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Ⅰ．應(yīng)用文寫作道歉信
假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時回復(fù)。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回封郵件：1．未及時回信的原因； 2．你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Tom， Yours，Li Hua
Dear Tom，How is everything going on with you? I'm writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time．In the first place, I'll be so happy if you could accept my apology．①It's of great importance for me to make full preparations for the final exam last week．Therefore, I couldn't spare enough time to write you back in time．What's more, I am willing to tell you that I am to do some part-time jobs in the summer holiday．②No one can deny the fact that we can have our vision broadened in the process．③Last but not least, it must be pointed out that I would love to go travelling during this holiday．I am looking forward to hearing from you．④And I'll appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply．Yours，Li Hua
1．詞匯美：文章運用了很多高級詞匯，如be going on with, express one's apology to, in time, in the first place, be of great importance, make full preparations for, what's more，be to do, deny, broaden, last but not least, point out等。2．句式美：①句It作形式主語，真正的主語為后面的不定式短語to make full preparations for the final exam last week。②句the fact后接that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，that在從句中不作成分，但不可省略。③句it是形式主語，真正的主語是that引導(dǎo)的主語從句，that在從句中不作成分。④句if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，it為指示代詞，指代if從句的內(nèi)容。
假定你是李華，你與外教David約定于本周六一起游南湖公園，但因故不能赴約。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歉意；2．解釋原因；3．另約時間。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear David， Yours，Li Hua【參考范文】Dear David，I'm sorry to say that I can't go to Nanhu Park with you this Saturday．My uncle phoned and asked me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning．I have tried to find an alternative person to do it, but no other person is available．Shall we walk in the park on Sunday morning? Please let me know if the time is suitable for you and I am open to suggestions as well．Please allow me to say sorry again．Yours，Li HuaⅡ．讀后續(xù)寫
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son．Suddenly a crow perched (棲息) on their window．The father asked his son, “What is this？” The son replied, “It is a crow．” After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this？” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you that it's a crow！” After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, “What is this？”At this time some expression of irritation (惱怒) was felt in the son's tone when he said to his father with a rebuff (生硬回絕), “It's a crow, a crow．” A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this？”[懸念1]This time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’？ Are you not able to understand this？”A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered (發(fā)皺的) diary, which he had maintained since his son was born．On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page．When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary：[懸念2] Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow was sitting on the window．My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow．I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question．I did not feel irritated at all but I rather felt affection for my innocent son．注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。After reading the diary, Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father． 
一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵：Who: the son and his fatherWhere: in the houseWhat: the diaryHow: the son was ashamed大意：父親問了兒子4次“這是什么”，兒子回答4次“烏鴉”后開始大發(fā)雷霆。父親拿出以前記錄不厭其煩回答兒子23遍同樣問題的日記讓兒子看。二、挖掘文中懸念點懸念1思考：文章為什么用了4次“What is this？”？懸念2思考：兒子讀完日記后有什么感受？三、分析段落開頭語段首句1思考：①讀完日記后兒子會哭嗎？ ②兒子會想起自己的童年舊事嗎？③兒子想自己要是老的時候，自己的兒子會怎么看自己？段首句2思考：①兒子為什么羞愧地跪下？他會對父親說些什么？②兒子會聯(lián)想到兒時父親為自己所做的一切而向父親承諾些什么嗎？通過以上思路，預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下：Paragraph 1：感動流淚→回想起日記中記錄的內(nèi)容→反思：自己老的時候兒子會怎樣對待自己Paragraph 2：感到慚愧，跪下道歉→求得寬恕→許諾After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he sat together with his father．His father patiently answered the same question all 23 times without feeling any irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself: If I attain old age, how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding?Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father．He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him for his bad behaviour．He said this aloud, “I promise to see you happy forever, Dad．It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child, showering your selfless affection on me．You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university．I will serve you in the best way no matter how you behave．”
1．使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動。①patiently一詞與上文作者對父親的不耐煩形成了鮮明對比。②without feeling irritation巧妙地呼應(yīng)了上文的At this time some expression of irritation was felt。③selfless一詞用得精妙，概括了父親的偉大，折射了作者慚愧的原因。2．詞匯與語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。①all 23 times與上文照應(yīng)，與父親問了4次同樣的問題作者就不耐煩形成強烈反差，此處是全文的點睛之筆。②It is you who ...此處強調(diào)句用得恰如其分，盡顯兒子的慚愧之情，也顯露兒子回報父愛的決心。③If I attain old age(條件狀語從句)，showering your selfless affection ...(非謂語動詞短語)，so that I could afford ...(目的狀語從句)等高級句式和結(jié)構(gòu)的應(yīng)用為文章的增分點。閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。One Saturday morning, Jeremy woke up to a quiet house．Usually Mum was awake making breakfast and cleaning the kitchen, but not today．At the sound of his mum coughing, Jeremy knocked on her bedroom door and asked with great concern, “Mum, are you OK？” “Honey，” Mum said weakly．“I have a terrible cold．You can have cereal (燕麥) for breakfast and watch cartoons．I'm going to stay in bed．”Jeremy poured some cereal into a bowl and ate the pieces dry．Mum must feel very bad if she was staying in bed all day．How could Jeremy help? First, he wiped up the crumbs of cereal he left on the kitchen counter．He also put away the cereal box neatly, so the kitchen looked just as it did when he woke up．But what else could he do? Jeremy thought．Saturday was the day when mum did laundry．Jeremy loved to watch the clothes spinning in the machine．That should be fun! He ran to his room to get the laundry basket, inside which there was his mother's favourite white dress, among other clothes and a pair of red socks．Jeremy opened the door to the washer and put the clothes inside．He had watched Mum do laundry lots of times, so he knew where to find the washing powder and how to pour it into the machine．Finally, he closed the door and pressed the big button that said “START”．Jeremy looked through the round glass window．Water was pouring in, and the machine was starting to spin, making his clothing tumble around．That was easy!Jeremy watched cartoons until he heard the washing machine beep．That meant the washing was done．Jeremy opened the door to take out the damp clothes．He took out a few at a time and moved them into the dryer．Everything seemed clean, and Jeremy felt proud．Then he pulled out a pink dress．注意： 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右。But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket． Holding the pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his mum's bedroom door again． 【參考范文】But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket．“Where did it come from？” Jeremy wondered, reaching into the washer to take out more clothes．Then much to his astonishment, he pulled out two T-shirts, both in light pink．Realising there was something wrong, Jeremy stood frozen, his heart sinking．While racking his brain for reasons, he caught sight of the red socks, and it suddenly occurred to him that they must be to blame for it．With no means of handling the situation, Jeremy was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the dress from his mum．“That isn't a positive approach to the problem，” he reminded himself．Finally, he decided to dry and fold the laundry before telling his mum everything．Holding the pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his mum's bedroom door again．After what seemed like ages, he came to the bedside, his head drooping．Sensing his unease, his mother inquired with concern what was wrong．“Sorry Mum, I shouldn't have ruined your favourite dress．” Jeremy apologised．Stuttering out the mistake he had made, he was ready to get a good scolding for his wrongdoing．Realising what was going on, his mother smiled understandingly at him, “Never mind, dear．I know you meant to help．” Then his mother held the dress up before her and said in an approving tone, “You know what? I think it looks nice．” At this Jeremy beamed with relief, making a silent vow to be more careful in helping his mum out next time．
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