
【真題再現(xiàn)】 (2023·新高考Ⅰ卷) When I was in middle schl, my scial studies teacher asked me t enter a writing cntest.I said n withut thinking.I did nt lve writing.My family came frm Brazil, s English was nly my secnd language.Writing was s difficult and painful fr me that my teacher had allwed me t present my paper n the sinking f the Titanic by acting ut a play where I played all the parts.N ne laughed harder than he did.
S, why did he suddenly frce me t d smething at which I was sure t fail? His reply:“Because I lve yur stries.If yu’re willing t apply yurself,I think yu have a gd sht at this.” Encuraged by his wrds, I agreed t give it a try. I chse Paul Revere’s hrse as my subject.Paul Revere was a silversmith(銀匠)in Bstn wh rde a hrse at night n April 18, 1775 t Lexingtn t warn peple that British sldiers were cming.My stry wuld cme straight frm the hrse’s muth.Nt a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely t be anyne else’s chice.
What did the hrse think, as he sped thrugh the night? Did he get tired? Have dubts? Did he want t quit? I sympathized immediately.I gt tired.I had dubts.I wanted t quit.But, like Revere’s hrse, I kept ging.I wrked hard.I checked my spelling.I asked my lder sister t crrect my grammar.I checked ut a half-dzen bks n Paul Revere frm the library.I even read a few f them. When I handed in the essay t my teacher, he read it, laughed ut lud, and said, “Great. Nw, write it again.” I wrte it again, and again and again.When I finally finished it, the thught f winning had given way t the enjyment f writing.If I didn’t win, I wuldn’t care.
注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答?! few weeks later, when I almst frgt the cntest, there came the news. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I went t my teacher’s ffice after the award presentatin. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解題策略】第一步 瀏覽前文,弄清關(guān)鍵要素并歸納主旨
第二步 梳理四條線索,預(yù)測續(xù)寫內(nèi)容
第三步 借助開頭,確定續(xù)寫段落梗概。
第四步 豐富語言,前呼后應(yīng)
【技巧分析】一、5W和1H把握記敘文基本要素?! ∽x后續(xù)寫中所提供的前文通常是一篇記敘文的一部分, 閱讀時為了獲取對續(xù)寫有用的關(guān)鍵信息,要特別關(guān)注5W和1H,其具體情況見下表。
二、厘清框架探索故事模式 記敘文通常采用順敘、倒敘和插敘等手段組織故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展,無論采用哪種形式都會體現(xiàn)其發(fā)展的框架,這個框架有助于預(yù)測續(xù)寫的走向,因此十分重要。其具體模式如下表:
三、探尋“四條主線”,深挖關(guān)鍵信息 記敘文通常遵循時間、空間、情感和情節(jié)變化來組織語言和行文,所以這些前文信息和要求續(xù)寫的部分存在著密切的聯(lián)系,因此在解題時必須關(guān)注前文中的這些關(guān)鍵線索。其詳情如下表:
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