
【真題再現(xiàn)】(2023· 全國(guó)乙卷改編) 學(xué)校英文報(bào)組織同學(xué)們分享自己在假期中學(xué)到的新技能, 請(qǐng)你以“Learning a new skill”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括: 1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述; 2. 體驗(yàn)和感受。
Step 1: 審題布局
Step 2: 巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1: 一開(kāi)始, 讀五線譜上的音符是相當(dāng)困難的。一般表達(dá): In the beginning, reading the ntes n the stave was quite hard. →一開(kāi)始, 讀五線譜上的音符是相當(dāng)困難的, 但是我沒(méi)有放棄。(高級(jí)表達(dá))In the beginning, __________________________________n the stave, but I didn’t give up.
it was quite difficult t read the ntes
要點(diǎn)2: 雖然經(jīng)過(guò)幾個(gè)小時(shí)的練習(xí), 我的手指會(huì)感到疼痛, 但如果我能完整地演奏一首曲子, 我就會(huì)感到滿足。_____________________________________________________, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely. 要點(diǎn)3: 即使我不會(huì)把彈鋼琴作為我的終身職業(yè), 我仍然會(huì)把它作為我最大的愛(ài)好。_______________________________________________________, I will still regard it as my first hbby.
Althugh my fingers were painful after a few hurs’ practice
Even thugh I will nt make playing the pian as my life career
Step 3: 銜接成篇Learning a new skill When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. That was the first time I had watched a live musical perfrmance. The fantastic players tuched me deeply.
I asked my parents t allw me t take up a pian lessn as a beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult t read the ntes n the stave, but I didn’t give up. I spent mst f my leisure hurs practicing the pian. Althugh my fingers were painful after a few hurs’ practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely. Even thugh I will nt make playing the pian as my life career, I will still regard it as my first hbby.
【句式構(gòu)儲(chǔ)】1. 篇頭——開(kāi)篇表意, 引出話題①Nwadays, mre and mre freigners are becming increasingly interested in traditinal Chinese culture. The reasns why there exists this phenmenn can be listed as fllws. 如今, 越來(lái)越多的外國(guó)人逐漸對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化感興趣。存在這種現(xiàn)象的原因可以列舉如下。
②I’m Li Hua, an editr f English newspaper f ur schl. Knwing yu are familiar with the culture in yur cuntry, I’m writing t invite yu t cntribute an essay t share smething with us. 我是李華, 是我們學(xué)校英文報(bào)的編輯。我知道你對(duì)你的國(guó)家的文化很熟悉, 所以我寫(xiě)信邀請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇文章與我們分享一些東西。
2. 篇中——詳細(xì)描述, 講清理由①Amng the many symbls that represent China and its unique culture, the Great Wall is n the tp f my recmmendatin list. 在代表中國(guó)及其獨(dú)特文化的眾多象征中, 長(zhǎng)城是我的首選推薦。②Originally built by Emperr Qinshihuang and expanded and strengthened in the Ming Dynasty, it became the wrld’s largest military structure. 它最初由秦始皇建造, 并在明朝擴(kuò)建和加強(qiáng), 成為世界上最大的軍事建筑。
3. 結(jié)尾——再次總結(jié)全文①I(mǎi)n my view, it’s ur cuntry’s being strng that has made the cultural aspect f ur cuntry mre appealing and charming. 在我看來(lái), 正是我們國(guó)家的強(qiáng)大使我們國(guó)家的文化方面更具吸引力和魅力。②I appreciate it because it is unique in the wrld. Besides, it makes drinking tea mre enjyable, and als gives us an insight int peple’s lifestyle in the Sng Dynasty. 我欣賞它, 因?yàn)樗谑澜缟鲜仟?dú)一無(wú)二的。此外, 它使喝茶變得更加愉快, 也讓我們了解了宋代人們的生活方式。
【拓展訓(xùn)練】 21st Century Teens英文報(bào)正在就“越來(lái)越多的外國(guó)人愛(ài)上中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化”這一現(xiàn)象舉辦征文活動(dòng), 請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿, 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下: 1. 分析原因; 2. 你的看法。注意: 1. 寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫; _________________________________________________________________
【參考范文】 Nwadays, mre and mre freigners are becming increasingly interested in traditinal Chinese culture. The reasns why there exists this phenmenn can be listed as fllws. Fr ne thing, China has a lng histry and evlves clrful, mysterius and unique cultures in its develpment, which makes it mre attractive. Fr anther, ur cuntry’s ecnmy has been develping at a gd pace. During their stay, they are als expsed t and fascinated by ur diverse traditinal cultures.
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