專題25 讀后續(xù)寫微技巧3(精煉語言確保首尾照應(yīng))-【精講精練】2025年高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)用文寫作與讀后續(xù)寫-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

【真題再現(xiàn)】 (2023·浙江1月高考)　　I was invited t a ckut n an ld friend’s farm in western Washingtn.I parked my car utside the farm and walked past a milking huse which had apparently nt been used in many years.A nise at a windw caught my attentin, s I entered it.It was a hummingbird (蜂鳥), desperately trying t escape.She was cvered in spider-webs (蛛網(wǎng)) and was barely able t mve her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
　　With the bird in my cupped hand, I lked arund t see hw she had gtten in.The brken windw glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece f clth int the hle and tk her utside, clsing the dr securely behind me.　　When I pened my hand, the bird did nt fly away; she sat lking at me with her bright eyes.I remved the sticky spider-webs that cvered her head and wings.Still, she made n attempt t fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?　　As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path tward my car where I kept a water bttle, she began t mve.I stpped, and she sn tk wing but did nt immediately fly away.
　　Hvering (懸停), she apprached within six inches f my face.Fr a very lng mment, this tiny creature lked int my eyes, turning her head frm side t side.Then she flew quickly ut f sight.　　During the ckut, I tld my hsts abut the hummingbird incident.They prmised t fix the windw.As I was departing, my friends walked me t my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew t the center f ur grup and began hvering.She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me.She again lked directly int my eyes, then let ut a squeaking call and was gne.Fr a mment, all were speechless.Then smene said, “She must have cme t say gdbye.”
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150個(gè)左右。　　A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解題策略】第一步　根據(jù)續(xù)寫第一段第一句推出首段續(xù)寫“三要點(diǎn)”。
第二步　根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段第一句推出第二段續(xù)寫“兩要點(diǎn)”。
第三步　根據(jù)“情感線”和“情節(jié)線”列出寫作關(guān)鍵句。
第四步　謀篇成文,文字流暢
【技巧分析】一、開頭6大設(shè)計(jì)技巧

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