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專題15 書面表達(dá)——備戰(zhàn)2023年高考英語考試易錯題
技巧1言之有心，不跑題

你校英文報Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請你寫一篇短文投稿， 內(nèi)容包括：
1.讀報的經(jīng)歷；
2.喜愛的欄目；
3.期望和祝福。
注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。
Youth and Me
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【解析】
審題五要素
以2021年新高考全國卷Ⅰ為例
根據(jù)題目設(shè)定的情景，確定文章的中心內(nèi)容
慶祝校英文報Youth創(chuàng)刊十周年
根據(jù)任務(wù)要求，確定采用的文章體裁
短文投稿
根據(jù)寫作任務(wù)，確定文章的格式，如日記、便條、書信、通知等
應(yīng)用文，三段式作文
根據(jù)題中所給信息和具體要點進(jìn)行構(gòu)思，這既包括文字提示也包括表格或圖畫提示，要注意內(nèi)容的連貫性和合理性
第一段：簡要介紹閱讀英文報Youth的經(jīng)歷；
第二段：談?wù)勛约合矏鄣膱蠹垯谀浚?br /> 第三段：表達(dá)對該報的期望和祝愿
根據(jù)題目設(shè)置的情景，確定文章的人稱、基本時態(tài)和語體色彩等基本要素
主要時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主，敘述事例時可用一般過去時，表達(dá)祝愿時要用一般將來時；
人稱：第一人稱

第一段：先用一句話點明文稿的目的——祝賀Youth創(chuàng)辦十周年， 分享閱讀經(jīng)歷，然后用“Youth has accompanied me throughout my high school years.”作為過渡語句，介紹Youth的概況。第二段：用“As a regular reader of Youth”過渡， 談及自己喜愛的報紙欄目。第三段：用“I hope...”表達(dá)祝愿完美收官。
【參考范文】
Youth and Me
For the 10th Anniversary of Youth, as a fan of Youth, I want to share my reading experience.Youth has accompanied me throughout my high school years.It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students, leading us into the outer world as a silent friend.
As a regular reader of Youth, I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.
I sincerely hope that Youth can make new progress and that more readers will participate in the interaction and share their own stories.


言之有心，不跑題
　　審題是寫作的前提，是一篇習(xí)作成功的關(guān)鍵所在。確保審題正確，才能保證得到基本分。但很多考生由于審題不準(zhǔn)確，匆忙下筆，導(dǎo)致作文主題偏差，中心不突出，從而失分嚴(yán)重。
“言之有心”即“扣主線、要點全、不偏頗”。真正開始寫作之前，考生必須花一定的時間進(jìn)行審題構(gòu)思。


1. 假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要劇版中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：
1.寫信目的；
2.個人優(yōu)勢；
3.能做的事情。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.

【錯因分析】本文雖然看起來比較容易，但學(xué)生真正動起筆來，還是比較困惑的。原因為：1.個人的優(yōu)勢，寫作時不能簡單地羅列自己優(yōu)點，而要選取與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的、具有說服力的優(yōu)點來寫；2.能做的事情有很多，寫作時要簡潔扼要地介紹自己能做的、與畫展相關(guān)的事情，而不要啰里啰嗦地寫一堆。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫申請信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。書信格式，落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段寫個人優(yōu)勢和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。根據(jù)寫作要點及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過渡性的詞匯，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文銜接自然，語意流暢。
【參考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
2. 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為?？⒂⒄Z園地＂寫一篇短文，記述你和朋友上周日去北京奧林匹克森林公園（Beijing Olympic Forest Park）游玩時發(fā)生的一件事。詞數(shù)不少于60。

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【寫作指導(dǎo)】 本題考查看圖作文。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為校刊＂英語園地＂寫一篇短文，記述你和朋友上周日去北京奧林匹克森林公園（Beijing Olympic Forest Park）游玩時發(fā)生的一件事。認(rèn)真讀圖，把握中心。多幅圖常為記敘文，描述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時。寫作時根據(jù)圖片順序講述故事，注意上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。寫作時盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。
【參考范文】
Last Sunday, I went to Beijing Olympic Forest Park with my friend Chris. As soon as we got there, we were so attracted by the breathtaking scenery that we couldn’t help taking many photos to record the beautiful moments. As we walked on, we noticed a kite hanging up on a branch, but its owner, a little boy, was too short to get it down. The boy looked worried and we decided to help him. Unluckily, the kite was also beyond our reach. Then we looked around and found a stick, with which we got the kite down. We gave the kite back to the boy. He was very delighted and thanked us for what we did. We also felt very happy and it made our outing more enjoyable.

技巧2 言之有序，顯邏輯

假定你是李華，上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：
1．參加人員；
2．跑步路線：從校門口到南山腳下；
3．活動反響。
注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【解析】第一步：“五定”審題　“三段”謀篇
定體裁
新聞報道
定時態(tài)
一般過去時
定人稱
第一人稱
定要點、
定結(jié)構(gòu)
“三段”
謀篇
第一段開篇點題
上周日學(xué)校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動
第二段3個要點缺一不可
1.參加人員；
2．跑步路線；
3．活動反響
第三段巧妙收尾
學(xué)校今后多舉辦這類活動
第二步：斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．為了豐富我們的校園生活，我校于上周日組織了一場5公里越野跑步比賽。
①In order to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5km cross-country running race last Sunday.(in order to do sth.)
②With the intention of enriching our campus life, our school organized a 5km cross-country running race last Sunday.(with...)
2．來自20個班的90名學(xué)生參加了比賽，其中有30名是女生。
①Ninety students from twenty classes joined in the race, among whom thirty were girls.(定語從句)
②Ninety students from twenty classes participated in the race, thirty girls included.(高頻詞匯＋非謂語動詞作后置定語)
3．比賽結(jié)束后，我們感到這次比賽不僅提高了我們的身體和心理素質(zhì)，也幫助我們樹立了積極的生活態(tài)度。
After the race, we felt that not only did the event improve our physical and psychological quality, but it also helped us build a positive attitude towards life．(倒裝句型)
4．希望學(xué)校今后能舉辦更多類似的活動。
We do hope the school will carry out more similar activities in the future.(強調(diào))
【答案】
A Cross－Country Running Race
In order to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5km cross－country running race last Sunday.
Ninety students from twenty classes participated in the race, among whom thirty were girls. Participants set out at 9 am from the gate of the school, through the Renmin Park, and finally arrived at the foot of Nanshan Mountain. After the race, we felt that not only did the event improve our physical and psychological quality, but it also helped us build a positive attitude towards life.
We do hope that the school will carry out more similar activities in the future.


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　　嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、清晰的行文邏輯是一篇優(yōu)秀作文的典型特征。當(dāng)考生能夠?qū)懗稣_、規(guī)范的句子后，能否清晰、合理、通順地表達(dá)自己的觀點、態(tài)度并使讀者容易理解，才是高檔作文與低檔作文的差別所在。有的作文“一段成文”，考生把腦海里的信息不加整理地傾瀉于一個段落里，導(dǎo)致信息擁塞，閱讀困難；有的作文則是“一盤散沙”，段落七零八落，長短各異，內(nèi)容忽左忽右，令人不明就里，這些都是失分的原因。
二 創(chuàng)建“起、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合”，打造優(yōu)美篇章
考生想要寫出清晰流暢的文章， 需要巧妙地銜接與過渡， 即用過渡銜接詞把句與句、段與段巧妙地連接在一起。這樣，文章才會更加連貫、自然和緊湊， 段落或文章的發(fā)展脈絡(luò)也會更清晰， 中心思想也會更明白。
用法
過渡詞
典例
用在段落起始的過渡詞
generally speaking, to begin/start with, first of all, in the first place, as we know, as is known to all, as is shown in...等
Generally speaking, the more you practice, the more skillfully you can write in English.
一般來說，你練習(xí)得越多，你的英語寫作就越嫻熟。
用在段落結(jié)尾進(jìn)行總結(jié)的過渡詞
to sum up, in conclusion, in a word, in the long run, in summary, all in all等
In conclusion, the local government needs to do something to control the vehicles which pass through the city.　總之，地方政府需要采取措施來控制途經(jīng)這座城市的車輛。
用以表達(dá)時間順序的過渡詞
現(xiàn)在：nowadays/now, at present, recently, currently等
首先/開始： at first, first of all, in the first place等
后來/不久：(shortly) after, (soon) afterwards, later on, after a while, before long, since, sooner or later等
與此同時： meanwhile, in the meantime, at the same time, while等
最后/最終： finally，eventually, in the end, at last等
Seeing the sea of people doing warm-up exercises, we couldn't wait to join them. Soon afterwards, a signal was given and we began to run along the route in the park.　看到許多人在做熱身運動，我們也迫不及待地加入他們。不久后，信號發(fā)出，我們開始在公園沿著路線跑步。
用以表達(dá)空間順序的過渡詞
on one side...on the other side..., on the opposite side, in front of, in the center of, in the distance, in/down the middle of, at the back of, on/to the left/right, close to, next to, nearby, beyond, behind the top(s) of, in the low land along the...等
Down the middle of the valley runs a clear, fast stream in which one may fish. In the low land along the stream are the farmlands; beyond them is the grassland. Behind the tops of the first hills are the big mountains.
一條清澈湍急的溪流沿著山谷的中部流淌著，人們可以在溪中釣魚。沿溪而下，低地處是農(nóng)田；越過農(nóng)田是草原。第一組丘陵后面是一座座大山。
用以因果解釋的過渡詞
because, because of, as a result/consequence(of), due to, owing to, thanks to, now that, therefore, consequently等
I was badly treated in your store. Consequently, I am writing to you in the hope of getting things settled.
在你的店里，我受到不好的待遇。因此，我寫信給你，希望事情能得到解決。
用以表示強調(diào)的過渡詞
certainly, indeed, above all, definitely, surely, to tell (you) the truth等
To tell you the truth, never have I seen such a nice school.　說實話，我從沒見過這么好的學(xué)校。
用以表示遞進(jìn)或補充的過渡詞
in addition, additionally, furthermore, also, moreover, what's more, besides, not only...but also..., to make matters worse, worse still, more/most importantly, last but not least等
The film will be not only meaningful but also interesting. In addition, it will be shown from 9：00 am to 11：00 am this Saturday in our school lecture hall.
這部影片不僅有意義，而且有趣。此外，它將在本周六上午9點到11點在我們學(xué)校演講廳放映。
用以舉例的過渡詞
for example, for instance, such as等
Musical instruments, such as violins and pianos, are very expensive.
樂器，例如小提琴和鋼琴，都非常昂貴。
用以表示讓步或轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡詞
but, however, nevertheless, although, though, yet, on the contrary, otherwise, despite, in spite of, regardless of, rather than, instead of, unfortunately, no matter..., even if/though等
Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today; otherwise, it will pile up.
今日事今日畢，否則將會堆積如山。
用以表示比較和對比的過渡詞
like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, as for, in contrast, whereas, on the one hand...on the other hand..., while等
Some of us wanted to go boating, and some advised going hiking, while others suggested visiting the amusement park.　我們中的有些人想去劃船，有些人建議去遠(yuǎn)足，而另一些人建議去游樂園。
用以表示觀點的過渡詞
personally, I think, in my opinion, I'm afraid, as I see it, as far as I'm concerned等
Personally, middle school students should not be allowed to take part-time jobs.
在我看來，不應(yīng)該允許中學(xué)生做兼職工作。


昨天你參觀了學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國畫作品展。請給校英文報寫一篇宣傳稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1．展覽時間、地點；
2．觀展感受；
3．推薦觀展。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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滿分作文第一步　“五定”審題　“三段”謀篇

定體裁
宣傳稿
定時態(tài)

定人稱
第_______人稱
定要點、
定結(jié)構(gòu)
“三段”
謀篇
第一段

第二段

第三段


滿分作文第二步　斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．昨天我和朋友參觀了我們學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國畫作品展。
①(普通表達(dá))Yesterday my friends and I____________________________________________. It was held by our school.
②(高級表達(dá))Yesterday my friends and I
________________________________________________________________________________________．(利用分詞作定語升級)
2．據(jù)我所知，這次展覽將在學(xué)校美術(shù)館持續(xù)一個月。
____________________________________________in the school art gallery.
3．最讓我高興的是，他們的藝術(shù)天賦是極其驚人的。(主語從句)
____________________________________________ their artistic talent is extremely shocking.
4．我強烈呼吁我們學(xué)校的所有學(xué)生利用他們的業(yè)余時間仔細(xì)欣賞這些美妙的作品。
①(普通表達(dá))I strongly ________________________________________________________ to appreciate these wonderful works carefully.
②(高級表達(dá))I strongly ________________________________________________________ to appreciate these wonderful works carefully.
5．我堅信每個人都會得到意想不到的快樂。
①(普通表達(dá))I believe everyone is sure to _______________________________．
②(高級表達(dá)) ________________________________________________________.(同位語從句)
滿分作文第三步　巧妙過渡　完美成篇
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One possible version：
Yesterday my friends and I visited the students' Chinese painting exhibition held by our school. It was such an exciting experience that I can hardly wait to share it with you.
As far as I know, this exhibition will last for a month in the school art gallery.What pleases me most is that their artistic talent is extremely shocking.I am deeply impressed by their talent for painting.Therefore, I strongly appeal to all the students in our school to make use of their spare time to appreciate these wonderful works carefully.
Therefore, I highly recommend that you should spare some time to pay a visit to students' Chinese painting exhibition. I hold the firm belief that everyone is bound to receive an unexpected joy.

假設(shè)你是國際學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席李華，你校決定本周五在教學(xué)樓舉行一次緊急疏散演練(emergency evacuation drill)，請用英語寫一則書面通知，內(nèi)容包括：
1．演練目的；
2．具體安排；
3．注意事項。
注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80 左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
NOTICE
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Student Union
滿分作文第一步　“五定”審題　“三段”謀篇
定體裁

定時態(tài)

定人稱

定要點、
定結(jié)構(gòu)
“三段”
謀篇
第一段

第二段

第三段


滿分作文第二步　斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．為了更好地做好面對危險的準(zhǔn)備，學(xué)生會打算在本周五下午3點在我們的教學(xué)樓組織一次緊急疏散演練。(不定式作目的狀語)
________________________________________________________, the Student Union intends to organize an emergency evacuation drill at 3：00 p．m. this Friday in our teaching building.
2．我們將為參與者安排許多實踐活動。
We will _______________________________________________for the participants.
3．你不僅可以了解火災(zāi)和其他緊急情況下的疏散路線，還可以接受急救培訓(xùn)。
①(普通表達(dá))You can learn about the evacuation routes__________________ fire and other emergencies. You can also ___________________________．
②(高級表達(dá)) ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ (用not only...but also...合并，升級為倒裝句型)
4．積極的態(tài)度、清晰的頭腦和生存技能將拯救你的生命，我們保證你不會感到失望。
Positive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and______________________________________________________________．
5．不要錯過這個機會，一定要準(zhǔn)時參加我們的演練。
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滿分作文第三步　巧妙過渡　完美成篇
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One possible version：
NOTICE
In order to get better prepared in face of danger, the Student Union intends to organize an emergency evacuation drill at 3：00 p．m. this Friday in our teaching building.
We will arrange a variety of practical activities for the participants. Not only can you learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire and other emergencies, but you can also get first aid training. Positive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and we promise you will not feel disappointed. Please join us.
It is a very precious opportunity for us to obtain the survival skills.Don't miss the chance and be sure to be punctual for our drill.
Student_Union


技巧3言之有規(guī)，顯功底

1 . 最近你校學(xué)生會組織學(xué)生開展了一次題目為＂What is the beauty standard＂的討論活動。假如你是學(xué)生會主席，請根據(jù)下表學(xué)生討論的結(jié)果寫一份總結(jié)材料，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br /> 學(xué)生觀點
理由
好臉蛋就是一封介紹信
在社交、競爭、求職等方面作用大
漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃
追求外在美而放棄內(nèi)在美不是真正的美
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右，標(biāo)題和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 參考詞匯：求職介紹信—recommendation
What is the beauty standard?
What?does?beauty?really?mean??Everybody?has?his?own definition.?
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【錯因分析】 在這篇作文的寫作中，考生可能會根據(jù)寫作的要點提示漢語思維方式直接翻譯，這樣就造成寫作上的失誤。產(chǎn)生Chinglish的直接原因是把英語寫作視為機械的word-for-word translation的過程，生搬硬套，久而久之，便不會在特定的上下文中正確遣詞造句。比如，針對提示中的＂好臉蛋＂＂社交＂＂外在美＂等詞匯，考生就很難準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。同時有些考生把＂漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃＂翻譯為＂Beautiful can’t as a meal to eat＂.
【參考答案】
?Some students think that a good face is a letter of recommendation. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, competition, finding jobs and so on. Not only can it help you become more confident, but also it helps you be impressed. Physical beauty is likely to draw much attention.
??? ?Others, however, hold the idea that good appearance will buy no beef. Inner beauty is more important. A beautiful person is not the one with good looks, but the one with a broad and kind heart.
?? In my opinion, the standard of beauty changes with societies, cultures and nations. Some hold the point that good appearance is of great importance, which is visible to all. Others have the idea that inner beauty is the loveliest one, which lasts long. However different they might be, their opinions are all acceptable.



1最近你校學(xué)生會組織學(xué)生開展了一次題目為＂What is the beauty standard＂的討論活動。假如你是學(xué)生會主席，請根據(jù)下表學(xué)生討論的結(jié)果寫一份總結(jié)材料，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br /> 學(xué)生觀點
理由
好臉蛋就是一封介紹信
在社交、競爭、求職等方面作用大
漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃
追求外在美而放棄內(nèi)在美不是真正的美
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右，標(biāo)題和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 參考詞匯：求職介紹信—recommendation
What is the beauty standard?
What?does?beauty?really?mean??Everybody?has?his?own definition.?
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基礎(chǔ)夯實
【考點導(dǎo)航】
考點01 高級詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)演化?
1. occur?替換?think?of?
2. devote替換spend?
3. seek替換want?/?look?for?
4. average?替換ordinary?
5. but替換very?
6. seat?替換sit?
7. suppose?替換should?
8. appreciate?替換thank?
9. the?case替換?true?
10. on替換as?soon?as?
11. due?to替換because?of?
12. cover替換walk/read?
13. contribute?to替換??be?helpful/useful?
14. round?the?corner?替換?coming?soon/?nearby?
16. have?a?ball替換have?a?good?time/?enjoy?oneself?
17. come?up?with替換think?of?????
18． set?aside替換save?????
19. be?of?+?n.?替換adj.?
20. refer?to??替換talk?about/of,?mention?
21. can?not?but?/?can?not?help?but替換have?to?do?
22. more?often?than?not替換usually?
23. lest替換so?that?/in?order?that?
24. be?long?for?sth.?/?be?long?to?do?sth.?替換want?to?do?sth./wish?for?
25. be?caught?up?in/be?crazy?about/be?absorbed?in/be?addicted?to替換be?interested?in??
26. more?than替換very?
27. perfect?(ly)?替換good/?very?well?
28． do?sb?a/the?favor?替換help?????
29． the?other?day替換a?few?days?ago?????
30. in?the?course?of替換during??
31. the?majority?of替換most?
32. consist?of替換be?made?up?of?
33． be?worn?out替換?be?tired?/?broken?????
考點02高級句型結(jié)構(gòu)選用
◆?It句型?
?①?It?will?be?+?some?time?+?before??
②?It?is?+?adj./n.+?for?sb?to?do?sth.?
③?It?is?+?被強調(diào)部分?+?that??
◆?more??than?any?other?表示最高級?
◆?名詞從句?
◆（非限制性）定語從句
◆?分詞結(jié)構(gòu)
◆?with結(jié)構(gòu)????
◆?倒裝句?
◆?被動語態(tài)?
◆?巧妙的改寫?
（1） Only?改成no?one?but????
（2） as?soon?as??改成No?sooner?than?/Hardly?when?/Immediately?/The??moment?
（3） have?sb/sth?do/done??
（4） 變換插入語的位置?
（5）用同位語代替非限制性定語從句?
??（1）注重句子的開頭?
?????①?用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)開頭?
?????②?用非謂語動詞形式開頭?
?（2）長短句交錯使用（注意：應(yīng)突出主題句；長句子并非越長越好）?
考點03觀點陳述高級句型示例
（一）批駁句型
1. It is true that …, but one vital point is being left out.
2. There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3. Some people say …, but it does not hold water.
4. Many of us have been under the illusion that…
5. A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6. It makes no sense to argue for …
7. Too much stress placed on … may lead to …
8. Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that …
9. Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that …
（二）比較句型
1. The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2. The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3. A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that…
4. It is reasonable to maintain that …but it would be foolish to claim that…
5. For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6. Like anything else, it has its faults.
7. A and B has several points in common.
8. A bears some resemblances to B.
9. However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think …, but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is, it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A … , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are …
（三）表示“數(shù)據(jù)”的常用句型
1. had the largest percentage/proportion of…
2. account(s) for/take(s) up 10%…
3. Compared with A, B has a higher percentage.
4. On the top of the list of…, which accounts for 60%.
5. At the bottom is…,which takes up 20%.
6. A is second to B.
7. A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.
（四）表示“說明”的常用句型
1. As we can see from the chart/graph/table/diagram…
2. The chart/graph/table/diagram shows/displays that…
3. As/Can be show in/According to the chart/graph/table/diagram…
4. The figures/statistics in the chart reflect /show/reveal (that)…
5. The chart/graph/table/diagram illustrates/describes…
6. It is clear/apparent/from the chart/graph/table/diagram…
（五）提出解決方案的常用句型
1. The first key factor to solve this problem…Another key factor is…
2. People have found many solution/approaches to dealing with this problem.
3. Then how should we solve this problem? Here are some suggestion which may be some of help.
4. Faced with…we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
5. It is high time… Here are a few examples that might be taken immediately.
6. We need it take a fresh/dear/look at this matter/situation in a new perspective/from a winder standpoint. Otherwise, we won’t come anywhere near solving it.
7. It is essential/indispensable/that proper action/effective measures should be taken to reverse this situation/trend.
8. No effective/simple solution can be at hand/tackle the problem of… But the general first step in the right direction.
（六）分析原因常用句型
1. The reasons can be listed as follows. For one thing…For another…
2. What has contributed to this problem? In the first place…In the second place…
3. Perhaps the main/primary/most important reason is…
4. It is no easy to identify the reason for… which involve several complicated factors.
5. A number of factors could account for/lead to/contribute to/result in/be conductive to…
6. One may trace/attribute this problem to…
7. This problem may result from/ largely due to/stem from a combination of factors.
8. The explanation for this phenomenon involves many complex reasons…
9. There are a variety of reasons for this phenomenon.
10. There are three reasons for this.
（七）表示“說明”的常用句型
1. As we can see from the chart/graph/table/diagram…
2. The chart/graph/table/diagram shows/displays that…
3. As/Can be show in/According to the chart/graph/table/diagram…
4. The figures/statistics in the chart reflect /show/reveal (that)…
5. The chart/graph/table/diagram illustrates/describes…
6. It is clear/apparent/from the chart/graph/table/diagram…
高考書面表達(dá)高分秘笈

秘笈一：運用高級詞匯，彰顯強功句式。
　? 高考英語書面表達(dá)對在選詞和選句部分有較高的要求，尤其是對于想要得到高分的學(xué)生，在作文要使用較高級詞匯，借以突顯作文亮點，展示自己作文特色，同時也是提升作文檔次的重要方面。因此針對歷年高考書面表達(dá)的高頻話題考點，給同學(xué)們總結(jié)了幾個重要的話題詞匯，希望能熟練掌握。
話題一：環(huán)境保護(hù)
Pollution, protect the environment, give off a bad smell, send out smoke and poisonous gases into the air, pour waste water into the river, cut down trees, throw litter, sandstorm, global warming, Greenhouse Effect, live in harmony with, take proper measures to, improve the environment, pose a great threat to, be endangered, die out, become extinct, species, be from bad to worse, spring up like mushrooms, flood into...
話題二：中學(xué)生的興趣愛好
Spare time, hobby, entertainment, be interested in, have special favor to, be fond of, be keen on, have a taste in, read novels, surf the internet, chat online, collect stamps, doing sports, develop an interest in, play musical instrument...
　　話題三：友誼
　　Make friends with, friendship, friendly, trust each other, righteous, honesty, knowledgeable, standard, precious, be loyal to, keep in touch with, keep company with sb., have a lot in common, share happiness and bitterness with each other, treasure, good-tempered...
　　A friend is a present which you give yourself.
A life without a friend is a life without a sun.
話題四：勞動、求職與就業(yè)
　　Offer service to, heart and soul, physical labor, mental labor, honorable, earn pocket money, part-time job, full-time job, steel one’s mind, enlarge one’s knowledge, get working experience, apply for, major in, graduate from, degree, scholarship, be skilled in, confident, experienced, perform well in school, leadership, communicative, cooperative, competitive, diligent...
　　話題五：校園文明與安全
School rules and regulations, obey, be neatly dressed, respect one’s teachers and parents, be on time, keep the environment clean, break the rules, spit, cheat in exam, get in line, punish sb for,? it’s shameful to, library card, student ID, bicycle-permit, be absent from...

秘笈二：巧用插入語，點亮量分點。
在平時做題時，總會出現(xiàn)不少插入語，尤其在情景交際這部分出現(xiàn)的頻率較高，每個插入語都會給整個對話情景增添具體的語言氛圍，從插入語中能夠判斷說話者的語氣及態(tài)度，而且在寫作中若能正確運用這些插入語，會使你的文章表達(dá)更地道，從而能使你的文章增色不少。
1. what’s more?更重要的是；更何況；而且
??You should go to see her, because she misses you, and what’s more, she needs your help.?你應(yīng)該去看她，因為她很想念你，更重要的是，她需要你的幫助。
??He will surely help you, because he is your best friend, and what’s more, he is so kind.?他肯定會幫你，因為他是你最好的朋友，更何況他的心地又是如此之好。
?2. besides更何況
??You can pass the exam, because you study very hard, and besides, you are so clever.?你能通過這次考試，因為你學(xué)習(xí)很認(rèn)真，更何況你又很聰明。
?3. what’s worse, to make the matter worse, worse still?更糟糕的是
??You can’t play computer games too much, because it will do harm to your health. What’s worse, it will waste your time.?你不能過分玩電腦游戲，因為它會損害你的身體。更糟糕的是，它會浪費你的時間。
?4. that is（to say）也就是說，即
??? He will come on National Day, that is?（to say）, October 1st.?他國慶節(jié)，即十月一日來。
?5. or rather?更確切地說
He arrived home late last night, or rather, early this morning.?他昨天深夜，更確切地說，今天一大早才回家。
?6. in other words?換言之
?? You needn’t come to work tomorrow, in other words, you are out of work.?你明天不用來上班了，換言之，你下崗了。
?7. believe it or not?信不信由你
?? Believe it or not, he is more than one hundred years old.?信不信由你，他已經(jīng)100多歲了。
?8. generally speaking, generally, in general?一般說來
?? Generally speaking, boys are more active than girls.?一般說來，男孩比女孩更活躍。
9. altogether?總之
??She is kind. She is diligent. She is considerate. Altogether she is a good girl.?她善良，她勤奮，她善解人意?？傊且粋€好女孩。
10. in a word?總之
??This book is very interesting. This book is very instructive. This book is very fashionable. In a word, this book is very good.?這本書很有趣，這本書有教育意義，這本書很時尚?？傊?，這本書很好。
11. similarly?同樣
? A machine needs fuel. Similarly, man needs food.?機器需要燃料，同樣道理，人類需要營養(yǎng)。
12. worst of all?最糟糕的是
??It was very dark, and I lost my way. Worst of all, it began to rain.?天很暗，我又迷了路，最糟糕的是，天又開始下雨。
13. in fact, actually, in reality, as a matter of fact?實際上
??She seems thirty-five, but in fact, she is only thirty.?她看起來有三十五歲，但實際上只有三十歲。
14. in turn?反過來
??Theory begins with practice and in turn serves practice.?理論來源于實踐又反過來為實踐服務(wù)。
15. in return?做為報答
??She gave me much help, and in return, I gave her some money.?她給我許多幫助，做為報答我給她一些錢。
16. above all?尤其重要的是，最為重要的是
? You can’t waste anything, and above all, you can’t waste your time.?你不能浪費任何東西，尤其不能浪費時間。
17. after all?意思為＂畢竟，終究＂，放在句首時含有別忘了之意，用來表示聽話人似乎忘記了某一個重要環(huán)節(jié)而需要被加以提醒，放在句末時有與預(yù)料中的情況相反之意
? Let her go alone; after all, she is eighteen, she is no longer a child.?讓她一個人去吧，畢竟，她十八歲了，不再是一個小孩了。
?I thought he was sure to die that night, but he lived through after all.?我以為他活不過當(dāng)晚，但他竟然活過來了。
18. in one’s opinion, in the opinion of sb.?以……之見
??In my opinion, your plan is not considerate.?依我看，你的計劃并不周全。
19. exactly?非常確切，確切地
??? —We should serve the people heart and soul.
??? —Exactly. It is our duty to do so.
??? —我們應(yīng)該全心全意為人民服務(wù)。
??? —確切地說。這是我們的責(zé)任
?20. as a result結(jié)果
?? It rained very hard, and as a result, he couldn’t go out.?雨下得很大，結(jié)果他不能出去。
?21. no wonder難怪
??? —He started very early yesterday morning.
??? —No wonder he got there ahead of time.
??? —昨天早晨他出發(fā)得很早。
??? —難怪他提前趕到了那里。
所以，書面表達(dá)，在平時的訓(xùn)練中，考生就要注意歸納、總結(jié)(連接詞、常見句式、創(chuàng)新觀點、好詞好句等等)，經(jīng)常背誦佳句美文。在考試中，則要注意審題、要點、框架、邏輯、標(biāo)點、大小寫等規(guī)范性操作，并力求卷面整潔美觀。

高考英語寫作20套經(jīng)典模板
一、求職信模板
Dear,
　　I write this letter to apply for the position that you advertised in of.(信息來源)
　　Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for .(表明自己可以勝任某一職位)For one thing, .(勝任的理由一) For another, .(勝任的理由二) Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.
　　Please contact me at any time at .(提供個人聯(lián)系方式)
　　Thank you for considering my application, and I’m looking forward to meeting you.(結(jié)束語，表達(dá)感謝和期望)
Yours sincerely,
________
二、邀請信模板
Dear ,
　　(活動的內(nèi)容、時間、地點)
　　I’m writing to invite you to .(發(fā)出邀請)
　　There are some points you may want to know about ./During ________, we will have lots of activities you are interested in.(活動的具體內(nèi)容)First, .(活動介紹一)Second, .(活動介紹二)
　　I believe that you will be very interested in . For one thing/First, ________. For another/Second, ________(受邀人參加的理由)
　　Since the ________ will begin ________, is it possible ________? I really hope you can come/I’m looking forward to ________.(提出希望)
Yours
________
三、勸慰信和建議信模板
Dear,
　　I am sorry to hear that ______________ (就某事表示遺憾) . You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some useful recommendations.(承上啟下)
　　First of all, ______________. What’s more, ______________. Last but not least, ______________ (給出理由) .
　　I hope you will find these proposals practical. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.(結(jié)尾句，希望上述建議能有所幫助)
Yours sincerely,
________
四、感謝信模板
Dear ,
　　Thank you very much for/Thanks a lot for/Many thanks for/I’m writing to you about my gratitude for/I’m very grateful to you for .(開門見山地交代感謝原因)
　　But for/Without your help .(從反面襯托對方的作用)/It’s very kind of you to .(從正面說明對方的作用)
　　I hope to have the opportunity to express my gratitude to you/repay your kindness. I will feel very honored and pleased if .(提出回報對方的方式)Would you please let me know ?(希望對方給予回應(yīng))Thank you again for what you have done.(再次表達(dá)感謝)
Yours sincerely,
________
五、道歉信模板
Dear ,
　　I’m so sorry to tell you that .Now, I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret.(就某事道歉)I do hope you can understand me and excuse me for ________(希望得到諒解)
　　I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation. The reason for my delay/absence was/is that . Therefore, .(解釋原因)
　　I wonder if ________.(詢問對方能夠接受補救方案)
Sincerely yours,
________
六、建議信模板
Dear ,
　　I am very to know that .(寫信的原因)I’m looking forward to .(表示期待)
　　I’m afraid that .(表述提出建議的原因)I’d like to suggest that first , then .(提出建議)
　　I believe this kind of arrangement will .(建議的作用)
　　Moreover, if , it is necessary for you to .(補充建議)With you will .
　　Wish .(祝愿)
Yours sincerely,
________
七、咨詢信模板
Dear ,
　　I am .(自我介紹)I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding .(要詢問的內(nèi)容)
　　First of all, what are ? Secondly, when will ? Thirdly, is ?(要咨詢的問題羅列)
　　I would also like to inquire . Could you be so kind to send me some relevent booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?(附加問題)
　　Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.(表示感謝)
Yours sincerely,
________
八、電子郵件模板
Dear ,
　　I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that .(寒暄句加主題句)
　　(擴展句一)
　　(擴展句二)
　　(擴展句三)
　　I will greatly appreciate a response from your earliest convenience./I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(結(jié)束主體段落)
　　Best regards.(結(jié)束語)
Sincerely yours,
________
九、日記模板
　　(月、日、年、星期、天氣)
　　(標(biāo)題)
　　Today/Yesterday, I/we .(事件)
　　In the morning, we ; then ; after that . By the time we had a good time. Finally . I’ll never forget the memorable day!(事件經(jīng)過)
　　From this activity, I have learned that/I think .(事件意義和自己的感想)
十、演講稿模板
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
　　It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.(表示榮幸)My name is .(自我介紹)The topic of my speech is .(提出演講主題)
　　To begin with, many people suggest that .(話題或現(xiàn)象列舉)Secondly, . Thirdly, .
　　What I want to stress is that .(重申主題)For one thing, . For another, . Besides, .(原因或重要性列舉)In a word, .(總結(jié))
　　Thank you for your listening/Thank you.
十一、口頭通知模板
　　Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.(稱呼語及開場白).
　　(正文部分，說明具體通知事項)
　　All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes./Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Make sure you’ll come on time and don’t be late.(說明通知對象和注意事項)
　　Please come and join in it./ Everybody is welcome to attend it./I hope you’ll have a nice time here.(重申希望大家參加之情)
　　That’s all. Thank you.(結(jié)束語)
十二、記敘文模板
　　One day, ________, ________.(事情發(fā)生的時間、地點等)
　　When I was ________, something strange happened ________.(事情發(fā)生的過程)Finally, ________.(結(jié)果)
　　I’ll never forget ________(感受)
十三、說明原因型說明文模板
　　Nowadays, there are more and more in some big cities. It is estimated that .(用具體數(shù)據(jù)說明某現(xiàn)象)
　　Why have there been so many ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is that .(原因一)Besides, .(原因二)The third reason is .(原因三)To sum up, the main cause of is due to .(指出主要原因)
　　It is high time that something should be done. For one thing, .(解決建議一)
　　For another thing, . All these measures will certainly .(解決建議二)
十四、描述事物型說明文模板
　　What I have known about is that .(具體描述某事物)
　　Firstly, .(描述要點一) .(具體闡述要點一)Secondly, .(描述要點二) (具體闡述要點二). As a college student, .(結(jié)合自身描述要點三)
　　All in all, .(做出總結(jié))Therefore, we should .(提出建議)
十五、問題解決型說明文模板
　　In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.(說明問題及其現(xiàn)狀)First, . Second, .(進(jìn)一步闡釋現(xiàn)狀)
　　We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________. For another thing, ________. Finally, ________.(列舉解決該問題的方法)
　　Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________.(結(jié)尾段，指出＂我＂的信心及理由)
十六、諺語/警句型議論文模板
　　The good old proverb reminds us that . Indeed, we can learn many things from it.(引出名言，闡明含義)
　　First of all, . For example, . Secondly, . Another case is that . Furthermore, .(舉例說明理由)
　　In my opinion, .(自己的觀點)In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying . If you understand it and apply it to your study or life, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.(總結(jié))
十七、正反觀點對比型議論文模板
　　There is a widespread concern over the issue that . But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.(引出話題)
　　A majority of people think that .(觀點一)In their view there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: In the first place, .(支持觀點一的原因一)In the second place, .(支持觀點一的原因一)So it goes without saying that .
　　The other people, however, differ in their opinion on this matter. They hold the idea that .(觀點二)In their point of view, on the one hand, ; on the other hand, .(支持觀點二的原因)Therefore, there is no doubt that .
　　As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that . It is not only because , but also because . The more , the more .(＂我＂的觀點)
十八、利弊對比型議論文模板
　　Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over .(引出話題或?qū)ο?
　　In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in . Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, .(優(yōu)點一)And secondly, .(優(yōu)點二)
　　Just as a popular saying goes, ＂Every coin has two sides.＂ is no exception, and in other words, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, .(缺點一)In addition, .(缺點二)
　　To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of .(總結(jié))
十九、圖畫作文模板
　　As is vividly shown in the picture, .(描述圖畫內(nèi)容)The picture/cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that .(圖畫反映的現(xiàn)象)
　　These may/might be several factors contributing to/responsible for the phenomenon/problem. To start with, . Secondly, . What’s more, . Last but not least, .(說明原因)
　　In my opinion, the government/the school/we should take measures to/something must be done to . Only in this way can the problem be really solved./ Only when everyone can do so will our world become more and more beautiful.(解決問題的方法)
二十、圖表作文模板
　　As the bar chart shows, during the years of to .(說明圖表反映的問題)
　　Several factors contribute to . . And . Furthermore. All these result in .(分析問題產(chǎn)生的原因)
However, is faced with some problems. With , the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay due attention to , but not just to .(提出解決措施)


模擬演練
（一）
(2020·全國卷Ⅰ改編)你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：
1．人物簡介；
2．尊敬和愛戴的原因。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．短文題目和首句已為你寫好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.________________________
滿分作文第一步　“五定”審題　“三段”謀篇

定體裁

定時態(tài)

定人稱

定要點、
定結(jié)構(gòu)
“三段”
謀篇
第一段

第二段

第三段


滿分作文第二步　斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．我最尊敬的人是我的物理老師。
①The person_______________________________________．(定語從句)
②_____________________________________________.(主語從句)
2．是她的友善和責(zé)任感讓我欽佩她。(強調(diào)句型)
____________________________________________________________________________.
3．她不僅教我們?nèi)绾潍@得知識，也教我們?nèi)绾纬蔀橐粋€好人。(not only...but also...)
She teaches us ______________________________________________________________．
4．她為我們學(xué)生樹立了一個好榜樣，值得我尊敬。(分詞作狀語)
__________________________________________________________________________.
滿分作文第三步　巧妙過渡　完美成篇
________________________________________________________________
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One possible version：
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my physics teacher. She is so patient with each student that we all like her.
It's her friendliness and sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement. She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.

（二）
假定你是李華， 你所在的城市將舉辦“國際旅游博覽會(the International Tourism Fair)”， 計劃招募志愿者， 你希望報名參加。請你用英語寫一封申請信， 內(nèi)容包括：
1．表達(dá)意愿；
2．你的優(yōu)勢。
注意： 1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
滿分作文第一步　“五定”審題　“三段”謀篇

定體裁

定時態(tài)

定人稱

定要點、
定結(jié)構(gòu)
“三段”
謀篇
第一段

第二段

第三段


滿分作文第二步　斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．我在報紙上看到了你們招募志愿者的信息， 我寫信申請當(dāng)一名志愿者。
①I have seen your recruitment information for volunteers on the newspaper. _________________________________________________________________．
②__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(分詞作狀語)
2．首先，我愿意為公眾提供服務(wù)。
First of all, ____________________________________________________．
3．國際旅游博覽會是將在我市舉行的一項重要活動。
①The International Tourism Fair ______________________. It will be held in our city.
②____________________________________________________________(非謂語作定語)
4．如果我有機會為來自世界各地的客人做志愿者，我會感到很榮幸。
_________________________________________________the guests from all over the world.
5．其次，我英語說得很流利，這使我能很好地與外國人交流。
①Secondly, I speak English fluently，___________________________________．(定語從句)
②Secondly, I speak English fluently，__________________________________．(分詞作狀語)
6．請考慮我的申請，我期待著你的早日回復(fù)。
①Please consider my application and____________________________________________．
②_________________________________________________________________(高頻詞匯)
滿分作文第三步　巧妙過渡　完美成篇
________________________________________________________________
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（三）
假定你是李華。你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1．闡明寫信事由；
2．征求建議；
3．表示感謝。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
滿分作文第一步　“五定”審題　“三段”謀篇
定體裁

定時態(tài)

定人稱

定要點、
定結(jié)構(gòu)
“三段”
謀篇
第一段

第二段

第三段


滿分作文第二步　斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．為了弘揚中國傳統(tǒng)文化，并在英語網(wǎng)站上發(fā)布一些班會，我們學(xué)校將組織以中國傳統(tǒng)文化為主題的班會。(高級詞匯＋定語從句)
____________________________________________ and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organize class meetings __________________________________．
2．我們可以選擇各種各樣的主題，如書法、武術(shù)、油畫、剪紙等。
We can choose a variety of themes,
_______________________________________________________________．
3．我非常想知道中國傳統(tǒng)文化的哪些方面最能激發(fā)你的好奇心。(賓語從句)
I am strongly eager to know _____________________________________________________.
4．如果你能在方便的時候盡早回復(fù)，我將不勝感激。
___________________________________________________________________.
滿分作文第三步　巧妙過渡　完美成篇
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（四）
假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1．劇情簡介；
2．指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；
3．商定時間地點。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
滿分作文第一步　“五定”審題　“三段”謀篇

定體裁

定時態(tài)

定人稱

定要點、
定結(jié)構(gòu)
“三段”
謀篇
第一段

第二段

第三段


滿分作文第二步　斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．我寫信是想請您指導(dǎo)一部根據(jù)我們的一篇課文改編的短劇。(高級詞匯＋定語從句＋被動語態(tài))
____________________________________________________________________________.
2．這篇課文講述了一個名叫黛西的女孩的故事，她和一些野生動物交談，并下定決心幫助保護(hù)環(huán)境。(非謂語動詞作定語＋定語從句)
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
3．如果您方便的話，我們可以在本周日早上8點在我們學(xué)校的藝術(shù)大廳見面嗎？
①(普通表達(dá))Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 a．m. this Sunday _____________________________？(高級詞匯)
②(高級表達(dá))Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 a．m. this Sunday ____________________________________？(if 條件狀語從句)
4．我們真誠地希望你能幫我們這個忙，幫助我們提升演技。
We sincerely hope you can ______________________________________________．
滿分作文第三步　巧妙過渡　完美成篇
________________________________________________________________
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真題演練
【2022年】
2022年新高考I卷
假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“Talk and Talk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 節(jié)目介紹；
2. 訪談的時間和話題。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

2022年新高考II卷
假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“Talk and Talk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 節(jié)目介紹；
2. 訪談的時間和話題。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2022年1月浙江卷卷
假定你是李華，在“中國-愛爾蘭文化節(jié)”活動中結(jié)識了愛爾蘭朋友Chris，現(xiàn)在他已回國，請你給他 寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 回憶活動經(jīng)歷；2. 分享個人收獲；3. 希望保持聯(lián)系。
注意：
1 . 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【2021年】
1.（2021·全國高考新高考Ⅰ卷）你校英文報Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 讀報的經(jīng)歷；2. 喜愛的欄目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式寫字答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Youth and Me
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2.（2021·6月浙江卷）
昨天你參觀了學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國畫作品展。請給校英文報寫一篇宣傳，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 展覽時間、地點；
2. 觀展感受；
3. 推薦觀展。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.（2021·浙江1月卷）
假定你是李華，下周有新西蘭學(xué)生訪問你校，你將作為學(xué)生代表致歡迎辭。請為此寫一篇 發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示歡迎；
2. 介紹活動安排；
3. 表達(dá)祝愿。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【2020年】
1.（2020年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李華，你校來自愛爾蘭的外教Peter因病回國休假。請給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1. 詢問近況；2. 分享班級最新消息；3. 表達(dá)祝愿。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2.（2020年1月，浙江卷）
假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括:
1.比賽時間；2.演講話題；3.報名方式。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【2019年】
1.（2019年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示感謝；
2. 回顧Alex對你的幫助；
3. 臨別祝愿。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【2018年】
1.（2018年11月，浙江卷）
假定你是李華，乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫教后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失。請給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 錢包特征；
3. 聯(lián)系方式。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2.（2018年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李華，你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。請你寫信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括：
（1） 口語能力：
（2） 相關(guān)經(jīng)驗；
（3） 應(yīng)聘目的。
注意：
（1） 詞數(shù)80左右；
（2） 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【2017年】
1.（2017年11月，浙江卷）
假定你是李華，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回國，想邀請他到你家過春節(jié)。請給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：
1.時間
2.一同過節(jié)的家人
3.活動
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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1.（2017年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李華，計劃組織一次郊游，請給你的英國朋友Chris寫封郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 參加者；
2. 時間、地點；
3. 活動：登山、野餐等。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【2016年】
1．（2016·天津卷）假設(shè)你是某高中的學(xué)生會主席李華。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學(xué)生開展了為期兩周的交流活動?，F(xiàn)在，他們即將回國，你將在歡送會上致辭。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿:
① 回顧雙方的交流活動(如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、體育、文藝等方面)；
② 談?wù)勈斋@或感想；
③ 表達(dá)祝愿與期望。
注意：① 詞數(shù)不少于100；
② 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。
Dear friends，
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Thank you.


2．（2016·新課標(biāo)1卷）書面表達(dá)
假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。
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3．（2016·新課標(biāo)2卷）書面表達(dá)
假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學(xué)攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信，請他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括：
1．主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)；
2．展覽時間；
3．投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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4．（2016·新課標(biāo)3卷）書面表達(dá)
假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.說明原因；
3.另約時間。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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