Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假使你是明啟中學的高三學生李華,你的學校正在組織“走進歷史”主題活動,擬從三個活動形式里選擇一個:走訪老戰(zhàn)士、表演歷史劇和制作短視頻。學校正在向全體師生征求建議。必須包含:
(1)你的選擇;
(2) 你的理由。
解析：
[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為建議信；
② 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；
③ 提示：項目內(nèi)容已給出，學生應(yīng)選一項活動，闡述理由，注意寫信格式。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，表明自己寫信意圖；
第二步，具體說明項目內(nèi)容和選擇的原因；
第三步，結(jié)尾可以表達自己的期盼。
【范文】
T whm it may cncern,
Hearing that ur schl will rganize a themed activity "Walk int histry",I am writing this letter with the aim f putting frward my pinins. As fr me, shting a shrt vide is a superb ptin. The reasns fr my preference are as fllws.
First f all, there is n dubt that shting a vide shall definitely mtivate we students t put what we have learnt t practice. Thrugh filming the perfrmance, nt nly can I prmte practical ability but als I can imprve my scial skills. In additin, filming is a teamwrk. I can learn hw t cperate with thers in this activity, which is an imprtant quality in a career.What's mre, the shrt vide will be widely spread, if it is psted n scial media. The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital rle in attracting millins f yung peple wh want t learn abut histrical backgrund f a given histrical event. Thus, the virtue f lder generatin will pass n.
I sincerely hpe my advice helps this activity. Thank yu fr taking my suggestins int accunt.
【好詞好句】
1.Thrugh filming the perfrmance,nt nly can I prmte practical ability but als I can imprve my scial skills. (nt als 倒裝句）
通過拍攝，我不僅可以提高我的實踐能力，還可以提高我的社交能力。
2.I can learn hw t cperate with thers in this activity, which is an imprtant quality in a career. （which非限制性定語從句）
我可以在這個活動中學習如何與他人合作，這是一個職業(yè)生涯的重要素質(zhì)。
3.The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital rle in attracting millins f yung peple wh want t learn abut histrical backgrund f a given histrical event. （wh 引導(dǎo)定語從句）
生動的畫面和優(yōu)美的音樂起到至關(guān)重要的作用，吸引數(shù)以百萬計的年輕人想要了解一個特定的歷史事件的歷史背景。
2022年1月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是明啟中學的高三學生李明。入冬以來，你們學校組織全校師生進行晨跑，時間在7:30到7:50，休息5分鐘之后準備上第一節(jié)課。但是有同學反映，晨跑后身體不適，因此校方委托學生會向同學們征集對晨跑的意見，請你向?qū)W生會寫封郵件。要求：
你認為晨跑安排中存在的問題；
提出改進的建議和理由。
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學霸作文（僅供參考）
Dear Student Unin ,
I am writing this letter t reflect n the schl's rganizatin f mrning running fr all teachers and students. Glad that the schl rganizes mrning running fr the health f students. Hwever, sme students reflected that they were uncmfrtable after mrning running which is an urgent prblem t be slved. T slve it, my reasns and suggestins are as fllws.
First f all, it is inapprpriate t set the time fr mrning running frm 7:30 t 7:50 in the mrning, because it is nly 5 minutes frm the first class. Students will be very tired, which will impact the learning efficiency f the first class. Meanwhile, just after breakfast in the mrning vigrus exercise is nt suitable fr human beings, therwise it will cause stmach discmfrt.Why nt try t put the mrning running time in the big break after the secnd class? What 's mre.I hld, befre rganizing mrning running, we shuld give students a cmprehensive physical examinatin t ensure that everyne's physical cnditin is suitable fr running. We can arrange sme ther warm-up exercises fr these students and teachers wh are nt suitable fr running preventing sme unexpected accidents. Last but nt least, the schl shuld cnsider students with physical discmfrt t ask fr leave in advance and infrm the reasn.
In shrt, what matters mst is that physical educatin is a crucial part f educatin. Only by strengthening ur bdy can we better prtect ur cuntry and build ur mtherland. I hpe sincerely students can experience happiness in reasnable sprts.
Yurs,
Li Ming
2021年6月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假設(shè)你是啟明中學高三學生李華，收到外國朋友 Bil 的郵件，告訴你他準備開始學習漢語，現(xiàn)有兩門漢語課程供他選擇(課程信息如下表所示)，但他對課程選擇有些茫然，想聽取你的建議。給 Bill 回復(fù)一封郵件，在郵件中你必須:
1.推薦其中一門課程;

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【參考范文】
I can't be mre thrilled t hear that yu are ging t learn Chinese, and I'm really glad t ffer yu a helping hand. After cmparing the tw curses carefully, I suggest yu chse Chinese reading and writing. Here are my reasns.
First f all, this curse ffers bi-language learning. Given that yu have never made cntact with Chinese,having the class with cmpletely Chinese might be an bstacle fr yu With the help f yur mther language, I'm sure that yu will accept Chinese mre smthly.
Secnd,'Chinese reading and writing’ prvides a less intense learning perid. As a student, yu are likely t be busier at Mnday and Thursday, and yu may have mre free time at Friday. What's mre, lnger learning perid can als make yu better adapt t the Chines envirnment.
In cnclusin I strngly recmmend ‘Chinese reading and writing’ as yur first tuch f Chinese. Shuld yu have anther prblems, I wuld always be glad t help.
2021年1月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假如你是明啟中學的高三學生王佳，你學校的教師Lucy準備在高中開設(shè)關(guān)于“信息素養(yǎng)”（infrmatin literacy）的課程。課程包含以下四個板塊：“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計”、“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”、“辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ焙汀熬_搜索信息”。現(xiàn)在向全體同學征求建議。請你給她寫一份電子郵件，要求：
1.選擇兩個你感興趣的板塊；
2.說明為什么選擇這個板塊的理由。
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審題:
背景: 學校將要開設(shè)“信息素養(yǎng)”課程(infrmatinliteracycurse)
任務(wù):
作出選擇:(關(guān)聯(lián)性較強/自己有所了解的容易寫)
“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計”(web-design)a
“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”(big data prcessing)
“精確搜索信息”(smart-internet searching)
“辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ?infrmatin credibility evaluatin)
給出理由:(可以從興趣愛好、日常經(jīng)歷或社會現(xiàn)象寫起)“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計”:通過建立自己的網(wǎng)站來宣傳自己喜歡的事物
或者推廣一些公益性的活動，并且能夠在移動設(shè)備上瀏覽。
“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”:課題研究要做調(diào)查、或者對于一些社會現(xiàn)象想要了解更多，甚至作為大學專業(yè)方向提前學起來。
“精確搜索信息”:平時接觸到太多無效、誤導(dǎo)或營銷信息希望能夠省時省力、快速定位到自己需要的內(nèi)容。
d. “辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ?讀新聞報道或科普文章不能確定真實性，僅靠權(quán)威信息源和常識未必夠用(可以提疫情期間和社交媒體)。
參考范文：
Dear Lucy,
My name is Wang Jia, a senir 3 student at the schl. I’m deeply interested in the curse in infrmatin literacy that yu're planning t launch. S I’m writing this email t infrm yu f my chice f the tw sectins I'd like t learn abut, which are “smart internet searching” and “infrmatin credibility evaluatin”.
T begin with, I've based my decisin n the expectatin that the cmbinatin f the tw sectins can lead me t my desired results. It s, in my view, self-evident that searching fr the infrmatin I need and ensuring the authenticity f its cntent are intercnnected.
In additin, in tday's digitalized wrld and with the expansin f scial media, infrmatin is everywhere and misinfrmatin is prevalent. The challenge then is t separate fact frm falsehd，efficiently and effectively. Take practical preventive measures in the case f COVID-19 as an example——the general public can be easily verwhelmed by a hst f seemingly identical and ptentially false news reprts.
Cnsequently, if prperly instructed in the basic skills f using infrmatin technlgy, including hw t pinpint what I’m lking fr and t verily that what I've fund is valid, I may be better prepared next time when in urgent need f accurate infrmatin.
In a nutshell, in the hpe f imprving my infrmatin literacy level, I expect t learn mre frm yur curse abut the infrmatin wrld and the ways in which t safely navigate thrugh it with ease.
Thank yu fr yur time and have a great day. Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Best regards,
Wane Jia
2020年6月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
明啟中學的高三學生李華邀請王磊參加下周五郊外的露天音樂會，但王磊由于路遠，交通不便等原因猶豫不決，寫封郵件說服他一起去。信的內(nèi)容包括：
(1) 提出解決問題的方法；
(2) 闡釋音樂會的重要性。
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【參考答案】
Versin 01
Dear Wang Lei，
It's been a while since I heard frm yu. Last time, I invited yu t attend the cncert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Thugh yu did nt reply t me, the hesitatin wearing n yur face ffered me a glimpse f what was ging n in yur mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather r the terrible traffic that hinder yu frm making up yur mind. Hwever, as far as I cncerned, it's still wrth ur effrts.
This cncert is nt a pp music cncert but a classic music ne where several prestigius symphny rchestras will perfrm many well-knwn cmpsitins. It must be a feast fr all the audience. Mrever, chances are that we may have an album with perfrmers autgraphs n it. Yu shuld never miss such a fabulus cncert !
In terms f difficulties yu are wrried abut, I have already fund sme slutins. My father will be available n that day s that he can drive us t the scene. I have managed t persuade him t make his prmise. In additin, in case f a rainy day, I have prepared tw raincats. I am cnfident that we will indulge urselves int the elegant flw f ntes.
I am lking frward t hearing yur reply.
Yurs
,Li Hua
Versin 02
Dear Wang Lei,
I’m Li Hua. Having sent yu an invitatin t an utdr cncert fr sme days，I haven’t received yur reply. Are yu still hesitant t make a decisin just because the cncert will be held in the uter suburb which is nt s accessible t public transprtatin?
Hnestly speaking, transprt prblem is really nt a big deal. We can definitely find a way ut. If pssible, I can ask my father t drive me t the cncert, and certainly we can pick yu up as lng as yu make up yur mind t g there with us. In this case, there is n need t wrry abut the traffic.
T tell yu the truth, as a music lver like yu and me, this utdr cncert is really wrth ging t. Have yu seen its publicity materials? It reads that pp singers like Cheer Chen and music bands like Escape Plan will als perfrm at this cncert, where musicians, singers, sngwriters, music bands and music lvers like us will cntribute t and enjy a feast f music tgether. What’s mre, as senir three students wh have just finished the cllege entrance examinatin, we are desperate fr a chance t relax urselves and relieve ur enrmus pressure, and this cncert prvides us with a glden pprtunity t immerse urselves in ur pure jy fr music and rid urselves f the heavy academic burdens. Therefre, d nt hesitate, jin me in the cncert and let’s have fun tgether.
Since the utdr cncert is t be held next Friday, culd yu please tell me yur final decisin befre the end f this week? Really lk frward t yur early reply. Thanks.
Yurs, Li Hua.
Versin 03
Dear Wang Lei,
Hearing that yu are hesitating t attend the pen-air cncert held in the suburb next Friday due t the further distance and the incnvenience f transprtatin, I am writing t hpe that yu wuld like t jin us t enjy this fantastic music feast.
I really understand yur wrries and cncerns in regard t the tw aspects mentined abve. As fr the slutin, hw abut setting ut ne day ahead f schedule and taking public transprtatin with us t get there? In this way, nt nly can we relax urselves after stressful Gaka and explre sme ther wnderful places nearby, but als we can save mney t d smething mre meaningful. As fr the reasns, initially, we bth have great passin fr music and have determined t select classic music as ur majr in cllege. Whafs mre, I, undubtedly, believe that it is attending such grgeus live cncert that prvides us with a glden chance t enhance ur appreciatin f music, as well as cmmunicate and exchange ideas regarding prfessinal music knwledge with thse utstanding experts frm all ver the wrld. Additinally, immersed urselves in such beautiful meldies and agreeable atmsphere, we can escape frm the nise f the city temprarily and nurish ur inner-being t sme extent.
Hpe that yu will take my suggestins int cnsideratin and lk frward t yur reply.
Yurs
Lihua
Versin 04
Dear Wang Lei,
Having heard that yu are still n the fence abut whether t attend an pen-air cncert in the suburbs, Td like yu t refer t sme f my feasible advice and reasns befre yu turn dwn my invitatin.
Yu mentined what yu dreaded mst was the lng distance and lack f transprtatin, which was my initial cncern as well. In fact, after ding a cmmuting guide based n Baidu Maps, the traffic is nt as incnvenient as we previusly thught since there are subways available in the suburbs nw. Yu can jin me t create a mre detailed travel strategy and chse the ptimal rute. Mrever, preparing smething t while away the time in advance is suggested, such as a bk r a Switch. As Einstein put it, time speeds up when yu9re with things and peple yu like.
Fr me, this cncert means a lt. D yu remember we made plans t g t the cncert tgether during the winter break? D yu remember that it was ur mutual lve fr music that kept us talking the whle night lng? This is the cncert we9ve been waiting fr and I am cnvinced it matters t bth f us. Althugh, due t the epidemic, the cncert was pstpned and will be held utdrs in the suburbs instead, it’s just lucky fr us that this cncert wasn’t cancelled. This hard-wn pprtunity deserves t be cherished.
What d yu think? I respect any thughts yu may have, but if we can g t the cncert tgether, we can definitely have a great Friday night.
Best regards,
Li Hua
2020年1月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
你是明啟中學李華，看到電視臺有報道說很多超市有大量臨近保質(zhì)期的食物，針對這些食物如何處理想征集觀眾意見，你很有感觸遂寫信給電臺，表達想法，信件內(nèi)容包含：
1）對如何處理這些臨近保質(zhì)期的食品提出建議；
2）提出這些建議的理由。
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【參考范文】
T whm it may cncern,
Having watched yur recent reprt abut a huge stck f fd appraching expiry date, I’d like t ffer sme suggestins t help.
The Chinese New Year is arund the crner. Meanwhile, there are husing and railway cnstructin sites running rund the clck, where hundreds f migrant wrkers sacrifice their precius family reunin t meet the deadline. I suggest launching a New Year Purchasing Prgram fr these builders f Shanghai. Allwing them a special discunt n the fd in these supermarkets.
Shanghai culdn't have been such a cmmercial hub and financial center but fr the sweat these migrant wrkers shed. Thus they deserve sme favrable treatment fr their prime years devted t the city. Meanwhile, milk, bread, cffee and snacks are cnsumed by many, but are cnsidered dear by thse wh save every penny fr their faraway families. This prgram serves as a tken f ur lcals* gratitude, respects their needs and maintains the dignity f them, fr they can decide the amunt and srt f fd t buy by themselves. Last but nt least, it serves the need f supermarket managers as well. By n means can they find a mre meaningful and affrdable way t address this prblem.
I sincerely hpe my advice can help bth the super markets and the peple in need. Thank yu fr taking it int accunt.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
2019年6月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游雜志上，你發(fā)現(xiàn)了這樣一條信息：某古城景區(qū)對當?shù)厝耸召M5美元，對外國人收費15美元，針對這一情況，請你以李敏的口吻給該雜志編輯寫一封信，具體要求如下：
介紹一下你在雜志上看到的內(nèi)容；
針對此事自己的態(tài)度以及理由。
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Dear Editr,
As an hnest reader f yur travel magazine, I'd express my pinin that the ticket prices f the ancient city fr dmestic turists at 5 dllars while 15 dllars fr verseas guests. I strngly advcate the equal fare and my reasns are as fllws.
Firstly, it can attract mre turists and dminate the pening-up dmestic traveling market. Mre and mre verseas turists are willing t visit the ancient city, which brings mre cnsumptin and jbs. In turn, the ancient city can be prtected well. Anther, mre and mre researchers will have mre mney deeply-explring the histry f the ancient city and display the ld days with new technlgy. Therefre,we can appreciate the past beautiful scenery f the ancient city.
Based n what I state abve, the fair price will benefit mre turists and turisms. Nt nly it attracts mre turists but als displays its beautiful scenery. What matters mst is that it has a cmprehensive influence n ur present days and cnstructs new relatinship between humans and the envirnment f ancient city.
I will highly appreciate it if yu can reply t me as sn as pssible!
Yur faithfully,
Li Min
2019年1月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是明后中學的李華，你的朋友李楠給你寫了一封信，告訴你他要開發(fā)一個新的APP，用這個軟件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，給出理由（信的格式已給）。
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【答案】
Dear Li Nan,
Hearing that yu have develped a new app f students sharing clthes, I feel truly prud f yur nvel idea. Persnally speaking, I am willing t share my clthes n yur app. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, it will be wnderful fr me if I learn that smene that I barely knw f can share my happiness f wearing my clthes. It feels like yu are emtinally cnnecting smene in yur clthes. Then I may naturally wish t knw mre abut that particular “smene” and prbably further deepen ur relatinship. In the end, a gd friendship between me and my clthes mate might be built based n ur cmmn clthes. What’s mre, if ther students can try my clthes thrugh the app. In turn, I als can try their new clthes.
Therefre, students can wear different types f clthes withut actually spending any mney.
What’s mre imprtant is that sharing my clthes will take full use f them. In tday’s material sciety, there are s many parents wh prepare lts f clthes fr their belved children fr different ccasins, such as a dress fr the party, gym suit fr indr sprts. Mrever, the clthes can nly realize their true value after they are put n a persn’s bdy.
T summarize, sharing my clthes n yur app benefits thers and me.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封關(guān)于共享衣服觀點的書信。
【詳解】根據(jù)提示可知，本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封關(guān)于共享衣服觀點的書信，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。關(guān)鍵要點如下：①開發(fā)一個新的APP，用這個軟件共享衣服；②表示祝賀；③自己的觀點；④理由；⑤總結(jié)。
第二步：根據(jù)關(guān)鍵要點，確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：develp a new app（開發(fā)了一款軟件），share clthes（共享衣服），feel prud f（感到自豪），emtinally cnnect smene（情感上連接某人），realize their true value（實現(xiàn)真正的價值）等。
第三步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題以及句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，使之自然流暢，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面。
【點睛】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，內(nèi)容完整，過渡銜接嚴謹自然，符合書信的要求，其中不乏亮點句型。
定語從句的使用T begin with, it will be wnderful fr me if I learn that smene that I barely knw f can share my happiness f wearing my clthes.
名詞性從句的使用What’s mre imprtant is that sharing my clthes will take full use f them.
非謂語動詞的使用Hearing that yu have develped a new app f students sharing clthes, I feel truly prud f yur nvel idea.
2018年6月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假設(shè)你是明啟中學高三學生盧平，你校英語報向全體高三學生征文，題目為"My teachers"，你有意投稿，撰寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 對遇到過的老師進行分類
2. 具體描述每一類老師的特征
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范文1
I've been studying in MingQi fr three years, and it's time fr graduatin nw! During the precius three years, it's lucky f me t meet with all these perfect teachers.
First, the“friend-kind”teachers. They are usually rather yung and active. Cmpared with being a strict teacher I may be afraid f, they are rather be my friends. During the breaks, I will usually have a relaxing and causal cmmunicatin with them, the tpic f which may be beynd the subjects. They teach ranging frm basketball, entertainment and chess.
Secnd, the “parent-kind” teachers. They are usually in their frties and may have a child the same age as me. Viewing all students and their children, the “parent-kind” teachers are always patient and caring in bth study and mental and physical health. They will make the classrm a secnd hunt all students.
Third, the “culture-kind” teachers. Regardless f their age, they are always strict t us which gave us great pressures. Students are demanded highly in class, f curse the amunt f hmewrk arranged by them is always the largest.
Regardless f the kind f teacher all f them are the peple wh I appreciate and admire and lve.
范文2
In my previus 12-year study life I've met three types f teachers f them left me a deep impressin.
The first type is very strict. It was my primary schl math teacher. The first day I saw him, he made it a rule that all f us shuld put ur hands n the desk and if anyne f us dare t cpe thers’ hmewrk, He wuld tell ur parents. He was very strict but had a remarkable educatin effect.
The secnd type is very kind. It was my middle schl P.E. teacher. He was in his twenties. Despite the fact that he was the teacher, he played basketball with us every day. Mrever, he brught us ice-creams fr many times.
The last type is the teachers wh are just like friends. My senir high schl teacher all this type. Their class atmsphere was a rather active and every ne f us were ready t interact with them. We learned a lt f knwledge as well as made friends with them. They were als ready t pint ut us what the right rad is.
The third type teacher is the ne that every students want t have. But whatever the teacher's character is we shuld respect them because all teachers are eager t cultivate us.
范文3
On the path f pursuing knwledge, numerus teachers we have encuntered may have a lifelng impact n us, and even cntribute t shaping wh we are. Lking back n my schl life, my teachers can be generally classified int three types: dedicated, apprachable, and irrespnsible.
Dedicated teachers are mst ppular amng students nt nly because f their utstanding prfessinal knwledge but als because f their devtin t the career f teaching. Yu can expect mre than class time f them. They may have a face-t-face cmmunicatin with yu after class t enlighten yu with a tricky math prblem. They may sacrifice their family time t keep yu cmpany s that yu can smth yur emtinal prblem caused by yur wn family. Needless t say, mst teachers fall int this categry.
The secnd type f teacher may seem less qualified in terms f their teaching skills, but they can als easily win students’ hearts because they can be entrusted with ur deepest secrets. Childhd and adlescence are awkward perids when we struggle t explre ur wn way in the wrld. Our peers may be just as inexperienced as us while ur parents seemingly live n anther planet. S a friendly adult like apprachable teachers can be a life saver.
We tend t be careful when labeling a teacher irrespnsible, but they d exist. Sme f them may have temper issue, while thers may disregard their wn jb. One f my teachers fit the descriptin, wh was directly linked t my pr academic perfrmance during his stint.
In the future, as my learning cntinues, I will have pprtunities t meet mre teachers. Whereas, never will I frget the assistance frm my previus teachers r their passin fr knwledge.
2018年1月高考真題
II. Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假設(shè)你是明啟中學的學生王磊，你校計劃引進一個機器人擔任餐廳服務(wù)員或者圖書館管理員，并在英語貼吧征求學生意見，你很感興趣，決定回帖響應(yīng)，你所寫的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:
1你認為機器人適合擔任的一個崗位，二選一;
2通過比較，闡述你選擇的理由，可以從工作效率，服務(wù)范圍等方面進行表述。
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Dear headmaster,
S appealing (倒裝句)is yur plan t intrduce a rbt t ur schl that I decide t respnd t yur asking fr prpsals. Frm my perspective, a rbt is mre suitable fr the psitin f librarian.
With regard t the range f service, a librarian needs nt nly t classify different kinds f bks, put and find them in the right rder n the right shelf but als keep a recrd f what bks are brrwed and returned, while being a waiter in a restaurant invlves serving the right dishes t the right table, ding sme cleaning and cmmunicating with the diners. A rbt can accmplish three r fur librarians’ wrk f srting and labeling bks at the same time, whereas it is pale befre a man in cmmunicating and tackling the unexpected (unpredictable) ccasins.
In terms f wrking efficiency, a rbt may be mre efficient in ding the prgrammed, mechanical and repetitive kind f wrk. Therefre, it is mre advisable fr the rbt t undertake the duties f a librarian gruping cuntless bks repeatedly, thus cnsiderably imprving the efficiency f a human librarian. Hwever, when it cmes t the wrk f a waiter, wh needn’t wrk s heavily and fast as a librarian but d need react flexibly t the diners’ requirements, a rbt wn’t make a remarkable difference and even may nt be mre qualified than a man.
In a nutshell, it is the mechanical wrk f a librarian that the rbt is mre cmpetent at. Hpe that my advice will be f great help t yur decisin.
Wang lei
Technlgy is transfrming the wrld and rbtics is refreshing ur visin fr wrk. A recent BBS pst revealed that ur schl had been planning t intrduce sme rbts and sught students’ pinins. Sme students thught the rbts culd act as canteen servants while the thers recmmended them as librarians in the schl library. In my pinin, these rbts shuld be emplyed as e-librarians.
Frm the perspective f efficiency, the intrductin f rbts in the canteen may fail t make full use f them in that the prvisin f three meals a day is a highly regulated rutine, such as 6:30 t 8:00 fr breakfast. They can be idled away（閑置） fr the rest f the time. Cntrarily, the rbts in the library will be accessible t us at any time and even at any place if the rbt functins permit.
With regard t services, the rbt functins in the canteen are singular（單一的）, n mre than delivering meals in a splendid, autmatic and quicker manner, which will cnveniently cut labr expenses, the very aim f schl administratin. In the library, these e-librarians will prvide varied and favrable facilitatins, including instant, autmatic and accurate inquiry, exchange and delivery f bks. They are facilities f knwledge.
The rbts in the canteen will eventually evlve int an eye-catching shw f mechanical magnificence, but as e-librarians, their ptentials are fully tapped（實現(xiàn)）. In this sense, this applicatin essentially explains the cre f technlgy advancement: t liberate man frm til and serve peple in the deeper explratin f knwledge in a mre efficient and cnvenient way.

評析：文章開頭的動詞使用可謂準確而豐富，均為考綱中的基本詞匯，卻給人耳目一新的感覺，完全沒有生搬硬套“模板”的痕跡，這是本文的“與眾不同”之一。也是諸君在日常詞匯積累中要借鑒的地方---單詞跟著例句走，活學活用。
其實中間段落完全可以構(gòu)成另一篇佳作的核心部分。但由于本文入題篇幅較長，其他部分也都相應(yīng)拉長，但這兩段舉例和說理“長而不膩”，調(diào)理清晰，沒有重復(fù)“贅肉”。諸君在這里既要學到內(nèi)容上的“與眾不同”，也要時刻自省，自己的作品在結(jié)構(gòu)上是不是合理。
結(jié)尾是文章的又一亮點，作者指出：“人工智能和機器人的存在，是為了解放生產(chǎn)力，讓人類能夠有時間精力去探索新的知識?！敝黝}的升華是本篇范文的另一“與眾不同”。
從頭到尾，一氣呵成，詞匯使用沒有深奧難懂，但看得出作者是在認真、自信地發(fā)表自己的意見，融入了“王磊”的角色，站在學校管理層的角度來探討問題，think ut f the bx。
2017年6月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假設(shè)你是明啟中學的王磊，你校學生會即將組織一次徒步活動，并在校園網(wǎng)公布了如下方案，征求師生的意見。寫一封郵件給活動組織者，內(nèi)容須包括：
1.你認為方案中需要改進的地方及改進建議;
2.需要改進的原因。


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范文1
Hearing the news that ur Students Unin will rganize a walking prgram and has put the drafted plan n the Internet, I’m writing t air my thughts abut it as fllws.
T begin With, frm my pint f view, the time planned is nt apprpriate. As is knwn t all, the first day f May is the first day f hliday in China s that the center city f Shanghai is sure t be crwded n that day. S the date had better be pstpned till the weekend befre r after the hliday, thus ensuring that we students have a gd taste f beauty f Shanghai. Mrever, I hld the idea that the rute shuld be revised. Persnally, after appraching at the Bund, it’s nt a desirable ptin t g back accrding t the riginate rute. Instead, we students can g t ther places f interest t g back t schl, which guarantees a glden pprtunity f witnessing the beauty f Shanghai.
In a nutshell, all the abve thughts are based n my persnal perspective and there may still leave smething t be desired, but as far as my strng wish t cntribute t the prgram is cncerned, I wuld be much bliged if yu culd take my suggestins int accunt.
范文2
Having been infrmed f the news that ur schl unin is seeking ur prpsals n an excursin t the urban area in Shanghai, I am mirthful t share my wn pinins. Frm where I stand ,the excursin is an appealing an advisable plan but there are still much rm fr imprvement. I intend t accunt fr it in three aspects.
First and fremst, the theme shuld be mre specific in large part because discvering Shanghai is a generalized idea that hinders students frm fulfilling the task perfectly as required. Thus, the theme can be translated int discvering the traditinal charm f Shanghai, enabling students t have a better taste f the vigrus city where they have lived fr almst a scre years.
Furthermre, the time fr the excursin shuld be changed. It is mre apprpriate and mre secure fr the schl unin t rganize the excursin n May 2nd instead f May Day, a natinal hliday that attracts thusands f peple flding int Shanghai. On May 2nd, with visitrs returning t their cities and white cllars ging back t wrk, students wuld elude heavy traffic and take mre delight f the excursin in particular
Last but nt least, the rute shuld be shrter. Given time and safety prblems, skipping Peple’s Square and just walking frm East Nanjing rad t the Bund assist students in discvering the charm f Shanghai mre efficiently. Of particular nte, the Bund serves as a landmark in Shanghai and has recrded vicissitudes f Shanghai.
In a nutshell, the excursin gives students the pprtunity t have a better understanding f Shanghai and sparks their interest t enjy life. T much pressure has been placed n them but the excursin amunts t an ideal avenue t ease their stress.
2017年1月高考真題
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假設(shè)你是明啟中學的學生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假將赴英國參加為期兩個月的海外交流活動。如果選擇主辦方安排的住宿，他需要額外支付較高的費用。但他也可以通過為當?shù)厣鐓^(qū)養(yǎng)老院提供每月三十小時的義工服務(wù)，獲得在養(yǎng)老院免費住宿的機會，李宏通過郵件向你征求意見。寫一封回信，內(nèi)容須包括：
1、你對此事的明確態(tài)度；
2、你的理由。
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Dear LiHng,
Having heard that yu will participate in an verseas cmmunicatin activity in Britain which will last tw mnths, I’m nw writing t extend a helping hand, hping that my suggestin that yu shuld chse wrking as a vlunteer thirty hurs every mnth fr the lcal cmmunity nursing hme t gain an pprtunity t stay in it fr free may be beneficial t yu t sme extent.
There are three main reasns accunting fr my prpsal. First and fremst, nly by wrking as a vlunteer can yu attain a free stay. Apparently, in cntrast with the accmmdatin arranged by the hst, yu can save a substantial amunt f mney. In additin, staying at a cmmunity nursing hme, nt nly can yu be expsed mre t real life in sciety and enhance yur scial experiences, thus helping yu t get mre mature, but yur arrival will add clrs t the atmsphere and reduce the burdens there as well. Last but nt least, there is n denying that the interactin with the elderly can plish up yur scializing skills as well as raise yur awareness t cperate with strangers, which will cntribute t yur cmprehensive and crdinated develpment. As an ld saying ges, ‘We can gain bth things at the same time.’ S why nt chse it?
I genuinely hpe that yu will take my suggestins int cnsideratin. Best wishes that yu will have a gd time there. It is a glden chance fr yu in summer vacatin. In shrt, enjy yurself.
Yurs sincerely,
模擬練習（一）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
56．你校英文報正在開展以“Discvering Gd Bks”為題的討論，請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1.描述發(fā)現(xiàn)好書的方式；
2.簡單評論；
3.你的情況。
Hw d yu usually discver the bks yu read?
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Discvering Gd Bks
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【答案】 Discvering Gd Bks
Accrding t a recent survey n hw peple discver bks, wrd f muth is the mst ppular methd, with 38% f respndents citing it as their primary surce. This is fllwed by nline sellers at 22%, physical stres at 16%, scial media at 18%, and ther methds at 6%.
While wrd f muth recmmendatins are seen as the mst reliable, scial media and nline sellers prvide a wide variety f ptins and easy access t reviews. Physical stres ffer a unique brwsing experience.
Persnally, I rely n wrd f muth recmmendatins, but als brwse nline sellers and visit physical bkstres frm time t time t discver hidden gems.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文。要求考生使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并結(jié)合自身情況以“Discvering Gd Bks”為題寫一篇短文投稿。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
依據(jù)：Accrding t →In accrdance with
各種各樣的：a variety f → varius
就我個人而言：Persnally →As far as I’m cncerned
依靠：rely n → depend n
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Physical stres ffer a unique brwsing experience.
拓展句：It is physical stres that ffer a unique brwsing experience.
【點睛】【高分句型1】Accrding t a recent survey n hw peple discver bks, wrd f muth is the mst ppular methd, with 38% f respndents citing it as their primary surce.（運用了hw引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）
【高分句型2】While wrd f muth recmmendatins are seen as the mst reliable, scial media and nline sellers prvide a wide variety f ptins and easy access t reviews.（運用了while引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）
模擬練習（二）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
56．假定你是李華。你校英文報正在開展以“Hw t Make Hlidays Cunt”為題的討論，就學生一般如何度過假期展開了調(diào)查。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1.假期活動狀況描述；
2.簡單評論；
3.你的建議。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【答案】 Hw t Make Hlidays Cunt
As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend hlidays.
Surprisingly, students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 71%. 45% f students think the hliday is an ccasin fr them t relax themselves, ging ut t travel. T ur delight, the percent f the students ding husewrk is 15%. And 8% f the students chse t d sprts. The figures in the frm shw students attach great imprtance t study.
Frm my perspective, hlidays shuld be a meaningful time fr us students t enjy urselves r learn smething beynd the classrms. Taking part in sme scial activities is a gd chice fr us students t imprve urselves and make hlidays cunt.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文，要求考生使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文向校英文報投稿。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
顯示：shw→indicate
高興：delight→jy
重要性：imprtance→significance
參加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：T ur delight, the percent f the students ding husewrk is 15%.
拓展句：T ur delight, the percent f the students wh d husewrk is 15%.
【點睛】[高分句型1] As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend hlidays. (運用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2] Surprisingly, students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 71%. (運用了wh引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)
課程名稱
漢語聽說
漢語讀寫
課程內(nèi)容
日常會話
故事讀寫
授課安排
每周一、四
晚7:00-8:00；共8周
每周五
晚7:00-8:30；共16周
授課語言
全中文
中英雙語
主題
發(fā)現(xiàn)上海
時間
5月1日（周日）下午3點
路線
從人民廣場出發(fā)，途經(jīng)南京東路，到達外灘(the Bund)，全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民廣場。

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