第一種：糾結(jié)打架型
人在矛盾的時(shí)候，內(nèi)心就像有兩個(gè)小人在打架，相信打架都有這個(gè)情緒體驗(yàn)。在讀后續(xù)寫中，把這種心理狀態(tài)表達(dá)出來，會(huì)讓文章顯得更加傳神。
摘選一：我沒主意：把它放了吧，它準(zhǔn)是死；養(yǎng)著它吧，家里沒有籠子。我捧著它，好像世界上一切的生命都在我掌中似的。我不知怎樣才好?！仙帷缎÷槿浮?br>摘選二：他痛苦地吐了一口氣。他低聲對(duì)自己說：“我不能再這樣做！”“那么你要怎樣呢？你有膽量么？你這個(gè)老好人！”馬上就有一個(gè)聲音在他的耳邊反問道?！⒖叹椭肋@是他自己在講話。他氣惱地再說：“為什么沒有膽量呢？難道我就永遠(yuǎn)是個(gè)老好人嗎？” ——巴金《寒夜》
舉例：（2016年10月浙江卷 夫妻吵架迷路）
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
續(xù)寫場景節(jié)選：The sight f the dark frest sent a wave f terrr running thrugh her heart. “Shuld I give up trying?” A vice whispered in her ear. “N. Only a cward des nthing but wait,” anther vice cuntered suddenly.
看到黑暗的森林，她的心頭?！拔覒?yīng)該放棄嘗試嗎？”有一個(gè)聲音在她耳邊耳語。不只有懦夫才什么也不等?！绷硪粋€(gè)聲音突然反駁道。
練習(xí)：
1.（2020年7月浙江卷 熊口逃生）A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
請描寫我腦子里的兩個(gè)小人，一個(gè)說跑，一個(gè)說斗：
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2.( 2018年6月浙江卷) We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
請描寫我腦子里的兩個(gè)小人，一個(gè)說等待，一個(gè)說尋找出路：
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答案：
The sight f its gaping muth sent a wave f terrr running thrugh my heart. “Shuld I run away?” A nervus vice eched in my head. “Just fight it r yu wuldn’t run that far.” Anther vice warned suddenly.
看到它張大的嘴巴，一股恐懼的浪潮涌上了我的心頭?！拔覒?yīng)該逃跑嗎？”一個(gè)緊張的聲音在我的腦海里回響。“只要戰(zhàn)斗，否則你就不會(huì)跑得那么遠(yuǎn)。”另一個(gè)聲音突然警告道。
2. Like a bat lst n the sea, we lked arund aimlessly, surrund by a wall f silence. “Shuld we wait here fr help?” I thught nervusly. “That is n better than a cward.” A vice sneered in my head.
就像一艘迷失在海上的船，我們漫無目的地環(huán)顧四周，周圍是一堵寂靜的墻?！拔覀儜?yīng)該在這里等幫助嗎？”我緊張地想。“這并不比像個(gè)懦夫好。”一個(gè)聲音在我的腦海里冷笑著。
第二種：大鍋燉型
人的情緒表現(xiàn)有時(shí)候是復(fù)雜的，并不是單一的。如果能把這種混合的情緒表現(xiàn)出來，那么心理描寫就顯得非常生動(dòng)。在讀后續(xù)寫中，驚訝感激之中，往往伴隨著比較復(fù)雜的情緒。
摘選一：他兩手捂著臉，既不敢相信他真的得到了幸福，擔(dān)心這件僥幸的事會(huì)給他帶來新的不幸，又極力想在手掌的黑暗中細(xì)細(xì)地享受這種新奇的感情?！獜堎t亮《靈與肉》
摘選二：我緊緊地而又久久地握住妻的手，默默地注視著那溫柔的淚水，順著伊的臉頰，緩緩流下。——這是辛酸的淚，也是幸福的淚。此時(shí)此刻，又覺得，什么言語，都似乎是多余的了?！镆啊峨x合悲歡的三天》
舉例：（2016年10月浙江卷）
It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
續(xù)寫：… Jane hugged her husband tightly, tears f regret and gratitude in eyes. Hardly culd she believe she was saved eventually. Meanwhile, hw eagerly she wanted the time with Jack t last as lng as it culd!
簡緊緊地?fù)肀е恼煞颍劬锍錆M了遺憾和感激的淚水。她幾乎不敢相信自己最終還是得救了。與此同時(shí)，她多么急切地希望和杰克在一起的時(shí)間盡可能多長！
…Jane tk his hand and kept her eyes glued t his face in silence, her tears rlling dwn her cheeks slwly — tears regret, f gratitude. That was when she felt nthing can express her lve.
簡握住他的手，眼睛默默地盯著他的臉，眼淚慢慢地順著臉頰滑落——眼淚遺憾，感激。那時(shí)，她覺得沒有什么能表達(dá)她的愛。
練習(xí)：
1. （2020年7月浙江卷）
Paragraph 2: At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
請續(xù)寫我拍攝的一幕感人照片，同時(shí)感到為熊的饑餓感到遺憾。
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2.（2020年1月浙江卷）
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.
請續(xù)寫男孩對(duì)小狗的疼愛和感激。
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答案：
…She pressed the buttn f her camera just in time t recrd the mst precius scene. Hardly culd she believe what she had experience. Meanwhile, she culdn’t help feeling srry fr the hunger the bear suffered.
她按下了相機(jī)的按鈕，及時(shí)錄下了最珍貴的場景。她簡直不敢相信自己的經(jīng)歷。與此同時(shí)，她也忍不住為這只熊所遭受的饑餓感到難過。
2. …He nestled the little dg in his arms, smiles spreading acrss his face — fr the cmpany it kept Pppy, fr the warmth it brught t the huse. At the mment, he felt any language was unnecessary.
他把小狗依偎在懷里，臉上露出了微笑——因?yàn)榕惆橹鳳ppy，因?yàn)樗o房子帶來的溫暖。此刻，他覺得任何語言都沒有必要。
模擬演練01
讀后續(xù)寫 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
Many years ag, when I was fresh ut f schl and wrking in Denver, I was driving t my parents' hme in Missuri fr Christmas. I stpped at a gas statin(加油站)abut 50 miles frm Oklahma City, where I was planning t stp and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款臺(tái)), I said hell t an lder cuple wh were als paying fr gas.
I tk ff, but had gne nly a few miles when black smke pured frm the back f my car. I stpped and wndered what I shuld d. A car pulled up behind me. It was the cuple I had spken t at the gas statin. They said they wuld take me t my friend's .We chatted n the way int the city, and when I gt ut f the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrte him and his wife a thank-yu nte fr helping me. Sn afterward, I received a Christmas present frm them. Their nte that came with it said that helping me had made their hlidays meaningful.
Years later, I drve t a meeting in a nearby twn in the mrning. In late afternn I returned t my car and fund that I'd left the lights n all day, and the battery(電池)was dead. Then I nticed that the Friendly Frd dealership - a shp selling cars - was right next dr. I walked ver and fund tw salesmen in the shwrm.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
Paragraph 1
I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me.
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it.
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翻譯小練習(xí)：
1. 我立刻認(rèn)出了他。這兩個(gè)推銷員是老兩口，他們是Friendly Frd經(jīng)銷商的老板。
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2. “嘿，是你！你幫過我，記得嗎？“我激動(dòng)地對(duì)他們說。
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3. “是的，我們有！“老人笑了，我們經(jīng)營商店是為了幫助更多的人。
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4. 你知道嗎，這讓我們的生活如此有意義！”
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5. 他們再一次解決了我的麻煩，但當(dāng)我付錢時(shí)，他們不接受我的錢。
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6. 他們告訴我，剛開始經(jīng)營這家店的時(shí)候，從來沒有人抽時(shí)間給他們寫信說聲謝謝，但現(xiàn)在他們收到的感謝信越來越多，他們真的很高興。
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參考答案：
1. 我立刻認(rèn)出了他。這兩個(gè)推銷員是老兩口，他們是Friendly Frd經(jīng)銷商的老板。
I recgnized him at nce. The tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership.
2. “嘿，是你！你幫過我，記得嗎？“我激動(dòng)地對(duì)他們說。
“Hey, it’s yu! Yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly.
3. “是的，我們有！“老人笑了，我們經(jīng)營商店是為了幫助更多的人。
“Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple.
4. 你知道嗎，這讓我們的生活如此有意義！”
Yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
5. 他們再一次解決了我的麻煩，但當(dāng)我付錢時(shí)，他們不接受我的錢。
They slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney.
6. 他們告訴我，剛開始經(jīng)營這家店的時(shí)候，從來沒有人抽時(shí)間給他們寫信說聲謝謝，但現(xiàn)在他們收到的感謝信越來越多，他們真的很高興。
They tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
參考范文：
Paragraph 1
I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me. I recgnized him at nce. The tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership. “Hey, it’s yu! Yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly. Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple. Yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
Paragraph 2
After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it. They slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney. They tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
模擬演練02
讀后續(xù)寫 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
Dawn came slwly. A shaft f sunlight reached int the 4-meter-deep crater（彈坑），making the metal f the bmb shine. The bys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried nt t lk at the huge shape f the bmb that appeared ver them.
Harry suddenly pened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and bth bys strained their ears. They culd hear a man talking sftly. The vice seemed a lng way ff. Jack went t shut, but Harry clamped his hand ver Jack's muth. "Dn't shut/' he hissed（發(fā)出噓聲），"We'll be blwn int pieces."
The sft vice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the tp f crater. He was talking t a muthpiece（話筒）arund his neck. He stpped talking when he saw the bys. "What the..." he said, “Wh are yu?" Hairy fund his vice, "Jack and Harry Brwn." "Is that dg dead?" asked the captain. “N： he’s sleeping," said Harry.
The captain spke int the muthpiece again, “Sergeant（中士）," he said, stpped and tk a breath befre he went n. “There are tw kids and a dg dwn here." Then the captain cruched dwn and stared clsely at the bmb. “Dn't mve and dn't speak," he said, "r we'll all g up." He began talking quietly t his sergeant.
Jack and Harry were t stiff t mve. They held Raf, the dg, tightly and waited. Anther man appeared at the tp f the crater. "I thught s," he said, "It's them all right?"
"It’s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lwered the ladder int the lse earth next t the tw bys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held n at the tp. Old Tin Hat started t cme dwn the ladder very slwly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bttm, and with ne mvement, he lifted Jack n his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed t take an age.

Paragraph 1:
With a sudden fall f earth, Old Tin Hat frze halfway up.
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Old Tin Hat pulled Harry nt his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
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翻譯小練習(xí)：
1. 哈利嚇得喘不過氣來，但幸運(yùn)的是那家伙很穩(wěn)定。
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2. Old Tin Hat又起來了。他一到山頂，手就伸出來，杰克就不見了。
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3. Old Tin Hat又從梯子上下來了，溫柔而謹(jǐn)慎。
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4. 最終，他加入了哈里和英國皇家空軍。
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5. 盡管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他堅(jiān)持說他們會(huì)在一起。
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6. Old Tin Hat第二次開始爬梯子。
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7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不過氣來。
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8. 經(jīng)過巨大的努力，他們到達(dá)了火山口的頂部。
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9. 所有人都獲救了！遠(yuǎn)處傳來微弱的歡呼聲。
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10. 一群人擠在柵欄后面。
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11. 在那兒，“媽媽！”Hurry沖過去，緊緊地抱著媽媽。后來，消息傳來，炸彈已安全運(yùn)走。
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參考答案：
1. 哈利嚇得喘不過氣來，但幸運(yùn)的是那家伙很穩(wěn)定。
Harry gasped with terrr but luckily the ladder was steady.
2. Old Tin Hat又起來了。他一到山頂，手就伸出來，杰克就不見了。
Old Tin Hat started up again. N sner had he gt t the tp than hands reached ut and Jack disappeared.
3. Old Tin Hat又從梯子上下來了，溫柔而謹(jǐn)慎。
Again dwn the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiusly.
4. 最終，他加入了哈里和英國皇家空軍。
Eventually, he jined Harry and Raf.
5. 盡管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他堅(jiān)持說他們會(huì)在一起。
Thugh he suggested that dg went last, Harry insisted that they wuld be tgether.
6. Old Tin Hat第二次開始爬梯子。
Old Tin Hat started t climb the ladder fr the secnd time.
7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不過氣來。
The weight f the by and the dg made him gasp.
8. 經(jīng)過巨大的努力，他們到達(dá)了火山口的頂部。
With great effrts, they came t the tp f the crater.
9. 所有人都獲救了！遠(yuǎn)處傳來微弱的歡呼聲。
Everybdy was rescued! A faint cheer rse frm a lng way ff.
10. 一群人擠在柵欄后面。
A grup f peple crwded behind the barrier.
11. 在那兒，“媽媽！”Hurry沖過去，緊緊地抱著媽媽。后來，消息傳來，炸彈已安全運(yùn)走。
And there was, “Mm!” Hurry rushed ver, hugging his mm tightly. Later, news came that the bmb was taken away, safe.
參考范文：
With a sudden fall f earth, Old Tin Hat frze halfway up.
Harry gasped with terrr but luckily the ladder was steady. Old Tin Hat started up again. N sner had he gt t the tp than hands reached ut and Jack disappeared. Again dwn the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiusly. Eventually, he jined Harry and Raf. Thugh he suggested that dg went last, Harry insisted that they wuld be tgether.
Old Tin Hat pulled Harry nt his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
Old Tin Hat started t climb the ladder fr the secnd time. The weight f the by and the dg made him gasp. With great effrts, they came t the tp f the crater. Everybdy was rescued! A faint cheer rse frm a lng way ff. A grup f peple crwded behind the barrier. And there was, “Mm! Hurry rushed ver, hugging his mm tightly. Later, news came that the bmb was taken away, safe.

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2022高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心素養(yǎng)與實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練讀后續(xù)寫專題10：銜接大法（原卷版+解析版）
2022高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心素養(yǎng)與實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練讀后續(xù)寫專題03：環(huán)境描寫（原卷版+解析版）

2022高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心素養(yǎng)與實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練讀后續(xù)寫專題03：環(huán)境描寫（原卷版+解析版）
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