專題05 投稿征文活動(dòng)報(bào)道（課件）-2025年高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)講練（新高考通用）（新高考通用）-課件下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

投稿是指作者將自己創(chuàng)作的文章、作品、論文等提交給雜志社、報(bào)社、出版社、網(wǎng)站、比賽組織方或其他媒體平臺(tái)，期望其能夠被選用、發(fā)表或參與評(píng)選的行為。投稿的目的可能是為了發(fā)表作品、分享觀點(diǎn)、獲得認(rèn)可、贏取獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)或報(bào)酬等。
1. (2024·浙江1月卷)請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“Sprts and Health”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開(kāi)展的運(yùn)動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1. 介紹這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)；2. 說(shuō)明推薦理由。注意：1. 寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答：Stand Up and Exercise, Everybdy!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】Stand Up and Exercise, Everybdy! Everybdy! Are yu tired f sitting in class all day? Hw abut incrprating sme physical activity int yur daily rutine? One great ptin is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple rutine invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way t get yur bld flwing and re-energize yur bdy and mind. This exercise is recmmended fr several reasns. First, it helps t cmbat the negative effects f prlnged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Secnd, it can imprve yur fcus and cncentratin, making it easier t stay engaged in class. Lastly, it prmtes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential fr verall well-being. S, next time yu feel a bit sluggish during class, remember t stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in yur day.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“Sprts and Health”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開(kāi)展的運(yùn)動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累厭倦：be tired f→be fed up with首先：first→abve all提高：imprve→enhance2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：This simple rutine invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.拓展句：This is a simple rutine that invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it prmtes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential fr verall well-being. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2] This simple rutine invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ))[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in yur day. (運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)
2. (2023·全國(guó)甲卷) 你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國(guó)故事”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以一位中國(guó)歷史人物為題寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡(jiǎn)介及事跡；2. 意義或啟示。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 題目已為你寫(xiě)好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】 Cnfucius is a well-knwn figure in Chinese histry. His teachings emphasized the imprtance f mral values, respect fr elders, and scial harmny. Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety. The significance f Cnfucius cannt be verstated. His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. Even tday, his ideas cntinue t guide individuals and cmmunities in China and beynd. Cnfucius’s life ffers valuable lessns. He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld. His teachings remind us f the imprtance f integrity, cmpassin, and scial respnsibility.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為學(xué)校正舉辦的主題為“用英文講中國(guó)故事”的征文活動(dòng)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿?！驹斀狻?. 詞匯積累著名的：well-knwn → famus人物：figure → persn強(qiáng)調(diào)：emphasize → stress基礎(chǔ)：fundatin → basis2. 句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. 拓展句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, which fstered respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. 【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety. (運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ))【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
3. (2023·全國(guó)甲卷)請(qǐng)以向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿的方式，用英語(yǔ)描述學(xué)習(xí)一項(xiàng)新技能的經(jīng)歷，及從中獲得的體驗(yàn)和感受。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】 When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. That was the first time I watched a live musical perfrmance. The fantastic players tuched me deeply. I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult t read the ntes n the stave. Hwever, it did nt demralize me. I spent mst f my leisure hurs t practice pian. Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely. Even thugh I will nt pursue as my life career, I will still cntinue learning and playing pian as my hbby. It is simply because music is the best medicatin fr my sul.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于記敘文，請(qǐng)以向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿的方式，用英語(yǔ)描述學(xué)習(xí)一項(xiàng)新技能的經(jīng)歷，及從中獲得的體驗(yàn)和感受?！驹斀狻?. 詞匯積累機(jī)會(huì)：pprtunity → chance使沮喪：demralize → discurage滿意的：satisfied → cntent空閑的：leisure → spare2. 句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply. I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.拓展句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply, s I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.【高分句型1】When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. (運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely. (運(yùn)用了althugh引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)
4.（2022·全國(guó)乙卷）學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在開(kāi)展以Learning English Beynd the Classrm為題的討論。請(qǐng)使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)狀況描述；2. 簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)論；3. 你的建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 短文的題目和首句已為你寫(xiě)好。
【滿分范文】Learning English Beynd the Classrm Nwadays, with the grwing ppularity f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm in varius ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%. As far as I’m cncerned, it is a disturbing trend. Fr students, what benefits mst t their study is reading English bks. Because f their lack f self-discipline, they’re mre easily addicted t chatting nline r playing games. It’s urgent fr students themselves t imprve their self-discipline, and it’s als urgent fr parents and teachers t strengthen the guidance.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于議論文，要求考生使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，對(duì)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)狀況進(jìn)行描述并作簡(jiǎn)單的評(píng)論，提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累缺乏：lack→shrtage加強(qiáng)：strengthen→enhance就我而言：as far as I’m cncerned→frm my perspective2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.拓展句：Hwever, thse wh chse reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. (運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句以及wh引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Fr students, what benefits mst t their study is reading English bks.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句)。
5.（2022·全國(guó)甲卷）你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1. 海洋的重要性；2. 保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 短文的題目和首句已為你寫(xiě)好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】Our Oceans, Our Respnsibility When it cmes t cean, its pllutin is becming mre and mre serius. Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin. Ocean plays a key rle in ur wrld. Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature. Thus, it is imperative t prtect cean. First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins. Fr example, garbage can’t be thrwn int cean. What’s mre, we can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean. The mre peple are invlved, the better the cean envirnment is. All in all, it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting cean. T prtect cean is t prtect urselves.
【解題導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿，闡述海洋的重要性并提出一些建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累越來(lái)越：mre and mre→increasingly重視：place imprtance n→attach imprtance t重要的：key→significant此外：what’s mre→furthermre2 句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.拓展句：Wrld Ocean Day, which falls n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]When it cmes t cean, its pllutin becming mre and mre serius.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins.(使用了主語(yǔ)從句)
6.（2021·新課標(biāo)I卷）你校英文報(bào)Yuth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2. 喜愛(ài)的欄目；3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式寫(xiě)字答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Yuth and Me________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】Yuth and Me It has been 10 years since Yuth was funded. Cngratulatins n the 10th anniversary f Yuth. In my memry, it is Yuth that accmpanies me thrugh my whle high schl. When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn. Besides, I even submitted my wn fictin t Yuth. Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer. I d expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向?qū)W校英文報(bào)Yuth表達(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建立：fund→establish沮喪的：depressed→upset此外：besides→what’s mre得到：receive→btain2.句式拓展同義句改寫(xiě)原句：These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn.拓展句：Nt nly can these stries relieve my stress, but als they can braden my hrizn.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. (運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略和which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer. (運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
7.（2021·天津卷）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括：(1)該地方的基本情況(如名稱、地理位置等)；(2)該地方的特色(如文化、景點(diǎn)等)；(3)你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li Jin____________________________________
【滿分范文】A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021 By Li Jin Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China. It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan Irrigatin prject. Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince. What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes. What’s mre, walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals like giant pandas, glden mnkeys. There are als many species f rare plants prtected here. Anther famus scenic spt is Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject. It dates frm ver 2,000 years ag. Hwever, it is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday. I’m sure the visitrs will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigu as well as the cnstructin Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject.
【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文，要求給英文網(wǎng)站《最美中華》欄目投稿，介紹介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：說(shuō)明文時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法第一段是文章的總起段，說(shuō)明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)；第二段介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分說(shuō)明你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。要求：1. 說(shuō)明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)2. 介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）第三步：連詞成句根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes.（what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]Walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals such as giant pandas, glden mnkeys.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）
8.（2020·全國(guó)I卷）你校正在組織英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)以身邊值得尊敬和愛(ài)戴的人為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括:1. 人物簡(jiǎn)介；2. 尊敬和愛(ài)戴的原因。注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 短文題目和首句已為你寫(xiě)好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】The persn I respect mst We have a lt f respectable peple arund us. They may be ur teachers, parents r ne f ur elders. As fr me, my father is the persn I respect mst. My father is a teacher, wh lves his wrk and his students very much. He wrks very hard every day but he will als spare sme time t accmpany me and share many funny things with me abut his wrk. When I cme acrss the prblems f learning in my study, my father will listen t me patiently and encurage me t vercme the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lt in his wrk, respected by his students. S, in my mind my father is the persn I respect mst and I lve him deeply.
【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生以身邊值得尊敬和愛(ài)戴的人為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文。時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。要求：1.人物簡(jiǎn)介： 2.尊敬和愛(ài)戴的原因。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)）As fr me；spare sme time；listen t me patiently;第三步：連詞成句根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：介紹人物；闡述原因 2.表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：As fr; and; but; S第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫。復(fù)合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的高端句式，如定語(yǔ)從句：My father is a teacher wh lves his wrk and his students very much；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：He achieved a lt in his wrk, respected by his students；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句：When I cme acrss the prblem f learning in my study, my father will listen t me patiently and encurage me t vercme the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。為文章增色添彩。
高考英語(yǔ)投稿正文滿分技巧對(duì)于“參賽”和“征文”的英語(yǔ)作文，常以記敘文為主。分為寫(xiě)人和敘事兩種。寫(xiě)作步驟如下: 一、認(rèn)真審題，提煉主題認(rèn)真分析標(biāo)題或材料所提供的信息，確定主題。注意標(biāo)題的含義很多，建議寫(xiě)自己最擅長(zhǎng)和熟悉的人和事。二、聯(lián)系生活，確定要點(diǎn) 以主題為綱，進(jìn)一步思考其內(nèi)涵和外延，聯(lián)系自己的學(xué)習(xí)、生活實(shí)際，確定寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)。高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)試題凸顯時(shí)代性，學(xué)生要多關(guān)注社會(huì)生活實(shí)際。三、細(xì)化要點(diǎn)，布局謀篇細(xì)化要點(diǎn)，使文章更豐滿?？梢圆捎萌问降膶?xiě)作模式來(lái)行文。最好擬個(gè)提綱，以明確主次，切忌心中無(wú)數(shù)、邊想邊寫(xiě)。四、斟詞酌句，組句成篇選擇適當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)或結(jié)構(gòu)將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦m當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡語(yǔ)組句成文。盡量使用不同的單詞、短語(yǔ)和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，使表達(dá)多樣化。
一、投稿征文首段金句：投稿約稿目的1. When it cmes t my favrite nvel, David Cpperfield by Charles Dickens ranks first in my heart.說(shuō)到我最喜歡的小說(shuō)，查爾斯?狄更斯的《大衛(wèi)?科波菲爾》在我心中排名第一。2. When it cmes t prtecting the cean, it is well-knwn that cean plays an imprtant part in ur life. 說(shuō)到保護(hù)海洋，眾所周知，海洋在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色。3. I’d like t submit an article entitled My Favrite Traditinal Chinese Fd which I’m sure will catch yur attentin.我想提交一篇題為《我最喜歡的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)食物》的文章，我相信它會(huì)引起你的注意。4. Recently we cnducted a survey cncerning ways t learn English beynd the classrm.The results are as fllws.最近我們進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于課堂外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法的調(diào)查。結(jié)果如下。5. Nwadays, with the develpment f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm by using them.如今，隨著智能手機(jī)和電腦的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生選擇在課堂以外使用它們來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。
二、投稿征文中段金句：介紹投稿的內(nèi)容或具體要求1. Yur writing is expected t be real and riginal in nt mre than 1,000 wrds.你的文章要真實(shí)、原創(chuàng)，字?jǐn)?shù)不超過(guò)1000字。2. Fr anther, peple will give mncakes t their relatives, friends and parents t express their gratitude. 另一方面，人們會(huì)把月餅送給親戚、朋友和父母，以表達(dá)他們的感激之情。3. Please be reminded that all cntributins shuld be addressed t studentsunin@ qq. cm n later than May 30th.請(qǐng)注意，所有捐款均應(yīng)不遲于5月30日發(fā)送至studentsunin@qq.cm。4. Freign Culture is my favrite clumn. The clumn expses me t different cultures, which nt nly bradens my hrizns but als makes me feel relaxed.《外國(guó)文化》是我最喜歡的專欄。這個(gè)專欄讓我接觸到了不同的文化，這不僅開(kāi)闊了我的視野，也讓我感到放松。5. My jurney with?The Art f War began?in seventh grade when?I stumble upn a cpy f the bk in my wn huse.我的《孫子兵法》之旅始于七年級(jí)，當(dāng)時(shí)我在家里偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)了一本這本書(shū)。
三、投稿征文尾段金句：表達(dá)期望或祝福1. I believe that with the tips abve we will becme smart nline learners. 我相信，有了以上提示，我們將成為聰明的在線學(xué)習(xí)者。2. I d expect the newspaper can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.我確實(shí)希望這份報(bào)紙能出版更多的經(jīng)典作品，并有一個(gè)充滿希望的未來(lái)。3. We hpe that with all these measures taken, eyesight prblems can be greatly reduced.我們希望這些有效的措施能大大減少視力問(wèn)題。4. We can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean. The mre peple are invlved, the better the cean envirnment is.我們還可以散發(fā)傳單，呼吁更多的人保護(hù)海洋。參與的人越多，海洋環(huán)境就越好。5. In my view, it’s the mncake that has becme an imprtant part f Mid-Autumn Festival culture and a mix f delicacy and culture.在我看來(lái)，月餅已經(jīng)成為中秋文化的重要組成部分，是美食和文化的融合。
（24-25高三上·天津·期末）假如你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生李津，你校英文報(bào)正在征集主題為“My Dream University”的英語(yǔ)短文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文進(jìn)行投稿。1. 介紹你理想中的大學(xué)（名稱、所在地等）；2. 你選擇這所大學(xué)的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；3. 你為此付出的努力和期盼。注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。__________________________________________________________________
預(yù)測(cè)1 向校英文報(bào)推薦兩個(gè)欄目
【滿分范文】 My Dream University As is knwn, every student in high schl makes great effrts t g t their ideal university fr higher educatin. When it cmes t the university which I lng fr, I wuld say withut hesitatin that Peking University is my first chice. Lcated in the capital city f Beijing, Peking University is ne f the tp universities in China. The reasns why I desire t study in Peking University are as fllws. First f all, many f China’s leading and admirable schlars and scientists have emerged there wh inspire generatins f yung peple t make every effrt t achieve their gals and make cntributins t the mtherland. Bedsides, with a strng spirit f innvatin and scientific research, the university prvides students with a platfrm where they can nt nly get access t advanced technlgy and knwledge but als braden their hrizns. There’s n dubt that Peking University has becme the crwning glry f China’s universities, which allws me t have a great advantage ver ther peers in the future. As a result, I have been sparing n effrt t study hard and equip myself with necessary skills since I attended high schl. I will g all ut t prepare fr the cming Cllege Entrance Examinatin and I’m firmly cnvinced that years f hard wrk will definitely pay ff!
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)一篇主題為“My Dream University”的英語(yǔ)短文進(jìn)行投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累此外：besides→in additin首先：first f all→t begin with盡最大努力：spare n effrt t→try ne’s best t肯定：definitely→certainly2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Lcated in the capital city f Beijing, Peking University is ne f the tp universities in China.拓展句：Peking University, which is lcated in the capital city f Beijing, is ne f the tp universities in China.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] The reasns why I desire t study in Peking University are as fllws. (運(yùn)用了why引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2] There’s n dubt that Peking University has becme the crwning glry f China’s universities, which allws me t have a great advantage ver ther peers in the future. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
（24-25高二上·四川成都·期末）你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在開(kāi)展以“My Dream Jb”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：（1）介紹該工作；（2）闡述其原因。注意：（1）寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。My Dream Jb______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
預(yù)測(cè)2投稿征文—我的理想大學(xué)
【滿分范文】My Dream Jb Everyne has a dream jb. As fr me, I dream abut becming a jurnalist in the future. Eager t wrk in different lcatins, I believe being a jurnalist will fit my preferences. I’d like t reprt many interesting things. Plus, it’s my desire t help peple knw mre abut the wrld. Being a jurnalist may be stressful and even dangerus at times, but I’m sure that I can manage it. T make my dream cme true, I’ll study hard. Meanwhile, I’ll devte my spare time t learning smething abut jurnalism.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對(duì)于你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在開(kāi)展以“My Dream Jb”為主題的征文活動(dòng)這一情況，寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累此外：Plus → What’s mre幫助：help → assist夢(mèng)想成真：make ne’s dream cme true → make ne’s dream a reality致力于：devte ... t → cmmit ... t2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：T make my dream cme true, I’ll study hard.拓展句：I’ll study hard s that I can make my dream cme true.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Eager t wrk in different lcatins, I believe being a jurnalist will fit my preferences.（運(yùn)用了省略了連接詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Being a jurnalist may be stressful and even dangerus at times, but I’m sure that I can manage it.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)以及連接詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）
（24-25高三上·甘肅白銀·期末）假定你是李華，上周你參加了你校舉辦的交通安全知識(shí)競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)你就此寫(xiě)一篇短文向你校英文報(bào)投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的參賽情況(含筆試和口試等)；2.你的感受。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。參考詞匯：筆試written test口試ral quizMy Experience f Participating in a Cntest n Traffic Safety Knwledge
預(yù)測(cè)3投稿征文—參加交通安全知識(shí)競(jìng)賽
【滿分范文】 My Experience f Participating in a Cntest n Traffic Safety Knwledge Last week, I participated in the Traffic Safety Knwledge Cntest held at ur schl, which turned ut t be a bth challenging and enlightening jurney. The cmpetitin started with a written test that assessed ur understanding f traffic rules and safety measures and it required a deep knwledge f traffic regulatins. The next rund was an ral quiz, where we had t answer questins n the spt. This was where I felt my preparatin paid ff, as I was able t recall much I had studied. As far as I’m cncerned, the cmpetitin is nt just abut passing a test but abut saving lives. I hpe mre students will jin in future events t raise awareness abut traffic safety.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)一篇短文向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿，介紹學(xué)校舉辦的交通安全知識(shí)競(jìng)賽的相關(guān)情況?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累參加：participate in→get invlved in回憶：recall→recllect拯救：save→rescue評(píng)估：assess→evaluate2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：As far as I’m cncerned, the cmpetitin is nt just abut passing a test but abut saving lives.拓展句：As far as I’m cncerned, the cmpetitin is nt just abut passing a test but abut saving lives, which left a deep impressin n me.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Last week, I participated in the Traffic Safety Knwledge Cntest held at ur schl, which turned ut t be a bth challenging and enlightening jurney.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]I hpe mre students will jin in future events t raise awareness abut traffic safety.（運(yùn)用了省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句）
新聞報(bào)道是高考應(yīng)用文?？嫉囊环N文體，常常涉及時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，參加者，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及活動(dòng)感想。對(duì)報(bào)道事實(shí)展開(kāi)敘述，既不能過(guò)于詳實(shí)，把所有材料充實(shí)進(jìn)去，進(jìn)行具體的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)，也不能過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)略，使人看不出報(bào)道的事實(shí)，應(yīng)繁簡(jiǎn)適度，努力做到層次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。
1.（2023·浙江1月卷）上周末你參加了校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的“認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1. 活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；2. 收獲與感想。注意：1. 寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us____________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分作文】Getting t Knw the Plants Arund US Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin. The activity began with a lecture by a lcal btanist, wh taught us abut the different characteristics and uses f varius plant species. We then went n a natural walk t bserve and cllect samples f different plants. Thrughut the event, I was struck by the incredible variety f plants that exist in ur wrld and learned abut plants that are used fr medical purpses, as well as thse that prvide fd and shelter fr animals. I als gained a greater appreciatin fr the rle that plants play in maintaining the balance f ur ecsystem. Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)篇報(bào)道，介紹上周末校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的“認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物”活動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?. 詞匯積累參與：participate in 開(kāi)始：begin → start觀察，調(diào)查：bserve → survey震驚：strike → astnish/surprise2. 句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin.拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin, which benefited me a lt.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a lcal btanist, wh taught us abut the different characteristics and uses f varius plant species.（運(yùn)用了wh引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Thrughut the event, I was struck by the incredible variety f plants that exist in ur wrld and learned abut plants that are used fr medical purpses, as well as thse that prvide fd and shelter fr animals.（運(yùn)用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和定語(yǔ)從句）
2.（2021·浙江6月卷）昨天你參觀了學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國(guó)畫(huà)作品展。請(qǐng)給校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇宣傳稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2. 觀展感受；3. 推薦觀展。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分作文】 In rder t enrich students’ after-schl life, an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl, which sparks a grwing lve fr traditinal art. The exhibitin is held n the first flr f the schl library. Mst f the students think highly f this exhibitin，which prvides a platfrm fr them t explre the beauty f China and experience the charm f Chinese art. Thrugh the exhibitin, nt nly can yu admire wnderful pictures, but als enable yu understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better. The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks, every student is welcme t visit.
【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國(guó)畫(huà)作品展的宣傳稿。【詳解】1. 詞匯積累繪畫(huà)：drawing→ painting 激發(fā)：spirit→spark 欣賞：appreciate→admire 歡迎：greet→welcme 2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句： The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks,every student is welcme t visit. 合并句：The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks,during which every student is welcme t visit. 【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】An exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl , which sparks a grwing lve fr traditinal art. 本句是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫?】 Mst f the students think highly f this exhibitin，which prvides a platfrm fr them t explre the beauty f China and experience the charm f Chinese art.本句是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
3.（2020·新高考卷）假定你是李華, 上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 參加人員:2. 跑步路線:從校門(mén)口到南山腳下:3. 活動(dòng)反響。注意:1. 寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右:2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。A Crss-Cuntry Running Race________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分作文】A Crss-Cuntry Running Race Last Sunday witnessed an extrardinary crss-cuntry running race, which nearly drew the attentin f every student and teacher f ur schl. The students selected frm every class tk part in the cmpetitin. The rute measured five kilmeters, frm ur schl gate t the ft f Nanshan Muntain. Every runner tried their best t finish the task, with their classmates alng the way giving them necessary help as well as encuragement. At last, all the runners managed t arrive the finish line, receiving cheers frm all the directins. The activity was highly spken f, because nt nly did it prvide chance fr us t exercise, but als made us mre chesive.
【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生就上周日學(xué)校舉行的5公里越野賽活動(dòng)寫(xiě)一篇新聞報(bào)道?！驹斀狻矿w裁:應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主結(jié)構(gòu):總分總要求:1. 參加人員2. 跑步路線3. 活動(dòng)反響第二步:列提綱(重點(diǎn)詞組)attend/witness/ draw ne’s attentin/ manage t d sth./ measure/ speak highly f/ prvide sth. fr sb.第三步:連詞成句第四步:連句成篇(加入銜接詞或從句)表示并列的連詞:and/but/r/s… 狀語(yǔ)從句連詞:because/ if/ thugh/ althugh…定語(yǔ)從句連詞:which/ that/ when/ where…第五步:修改潤(rùn)色(加入高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ))【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extrardinary crss-cuntry running race, which nearly drew the attentin f every student and teacher f ur schl. 中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；The activity is highly thught f, because nt nly des it prvide chance fr us t exercise, but als makes us mre chesive.中使用了部分倒裝。
4.（2013·江西卷）星光中學(xué)近期舉行了一次登山活動(dòng)。假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，報(bào)道此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1. 時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Muntain）；2. 活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；3. 你對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分作文】 In rder t encurage the students t take utdr exercise, ur schl rganized a muntain-climbing n April 10. Hundreds f us tk part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the ft f Daqing Muntain and set ut fr the tp in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When sme fell behind, thers wuld cme and ffer help. Abut 2 hurs later, we all reached the tp. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with jy. The activity benefited us a lt. Nt nly did it get us clse t nature and give us relaxatin frm heavy schl wrk, it als prmted the friendship amng us. What a wnderful time!
【詳解】試題分析：本文要求寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道。報(bào)道一次登山活動(dòng)。故時(shí)態(tài)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。首先寫(xiě)清寫(xiě)作目的，然后是時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，過(guò)程，包括如出發(fā)，途中，到達(dá)目的地等情況的介紹。最后寫(xiě)活動(dòng)的意義，即對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論(感受)。文章比較容易入題?？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】①高級(jí)句型結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，如感嘆句What a wnderful time及倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)nt als的運(yùn)用。②好的短語(yǔ)：set ut fr出發(fā),動(dòng)身，著手做某事 in high spirits 情緒高昂fall behind落后③非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用句式賦予變化，如：Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with jy.
高考英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)報(bào)道滿分技巧一、寫(xiě)好首段導(dǎo)語(yǔ)部分，言簡(jiǎn)意賅，主題明確報(bào)道的開(kāi)頭部分開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，扼要概括報(bào)道的核心內(nèi)容，無(wú)須自我介紹!無(wú)須寒暄！主要講清what (事件), ?when (時(shí)間), where (地點(diǎn))和 wh (人物), 而在下文則要補(bǔ)充事件的過(guò)程和細(xì)節(jié), 往往包括why(目的或原因) 和 hw(具體過(guò)程)等---5W1H。二、遵循活動(dòng)報(bào)道句式和時(shí)態(tài)要求，條理清晰注意新聞?lì)愵}材的一些常用語(yǔ),如 It is reprted that..., As is reprted..., Accrding t the reprt...; It is estimated that...等。報(bào)道一般使用第三人稱，不出現(xiàn)個(gè)人信息，不出現(xiàn)帶有主觀性觀點(diǎn)的詞或句子，如 I think，I believe，in my pinin，I hpe等?；顒?dòng)報(bào)道通常是報(bào)道過(guò)去所發(fā)生的事件，多用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，口吻客觀。三、運(yùn)用“彩虹屁”總結(jié)活動(dòng)的收獲以及反響結(jié)尾段注意套用一些涉及評(píng)價(jià)或積極反響的句式，提升文章表達(dá)力。同時(shí)，注意借助于倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型或無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)是文章的語(yǔ)言更上一層樓。
一、活動(dòng)報(bào)道首段金句：介紹活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、主題和組織者及意圖。1. Last Sunday ur schl rganized a friendly ftball match in an effrt t enrich students’ schl life.上周日我們學(xué)校組織了一場(chǎng)友誼賽，以豐富學(xué)生的學(xué)校生活。2. Last weekend witnessed a fruit-picking activity, which arused the enthusiasm f all the teachers and students.上周末我們舉辦了一場(chǎng)水果采摘活動(dòng)，激發(fā)了全體師生的積極性。3. Last Friday witnessed the extrardinary Autumn Sprts Day in ur schl, which turned ut t be a great success.上周五我們學(xué)校舉辦了非同尋常的秋季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，取得了巨大的成功。4. Last Sunday, ur schl rganized a 5000 metre crss-cuntry run, which saw participatin frm students and teachers.上周日我校組織了5公里越野賽跑，學(xué)生和老師都參與了。5. Last Sunday witnessed a “Getting t knw the plants arund” activity launched in ur schl btanical garden, which was thught-prvking and entertaining.上周日我們學(xué)校舉辦了“認(rèn)識(shí)我身邊的植物”的活動(dòng)，非常有趣且發(fā)人深省。
二、活動(dòng)報(bào)道次段金句：詳述活動(dòng)開(kāi)展的時(shí)間、流程、靚點(diǎn)或場(chǎng)面。1. The running rute started at the schl gate and extended t the ft f Nanshan Muntain.跑步路線從校門(mén)口開(kāi)始，一直延伸到南山腳下。2. As scheduled, we gathered n the playgrund at 8am and travelled t the destinatin by bus.按照計(jì)劃，我們?cè)缟?點(diǎn)在操場(chǎng)集合，然后乘公共汽車(chē)前往目的地。3. The day was filled with varius exciting activities, ranging frm track and field events t team sprts.這一天充滿了各種令人興奮的活動(dòng)，從田徑賽事到團(tuán)隊(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)。4. The visit began with an intrductin?by the museum guide, wh gave us a glimpse int the rich histry f ur city.參觀開(kāi)始于博物館導(dǎo)游的簡(jiǎn)短介紹，他讓我們一瞥了我們城市豐富的歷史。5. What impressed me mst was?a histrical dcumentary related t the museum's cllectin, fllwed by?a Q&A sessin with experts.但最讓我印象深刻的是一部與博物館藏品相關(guān)的歷史紀(jì)錄片，隨后是與專家的問(wèn)答環(huán)節(jié)。
三、活動(dòng)報(bào)道尾段金句：活動(dòng)的熱烈反響或者積極評(píng)價(jià)。1. The activity turned ut t be a rewarding experience, frm which we benefited a lt.這次活動(dòng)最終證明是一次有收獲的經(jīng)歷，我們從中獲益良多。2. This activity turned ut t be an enrmus success?with students thinking highly f it.?評(píng)價(jià)活動(dòng)并指出具體意義：活動(dòng)非常成功，受到學(xué)生高度評(píng)價(jià)。3. The event ffered a unique pprtunity t immerse urselves in traditinal culture.這次活動(dòng)為我們提供了一個(gè)沉浸于傳統(tǒng)文化的獨(dú)特機(jī)會(huì)。4. This enriching experience deepened ur appreciatin fr the arts and ur cultural rts.這次豐富的體驗(yàn)加深了我們對(duì)藝術(shù)和文化根源的欣賞。5. Nt nly did we?gt clse t the nature,?but als we?grasped hw t?tend t and preserve the plants.我們不僅親近了自然，并且明白了如何照顧保護(hù)植物。
（24-25高二上·浙江寧波·期末）假定你是李華，你校與美國(guó)姊妹學(xué)校班級(jí)共同舉辦了在線的“共上一節(jié)科學(xué)課（Share a Science??Lessn）”活動(dòng)，作為英文?？庉?，請(qǐng)你為該活動(dòng)撰寫(xiě)報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；2.學(xué)生反響。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。A Memrable Event: Share a Science Lessn_______________________________
預(yù)測(cè)1姊妹學(xué)校共上一節(jié)科學(xué)課活動(dòng)報(bào)道
【滿分范文】 A Memrable Event: Share a Science Lessn On December 14, ur schl cllabrated with ur sister schl in the United States t hst an engaging nline event titled “Share a Science Lessn”. Students frm bth schls jined a virtual platfrm t explre fascinating science tgether. The sessin began with students frm bth schls presenting tpics such as renewable energy, space explratin, and the science behind everyday technlgies. This was fllwed by interactive experiments, including building simple circuits and explring chemical reactins. Students als participated in grup discussins, exchanging ideas and asking thught-prvking questins, which made the sessin lively and insightful. The students expressed their appreciatin fr this unique learning experience, thanking the teachers and rganizers fr prviding such an enriching platfrm. Such internatinal exchanges inspire curisity and fster friendships, making educatin truly glbal.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于新聞報(bào)道。學(xué)校與美國(guó)姊妹學(xué)校班級(jí)共同舉辦了在線的“共上一節(jié)科學(xué)課”活動(dòng)，要求考生按照要求為該活動(dòng)撰寫(xiě)報(bào)道?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累合作：cllabrate → cperate迷人的：fascinating → enchanting參加：participate in → take part in表達(dá)：express → cnvey2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：On December 14, ur schl cllabrated with ur sister schl in the United States t hst an engaging nline event titled “Share a Science Lessn”.拓展句：On December 14, ur schl cllabrated with ur sister schl in the United States t hst an engaging nline event, whse title is “Share a Science Lessn”.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Students als participated in grup discussins, exchanging ideas and asking thught-prvking questins, which made the sessin lively and insightful.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Such internatinal exchanges inspire curisity and fster friendships, making educatin truly glbal.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞making作狀語(yǔ)）
（2025·廣西·一模）假定你是李華，最近你校為交換生成立的國(guó)畫(huà)班反響較好。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇相關(guān)報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1. 辦班目的；2. 教學(xué)內(nèi)容；3. 活動(dòng)意義。注意：1. 寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。A Chinese Painting Class fr Exchange Students________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
預(yù)測(cè)2報(bào)道為交換生成立的國(guó)畫(huà)班
【滿分范文】A Chinese Painting Class fr Exchange Students Recently, ur schl has established a Chinese painting class specifically fr exchange students. The aim f this class is t intrduce internatinal students t the rich cultural heritage f Chinese art and t fster crss cultural exchange. The curriculum includes varius traditinal Chinese painting techniques such as ink wash painting and the use f traditinal brushes and rice paper. Exchange students will learn t paint classic subjects like landscapes and bamb, gaining hands-n experience in this ancient art frm. This initiative is significant as it nt nly prvides exchange students with a unique cultural experience but als prmtes mutual appreciatin. By participating in this class, they can develp a deeper understanding f Chinese culture and build lasting friendships with their peers.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校為交換生成立的國(guó)畫(huà)班反響較好，要求考生按照要求為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇相關(guān)報(bào)道?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累最近：recently → lately建立：establish → set up目的：aim → gal各種各樣的：varius → a variety f2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Recently, ur schl has established a Chinese painting class specifically fr exchange students.拓展句：Recently, ur schl has established a Chinese painting class, which is specifically fr exchange students.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Exchange students will learn t paint classic subjects like landscapes and bamb, gaining hands-n experience in this ancient art frm.（運(yùn)用了不定式t paint作賓語(yǔ)、現(xiàn)在分詞gaining作狀語(yǔ)）【高分句型2】This initiative is significant as it nt nly prvides exchange students with a unique cultural experience but als prmtes mutual appreciatin.（運(yùn)用了nt nly... but als...固定句型、as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
3. （24-25高三上·廣東·階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華, 剛剛參加完一個(gè)夏令營(yíng)從紐約回來(lái)。在紐約期間，你住宿在Smith先生家，得到了他很多的幫助。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)一封郵件表達(dá)謝意。內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示感謝；(2)回顧Smith先生對(duì)你的幫助與照顧；(3)你打算如何感謝他。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Dear Mr. Smith,____________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
預(yù)測(cè)3 給寄宿家庭寫(xiě)信表示感謝
【滿分范文】Dear Mr. Smith, I hpe this message finds yu well. I am writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur kind hspitality during my stay in New Yrk. Yur warm welcme and thughtful care made my experience truly unfrgettable. I deeply appreciate all the guidance yu prvided, especially in helping me navigate the city and intrducing me t lcal culture. Yur supprt was invaluable t me, making my trip bth enjyable and enlightening. In return fr yur genersity, I wuld lve t send yu sme traditinal gifts frm my hmetwn. I hpe we can keep in tuch, and I lk frward t welcming yu here smeday. Thank yu nce again fr everything. Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生感謝Smith先生在紐約期間的幫助與照顧，并表達(dá)回報(bào)的意愿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累表達(dá)：express→cnvey感謝：gratitude→appreciatin難忘的：unfrgettable→memrable珍貴的：invaluable→precius2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yur supprt was invaluable t me, making my trip bth enjyable and enlightening.拓展句：Yur supprt, which was invaluable t me, made my trip bth enjyable and enlightening.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I deeply appreciate all the guidance yu prvided, especially in helping me navigate the city and intrducing me t lcal culture.（運(yùn)用了省略關(guān)系代詞that的定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞guidance）【高分句型2】I hpe we can keep in tuch, and I lk frward t welcming yu here smeday.（運(yùn)用了省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句作hpe的賓語(yǔ)）
應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作10個(gè)場(chǎng)景20個(gè)美句
一、學(xué)校生活1. The mre?a student is encuraged, the harder?he will wrk at his lessns.學(xué)生被鼓勵(lì)得越多，他學(xué)習(xí)就會(huì)越努力。2. There are?a variety f?after-class activities in ur schl, which benefit us a lt.我們學(xué)校有豐富多彩的課外活動(dòng)，這些活動(dòng)對(duì)我們很有益。
二、語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)1. My hard wrk pays ff, and I?am?quite?prud f?what I have achieved/the prgress I have made.我的努力沒(méi)有白費(fèi)，我為自己所取得的進(jìn)步感到非常驕傲。2. We?are suppsed t learn?English well because?a gd cmmand?f English means mre pprtunities in the future.我們理應(yīng)學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，因?yàn)榫ㄓ⒄Z(yǔ)意味著將來(lái)有更多的機(jī)會(huì)。? ? ? ?
三、興趣與愛(ài)好1. Only by reading widely can we?gain mre knwledge and braden ur hrizns.只有博覽群書(shū)，我們才能增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，開(kāi)闊視野。2. I jined the basketball team, where I nt nly?learn the imprtance f teamwrk?but als?strengthen my bdy, which is f great benefit?t my mental?as well as?physical health.我加入了籃球隊(duì)，在那里我不但認(rèn)識(shí)到團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性，還增強(qiáng)了體質(zhì)，這對(duì)我的身心健康大有益處。
四、工作與職業(yè)1. The prfessr, ccupied with his wrk, hardly had time t stay with his family.那位教授忙于工作，幾乎沒(méi)有時(shí)間和家人待在一起。2. Besides, my previus vlunteering experience will?qualify?me fr the psitin.此外，我以前做志愿者的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)使我能夠勝任這個(gè)職務(wù)。
五、飲食與健康1. The dctr?advised that we?(shuld)?have?a balanced diet and get int the gd habit f getting up early.醫(yī)生建議我們要均衡飲食并養(yǎng)成早起的好習(xí)慣。2. With the imprvement f the living standards, mre and mre peple, especially children, are?suffering frm?besity.隨著生活水平的提高，越來(lái)越多的人，尤其是孩子，正在飽受肥胖之苦。
六、個(gè)人情感1. S pr was his family that?he had t drp ut at the age f 12.他的家庭如此貧困以至于他十二歲時(shí)就不得不輟學(xué)。2. Althugh?he has?wn cuntless hnrs，he never?shws any signs f pride.盡管獲得了無(wú)數(shù)的榮譽(yù)，他卻從未有過(guò)任何驕傲的跡象。
七、情感與態(tài)度1. It ges withut saying that?a smile can help us?get thrugh?difficult situatins and find friends in a wrld full f strangers.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，微笑能夠幫助我們渡過(guò)難關(guān)，幫助我們?cè)谝粋€(gè)充滿陌生人的世界里找到朋友。2. This experience has als taught me that?as lng as?I never?give up?and keep trying, I can succeed.這次經(jīng)歷也讓我學(xué)到：只要我永不放棄并努力嘗試，我就會(huì)成功。
八、計(jì)劃與愿望1. Having paid a visit t the place, I will g smewhere else this year t spend my summer vacatin.因?yàn)槲覅⒂^過(guò)這個(gè)地方，所以今年我會(huì)去其他地方過(guò)暑假。2. Our schl will make an rganized trip t the lcal muntains, encuraging the students t get clse t nature.我們學(xué)校將組織一次當(dāng)?shù)氐牡巧铰糜?，鼓?lì)學(xué)生親近大自然。
九、人際關(guān)系1. Frm this experience I have learned?it is imprtant t wrk tgether with thers.結(jié)果，從這次經(jīng)歷中我學(xué)到了與他人合作的重要性。2. In a wrd, a friend in need is a friend indeed.May all f us treasure friendship.總之，患難見(jiàn)真情。愿我們所有人都珍視友誼。
十、節(jié)假日活動(dòng)1. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditinal festival f China, which is actually a day fr family reunin.中秋節(jié)是中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，實(shí)際上是家人團(tuán)聚的日子。2. It is said that the Tmb-Sweeping Day, which?falls n?April 5th, has a histry f?several thusand years.4月5日是清明節(jié)，據(jù)說(shuō)它有幾千年的歷史。

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