外研版英語(yǔ)八下Module 8　寫作能力提升練課件PPT

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Module 8　Time offModule 8　寫作能力提升練? ?素材典藏短語(yǔ) have a picnic,the top of..., summer vacation,by train,places of interest,take photos,be famous for句型 1. Travelling can not only help us to gain knowledge about geography and history,but also help us keep healthy. 2. Travelling has now become more and more popular.3. Travelling will relax your mind and soul.? ?經(jīng)典例題假如你是玲玲，上周日你和父母去頤和園游玩。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示向你的同學(xué)們介紹一下頤和園和你們的游玩經(jīng)歷及感受。［審題指導(dǎo)］1.體裁： 記敘文　　　2.人稱： 第一人稱為主3.時(shí)態(tài)： 一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主［范文欣賞］My parents and I spent some time visiting the Summer Palace last Sunday.It is a lovely park in the northwest of Beijing. It’s only about fifteen kilometres from the centre of the city. It covers about 3 square kilometres. One of the famous sights is the Longevity Hill. My father drove us to the park that morning and it took us about 2 hours. We found that there were many people in the park. So we decided to climb up to the top of the Longevity Hill. When we got there， we had a clear view of the whole park.It’s a place worth visiting. I’m looking forward to visiting it again.? ?寫作實(shí)踐隨著人們生活水平的提高， 旅游成為同學(xué)們休閑放松的一種方式。去年暑假你和朋友去了湖南省張家界旅游， 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文， 介紹一下張家界并說(shuō)明你們的活動(dòng)情況。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)：80左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。?　I went to Zhangjiajie with my friend last summer holiday. It’s in Hunan Province. It’s about 　33　0 kilometres from Changsha. It’s very large. It’s famous for the strange shape of its tall rocks. Some of them look like humans while others look like wild animals.　?　I went to Zhangjiajie with my friend last summer holiday. It’s in Hunan Province. It’s about 　33　0 kilometres from Changsha. It’s very large. It’s famous for the strange shape of its tall rocks. Some of them look like humans while others look like wild animals.　　We climbed Mount Tianzi！ From the top we could see the lakes and forests. And we walked down the path after that. The next day， we went to Dongting Lake， the second－largest freshwater lake in China. We camped by a small lake in the evening. We really had a good time.　?　We climbed Mount Tianzi！ From the top we could see the lakes and forests. And we walked down the path after that. The next day， we went to Dongting Lake， the second－largest freshwater lake in China. We camped by a small lake in the evening. We really had a good time.　?一、話題分析本模塊的話題是談?wù)撀眯泻图倨凇Ｎ覀兛梢酝ㄟ^(guò)介紹名勝古跡來(lái)培養(yǎng)對(duì)自然風(fēng)光的熱愛(ài)。介紹旅游休假的經(jīng)歷。具體到書(shū)面表達(dá)中，要求同學(xué)們能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)來(lái)描述自己旅行的起因、經(jīng)過(guò)及感受等。二、寫作方法“六要素”法寫旅游經(jīng)歷類作文時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、交通方式、景點(diǎn)活動(dòng)、感受。三、素材積累1. 旅游經(jīng)歷類話題的常用詞匯：sights // by train // be famous for // in the northof // take photos2. 旅游經(jīng)歷類話題的常用句型：開(kāi)頭句1. Traveling is good for our health.2. ...is a great city with a long history.3. I’m having a wonderful time in...中間句1. Last summer I went to...with...2. There are many places of interest in...3. It’s famous for...It’s one of the...4. It’s about ...square kilometres.5. It’s in the east/west/south/north of...6. You can go there by...and it takes you about...7. We enjoyed many beautiful sights there, such as...結(jié)尾句1. What a pleasant outing it was!2. I hope everyone can enjoy himself during the travel.四、寫作任務(wù)根據(jù)提示，寫一篇內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。假如你是林濤, 上周日你和父母去北京頤和園游玩，請(qǐng)你向同學(xué)們介紹一下頤和園和你們的游玩經(jīng)歷及感受。開(kāi)頭已給出。提示詞：lovely park, find, decide, climb up to, foreigners...【寫作模板】【高分作文】My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Sunday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Sunday.It is a lovely park in the west of Beijing. It covers about 3 square kilometres. One of the famous tourist spots is the Longevity Hill. We got there by bus and it took us about 2 hours. We found that there were many people in the park. So we decided to climb up to the top of the Longevity Hill. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________When we got to the top, we could saw the whole park. There we met a few foreigners. They said that they liked Beijing very much. I was really proud of our city when I heard that.I hope the city will become more and more beautiful and people all over the world will come to visit it every year.