
【試題探究】 假定你是晨光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華, 你校于6月8日舉辦了成人禮活動(dòng), 你的英國朋友Chris很想了解該活動(dòng)。你于當(dāng)晚給Chris寫一封信, 介紹相關(guān)情況, 內(nèi)容包括: 1. 成人禮活動(dòng)內(nèi)容(成長點(diǎn)滴回顧等); 2. 對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受; 3對(duì)自己未來的展望。
注意: 1. 詞數(shù)80左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié), 以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。參考詞匯: 成人禮 the cming-f-age ceremny
Step 1: 審題布局
Step 2: 巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1: 這次的成人禮儀式深深地打動(dòng)了我們, 并且我們從中意識(shí)到了責(zé)任感始終伴隨著我們的成長過程。一般表達(dá): We are all deeply mved by the ceremny and we realize that the sense f respnsibility always accmpanies the prcess f ur grwth frm it. 句式升級(jí)(定語從句)We are all deeply mved by the ceremny, ________________________________________________________________________________________.
frm which we realize that the sense f
respnsibility always accmpanies the prcess f ur grwth
要點(diǎn)2: 我明白了成長的意義。一般表達(dá): ________________________________________. 句式升級(jí)(倒裝句)這就是我對(duì)成長的理解。________________________________________
I have understd the meaning f grwing up
Such is my understanding abut grwing up.
Step 3: 銜接成篇Dear Chris, I’m s glad t hear frm yu. In yur last letter, yu shwed great interest in the cming-f-age ceremny held in ur schl. The fllwing is a brief intrductin t the ceremny.
The ceremny was scheduled n June 8, during which we reviewed the past events. We are all deeply mved by the ceremny, frm which we realize that the sense f respnsibility always accmpanies the prcess f ur grwth. We are determined t fllw the examples f ur excellent schlmates and make urselves useful t the whle sciety. Such is my understanding abut grwing up. What abut yurs? Lking frward t yur reply. Yurs, Li Hua
【句式儲(chǔ)備】1. 篇頭——開篇表意, 說明目的、原因等①Delighted t learn that an imprtant vlleyball game will be launched in ur schl stadium, I’m writing t extend my excitement and infrm yu f sme relevant infrmatin. 很高興得知一場重要的排球比賽將在我們學(xué)校的體育場舉行, 我寫信是為了表達(dá)我的興奮, 并告訴你一些相關(guān)的信息。②I’m mre than delighted t tell yu that an internatinal cultural festival is t be held in my city. 我非常高興地告知你們國際文化節(jié)將在我市舉行。
2. 篇中——詳細(xì)介紹, 告知具體信息①First and fremst, the cmpetitin t be held will begin at 2 p. m. and last fr rughly 3 hurs. 首先, 比賽將于下午兩點(diǎn)開始, 持續(xù)大約3個(gè)小時(shí)。②Then yu will be taken t the Tea Rm, where yu can taste sme famus Chinese tea and watch perfrmances f tea art. 有人將你帶至茶室, 品嘗中國名茶、觀看茶藝表演。
3. 結(jié)尾——作總結(jié), 盼回復(fù)①I highly expect the experience t be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun. 我非常希望這段經(jīng)歷是有益的, 將學(xué)習(xí)和樂趣完美地結(jié)合在一起。②It wuld be nice if yu culd prvide a bit mre infrmatin n the arrangements f the meeting. 你要能提供更多有關(guān)此次會(huì)議安排的信息, 那將再好不過了。
【拓展訓(xùn)練】 假定你是李華, 你因故不能參加下周二的音樂會(huì), 想把票轉(zhuǎn)贈(zèng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Jhn。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件告知相關(guān)情況, 內(nèi)容包括: 1. 你不能參加音樂會(huì)的理由; 2. 音樂會(huì)的基本情況; 3. 如何獲取門票。注意: 1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________
【參考范文】Dear Jhn, Hw’s everything ging? I’ve gt the chance t enjy a cncert. Hwever, it’s a regret that I have t g t meet an hnred freign friend then. Thus, yu’re the first persn I want t present the ticket.
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