人物活動(dòng)的場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě)
1.Nbdy had expected smething unusual wuld happen later and everyne was ding their usual: a pretty girl _________________________________(和男朋友愉快地聊天)abut a newly-released film.
2.______________________（坐在我旁邊）, a yung wman with a suitcase and a baby ________________________________ (從手提箱中拿出一條圍巾) and made her baby a nest, s that it culd lie mre cmfrtably.
3.A railwayman at last came dwn the length f the train t tell us that _______________________________（電源發(fā)生故障）, and that we were nt t wrry as they were wrking t put it right.
二、場(chǎng)景氛圍描寫(xiě)
1.The weak signal ____________________________ (使手機(jī)無(wú)法使用). Besides, the train was ______________________(變得悶熱) .
2.In fact, the train had just left Green Park Statin when, instead f speeding up, it ____________________________________________________(開(kāi)始減速，然后停了下來(lái)).
3.Ten minutes passed, thugh ____________________________________________(雖然像半天), the train didn't mve.
三、心理活動(dòng)描寫(xiě)
原文有大量的心理活動(dòng)描寫(xiě)，細(xì)讀原文并補(bǔ)全以下各句，并背誦
1.Had the railwaymen frgtten all abut ur existence? Had there been a crash n the line in frnt? Hw serius was the breakdwn? __________________ (我們無(wú)法知道).
2.Hwever, t anxius peple wh are stuck in the Tube, I suppse ____________________________________________________ (到底是什么壞了并不重要). ___________________ (他們所在乎的) is when they can get ut f the truble.
3.___________________________（地鐵真的壞了嗎)? Several peple thught s, but they were wrng.
4.I even began t wnder ____________________________________________ (我們是否要在那待上一整天).
續(xù)寫(xiě)部分的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)（與原文語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)一致）
一、人物活動(dòng)的場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě)
1. Heat and lack f fresh air ____________________ (使我們焦躁不安)and cmplaints ran thrugh us.
2. = 1 \* GB3 ①Thse______________________________（站在窗邊的人) attempted t pen them t let in fresh air but in vain. (定語(yǔ)從句)
= 2 \* GB3 ②Thse _______________________（站在窗邊的人) attempted t pen them t let in fresh air but in vain.（分詞做定語(yǔ)）
3._____________________________________________________________ (漂亮女孩既惱火又焦慮). ________________ （她對(duì)她的男朋友皺起眉頭）, and blamed him fr selecting the wrng rute. (無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句+神態(tài)描寫(xiě)+語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě))
4.Sme ______________________ (不耐煩地跺腳) while sme angrily punded n the wall. (動(dòng)作+副詞)
5.Unexpectedly, the pretty girl and her byfriend jined me immediately they heard me. Then, ___________________________ (越來(lái)越多的乘客跟著唱起來(lái)) . ____________________________________________ (寶寶不哭了，聽(tīng)著，咯咯地笑起來(lái)) .
二、滿(mǎn)分結(jié)尾句
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①自然式結(jié)尾
Our faces beamed and ________________________________________________ (我們燦爛的笑容照亮了整個(gè)車(chē)廂).
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②首尾呼應(yīng)式結(jié)尾
There was cheer in every face. I knew ________________________________________（我會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)記得這不同尋常的一天）.
= 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ 場(chǎng)景+氛圍描寫(xiě)式結(jié)尾
The light flashed and the train_____________________________________ (慢慢地向下一站駛?cè)?. _______________________________________ (一種釋然而愉快的氣氛) settled ver the train. （無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句）
嘗試?yán)m(xù)寫(xiě)
The hpeless waiting in the darkness drve us crazy.
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As a cmmuter(上班族) wh traveled t wrk n the train every day, I thught it my duty t d smething.
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答案
一、
1.chatted merrily with her byfriend
2.Siting next t me；tk a scarf ut f her suitcase
3.the pwer supply had failed
二、
disabled cellphnes; getting ht and stuffy(悶)
started t slw dwn and then came t a stand-still
it seemed like half a day
三、
1.We had n means f knwing
2.it desn't really mater what it is that has brken dwn ；What they care
3.Had the train really brken dwn
4. if we were ging t stay there fr the rest f the day
續(xù)寫(xiě)部分
一、
1.made us restless 2 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①wh std by the windws = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② standing by the windws
3.Annyance and anxiety swallwed/seized/ swept ver /flded ver the pretty girl; She frwned at her by friend 4.stamped impatiently 5.mre and mre passengers sang alng;The baby stpped crying，listened, and giggled.
二、滿(mǎn)分結(jié)尾句
1.ur bright smiles lit up the train
2.this wuld be an unusual day I wuld always remember
3.the train mved slwly ff twards the next statin;An air f relief and delight
精讀原文然后補(bǔ)全以下細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)的好句式，并背誦
一、描寫(xiě)背景和自然環(huán)境
1.Due t the pandemic, sciety was thrwn int crisis mde. Schls were clse，fd supplies and deliveries were suspended and ____________________________________ (孩子們被困在家）.
2. It seemed that she came frm _____________________ (經(jīng)濟(jì)苦難的家庭)，fr she always wre ld clthes.
3.It was __________________ (極其寒冷) this winter.
二、描寫(xiě)人物動(dòng)作和神態(tài)
1.Wrse sill，in such cld days，she had n mre clthes t wear and ________________(冷得發(fā)抖).
2.In such discuraging times，hwever, they became gd cmpanins，_______________ (說(shuō)話玩耍) at hme r arund the huses.
3.Then，he _________________________ (過(guò)來(lái)看） whether I finished the scarf.
三、描寫(xiě)人物的對(duì)話
1.Every time David came back frm utside，with red face，_______________ (他總大聲說(shuō))，“ Mum，it is freezing utside !"
2.But David ______________________________（安慰我說(shuō)) he culd wait a few days.
續(xù)寫(xiě)部分的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)（與原文語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)一致）
一、情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)
1. 他低頭看著我剛剛完成的圍巾，高興極了。他的臉照亮了整個(gè)房間，黑色的眼睛像鉆石般閃爍。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① He lked dwn at the scarf l had just finished, he was verjyed. ___________________________________________. （情感詞匯+神態(tài)描寫(xiě)+比喻）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Lking dwn at the scarf l had just finished, he was verjyed, ____________________________________________.（現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)+獨(dú)立主格）
2. 他既高興又激動(dòng)，不能自已。他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道：媽媽?zhuān)x謝你。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①_____________________________________. He threw himself int my arms, and murmured, “Thank yu, dear mum.” （情感描寫(xiě)+具體動(dòng)作+語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ______________________________，he threw himself int my arms, murmuring, “Thank yu, dear mum.”(用形容詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)+分詞做狀語(yǔ))
3.看到大衛(wèi)在外面玩得很開(kāi)心，圍巾為他遮風(fēng)避雨，抵御刺骨的寒風(fēng)，我欣慰而滿(mǎn)足。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①__________________________, as I saw David play happily utside, and the scarf sheltered him t brave the bne-chilling wind.
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②_________________________ , I saw David play happily utside, _________________
_____________________________________________. (形容詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)+with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）
4.看著大衛(wèi)手里拿著圍巾沖進(jìn)簡(jiǎn)的家，我感到一陣驕傲。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①I(mǎi) saw David rush int Jane's huse with the scarf in his hand, and _________________________________ . (動(dòng)作+情感描寫(xiě)）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②__________________________________________________________________________. （非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)）
二、動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)
1.他像只快樂(lè)的小鹿一樣蹦蹦跳跳地出去找Jane，脖子上的圍巾在空中飛舞著。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①He skipped ut t jin Jane _____________________ , and __________________________________.（具體動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)和修辭+場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě))
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________. （with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）
2.聽(tīng)到我的話，他低下了頭，陷入了沉思，然后抬起頭問(wèn)他是否可以把他的圍巾給Jane.
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①At my wrds, he ________________________________, and he was lst in thught. Then he raised his eyes and asked if he culd give his scarf t Jane.
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② At my wrds, _______________________________, befre raising his eyes and asked if he culd give his scarf t Jane. ( 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ); befre+非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)
3. 他感激地笑了笑，跳了起來(lái)，吻了吻我的臉頰，然后一陣風(fēng)似地沖了出去。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①He smiled gratefully, ___________________, kissed me n the cheek and _______________________ . （四連動(dòng)+比喻）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ___________________________________________________________________________（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)）
三、滿(mǎn)分結(jié)尾句
1.看到這一切，我欣慰地覺(jué)得，我們可以用愛(ài)和善良度過(guò)這次疫情。
Witnessing all this, I was relieved t knw that ___________________________________
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2.我清楚地認(rèn)識(shí)到：一條溫暖的圍巾可以幫我們度過(guò)寒冬，而善良和愛(ài)心可以幫我們戰(zhàn)勝任何疫情。
I was fully aware _________________________________________________and lve and kindness can get us thrugh whatever severe pandemic.
嘗試?yán)m(xù)寫(xiě)
I wrapped the scarf arund David's neck.
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Later that day David came back saying Jane als deserved a scarf.
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答案
精讀原文然后補(bǔ)全以下細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)的好句式，并背誦
一、
children were stuck at hme 2.a financially disadvantaged family 3.dreadfully cld
二、
trembled with cld 2.talking and playing 3.came ver t see
三、
he always cried 2.cmfrted me saying
續(xù)寫(xiě)部分的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)（與原文語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)一致）
一、
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① His face lit up the whle rm and dark eyes twinkled like diamnds.
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② his face lighting up the whle rm and dark eyes twinkling like diamnds
2. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① cntain his jy and excitement. = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Unable t cntain his jy and excitement
3. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①I(mǎi) felt relieved and cntent = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Relieved and cntent；with the scarf sheltering him t brave the bne-chilling wind
4. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①I(mǎi) felt a burst f pride
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Seeing David rush int Jane's huse with the scarf in his hand, I felt a burst f pride.
二、動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① like a happy deer； his scarf arund his neck flew in the air
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② He skipped ut t jin Jane like a happy deer, with his scarf arund his neck flying in the air.
2. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① lwered/hung/bent/drped his head
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② he lwered/hung/bent/drped his head, lst in thught
3. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① leaped t his feet, dashed ut like wind
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Smiling gratefully, he leaped t his feet, kissed me n the cheek and dashed ut like wind.
三、
1.we culd survive the pandemic with lve and kindness.
2.a warm scarf can help us survive hwever cld weather

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