Writing 1
【2024全國甲卷】52. 英語課要求做課堂展示, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給圖片, 以Develpment f Transprt in China為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右;
2. 題目和首句已為你寫好。
Develpment f Transprt in China
Frm the vehicle f hrses t tday's cnvenient transprt, Chinese transprt has an enrmus develpment.
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【答案】Develpment f Transprt in China
Frm the vehicle f hrses t tday’s cnvenient transprt, Chinese transprt has seen enrmus develpment. Chinese transprt has undergne remarkable transfrmatins, giving the Chinese peple access t different ways f travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbl f urban mbility, ffering an affrdable and green alternative fr shrt trips. Secndly, the intrductin f high- speed trains has dramatically shrtened travel times, making intercity travel faster and mre cmfrtable. Lastly, the prliferatin f new energy vehicles underscres China’s dedicatin t envirnmental sustainability, reducing reliance n fssil fuels. These develpments illustrate China’s jurney twards a mdern and efficient transprtatin netwrk that balances cnvenience with envirnmental respnsibility.
In shrt, China’s transprt system is embracing innvatin and ec-friendliness.
【解析】
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)所給圖片，以Develpment f Transprt in China為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
【詳解】1.詞匯激活
提供：ffer→prvide
極大地：dramatically→tremendusly
減少：reduce→decrease
總之：in shrt→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbl f urban mbility, ffering an affrdable and green alternative fr shrt trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which ffer an affrdable and green alternative fr shrt trips have emerged as a symbl f urban mbility.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transprt has undergne remarkable transfrmatins, giving the Chinese peple access t different ways f travelling.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)
【高分句型2】These develpments illustrate China’s jurney twards a mdern and efficient transprtatin netwrk that balances cnvenience with envirnmental respnsibility.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
Writing 2
【新課標(biāo)Ⅰ&ⅠⅠ卷】假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing t share with yu an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing t share with yu an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked t draw r paint smething that impressed us mst. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided t create a waterclr painting f the small bridge ver the park’s pnd, surrunded by blming flwers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrunded by nature nt nly sparked my creativity but als ffered a much-needed break frm the usual hustle and bustle f schl life. I felt a deep sense f peace as I painted.
In a wrd, It was nt just an art class; it was a mment f cnnectin with nature that I truly cherished.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生給Chris寫一封信, 分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
決定：decide→determine
整個(gè)的：entire→whle
提供：ffer→prvide
總之：in a wrd→in shrt
2. 句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided t create a waterclr painting f the small bridge ver the park’s pnd, surrunded by blming flwers.
拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided t create a waterclr painting f the small bridge ver the park’s pnd, which was surrunded by blming flwers.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked t draw r paint smething that impressed us mst. (that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense f peace as I painted.(as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)
Writing 3
Writing 4
2024年名校模擬題
Writing 1
（2024·福建泉州·二模）你校英文報(bào)正在開展以smile為題的征文比賽。請(qǐng)你以“The pwer f smile”問題，結(jié)合自己經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.自身經(jīng)歷；2.你的感悟。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。
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【答案】A pssible versin
The Pwer f Smile
There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can d wnders, lighting up smene in the darkness and even healing the sul.
Overwhelmed by the stress frm my pr academic perfrmance, I was n the verge f breaking dwn. Nticing my frustratin, Shelly, my best friend came t ffer a few wrds f cmfrt but I was in such lw spirits that I blurted ut sme sharp wrds and she ran away weeping. Regrettably, I was t ashamed t aplgize and I culdn’t feel wrse, which threw me int a wrld f darkness. The mment I saw her appraching the next day, I lwered my head immediately, trying t avid her deliberately. Hwever, she stpped me and gave me a hug. When I lked up, I met a smiling face, as gentle as a summer breeze. At that mment, all my anxiety and depressin melted away.
When wrds fail, smile speaks.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“The pwer f smile”問題，結(jié)合自己經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文投稿。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
壓力：stress→pressure
立刻：immediately→instantly
注意到：ntice→spt
擁抱：hug→embrace
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Overwhelmed by the stress frm my pr academic perfrmance, I was n the verge f breaking dwn.
拓展句：Since I was verwhelmed by the stress frm my pr academic perfrmance, I was n the verge f breaking dwn.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]
There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can d wnders, lighting up smene in the darkness and even healing the sul.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)定語從句）
[高分句型2]
Nticing my frustratin, Shelly, my best friend came t ffer a few wrds f cmfrt but I was in such lw spirits that I blurted ut sme sharp wrds and she ran away weeping.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，such…that…引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）
Writing 2
（2024·四川成都·模擬預(yù)測）你校即將舉行一場以“When the buying stps, the killing can, t”為主題的英語演講比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇關(guān)于野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)的演講稿參賽。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear teachers, bys and girls,
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Thank yu!
【答案】
Dear teachers, bys and girls,
I’m privileged t stand here t deliver my speech.
As we all knw, ur planet is ur beautiful hme, where wildlife and humans shuld have lived tgether harmniusly. Hwever, mre and mre wildlife is faced with extinctin, whse habitats are becming smaller as new rads and railways were built. Even wrse, t make prfit, hunters are killing wildlife. Many animals are being butchered t meet buyers’ need, causing their ppulatin t drp increasingly.
It’s high time that we shuld change ur way f life and stp hunting wildlife. If everyne byctts buying any prducts made frm wildlife, the killing can stp, t. Only when we learn t exist in harmny with nature can we stp being a threat t ur planet.
Thank yu!
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的演講稿參加英語演講比賽。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
榮幸的：privileged→hnured
建立：build→set up
滿足：meet→satisfy
導(dǎo)致：cause→lead t
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Many animals are being butchered t meet buyers’ need, causing their ppulatin t drp increasingly.
拓展句：Many animals are being butchered t meet buyers’ need, which causes their ppulatin t drp increasingly.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】As we all knw, ur planet is ur beautiful hme, where wildlife and humans shuld have lived tgether harmniusly. (運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
【高分句型2】Hwever, mre and mre wildlife is faced with extinctin, whse habitats are becming smaller as new rads and railways were built. (運(yùn)用了whse引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句，as引導(dǎo)的狀語從句)
Writing 3
（2024·寧夏銀川·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，最近參加了學(xué)校舉辦的“新時(shí)代好少年”(“Mdel Students in New Era”)主題網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻制作大賽活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一篇短文介紹該活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：
1.活動(dòng)設(shè)置目的；
2.你的參與情況和感受。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：新時(shí)代好少年 Mdel Students in New Era
An Unfrgettable Vide–clip Stry
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【答案】
An Unfrgettable Vide–clip Stry
Aimed at inspiring students t fster a sense f scial respnsibility, the vide prductin cmpetitin themed “Mdel Students in New Era”, was held by ur schl.
Cllabrating with a team f like-minded peers, I brainstrmed ideas that encapsulated the spirit f a “Mdel Student”. My vide centered arund a day in the life f a student wh balanced academic pursuits with envirnmental activism, demnstrating hw small acts culd create significant impact. Frm scripting t filming and editing, every step was a learning experience that hned my technical abilities and fstered teamwrk.
Nt nly did I feel challenging in this cmpetitin, but als I gained a lt.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一篇短文，介紹學(xué)校最近舉辦的“新時(shí)代好少年”(“Mdel Students in New Era”)主題網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻制作大賽活動(dòng)。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
激勵(lì)：inspire→mtivate
競賽：cmpetitin→cntest
合作：cllabrate→cperate
獲得：gain→btain
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Aimed at inspiring students t fster a sense f scial respnsibility, the vide prductin cmpetitin themed “Mdel Students in New Era”, was held by ur schl.
拓展句：Aimed at inspiring students t fster a sense f scial respnsibility, the vide prductin cmpetitin, whse theme is “Mdel Students in New Era”, was held by ur schl.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Nt nly did I feel challenging in this cmpetitin, but als I gained a lt.(運(yùn)用了nt nly放句首的部分倒裝句)
【高分句型2】My vide centered arund a day in the life f a student wh balanced academic pursuits with envirnmental activism, demnstrating hw small acts culd create significant impact.(運(yùn)用了wh引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句，hw引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)
Writing 4
（2024·四川成都·模擬預(yù)測）自 1996 年起，我國將每年的 6 月 6 日設(shè)為“全國愛眼日”。你校將以六月六日全國愛眼日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 簡述當(dāng)下青少年的視力狀況；
2. 簡析上述狀況背后的原因；
3. 介紹護(hù)眼小妙招。
注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 題目已為你寫好。
Prtect Our Eyes
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【答案】
Prtect Our Eyes
Nwadays, it is becming increasingly cmmn that mre and mre students wear glasses due t shrt sightedness.
With the develpment f technlgy, students are prvided with mre electrnic devices. Firstly, students spend mre time than ever n electrnic devices fr entertainment, including vide games and scial media. Secndly, nline curses have becme mre ppular and many students spend much time in frnt f the screen. As a result, there has been a sharp visual impairment in their eyes.
S prtecting ur eyes is very imprtant. T begin with, we shuld nt use eyes fr a lng time. Secndly, we shuld keep a distance f ne ft when reading bks. Thirdly, insist ding health care eyes very day. Finally, The situatin culd be imprved if students manage their time n the electrnic devices and take regular breaks while using them.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校將以六月六日全國愛眼日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，要求考生按照要求寫一篇短文投稿。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
由于：due t→ because f
發(fā)展，進(jìn)步：develpment→ advancement
娛樂：entertainment→ recreatin
急劇的：sharp→ steep
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Firstly, students spend mre time than ever n electrnic devices fr entertainment, including vide games and scial media.
拓展句：Firstly, students spend mre time than ever n electrnic devices fr entertainment, which include vide games and scial media.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Nwadays, it is becming increasingly cmmn that mre and mre students wear glasses due t shrt sightedness.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語、that引導(dǎo)的主語從句）
【高分句型2】Secndly, we shuld keep a distance f ne ft when reading bks.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句的省略）
Writing 5
（2024·陜西榆林·一模）假如你是李華，是校英文報(bào)記者，上周五，你校開展了以“My Favurite Chinese Histry Stries”為主題的英語演講比賽，請(qǐng)你用英語寫一則活動(dòng)報(bào)道。內(nèi)容包括：
1.活動(dòng)目的；
2.活動(dòng)過程；
3.你的感想。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【答案】參考范文：
T better integrate Chinese cultural elements int English learning, ur schl launched an English speech cntest themed “My favurite Chinese Histry Stries” in the auditrium at 9:00 a. m. last Friday.
The activity cnsisted f three parts. First, every cntestant delivered a speech in regard t a Chinese stry and then was asked t make an imprmptu speech accrding t the questins given by the judges, which was well received by the audience. The last part was evaluating and presenting the trphies t the award winners.
This activity was a huge success, which encuraged us t shulder ur respnsibilities t spread ur splendid Chinese culture t the wrld.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作。上周五，你校開展了以“My Favurite Chinese Histry Stries”為主題的英語演講比賽，要求考生用英語寫一則活動(dòng)報(bào)道。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
比賽：cntest→cmpetitin
活動(dòng)：activity→event
接受：receive→accept
鼓勵(lì)：encurage→inspire
2. 句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：T better integrate Chinese cultural elements int English learning, ur schl launched an English speech cntest themed “My favurite Chinese Histry Stries” in the auditrium at 9:00 a. m. last Friday.
拓展句：T better integrate Chinese cultural elements int English learning, ur schl launched an English speech cntest that was themed “My favurite Chinese Histry Stries” and held in the auditrium at 9:00 a.m. last Friday.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]First, every cntestant delivered a speech in regard t a Chinese stry and then was asked t make an imprmptu speech accrding t the questins given by the judges, which was well received by the audience.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2]This activity was a huge success, which encuraged us t shulder ur respnsibilities t spread ur splendid Chinese culture t the wrld.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
Writing 6
（2024·四川·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，你校即將舉行一場以“環(huán)境保護(hù)”為主題的英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你代表班級(jí)寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 闡述環(huán)境保護(hù)的重要性；
2. 分享班級(jí)在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的做法和成果；
3. 呼吁全校師生參與環(huán)境保護(hù)行動(dòng)。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear teachers, bys and girls,
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Thank yu!
【答案】Dear teachers, bys and girls,
Tday, I am talking abut a matter f utmst urgency—envirnmental cnservatin. The health f ur planet is vital fr ur survival. Pllutin, defrestatin, and wasteful habits threaten the delicate balance f nature. We must act nw t preserve ur envirnment fr future generatins.
Our class has taken significant steps twards this gal. We’ve initiated a recycling prgram, reduced plastic use, and rganized tree-planting activities. These effrts have led t a nticeable decline in waste and an increase in greenery arund ur schl.
Small actins such as using ec-friendly prducts can make a huge difference. Let’s cme tgether and cntribute t the prtectin f ur Earth.
Thank yu!
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇演講稿，參加以“環(huán)境保護(hù)”為主題的英語演講比賽。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
目標(biāo)：gal→target
活動(dòng)：activity→event
顯然的：nticeable→apparent
重要的：significant→vital
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：We must act nw t preserve ur envirnment fr future generatins.
拓展句：If we want t preserve ur envirnment fr future generatins, we must act nw.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Let’s cme tgether and cntribute t the prtectin f ur Earth. (運(yùn)用了肯定祈使句)
[高分句型2] Small actins such as using ec-friendly prducts can make a huge difference. (運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語)
Writing 7
（2024·寧夏銀川·三模）你校英文報(bào)正面向全校學(xué)生征集慶祝 “世界環(huán)境日”的活動(dòng)方案。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 你推薦的活動(dòng)；
2. 你的理由。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；
2. 短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。
Wrld Envirnment Day Activities
Wrld Envirnment Day is just arund the crner.
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【答案】Wrld Envirnment Day Activities
Wrld Envirnment Day is just arund the crner. I’d like t recmmend tw activities t celebrate the day.
Firstly, an Envirnment Day display bard Cmpetitin shuld be rganized. On the display bards envirnmental prtectin knwledge will be intrduced and varius ways t cnserve ur planet can be ffered. This cmpetitin will be a glden pprtunity t raise students’ awareness f envirnmental issues and fster their prblem-slving skills. Secndly, we’d better build a garden n ur campus where students can grw vegetables and get invlved in the whle prcess f plant grwth, frm seed t harvest. Thrugh it, students will gain hands-n experience, learn t respect thers’ labr and reduce fd waste.
All in all, bth activities are practicable and fun, which undubtedly will appeal t students and help enhance their envirnmental awareness
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。考生所在校英文報(bào)正面向全校學(xué)生征集慶祝 “世界環(huán)境日”的活動(dòng)方案。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
慶祝：celebrate→bserve
提供：ffer→prvide
機(jī)會(huì)：pprtunity→chance
提高：enhance→prmte
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Wrld Envirnment Day is just arund the crner. I’d like t recmmend tw activities t celebrate the day.
拓展句：Wrld Envirnment Day is just arund the crner, s I’d like t recmmend tw activities t celebrate the day.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】All in all, bth activities are practicable and fun, which undubtedly will appeal t students and help enhance their envirnmental awareness.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
【高分句型2】Secndly, we’d better build a garden n ur campus where students can grw vegetables and get invlved in the whle prcess f plant grwth, frm seed t harvest.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
Writing 8
（2024·青海海南·二模）假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)正在以“My Dream Reading Festival”為主題組織創(chuàng)意征集活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你向校英文報(bào)投稿分享你的獨(dú)特創(chuàng)意，內(nèi)容包括：
1.創(chuàng)意活動(dòng)具體的形式和做法;
2.創(chuàng)意活動(dòng)的目的。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【答案】Dear Editr,
I’m excited t share my creative idea fr “My Dream Reading Festival”. It’s t get peple fired up abut bks and share their lve fr reading. Here are my prpsals.
Themed Bk Fair: We’ll set up a fair with sectins like “Histrical Fictin” and “Fantasy Realms”, where students can dive int different literary wrlds.
Authr’s Wrkshp: Lcal authrs can hld sessins n writing and strytelling, inspiring students t create their wn stries.
Strytelling Circle: A platfrm fr students t tell stries, fstering creativity and cmmunicatin.
This apprach can make reading mre appealing and interactive fr everyne. Lking frward t hearing frm yu and making this dream a reality!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向校英文報(bào)投稿分享以“My Dream Reading Festival”為主題的創(chuàng)意。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
激動(dòng)：excited→thrilled
建議：prpsal→advice
建立：set up→establish
舉行：hld→hst
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Lcal authrs can hld sessins n writing and strytelling, inspiring students t create their wn stries.
拓展句：Lcal authrs can hld sessins n writing and strytelling, which can inspire students t create their wn stries.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] We’ll set up a fair with sectins like “Histrical Fictin” and “Fantasy Realms”, where students can dive int different literary wrlds. (運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2] A platfrm fr students t tell stries, fstering creativity and cmmunicatin. (運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)
Writing 9
（2024·北京大興·模擬預(yù)測）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim給你發(fā)郵件尋問你打算如何渡過即將到來的暑假。請(qǐng)用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：
1.假期安排；
2.說明其理由。
注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. After the cllege entrance examinatin, I plan t have a clrful summer vacatin.
First, I’ll travel t sme beautiful places t relax and enjy the beautiful scenery. This can help me relieve the stress frm the exam. Als, I want t learn a new skill which can develp my hbbies, such as playing a musical instrument r cking. I think it’s a gd way t enrich my life. Finally, I’ll read sme interesting bks t expand my knwledge.
I believe this summer vacatin will be very fulfilling and enjyable.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國好友Jim回復(fù)一封郵件，告知他打算如何渡過即將到來的暑假。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
高興的：glad→pleased
首先：first→abve all
排遣：relieve→release
愉快的：enjyable→cheerful
2.句式拓展
合并簡單句
原句：First, I’ll travel t sme beautiful places t relax and enjy the beautiful scenery. This can help me relieve the stress frm the exam.
拓展句：First, I’ll travel t sme beautiful places t relax and enjy the beautiful scenery, which can help me relieve the stress frm the exam.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Als, I want t learn a new skill which can develp my hbbies, such as playing a musical instrument r cking. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
[高分句型2] I believe this summer vacatin will be very fulfilling and enjyable. (運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語從句)
Writing 10
（2024·陜西安康·模擬預(yù)測）假如是李華，你校外教Mr. Smith正在為即將舉行的 “心理健康周（Mental Health Week）”活動(dòng)征集方案，你對(duì)此很感興趣，請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 活動(dòng)的重要性；
2. 你的建議。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing t express my interest in the upcming “Mental Health Week” event that yu are rganizing. I believe that this event is f great imprtance as it raises awareness abut mental health issues and prvides a platfrm fr students t learn abut ways t maintain their mental well-being.
I wuld like t suggest that we culd rganize wrkshps and seminars n tpics such as stress management, mindfulness, and self-care. Additinally, we culd invite mental health prfessinals t give talks and prvide resurces fr students wh may need further supprt. I als think it wuld be beneficial t have interactive activities such as yga r meditatin sessins t prmte relaxatin and stress relief.
I am lking frward t the event and I am mre than willing t assist in any way I can. Thank yu fr yur cnsideratin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是一封建議信，要求考生向外教闡述對(duì)“心理健康周”活動(dòng)的看法及建議。
【詳解】詞匯積累
表達(dá)：express → cnvey
重要性：imprtance → significance
組織：rganize → arrange
有益的：beneficial→ prfitable
句式拓展
同義句轉(zhuǎn)換
原句：I wuld like t suggest that we culd rganize wrkshps and seminars n tpics such as stress management, mindfulness, and self-care.
拓展句：I prpse that we arrange wrkshps and seminars fcusing n pertinent tpics encmpassing stress management, mindfulness cultivatin, and the imprtance f persnal well-being.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型 1】I am writing t express my interest in the upcming “Mental Health Week” event that yu are rganizing.（使用了關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句，先行詞為event）
【高分句型 2】I believe that this event is f great imprtance as it raises awareness abut mental health issues.（使用了“be f+抽象名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)、as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句、that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

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