一、描寫感動情緒
1.Surprised and mved, she bwed lw t us and murmured,"Thank yu!" weeping tears f gratitude.
她又驚喜又感動，向我們深深鞠躬低聲道謝，流下感激的淚水。
2.In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was tuched beynd wrds.
剎那間,
我淚流滿面，感動得說不出話來。
3.With tears streaming dwn her face, she thanked him again and again.
她淚流滿面，再三感謝她。
4.Tears drpping frm his eyes, he ran t Mum’s warm hug, and said gently “Mum, thank yu.”
他熱淚盈眶，跑到媽媽溫暖的擁抱前，溫柔地說："媽媽，謝謝你。"
二、描寫幫助行為
1.As I said gdbye t him, I reached int my pcket and ffered him a $20 bill fr his help.
當我說道別時，我把手伸進口袋，遞給他一張20美元的鈔票感謝他的幫助。
2.My mind was racing, trying t think f a slutin t assist her.
我轉動腦筋，試圖想出一個解決辦法幫助她。
3.I tearfully shared what I had seen with them and asked them t d smething t give them a helping hand.
我含淚把我所看到的告訴了他們，并請他們做一些事情來幫助他們。
三、主旨升華句
（一）
1.This kind act has a lasting influence n me.I always give thers a helping hand if pssible.
這種善意的行為對我產(chǎn)生了持久的影響。我總是盡可能地幫助別人。
2.Just as the saying ges,“Rses given, fragrance in hand.”
正如諺語所說?！百浫嗣倒?，手有余香。”
3.When I encuntered difficulties, my friend's selfless help made me feel deeply grateful.
在我遇到困難時，朋友無私的幫助讓我深感感激。
4.N matter what difficulties arise, she always enters my life with a friendly smile.
無論遇到什么困難，她總是帶著友善的微笑走進我的生活。
5.Her sincere care made me feel less alne when facing challenges.
她真誠的關心讓我在面對挑戰(zhàn)時不再感到孤單。
6.Althugh it was just a small help, it made me feel the warmth f humanity.
雖然只是一個小小的幫助，但她卻讓我感受到了人間的溫情。
7.Smetimes, a small act f kindness can be pwerful enugh t make a huge difference.
有時小小的善行會有很大影響。
8.As a matter f fact, a small gesture f care will pssibly melt peple's lneliness.
事實上，一個表達關愛的小舉動也會融化人們內(nèi)心的孤獨。
9.When I encuntered setbacks, my friend's enthusiastic help reignited my hpe.
當我遭遇挫折時，朋友那熱心的幫助讓我重新燃起了希望。
10.This wrld is warmer because there are s many peple willing t help thers.
這個世界因為有許多樂于助人的人而變得更加溫暖。
11.Every time I face difficulties, my parents are always the first t be by my side, ffering supprt and help.
每一次我遇到困難時，我的父母總是最先出現(xiàn)在我身邊，給我支持和幫助。
12.I am deeply grateful t thse wh have helped me selflessly because they shwed me the beauty f the wrld.
我深深感激那些無私幫助過我的人，因為他們讓我看到了世界的美好。
13.He is always willing t help thers, and even the smallest assistance brings warmth t thse arund him.
他總是樂于助人，哪怕是微小的忙碌，也讓周圍的人感到溫暖。
14.When I felt discuraged, my friend's warm encuragement gave me the mtivatin t keep mving frward.
在我灰心喪氣的時候，朋友的溫暖鼓勵給了我繼續(xù)前行的動力。
（二）
1.With the sparkle f gratitude in her eyes, she handed him a cup f ht tea, the warmth spreading like ripples in a still pnd.
她眼中閃爍著感激的光芒，把一杯熱茶遞給他，溫暖像靜水中的漣漪一樣擴散開來。
2.Carrying a basket f fresh bread, he stepped int the elderly cuple’s hme, his heart light with the jy f giving.
他提著一籃新鮮的面包，走進了這對老年夫婦的家，心中充滿了給予的喜悅。
3.Shwered with unexpected kindness, the yung by realized that a small gesture culd illuminate smene’s wrld like a spark in the dark.
在意外的善意中，年輕男孩意識到一個小小的舉動可以像黑暗中的火花一樣照亮某人的世界。
4.With his vice trembling slightly, he expressed his gratitude, his wrds flwing like a gentle meldy.
他聲音微微顫抖，表達了他的感激之情，話語如溫柔的旋律般流淌。
5.Encuraged by her neighbr’s supprt, she embraced the chance t begin again, her determinatin as firm as an ancient ak.
在鄰居的支持下，她抓住了重新開始的機會，她的決心堅定如古老的橡樹。
6.With every smile he shared, he planted seeds f jy, each ne prmising a brighter future.
隨著他分享的每一個微笑，他播下了快樂的種子，每一個都承諾著一個更光明的未來。
7.With determinatin glinting in her eyes, she vercame every bstacle, her spirit acting as a beacn guiding thers frward.
她眼中閃爍著決心，克服了每一個障礙，她的精神如同燈塔，引導他人前行。
8.With every encuraging wrd, he built her cnfidence, layer by layer, like a craftsman shaping a masterpiece.
隨著每一句鼓勵的話語，他一點一點地建立了她的自信，就像工匠雕刻一件杰作。
9.Never had I anticipated that a randm act f kindness wuld inject such great pwer int thers.
我從來沒有想到，一個隨意的善舉會給他人注入如此巨大的力量。
10.Nt nly did he keep in mind the help f Meredith’s family, but he als did whatever he culd t help thse in need.
他不僅把麥迪斯家人的幫助記在心里了，而且他也盡他所能去幫助其他有需要的人。
四、優(yōu)秀片段
一、歸還老人丟失的手套
With a tender heart, I sptted the glves he cherished, lst and alne n the bench.As I handed them back, his eyes, a windw t his sul, sparkled with surprise and gratitude."Thank yu," he whispered, his vice quivering slightly, as he gently squeezed my hand—a silent testament t the jy f giving.At that mment, I felt the warmth f cmpassin, understanding that small gestures have immense impact.心懷柔情，我瞥見了他珍視的手套，遺失在長椅上，孤單無援。 當我遞還它們時，他的眼睛，靈魂之窗，因驚訝和感激而閃爍?！爸x謝你，”他輕聲說，聲音微微顫抖，同時輕輕握住我的手——這是給予之樂的無聲證明。在那一刻，我感受到了同情的溫暖，明白小小的舉動有著巨大的影響。
二、年輕男子幫助迷路父親回家
My heart swelled with gratitude as the yung man gently guided my lst father t ur drstep.His kind gesture, a beacn f hpe in the twilight, spke vlumes f his character."I'm in yur debt," I uttered, my vice thick with emtin, as I clasped his hand firmly.The sincerity in his eyes and the gentle smile n his face reassured me f the humanity's inherent gdness.At that mment, I realized the depth f kindness in strangers, a reminder that cmpassin knws n bunds.當那位年輕人輕輕地將我迷路的父親帶到我們的門前時，我的心充滿了感激。他親切的舉動，在黃昏中成為了希望的燈塔，充分展現(xiàn)了他的品格。"我欠你的情，"我聲音充滿情感地說，同時緊緊地握住他的手。他眼中的真誠和臉上溫柔的微笑讓我確信了人性的固有善良。在那一刻，我意識到了陌生人的深厚善意，這是一個提醒，同情心沒有界限。
三、給被困路上旅客面包和衣服度過暴風雪
As the winter strm raged, I watched the stranded turists with a heavy heart, their shivering frms a stark cntrast t the czy warmth f my hme.Driven by cmpassin, I gathered laves f bread and warm clthes, and ffered them with a gentle, "Please, take these t ward ff the chill." Their eyes, initially dulled by the cld, brightened with surprise and gratitude.The simple act f sharing taught me the true meaning f empathy and the pwer f small gestures t bring cmfrt in the face f adversity.當冬季風暴肆虐時，我懷著沉重的心情看著被困的游客，他們在寒冷中顫抖的身影與我家的溫馨溫暖形成了鮮明對比。出于同情，我收集了面包和保暖的衣物，溫和地遞給他們："請拿這些來抵御寒冷。"他們的眼睛最初因寒冷而黯淡無光，隨后因驚訝和感激而明亮起來。分享這個簡單行為教會了我同情的真正含義，以及在逆境中帶來安慰的小舉動的力量。
四、清潔工拾金不昧歸還戒指
The cleaner's heartverflwed with integrity as she fund the glinting ring, knwing its wrth yet chsing t return it."This belngs t smene precius," she thught, handing it back with a humble smile.The lady's eyes glistened with tears f gratitude as she clasped the cleaner's hand, her "Thank yu" eching with sincerity.The act reaffirmed the belief in the purity f kindness, a reminder that hnesty is the mst valuable treasure ne can pssess.清潔工在發(fā)現(xiàn)那枚閃閃發(fā)光的戒指時，內(nèi)心充滿了正直，知道它的價值卻選擇歸還?！斑@屬于某個珍貴的人，”她想著，帶著謙遜的微笑遞還戒指。女士的眼睛因感激而閃爍著淚光，她緊握清潔工的手，她的“謝謝你”充滿了真誠。這一行為重申了對純真善良的信仰，提醒著誠實是一個人可以擁有的最寶貴的財富。
五、真題鏈接
（2024新高考Ⅰ卷）閱讀下面材料, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter n a cld, wet and unfrgettable evening in September.I had planned t fly t Vienna and take a bus t Prague fr a cnference.Due t a big strm, my flight had been delayed by an hur and a half.I tuched dwn in Vienna just 30 minutes befre the departure f the last bus t Prague.The mment I gt ff the plane, I ran like crazy thrugh the airprt building and jumped int the first taxi n the rank withut a secnd thught.
That was when I met Gunter.I tld him where I was ging, but he said he hadn’t heard f the bus statin.I thught my prnunciatin was the prblem, s I explained again mre slwly, but he still lked cnfused.When I was abut t give up, Gunter fished ut his little phne and rang up a friend.After a heated discussin that lasted fr what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phne dwn and started the car.
Finally, with just tw minutes t spare we rlled int the bus statin.Thankfully, there was a lng queue still waiting t bard the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned arund, and lked at me with a big smile n his face.“We made it,” he said.
Just then I realized that I had zer cash in my wallet.I flashed him an aplgetic smile as I pulled ut my Prtuguese bankcard.He tried it several times, but the card machine just did nt play alng.A feeling f helplessness washed ver me as I saw the bus queue thinning ut.
At this mment, Gunter pinted twards the waiting hall f the bus statin.There, at the entrance, was a cash machine.I jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the machine, and ppped my card in, nly t read the message: “Out f rder.Srry.”
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（2）請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
注意:
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2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news._____________________________
Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised.______________________
【參考范文】
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news.He was bviusly nervus, which made me naturally guess that he was wrried abut the taxi fare, s I quickly explained my situatin and ffered t give him smething equal t the value f the fare.But Gunter seriusly refused and said he culd wait fr my cnference ending and my next return t Vienna.Relieved and tuched by his kindness, I quickly put dwn my phne number fr him and asked fr his.I barded the bus as I prmised t call and pay back the taxi fare.
Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as prmised.He came t meet me and greeted me with his usual big smile.I paid him with a muntain f thanks and ffered him a special present which he accepted delightedly.We talked fr a mment, during which I sent the praise and regards frm my clleagues when they heard f the stry and he said that inspired him t cntinue spreading kindness.After ur departure, I still reflected n the whle incident: hw a stranger’s kindness spared my truble and hw it built ur faith in each ther.

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