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Ⅰ．應(yīng)用文寫作祝賀信
假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Michael在學校舉辦的中國詩詞大會比賽中獲得了外國選手組一等獎。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封電子郵件向他表示祝賀。1．祝賀他獲獎；2．肯定他付出的努力；3．詢問何時方便，一起交流一下中國古詩詞學習心得。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：中國詩詞大會 Chinese Poetry ContestDear Michael， Yours，Li Hua
Dear Michael，I am writing to offer my congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest．①As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success．For these years, you've shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day．②Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have had a deep understanding of it．Your appreciation for those poems is sometimes beyond our expectations．You deserve to win this prize．③I do hope to have a talk with you and exchange our views about Chinese poetry．Looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua
1．詞匯美：文章運用了很多高級詞匯，如offer one's congratulations, delighted, show interest in, keep on doing sth．, accumulate, have a deep understanding of, appreciation, beyond one's expectations, deserve to do sth．, exchange, look forward to等。2．句式美：①句how delighted I am at your success為how引導的賓語從句作know的賓語。②句運用了not only ...but also ...連接并列句，且not only部分運用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。③句I do hope to have a talk ...運用了“do＋動詞原形”的強調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)。
假如你是李華，你的好友王芳在中學生英語演講比賽中榮獲一等獎。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給她寫一封祝賀信。內(nèi)容包括：1．表達你的愉悅心情；2．向她表示祝賀；3．請她介紹成功的經(jīng)驗。注意：1．詞數(shù) 80 左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：英語演講比賽 the English Speech ContestDear Wang Fang, Yours, Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Wang Fang，Hearing that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, I'm writing to give you my sincere congratulations．You don't know how excited I was when I heard the good news．I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English made a profound impression on me．It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest．Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning．I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice．I am looking forward to your early reply．Yours，Li HuaⅡ．讀后續(xù)寫
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。A Mother's Day SurpriseThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day．How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed．They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge．They had watched their mother in the kitchen．There was nothing to it．Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do．[懸念1]The big day came at last．The alarm rang at 6 a．m．The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen．They decided to boil the porridge first．They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast．Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk．Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture．Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan．Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread．The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds．Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread．This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely．Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake．The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire．Jenna panicked．Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly．But the stove was a mess now．Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge．But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain．Jenna made him put his hand in cold water．Then she caught the smell of burning．Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well．[懸念2]注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared． The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up． 
一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵：Who: Jenna and JeffWhere: in the kitchenWhen: on the morning of Mother's DayWhat: preparing a surpriseHow: cooking in the kitchen大意：雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff在母親節(jié)這天，自己動手，為媽媽做早餐，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗。二、挖掘文中懸念點懸念1 思考：這對雙胞胎自認為做早餐沒有問題，難道情況真的是這樣的嗎？他們真的知道怎么做嗎？懸念2思考：面包也被烤焦了，雙胞胎在廚房搞得一團糟，爸爸不知道嗎？知道了會幫助他們嗎？三、分析段落開頭語段首句1思考：①當孩子們看到爸爸出現(xiàn)會是什么樣的反應(yīng)？②他們最終做早餐成功，是爸爸幫助他們的嗎？③他們是不是一切從頭開始？段首句2思考：①當他們把早餐拿到樓上叫醒媽媽時，她會如何反應(yīng)？會感到很驚訝嗎？ ②孩子做早餐對媽媽來說意味著什么？③孩子們會對媽媽說些什么嗎？通過以上思路，預設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下：Paragraph 1：爸爸出現(xiàn)→救命稻草→爸爸幫忙→重新做早餐Paragraph 2：媽媽被叫醒→驚喜→感慨→孩子祝媽媽節(jié)日快樂As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared．Father's appearing was like a saviour to the two children．Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again．They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge．Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success．It was all right this time．Delicious breakfast was ready．How happy they were! The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised．It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much．The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect．The children said loudly, “Happy Mother's Day！” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again．
1．使用恰當?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動。①positive一詞暗示兩個孩子在爸爸的指導下，重拾信心，采取積極的措施進行補救。②沒有直接說他們這次成功，而是用all right和ready，這種寫作方式可以調(diào)動讀者的互動意識。③perfect一詞高度評價了他們做的早餐，也折射出媽媽的喜悅心情。2．詞匯與語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準確。①under the guidance of, adjust, the key to, hug等高級詞匯的運用增加了文章的亮點。②感嘆句用得恰如其分，讓讀者仿佛看到了他們高興的樣子。③全文用了兩處非限制性定語從句，使文章句式結(jié)構(gòu)豐富。
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Finally, the bell rang．“Don't forget to practise your class presentation at home！” Miss Bella cried as everyone started talking and packing their schoolbags．Jessy felt sick．She hated having to read aloud in class．She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her．Once, when Jessy was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical．Jessy watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school．He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence．He was just one of those people who were good at everything．Jessy sighed．As she turned the corner, she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path．Jessy knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didn't want to run after him．Jessy bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home．On arriving home, Jessy put it on almost without thinking．She was surprised it fitted so well．She walked to the mirror and started practising her speech．Words just flooded out of her．“I'm going to talk about swimming．I have been lucky．I've won lots of competitions．But when I'm in a race, I'm not really thinking about winning．I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water ...” Jessy laughed with excitement．She walked across the room．She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence．Turning back to the mirror, Jessy saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass．The flashes of silver seemed almost magical．So maybe Lee's watch really did have something magic about it．The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Bella asked who was going to be brave and go first．Nobody moved．Jessy slowly raised her arm．Before Miss Bella could say anything, there was a shout from behind．“She's stolen my watch！” Lee said angrily．“It went missing at school yesterday．”注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jessy, waiting for an explanation． Miss Bella smiled and asked the class to listen to Jessy's speech first． 【參考范文】Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jessy, waiting for an explanation．A flush of embarrassment came to her cheeks, making Jessy biting her lips．Dead silence suddenly fell．Then came Miss Bella's voice, “Why is Lee's watch on your wrist？” Jessy hesitated for a while and decided to tell the truth．However, on second thoughts of the well-prepared speech and the magic of the watch, she changed her mind．“Miss Bella, could I give the speech first and then explain？” She made a request in a tone of begging．Miss Bella smiled and asked the class to listen to Jessy's speech first．Jessy put away her fright, took a deep breath, and made for the platform．Casting a glance at the sea of faces watching her, Jessy cleared her throat and began her speech．“I'm going to talk about swimming ...” Word began to flood out of her．“What a terrific speech！” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Bella nodded with approval．Immediately Jessy finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class．Relieved, Jessy told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch．She returned the watch to Lee as she eventually realised the real source of confidence．
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