新高考英語復(fù)習(xí)：25 讀后續(xù)寫：助人類20篇-高考英語讀后續(xù)寫技巧與訓(xùn)練（新高考專用）新高考英語復(fù)習(xí)：-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

\l "_Tc17716" 第3篇避難所 PAGEREF _Tc17716 \h 7
\l "_Tc31754" 第4篇夜遇老人 PAGEREF _Tc31754 \h 10
\l "_Tc24485" 第5篇丟失的戒指 PAGEREF _Tc24485 \h 13
\l "_Tc26608" 第6篇救出小孩 PAGEREF _Tc26608 \h 15
\l "_Tc4972" 第7篇一封信和七美元 PAGEREF _Tc4972 \h 17
\l "_Tc27346" 第8篇遇到好人 PAGEREF _Tc27346 \h 20
\l "_Tc8772" 第9篇簡單的感謝 PAGEREF _Tc8772 \h 22
\l "_Tc8558" 第10篇創(chuàng)造愛，傳遞愛 PAGEREF _Tc8558 \h 24
\l "_Tc22558" 第11篇圣誕老人 PAGEREF _Tc22558 \h 26
\l "_Tc27002" 第12篇外科醫(yī)生的信仰 PAGEREF _Tc27002 \h 28
\l "_Tc24398" 第13篇拍照 PAGEREF _Tc24398 \h 32
\l "_Tc24967" 第14篇五十個金幣 PAGEREF _Tc24967 \h 35
\l "_Tc19312" 第15篇披薩店員工救人 PAGEREF _Tc19312 \h 39
\l "_Tc10466" 第16篇捐贈 PAGEREF _Tc10466 \h 42
\l "_Tc14391" 第17篇陌生人幫我修車 PAGEREF _Tc14391 \h 45
\l "_Tc26537" 第18篇特殊的駕車旅行 PAGEREF _Tc26537 \h 46
\l "_Tc944" 第19篇歸還雨傘 PAGEREF _Tc944 \h 50
\l "_Tc10356" 第20篇善意的力量 PAGEREF _Tc10356 \h 51
第1篇最后的心愿
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
I was respnding t a call frm a small brick flat in a quiet part f twn. I assumed I was being sent t pick up sme party-gers,r smene wh had just had a fight with a lver,r a wrker heading t an early shift at sme factry fr the industrial part f twn.
When I arrived at 2：30 a.m., the building was dark except fr a single light in a grund flr windw. Under such circumstances, many drivers just hnk（按喇叭） nce r twice,wait a minute,then drive away. But I had seen t many weak peple wh depended n taxis as their nly means f transprtatin.
Unless a situatin smelled f danger, I always went t the dr.
This passenger might be smene wh needs my assistance,I reasned t myself. S I walked t the dr and kncked. "Just a minute," answered a frail,elderly vice. I culd hear smething being dragged acrss the flr. After a lng pause,the dr pened. A small wman in her 80s std befre me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbx hat ,like smebdy ut f a 1940s mvie. By her side was a small nyln suitcase.
The apartment lked as if n ne had lived in it fr years. All the furniture was cvered with sheets. There were n clcks n the walls, n equipment n the cunters. In the crner was a cardbard bx filled with phts and glassware.
"Wuld yu carry my bag ut t the car？" she said. I tk the suitcase t the cab,then returned t assist the wman. She tk my arm,and we walked slwly tward the cab.
She kept thanking me fr my kindness. "It's nthing," I tld her. "I just try t treat my passengers the way I wuld want my mther treated."
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
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Having given me an address, a hspice , she asked. "Culd yu drive thrugh dwntwn?"

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We drve in silence t the address she had given me , and it…

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Having given me an address, a hspice , she asked. "Culd yu drive thrugh dwntwn?" Asked why we didn't take the shrtest way, the small wman tld me it was the last chance fr her t visit the city. We drve thrugh the neighbrhd where she and her husband had lived. Besides, she asked me t slw in frnt f a particular building r crner and wuld sit staring int the darkness, saying nthing. At last, she said she was tired and wanted t g t the hspice.
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we drve in silence t the address she had given me , and it was a lw building,where the ld lady wuld live the rest f her life. Tw nurses wh must have been expecting her came ut t the cab as sn as we pulled up. I pened the trunk and tk the suitcase t the dr and the wman was already seated in a wheelchair. When she asked hw much she wed me, withut thinking, I said nthing and bent t give her a bug . It was my assistance that helped ne f weak peple realize her wish.
第1段：
她給了我一個地址，一個收容所，她問?！澳隳荛_車穿過市中心嗎？”當(dāng)被問及為什么我們不走最短的路時，那個小女人告訴我，這是她去這個城市的最后一次機(jī)會。我們開車穿過她和她丈夫住過的社區(qū)。此外，她請我在某幢大樓或角落前放慢腳步，坐在那里盯著黑暗，什么也沒說。最后，她說她累了，想去臨終關(guān)懷醫(yī)院。
第2段：
我們默默地驅(qū)車前往她給我的地址，那是一幢低矮的建筑，老太太將在那里度過余生。我們一停下車，一定在等著她，兩名護(hù)士就上了駕駛室。我打開后備箱，把手提箱拿到門口，那個女人已經(jīng)坐在輪椅了。當(dāng)她問她欠我多少錢時，我什么也沒說，心想給她一個蟲子。是我的幫助，幫助一個弱者實現(xiàn)了她的愿望。
第2篇求職經(jīng)驗
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny Saturday afternn, Matt went shpping with his family. They filled tw shpping carts with lts f grceries that were enugh fr a whle week. Immersed in warm sunlight, they headed t the parking lt.
Suddenly, Matt caught sight f a strange man. Usually, it was cmmn t find sme hmeless peple utside a supermarket. At first sight, Matt thught he was just a hmeless guy, but there was smething different with him. He was sitting n a sleeping bag with multiple resumes neatly laid ut, alng with a sign that read “need wrk and fd.” The ld and pr clthes culd nt hide his ptimism and eagerness. The sign arused Matt’s curisity. Matt asked if he culd see his resume. The strange man hpped right up, handed ne t Matt plitely, and then started intrducing all abut his experience as if it were an interview. His name was Shawn. In fact, Shawn was a 52-year-ld frmer ck. Matt, in his thirties, als a ck, fund Shawn was a well-spken, cl and friendly guy wh knew exactly what he wanted and was ging after it. Shawn’s eagerness deeply impressed Matt.
Accustmed t seeing hmeless peple ask fr fd and r mney, Matt fund it surprising t witness a hmeless guy making effrts t find a jb despite difficult circumstances. The man in frnt f him lked nthing like a beggar in depressin. There was nt even a trace f self-pity in his eyes. Shawn’s effrts reminded Matt his situatins where he had nthing and had t bust his butt (努力) t get wrk and earn mney. Right nw and here, Shawn was ding what he had experienced, s Matt had a lt f respect fr Shawn. Matt bught him a bttle f water and sme sandwiches. Shawn tk with shyness. Then, Matt tk a picture f his resume t pst n Facebk, nt knwing if anything wuld cme f it.
Sn, smene came acrss Shawn’s pst and ffered him a jb as a ck at a small dwntwn restaurant.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
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Shawn was very excited and grateful fr landing a new jb.

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Tgether with Matt, Shawn decided t help mre peple like him.

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Shawn was very excited and grateful fr landing a new jb. S much did Shawn cherish this hard wn pprtunity that all his enthusiasm was clearly shwn in his daily wrk. Carefully and prfessinally,the energetic ck studied and imprved the menu, making great effrts t help the restaurant retain regular cnsumers thrugh delicius cuisine. With his life seeing a trace f sunlight, Shawn increasingly thankful, but the pr days cnstantly reminded him hmeless peple living in misery and wanting fr fd like him. S, he cntacted Matt and wanted t d mre.
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Tgether with Matt, Shawn decided t help re peple like him. Inspired by this special way f jb-hunting, they came up with the idea f helping mre hmeless peple with skills t find a jb thrugh preparing resumes and practicing interviews. Driving frm street t street, wherever they went and whmever they met, they shared their experience and planted seeds f dreams.Fr them, what brught them sense f achievement was nt just gaining appreciatin, but all the mre s helping hmeless peple rebuild self-respect.
肖恩非常興奮和感激找到了一份新工作。肖恩非常珍惜這個來之不易的機(jī)會，他所有的熱情都清楚地體現(xiàn)在他的日常工作中。這位精力充沛的廚師仔細(xì)而專業(yè)地研究和改進(jìn)了菜單，努力幫助餐廳通過美味的菜肴留住普通消費者。隨著他的生活看到一絲陽光，肖恩越來越感激，但貧窮的日子不斷提醒他無家可歸的人生活在痛苦和想要食物像他。所以，他聯(lián)系了馬特，想做更多。
肖恩和馬特一起決定幫助像他這樣的人。在這種特殊的求職方式的啟發(fā)下，他們想出了一個想法，通過準(zhǔn)備簡歷和實踐面試，幫助更多有技能的無家可歸者找到工作。從一條街到一條街，無論他們?nèi)ツ睦?，無論他們遇到誰，他們都分享他們的經(jīng)驗，播下夢想的種子。對他們來說，給他們帶來成就感的不僅僅是獲得贊賞，更重要的是幫助無家可歸的人重建自尊。
第3篇避難所
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I gt up at 4 am t receive a call frm my daughter wh needed my help t get hme frm the snwy muntain. After I helped her get a taxi, I nticed I was ut f cigarettes, s I went t the gas statin up the street t purchase sme. There I saw a yung man wrapped in a thin blanket, trying t keep ut f the snw. I went in and bught my cigarettes.
As I walked ut f the statin, this yung man asked me fr a cigarette. I pulled ut ne, gave him and left. I just went frward a few steps and suddenly I realized that I shuld d smething fr him. I returned and asked him if he wanted a ht cffee. Obviusly he culdn’t hide his eagerness t get ne and said “yes, please”. Again I went in the statin and bught him an extra large cup.
When I went back hme, the pitiful lk f the pr guy being ut in the cld flashed befre my eyes. Withut hesitatin I grabbed my warm cat and hurried t the guy. Helping him put n the cat, I tld him there was a shelter nearby where he culd ask fr help. I asked him t prmise me he wuld d it.
At abut 6 ’clck, I gt hme. Seeing my daughter arrive safely and get ready fr bed, I rested my heavy bdy n the sfa wndering abut the guy at the gas statin. S I made a call t the shelter and tld the nice girl n the phne that there was a guy ut in the cld. Tld that they had ne r tw beds left, I quickly gt int my car and drve t the gas statin.
注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
After I finally drve the guy t the shelter, he was very grateful.
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Ten years later, I received a strange call.
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【答案】After I finally drve the guy t the shelter, he was very grateful. I helped him get settled in a shelter, bught him sme fd and necessities, and kept sme mney. After making sure he wuld make it thrugh the winter, I drve away. I was s happy n the way because the pr guy was warm and cared fr. Wish him a gd life in the future. I didn't want him t repay me because it was just a piece f cake t me.
在我終于開車把那個人送到避難所后，他非常感激。我?guī)退谝粋€收容所定居下來，給他買了一些食物和必需品，還存了一些錢。在確保他能度過整個冬天后，我開車走了。我在路上很高興，因為這個可憐的家伙很暖和，很受照顧。祝他未來生活得很好。我不想讓他償還我，因為這對我來說只是一塊蛋糕。
Ten years later, I received a strange call. I didn't knw the number, and I didn't recgnize the sund. The man ppsite said, "D yu remember me?" I was embarrassed because I culdn't remember anything." Yu helped me thrugh a cld winter ten years ag." He said. I had a light. "It's yu. Hw have yu been?" I enthused. "I'm living a gd life nw and I dn't have t be hungry and cld anymre." It's warm t think f that winter," he said，“Thank yu fr helping me and giving me hpe. I have set up several shelters t help mre peple like me that winter, which I think is the best t repay yur kindness. "
十年后，我接到了一個奇怪的電話。我不知道號碼，也認(rèn)不出聲音。對面的人說，“你還記得我嗎？”我很尷尬，因為我什么都不記得了。”十年前你幫我度過了一個寒冷的冬天。”他說。我有一盞燈?！斑@是你的意思。你現(xiàn)在怎么樣了？”我很熱情?！拔椰F(xiàn)在過得很好，我不用再又餓又冷了。”想到那個冬天就很暖和，”他說，“謝謝你幫助我，給了我希望。那年冬天，我建立了幾個避難所來幫助更多像我這樣的人，我認(rèn)為這是最好的辦法來報答你的好意。”
【解析】
本文以人物為線索展開。“我”在十年前的一個冬天遇到了一個饑寒交迫的人，感到非常同情，所以給了他很多幫助，幫他度過了那個寒冷的冬天。十年后“我”接到這個人的電話，了解到他現(xiàn)在過得很好。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“在我最終開車送他去了收容所后，他非常感激我。”可知，第一段可描寫作者幫他在收容所安置好，他非常感激。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“十年后，我接到了一個奇怪的電話”可知，第二段可描寫作者和這個人相談甚歡，了解到這個人的近況并得知這個人建立了幾個收容所來幫助更多的人。
2.續(xù)寫線索：幫助安頓——回家——開心——接電話——相認(rèn)——感謝——回報
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①安頓好：get settled /settle dwn
②建立：set up /build
情緒類
①感謝：shwing his appreciatin/shw his gratitude/be grateful
②在意：mind ding/care abut
【點睛】
[高分句型1] After making sure he wuld make it thrugh the winter, I drve away.（動名詞作賓語）
[高分句型2] I have set up several shelters t help mre peple like me that winter, which I think is the best t repay yur kindness.（which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）
第4篇夜遇老人
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Kent was a manager f a furniture agency. His establishment nearly went bankrupt (倒閉）because f the wrng decisin he had made. He was s regretful and depressed that he planned t drive t a bar alne t release his emtins.
It was near midnight in an extremely cld winter, and the temperature was minus 9 degrees centigrade. There were few peple in the street. Suddenly, a figure f an ld madam entered his line f sight. She was standing sideways near a platfrm, dressed in a plain cat, dragging a suitcase, and hlding a plastic bag in the ther hand. The slight ld lady was seemingly mre than 80. She was trembling in cutting wind. Nw she kept mtining Kent fr a ride. Althugh Kent was smewhat angry abut the ld madam's disturbing，he wuldn't like t leave her in the cld night. He nticed she cughed vilently and thught that she might be ill and really needed help. S he braked near her.
The madam said, "Wuld yu please take me fr a ride? I can ffer duble fare. . . " Kent interrupted her, "I will charge yu nthing! Cme n!" The madam pinted t her luggage and said, "Culd yu put my suitcase int the car?" Kent stepped ut and put it in the trunk.
Kent prceeded t drive. He stpped at a petrl statin where he wanted t purchase gallns f gasline (汽油). During the interval they waited in a queue，the madam began her narratin, "Culd yu please send me t the charity huse in the suburbs? I want t send them smething. I had been given help there 50 years ag. The president and wrkers were all gd guys." She burst int tears，"Nw they've all passed away. The life was tugh at that time, but we all lved and cared abut each ther. I've held a desire t be back there again fr lng." Kent realized the madam was recalling a sectin f the gd missing days. A cmplicated feeling surrunded him, and he decided t cancel his plan and stay with the ld madam.
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After a tw-hur drive，they came t the gate f their destinatin.
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Hearing this, Kent lapsed int silence, because he knew the rest hme was fr patients with incurable diseases.
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【范文】
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After a tw-hur drive, they carne t the gate f their destinatin. It was quiet and dark. The dr f the charity huse was clsed and a weak light went thrugh the guard rm. Kent gt ff the car and rang the bell. An ld drkeeper came ut. Making clear why they came, they were invited in. The ld madam handed her suitcase ver t the drkeeper, inside it being clthes arid tys she cllected. Then they lked rund the huse and left. On the way back, the ld madam asked fr anther ride, "Please send me t the rest hme in the twn. sir."
開車兩小時后，他們來到了目的地門口。那里安靜而黑暗。慈善機(jī)構(gòu)的門關(guān)著，一盞微弱的光線穿過警衛(wèi)室?？咸叵铝塑?，按響了門鈴。一個老守門員走了出來。弄清楚他們?yōu)槭裁匆獊?，他們就被邀請進(jìn)來了。老夫人把她的手提箱交給了看門人，里面是她收集的衣服和玩具。然后他們環(huán)顧四周的房子，離開了。在回來的路上，老太太要求再騎一次，“請把我送到城里其余的家里。先生。”
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Hearing this, Kent lapsed int silence, because he knew the rest hme was fr patients with incurable diseases. "I have been seriusly ill fr a lng time and will sn die f lung cancer. I cme ut t say gdbye t my life. Nw I will have n regrets befre death. Thanks fr yur help!" The madam made an explanatin calmly, with a bright smile n her face. Kent remained silent fr a while. He was chewing ver what the madam said, and glad that he culd help her realize the last desire.
聽到這話，肯特就沉默了，因為他知道養(yǎng)老院是給不治之癥患者準(zhǔn)備的?！拔乙呀?jīng)得了重病很長一段時間了，很快就會死于肺癌。我走出來是要和我的生活說再見了。現(xiàn)在我在死前就不會后悔了。謝謝你的幫助！”夫人平靜地解釋道，臉上掛著燦爛的微笑?？咸乜こ聊艘粫骸Ｋ诮乐蛉苏f的話，很高興能幫助她實現(xiàn)最后的愿望。
【解析】
文章主要講述了Kent在寒冷的夜晚遇到了一個老人，并同意帶她郊區(qū)慈善機(jī)構(gòu)的故事。
續(xù)寫分為兩段。第一段的開頭是：兩小時車程后，他們到達(dá)了目的地的大門。所以可以接著寫：天色很暗，到處都很安靜，大門里的建筑里透出了微弱的光。Kent下車給門衛(wèi)說明情況后，門衛(wèi)讓他們進(jìn)去。老人把裝滿衣服和玩具的箱子交給門衛(wèi)。他們圍著建筑四處轉(zhuǎn)了一下，然后離開了。路上，女士要求Kent把她送到市里的療養(yǎng)院。
第二段的開頭是：聽了女士的話Kent陷入了沉思，因為他知道療養(yǎng)院是專門為那些有不治之癥的病人準(zhǔn)備的?？吹終ent的樣子，女士說:“我生了很嚴(yán)重病，已近是癌癥晚期，很快就到生命的盡頭了。今天我是去和從前的生活說再見的，現(xiàn)在，我沒有遺憾了。非常感謝你?！迸空f話的時候面帶笑容，絲毫看不出悲傷。Kent此刻覺得很感激，感激他能有機(jī)會幫助這位女士實現(xiàn)最后的愿望。
續(xù)寫時需注意情節(jié)要符合邏輯，基礎(chǔ)時態(tài)為一般過去時。
范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些高級表達(dá)，例如：The ld madam handed her suitcase ver t the drkeeper, inside it being clthes arid tys she cllected.中使用了獨立主格；The madam made an explanatin calmly, with a bright smile n her face.中使用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)；He was chewing ver what the madam said, and glad that he culd help her realize the last desire.中what引導(dǎo)賓語從句。這些表達(dá)的使用使文章色彩紛呈。
第5篇丟失的戒指
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The first thing Eileen Krey nticed when she gt int the car that Wednesday afternn in early May was a small diamnd ring in the tray(托盤)between the frnt seats. It hadn't been there befre. Weeks earlier, she had taken the car in t have the airbag replaced. The car belnged t her daughter and sn-in-law and she was helping them ut. Nw she was picking it up. That's when she saw the ring. Krey, 64, f Lake Osweg quickly cntacted her daughter and sn-in-law t ask if they were missing a diamnd ring r if any f their friends had reprted lsing a ring. They bth wrte back, saying they had n idea what she was talking abut.
Krey tk the ring t the service desk at the garage t ask if any wmen technicians might have left a ring in the car while they were wrking n it. The wman behind the cunter said nly men wrked n the cars.
Krey asked if the desk clerk culd get infrmatin frm the guy wh had replaced the airbag. Over a tw-way radi(對講機(jī)), Helbt said he'd placed the ring in the tray when it drpped t the car's flr after he pened up the steering clumn t replace the airbag. He was nt sure hw it gt there.
She knew a friend wh was a jeweler and stpped by t have her lk at the ring t see if it was real. Her friend said the diamnd, set in a white gld hand, was wrth$1, 200 and Krey culd easily sell it fr $500. But she wuldn't sell it. After making sure the ring didn’t belng t anyne in her family—r anyne at the aut shp Krey tracked dwn the first wner f the car using paperwrk she fund in the glve bx. Her detective wrk led her t a dealership in Beavertn, and the car's first wners：Daniel and Ashleigh Hannah. The Hannahs had purchased the small ring when they gt engaged and were saving mney t buy a huse.
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One Sunday afternn, they were driving t an event in their car but had t stp at the bank and use the ATM machine.
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The cuple searched the parking lt and the car fr hurs. Nthing.
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One Sunday afternn, they were driving t an event in their car but had t stp at the bank and use the ATM machine. Ashleigh, shwing her husband where t turn, gestured wildly with her left hand and felt the ring slip ff. Hwever, when searching the car carefully, they weren't able t find it. They figured it fell ut f the pen driver's side windw.
一個星期天日下午，他們當(dāng)時開車去參加活動，但不得不在銀行停下來使用自動取款機(jī)。阿什莉告訴丈夫去哪里轉(zhuǎn)，用左手瘋狂地做了個手勢，感覺戒指掉了。然而，當(dāng)他們仔細(xì)搜查汽車時，他們卻找不到它。他們發(fā)現(xiàn)它從敞開的司機(jī)側(cè)窗里掉了下來。
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The cuple searched the parking lt and the car fr hurs. Nthing. Later, back at hme, the Hannah has searched thrugh the car fr hurs. Nthing. Years later, Daniel bught his wife a much larger engagement ring. Finally, this mnth Krey made cntact with Daniel Hannah. They met, and as a reward fr returning the ring, she simply asked that Daniel send her a pht f the mment he surprised his wife with her lst engagement ring. On Mther's Day, Ashleigh's sn gave her the ring. It didn't fit and was much smaller than her replacement ring, but nne f that mattered.
這對夫婦搜查了停車場和汽車好幾個小時。沒有什么內(nèi)容。后來，回到家里，漢娜已經(jīng)在車?yán)锼阉髁撕脦讉€小時。沒有什么內(nèi)容。幾年后，丹尼爾給妻子買了一枚更大的訂婚戒指。最后，這個月，科瑞和丹尼爾·漢娜取得了聯(lián)系。他們見面了，作為歸還戒指的回報，她只是要求丹尼爾給她一張照片，這是他給妻子丟失的訂婚戒指的那一刻。母親節(jié)那天，阿什利的兒子把戒指給了她。它不合適，比她的替代戒指要小得多，但這些都不重要。
【解析】
文章講述了Eileen Krey在車修理后發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有一枚戒指，但是問了她的女兒和女婿，以及修理店的員工，他們都說不是自己的。后來她問了車的第一個主人，才知道戒指是他們的。
續(xù)寫分為兩段。第一段的開頭是：一個周末的下午，他們開車去參加一個活動，但當(dāng)時需要在路邊停下，去自動提款機(jī)上取錢。所以可以接著寫：丈夫取好錢后，妻子Ashleigh Hannah揮手讓他過來開車，因為動作太大，戒指從手指上滑落。但當(dāng)時他們沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)。第二段的開頭是：夫妻兩在停車場和車上找了很久。所以可以接著寫：他們什么也沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)?；氐郊液螅麄冇衷谲嚿献屑?xì)地找了幾遍，結(jié)果是一樣的。后來，他們不得不重新買一個訂婚戒指。當(dāng)Krey聯(lián)系他們時，他們才知道原來戒指掉在車?yán)锪?。見面時，Krey把戒指還給了Daniel，Daniel十分感激。他回家把戒指拿給妻子，雖然這個戒指比后來買的那個小得多，但是在Ashleigh看來兩個都一樣的珍貴。
續(xù)寫時要注意時態(tài)，續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容要符合邏輯。范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些高級表達(dá)，例如：Ashleigh，shwing her husband where t turn, gestured wildly with her left hand and felt the ring slip ff．中使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；They met, and as a reward fr returning the ring, she simply asked that Daniel send her a pht f the mment he surprised his wife with her lst engagement ring. 中that引導(dǎo)虛擬語氣的賓語從句。這些表達(dá)的使用使文章色彩紛呈。
第6篇救出小孩
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When his 13-year-ld sn came hme late frm schl last week，Jhn Mrrissette figured he had just gne n “ne f his usual walks”．It wasn’t until the next day that Mrrissette fund ut his intellectually disabled by, Michael, had been fund in a Winnipeg garbage bin as temperatures drpped t －15°C.
Mrrissette said his sn had been beaten by tw men，thrwn in the Dumpster and left t freeze. He was fund a few hurs later by a wman wh let him ut. “I was very angry with the guys wh wuld d this t my sn,” Mrrissette said in an interview Thursday. “Yu can see he’s a harmless child. He desn’t talk much. He keeps t himself and tw men have hurt him.”
The yung teenager wasn’t seriusly hurt, but Mrrissette said he’s nt letting him walk hme alne anymre. The father’s faith in humanity is a little shaken. Mrrissette said he culdn’t believe there are peple ut there wh wuld pick n a yung by simply walking hme frm schl. He’s nly been able t get bits and pieces f what happened frm Michael wh is “t scared t talk abut it”．
“We are sure we are living in a sciety that we all care abut ur children. But we feel s sad and angry with that. Fr the children like my sn！We can’t help them? We can’t prtect them？” said the father.
Nicle Langlis, wh wrks nearby, said that she heard weak cries fr help as she walked past the large garbage cntainer, but was nt sure where they were cming frm. S a few hurs later she went back again t the garbage cntainer and tried t find what happened. T her great surprise，she fund the by sleeping and cvered with garbage. “All he kept saying was, ‘Help. They pushed me in here,’” Langlis said. “I kept trying t talk t him and ask him wh he is and he didn’t talk back t me.” As sn as she helped him ut, he ran away and headed fr hme a few blcks away.
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“Wrds can’t describe hw grateful the family is t Langlis,” Mrrissette said.
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“Wrds can’t describe hw grateful the family is t Langlis,” Mrrissette said. “She’s my sn’s angel,” he said. “I thank her every day. She is s kind that she rescued my sn frm the garbage cntainer. And we have gained ur faith in humanity again.” And the family decided nt t let Michael walk hme by himself because they are afraid the bad men hurt him again.
“語言無法描述這個家庭對朗洛伊斯有多感激，”莫里塞特說?！八俏覂鹤拥奶焓?，”他說?！拔颐刻於家兄x她。她很善良，她把我兒子從垃圾桶里救了出來。我們再次對人類有了信心。全家人決定不讓邁克爾獨自走回家，因為他們擔(dān)心壞人會再次傷害他。
The family cntacted plice，wh are investigating. Michael is nt able t talk t the plice what happened t him r wh did this t him. The family is appealing t anyne wh might have seen smething. The family are sure there are many kind peple in ur sciety, where peple will take gd care f all the children，whether they are intellectually disabled r nt. The plice said they wuld try their best t find the bad men carrying ut such terrible actins and punish them.
這家人聯(lián)系了正在調(diào)查的警方。邁克爾無法和警察談?wù)撍l(fā)生了什么，也說誰對他做了。這個家庭吸引任何可能看到什么東西的人。這個家庭確信在我們的社會中有很多善良的人，人們會好好照顧所有的孩子，不管他們是否智障。警方表示，他們會盡力尋找那些實施如此可怕行為的壞人，并懲罰他們。
第7篇一封信和七美元
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Three years seems like a lng time t remember the name f a mere acquaintance. I have frgtten the name f an ld lady, wh was a custmer n the paper rutine my hmetwn when I was a twelve-year-ld and shy by. Yet it remains in my memry that she taught me a lessn in frgiveness that I shall never frget.
On a winter afternn, a friend and I were thrwing stnes nt the rf f the ld lady’s huse frm a spt near her backyard. The bject f ur play was t bserve hw the stnes changed t missiles (導(dǎo)彈,發(fā)射物) as they rlled t the rf’s edge and sht ut int the yard like cmets falling frm the sky. I fund myself a perfectly smth rck and threw it ut. The stne was t smth, hwever, s it slipped frm my hand as I let it g and headed straight nt fr the rf but fr a small windw. At the sund f brken glass, we knew we were in truble.
I was t scared abut getting caught that first night t be cncerned abut the ld lady with the brken windw in winter. Hwever, a few days later, when I was sure that I hadn’t been discvered, I started t feel guilty fr her misfrtune. She still greeted me with a smile each day when I gave her the paper, but I was n lnger able t act cmfrtably in her presence.
I made up my mind that I wuld save my paper delivery mney, and in three weeks I had the seven dllars that I calculated wuld cver the cst f her windw. I put the mney in an envelpe with a nte explaining that I was srry fr breaking her windw and hped that the seven dllars wuld cver the cst fr repairing it.
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I waited until it was dark, snuck up (偷偷地走近) t the ld lady’s huse.
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I waited until it was dark, snuck up(偷偷地走近) t the ld lady’s huse. I put the letter thrugh the letter sht in her dr explaining that I was srry fr breaking her windw. My sul felt cmfrtable. I culd have the frgiveness f me, and culd lk straight int the ld lady’ s kind eyes in the yard.The next day, I handed the ld lady her paper and was able t return the warm smile that I was receiving frm her. She thanked me fr the paper and gave me a bag f ckies she had made herself. I thanked her and went n t eat the ckies as I cntinued my rute.
我等到天黑，偷偷地（偷偷地走近）到老太太家。我把信放進(jìn)她門里的信里，解釋說我很抱歉打破了她的窗戶。我的靈魂感到很舒服。我可以得到我的原諒，也可以直接看著院子里老太太善良的眼睛。第二天，我把紙遞給了老太太，并回報了她那種溫暖的微笑。她感謝我拿來的紙，并給了我一袋她自己做的餅干。我感謝了她，繼續(xù)吃餅干一邊吃。
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After several ckies, I felt an envelpe and pulled it ut f the bag. When I pened the envelpe, I was surprised deeply. Inside were the seven dllars and a shrt nte that said, “I’ m prud f yu.”
吃了幾塊餅干后，我摸了摸一個信封，就把它從袋子里拿了出來。當(dāng)我打開信封時，我感到非常驚訝。里面有七美元和一張簡短的紙條，上面寫著：“我為你感到驕傲。”
第8篇遇到好人
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Many years ag, when I was fresh ut f schl and wrking in Denver, I was driving t my parents' hme in Missuri fr Christmas. I stpped at a gas statin(加油站)abut 50 miles frm Oklahma City, where I was planning t stp and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款臺), I said hell t an lder cuple wh were als paying fr gas.
I tk ff, but had gne nly a few miles when black smke pured frm the back f my car. I stpped and wndered what I shuld d. A car pulled up behind me. It was the cuple I had spken t at the gas statin. They said they wuld take me t my friend's .We chatted n the way int the city, and when I gt ut f the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrte him and his wife a thank-yu nte fr helping me. Sn afterward, I received a Christmas present frm them. Their nte that came with it said that helping me had made their hlidays meaningful.
Years later, I drve t a meeting in a nearby twn in the mrning. In late afternn I returned t my car and fund that I'd left the lights n all day, and the battery(電池)was dead. Then I nticed that the Friendly Frd dealership - a shp selling cars - was right next dr. I walked ver and fund tw salesmen in the shwrm.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
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I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me. I recgnized him at nce. the tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership. “ Hey, it’s yu! yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly. Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple. yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
我走進(jìn)商店，其中一個推銷員來找我。我立刻認(rèn)出了他。這兩名銷售員是老夫婦，他們是友好的福特經(jīng)銷商的老板?！昂伲悄懔?！”你曾經(jīng)幫助過我，記得嗎？我興奮地對他們說。是的，我們有！老人笑了，我們經(jīng)營商店是為了幫助更多的人。你知道，這讓我們的生活如此有意義！”
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it. they slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney. they tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
過了一會兒，他們很快就開了一輛小貨車到我的車前，發(fā)動了它。他們再次解決了我的麻煩，但當(dāng)我付錢時，他們不會接受我的錢。他們告訴我，當(dāng)他們一開始經(jīng)營商店的時候，沒有人花時間寫聲謝謝，但現(xiàn)在他們收到了越來越多的感謝信，他們真的很高興。
第9篇簡單的感謝
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A Simple Thank
I have been in the teaching prfessin mre than thirty years, and ne f the best teachers I have ever knwn was Mr. Rwe. I was lucky enugh t c-teach furth grade with him.
Mr. Rwe had infinite patience and understanding and I learned s much frm watching him. He culd perfrm miracles, like the ne her perfrmed with Steven, ne f the unhappiest kids I ever saw. Steven culdn’t stand schl. He didn’t like being picked last fr kickball. He didn’t like the kids wh raised their hands and knew all the answers, and mst imprtantly, he didn’t like himself.
The first day he walked int Mr. Rwe’s classrm, he ignred the ther students, lking angry and annyed, and slid int his chair, kncking a cuple f textbk nt the flr.
Mr. Rwe walked ver t him and tuched Steven’s shulder, but Steven pulled away. Nevertheless, Mr. Rwe welcmed him: "Hi, Steven. I’m happy yu are in my class. We are gnna have a great year." Steven lked arund the rm as if Mr. Rwe must be mistaken. N teacher in his right mind wuld want Steven t be part f his classrm.
S, while Mr. Rwe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day f schl, it seemed like Steven was angry and cnfused.
That day after classes, Mr. Rwe chse Steven t pitch the kickball at recess. "Hey, Steven," Mr. Rwe cmmented, "Yu are gd at pitching. Let me shw yu my secret trick." Mr. Rwe taught Steven ne f the tricks that nt a single kid culd perfrm. Steven learned fast and did quite well! Everyne cheered fr him!
After the kickball, Steven sat as clser t Mr. Rwe in classes as he culd. When a questin was asked, Steven lit up; he knew the answer! He raised his hands. When he answered the questin, his vice shk. Hwever, he gt the answer right! He said, with Mr. Rwe , his days f the furth grade prmised wnderful.
That is nt t say that every day went smthly, but it was evident that Steven grew t lve Mr. Rwe mre and mre with each passing day.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
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Time passed quickly that year, and befre we all knew it, it was the last day f schl.
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Many years later, Mr. Rwe and I were surprised when a handsme yung man walked int ur classrm, dressed in the Marine Crps(海軍) unifrm.
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Time passed quickly that year, and befre we all knew it, it was the last day f schl. Our schl had a very special traditin n the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving gdbye t the kids as the bused pilled ut with their hrns hnking. But n that particular day, Steven walked slwly t the bus, his head dwn, tears in his eyes. He barded the bus reluctantly, hesitated, and then ran back ff the bus t hug Mr. Rwe. “I dn’t want t leave yu.” He sbbed. With red-rimmed eyes, Mr. Rwe cmfrted him, “I will miss yu, t.”
那一年時間過得很快，我們還沒意識到，那是學(xué)校的最后一天。我們學(xué)校在最后一天有一個非常特殊的傳統(tǒng)。所有的老師都擠滿了人行道，向孩子們揮手道別，車上按著喇叭。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交車前，低著頭，熱淚盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，猶豫了一下，然后跑回來擁抱羅先生?！拔也幌腚x開你?！彼槠Ａ_先生用紅邊的眼睛安慰他說，“我也會想念你的?！?br> Paragraph 2
Many years later, Mr. Rwe and I were surprised when a handsme yung man walked int ur classrm, dressed in the Marine Crps(海軍) unifrm. The yung man std tall and prud. It was Steven! Mr. Rwe and I culdn’t believe ur eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rwe tightly! “I have cme back t schl tday just t say thanks t yu!” It is my hpe that every teacher is blessed with such an experience f a frmer student cming back t say, simply t say a very simple THANKS.
許多年后，當(dāng)一個英俊的年輕人穿著海軍陸戰(zhàn)隊（海軍）的制服走進(jìn)我們的教室時，羅先生和我感到很驚訝。年輕人驕傲地站著。那是史蒂文！Mr.羅和我簡直不敢相信我們的眼睛。他向他敬禮，緊緊地?fù)肀е_先生！“我今天回到學(xué)校只是為了對你說謝謝！”我希望每個老師都有這樣的學(xué)生回來說，只是說一句非常簡單的謝謝。
第10篇創(chuàng)造愛，傳遞愛
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It was a ht and wet day in July.I was driving t the lcal grcery stre because the heat had made my bananas g frm yellw t brwn vernight.My air cnditiner in my car was n high，but it still wasn’t cling me dwn. Suddenly, the car in frnt f me signaled that it was pulling ff.I pressed n the brakes and slwed dwn. Out f the crner f my eye I saw several teenagers standing in the summer sun.They weren’t playing, killing time, r hanging arund thugh.They weren’t drinking，smking, chatting, r lking at their cell phnes.They were wrking n a prch(走廊)．
I recgnized them immediately as ne f the church wrk camps. Fr mre years than I can remember these yung men and wmen have vlunteered their spring and summer vacatins t cme here and help repair the hmes f pr peple. I smiled when I saw them there sweating and wrking hard t d sme gd in this wrld.While the news headlineswere s full f murder，hate，and vilence in ur sciety，these yung peple were ding their best t share sme lve and light with thers.In my heart and mind I heard the wrds nce again：“I was hungry and yu gave me fd；I was a stranger and yu welcmed me；I was naked(裸體的) and yu gave me clthing；I was sick and yu tk care f me.”
There is s much gd we can d in this life.There are s many peple we can help.There is s much lve we can share.And as lng as there is life，there is mre t d.Whether it is repairing a huse，sharing a smile，ffering a hug，adpting a dg，visiting the sick，giving t charity(慈善)，praying fr thers，sharing a kind wrd，r ding any act f gdness，every single thing we d is precius in the eyes f peple.
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
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Nwadays lving each ther is a gd deed and cmmn in the sciety.
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Chse t lve，and yu will help thers.
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【答案】Nwadays lving each ther is a gd deed and cmmn in the sciety. Chse t lve，and yu will have jy.Therefre，learning frm what the yung men and wmen have dne，I take part in the church wrk camps n weekends，n matter hw cld r ht it is.What the teenagers have dne sets an example t me and changes my mind.Whenever I meet the peple in need，I rush t help them.如今，彼此相愛是一件好事，在社會中也很普遍。選擇愛，你就會有快樂。因此，從年輕男女所做的學(xué)習(xí)，我在周末參加教堂的勞改營，不管天氣多冷多熱。青少年們所做的事情為我樹立了榜樣，也改變了我的主意。每當(dāng)我遇到需要幫助的人時，我就會急于幫助他們。
Chse t lve, and yu will help thers. Hw d yu want t experience life？Will yu be mre kind？Begin with yurself. Realize that yu are pwerful and can create lve. Take care f yur thughts and feelings and make sure they can reflect the psitive aspects f yu.Yu can then devte this lve t peple and places arund yu.Yur lve becmes the lve ther peple feel.Be an angel and chse t live freely and jyfully. In this way, the sciety we live in will be better and better.選擇去愛，你就會幫助別人。你想如何體驗生活？你會更友善嗎？從你自己開始。意識到你是強(qiáng)大的，可以創(chuàng)造愛。照顧好你的思想和感覺，并確保它們能反映出你的積極方面。然后你就可以把這種愛奉獻(xiàn)給你周圍的人和地方。你的愛變成了別人所感受到的愛。做一個天使，選擇自由和快樂地生活。這樣，我們所生活的社會就會越來越好。
第11篇圣誕老人
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I remember my first Christmas adventure with Grandma.I was just a kid.
I went t twn n my bike t visit her n the day when my big sister tld me，“There is n Santa Claus，and even dummies knw that！”
My grandma always tld the truth，always.I fled t her that day because I knew she wuld stand n my side.
Hearing my stry，Grandma was ready fr me.“N Santa Claus？” she snrted.“Ridiculus! Dn't believe it.Such rumrs have been ging arund fr years，and it makes me mad，plain mad！Nw，put n yur cat，and let's g.”
“G? G where，Grandma？” I asked.We drve t Kerby's General Stre.As we walked thrugh its drs，Grandma handed me ten dllars.That was a bundle in thse days.“Take the mney”，she said，“and buy smething fr smene wh needs it.” Then she went away and waited in the car.
I was nly eight years ld.I'd ften gne shpping with my mther，but never had I shpped fr anything all by myself.The stre seemed big and crwded，full f peple scrambling(搶奪) t finish their Christmas shpping.
Fr a few mments I just std there，cnfused，hlding that ten-dllar bill，wndering what t buy and wh n earth t buy it fr.Then I suddenly thught f Bbby Decker.He was a kid with bad breath and messy hair.Bbby Decker didn't have a cat.I knew that because he never went ut t play during the winter.His mther always wrte a nte，telling the teacher that he had a cugh，but all we kids knew that Bbby Decker didn't have a cugh; he didn't have a gd cat.Yes，I wuld buy Bbby Decker a cat!
My eyes were fixed n a red cat which lked real warm and he wuld like that.
“Is this a Christmas present fr smene？” the lady behind the cunter asked kindly，as I laid my ten dllars dwn.“Yes，Ma'am，” I replied shyly.“It's fr Bbby.”
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
Paragraph 1：That evening，Grandma helped me wrap the cat in Christmas paper and ribbns.
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That evening，Grandma helped me wrap the cat in Christmas paper and ribbns.Grandma drve me thrugh the crwded street and finally we arrived at Bbby Decker's hme.Grandma tld me t knck at the dr.I laid dwn the present，kncked at the dr three times and quickly ran away t hide behind the tree nearby.Sn Bbby Decker came ut，lking arund. He fund the present and happily tk it hme.
那天晚上，奶奶幫我用圣誕紙和緞帶裹好外套。奶奶開車送我穿過擁擠的街道，最后我們到達(dá)了鮑比·德克爾的家。奶奶叫我去敲門。我放下禮物，敲了三次門，然后迅速跑開，躲在附近的樹后面。不久，鮑比·德克爾出來了，環(huán)顧四周。他找到了禮物，并很高興地把它帶回家了。
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Fifty years hasn't reduced the excitement f thse mments.I still remember hlding my breath when seeing Bbby Decker came ut t pick up his present.We waited until he went back.It was nt until then that I realized that Santa Claus was amng us.He did exist.It was ridiculus t think there was n Santa Claus in the wrld.I ften tell this stry t my children，telling them Santa visits us during Christmas time，when peple shuld shw kindness t thers.
五十年來并沒有減少那些時刻的興奮感。我還記得，當(dāng)我看到鮑比·德克爾出來拿起禮物時，我屏住了呼吸。我們一直等到他回來。直到那時，我才意識到圣誕老人就在我們中間。他確實存在。一想到世界上沒有圣誕老人就太荒謬了。我經(jīng)常把這個故事告訴我的孩子們，告訴他們圣誕老人在圣誕節(jié)來看我們，那時人們應(yīng)該對別人表示友善。
第12篇外科醫(yī)生的信仰
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Michelle was 5 years ld when she heard her mm and dad talking abut her little brther Jack, nly an infant (嬰兒). He was very sick and they were cmpletely ut f mney. Only a very cstly peratin culd save Jack, but there was n ne t whm they culd turn fr the mney needed. She heard her daddy say t her tearful mm, “Only a miracle can save him nw.”
Hearing the wrds, Michelle went t her bedrm and tk all the cins frm her little mney bx. After cunting the cins three times, she slipped ut f the rm and made her way t the drug stre 6 blcks away…
She waited fr a lng time befre the pharmacist (藥劑師) turned arund and asked her, “What d yu want?”
“Well, it’s abut my brther,” Michelle answered, “He’s really sick. And I want t buy a miracle.”
“I beg yur pardn?” said the pharmacist.
“His name is Jack. And he has smething very bad grwing inside his bdy. And my daddy says nly a miracle can save him nw. S hw much des a miracle cst?”
“We dn’t sell miracles here, little girl. I am srry, but I can’t help yu.” the pharmacist said.
“Listen, I have the mney t pay fr it.” With these wrds, Michelle pured ut all the cins frm her pcket.
At this time, a well-dressed man behind Michelle stped dwn stairs and asked the little girl, “I am selling the miracle yu want. Tell me hw much mney yu have.”
“One dllar and eleven cents,” Michelle answered in a lw vice, “That’s all the mney I have. But I can get sme mre if I need t.”
“Well,” smiled the man, “a dllar and eleven cents. The exact price f a miracle fr yur little brther. Shw me the place where yur brther lives.”
注意：
1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好。
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Hlding the man’s hand firmly, Michelle tk him hme.
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When asked why he chse t help the family, the man detailed.
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Hlding the man’s hand firmly, Michelle tk him hme. The little girl walked in such a hurry that she even frgt t intrduce herself t the man. Her parents were t surprised t believe their eyes. That well-dressed man turned ut t be a surgen, specializing in neural surgery. Later, the little brther was taken away. The peratin was cmpleted with payment f ne dllar and eleven cents. And it wasn’t lng befre Jack was hme again and ding well! Michelle was mre than happy. Nw she knew the exact price f a miracle: ne dllar and eleven cents, plus the faith f a little girl.
米歇爾緊緊地握著那個男人的手，把他帶回家了。小女孩走得很匆忙，甚至忘記向那個男人介紹自己。她的父母太驚訝了，不敢相信他們的眼睛。那個衣著考究的男人原來是一名專攻神經(jīng)外科的外科醫(yī)生。后來，這個小弟弟被帶走了。手術(shù)完成時只支付了1美元11美分。沒過多久，杰克就回家了，做得很好！米歇爾非常高興?，F(xiàn)在她知道了一個奇跡的確切價格：一美元十一美分，再加上一個小女孩的信仰。
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When asked why he chse t help the family, the man detailed. “When I was yung myself, I was nce in the same situatin as the little baby. The little girl reminded me f my wn sister. It was she wh saved my life. Deeply impressed by her inncence, I was determined t help the family ut f truble. It desn’t matter hw much mney she actually had with her. What matters is her faith, a faith in the existence f miracles.”、
當(dāng)被問及為什么選擇幫助這個家庭時，這名男子詳細(xì)說。“在我自己年輕的時候，我曾經(jīng)和那個小嬰兒處于同樣的處境。這個小女孩讓我想起了我自己的妹妹。是她救了我的命。我對她的天真印象深刻，我決心幫助家人擺脫麻煩。不管她到底有多少錢。重要的是她的信仰，一種對奇跡存在的信仰。”
【分析】
本文以人物為線索展開，一個小女孩聽到父母說弟弟病重，只有“奇跡”才能救弟弟，便把自己存的錢拿了出來，偷偷到藥店為弟弟買“奇跡”。小女孩感人的一幕正好被一名醫(yī)生看到，這位醫(yī)生為小女孩的弟弟做了手術(shù)。
【詳解】
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“米歇爾緊緊地握著他的手，把他帶回家”可知，第一段可醫(yī)生被米歇爾帶回家后發(fā)生的故事。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)被問到為什么他選擇幫助這個家庭時，他詳細(xì)地說了出來”可知，第二段可描寫醫(yī)生為什么會幫助他們。
2.續(xù)寫線索：回家——幫助——疑問——解釋——感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①走路：walk
②相信：believe
③完成：cmplete
④幫助：help
情緒類
①非常高興：be mre than happy
②決定：be determined t
【點睛】
[高分句型1] The little girl walked in such a hurry that she even frgt t intrduce herself t the man.(由such…that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)
[高分句型2] And it wasn’t lng befre Jack was hme again and ding well!(由befre引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)
[高分句型3] When asked why he chse t help the family, the man detailed. (由why引導(dǎo)的賓語從句及狀語從句的省略句)
第13篇拍照
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
I am a phtgrapher running a studi in the inner city. We are well knwn fr ur children's prtraits (肖像)，and we range frm high-end prtraits fr mdelling jbs t fun sibling phts and birth annuncements. We d a bit f everything； as such, we are extremely busy, and it states n ur website that we d nt accept walk-ins. We are usually bked up six mnths in advance. One day, ten minutes befre clsing, a mum walked in with a yung girl arund six r seven behind her. I internally sighed.
The mther said："Hell. I knw yu're clsing sn, but I have a special favur t ask.”
At that pint the little girl peeked arund her mther's legs and I was lst fr wrds. Under her thick winter cat and hat, she was skinny with huge dark circles under her eyes. Frm what I culd tell, she had n hair, and a tube taped t her cheek that fed int her nse. It was immediately clear this kid was very, very sick.
The mther said again, nearly teary. " My daughter saw ne f yur phts taped t the wall at the hspital. She really lves unicrns (獨角獸)and the pht had a girl phtshpped nt a hrse. I knw yu're bked up, and it's mnths befre the next appintment, but…”
At that pint she actually started crying. I realised that ur next available appintment was prbably way t far away fr this particular kid. The little girl squeezed her mther's hand. I am a very big guy with a beard, but I'm nt ashamed t say I needed a minute befre I spke.
I smiled and said with the sftest vice I had ever had ： ” Ahh, that's just fr regular custmers I I've been waiting all day t take a pht f smene as beautiful as yu! What's yur name, sweetheart?"
注意：
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請按如下格式作答。
I lcked the frnt dr and invited them t the changing rm,
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The mther thanked me ver and ver and came up frnt, hlding ut her credit card. .
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【答案】I lcked the frnt dr and invited them t the changing rm. I spent the next three hurs taking phts f this kid in every princess cstume I have in my clset. She was the sweetest, mst well-behaved kid I had ever wrked with. Once we were dne, she lay n the cuch in my ffice and fell asleep while I laded up the phts fr her mum t see and chse the nes she liked best.
我鎖上了前門，邀請他們?nèi)ジ率摇Ｔ诮酉聛淼娜齻€小時里，我給這個穿著我衣櫥里所有公主衣服的孩子拍照。她是和我共事過的最可愛、最乖的孩子。我們完成后，她躺在我辦公室的沙發(fā)上睡著了，我把照片裝起來給她媽媽看并選擇她最喜歡的。
The ther thanked me ver and ver and came up frnt, hlding ut her credit card. I refused t accept it, say: “I feel very hnred t take a pht f such a lvely angel. I’m nt taking mney fr this, but I hpe yu can allw me t put ne f her phts in ur shwcase, because she has the mst beautiful and warmest smile. Many years later that pht f a sick little girl n a giant pink unicrn is still in a frame in my shp, always reminding me t shw kindness t thse wh really need it.
另一個一遍又一遍地感謝我，走到前面，拿出她的信用卡。我拒絕接受，他說：“我感到很榮幸能給這么一個可愛的天使拍張照片。我不是在為此賺錢，但我希望你能讓我把她的一張照片放在我們的展示柜中，因為她有最美麗、最溫暖的微笑。許多年后，一張生病的小女孩戴著一只巨大的粉色獨角獸的照片還在我的商店里，總是提醒我對那些真正需要它的人表示善意。
【分析】
本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者是一名攝影師，在市中心經(jīng)營一家工作室，生意火爆，顧客不預(yù)約，就不接受其攝影訂單。一天，一個媽媽帶著生病的女兒來到作者店里，想要作者給女兒拍一張有獨角獸的照片。雖然媽媽沒預(yù)約，但作者答應(yīng)給小女孩拍照片。
【詳解】
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我鎖上前門，邀請她們?nèi)ジ率摇！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者幫助小女孩拍了很多照片，拍完后，小女孩累得睡著了，作者讓她媽媽選擇最好的照片。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“另一個人一遍又一遍地感謝我，然后走到前面，拿出她的信用卡。”可知，第二段可描寫作者拒絕接受錢，但希望放一張小女孩的照片在店里，這張照片提醒作者要對那些真正需要照片的人表示友好。
2.續(xù)寫線索：拍照——選照片——拒絕錢——請求——感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①拍照：taking phts / taking pictures
②睡著了：fell asleep / fell int a sleep
③拒絕：refused / rejected
情緒類
①感到榮幸：feel very hnred t / feel a great hnr t
②笑容：smile / smiling expressin
【點睛】
[高分句型1]. She was the sweetest, mst well-behaved kid I had ever wrked with.（先行詞是the sweetest, mst well-behaved kid，用了省略that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）
[高分句型2]. Many years later that pht f a sick little girl n a giant pink unicrn is still in a frame in my shp, always reminding me t shw kindness t thse wh really need it.（用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語，用了wh引導(dǎo)的定語從句）
第14篇五十個金幣
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Lng, lng ag, in a little village lived a humble(謙虛的) man named Ashwin. He went abut making ends meet by pulling a rickshaw(人力車) and transprting passengers frm ne destinatin t anther. Times were hard and he had t take the respnsibility fr supprting his family.
One day, while returning frm wrk, a man wh lked like a wealthy persn cming frm the city stpped his rickshaw. He quickly tld Ashwin the place he wanted t visit. His car had brken dwn and he desperately needed t get t the mentined address urgently. After an uneventful ride, they reached the destinatin, and the passenger paid the fare.
Ashwin, n returning hme, fund t his surprise that his passenger just then had drpped a small bag in his rickshaw. On pening it, he fund 50 gld cins in it. He shwed it t his family wh culdn’t believe their luck. His wife said with jy, “Thank gdness. Nw we find a slutin t ur prblems.”
That night, Ashwin culdn’t sleep. His cnscience(良心) kept trubling him. At the crack f dawn, he wke his wife up. He said, “Lalita, I think it’s wrng t keep smene else’s gld cins. I am ging t search fr the man and hand ver the cins t him.” Lalita was shcked and cried, but Ashwin stuck t his wrd. He tried hard t find the man, but nthing seemed t wrk.
Eventually when he was abut t give up, he saw that wealthy passenger. Ashwin ran t him and thrust(塞) the bag in his hand, “Sir, yu left this bag in my rickshaw. I have been lking fr yu since then and I am s relieved t find yu. Please take this,” he said.
注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150字左右。
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1;
The man was surprised.
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Paragraph 2:
Ashwin’s children then gt educated and did well.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
The man was surprised. He was tuched by Ashwin’s cnscience and said he wanted t meet his family. Ashwin tk the man hme and intrduced him t his family. The man lked at the pr cnditin f Ashwin’s huse and his children and tld Ashwin that he wuld like t help his family. Ashwin refused, but the man was insistent and said, “I wuld like t take the respnsibility fr educating yur children.” Ashwin culd nt refuse the assistance since he wanted the children t becme smene imprtant. He agreed t send them t the city.
那人感到很驚訝。他被阿什溫的良心感動了，說他想見見他的家人。阿什溫把他帶回家，并把他介紹給了他的家人。這名男子看著阿什溫的房子和孩子們的惡劣狀況，告訴阿什溫，他想幫助他的家人。阿什溫拒絕了，但這名男子堅持說：“我想承擔(dān)教育你的孩子的責(zé)任?！卑⑹矞夭荒芫芙^這些幫助，因為他希望孩子們成為一個重要的人。他同意把他們送到城里去。
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Ashwin’s children then gt educated and did well. Each vacatin they went hme t visit their parents. Ashwin ften reminded them, “Never d anything at the cst f smene else.” The children remembered the advice and fllwed it. Years later, they became successful. When the pr man’s children had children f their wn, they ften tld them the stry abut the small bag with 50 gld cins.
阿什溫的孩子們接受了教育，做得很好。每次度假，他們都會回家看望父母。阿什溫經(jīng)常提醒他們，“永遠(yuǎn)不要以犧牲別人為代價去做任何事情?！焙⒆觽兿肫鹆诉@個建議，并遵循了它。幾年后，他們?nèi)〉昧顺晒?。?dāng)窮人的孩子有了自己的孩子時，他們經(jīng)常向他們講述這個裝著50個金幣的小包的故事。
【分析】
這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。本文以人物為線索展開，講述了貧窮的Ashwin以拉人力車為生，一天一個有錢人乘他的車去某地時，把一個裝有50個金幣的包忘在了車上。妻子想把這些金幣據(jù)為己有，但Ashwin的良心過意不去，他決定去尋找失主。就在多次尋找無果，準(zhǔn)備放棄時，Ashwin看到了這個有錢人，并把包還給他。
【詳解】
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“這個人很吃驚”可知，第一段可描寫他被Ashwin的良知感動了，準(zhǔn)備登門道謝?？吹剿麄冐毟F的生活后，有錢人準(zhǔn)備給他們提供幫助。但被善良的Ashwin拒絕了。在有錢人的再三堅持下，Ashwin終于同意他幫助自己的孩子接受良好的教育。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Ashwin的孩子們得到了很好的教育，并且學(xué)習(xí)很好”可知，第二段可描寫Ashwin經(jīng)常教育孩子，孩子們也謹(jǐn)記父親教誨，并把他的事跡講給子孫后代聽。
2.續(xù)寫線索：吃驚——發(fā)現(xiàn)Ashwin生活貧困——提供幫助——拒絕——提出負(fù)責(zé)孩子教育——同意——孩子學(xué)成歸來——經(jīng)常教育孩子——孩子以父親為榜樣
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①幫助：help/d sb. a favr/ ffer help t sb.
②拒絕：refuse/decline
③拜訪：visit/ pay a visit t
④遵守：fllw/ bserve/ respect
情緒類
①感動：tuch/mve
【點睛】
[高分句型1] The man lked at the pr cnditin f Ashwin’s huse and his children and tld Ashwin that he wuld like t help his family. 句中使用that引導(dǎo)賓語從句。
[高分句型2] Ashwin culd nt refuse the assistance since he wanted the children t becme smene imprtant.句中使用since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。
[高分句型3] When the pr man’s children had children f their wn, they ften tld them the stry abut the small bag with 50 gld cins.句中when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句。
第15篇披薩店員工救人
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When the emplyees at the Dmin’s pizza place in Salem, Oregn, hadn’t received any rder frm Kirk Alexander fr mre than 2 weeks, they knew smething wasn’t right. Kirk was a lyal custmer and the staff all knew him. S it was natural that they gt wrried when they had n news abut him. Their cncern saved his life.
Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Dmin’s branch, said that Kirk, wh was 48 years ld, had been a lyal custmer since 2009. “He rders every day, r every ther day,” Sarah said.
Nrmally, his rder came up n the screen because he rdered nline. S we saw it came acrss the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s rder.” After a few days withut a single rder, Sarah and the staff started t wrry.
A few Dmin’s drivers had mentined that they hadn’t seen his rder cme acrss their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that n rder had cme in 11 days. S they decided t investigate.
Sarah decided t send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, t Kirk’s place. When he gt there, he immediately knew smething was wrng. While the lights and TV were n, Kirk did nt cme t the dr. Additinally, his phne went directly t vicemail. S Tracy immediately called 911.
Para.1:
When the plice arrived at the place,
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A few days later, Kirk was released frm the hspital.
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【答案】Para1: When the plice arrived at the place, they heard a cry fr help frm the inside f the huse. Inside, they fund Kirk, wh was in need f immediate medical help. Due t the quick actins f Tracy, Kirk is in stable cnditin at the Salem Hspital. The Dmin’s emplyees received a lt f praise nline fr their unbelievable thughtfulness. But they said that it was just part f their jb and they were just ding their jb.
當(dāng)警察到達(dá)那個地方時，他們聽到了來自房子里的呼救聲。在里面，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)了需要立即得到醫(yī)療幫助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行動，柯克在塞勒姆醫(yī)院的情況很穩(wěn)定。多米美牌的員工難以置信的體貼在網(wǎng)上受到了很多贊揚。但他們說，這只是他們工作的一部分，他們只是在做自己的工作。
Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released frm the hspital. He came t the Dmin’s persnally with sme hmemade ckies t say thank--yu t Sarah and the Dmin’s staff. The Dmin’s mentined that “Caring fr custmers shuld nt be taken at face value. We shuld remember that the custmers determine the success f ur cmpany and in turn we can als have an impact n their lives, small r big.” Kirk’s stry has made this pizza shp even mre ppular in the cmmunity, and it has received mre rders ever since.
幾天后，柯克出院了。他親自帶著一些自制的餅干來到多米諾餐廳，對莎拉和多米諾餐廳的工作人員說謝謝。達(dá)美樂牌提到，“照顧客戶不應(yīng)該有面子”。我們應(yīng)該記住，客戶決定了我們公司的成功，反過來我們也可以對他們的生活產(chǎn)生影響?？驴说墓适伦屵@家披薩店在社區(qū)中更受歡迎，從那時起它收到了更多的訂單。
【分析】
文章以人物為線索展開，講述了一個披薩店的員工，細(xì)心地發(fā)現(xiàn)近期沒有收到來自老顧客Kirk的訂單，于是派人前去查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)Kirk生病并及時報警就醫(yī)，確保了Kirk的安全。員工的善舉為披薩店贏得了更多的稱贊和訂單。
【詳解】
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)警察趕到現(xiàn)場時，”可知，第一段可描寫警察將Kirk送到醫(yī)院的經(jīng)過。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“幾天后，Kirk出院了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Kirk出院后去披薩店感謝員工們拯救了他的生命以及該披薩店因為善意舉動而為自己贏得更多的訂單和顧客。
續(xù)寫線索：呼救——成功被救助——感謝——店員表達(dá)觀點——披薩店更受歡迎
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①大聲求救：cry fr help /shut fr help /scream fr help
②受到贊揚：received a lt f praise / be praised greatly
③照顧，護(hù)理： caring fr/taking care f/
情緒類
①.感謝：say thank--yu / express appreciatin / shw appreciatin /shw his gratitude/be grateful
②.體貼：thughtfulness /being cnsiderate
【點睛】
[高分句型1]. Inside, they fund Kirk, wh was in need f immediate medical help.（由關(guān)系代詞wh引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞Kirk。）
[高分句型2]. We shuld remember that the custmers determine the success f ur cmpany and in turn we can als have an impact n their lives, small r big.（that引導(dǎo)賓語從句作remember的賓語。）
第16篇捐贈
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What started as a lnely graduatin day fr a teen in Alabama has turned int a priceless pprtunity t bnd with his teacher. Nw, that teacher is wrking t get that student a car that will get him started in his adult life.
On Thursday, Bessemer City High Schl held its annual graduatin ceremny. Dm Mre was ne f the teachers invlved in crdinating the event. After the ceremny ended, Dm was cleaning up. Nearly everybdy had left t celebrate with friends and family, but ne yung man was still sitting there by himself. “I knew his mds and I knew he wasn't himself,” Dm said. Nt knwing what t say at first, the teacher tld him, "I expect big things frm yu and it's ging t be OK.”
Dm assumed that smene wuld shw up eventually t give the graduate a ride hme. But nbdy did. When Dm ffered t drive him, the tw had n idea that this was t be mre than just a ride hme. The teacher decided t take him ut t eat-at any restaurant f his chice. They ended up at the Cheesecake Factry, and enjyed a hearty meal and dessert t celebrate the graduate's achievement.
At first, the tw were fighting back tears. But befre lng, they were having a great time tgether. Dm never asked why the by's family did nt attend the ceremny. What was imprtant t him was that the yung man felt appreciated fr what he had accmplished. Later that evening, Dm tk t Facebk t share a pht and sme thughts n the event. He says that he desn't nrmally pst abut these situatins, as they are all t cmmn in his prfessin, but that smething inside urged him t share this experience.
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Actually, Dm wanted t help the yung man.
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Dm thinks what these peple did set an example t us.
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【答案】Actually, Dm wanted t help the yung man. Dm shared his wish t raise mney fr the yung man in the pst. He hped smene may be a blessing t this yung man. Luckily, befre lng, generus peple, many f whm were strangers, sent mre than $5, 000 as dnatins. Dm tk him t pen a bank accunt with the mney. Dm wanted t help him buy a car, which can make his travel mre cnvenient. He als taught the man t save up t attend cllege ne day.
事實上，多姆是想幫助這個年輕人的。多姆分享了他想為這個年輕人籌集資金的愿望。他希望有人能祝福這個年輕人。幸運的是，不久，慷慨的人，其中很多都是陌生人，發(fā)送了$5000多人作為捐款。多姆帶他帶著錢開了一個銀行賬戶。多姆想幫他買一輛車，這會讓他的旅行更方便。他還教這個人有一天要存錢去上大學(xué)。
Dm thinks what these peple did set an example t us. Dm felt amazed that s many peple wuld help the teen. He has undubtedly raised much mney beynd his imaginatin. Dm thinks the stry will remind us f what is truly imprtant and give hpe t thse wh are struggling. We usually take life fr granted, but the stry shws us that there is always beauty in ur heart. Even thugh we have difficulties, at this mment it shws that mankind is gd.
多姆認(rèn)為這些人的行為為我們樹立了榜樣。多姆感到很驚訝，有這么多人會幫助這個青少年。毫無疑問，他已經(jīng)籌集到了許多超出他想象的錢。多姆認(rèn)為這個故事會提醒我們真正重要的事情，并給那些正在掙扎的人希望。我們通常把生活看作是理所當(dāng)然的，但這個故事告訴我們，我們的心中總是有美的。盡管我們有困難，但在此時此刻，它表明人類是好的。
【分析】
本文以畢業(yè)典禮為線索展開，講述了一位老師Dm，在學(xué)生畢業(yè)典禮上，遇到一名深陷困境，沒有父母來接的孤獨的畢業(yè)生，Dm努力幫助他，籌集資金，準(zhǔn)備給他買一輛車，讓他開始他的成年生活的故事。
【詳解】
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“實際上，Dm想幫助這個年輕人?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Dm想幫助他，籌集資金買車的經(jīng)過。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Dm認(rèn)為這些人的所作所為為我們樹立了榜樣?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Dm對好心的人們高度贊揚，以及感謝，并對人性善良感到欣慰。
2.續(xù)寫線索：幫助——籌集資金——買車——感謝——贊揚——感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①.幫助：help him/d him a favur/ give him a hand
②.籌集資金；準(zhǔn)備買車：raise mney / raise funds； buy a car fr him/get him a car
③.贊揚：praise/speak highly f/ cmmend
情緒類
①.感謝：shwing his appreciatin/shw his gratitude/be grateful
②.欣慰：shw us that there is always beauty in ur heart / shw that mankind is gd
【點睛】
[高分句型1]. Luckily, befre lng, generus peple, many f whm were strangers, sent mre than $5, 000 as dnatins. （由many f whm引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）
[高分句型2]. Dm wanted t help him buy a car, which can make his travel mre cnvenient. （由關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）
[高分句型3]. Dm thinks the stry will remind us f what is truly imprtant and give hpe t thse wh are struggling.（what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句和wh引導(dǎo)的定語從句）
第17篇陌生人幫我修車
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I am a frequent interstate traveler. I was brn in Ontari, Canada and thus all my family except my husband and children live there. S three times a year I make a trip nrth frm Gergia t visit. I ften travel by myself as my children are all grwn and my husband is wrking.
Tw years ag I went up in the spring and brught ne f my sisters suth fr a mnth t take away the pains f a lng winter. This year I did the same. It is interesting that many f my friends have said "Aren't yu scared?" r "What if yu break dwn?”. I always respnd that I have a lt f faith in the Lrd and in myself. My husband is a mechanic and each year gives my 230,000+ miles car a gd checkup. He will cme fr me if I need help.
Here is hw my miracle happened n Interstate 85 Nrth in Suth Carlina. Heading nrth t take my sweet sister f 63 hme t Canada, we were chatting away and I was driving 70 miles per hur in the third lane ver. Yes, the fastest lane. All f a sudden, I started t lse pwer. I said anxiusly I was lsing pwer and gt ver t the next and then the right lane, I was driving at abut 40 miles per hur when I gt t the first exit. I finally arrived at a Citg statin and pulled ff the rad.
I immediately called my husband and he didn't answer. I was thinking he never answered his phne. I called 2 mre times saying please answer the phne t myself. I was getting pretty upset thinking what I shuld d. I gt ut f the car and lked under it and smelled gas. Then* I checked the il and water. Luckily, bth were gd! My sister went int the gas statin and said t the clerk if he knew anyne wh culd help us and then said pray fr us as she made her way t the rest rm.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
? I was standing by my car when a man with brken English suddenly appeared. _________
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I thanked my rescuer and asked him if I culd pay him fr his help. ___________________
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3.答案：
I was standing by my car when a man with brken English suddenly appeared. He said if he culd he wuld help me. I said I thught there was a gas leak because I smelled it. He gt under the car, and 2 minutes later, he slid ut and said it was all fixed. He asked me t start it up and see if it wrked well. Actually, at first, I was a little skeptical. But I did as he said. T my delight and relief, my car did indeed rar t life and had pwer.
我站在旁邊，一個英語不好的人突然出現(xiàn)了。他說如果他能做到的話，他會幫助我的。我說我以為有煤氣泄漏，因為我聞到了。他鉆進(jìn)了車下面，兩分鐘后，他滑了出來，說一切都修好了。他讓我啟動它，看看它是否有效。事實上，一開始，我有點懷疑。但我還是照他說的那樣做了。令我高興和欣慰的是，我的車確實轟鳴著生活，而且有動力。
I thanked my rescuer and asked him if I culd pay him fr his help. He shk his head instantly and plitely refused my ffer. I thanked the nice man again and gave him a big hug. My heart was full and said he was a blessing in my life. His face lit up and had a beautiful smile. My sister and I were bth teary eyed and extremely grateful. There are s many stries f rudeness and unkindness t thers but I have been blessed many times by kind and helpful peple.
我感謝了我的救援者，并問他是否能付給他的幫助。他立刻搖了搖頭，禮貌地拒絕了我的提議。我再次感謝了那個好人，并給了他一個大大的擁抱。我的心充滿了活力，他說他是我生命中的一種祝福。他的臉亮了起來，露出了美麗的微笑。我姐姐和我都很流淚，非常感激。有很多關(guān)于對別人粗魯和不友善的故事，但我很多次得到善良和幫助的人的祝福。
第18篇特殊的駕車旅行
閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
It was smewhere between spring and summer, and my mm and I were driving thrugh the cuntryside. Back then, I was 13 years ld, and always felt unhappy with Mm. But little did I knw that this trip was ging t be a special ne.A pt f flwers sat in the back seat, whse heavenly scent filled the car.
Suddenly, in the middle f nwhere, my mm pulled ver. “What are yu ding?” I cried, fearing that the car had brken dwn and we'd be stuck there, s far frm hme. But that wasn't the case. My mm hpped ut f the car, grabbing the flwers frm the back seat. “It'll just be a
minute,” she called back thrugh the pen windws.
My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge f the rad befre settling n a little sign shwing that it was a nursing hme. I lked back t the building, smewhat annyed, as my mm reappeared, empty-handed.
Befre she started the car, curisity drve me t ask, “D yu knw smene there?” She shk her head.“Then what did yu d with the flwers?” She smiled slightly, “I gave them t the
receptinist.” “What?” She laughed at my cnfusin. “I tld the receptinist t give the flw-
ers t whever needed them, especially wh hasn't gtten any in a while.”
I kept silent fr a mment. Nt lng after we cntinued ur driving, I spke again, “Did yu leave
yur name?” T this she answered instantly,“N. Leaving flwers there fr smene wh will
appreciate them makes me feel gd,which is enugh f a thank yu fr me.”
Suddenly, still thinking abut Mm's deeds, I heard smething burst ludly. It was ur car that brke dwn! Nthing culd be wrse, because neither my mm nr I understd hw t repair it, and we didn't knw where the garage was. It als seemed impssible t wait fr any passer-by, since we had seen s few alng the way.
注意:
1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;
3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;
4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
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We were wrrying abut what culd be dne.
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As we drve alng,a flwer shp came int sight n the rad.

答案
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本文講述的是作者和母親的一次普通但又特殊的駕車旅行。當(dāng)時,13歲的作者處于青春叛逆
期,跟母親關(guān)系緊張,但這一次駕車旅行改變了作者對母親的態(tài)度,母親不求回報的送花行為讓
作者明白了“好人有好報”的道理,并且對母親有了更深的理解。
根據(jù)第一段的段首句,此段應(yīng)該是為了修車他們是如何尋求幫助的。但是為了和文章更好地
呼應(yīng),應(yīng)該從母親的送花行為為他們帶來了幫助入手。
根據(jù)第二段的段首句,本段應(yīng)著重敘述從修完車之后,作者他們重新上路的事情。根據(jù)看到花
店的信息,本段應(yīng)該重新回到買花的情節(jié)。
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We were wrrying abut what culd be dne. But after waiting in vain fr a cnsiderable time,
Mm and I decided t walk back the rad t the nursing hme and seek help. Gd knws hw far
we had driven! When we arrived, the receptinist was surprised, but warmly helped us cntact thegarage. There, the ld men wh had received the flwers were excited t meet us, talking abut
hw great that day was. It amazed me what randm actins f kindness culd mean t the peple
wh received it. While we were laughing and talking merrily, the garage gt ur car repaired.
我們一直在擔(dān)心能做些什么。但在等了相當(dāng)長的一段時間后，媽媽和我決定走回路上的療養(yǎng)院和尋求幫助。天知道我們開了多遠(yuǎn)了！當(dāng)我們到達(dá)時，接待員很驚訝，但還是熱情地幫助我們聯(lián)系了車庫。在那里，收到鮮花的老人們很興奮地見到我們，談?wù)撝翘煊卸鄠ゴ蟆Ｗ屛殷@訝的是，隨機(jī)的善意對接受善意的人意味著什么。正當(dāng)我們愉快地笑著說話的時候，車庫里修理了我們的車。
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As we drve alng, a flwer shp came int sight n the rad. I paced quickly int the flwer shp,
where a bunch f flwers glwing red in full blm caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect f kindness, I decided t send Mm the sweet flwers. Sn, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mm tried t cnceal her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her. Thrugh this trip, I discvered that, despite my ccasinal anger twards her, I actually felt prud f her. This was the trip f my life.
當(dāng)我們開車走時，路上看見了一家花店。我飛快地走進(jìn)花店，一束盛開的紅色花朵引起了我的注意。目睹了善良的影響后，我決定送給媽媽。很快，天上的氣味再次充滿了汽車。媽媽試圖掩飾她的興奮，但閃閃發(fā)光的眼淚沒有了。在這次旅行中，我發(fā)現(xiàn)，盡管我偶爾會對她生氣，但我還是為她感到驕傲。這是我生命中的一次旅行之旅。
精彩語句
1.精美詞匯
in vain徒勞,白白地 cntact v.聯(lián)系,聯(lián)絡(luò) randm adj.隨機(jī)的 catch ne's eye吸引某人的眼
球 feel prud f為……感到驕傲
2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)
ld men wh had received the flwers were excited t meet us,talking abut hw great that
day was.(wh引導(dǎo)定語從句,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)
It amazed me what randm actins f kindness culd mean t the peple wh received it.(It為形式
主語,what引導(dǎo)真正的主語從句,wh引導(dǎo)定語從句)
第19篇歸還雨傘
良好的人際關(guān)系和社會交往:(社會溫情篇：助人亦助己)(衡水中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期二調(diào))
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
I was a single mther in my 30s wh lived dwn and ut with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard t make ur needs meet.
One day, I headed t the dwntwn fr an interview, I sat dwn in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decrated with gld scrlls, amng which there was a name carved.
On impulse( 沖動) I determined t find the wner myself. I gt ff the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully pened the umbrella t prtect myself. Then I searched a telephne bk fr the name. I fund it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes,"she said in surprise, with extreme excitement. "It was my umbrella which had been stlen a year ag.”
S appealing was her pleasure that I frgt I was lking fr a jb and went directly t small huse. She tk the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with chking vice that the umbrella was given by her parents, nw dead. Her happiness at retrieving( 找回) this special pssessin was such that t have accepted her reward wuld have spiled smething, s I refused her ffer and left.
The fllwing mnths were hard. I can nly btain temprary emplyment, fr a small salary. What was wrse, I had just lst my last jb befre Christmas, with nly fifteen dllars left. Unless a miracle happened, I wuld be hmeless in January, fdless and jbless. I had prayed steadily fr weeks, and there had been n answer but this cldness and darkness.
The air was full f Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shuting in the bitter dusk f the evening. But there shuld be n Christmas fr me, I knew, n gifts,n remembrance whatsever.
Thinking f this, I culdn't cntrl my tears n my way hme, but I managed a smile s I culd greet my little daughter. She pened the dr fr me and threw herself in my arms, screaming jyusly and demanding desirably fr her Christmas gift. There I std, frzen verwhelmed by misery.
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Suddenly, the drbell rang and Peggy rushed t answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard a man talking heartily t her and went t the dr. He was a delivery man with his arms full f parcels. “This is a mistake”, I said, but he read the name n the parcels and they were fr me. When he had gne, I didn't knw what t d. Later, Peggy and I sat n the flr, lking at each ther. What a surprise! I searched fr the name f the sender.
突然，門鈴響了，佩吉沖去接，說一定是圣誕老人。然后我聽到一個男人熱情地對她說話，便走到門口。他是一個送貨工，手里裝滿了包裹?！斑@是個錯誤，”我說，但他讀了包裹上的名字，它們是給我的。他走了以后，我就不知道該怎么辦了。后來，我把佩吉和我坐在地板上，互相看著。多么大的驚喜?。∥宜阉髁税l(fā)件人的名字。
Suddenly, a nte attached t ne package caught my eyes. I picked up the nte, which read“Thanks fr yur returning f the umbrella. Merry Christmas!”It was sent by the lady. Hlding the nte tightly, I was n the verge f tears, with a stream f warmth spreading acrss my bdy. On the cld Christmas, I frgt I had n mney fr the rent and nly fifteen dllars in my pcket. We just sat in ur small apartment unwrapping the gifts ne by ne in happiness. A sweet peace flded int me like a blessing, which made me hpeful again.
突然，一個包裹上的一張便條引起了我的注意。我拿起紙條，上面寫著“謝謝你歸還雨傘?！笔フQ快樂！這是那位女士寄來的。我緊緊地握著紙條，快要哭了，一股溫暖響徹我的全身。在寒冷的圣誕節(jié)里，我忘記了我沒有錢付房租，口袋里只有15美元。我們只是坐在小公寓里，一個接一個地打開禮物。一種甜蜜的和平像一種祝福一樣涌入我的心中，這讓我再次充滿了希望。
第20篇善意的力量
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My senir year f high schl was an extremely busy ne. If I wasn't studying and wrrying abut my grades, I was taking part in multiple extra-curricular activities r attempting t make preparatins fr cllege.
Finally, as my senir year began t wind dwn, I gt a part-time jb at the lcal cafe.I had figured that the jb wuld be easy and, fr the mst part, stress-free. I pictured myself puring excellent cffee, making delicius cakes and becming clse friends with the regular custmers.
Wh I hadn't cunted n were the peple with great rders that chse t use the drive-thrugh windw, r the wmen wh felt that the cffee was much t creamy, r the men that wanted their iced cffee remade again and again until it reached a certain level f perfectin.There were mments when I was annyed with the human race as a whle, simply because I culdn't seem t please anyne. Nevertheless, I kept at it.
One miserable rainy day, I spent my afternn handing peple their rders and waiting as they slwly cunted their pennies. I tried t smile as the custmers cmplained abut the rain, but it was difficult t smile as they sat in their temperature-cntrlled cars with the windws rlled up while I dealt with huge drplets f water hanging frm my visr(遮陽帽舌). On tp f that, n ne was tipping. Every time I lked int my nearly empty tip jar, I grew mre depressed.
Arund fur 'clck, ne f my regular custmers named Hank came in lking depressed and defeated. My c-wrker and I asked what the prblem was and if we culd help, but he wuldn't reveal any details. He just said he felt like crawling int bed, pulling the sheets up ver his head and staying there fr a few years. I knew exactly hw he felt.
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Befre Hank left, I handed him a bag alng with his iced cffee. He lked at me
questiningly because he hadn't rdered anything but the cffee.He pened the bag and saw that I had given him his favrite type f cake. "It's n me. "I tld him. “ Have a nice day !” He smiled and thanked me befre turning arund and heading back ut int the rain.
在漢克離開之前，我遞給了他一個包和他的冰咖啡。他一直看著我。毫有疑問，因為他除了咖啡之外什么也沒點。他打開包，看到我給了他他最喜歡的蛋糕?！斑@就在我身上?！拔腋嬖V了他?！白＝裉煊淇?！”他笑著謝了我，然后轉(zhuǎn)身回到雨中。
Arund seven 'clck the next evening, Hank drve up t the windw. Instead f
Ordering anything, he handed me a bunch f flwers. He said nt t many peple tk the time t care abut thers, and he was glad that there were still peple like me in the wrld. I was very tuched and almst frgt what had happened n the previus day. I happily thanked him. As the day passed, I had plenty f cmplaining custmers, but any time I felt depressed, I thught f Hank and his kindness. I wuld smile, hld my head up high, clear my thrat and plitely ask, “Hw can I help yu?”
第二天晚上七點鐘左右，漢克開車走到窗前。而不是他點了任何東西，就遞給我一束花。他說，沒有太多的人花時間去照顧別人，他很高興在這個世界上還有像我這樣的人。我很感動，幾乎忘記了前一天發(fā)生的事情。我很高興地感謝了他。隨著一天的過去，我有很多顧客在抱怨，但每當(dāng)我感到沮喪時，我就會想到漢克和他的善良。我會微笑著，抬起頭，清清喉嚨，禮貌地問：“我怎么幫你呢？”

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