目錄:
精選名校最新模擬試題
書信寫作話題分類背誦模板
書信寫作話題分類寫作步驟
書信寫作話題分類高分佳句
1.(2022年全國(guó)·高三專題練習(xí))
假如你是李華, 現(xiàn)因公司貨品質(zhì)量問(wèn)題給Jhnsn寫一封道歉信。要點(diǎn)如下:
1.表示要查漏補(bǔ)缺, 改進(jìn)提高;
2.提出補(bǔ)救辦法;
3.表明決心和意愿。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫;
3.開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Jhnsn,
First f all, thank yu fr infrming us f the quality issue. I sincerely aplgize t yu fr ur failure t prvide yu with satisfactry prducts.
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Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Jhnsn,
First f all, thank yu fr infrming us f the quality issue. I sincerely aplgize t yu fr ur failure t prvide yu with satisfactry prducts.
We'll study the prblem, find ut the cause f it, and try t avid the same bad thing. We assure yu that we will prvide yu with a free replacement f the ne yu bught. Mr. Lee f ur Business Department will cntact yu as sn as pssible.
We hpe yu understand that this is just an accidental event, and we will try t cntinually imprve ur prduct quality. We cherish the establishment f a lasting friendship with yu. At the same time, we will als cntinue t wrk hard t prvide high-quality and affrdable prducts and better after-sales service fr yu.
I sincerely aplgize again fr the truble this has caused yu.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求寫一封道歉信,就公司貨品質(zhì)量問(wèn)題給Jhnsn道歉。
【詳解】1.道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意,請(qǐng)求對(duì)方原諒自己的過(guò)失。寫道歉信時(shí)要明確不是在找借口為自己辯護(hù),而是承認(rèn)自己的過(guò)錯(cuò)并提出彌補(bǔ)過(guò)錯(cuò)的具體建議和方法。此類信件的關(guān)鍵是語(yǔ)言要誠(chéng)摯,解釋的理由要真實(shí)。
2.在寫作時(shí)可以根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)按照三段式的模式謀篇布局:
首段:表明自己做錯(cuò)了事,表示歉意;主體段落:提出作為彌補(bǔ)的可行措施,措施要具體、合理;結(jié)尾段:再次表明承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤的態(tài)度,請(qǐng)求收信人的諒解。
第一步:詞匯積累
查明,確信:assure
珍惜:cherish
意外的:accidental
建立:establishment
買的起:affrdable
3.文章的結(jié)尾再次因給對(duì)方造成的不便而道歉,顯得禮貌且態(tài)度誠(chéng)懇。
第二步:句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:we will prvide yu with a free replacement f the ne yu bught.
拓展句:We assure yu that we will prvide yu with a free replacement f the ne yu bught.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
At the same time, we will als cntinue t wrk hard t prvide high-quality and affrdable prducts and better after-sales service fr yu.(連接詞at the same time的使用使上下文銜接自然,后文使用并列句并運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯如affrdable, after-sales等。)
[高分句型2]
I sincerely aplgize again fr the truble this has caused yu.句子副詞sincerely的運(yùn)用使得句子流暢自然,this has caused yu為省略關(guān)系代詞的定語(yǔ)從句。
2.(2023年貴州統(tǒng)考一模)
假如你是李華,你和你的外籍好友Andrew約好了本周末去圖書館,但是你因?yàn)榕R時(shí)要參加學(xué)校組織的“垃圾分類,全民行動(dòng)”志愿活動(dòng)而不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一份道歉信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):
1.表達(dá)歉意;2.簡(jiǎn)要介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和意義;3.另約時(shí)間。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I have signed up fr a vluntary activity themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned. I feel terribly srry and want t express my deepest aplgy.
As yu knw, we students shuld spare n effrts in implementing the plicy f garbage classificatin. S, I seized this pprtunity withut hesitatin. On that day, we will g t cmmunities t publicize the significance as well as methds f trash srting and direct the residents t accurately distinguish different kinds f rubbish, which will take a whle day. Cnsidering that, I’m afraid I can’t keep my wrd. Shall we put it ff till next Sunday?
I am srry fr any incnvenience caused and hpe yu can accept my heartfelt aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是道歉信。因參加學(xué)校組織的志愿者活動(dòng),而不能與好朋友Andrew周末一起去圖書館,要求考生為些給Andrew寫一封道歉信。
第一步:詞匯積累
計(jì)劃:plan→schedule
表達(dá):express→cvey
真誠(chéng)地:heartfelt→sincere
希望:hpe→expect
第二步:句式拓展
句式升級(jí)
原句:I have signed up fr a vluntary activity themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned.
拓展句:I have signed up fr a vluntary activity which is themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am srry fr any incnvenience caused and hpe yu can accept my heartfelt aplgy.(運(yùn)用了過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)和省略連詞的賓語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2]
On that day, we will g t cmmunities t publicize the significance as well as methds f trash srting and direct the residents t accurately distinguish different kinds f rubbish, which will take a whle day.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
3.(2022年廣西玉林·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測(cè))
假定你是李華,你和你的朋友Mike約好了本周六去博物館,但是由于你臨時(shí)要參加“美麗市容,從我做起”(Beautiful city, Start frm me)的志愿者活動(dòng)而不能與其同行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封道歉信。
1.表達(dá)歉意;
2.簡(jiǎn)介志愿者活動(dòng);
3.另約時(shí)間。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Mike,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Having signed up fr a vluntary activity, I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday. Therefre, I’ writing t express my sincere aplgy fr the incnvenience caused all f sudden.
As yu knw, I’ve been waiting fr a chance t devte myself t raising public awareness f envirnmental prtectin. Cnsequently, when the pprtunity t vlunteer came, I seized it withut hesitatin. On that day, all the vlunteers will put up psters abut hw t lead a lw-carbn lifestyle and pick up the trash alng the rads, which will take a whle day. Cnsidering that, I am afraid that I wn't keep my wrd. It is pssible fr us t fixed anther date when yu are available.
Wrds fail t cnvey hw aplgetic I feel and I hpe that yu can accept my heartfelt and genuine aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給朋友Mike寫信,告訴他你因參加“美麗市容,從我做起”志愿者活動(dòng)而不能按時(shí)和他同去博物館而表達(dá)歉意,并另行約定去博物館的時(shí)間。
第一步:詞匯積累
非常:terribly→ awfully
突然:all f a sudden→suddenly
機(jī)會(huì):pprtunity→ chance
安排:fix→arrange
第二步:句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:Having signed up fr a vluntary activity, I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday.
拓展句:I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday because I have signed up fr a vluntary activity.
第三步:高分句式
【高分句型1】
Having signed up fr a vluntary activity, I’m terribly srry fr nt being able t tur the museum with yu this Saturday.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))
【高分句型2】
Wrds fail t cnvey hw aplgetic I feel and I hpe that yu can accept my heartfelt and genuine aplgy. (運(yùn)用了hw引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
4.(2022年全國(guó)高三專題練習(xí))
假定你是李華,寒假中作為交流生短期去英國(guó)培訓(xùn),回國(guó)時(shí)因?yàn)榇颐?,把房東Bb的音樂(lè)光盤夾在行李中帶了回來(lái)?,F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給Bb寫一封道歉信,要點(diǎn)如下:
1. 對(duì)自己帶走音樂(lè)光盤表示歉意;
2. 提出解決的辦法;
3. 再次請(qǐng)求原諒。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
Dear Bb,
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Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bb,
I am writing t make an aplgy t yu, fr I frgt t return a music CD which I brrwed frm yu last week. Yesterday I came back frm England and fund it in my luggage. I am s srry that yu cannt listen t it at present.
The CD which I brrwed frm yu is made in England, s I believe yu can find anther ne in yur lcal stre. Hw abut yur buying anther CD by yurself and I will pay fr it? If yu cannt find a similar ne, I wuld send it back t yu thrugh a pst ffice. And if there are any ther slutins yu like, please let me knw.
I am terribly srry again fr my carelessness. Please frgive me fr any incnvenience caused.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,就將房東Bb的光盤帶走一事寫一封道歉信。
第一步:詞匯積累
相信:believe→ensure
購(gòu)買:buy→purchase
發(fā)現(xiàn):find→spt
解決辦法:slutin→settlement
第二步:句式拓展
同義句改寫
原句:I am s srry that yu cannt listen t it at present.
拓展句:S srry am I that yu cannt listen t it at present.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am writing t make an aplgy t yu, fr I frgt t return a music CD which I brrwed frm yu last week. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2]
The CD which I brrwed frm yu is made in England, s I believe yu can find anther ne in yur lcal stre. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
5.(2022年北京高三專題練習(xí))
假定你是李華,在澳大利亞留學(xué)期間,父母維修廚房時(shí)影響到了鄰居James,請(qǐng)給他寫一封道歉信,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 表達(dá)歉意;
2. 解釋原因。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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【答案】
Dear James,
We were very shcked t get yur letter cmplaining abut the nise frm ur flat. We didn't expect it spiled yur evenings and caused yu sme distress.We d hpe yu accept ur aplgies.
My parents are busy at wrk during daytime , s they have t refit ur kitchen in the evenings. What's mre, they are nt s expert at ding huse repairs that they have difficulty in getting things t fit prperly.
As the repair is still nt finished, we will call in a prfessinal wrker t finish the wrk this weekend.We prmise that he'll wrk nly during daytime hurs, s yu wn't be disturbed in the evenings again.
Srry t have caused these prblems.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,假定考生是李華,在澳大利亞留學(xué)期間,父母維修廚房時(shí)影響到了鄰居James,請(qǐng)給他寫一封道歉信。
第一步:詞匯積累
希望:wish→ hpe
困難:truble→ difficulty
驚訝的: astnished→ shcked
促使,導(dǎo)致:result in→ cause
第二步:句式拓展
同義句轉(zhuǎn)換
原句:My parents are busy at wrk during daytime, s they have t refit ur kitchen in the evenings.
拓展句: Because my parents are busy at wrk during daytime, they have t refit ur kitchen in the evenings
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
What's mre, they are nt s expert at ding huse repairs that they have difficulty in getting things t fit prperly.(s…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2]
We prmise that he'll wrk nly during daytime hurs, s yu wn't be disturbed in the evenings again.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
6.(2022河南高三專題練習(xí))
假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生陳偉,昨天,你和你的外籍同桌Bb關(guān)于用集體班費(fèi)給災(zāi)區(qū)捐款這一問(wèn)題發(fā)生了一些小爭(zhēng)執(zhí),請(qǐng)你按照以下要求給他寫一封道歉信。
1. 表達(dá)自己的歉意;
2. 闡述道歉的原因(至少2條);
3. 表達(dá)自己的友好之情,提倡(advcate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右。
2. 文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
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【答案】
Dear Bb,
I am writing t express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt s srry fr what 1 did and said yesterday. I dnated all the mney t the students in the flded area withut discussing the plan with yu.
I culd have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the mney, yu happened t be away frm schl and later I didn't explain it t yu in an apprpriate way. What was wrse, I said that yu didn't care abut the cllectin, which hurt yu s much.
Nw I want t take back what I said. Please accept my aplgy fr being s impulsive yesterday, and I'd like yu t try t understand my situatin. I hpe ur friendship will last lng.
Yurs,
Chen Wei
【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作,要求你給同桌Bb寫一封道歉信,表達(dá)歉意,闡述道歉原因并表達(dá)友好之情。
第一步:詞匯積累
歉意:aplgy→regret
合適的:suitable→apprpriate
撤回:withdraw→take back
沖動(dòng)的:htheaded→impulsive
第二步:句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:Please accept my aplgy fr being s impulsive yesterday.
拓展句:Please accept my aplgy, fr I was s impulsive yesterday.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
I culd have dealt with it differently. (culd have dne,運(yùn)用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣)
[高分句型2]
What was wrse, I said that yu didn't care abut the cllectin, which hurt yu s much. (綜合運(yùn)用狀語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
7.(2022西藏高三模擬)
假定你是李華,因下周五要到機(jī)場(chǎng)接表妹,所以不能陪Tm去北京旅行。請(qǐng)你給Tm寫一封道歉信。
內(nèi)容主要包括:
1. 向Tm表達(dá)歉意。
2. 向Tm解釋原因。
3. 祝Tm下周愉快并另約時(shí)間陪Tm去北京旅游。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100 左右
2. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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【答案】Dear Tm,
I am very srry that I can’t g n a trip t Beijing with yu next weekend, which I have prmised yu. I am writing t tell yu the reasn fr it.
Just nw, my cusin, Li Ying, wh went abrad fr further educatin last year, infrmed me that she wuld return the next Friday mrning. She asked me t pick her up at the airprt with her parents. As yu knw, we haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year, s I have t see her in the first place.
I really hpe that yu can accept my aplgy and understand me. I wuld appreciate it if yu allw me t fix anther time t shw yu arund sme places f interest in Beijing.
Wish yu have a gd time this weekend.
Yurs
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文,要求寫一封書信。
第一步:詞匯積累
出國(guó)深造: g abrad fr further educatin
接某人: pick sb up
首先: in the first place
帶某人參觀某地: shw sb arund smewhere
玩得開心: have a gd time
第二步:句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:We haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year. I have t see her tin the first place.
拓展句:As yu knw, we haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year, s I have t see her in the first place.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am very srry that I can’t g n a trip t Beijing with yu next weekend, which I have prmised yu.(使用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2]
Just nw, my cusin, Li Ying, wh went abrad fr further educatin last year, infrmed me that she wuld return the next Friday mrning.(使用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型3]
As yu knw, we haven’t seen each ther fr abut a year, s I have t see her in the first place.(使用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和并列句)
[高分句型4]
I wuld appreciate it if yu allw me t fix anther time t shw yu arund sme places f interest in Beijing.(使用形式賓語(yǔ))

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這是一份學(xué)案 專題 17 話題分類寫作模板背誦+通知(應(yīng)用文寫作)--高考書面表達(dá)話題分類背誦范文,共14頁(yè)。學(xué)案主要包含了高分句型1,高分句型2等內(nèi)容,歡迎下載使用。

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