注意：環(huán)境描寫只是起畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用，環(huán)境描寫不要寫太長(zhǎng)，且環(huán)境描寫一定為你的內(nèi)容服務(wù)，而不是為了看起來(lái)高大上。所以我也提醒大家寫作的時(shí)候千萬(wàn)不要本末倒置，寫一些無(wú)關(guān)緊要的套句或者環(huán)境描寫只會(huì)對(duì)情節(jié)起到反作用。那么接下來(lái)我們先看看環(huán)境描寫的常見(jiàn)作用以及常見(jiàn)的環(huán)境描寫素材。
自然環(huán)境描寫在讀后續(xù)寫中的作用
1.襯托或突出人物性格、心理等
2.暗示或推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)發(fā)展
3.增添或烘托某種氣氛和意境，奠定基調(diào)
4.揭示主題，深化主旨
1.氣氛氛圍（1）
A heavy silence blanketed the rm.（描寫房間的寂靜）
A hush fell upn the class. （描寫教室寂靜）
The huse smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghsts f lng-dead ckies.(描寫屋內(nèi)環(huán)境）
An abslute darkness ruled the frest.（描寫黑暗）
It didn’t take t lng fr the frest t be envelped in darkness.(描寫森林變暗）
There were a deathly stillness in the huse.（描寫死寂）
There was a mment f sinister silence, then a multitudinus stirring f the leaves.（描寫暴風(fēng)雨前的死寂）
An air f sadness settled ver the grup. （描寫悲傷氛圍）
It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tensin.（描寫緊張氣氛）
The silence f the frest was ripped apart by a sund like a raring wind.（描寫狂風(fēng)打破寂靜）
There was n view anywhere, nthing but the ppressive and silent scrub.（描寫死寂的樹林）
2.氣氛氛圍（2）
the blue sky 藍(lán)天the sngs f birds 鳥鳴the thundering cluds 雷霆萬(wàn)鈞的云the fragile flwers 嬌嫩的花the green grass 青草the fragrant rses 芬芳的玫瑰the setting / rising sun 落日 / 冉冉升起的太陽(yáng) Dark cluds were gathering in the sky.烏云密布。
The night sky was lit up by flashes f light. 一道道燈光照亮了夜空。
The cluds had spread and nearly cvered the entire sky. 云彩擴(kuò)散開(kāi)來(lái)，幾乎遮住了整個(gè)天空。
The sun was nw high in the suthern sky. 太陽(yáng)正高掛在南邊的天空上。
The sun went in, and the breeze became cld. 云層遮住了太陽(yáng)，微風(fēng)有了些涼意。
The mist melted rapidly in the mrning sun. 在早晨的陽(yáng)光下，薄霧渙然消散了。
The muntain area is cvered entirely in dense jungle. 山區(qū)完全掩映在茂密的叢林中。
We climbed up a winding track twards a muntain refuge. 我們沿著一條蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一處避難所。
The muntain tp was cvered with snw. 山頂被積雪覆蓋。
The regin is uninhabited except fr a few muntain villages. 除了幾個(gè)小山村之外，這個(gè)地區(qū)杳無(wú)人煙。
Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed fr the destinatin.沐浴在陽(yáng)光下，享受著美麗的風(fēng)景，我們向目的地出發(fā)。
3.江河湖海、山川峽谷、植物草地
The gurgle f the stream sthed me. （描寫潺潺流水）
A clear little stream ran quite merrily alng its narrw way.(描寫歡快的溪流）
The fragrant flwers attracted lts f birds, lingering arund them.(描寫花香鳥語(yǔ)）
The lake mirrred the sky abve, bth f them blameless blue and shimmering.(描寫天空映襯下的湖面）
The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered n its lking glass-clear surface.（描寫波光粼粼的水面）
Dawn sent shimmering rays ver the placid cean, bestwing a glden path frm the shre t the hrizn.(描寫黎明的海洋）
The expanse f blue water stretched in every directin t the hrizn, frthy waves lapping at a sand beach.(描寫海水拍打沙灘)
The beach was bathed in the amber-like sunshine.（描寫陽(yáng)光下的沙灘）
Ripping crystal streams stretched away int the distance frm the twering bluffs like the beautiful streamers f a fairy maid.（描寫瀑布）
The meadw was a glrius expanses f grass and meadw flwers, grass rustling gently in the breeze.(描寫青青草地)
Patches f weeds dtted the muntainside.（描寫雜草）
The meadw flwed like a sea f green ver the hill, studded with the purple f thistles.(描寫漫山的花草）
The peak lked t him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.(描寫山峰）
The valley seemed t grw quieter and quieter as he sat and stared at the bright delicate blueness. (描寫山谷的寂靜）
4.天氣（風(fēng)雨雷電，陰晴冷暖，霧雪冰霜）
The wind, s sft and cld, clicked thrugh tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slpe.（描寫柔風(fēng)）
A gust f wind blew and parted the drping branches f the weeping willw like a curtain.（描寫微風(fēng)拂柳）
A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays f light glimmer and dance as if there was a fairytale wrld hidden deep within.（描寫微風(fēng)）
The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (描寫微風(fēng)）
The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild hwling wind.（描寫狂風(fēng)）
The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(描寫寒風(fēng)）
It was the dur that always precedes a thunderstrm, and a nameless fear clutched at my heart. (描寫暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)臨前）
Wind and rain nw whipped the huse.（描寫風(fēng)雨擊打窗戶）
The drizzle kissed me n my cheeks gently. （描寫細(xì)雨）
It has rained withut ceasing fr many days, with great gusts f wind.（描寫刮風(fēng)下雨）
The thunder was rumbling in the distance. (描寫雷電）
A fierce wind was raring while the punding rain was beating the grund. The rumble f thunder was heard in the distance.（描寫風(fēng)雨雷電）
The sharp claps f thunder pierced the quiet night.（描寫雷聲）
Thugh the rain stpped, the wind rushed by and whistled and made strange sunds.(描寫雨停風(fēng)來(lái)）
A glimmer f light spilled int the crridr. 一縷微光灑入走廊。（描寫陽(yáng)光灑進(jìn)走廊）
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch f my skin.（描寫陽(yáng)光）
The sun drpped thrugh and laid n his head and shulders.
The sun was at it’s highest, like a vicius unblinking yellw eye staring dwn at me frm the cludless sky.(描寫正午毒辣的陽(yáng)光）
In this heat even the trees appear defeated.(描寫天氣極熱）
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flded in.（描寫陽(yáng)光灑進(jìn)窗戶）
The fg was beginning t clear and a full mn shne brightly. （描寫霧氣消散）
The mist melted rapidly in the mrning sun.(描寫薄霧消散）
The feathery snwflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.(描寫下雪）
The wind hwled, piling up snw in drifts, blinding the night with ice-white dust. (描寫晚上下雪場(chǎng)景）
5.動(dòng)物（飛禽走獸，魚蟲）
Birds were chattering/twittering smewhere.（描寫鳥喳喳叫）
The clear blue sky was dtted with fluttering larks.(翩翩飛舞的云雀）
The frest is the rchestra cnsisted by birds, playing ne enchanting symphny after anther.(描寫鳥的合唱）
The birds flew thrugh that ever develping canvas f the dawn, as if their wings were fine quills, drawing such buyant hues.(描寫鳥在天空飛翔的美妙畫面）
The hwl f wlves thundered and made the hair n her neck rise.（描寫狼叫）
Then, n his back, with his tail lashing and his jaws clicking, the shark plwed ver the water as a speed-bat des.(描寫鯊魚）
The shark’s jaws pened wide, revealing rws f razr-sharp teeth.(描寫鯊魚）
6.春夏秋冬
My fingers lingered almst uncnsciusly n the familiar leaves and blssms which had just cme frth t greet the sweet suthern spring. （描寫春意盎然）
The previusly denuded branches ffered their wands f tight green bud t the brilliant rays f spring.(描寫枯枝發(fā)芽)
The new spring grass sht up as time itself had sped up.(描寫春草）
An verwhelming trrent f heat flew thrugh the atmsphere, filled with uneasy discmfrt. （描寫夏天的熱）
Fallen leaves danced dwn in the cl mid-autumn air, bidding farewell t sweet summer and welcming the autumn in.(描寫夏去秋來(lái)）
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strlled dwn the street.(描寫秋天腳下的落葉)
The autumn breeze tusled her hair and pinked her cheeks.(描寫秋風(fēng)拂面）
The leaves had almst fallen ff, creating a sea f fiery clrs that crunched beneath ur feet.(描寫秋天落葉）
Freezing winter marched int the village. (描寫寒冬）
The earth seemed benumbed by his icy tuch, and the very spirits f the trees had withdrawn t their rts, and there, curled up in the dark, lay fast asleep.（描寫寒冬）
The street glistened with fresh snw and the sky was a blameless blue.(描寫冬天的雪)
7.天空、日出日落
White cluds flw in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the brad cean.（描寫藍(lán)天白云）
White cluds flw in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the brad cean.（描寫白云）
The sun rises as a canpy f gld, bright amid the blue, bidding the stars t take their nightly rest.(描寫日出）
The sun drpped thrugh and laid n his head and shulders.(描寫日落）
The garden lked s beautiful with the setting sun reflected in the windws.(描寫夕陽(yáng)）
The stars in the night sky sparkled like diamnds. (描寫星空）
The stars that dtted the sky lit up the night.(描寫星空）
Clusters f stars decrated the vast sky like sparking jewels. (描寫星空）
The mn under siege by stars seemed t lighten the night bringing frth stars that shne and hung in the blackness.(描寫星空)
讀后續(xù)寫沖刺訓(xùn)練常用詞塊
1.a rm facing suth 一間朝南的房間
2.a village surrunded by muntains一個(gè)群山環(huán)繞的村莊
3.a favrable lcatin 一個(gè)優(yōu)越的位置
4.a remte village一個(gè)偏遠(yuǎn)的村莊
5.dwntwn area鬧市區(qū)
6.be situated at...位于/坐落于…….
7.a vilent/fierce strm 狂風(fēng)暴雨
8.in the warm spring sunshine 在春天溫暖的陽(yáng)光里
9.be arranged in gd rder 井井有條
10. in the puring rain 在瓢潑大雨中
11.clear up(天氣）放晴
12.cntinuus/cnstant snw 連續(xù)不斷的大雪
13.be bathed in the sunshine 沐浴在陽(yáng)光中
14.a dark,rainy night 漆黑的雨夜
15.in a mess一片混亂
讀后續(xù)寫沖刺訓(xùn)練常用語(yǔ)句
1.They fund the farm green with vegetables,the little huse livable and hmey.
他們發(fā)現(xiàn)農(nóng)場(chǎng)上長(zhǎng)著綠油油的蔬菜，小屋布置得舒適溫馨。
2.The breeze suddenly swung arund t their backs and began t gather strength.
微風(fēng)突然轉(zhuǎn)向，朝他們身后吹來(lái)，而且越吹越強(qiáng)。
3. The curse headed nrth fr five miles, wandered west fr a hilly mile, then
turned suth again alng a winding rad.
跑道的路線先是北上五英里，然后向西折上一英里的山道，然后再重新往南轉(zhuǎn)入一段蜿蜒曲折的道路。
4.It was raining lightly as he walked dwn the steps.
他走下臺(tái)階時(shí)，天正下著小雨。
5.The strm stpped and the sun came ut.
暴雨停了，太陽(yáng)出來(lái)了。
6. All was quite and there was nly mnlight.
只有月光，周圍一片寂靜。
7.They were bumping ver a sandy track t the weed-chked 120-acre field.
他們顛簸在一條沙路上，朝一塊面積120公頃，雜草叢生的田地開(kāi)去。
8.It was a typical summer evening in June.The air was delicate and there was acmplete,abslute silence.
這是六月一個(gè)典型的夏日傍晚?？諝馊岷颓逍?，四周靜悄悄的，沒(méi)有一絲聲響。
9.The air was rich with spring;the sun was warm and yellwed n the asphalt.
空氣中洋溢著春天的氣息；太陽(yáng)暖洋洋的，柏油馬路上鋪著一層黃色的光。
10.On that day the muntain was full f flwers,and the trees had new greenleaves.
那天山上開(kāi)滿了花，樹上也長(zhǎng)出了新的綠葉。
場(chǎng)景描寫訓(xùn)練句式
As ______________________________________, （天空越來(lái)越黑，光線越來(lái)越暗）he quickened his steps.
2. __________________(微風(fēng)) strked his head , as if cmfrting all his tiredness.
3. Frm the distance, he saw _______________(昏暗的燈光) in the village.
4. She had n chice but t stp fr anther night. _________________(一股冷風(fēng)吹來(lái)) and she started t miss the warmth f Tm’ s hug.
5. Silence between dad and me made me mre nervus and scared. At that mment, it was cmpletely dark _____________________(除了微弱的光) given ut by a few stars in the sky.
6. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering cluds_____________________(完全把我鎮(zhèn)住了).
7. I clsed my eyes in the speeding car. ___________________________________________(蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的山，深深的山谷)and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascinatin.
8. ______________________(泥土熟悉的芬芳)rse up t greet her. Wandering in the wds, Ally slwed her pace t find the little guy in the mixed air.
9. The sun lked at her with a glwing smile and the flwers____________________(快樂(lè)地朝著她點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭).
10. The breeze patted her n the face, warm and cmfrtable. Hwever, it seemed that Ally culdn’t catch sight f the wd warbler（鶯） after a lng time wait.__________________(太陽(yáng)落山), Ally was abut t leave.
模擬訓(xùn)練01
讀后續(xù)寫 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
Jhn Blanchard std up, straightened his army unifrm(制服), and studied the crwd making their way thrugh the statin. He lked fr the girl whse heart he knew, but whse face he had never seen, the girl with a rse.
His interest in her began thirteen mnths ag in a library. Taking a bk ff the shelf, he fund himself fascinated, nt with the wrds f the bk, but with the ntes penciled in the margin (頁(yè)邊的空白). The sft handwriting shwed a thughtful sul and brilliant mind. In the frnt f the bk, he discvered the wner's name, Miss Hllis Maynell. With time and effrt he fund her address. She lived in New Yrk City. He wrte her a letter intrducing himself and inviting her t crrespnd (通信). The next day he was shipped verseas fr military service.
During the next year and ne mnth, the tw begun t knw each ther by mail. Each letter was a seed falling n bth hearts. A rmance was budding. Blanchard asked fr a phtgraph, but she refused. She felt that if he really cared, it wuldn't matter what she lked like.
When the day finally came fr him t return frm Eurpe, they scheduled their first meeting — 7 pm at the Grand Central Statin in New Yrk. “Yu'll recgnize me，” she wrte. “By the red rse I'll wear my dress.” S at 7：00 he was in the statin lking fr a girl whse heart he lved, but whse face he'd never seen.
A yung lady was cming tward him. Her figure was lng and slim; her blnde hair lay back frm her ears; her eyes were blue as flwers; her lips and chin had a gentle firmness, and in her pale green suit she was like springtime cming alive. He went tward her, entirely frgetting t ntice that she was nt wearing a rse. As he mved, a middle aged wman whispered, “Ging my way, Sir？”
注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
Paragraph 1：
Almst uncntrllably he made his way t the wman, and then he nticed that she was wearing a red rse.
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Paragraph 2：
The wman's face bradened int a big smile.
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翻譯小練習(xí)：
約翰·布蘭查德看到這個(gè)40多歲的女人很失望。
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2. 沒(méi)錯(cuò)，她就是他等的那個(gè)女孩。
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3. 盡管他想跟著那位年輕的女士，他還是停下來(lái)，朝那位女士走去，向她打招呼，并拿出他在圖書館里找到的那本書。
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4. “我是約翰·布蘭查德，你一定是霍利斯·梅內(nèi)爾小姐。我非常高興你能見(jiàn)到我，我可以請(qǐng)你吃飯嗎？”
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5. “我不知道這是怎么回事，”她回答說(shuō)，“但是剛才路過(guò)的那個(gè)穿著淡綠色西裝的年輕女士求我把紅玫瑰戴在我的外套上。
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6. 她說(shuō)如果你要請(qǐng)我吃飯，我應(yīng)該告訴你她在街對(duì)面的餐廳等你。她說(shuō)這是個(gè)考驗(yàn)！”
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