UNIT 1 Nature in the balance寫一封建議信本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一封建議信,屬于應(yīng)用文。建議信的目的是向有關(guān)組織或個(gè)人提出建議,所提建議旨在針對(duì)某種事物或現(xiàn)象,提出一些改進(jìn)的措施。建議信一般采取三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。[基本框架]1.開頭——提出寫建議信的緣由。2.主體——寫出建議的具體內(nèi)容,并指出你所提出的建議可能會(huì)帶來的好處。3.結(jié)尾——表明希望自己的建議被采納。[常用詞塊]1.take actions to protect wildlife采取措施保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物2.spare no effort to protect them from extinction不遺余力地保護(hù)它們免于滅絕3.stop the factories from giving out the polluted water and waste air 阻止工廠排放污水和廢氣4.arouse the public's awareness of protecting the endangered species 激起大眾保護(hù)瀕危物種的意識(shí)5.pay more attention to our daily life 更多關(guān)注我們的日常生活[常用語句]精彩開頭1.I'm writing to tell you that...2.Recently we have made a survey that...3.Many people are worried about...4.It worries more and more people that...正文佳句1.We intend to...to help/save/protect...2.We are ready to call on people to...3.We feel like doing...to teach the illegal hunters a lesson...4.We'd rather not...but do...5.We'd like to...to punish those who do harm to wildlife.余味結(jié)尾1.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.2.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.3.I would be more than happy to see improvement.4.I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.5.We need your support to make more and more people...假如你叫李華,你所生活的城市周圍有很多動(dòng)植物正逐漸減少,對(duì)此你想向有關(guān)部門寫一封信,分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因,并根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提出幾條切實(shí)可行的建議。以下要點(diǎn)要包括在內(nèi):1.野生動(dòng)植物的現(xiàn)狀;2.分析造成許多野生動(dòng)植物瀕臨滅絕的原因;3.提出幾條保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的具體措施。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir/Madam,I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my suggestions are helpful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【學(xué)生習(xí)作】Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.We know many wildlife are in danger. So we should protect them. And the environment is becoming more and more harmful to them. We destroyed them. They don't have something to eat. We also kill them for food.I think we should protect them and do something useful. First don't cut trees.Second,make laws to punish. And last, everyone should do.I hope my suggestions are helpful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua點(diǎn)評(píng):1.語言過于口語化;2.復(fù)雜句式偏少,簡單句居多;3.所給措施可操作性差。【參考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.As we know,many species of wildlife are in danger of extinction.This is because the environment that they are living in has been destroyed greatly.They not only have little to eat,but also can be killed by human beings.Personally,more measures should be taken to protect them from being hurt.Firstly,more laws must be made to stop people from cutting down trees.Secondly,all the factories must clean the waste water before it is poured into rivers or lakes.Thirdly,more reserves should be set up so that they can live safely.I hope my suggestions are helpful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua假定你是李華,你們學(xué)校將舉辦以“Protect Wild Animals”為主題的英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語演講稿。1.野生動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀;2.保護(hù)建議(建保護(hù)區(qū)、提高保護(hù)意識(shí)等);3.美好愿景。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:自然保護(hù)區(qū)nature reserve;意識(shí)awareness Good morning,everyone!I'm very glad to give a speech today.The topic of my speech is_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you!【參考范文】Good morning, everyone!I'm very glad to give a speech today.The topic of my speech is Protect Wild Animals.As we all know, wild animals also play a part in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately, they are in danger, and some of them are dying out. So it is urgent to take some measures to protect them. First of all, we must establish nature reserves. Secondly, it is important to raise public awareness of protecting wild animals.To harm wild animals is to harm ourselves. Therefore, let's take the responsibility and do what we can to protect them. I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily together with wild animals.Thank you!