。“跟你的新朋友打招呼，波比?！卑职钟靡环N鼓舞人心的聲音說。波比看了他一個看似知情的樣子，用前爪摸著盒子。這個小家伙慢慢地站起來，痛苦地跳出來，繞著罌粟跑。他們像老朋友一樣互相嗅嗅。父母們甚至有點嫉妒，也驚訝地喘不過氣來。他們無法想象這兩只狗只要眨一眨眼就能享受到彼此的陪伴。 A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university. He cannot wait to tell his parents about his new friends in the university. Strangely, he wasn't greeted with Poppy's eager barking but an unbelievable scene. The two dogs were tumbling about on the floor. The house was pulsating with life.Parents came up, hugging his son."One has to grow up in his new friends' company. We should get used to it." Mom said half-jokingly, stroking his thin but determined face. It can't be sure enough. 幾周后，男孩從大學(xué)回家。 他迫不及待地告訴父母他在大學(xué)里的新朋友。 奇怪的是，他沒有受到波比急切的吠叫的歡迎，而是一個令人難以置信的場景。 兩只狗在地板上翻滾。 房子里充滿了生機。 父母走過來，抱著兒子。 一個人必須在他的新朋友的公司里長大。 我們應(yīng)該習(xí)慣它?！?媽媽半開玩笑地說，撫摸著他瘦削但堅定的臉。 不能確定。 2018年6月浙江卷（山中遇險） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (編織的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it got dark. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Possible Version: Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner. 第1段： 突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的馬面前。爸爸和我發(fā)現(xiàn)它太可愛了，我們決定追它。過了一段時間，我們完全迷失在了森林里。除了那些樹，我們眼前什么也沒有了。“我們可能不能及時回到農(nóng)場去吃晚飯。我自己想。在一系列徒勞的嘗試之后，我們感到餓又累。 第2段： 我們不知道自己在哪里，天越來越黑了。我們被困在了森林里。一場意想不到的陣雨使我們更難找到回家的路，因為我們留下的所有腳印都因為下雨而消失了。我快要崩潰了，我父親說：“別擔(dān)心，兒子。我記得在農(nóng)舍附近有一條河。找到河，我們就回家。最后，我們找到了河，沿著它回到了房子。不用說，我們的晚餐吃得很晚。 2017年11月浙江卷（健忘的媽媽） 第二節(jié)? 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 A?vacation with my mother I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.? 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Possible versions: 1. Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face. (續(xù)寫詞數(shù)163) 第二天，我們想起了我們帶來的那個全新的帳篷。但后來我們離旅館還有半小時的路程了。爸爸建議買一個新的，媽媽堅持要我們回去拿，說“像我這樣被遺忘的人可能會反復(fù)丟東西，所以放棄帳篷是不明智的?！弊詈?，我們回到帳篷，又上路了。如果媽媽不是那么心不在焉，我們就會省一次又一次回去的麻煩。 第2段： 我們開車穿過了幾個州，沿途看到了很多美麗的風(fēng)景。一天，傍晚，我們在山腳下發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個很棒的露營地。大衛(wèi)和我?guī)桶职执钇鹆藥づ瘢瑡寢屨χ鴾蕚渫盹?。?dāng)夕陽向山上發(fā)出橙色的燈光時，帳篷就搭好了，飯菜也準備好了。我們坐在篝火旁，聊又笑。每次我們提到旅途中有趣的事情，媽媽的臉上都會露出愉快的微笑。 2. Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To our delight, Mom gave up the idea of camping in some stranger’s backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where Dad could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning. Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys. During the trip, Mom’s being absent-minded not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so forgetful as to leave me and David behind in the gas station bathrooms. We all arrived at grandparents’ home safe and sound. (續(xù)寫詞數(shù)147) 第1段： 第二天，我們想起了我們帶來的那個全新的帳篷。讓我們高興的是，媽媽放棄了在一個陌生人的后院露營的想法。相反，我們在野外找到了一個很棒的露營地。那是一個小湖邊樹林里的一塊空地，爸爸可以在那里釣點魚吃晚飯。我們順利地搭好了帳篷，但我們失望地發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽忘了收拾枕頭。不用說，第二天早上我們醒來都脖子痛。 第2段： 我們開車穿過了幾個州，沿途看到了很多美麗的風(fēng)景。這是一次美妙的旅行。我們穿過大河和廣闊的平原，爬上高山，俯瞰著深深的山谷。在旅途中，媽媽心不在焉不僅給我們?nèi)莵砹嗽S多麻煩，而且也給了我們很多有趣的時刻。但幸運的是，她并沒有健忘到把我和大衛(wèi)留在加油站的浴室里。我們都平安到達祖父母家。 2017年6月浙江卷（狼口脫險） 第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (騎行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追趕). Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 注意： 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2. 應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1 The car abrubtly stopped in front of him. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Possible versions: 1 Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off. Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die,” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again. (續(xù)寫詞數(shù)：158) 第1段： 汽車突然停在他前面。麥克跳下自行車，沖向車門口。但麥克還沒來得及開門，狼就趕上了，跳起來攻擊。幸運的是，魔法噴霧劑第三次救了麥克?？吹嚼腔貋砹?，保羅迅速打開了門，那個嚇壞了的人立刻爬上了車，在他身后重重地關(guān)上了門。貝基從后窗外看，看到狼站在麥克的自行車前，好像是在殺人。不久之后，這只動物就跑掉了。 第2段： 幾分鐘后，另外兩名騎自行車的人來了。麥克下了車，擁抱了他的朋友們。“這真的是一場噩夢，我還以為我要死了?！丙溈擞妙澏兜穆曇粽f，眼睛里充滿了淚水。對他來說，生活永遠不會如此美好了。在感激地與保羅和貝基道別后，這三個人繼續(xù)他們的旅行，同意不再分開。 2 Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac crashed into the car with a loud bang. As a result, he fell off the bicycle and had his left ankle twisted. Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack. Mac was going to die when suddenly the wolf was hit right on the head by a piece of rock. The wolf fell back, howling with pain. It was Paul who did this. Becky helped Mac climb into the car, while Paul kept shouting and throwing stones at the wolf. Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They were shocked at what they saw and joined Paul. One of Mac’s friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “How grateful I am that you stopped to save me and I owe it to you that I’m still alive.” As Mac got injured, the three men had to give up the rest of their journey and returned home.(續(xù)寫詞數(shù)：175) 汽車突然停在他前面。麥克砰的一聲撞上了汽車。結(jié)果，他從自行車上摔了下來，左腳踝扭傷了。麥克剛站起來，狼就來了，正要再發(fā)動一次進攻。麥克正要死，突然狼被一塊石頭擊中頭部。狼倒了下來，痛苦地嚎叫著。這是保羅做的。貝基幫助麥克爬上車里，保羅不停地大喊大叫，向狼扔石頭。 第2段： 幾分鐘后，另外兩名騎自行車的人來了。他們對所看到的感到震驚，加入了保羅。麥克的一個朋友挑了一些生肉，扔給了狼身上。狼對他得到的很滿意，跑進了樹林。麥克感謝保羅和貝基，“我很感激你停下來救我，我欠我還活著?！丙溈耸軅耍齻€人不得不放棄剩下的旅程回家了。 2016年10月浙江卷（森林遇險） 第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away. With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom! "she cried. "Help!" No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意: 1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語： 3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family?at a distance.?All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled with Tom, walked away and?climbed?to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying." She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes. It was daybreak when?Jane?woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her?yellow blouse?and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others' attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the?helicopter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest. 【解析】 首先，在邏輯上，要做到了合理合情：起初，主人公身陷森林，內(nèi)心充滿了悔恨，在面對困難時焦慮、畏懼；之后，主人公努力求生，最終獲救，并且領(lǐng)悟到了一定的人生道理?？v觀整個故事，情節(jié)發(fā)展不僅符合兩段給出的開頭所限定的情景要求，而且還設(shè)置了一定的懸念，增強了故事的可讀性。 文章第一句 "an absolute darkness ruled the forest" 中， "rule" 一詞就使用了擬人的修辭手法，讓森林陰森黑暗的一面展露無遺，同時描繪出主人公身處絕境的緊迫性。在 "Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse…" 一句中，直接將情緒形容詞放在句首，使用了非謂語動詞的語法，表達精練。 此外， "There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief." 一句中，使用了幾個短句，卻包含了兩處非謂語動詞語法，同時活用了 "wear" 一詞，把兩個人相見時的場景生動地描繪了出來。 【詞匯拓展】 1） 表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or ，Not only … but also 2） 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, yet, however , although , though … 3） 表示時間關(guān)系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that … 浙江卷樣題（銀行搶劫） 【1】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along?Park Avenue?near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said. 【2】“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.” 【3】“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked.?The young man looked at the two?suitcases?in the back seat?and then said, “ Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.” “No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.” 【4】The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long?loud noise of an alarm. 【5】It was from?the bank. There had been a?robbery?(搶劫)! 【6】Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and?the shouts of?people?running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer. 【7】Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. 【8】She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase！She thinks I’m?the bank thief!” 【9】Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run. Paragraph 1.? As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,?“Stop, stop!” ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2.? The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur... ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1： As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,?“Stop, stop!”?But Arthur ran even faster. Just then, a taxi came along. Arthur stopped it and threw himself into?the back seat?and asked the driver to go to the Police Station. 亞瑟跑的時候，聽到年輕人在后面喊：“停下來，停下來！”但亞瑟跑得更快了。就在這時，一輛出租車來了。亞瑟攔住車，倒到后座上，讓司機去警察局。 Paragraph 2：? The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur?ran into it, shouting,?“There’s a bank?robbery?and I know?the bank thief.”?Quickly after Arthur told his story, the policemen started for the bank without delay. When they arrived at the spot, they were surprised to find that the people who gathered before the bank were now crowding around?the young man, who seemed quite worried. Finally, Arthur realized that he had made a mistake.?The loud noise of the alarm?was incorrectly made by the bank’s system and nothing happened to the bank, but the young man was worried that someone had robbed his?suitcase. 出租車停在警察局前，亞瑟跑了進去，喊道：“有銀行搶劫，我認識銀行小偷。”亞瑟講完他的故事后，警察很快就開始向銀行走去。當(dāng)他們到達現(xiàn)場時，他們驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)，聚集在銀行前的人現(xiàn)在正擠在這個年輕人周圍，他似乎很擔(dān)心。最后，亞瑟意識到他犯了一個錯誤。銀行的系統(tǒng)錯誤地發(fā)出了警報，銀行什么也沒發(fā)生，但年輕人擔(dān)心有人搶劫了他的手提箱。

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