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第1篇 圣誕節(jié)禮物
Several years ag, I was living in New Yrk and wrking fr an airline, s I never gt back hme fr Christmas. My Christmas was happy t with sme ther clleagues arund. But in my heart I was sad because I culdn’t stay with my family. Smetimes my clleagues wuld say ur Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whle day ff, which meant I culd stay with my family n Christmas Eve.
When Christmas mrning came, I awke t a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad, Merry Christmas!”was all my yunger sn had time t say. He seemed t be racing against time. I knew he was hunting fr gifts with his brther eagerly. I gt dwn stairs just t see the tw little bys’ faces as they lked at the pcket rckets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was fr the children wh had deep belief in the amazing pwer f Santa Claus. At first,their fingers went almst shyly ver their tys. When their inspectin had been cmpleted, the tw bys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything int the center f the living rm.
Delight flded the rm. As their mther began giving ut gifts, I smiled t myself, wndering hw my unexpected gifts this year wuld be received. With s many Christmas spent utside, I had prepared s many gifts fr my children and tgether with my wife. I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they fund all f them. They were happily pening packages cnstantly thanking cnsiderate Santa Claus fr his kindness and ability t knw their desires. But I had nt received a single ne. I knew they had frgtten my existence with my absence frm their Christmas these years.
注意：
1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；
2. 至少使用 5 個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；
4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
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I had t admit that my disappintment was grwing steadily.


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Suddenly my wife walked up t me.

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I had t admit that my disappintment was grwing steadily. I was wndering whether I culd get a gift when my yunger sn ran t me, wh was really kind enugh t save my face. He asked me t admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chsen by Santa Claus. He said happily that he wuld share sme f the gifts f his and allw me t chse ne frm them. I thanked him frm the bttm f my heart, still feeling disappinted.
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Suddenly my wife walked up t me. It seemed that she had guessed hw I felt. She asked me t lk at the Christmas tree which was decrated with s many bxes. I think she was shwing ff her effrts n the decratin but she tk ff a small bx and passed it t me smiling and saying it was fr me. I pened it and saw a letter which read.“We will never frget yu. Merry Christmas!”Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight.I was mved t tears.
第1段：
我不得不承認(rèn)，我的失望正在增長(zhǎng)。 我在想，當(dāng)我的小兒子跑到我身邊時(shí)，我是否能得到一份禮物，他真的很善良，足以拯救我的臉。 他讓我欣賞他的禮物，他深信這是圣誕老人精心挑選的。 他高興地說，他將分享他的一些禮物，并允許我從他們中選擇一個(gè)。 我從心底感謝他，仍然感到失望。
第2款：
突然我妻子走到我面前。 似乎她已經(jīng)猜到了我的感受。 她讓我看看裝飾著這么多盒子的圣誕樹。 我想她是在炫耀她在裝飾上的努力，但她脫下了一個(gè)小盒子，微笑著遞給我，說這是給我的。 我打開它，看到一封信，上面寫著：“我們永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記你。 “圣誕快樂！”信下面是一只手表，它正高興地咔嗒作響。 我感動(dòng)得流淚。
第2篇 特別的鋼琴曲
“Where have yu been?” Steve cried. Brady stpped directly in frnt f him and started pushing him back tward the slpe they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the by’s jeans and pulled harder.The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of curse he remembered what his uncle had said abut Brady saving his life, but that had been a lng time ag.Was he still sharp enugh t get them thrugh this? Brady pulled again,urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.
Brady led them back dwn the slpe and int the trees. Several times the big dg stpped t get his escape rute. Often he changed directin. Hw lng they’d walked Steve had n idea. He just held nt Brady’s leash with ne hand and kept putting ne ft in frnt f the ther. He was almst numb when he heard the wnderful sund f rushing water. The river! With a yell the bys ran unsteadily frward until they jumped in cl, running water. “Brady,yu did it!”
Many years earlier, my mther knew that she culd nt send me t cllege and pay fr it. She wrked in a retail stre and made just enugh t pay the bills and take care f the ther children at hme. If I wanted t g t cllege, it was up t me t find ut hw t get there.
I fund that I qualified fr sme grants because f the size f ur family, my mm’s incme and my SAT scres. There was enugh t cver schl and bks, but nt enugh fr rm and bard. I accepted a jb as part f a wrk-study prgram. While nt attractive, it was ne I culd d. I washed dishes in the schl cafeteria.
Just when I thught I was ging t drp ut f my cllege career, an angel appeared. Well, ne f thse that are n earth, withut wings. “I heard that yu need sme help,” he said. “What d yu mean?” I asked, trying t figure ut which area f my life he meant. "Financially, t stay in schl.” “Well, I make it kay. I just have truble wrking all these hurs and finding time t study.” “Well, I think I have a way t help yu ut.”
He went n t explain that his grandparents needed help n the weekends.All that was required f me was cking meals and helping them get in and ut f bed in the mrning and evening. The jb paid fur hundred dllars a mnth, twice the mney I was making washing dishes. Nw I wuld have time t study. I went t meet his grandparents and accepted the jb.
My first discvery was his grandmther’s great lve f music. She spent hurs playing her ld, ff-key pian. One day, she tld me I didn’t have enugh fun in my life and tk it upn herself t teach me the art.Grandma was impressed with my ability and encuraged me t cntinue. Weekends in their huse became mre than just bks and cking, they were filled with the wnderful sunds f the ut-f-tune pian and tw very ut-f-tune singers.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
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When Christmas break came, Grandma gt a chest cld, and I was afraid t leave her.


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The envelpe was frm grandma wh had just passed away.



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When Christmas break came, Grandma gt a chest cld, and I was afraid t leave her. I hadn’t been hme since Labr Day, and my mther was anxius t see me. I agreed t cme hme, but fr tw weeks instead f fur, s I culd return t Grandma and Grandpa. I said my gd-byes,arranged fr their temprary care and return hme. As I was lading my car t g back t schl, the phne rang. “Grandma died last night, I’m srry.” I hung up the phne feeling like my wrld had ended. I had lst my friend, and that was far wrse than knwing I wuld have t return t washing dishes.I went back at the end f fur weeks, asking t begin the wrk-study prgram again. The financial aid advisr lked at me as if I had lst my mind. I explained my psitin, then he smiled and slid me an envelpe. “This is fr yu,” he said.
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The envelpe was frm grandma. She had knwn hw sick she was. In the envelpe was enugh mney t pay fr the rest f my cllege year and a request that I take pian lessns in her memry. Mved t tears, I determined t learn pian lesins by heart and my memry f grandma mtivated me t practice day and night. I dn’t think the pian piece was even played with mre feeling than it was my secnd year in cllege. Nw, years later, when I walk by a pian, I smile and think f Grandma. She is playing the pian smilingly in heaven, I am sure.
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當(dāng)圣誕假期來臨時(shí)，奶奶胸口感冒了，我害怕離開她。 自從勞動(dòng)節(jié)以來，我就沒有回家，我媽媽很想見我。 我同意回家，但兩個(gè)星期而不是四個(gè)星期，所以我可以回到奶奶和爺爺身邊。 我說了我的道別，安排他們暫時(shí)照顧，然后回家。 當(dāng)我正在裝貨回學(xué)校時(shí)，電話響了。 “奶奶昨晚死了，對(duì)不起?！蔽覓炝穗娫挘杏X我的世界已經(jīng)結(jié)束了。 我失去了我的朋友，這比我知道我必須回去洗碗要糟糕得多。 我在四周結(jié)束時(shí)回去，要求重新開始勤工儉學(xué)。 財(cái)政援助顧問看著我，好像我瘋了似的。 我解釋了我的立場(chǎng)，然后他笑了笑，遞給我一個(gè)信封。 “這是給你的，”他說。
第2段
那個(gè)信封是從奶奶那里寄來的。她已經(jīng)知道自己病得有多厲害了。信封里有足夠的錢來支付我大學(xué)剩下的時(shí)間，并要求我為她上鋼琴課。我哭了，決心用心學(xué)習(xí)鋼琴損傷，我對(duì)奶奶的記憶激勵(lì)我日夜練習(xí)。我甚至不認(rèn)為這首鋼琴曲比我上大學(xué)的第二年更有感情。幾年后，當(dāng)我走過鋼琴時(shí)，我微笑著想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑著彈鋼琴的。
第3篇 與媽媽和解
Jenny was the nly child in her hme. She had a quarrel with her mther that afternn and she ran ut f the huse angrily. She culdn’t help weeping srrwfully when she thught f the sclding frm her mther. Having wandered aimlessly in the street fr hurs, she felt a little hungry and wished fr smething t eat, but it was nt even pssible fr her, since she had nthing with her. She std beside a stand fr a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy ding his business. Hwever,with n mney in hand, she sighed and had t leave.
The seller behind the stand nticed the yung girl and asked, “Hey, girl,yu want t have the ndles?”
“Oh, yes... but I dn’t have mney n me…” she replied.
“That’s nthing. I’ll treat yu tday,” said the man, “cme in.”
The seller brught her a bwl f ndles, whse smell was s attractive.As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nthing, actually I was just tuched by yur kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears, “Even a stranger n the street will give me a bwl f ndles,while my mther, drve me ut f the huse. She shwed n care fr me. She is s merciless cmpared t a stranger!!”
Hearing the wrds, the seller smiled “Girl, d yu really think s? I nly gave yu a bwl f ndles and yu thanked me a lt. But it is yur mther wh has raised yu since yu were a baby. Can yu number the times she cked fr yu? Have yu expressed yur gratitude t her?”
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shck; she remembered mther’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I nt think f that? A bwl f ndles frm a stranger made me feel indebted, but I have never thanked my mum fr what she has dne fr me.”
On the way hme, Jenny made up her mind t make an aplgy t her mther fr her rudeness as sn as she arrived hme.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
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Appraching the drway, Jenny tk a deep breath.

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A gentle tuch n her hair called her mind back.



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Appraching the drway, Jenny tk a deep breath. When she kncked at the dr, she fund the dr was lcked and her mther was nt in. Tired and sad, she sat dwn in frnt f the huse.“Where culd my mther be?”she wndered,“Was she still angry with me?”Again, the scene f the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness t her mther.Realizing that all the sclding frm her mther was due t the fact that her mther really cared a lt abut her, she felt rather ashamed,and tears began t rll dwn her cheeks.
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A gentle tuch n her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face f her mther.“Here yu cme! I’ve been lking fr yu,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny culdn’t help thrwing herself int her mther’s arms. “Mum, I’m s and thank yu fr all yu have dne fr me.” She expressed her sincere aplgy and great gratitude. Hearing this,her mther smiled patting her back gently.
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走近門口，珍妮深吸了一口氣。 當(dāng)她敲門時(shí)，她發(fā)現(xiàn)門被鎖著，她的母親不在。 她又累又傷心，坐在房子前面?！拔覌寢屧谀睦铮俊彼?，“她還在生我的氣嗎？”再次，爭(zhēng)吵的場(chǎng)景出現(xiàn)在她的腦海中。 她記得她對(duì)母親的粗魯。 意識(shí)到母親所有的責(zé)罵都是因?yàn)樗赣H真的很關(guān)心她，她感到相當(dāng)羞愧，眼淚開始從她的臉頰滾下來。
第2段：
她的頭發(fā)上輕輕的一碰，使她的思想恢復(fù)了。 她抬起頭，看到了她母親熟悉的臉?！澳銇砹?！ 我一直在找你，“她說，累了，松了一口氣。 珍妮忍不住把自己投入了她母親的懷里。 “媽媽，我很感激你為我所做的一切?！彼硎菊嬲\(chéng)的道歉和極大的感激。 聽到這話，媽媽笑著輕輕拍了拍她的背。
第4篇 一把小提琴
“Wanted: Vilin. Can’t pay much. Cntact…”
I rarely read the classified advertisements, s why did I ntice that ne? I laid the paper n my lap and clsed my eyes, remembering what had happened many years befre, during the Great Depressin when my family struggled t make a living n ur farm. I, t, had wanted a vilin.
When my lder twin sisters began shwing an interest in music, Harriet Anne learned t play Grandma’s pian, while Suzanne turned t Daddy’s vilin. Simple tunes became lvely meldies. My baby brther danced; Daddy hummed and Mther whistled. I just listened.
When my arms grew lng enugh, I tried t play Suzanne’s vilin. Oh, hw I wanted ne! But I knew it was ut f the questin.
One evening as the twins played in the schl rchestra. I clsed my eyes tight t capture the picture firmly in my mind. Smeday, I’ll sit up there, I vwed silently.
It was nt a gd year. At harvest the crps didn’t bring as much as we had hped. Yet even thugh times were hard, I culdn’t wait any lnger t ask, “Daddy, may I have a vilin f my wn?”
“Can’t yu use Suzanne’s?”
“I’d like t be in the rchestra t, and we can’t bth use the same vilin at the same time.”
Daddy’s face lked sad. That night, and many fllwing nights, I heard him remind Gd in ur family prayers, “… and Lrd, Mary Lu wants her wn vilin.”
One evening we all sat rund the table. The twins and I studied. Mther sewed and Daddy wrte a letter t his friend, Gerge Finkle, in Clumbus, Ohi.Mr Finkle, Daddy said, was a fine vilinist.
When Daddy received a letter frm Clumbus a few weeks later, he asked me,“Mary Lu, d yu want t g with me t visit Mr Finkle?”
He drve us t Clumbus and we came t a fine, ld huse. A tall man pened the dr. He and Daddy heartily shk hands, bth talking at nce.
“Mary Lu, I’ve been hearing things abut yu. Yur Daddy has arranged a surprise fr yu!” He picked up a case, pened it, lifted ut a vilin and started t play. The meldy surged and spke like waterfalls.Oh, t play like him, I thught.
Finishing the piece, he turned t Daddy. “I fund it in a pawnshp（當(dāng)鋪）fr seven dllars. It’s a gd vilin. Mary Lu shuld be able t make a beautiful music with it.” Then he handed the vilin t me.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
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I nticed the tears in Daddy’s eyes as I finally cmprehended. It was mine!


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I frced my thughts t the present and read again the advertisement.

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I nticed the tears in Daddy’s eyes as I finally cmprehended. It was mine! “It’s beautiful.” I said, barely breathing. I knew Daddy’s prayer, and been answered. Back hme, I practiced daily, feeling n tiredness. When I was ready t jin the schl rchestra, I trembled with excitement. Daddy and Mther smiled prudly in the audience ar their little girl wh held her cherished vilin fr the whle wrld t admire. The years seemed t tun mre Swift the. I packed my vilin in its case and stepped int the grwn-up wrld. Nurse’s training, marriage, bring up fur daughters filled my years. Yet nne f my children cared abut the vilin.
當(dāng)我終于明白的時(shí)候，我注意到爸爸眼里的淚水。 是我的！ “真漂亮。”我說，幾乎沒有呼吸。 我知道爸爸的祈禱，并得到了回應(yīng)。 回到家，我每天都練習(xí)，感覺沒有疲倦。 當(dāng)我準(zhǔn)備加入學(xué)校管弦樂隊(duì)時(shí)，我激動(dòng)得發(fā)抖。 爸爸和媽媽在觀眾席上驕傲地笑了，他們的小女孩拿著她珍愛的小提琴，讓全世界都?xì)J佩。 歲月似乎更迅速。 我把小提琴裝在箱子里，走進(jìn)了成人的世界。 護(hù)士的培訓(xùn)，婚姻，撫養(yǎng)四個(gè)女兒，充實(shí)了我的歲月。 但我的孩子都不關(guān)心小提琴。
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I frced my thughts t the present and read again the advertisement. Laying the paper aside, I went t find my vilin. And I dialed the number. Later that afternn, an ld car stpped in my driveway. A man in his thirties with a yung girl kncked n the dr. “I’ve been praying smene wuld answer my advertisement. My daughter wants a vilin s badly. ” He said, “Hw much are yu asking？” “Seven dllars,” I said. I handed the case t the girl. She pened the case and tuched the vilin lightly as it caught the glw f the late-afternn sun. The she threw her arm rund her smiling father.
我強(qiáng)迫自己的想法到現(xiàn)在，并再次閱讀廣告。 把紙放在一邊，我去找我的小提琴。 我撥了號(hào)碼。 那天下午晚些時(shí)候，一輛舊車停在我的車道上。 一個(gè)三十多歲的男人和一個(gè)年輕的女孩敲門。 “我一直在祈禱有人能回答我的廣告。 我女兒非常想要小提琴。 ”“七美元，”我說。 我把箱子交給了那個(gè)女孩。 她打開箱子，輕輕地摸了摸小提琴，因?yàn)樗蹲降搅讼挛缤硇r(shí)候的陽(yáng)光。 她用胳膊摟住她微笑的父親。
第5篇 特殊的面試
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完暢的短文。
I was lucky t have an interview with a famus internatinal bank after graduatin. I really appreciated this chance. S 1 spent a lt f time preparing very carefully I prepared fr all the pssible questins ahead. As a result, 1 gt the jb. While my classmates were still struggling t get a jb, 1 had succeeded in getting ne, which made me feel very prud f myself.
After ne mnth f hard training, Tday was my first day at wrk t shw the results f the training. I gt up as usual, but I decided t skip ding exercise as I did nt want t take the risk f arriving at the ffice late n my first day. I went thrugh my mrning rutine and spent a lt f time deciding what t wear. I definitely wanted t make a great impressin right frm the start. Finally, I settled n the white suit with a tie.
I waved t say gdbye t my mther and set ff cheerfully twards the bus stp. But l Saw a bus leaving the stp just as I turned arund the crner. Nw I wuld have t wait fr anther 15 minutes, even thugh time was very precius. I std there patiently. 15 minutes passed and then 30 minutes, and there was n sign f the bus. Nw what culd 1 d? I had t reach the ffice n time. I saw a mtrcycle appraching, but as I tried t stp it, the driver sped n withut even a glance. It was then that a car stpped near me and a man waved t me. He said, “Aren’t yu wrking at the bank at Nariman Pint? My ffice is in the same building. Can I give yu a ride?”
I was uncertain at first but then frced myself t get in as I was ging t be late. Gradually, I realized that we were nt n the familiar rute t my ffice. I asked the man t stp the car, but he did nt listen t me and tld me t shut up.
注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
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I had n ther ptin but t keep my muth shut.
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He tld me that he was my bss.
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【答案】
Paragraph 1.
I had n ther ptin but t keep my muth shut. I was scared. I didn’t knw what t d. I frgt all I had learned frm the training abut measures t deal with an emergency. But t my surprise, the man finally stpped the car in frnt f the bank building, after taking anther shrter rute. I didn’t expect that I wuld be able t reach the bank safely and punctually. I asked the man wh he was.
我別無選擇，只能閉上嘴。我很害怕。我不知道該怎么辦。我忘記了我從培訓(xùn)中學(xué)到的所有關(guān)于應(yīng)對(duì)緊急情況的措施。但令我吃驚的是，這名男子在走了另一條較短的路線后，終于把車停在了銀行大樓前面。我沒想到我能安全、準(zhǔn)時(shí)地到達(dá)銀行。我問那個(gè)人他是誰(shuí)。
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He tld me that he was my bss. All that had happened was just a test. Unfrtunately, I didn’t pass it. He said that if I was intelligent enugh t be selected and emplyed by an internatinal bank, I shuld nt have taken such a risk and trusted a stranger ffering a ride. Althugh I had prepared fr everything, I still lst the precius chance t wrk. Frm this experience, I realized that the thing that matters mst is whether yu can apply what yu have learned t yur jb. Mrever, success is nt nly in the interview, but als in the details f life.
他告訴我他是我的老板。所發(fā)生的一切都只是一個(gè)考驗(yàn)。不幸的是，我沒有通過它。他說，如果我足夠聰明，可以被一家國(guó)際銀行挑選和雇傭，我就不會(huì)冒這樣的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，信任一個(gè)愿意搭車的陌生人。雖然我已經(jīng)做好了準(zhǔn)備，但我仍然失去了寶貴的工作機(jī)會(huì)。從這次經(jīng)驗(yàn)中，我意識(shí)到最重要的是你是否能把你所學(xué)到的東西應(yīng)用到工作中。此外，成功不僅在于采訪，而且在于生活的細(xì)節(jié)。
【解析】
通過所給文章可知，作者畢業(yè)之后通過了一家著名銀行的面試，之后又通過了培訓(xùn)。準(zhǔn)備正式上班的這天，作者精心地做好了準(zhǔn)備，但是遲遲等不來公交車。這時(shí)，一輛私家車停在作者面前，車主聲稱和作者在同一棟大樓上班，可以載作者一程。猶豫之下，作者最終上了車。但是很快作者就發(fā)現(xiàn)車沒有開在往常熟悉的上班路線，作者意識(shí)到了危險(xiǎn)想要下車，卻得不到允許。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我沒有其他選擇只好閉嘴?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者意識(shí)到危險(xiǎn)之后的心理活動(dòng)和事情出乎意料的發(fā)展。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“他告訴我他是我的老板?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者在經(jīng)歷了有驚無險(xiǎn)的乘車之后發(fā)現(xiàn)，這只是老板對(duì)自己的入職考驗(yàn)，作者也因?yàn)檩p易相信陌生人而沒能得到最后的工作機(jī)會(huì)。
2.續(xù)寫線索：停車被拒——忐忑——出乎意料——考驗(yàn)——失去機(jī)會(huì)——感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①學(xué)習(xí)：learn frm/draw lessns frm
②處理：deal with/cpe with
③到達(dá)：reach/get t
情緒類
①害怕：scared/frightened
②吃驚：surprised/shcked
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]. I frgt all I had learned frm the training abut measures t deal with an emergency.（省略關(guān)系代詞的定語(yǔ)從句）
[高分句型2]. I didn’t expect that I wuld be able t reach the bank safely and punctually.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）
[高分句型3]. Althugh I had prepared fr everything, I still lst the precius chance t wrk.（althugh引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）
第6篇 一個(gè)玩具娃娃
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Shanti wanted the wden dll in Ramu’s ty shp and tld her best friend, Jdi abut it. Jdi wndered if she culd affrd it.
Shanti smiled. “I asked my mm if I culd make jasmine garlands（花環(huán)） and sell them at my aunt’s stand in the market.” Jdi thught it was a gd idea.
Early the next mrming, the girls met at the jasmine bushes utside Shanti’s huse. Delicate white flwers surrunded them with fresh scent. They picked blssms with their fingers and then sat under a mang tree, tying up the flwers int garlands. Shanti culd already see herself hugging that beautiful dll.
“If we sell enugh garlands, we can each get a dll.” said Shanti.
Jdi shk her head. Her family was lw n mney that week. She had t use her mney t pay fr Kiran’s medicine. Kiran was Jdi’s little brther. Then Jdi picked up her garlands.“My mther is expecting me. I’ll meet yu at the market.”
Shanti spent the afternn selling garlands alne. By early evening, Shanti had sld all her flwers.
On the way hme, Shanti saw Jdi heading t the market with her garlands. She was late because she had t watch Kiran while her mther was away.
“Why didn’t yu take him with yu?” Shanti said.
Jdi shk her head. “He’s t sick t g ut. He cughs and cughs.”
Shanti knew Jdi wuldn’t make enugh mney fr the medicine nw.The market wuld be clsing sn.
Shanti lked at the purse tightly held in her hand. It was suppsed t be fr the beautiful dll she’d been dreaming f fr lng. Then she lked at her friend’s tired face. “Here. Keep this fr the medicine.”
That night Shanti cried, thinking abut the dll. What if smene bught it befre she’d saved up enugh again?
注意：
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
The next week, while Shanti and Jdi gathered blssms, Kiran came, t.
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Mm cmfrted Shanti with hugs, and then handed her a filled package wrapped in paper.
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【答案】The next week, while Shanti and Jdi gathered blssms, Kiran came, t. The medicine had cured his cugh, and he helped them sell ut all the garlands. When parting, Jdi said, “Shanti, we have prepared smething fr yu.” But Shanti was s anxius that she didn’t seem t have time t hear them ut. She quickly ran t Ramu’s shp, nly t find the dllhad been sld. Brken-hearted, she ran back hme and tld Mm everything, tears flwing dwn in fld.
接下來的一個(gè)星期，當(dāng)香蒂和喬迪一起開花時(shí)，基蘭也來了。藥已經(jīng)治好了他的咳嗽，他幫他們賣掉了所有的花環(huán)。分手時(shí)，喬迪說：“尚蒂，我們?yōu)槟銣?zhǔn)備了什么。但是尚蒂非常焦慮，似乎沒有時(shí)間聽他們的話。她很快跑到拉穆的商店，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)玩具已經(jīng)賣掉了。她傷心，跑回家，把一切都告訴了媽媽，眼淚流下來。
Mm cmfrted Shanti with hugs, and then handed her a filled package wrapped in paper. “Jdi drpped this ff fr yu, dear.” Shanti was surprised and unwrapped it. It was the dll! Als, she fund a nte n the back f the dll: Fr ur dearest friend, Shanti. Nthing can express ur deepest gratitude fr yur purest heart. Yur sincere friendship will bethe mst invaluable treasure fr ur family. - Frm Jdi and Kiran. Shanti smiled. Hugging the dll, she felt s blessed abut everything that happened.
媽媽擁抱著安慰尚蒂，然后遞給她一個(gè)用紙包裝的填充包裹?！皢痰习涯惴畔铝耍H愛的。香蒂很驚訝，把它打開了。那就是那個(gè)洋娃娃！此外，她在娃娃的背面發(fā)現(xiàn)了一張紙條：給我們最親愛的朋友香蒂。沒有什么能表達(dá)我們對(duì)你最純潔的心的最深切的感激。您真誠(chéng)的友誼將是我們家最寶貴的財(cái)富。-來自喬迪和基蘭。香蒂笑了。她抱著娃娃，對(duì)發(fā)生的一切感到很幸運(yùn)。
【解析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Shanti很喜歡Ramu商店的一個(gè)玩具娃娃，決定和朋友Jdi一起編茉莉花環(huán)賺錢，Jdi家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù)，她要把賺的錢給生病的弟弟Kiran買藥。但是Jdi因?yàn)樵诩艺疹櫳〉牡艿苠e(cuò)過了時(shí)間，無法賣掉她的花環(huán)，Shandi便把自己賺的錢給了Jdi。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二個(gè)星期，當(dāng)Shanti和Jdi在采花時(shí)，Kiran也來了。”可知，第一段可描寫Kiran病好了來幫助她們賣掉花環(huán)，Jdi打算送東西給Shandi，但是Shandi急著趕往商店買玩具娃娃，結(jié)果卻發(fā)現(xiàn)娃娃被賣掉了，Shandi很傷心。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“媽媽給了Shanti一個(gè)擁抱來安慰她，然后遞給她一個(gè)用紙包著的包裹?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Shandi收到了Jdi的禮物，打開后看到竟然是玩具娃娃，Shandi感到很幸福。
2.續(xù)寫線索：
Jdi準(zhǔn)備東西給Shandi——Shandi很焦慮，沒有聽完Jdi說的話——Shandi匆忙趕往商店——玩具娃娃被賣掉了——Shandi感到很傷心——Shandi打開包裹——感到驚訝——Jdi表達(dá)感激
3.詞匯激活
行為類
準(zhǔn)備：prepare/make preparatins fr
聽完：hear sb. ut/listen t the end
匆忙趕往：quickly run t/hurry t
賣掉：sell ut/sell ff
表達(dá)感激：express ne’s gratitude/shw appreciatin
打開：unwrap/pen up
情緒類
焦慮的：anxius/restless
傷心的：brken-hearted/sad
驚訝的：surprised/amazed
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]
She quickly ran t Ramu’s shp, nly t find the dll had been sld.（動(dòng)詞不定式t find作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)）
[高分句型2]
she ran back hme and tld Mm everything, tears flwing dwn in fld.（tears flwing dwn in fld.為獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語(yǔ)）
第7篇 姐弟重逢
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One day, I fund a wallet n the street. The wallet cntained nly three dllars and a very ld letter. The envelpe was wrn and the nly thing n it was the return address. I started t pen the letter, hping t find sme infrmatin. Then I saw the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The letter was written several decades ag.
Then I made every effrt and fund ut that Beatrice was nw wrking in a hspital. I shwed her the letter. The secnd she saw the letter, she tk a deep breath and said, “Yung man, this letter was the last cntact I ever had with Henry. He is my nly brther. I lved him very much. I was nly 16 at the time and my brther is tw years yunger than me. If yu can find him, tell him I'm still lking fr him,” she said and tears began t well up in her eyes. “Mther is waiting fr him t cme back hme.”
When I walked ut f the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard f the building recgnized the wallet, and with his help, I finally fund its wner, Henry. I handed the wallet t Henry and he said, “Yes, that's mine! It must have drpped ut f my pcket this afternn.”
“I read the letter in the hpe f finding ut wh wned the wallet.” I said. The smile n his face suddenly disappeared. He asked, “Yu read that letter?” “Nt nly did I read it, but als Beatrice read.” I replied. He suddenly became excited. “Beatrice? Yu knw where she is? Hw is she? Please tell me,” he begged. “She's fine. She has been lking fr yu.” I said sftly.
He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, yu knw she is my nly sister in this wrld. I've always missed her.”
Henry and I tk the elevatr (電梯) dwn t Beatrice's rm. I walked ver t her. “Beatrice,” I said sftly, pinting t Henry, wh was waiting with me in the drway. “D yu knw the man?”
注意：
1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Beatrice adjusted her glasses, lked fr a mment, but didn't say a wrd．
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Abut three weeks later I gt a call at my ffice frm Beatrice．
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【答案】Paragraph 1：
Beatrice adjusted her glasses, lked fr a mment, but didn't say a wrd．Henry said sftly, almst in a whisper, “Beatrice, it’s Henry. D yu remember me? ” She said excitedly, “Henry! I dn’t believe it! Henry! It's yu! My Henry! ” He walked slwly twards her and they hugged. The nurse and I left with tears falling dwn ur faces.
比阿特麗斯調(diào)整了一下眼鏡，看了一會(huì)兒，但一句話也沒說。亨利輕聲說，幾乎是輕聲說，“比阿特麗斯，是亨利。你還記得我了嗎？她興奮地說，“亨利！”我不相信！亨利！是你的名字！我的亨利先生！他慢慢地向她走去，他們擁抱在一起。護(hù)士和我離開了，眼淚流了下來。
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Abut three weeks later I gt a call at my ffice frm Beatrice．“Can yu break away n Sunday t attend a party? Henry and Beatrice are ging t have a party in the hme! ” It was a beautiful party with all the peple dressed up t jin in the celebratin. If yu ever wanted t see a wman and a man acting like tw teenagers, yu had t see this elder sister and yunger brther. It was a perfect ending fr a family affectin that had lasted nearly several decades.
大約三周后，我接到比阿特麗斯的電話?！澳阈瞧谔炜梢詤⒓泳蹠?huì)嗎？”亨利和比阿特麗斯將在家里舉辦一個(gè)聚會(huì)！“這是一個(gè)美麗的派對(duì)，所有人都盛裝參加慶祝活動(dòng)。如果你想看到一個(gè)女人和一個(gè)男人像兩個(gè)青少年，你必須看到這個(gè)姐姐和弟弟。這是一個(gè)持續(xù)了近幾十年的家庭感情的完美結(jié)局。
【解析】
本文以信封為線索展開，講述了作者在街上發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)錢包，在里面發(fā)現(xiàn)一封破舊的信，通過努力找到信主人的姐姐，通過保安大叔找到了錢包主人，最后，姐弟重逢的故事。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“比阿特麗斯扶了扶眼鏡，看了一會(huì)兒，但沒有說一句話?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫姐弟兩人重逢的溫馨場(chǎng)景。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“大約三周后，我在辦公室接到比阿特麗斯的電話?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者對(duì)重逢事件的感慨。
2.續(xù)寫線索：發(fā)現(xiàn)信封——找到信封主人姐姐——找到主人——姐弟重逢——感謝——感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
接電話：get a call at/put sb n t/pick up the telephne/answer the phne
抽出時(shí)間：break away n/take time ff/spare ne’s time
情緒類
興奮：did excitedly/thrilled
淚流滿面：tears bathe/stream dwn/ne’s cheeks
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]：The nurse and I left with tears falling dwn ur faces.這句話運(yùn)用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。
[高分句型2]：It was a perfect ending fr a family affectin that had lasted nearly several decades這句話運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。
第8篇 爸爸的梳子
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Sme f my earliest memries invlve silting with my dad in his study every night when he came hme frm the ffice. I’d watch as he put his persnal items away: his watch, wallet, cmb and car keys wuld always ccupy the same spt n the table every time. It was as if he culd see invisible lines drawn specifically fr these things, nt a centimetre mre r less.
Dad's cmb was jade green. I heard he bught it when he married Mum, which made the cmb tw years lder than I was. Every night, he wuld smile, hand me the cmb and say: “Be a gd girl and help Daddy clean it, OK?”
I was mre than happy t d it. At age five this rdinary task brught me such jy. I wuld excitedly tum the tap n, then brush the cmb with a used tthbrush as hard as I culd. Satisfied that I’d dne a gd jb, I wuld prudly return die cmb t Dad. He wuld smile at me, and place the cmb n tp f his wallet.
Abut tw years later, Dad left his sales jb and started his wn whlesale business. I started primary schl. That was when things started t change. Dad's business wasn’t ding s well, and ur stable life started getting shaky. He didn’t cme hme as much as he used t - just a cuple f times a week. And when he did cme hme, it was always late and I'd already be in bed. I started t get mad. Why didn't he listen t Mum and just stick t his ld jb? Why take the risk and place the whle family in truble? Over the years, I stpped waiting fr him t cme hme, and stpped ging dwnstairs t check n him.
Tday, I'm n lnger a kid. Nw 28, I ’ve graduated frm cllege and gt a jb. Dad’s business has als started t get back n track. Things are better nw. Yet the uncmfrtable silence between Dad and me cntinued.
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Tw days befre my birthday last year, Dad came hme early.
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When I passed the clean cmb back t Dad, I nticed the wrinkles next t his eyes.
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【答案】Tw days befre my birthday last year, Dad came hme early. As usual, I helped him carry his bags int his study. When I turned t leave, he said: “Hey, wuld yu like t help me clean my cmb? It's been a while since I last cleaned.” It hit me then why, as a child, helping my dad clean his cmb was such a jy. That rutine meant that my dad was hme early t spend the evening with Mum and I. It meant he wuld watch TV with us r play a few vide games with me. It meant a happy and lving family.
去年在我生日的前兩天，爸爸早點(diǎn)回家了。像往常一樣，我?guī)退研欣畎徇M(jìn)了書房。當(dāng)我轉(zhuǎn)身離開時(shí)，他說：“嘿，你想幫我打掃梳子嗎？我已經(jīng)有一段時(shí)間沒打掃了。我覺得，小時(shí)候幫爸爸打掃梳子是一種快樂。這意味著我爸爸早點(diǎn)回家和媽媽一起過夜。這意味著他會(huì)和我們一起看電視，或者和我一起玩一些電子游戲。這意味著一個(gè)幸福和充滿愛的家庭。
When I passed the clean cmb back t Dad, I nticed the wrinkles next t his eyes. They are mre nticeable when he smiles, but his smile is still as heartwarming as befre. The smile f a father wh just wants a gd life fr his family. Dad carefully places his cmb n tp f his wallet. After s many years, he still rganizes his persnal items in the same care fill way. I guess sme things never change. And fr that. I'm glad.
當(dāng)我把干凈的梳子遞給爸爸時(shí)，我注意到他眼睛旁邊的皺紋。當(dāng)他微笑的時(shí)候，它們更明顯，但他的微笑仍然像以前一樣溫暖人心。一個(gè)只是想要為家人過上美好生活的父親的微笑。爸爸小心地把梳子放在錢包上。這么多年之后，他仍然以同樣的護(hù)理填充方式組織他的個(gè)人物品。我想有些事情永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)改變。為此。我很高興。
【解析】
本文以時(shí)間為線索，講述了作者小時(shí)候很喜歡等父親下班，幫父親清理他的梳子。但是后來父親自己創(chuàng)業(yè)，初期艱難，便再也沒有經(jīng)常很早回家，和作者之間的親子互動(dòng)也少了很多。作者對(duì)此心懷怨念。在作者28歲時(shí)，父親和作者之間解開了心結(jié)。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“去年我生日的前兩天，爸爸提早回家了?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡吒赣H很早回到家，久違地讓作者為他清理梳子，作者有很大的觸動(dòng)。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我把干凈的梳子遞給爸爸時(shí)，我注意到他眼睛旁邊的皺紋。”可知，第二段可描寫作者看到父親的皺紋，理解了他的辛苦和對(duì)家的責(zé)任，并且發(fā)現(xiàn)一切都沒有變。
2.續(xù)寫線索：要求清理梳子——引起觸動(dòng)——理解父親——?dú)w置東西——感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類①轉(zhuǎn)身離開：turn t leave/turn away
②歸還：pass back/return
情緒類
①暖心：heartwarming/warm
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]When I turned t leave, he said: “Hey, wuld yu like t help me clean my cmb? It's been a while since I last cleaned.” （when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
[高分句型2]The smile f a father wh just wants a gd life fr his family. Dad carefully places his cmb n tp f his wallet.（wh引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）
第9篇 祖母的回憶
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Mst yung kids are very self-centered mst f the time. It’s like their brain meters are stuck n “selfish.” This certainly described me, until I met my dear grandmther.
My father had been brn in Japan, and he had many ld, ld phtgraphs f the palatial (宮殿般的) estate that had belnged t his family thrugh many generatins. He tld me stries f grgeus rms full f glden furniture and silk wall papers. He als described magnificent gardens, full f the sweet scents f extic flwers and the gentle thin stream f graceful funtains.
Frm all these, I figured my grandmther must be rich. I had never met her befre she came frm Japan, but at eight, I reasned that if I were nice t her, she wuld take me back t Japan t live in luxury. It was a gd plan, I thught, and I vwed t spend time with my grandmther s she wuld grw t lve me and want me t accmpany her upn her return.
We went t pick her up at the airprt. “There she is!” my father called. I expected t see sme ryal kimn-clad (穿著和服的) creature like I’d seen in pictures. Instead, I saw a tiny wman with silver hair, wearing an rdinary blue suit. She did nt lk wealthy t me. Still, I vwed t be attentive, t make myself indispensable t her during her stay.
T get clser t her, I flattered her int telling me stries abut ld Japan. She enjyed making needlecraft with delicate designs, and as she wrked, she wve tales f Japanese legends and histry as delicate and beautiful as the designs she created. I listened, fascinated. Her wrds were a mix f the tw languages, s I didn’t cmpletely understand everything at first. Interestingly, hwever, as her English imprved, s did my understanding f Japanese.
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Para 1:
N ne spke f her ging back, and I was like an ant n a ht griddle.
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My dreams f a luxurius life had been brken.
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【答案】One pssible versin
N ne spke f her ging back, and I was like an ant n a ht griddle. But I was anxius t cmmence my life f Japanese luxury, s ne evening I wrked up my curage. “When yu g back t Japan, grandma, will yu take me?” I asked timidly. Thugh a bit surprised, she lked up frm her embridery, her eyes peeking lvingly at me. “N, I live here nw. But why d yu want t leave?” S I tld her abut thse stries. She smiled, strking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destryed everything. Nw that grandfather had passed away, she wished t remain here with family.
沒有人說她回去了，我就像一只熱鍋上的螞蟻。但我急于開始日本奢侈的生活，所以有一天晚上我鼓起了勇氣。“奶奶，你回到日本后，能帶我去嗎？””我膽怯地問道。雖然有點(diǎn)驚訝，但她從刺繡中抬起頭來，眼睛深情地望著我?！安?，我現(xiàn)在住在這里。但你為什么要離開呢？”所以我告訴了她那些故事。她笑著，撫摸著我的頭，解釋道。她的曾祖父確實(shí)有很多財(cái)富，但戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)摧毀了一切?，F(xiàn)在祖父去世了，她想和家人住在一起。
My dreams f a luxurius life had been brken. At first s disappinted was I that I even lcked myself in the rm, crying fr quite a while. Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away. I had tried t make her lve me s that I culd jin her in Japan. I sn understd that I didn't need the wealth f Japan. My grandmther had given me far greater riches right here at hme.
我對(duì)奢侈生活的夢(mèng)想已經(jīng)破滅了。一開始我很失望，甚至把自己鎖在房間里，哭了好一會(huì)兒。突然間，奶奶和我們住在一起的事實(shí)讓我打消了我的悲傷。我曾試圖讓她愛我，這樣我就可以和她一起去日本了。我很快就明白了，我不需要日本的財(cái)富。我的祖母在家里給了我更多的財(cái)富。
【解析】
本文以人物為線索為展開，作者的父親小時(shí)候出生在日本，通過之前的照片作者推測(cè)祖母的家庭肯定很富裕；作者想著討好祖母，希望祖母帶他去日本生活；祖母來了，但并不是穿著和服來的，而是穿著一件普通的藍(lán)色西裝；作者主動(dòng)和祖母接近，祖母跟他講著日本的歷史傳說故事，祖母的英文水平進(jìn)步了，作者對(duì)日本的理解也隨之加深。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“沒人說她要回去，“我”就像一只熱鍋上的螞蟻。”可知，第一段可描寫作者急于去日本過奢侈的生活，所以主動(dòng)向祖母詢問歸期，并希望祖母帶自己一起回日本，以及祖母的回應(yīng)。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我奢華生活的夢(mèng)想破滅了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者夢(mèng)想破裂后的感受，以及最后作者意識(shí)到真正的財(cái)富是什么。
2.續(xù)寫線索：焦慮擔(dān)憂——鼓起勇氣——解釋說明——夢(mèng)想破滅——驅(qū)散悲傷
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①.鼓起勇氣：wrk up my curage/take heart f grace /get up the curage
②.解釋說明：explain/make clear/accunt fr
③.夢(mèng)想破滅：be brken/be shattered/fall thrugh
④.驅(qū)散悲傷：sweep my sadness away/disperse the sad
情緒類
①.焦慮擔(dān)憂：anxius/wrried/alarming
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]. At first s disappinted was I that I even lcked myself in the rm, crying fr quite a while.（s+adj.位于句首時(shí)部分倒裝）
[高分句型2].Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away.（that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句）
第10篇 一只加拿大鵝
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It's quite impressive t see Canada geese flying int the cluds. They live t be arund 25 years ld and are very lyal. They never frget their first hme. N ne knws this mre than my family.
In 2000, when I was seven, my parents and I came back frm a T-ball game ne late spring afternn. T ur surprise, tw adult geese and a baby gse were in ur driveway （車庫(kù)前的私 人車道）.The adults were shcked by us and flew away, but their baby was t yung t fly and culdn't fllw. We are n strangers t the ways f wildlife, s we knew t avid cntact with the baby, hping he culd jin his parents.
Hurs passed, and night fell. The tiny little thing was wandering arund ur yard, unaware f what culd happen. It was clear that the baby needed prtectin, warmth, and fd t make it t the mrning, s we brught him nt ur back prch （門廊）and set up a wire fence t enclse and prtect him.
We all pretty much slept with ne eye pen till mrning. And then anther mrning. And anther. Each day, we tried eagerly t get the baby back t his parents, wh kept cming t ur yard. He wuldn't g t them, thugh, and they wuldn't cme clse enugh t claim him. The baby gse had clearly decided we were his new family and we gave him a name - Peeper, because he wuld fllw us arund the yard making a peeping （唧唧叫）nise, nnstp.
Days turned int weeks, and weeks turned int mnths, until almst a year passed. Peeper slept n ur back prch in typical gse fashin. Every day, my dad wuld clear his drppings with water and thrw him up int the air, s he culd fly a lp arund the huse, cming back again nce the prch was clean.
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One evening, my uncle was ver, and my dad wanted t shw him Peeper's lp.
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It came as a shck 20 years later when an aging adult gse made his way back t my yard.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
One evening, my uncle was ver, and my dad wanted t shw him Peeper's lp. But this time, Peeper just flew ff. Everyne was very, very sad. It was dark, and we were wrried. We lked fr him fr days calling his name, but he didn’t cme back. We hped he went ff n his natural way. Again, days turned int weeks and weeks turned int mnths, then years. I missed Peeper. I wuld call fr him every time I saw a grup f geese flying by in V-frmatin. Twenty years passed, and Peeper became a happy memry fr family.
一天晚上，我叔叔結(jié)束了，我爸爸想給他看皮珀的環(huán)。但這一次，皮珀只是飛走了。每個(gè)人都非常、非常難過。天很黑，我們很擔(dān)心。我們找了好幾天他在叫他的名字，但他沒有回來。我們希望他能很自然地走下去。天又變成了幾周，幾周變成了幾個(gè)月，然后是年。我錯(cuò)過了哭泣。每當(dāng)我看到一群鵝以v形形飛過時(shí)，我會(huì)叫他。二十年過去了，皮珀成了家庭快樂的回憶。
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It came as a shck 20 years later when an aging adult gse made his way back t my yard. At first, I thught it was just anther gse. And yet, smething abut him seemed strangely familiar t me. The gse came back repeatedly. He did all f the same things Peeper used t, like trying t cme in thrugh the frnt dr and sleeping in ur back prch. Besides this gse respnded t the name Peeper. Much t my surprise my ld friend returned, 20 years later.
20年后，一只年邁的成年鵝回到了我的院子里，這令人震驚。一開始，我還以為它只是另一只鵝。然而，我似乎對(duì)他有一些奇怪的熟悉。那只鵝不停地回來了。他做了所有和皮珀以前一樣的事情，比如試著從前門進(jìn)來，在我們的后門廊里睡覺。此外，這只鵝還回應(yīng)了皮珀這個(gè)名字。令我吃驚的是，20年后，我的老朋友回來了。
【解析】
本文以人物為線索展開，講述了兩個(gè)成年大雁和一個(gè)孩子停在作者家的車道上，成年大雁飛走了，留下了小雁，后來經(jīng)作者爸爸照顧，逗留了很久，直至作者叔叔來參觀時(shí)才飛走，20年后又飛回來的故事。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一天晚上，我叔叔回來了，我爸爸想給他看Peeper的飛行。”可知，第一段可描寫小雁飛走后的故事。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“20年后，當(dāng)一只年老的成年大雁回到我的院子時(shí)，我大吃一驚?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者后來發(fā)現(xiàn)是之前飛走的小雁的驚喜。
2.續(xù)寫線索：飛走——尋找——等待——回家——驚喜
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①.回家：make ne’s way back t/g back hme/return hme
②.有反應(yīng)：respnd/in respnse/reactin/t
情緒類
①.擔(dān)心：wrry/cncern abut/fell wrried
②.令某人吃驚：surprise/astnishment/amazement。
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]:I wuld call fr him every time I saw a grup f geese flying by in V-frmatin.這句話運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)。
[高分句型2]：It came as a shck 20 years later when an aging adult gse made his way back t my yard.這句話運(yùn)用了關(guān)系副詞when引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。
[高分句型3]：He did all f the same things Peeper used t, like trying t cme in thrugh the frnt dr and sleeping in ur back prch.這句話運(yùn)用了省略關(guān)系代詞的定語(yǔ)從句和動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)。
第11篇 “我”被隔離了
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My wife, Megan, and I went ut t dinner with an ld friend wh we had nt seen in a while. There had been sme talk f COVID-19 （新型冠狀病毒）n the news, but it was early in the utbreak and peple were still ging abut their daily rutines. Even thugh everyne in ur grup felt perfectly fine, we tk precautins（預(yù)防）：We washed ur hands with sap , did nt share fd and had n significantly clse cntact.
A few days later, ur friend called and tld us that she had tested psitive fr the crnavirus. She had felt sme mild symptms（癥狀）fr a day r s after that dinner and was able t be tested because she is a dctr. On the fllwing day, started t feel a little tired and my head was a bit cludy. I decided t stay in the master bedrm away frm the rest f my family. The next mrning. I wke up with a 39-degree fever. That was when we realized that I might have caught the virus frm ur friend.
At nce, Megan called ur state's crnavirus htline, wh then called in ur primary care dctr and the head f ur lcal hspital system's crnavirus team. We explained that we had been in cntact with smene wh had been tested psitive, and I was having symptms. They quickly apprved me t receive a test at an urgent care center lcated five minutes' drive frm my huse. The result made my heart sank — I was als tested psitive, and the lcal hspital wasn't equipped with the facilities t treat my disease. As a mild case, I was recmmended t stay at hme and quarantine （隔離）myself.
Fllwing the dctr's advice, Megan and I quarantined urselves and ur children. With my develped symptms , I started islatin in the bedrm, and the nly interactin I had with Megan was when she brught in fd. Megan slept n a small cuch in ur hme ffice away frm the kids' rms. She als minimized her cntact with ur kids in case she was carrying the virus.
注意：
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
We decided t call everyne we had been in cntact with ver the curse f the past week.
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Thugh wrried abut the seriusness f the virus ,I knew I had t be brave.
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【答案】We decided t call everyne we had been in cntact with ver the curse f the past week. Megan insisted that we shuld let them knw that I had tested psitive. Hard as it was t infrm peple that we might have given them the crnavirus, it was the respnsible thing t d. T ur pleasant surprise, all f ur friends shwed their understanding and supprt upn hearing the news. T cheer us up, ne f my wife's best friends even baked a cake with the letters "Stay strng" n it and delivered it t ur frnt dr.
我們決定打電話給過去一周里我們聯(lián)系過的每個(gè)人。梅根堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該讓他們知道我的檢測(cè)結(jié)果呈陽(yáng)性。雖然很難告知人們我們可能給了他們冠狀病毒，但這是負(fù)責(zé)任的事情。令我們驚喜的是，我們所有的朋友聽到消息都表示了他們的理解和支持。為了讓我們高興起來，我妻子最好的一個(gè)朋友甚至烤了一個(gè)蛋糕，上面寫著“保持堅(jiān)強(qiáng)”，然后把它送到了我們的前門。
Thugh wrried abut the seriusness f the virus. I knew I had t be brave. I made sure t get plenty f rest and did sme exercise t stay as healthy as I culd. I als managed t ease the wrries f Megan and ur kids during ur quarantine by spending mre time ding nline vide-chats with them. Within the fllwing week, my fever started t fade and I culd feel my head clearing. The next test shwed a cheering result. It came back negative. Had it nt been fr the lve and care frm thse arund me, I wuldn't have made it.
盡管我擔(dān)心病毒的嚴(yán)重性。我知道我必須是勇敢的。我確保得到足夠的休息，做一些運(yùn)動(dòng)來保持健康。在我們被隔離期間，我還通過花更多的時(shí)間和孩子們進(jìn)行在線視頻聊天，設(shè)法緩解了梅根和孩子們的擔(dān)憂。在接下來的一周里，我的發(fā)燒開始消退，我能感覺到我的頭清醒了。下一次測(cè)試顯示了一個(gè)歡呼的結(jié)果。結(jié)果是負(fù)的。如果不是因?yàn)槲抑車说膼酆完P(guān)心，我就不會(huì)成功了。
【解析】
本文以新冠病毒傳染為線索展開，講述了新冠病毒傳播初期，作者和妻子因和老朋友共進(jìn)晚餐，被傳染了病毒，他們盡力和孩子做到隔離，然后給過去一周聯(lián)系過的每一個(gè)人打電話，勇敢地面對(duì)病毒，并最終戰(zhàn)勝疾病的故事。
1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們決定給過去一周我們接觸過的每一個(gè)人打電話”可知，第一段可描寫作者一家得到朋友的理解和支持。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“雖然我很擔(dān)心這種病毒的嚴(yán)重性，但我知道我必須要勇敢”可知，第二段可描寫作者勇敢面對(duì)病毒，隔離期間，互相聯(lián)系，積極治療到痊愈的過程。
2.續(xù)寫線索：得到理解支持——驚喜——互相聯(lián)系——痊愈——慶幸——感謝
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①得到理解支持：get understanding and supprt /get help/ be understd and supprted
②.互相聯(lián)系：cnnect with each ther / cntact with each ther/ ding nline vide-chats with them
③.痊愈：recvery/be cured
情緒類
①.驚喜：a pleasant surprise/be surprised/ be astnished
②.慶幸：gd frtune /be lucky
③.感謝shwing his appreciatin/shw his gratitude/be grateful
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]. Hard as it was t infrm peple that we might have given them the crnavirus, it was the respnsible thing t d.(as引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的倒裝)
[高分句型2]. T cheer us up, ne f my wife's best friends even baked a cake with the letters "Stay strng" n it and delivered it t ur frnt dr.(不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))
[高分句型3]. Had it nt been fr the lve and care frm thse arund me, I wuldn't have made it. (虛擬語(yǔ)氣條件句中省略if的部分倒裝）
第12篇 “我不是小偷”
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
There was a rich cuple wh was thrwing a big New Year party at their huse. S they went shpping at the market where everything was f high cst and fixed price. They wanted t maintain their level f standard s they didn’t mind paying fr it. After purchasing all they needed, they called a prter t carry everything and drp it at their hme. The prter wh came was f an ld age, and lked very unhealthy, and his clthes were trn, and he lked as if he wasn’t even able t meet his daily needs.
They asked the prter abut the charges fr delivering their gds t their hme. The ld prter quted just $20, well belw the market price. Yet, the cuple argued and bargained with the prter and finally settled fr $15. The prter was struggling t make even ne time’s meal s he needed anything he culd earn.
The cuple was very happy thinking hw well they bargained with the pr prter and paid him $15 in advance and left after giving the prter their address fr delivery. They reached their hme and ne hur passed, and tw hurs passed, but the prter still didn’t deliver their stuff.
The wife started t get angry at her husband, “I always tell yu nt t trust such persn, but yu never listen t me. I am sure instead f delivering the gds t ur hme, he must have disappeared with everything. We must immediately g back t the market t inquire and then t the plice statin t file the cmplaint against him.”
They bth left twards the market. On their way near the market, they saw anther prter. They stpped him t inquire abut the ld prter and nticed that he was carrying their gds in his cart! The angry wife asked him, “Where is that ld thief? This is ur gds and he was suppsed t deliver them. It seems yu pr thieves are stealing ur gds and ging t sell them.”
Paragraph 1:When the prter heard the angry wife asking.
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When the prter heard the angry wife asking, he turned back. The prter replied, “Madam, please calm dwn. I’m nt a thief. That pr ld man was sick since last mnth. He culdn’t earn enugh t even have a single meal f the day. Therefre, he fell dwn and handed me $15, saying, ‘I have taken an advance fr this delivery, and yu deliver the gds t the cuple’s hme.’ Madam, he was pr and hungry, but he was an hnest man. I was just n the way t cmpleting the ld man’s last delivery t yur hme.”
當(dāng)搬運(yùn)工聽到憤怒的妻子問時(shí)，他轉(zhuǎn)過身去。搬運(yùn)工回答說：“夫人，請(qǐng)冷靜下來。我不是一個(gè)小偷。那個(gè)可憐的老人從上個(gè)月起就生病了。他掙到足夠的錢，甚至不能一天吃一頓飯。因此，他倒了下來，遞給我$15，說：“我提前交貨了，你把貨物送到這對(duì)夫婦的家里?！狈蛉耍指F又餓，但他是個(gè)誠(chéng)實(shí)的人。我就在完成老人最后一次送你家的路上。”
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Upn hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the wife felt s ashamed that she had n curage t lk her husband in the eyes. Suddenly she rushed t the market. Half an hur later, the wife came back with sme fd in her hand. She passed the fd n t the prter, and said srry t the prter, saying that she shuldn’t suspect them, and tk them as thieves. At last, the prter tk the gds t their huse, and the rich cuple changed their attitude t the man like the prter.
一聽到這句話，丈夫的眼睛里就流滿了眼淚，妻子感到非常羞愧，她沒有勇氣去看她的丈夫的眼睛。突然，她沖向了市場(chǎng)。半小時(shí)后，妻子手里拿著一些食物回來了。她把食物遞給看門人，對(duì)看門人說了抱歉，說她不應(yīng)該懷疑他們，就把他們當(dāng)作小偷。最后，搬運(yùn)工把貨物帶到他們家里，這對(duì)有錢的夫婦像搬運(yùn)工一樣改變了對(duì)他的態(tài)度。
【解析】
通過閱讀所給文章可知，一對(duì)富人夫婦為了準(zhǔn)備新年聚會(huì)去市場(chǎng)不惜高價(jià)買了許多物品，然后雇傭了一個(gè)搬運(yùn)工把這些物品運(yùn)回家。搬運(yùn)工是一個(gè)年老體弱生活拮據(jù)的人，他要價(jià)$20低于市場(chǎng)價(jià)，而富人夫婦討價(jià)還價(jià)后只給$15。富人夫婦高興地回家等著老人把物品送來，卻遲遲不見老人的身影。妻子認(rèn)為上了老人的當(dāng)，一定老人把他們的物品賣掉了?；厝フ依先藭r(shí)卻發(fā)現(xiàn)他們的物品在另外一個(gè)搬運(yùn)工的車上。
續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：當(dāng)搬運(yùn)工聽到生氣的妻子問題時(shí)……，所以應(yīng)該寫他講述的實(shí)情，老人病了又吃不上飯，這次摔倒了，他把$15給了這個(gè)搬運(yùn)工，請(qǐng)求他把物品送到富人家。第二段開頭是：丈夫聽了，眼里含著淚水，……。下文應(yīng)該寫富人夫婦被老人感動(dòng)，行動(dòng)和態(tài)度都發(fā)生了改變。
最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。
本文描寫詳略得當(dāng)，使用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。如：calm dwn, taken an advance, Upn hearing, felt ashamed, changed their attitude等高級(jí)詞匯；Therefre, he fell dwn and handed me $15, saying, ‘I have taken an advance fr this delivery, and yu deliver the gds t the cuple’s hme.’和She passed the fd n t the prter, and said srry t the prter, saying that she shuldn’t suspect them, and tk them as thieves.運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；the wife felt s ashamed that she had n curage t lk her husband in the eyes.運(yùn)用了s……that句型。等高級(jí)句式。
第13篇 感恩的心
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
The mst delicius memries seem t happen during the hlidays. And like a squirrel preparing fr winter, I put them away t enjy slwly during the lng winter mnths. Smetimes, I enjy them fr years.
Amng them are sweetest recllectins: my little girls at the church play and the mment they gt their first angel wings; a pink dlly strller(手推車) wheeled int the bedrm with a tiny vice declaring, ''Lk what Santa Claus brught me! ''; r New Year's snwmen wearing bright scarves brrwed frm a grandma's fragrant drawer.
But there is ne memry that is a little bittersweet -- srt f like 80% dark chclate, but still gd fr yu.
This stry brings t mind a clrful candy dish and a very little by. The ccasin was smewhere between Christmas and New Year's when a few candies in a dish remained behind, a bright spt in dull winter gray.
Wrapped in December's chill, my then 3-year ld grandsn, Justin, and I had dashed frm the warmth f my parked car int the building where I planned t take care f a few wrk-related tasks.
A smiling secretary greeted us as we brushed the snwflakes and rubbed ur hands t chase the cld. Then with my grandchild clse t my side, I busied myself, finishing the items f business that had brught us there. But while his hand remained in mine, his eyes fell n the candy dish sitting nearby.
As we turned t leave, the thughtful and very bservant wman behind the desk asked the questin all children wait t hear.
''Hney, '' the kindly wman said, peering ver her glasses at Justin. ''Wuld yu like a candy bar? '' she asked, her hand pushing the dish clse fr an easier reach.
The by lked up questiningly, his eyes meeting mine, permissin hanging in the air. A slight nd frm me and then a hurried beeline t the candy dish fllwed. One candy bar was already in his hand.
Para 1: ''Justin! '' I said frm the drway.
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Para 2: In the humr f the mment, I felt smething hard t swallw.
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''Justin!'' I said frm the drway. By this time his pudgy hands had grabbed ne -- and nly ne -- and he made his way back t me. My vice was smewhat serius as I realized manners had been frgtten. ''What d yu say? '' Hearing this, the little by turned n his heel, prmptly returning t the candy dish. ''Get Grandma ne, t! '' I laughed. The secretary laughed. And even little Justin inncently giggled at the fun we were having.
“賈斯??！”我從門口說。這時(shí)，他那胖乎乎的手抓住了一只，回到我身邊。當(dāng)我意識(shí)到舉止有些嚴(yán)肅，因?yàn)槲业穆曇舯煌浟恕！澳阏f什么？‘’小男孩聽到這話，轉(zhuǎn)過身來，立刻回到糖果盤旁?！薄澳棠桃操I一個(gè)！‘’我笑了。秘書笑了起來。就連小賈斯汀也天真地笑著。
In the humr f the mment, I felt smething hard t swallw. There was a truth that lingered lng after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared. What example had I set fr this little ne while ften in my care? Was he learning mre abut ''getting'' and less abut gratitude -- that heartfelt ''thank yu''? In the years since, I've always lved t remember that mment. But ne gift I hpe we all leave with ur children is the imprtance f a grateful heart. Really, what culd be sweeter?
在當(dāng)時(shí)的幽默中，我感到有些東西難以接受。在草莓糖果的味道消失后，一個(gè)真相持續(xù)了很久。我經(jīng)常為這個(gè)孩子樹立了什么榜樣？他是不是更多地了解“得到”，更少地了解感激——衷心的“感謝”？在此后的幾年里，我一直很喜歡記得那一刻。但我希望我們都帶著孩子們留下的一份禮物是一顆感恩之心的重要性。真的，還有什么能是更甜的呢？
【解析】
這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。文章主要講述了作者和孫子的一次經(jīng)歷帶給她苦中帶樂的回憶。
續(xù)寫分為兩段。第一段的開頭是：“Justin！”我在走廊上說。這時(shí)他的手上抓著一顆糖，然后朝我走過來。我的聲音有點(diǎn)嚴(yán)肅，我意識(shí)到自己當(dāng)時(shí)失態(tài)了。“你說什么？”。聽到這話，小男孩轉(zhuǎn)過身去，立刻跑到糖果盤那里?！敖o奶奶也拿一顆?！蔽倚α?。秘書也笑了。小Justin也咯咯的笑了。第二段的開頭是：在這個(gè)幽默時(shí)刻，我覺得有些東西難以下咽。在草莓味糖果的味道消失之后，有一個(gè)想法始種縈繞在我心頭。我給小家伙樹立了什么榜樣？他學(xué)到了更多關(guān)于得到，更少關(guān)于感激的東西嗎（那種發(fā)自內(nèi)心的感激）？從那以后，我一直記得那一刻。我總是希望讓孩子學(xué)會(huì)真正的感恩。沒有什么比這更好了。
續(xù)寫時(shí)應(yīng)注意故事情節(jié)要符合邏輯，基礎(chǔ)時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)。
范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些高級(jí)表達(dá)，例如：Hearing this, the little by turned n his heel, prmptly returning t the candy dish.中使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)；There was a truth that lingered lng after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared.中that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句；What example had I set fr this little ne while ften in my care?中what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。這些表達(dá)的使用不僅給文章增色添彩，也展示了作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。
第14篇 禮物與友誼
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
As a sixth grader, I began nticing hw ther kids were separating int grups. I wasn't sure where I belnged. I fund it hard t fit in.
Our teacher had assigned "secret friends” fr the cming week. She wrte each kid's name n a piece f paper and threw them int a glass; then we each clsed ur eyes and drew the name f a classmate wh we were t secretly befriend and supprt ver the next five schl days. By the middle f the week, everyne, including me, had turned this assignment int a cntest t see whse secret friend culd leave the best gift. We left cards, pens and even mney. It seemed that everyne was getting cl presents frm their friend except me.
On the last mrning f ur assignment, I walked int my classrm and nticed there was a package. I pened the wrapping paper and inside was a bx f pwder(胭脂粉).The girls sitting near me laughed the gift I had received. T make matters wrse, the pwder had already been pened.
I tried t frget abut the embarrassing gift, but when I was in the bathrm during the break, the girls wh had seen me pen the pwder started speaking ill f my secret friend f giving it t me. I quickly jined in "Hw terrible," I heard myself saying "What culd my friend be thinking by giving me such a stupid gift? My grandmther wuldn't even want it." The girls laughed at my remarks and rushed ut f the bathrm. I stayed t wash my hands and let the water run thrugh my fingers as I thught abut what I had just said. It wasn't nrmal like me t say mean things like that abut smene.
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Then I saw my classmate Janet cme ut f a bathrm bth(廁所隔間)，tears streaming dwn her face.
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Alng with my aplgies, I explained the reasn.
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Then I saw my classmate Janet cme ut f a bathrm bth(廁所隔間), tears streaming dwn her face. She shuted at me with anger, “If yu dn’t want my gift yu can just leave it instead f laughing at it. This is the best pwder frm my mum! “Befre I culd say a wrd, Janet dashed ut, leaving me dumb with deep regret. But sn I clenched my fingers and made up my mind t find Janet and say srry t her. There she was, sitting in a tree shadw wiping her eyes.
然后我看到我的同學(xué)珍妮特從浴室間（廁所隔間）出來，眼淚從她臉上流下來。她憤怒地對(duì)我喊道：“如果你不想要我的禮物，你就離開它，而不是笑。這是我媽媽那里最好的藥粉！我還沒來得及說話，珍妮特就沖了出去，讓我啞口無言。但很快我握緊手指，決定找珍妮特，向她說對(duì)不起。她就在那里，坐在樹影里擦著眼睛。
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Alng with my aplgies, I explained the reasn. I was nt a mean girl by judging peple’s presents. The reasn why I cmplained in frnt f the girls was that I wanted t fit in, having a sense f belnging in the grup. Hearing my sincere wrds, Janet calmed herself dwn after cnstant sbs and said, “True friendship cmes frm genuine care and lve fr each ther. I think that’s ur teacher’s intentin f this ‘secret friend’ assignment”. That day, I learned t cherish real friendship.
除了道歉，我還解釋了原因。通過評(píng)判別人的禮物，我并不是一個(gè)卑鄙的女孩。我在女孩們面前抱怨的原因是我想適應(yīng)這個(gè)群體，有一種歸屬感。聽到我真誠(chéng)的話，珍妮特在不停地啜泣后平靜下來，她說：“真正的友誼來自于對(duì)彼此真正的關(guān)心和愛。我認(rèn)為這就是我們老師要做的這個(gè)“秘密朋友”任務(wù)的意圖。那天，我學(xué)會(huì)了珍惜真正的友誼。
【解析】
1.精讀文章，確定文章線索，如是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索等，這有利于“順藤摸瓜”。本文以空間為線索，根據(jù)提示語(yǔ)可知，故事的發(fā)展由教室轉(zhuǎn)向洗手間。
2.仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫要求，如字?jǐn)?shù)限制（150）、續(xù)寫段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有數(shù)”。本文需續(xù)寫兩個(gè)段落，每個(gè)段落均給出了段首句，可根據(jù)段首句完成續(xù)寫。
3.回扣原文，想象續(xù)寫內(nèi)容。快速回讀短文，揣摩文章的思路，結(jié)合段首的提示語(yǔ)，確定續(xù)寫段落的內(nèi)容。
4.擬寫草稿，修改錯(cuò)詞病句。結(jié)合提示語(yǔ)和文中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞擬寫出草稿，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性，語(yǔ)言的豐富性，上下文的銜接。
本文寫作做到了：與原文的主題保持一致；要與原文的體裁寫作手法保持一致；與主要人物的思想行為、性格特點(diǎn)要與原文保持一致。文章寫作中使用了if引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句（If yu dn’t want my gift yu can just leave it instead f laughing at it.）；現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)（There she was, sitting in a tree shadw wiping her eyes.）；定語(yǔ)從句和表語(yǔ)從句（The reasn why I cmplained in frnt f the girls was that I wanted t fit in, having a sense f belnging in the grup.）。
第15篇 團(tuán)聚的一家
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Five years after his tw yung sns gt lst frm the U．K. t Trnt，their father is really excited t have them back in Manchester，England. On Aug.14，the Star brke the news t Abdul Abubakar that his children had been fund safe and well in Hamiltn—5,600 km frm their hme. “Oh my Gd，” he said when first tld. “Is that true? Where are my children? Oh my Gd. Oh my Gd. I’m abslutely shaking. I want t hug them. Oh my Gd. Oh my Gd. Oh my Gd. My children！” Since 2010 he’d had n idea where they were living n r if they were even alive.
After years in the dark，his kids were fund. Abubakar was finally reunited with his sns in Trnt at the end f December. “I was very happy. It was a great mment. I can’t even describe my feeling n that day. It was like a dream.” he said. “Even nw we are tgether in Manchester，I still feel this dream is nt real.” A shrt time after they went missing，the Manchester plice called. Abubakar t say they had been fund by mistake.
The mment he received the Star’s call，Abubakar began preparing t fly t Canada and hug his sns，but the lng separatin and age f his sns meant it wuld nt be a simple reunin. Abubakar was given limited time t talk t his sns，wh remained in Children’s Aid care in Hamiltn. He thanked Canadians fr their supprt，especially Children’s Aid and the Missing Kids Sciety f Canada，wh helped him thrugh the legal frmalities.
“Talking t the bys again did nt even feel real. It was amazing，” he tld the Star after his first phne call with the children. His jy was mixed with sadness，because at that time，nly the lder sn had recgnized his father. It brke his heart，he said，t learn they had been given new names and did nt recgnize their birth names. “I can’t speak. I’m feeling s sad nw，” he said in September.
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Fr the bys，the early experience is fading. They have been t the dctr and dentist，are scheduled t start schl sn，and have jined a lcal swimming club. “The bys are happy in their new hme，” their father said. “They play utside freely；n ne is hiding them indrs anymre. They’re very excited t g ut and play with ther kids，and they g swimming in the lcal pl.”.
對(duì)男孩們來說，早期的經(jīng)歷正在消退。他們?nèi)タ戳酸t(yī)生和牙醫(yī)，計(jì)劃很快開始上學(xué)，并加入了當(dāng)?shù)氐囊粋€(gè)游泳俱樂部?！昂⒆觽?cè)谛录液芸鞓?，”他們的父親說。“它們?cè)谕饷孀杂傻赝嫠?；再也沒有人把他們藏在室內(nèi)了。他們很興奮能出去和其他孩子一起玩，然后去當(dāng)?shù)氐挠斡境赜斡?。?br>Paragraph 2:
While he’s delighted t have them back，Abubakar is als still adjusting t the new situatin. “They did nt remember me at are aware that their new names were fake，and they call each ther their real name，and I call them n their real names. “Smetimes I frget myself and call them the names used in Trnt and they tell me，‘Dad，dn’t call me that name，call us ur real names.’” The happy father sn laughed fr the mistake he made.
雖然阿布巴卡爾很高興，但阿布巴卡爾仍在適應(yīng)新形勢(shì)?！八麄兏静挥浀梦伊?。。他們知道他們的新名字是假的，他們互相稱呼對(duì)方為真名，我也只稱呼他們的真名?！坝袝r(shí)我忘記了自己，叫他們多倫多用的名字，他們告訴我，‘爸爸，別叫我，叫我們真名?！笨鞓返母赣H很快就因?yàn)樗傅腻e(cuò)誤而笑了。
第16篇 失而復(fù)得的狗
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A Russian dg named Shavi was hit by a car and the driver left withut ffering help. She was saved by a wman named Nina wh tk her in，nursed her back t health，and then fund her a hme. But Shavi escaped frm her new hme and walked nearly 200 miles back t be with her guardian angel after tw weeks.
Last winter，Shavi had been trying t survive as a street dg during the cld Russian winter when her life nearly ended. She was the victim f a hit & shy; and & shy; run，which resulted in tw badly brken legs，amng ther injuries. She nearly frze t death，but tw cyclists fund her and brught her t a vet. They wanted t find Shavi a hme t the public，and nly ne persn respnded—Nina.
The wman brught the injured dg back t her hme，and nursed her back t health. She even taught Shavi hw t walk again，and trained her t understand basic cmmands.
Shavi was a fighter，and n the first day after the surgery，wuldn’t even mve herself n the blanket set ut fr her. Rather，she tried t make it utside，and was fund lying n the dr step. Nina lked after her and spent the next six mnths helping her recver. Sme parts were easy; Shavi was a smart student，and easily learned cmmands. But she was terrified f strangers and cars，and it tk a lng time t get her accustmed t the utside wrld again.
Thugh she wuld have lved t have kept her，bstacles prevented Nina frm ding s. Her apartment was t small，especially with three cats and tw ther rescue dgs，and her jb and family cmmitments kept her frm giving the new ne as much attentin as she needed.
As much as it pained her t d it，she searched fr smene t take her in，but the nly friends willing t d s lived 180 miles away. They lived ut in the cuntryside，and Shavi wuld have mre rm t walk arund. Nina believed the new wner was truly the best chice fr her.
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Hwever，nly days after arriving at her new hme，Shavi went missing after she dug a hle under the fence.
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Hwever，nly days after arriving at her new hme，Shavi went missing after she dug a hle under the fence. Wrried，her new wners called Nina t tell her their sad news—Shavi was nce again living by herself ut n the streets. Almst tw weeks later，Nina was walking dwn the rad when she was surprised at smething tuching her leg. It was Shavi！Nina burst int tears，hardly able t believe that this dg walked s far just t find her.
然而，就在到達(dá)新家?guī)滋旌?，沙維在籬笆下挖了一個(gè)洞就失蹤了。她的新主人很擔(dān)心，打電話給尼娜，告訴她他們的悲傷消息——沙維再次獨(dú)自住在街上。大約兩周后，尼娜走在路上，驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)有什么東西碰到了自己的腿。那是Shavi！妮娜哭了起來，簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信這只狗走了這么遠(yuǎn)只是為了找到她。
What was mst fascinating abut the reunin is that Shavi als mves thers. Nina’s family had mved t a bigger apartment. “I’ve heard amazing stries abut dgs’ lyalty，but I never imagined this srt f thing wuld ever happen t me. Even nw，I can hardly believe this dg traveled such a lng distance t find us，” said Nina，“I wuld never give this kind f friend away again. I never grw tired f repeating this—animals are the mst devted and lving creatures. They need ur lve and care.”
這次團(tuán)聚最迷人的是，沙維也感動(dòng)了其他人。尼娜的家人已經(jīng)搬到了一間更大的公寓里?！拔衣犝f過關(guān)于狗忠誠(chéng)的驚人故事，但我從來沒有想過這種事情會(huì)發(fā)生在我身上。即使是現(xiàn)在，我也簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信這只狗走了這么遠(yuǎn)的距離才能找到我們，”尼娜說，“我再也不會(huì)放棄這種朋友了。我從不厭倦重復(fù)這些話，動(dòng)物是最忠誠(chéng)、最可愛的生物。他們需要我們的愛和關(guān)心?！?br>第17篇 忠誠(chéng)的狗
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A lyal dg has cntinued t shw its lyalty，keeping watch n its wner’s grave six years after he passed away.
Capitan，a German shepherd，reprtedly ran away frm hme after its wner，Miguel Guzman，died in 2006.A week later，the Guzman family fund the dg sitting by his grave in central Argentina.
Miguel Guzman adpted Capitan in 2005 as a gift fr his teenage sn，Damian. And fr the past six years，Capitan has cntinued t stand guard at Miguel’s grave. The family says the dg rarely leaves the site.
“We searched fr him，but in vain，” Mrs. Guzman tld a reprter. “We thught he must have gt run ver and died.”
“The fllwing Sunday we went t the cemetery，and Damian recgnized his pet. Capitan came up t us，barking as if he were crying.”
Adding t the unusual circumstances，Mrs. Guzman says the family never brught Capitan t the cemetery befre he was discvered there.
“It is a mystery hw he managed t find the place，” she said.
Cemetery directr Hectr Baccega says he and his staff have begun feeding and taking care f Capitan.
“He turned up here ne day，all n his wn，and started wandering all arund the cemetery until he eventually fund the tmb f his master，” Baccega said.
“During the day he smetimes has a walk arund the cemetery，but always rushes back t the grave. And every day，at six ’clck sharp，he lies dwn n tp f the grave，stays there all night.”
But the Guzman family hasn’t abandned Capitan. Damian says the family has tried t bring Capitan hme several times but that he always returns t the cemetery n his wn.
“I think he’s ging t be there until he dies，t. He’s lking after my dad，” he said.
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Several mnths passed and the dg kept waiting there with perseverance as if his wner were bund t return frm very distant place.
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【答案】Several mnths passed and the dg kept waiting there with perseverance as if his wner were bund t return frm very distant place.It was getting freezing cld.Capitan lay n the cemetery just like playing with his wner Miguel Guzman.It’s mre than a pleasure accmpanying his master and smetimes he barked as if he were crying.He was extremely eager t make Guzman aware f his mind that he wuld rather keep his lneliness than leave.
幾個(gè)月過去了，那只狗堅(jiān)持不懈地在那里等著，好像它的主人一定要從非常遙遠(yuǎn)的地方回來似的。天氣變冷了。就像和他的主人米格爾·古茲曼一起玩一樣。這不僅僅是一種陪伴主人的樂趣，有時(shí)就像他在哭一樣。他非?？释尮牌澛庾R(shí)到他的想法，他寧愿保持孤獨(dú)也不愿離開。
The dg fell asleep in a daze n the grave during the night.The Guzman family fund their pet，Capitan died in happiness，enjying his dream.It’s a mystery between Capitan and his master Guzman.N ther persn culd understand it.Capitan was buried beside his wner and the family believe their lyal dg will surely live in heaven with Guzman.
狗在墳?zāi)股纤?。古茲曼一家發(fā)現(xiàn)了他們的寵物，卡皮坦幸福地死去，享受著他的夢(mèng)想。這是卡皮坦和他的主人古茲曼之間的關(guān)系。沒有任何一個(gè)人能理解它?？ㄆぬ贡辉嵩谒闹魅伺赃?，家人相信這只皇室狗肯定會(huì)和古茲曼住在天堂。
第18篇 拯救口渴的鹿
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It was ne f the httest days f the dry seasn. We had nt seen rain in almst a mnth. The crps were dying. Cws had stpped giving milk. The creeks and streams were lng gne back int the earth. If we didn’t see sme rain sn，we wuld lse everything. It was n this day that I learned the true lessn f sharing and witnessed the nly miracle I have ever seen in my life.
I was making lunch fr the family when I saw my 6­year­ld sn，Billy，walking tward the wds. I culd nly see his back. He wasn’t walking with his usual way. He was bviusly walking with great effrt，trying t be as still as pssible. Minutes after he disappeared int the wds，he came running ut again tward the huse. I went back t make sandwiches，thinking that whatever he had been ding was cmpleted. Mments later，hwever，he was nce again walking in that unusual way tward the wds. This activity went n fr an hur. Finally I culdn’t take it any lnger. I walked ut f the huse and fllwed him.
He was cupping bth hands in frnt f him as he walked，being very careful nt t spill the water he carried. I sneaked(偷偷地走) clse as he went int the wds. Branches and thrns slapped his little face but he did nt try t avid them. He might have a much higher purpse，I thught. As I came clser，I saw the mst amazing sight. Several large deer std in frnt f him. Billy walked right up t them，at the sight f which I almst screamed fr him t get away. A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerusly clse. But the buck did nt threaten him nr even mve as Billy knelt dwn. And then I saw a tiny baby deer lying n the grund，bviusly suffering frm thirst and heat，lift its head with great effrt t lap up the water in my by’s hands.
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When the water was gne，Billy jumped up t run back t the huse. I fllwed him back t a tap. Billy pened it with his small hand and a small trickle f water began t run ut. He knelt there，letting the drip slwly fill up his “cup”．Then he ran quickly t the thirsty animals.
水沒了，比利跳起來跑回屋里。我跟著他回來敲門。比利用他的小手打開它，一點(diǎn)水開始耗盡。他跪在那里，讓滴水慢慢地填滿他的“杯子”。然后，他迅速地跑到那些饑渴的動(dòng)物們面前。
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And nw I knew what’s ging n. The week befre，he had made the same truble with ur hrses，which caused him a lecture frm his father abut the imprtance f nt wasting water. That shuld be the reasn he didn’t ask me fr help. It tk much time fr the drps t fill his hands. His eyes were filled with tears，saying “I’m nt wasting”．Nw，I let him attend the baby deer alne fr it was his jb while I just std n the edge f the wds watching. All I can say is that the rain that came that day saved ur farm，just like the actins f ne little by saved anther.
現(xiàn)在我知道發(fā)生了什么了。一個(gè)星期前，他對(duì)我們的馬惹了同樣的麻煩，這使他父親告誡他不浪費(fèi)水的重要性。這應(yīng)該是他沒有向我求助的原因。水滴花了很多時(shí)間才填滿他的手。他的眼睛里充滿了淚水，說著“我不是在浪費(fèi)”?，F(xiàn)在，我讓他獨(dú)自去看小鹿，因?yàn)檫@是他的工作，而我只是站在樹林邊看著。我能說的是，那天的雨救了我們的農(nóng)場(chǎng)，就像一個(gè)小男孩的行動(dòng)救了另一個(gè)小男孩一樣。
第19篇 家庭最重要
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Twenty years ag, I drve a taxi fr a living. One night I went t pick up a passenger at 2:30 a. m. When I arrived t cllect, I fund the building was dark except fr a single light in a grund flr windw.
I walked t the dr and kncked, "Just a minute," answered a weak, elderly vice.
After a lng time, the dr pened. A small wman in her eighties std befre me. By her side was a small suitcase.
I tk the suitcase t the car, and then returned t help the wman. She tk my arm and we walked slwly twards the car.
She kept thanking me fr my kindness. "It's nthing," I tld her. "I just try t treat my passengers the way I wuld want my mther treated."
"Oh, yu're such a gd man." She said. When we gt int the taxi, she gave me an address, and then asked, "Culd yu drive thrugh dwntwn?"
"It's nt the shrtest way," I answered quickly.
"Oh, I'm in n hurry," she said. "I'm n my way t a hspice? (臨終醫(yī)院). I dn't have any family left. The dctr says I dn't have very lng. "
I quietly reached ver and shut ff the meter (計(jì)價(jià)器). Fr the next tw hurs, we drve thrugh the city. She shwed me the building where she had nce wrked, the neighbrhd where she had lived, and the furniture shp that had nce been a ballrm where she had gne dancing as a girl.
Smetimes she'd ask me t slw dwn in frnt f a particular building and wuld sit staring int the darkness, saying nthing.
At dawn, she suddenly said, "I'm tired. Let's g nw." We drve in silence L the address she had given me.
"Hw much d I we yu?" she asked.
"Nthing." I said.
"Yu have t make a living," she answered. "Oh, there are ther passengers," I answered. She said thanks t me, but she lked s sad.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；
4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
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Almst withut thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held nt me tightly. Befre the wman left , I said t her, “My mther treated everyne kindly, she is a great persn, but she passed away years ag. yu are like my mther,” the wman said, “ thank yu. If yu want t visit me, I’ll tell yu my stry.” Then the wman left. After a lng pause, I drve the taxi t g hme.
我?guī)缀醪患偎妓鞯?，彎下腰給了她一個(gè)擁抱。她緊緊地抓住我。在那個(gè)女人離開之前，我對(duì)她說：“我母親對(duì)每個(gè)人都很好，她是一個(gè)偉大的人，但她幾年前就去世了。你就像我媽媽一樣，”那女人說，“謝謝你。如果你想去看我，我會(huì)告訴你我的故事。然后那個(gè)女人離開了。停了很久之后，我開著出租車回家了。
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The next day, I was n my way t visit her. The ld wman tld me that she used t be a millinaire. She became immersed in making mney. She was the wner f a particular building we saw last night. But she neglected her family. her nly sn died ne year ag because f cancer. She sld everything t save him, but failed. Hw sad！ At last, the ld wman said t me, “Life is shrt, but please be in n hurry. Thugh everyne has t earn mney t make a living, always remember that family is the mst imprtant thing t yu,” I said nthing but ndded hard.
第二天，我就在去看她的路上。老婦人告訴我，她曾經(jīng)是個(gè)百萬富翁。她開始于賺錢。她是我們昨晚看到的一幢大樓的主人。但她忽視了她的家人。她唯一的兒子一年前死于癌癥。她賣掉了一切來救他，但都失敗了。多么多的悲傷?。∽詈?，老婦人對(duì)我說：“生命很短暫，但請(qǐng)不要著急?！彪m然每個(gè)人都必須賺錢才能謀生，但你要永遠(yuǎn)記住，家庭對(duì)你來說是最重要的事情?！蔽沂裁匆矝]說，只是使勁地點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭。
第20篇 一輩子的朋友
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“Friends are angels wh leave miracles (奇跡) in yur heart.”“Quilts sewn by friends are a true cmfrt.”． tk a lt f time. But the messages n it felt meaningful.
When I started my current prject,_I wke up every day with new ideas and fresh enthusiasm. I really believed the imprtance f what I wanted t create, and I had my husband, Claudi,_cheer me n. But then, things gt hard. I injured my shulder and my recvery was slw. In the middle f it, I lst Claudi t cancer. Then I was discuraged, lnely, and withut Claudi's supprt. Facing dwn the half-finished quilt in my sewing rm ne mrning sn after his death, I culd hardly gather the energy t sew it.
The quilt was meant t be a way t keep my ld nursing class tgether. We'd graduated frm Mercy Cllege f Ohi ver 40 years befre and quickly wrked all ver the cuntry. I always tried t find ways t cnnect everyne tgether, but nthing ever seemed t wrk ut. I knew I needed t find a cnnectin t share at a distance. I thught abut a quilt.
I gt in tuch with as many f my ld classmates as I culd. Everyne wh wanted t jin the prject was sent a piece f fabric (織物). They culd sign it r write a persnal message. Once I gt the pieces back, I'd sew them n the finished piece.
I rubbed my painful shulder and ran my hand ver the unfinished quilt. There was still s much t d. Our class's frty-fifth anniversary party was cming up, but my heart wasn't in this prject anymre. With Claudi's encuragement I'd kept at it despite my painful shulder. But Claudi was gne. Wrking n the quilt was impssible with my aches and pains. Why was I even trying? I cvered up my sewing_machine and left the quilt as it was.
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Weeks passed but I didn't sew a thing. I thught f it ne afternn when I went int my sewing rm t dust. Quilting pieces cvered the table. They were filled with clrful messages frm my ld classmates. I picked ne up：“Mercy sisters—friends frever！”The handwriting was messy, but the statement was true. I culd almst imagine my ld friends right beside me, whispering wrds f encuragement and lve. Maybe I was nt as alne as I thught. Suddenly my prject n lnger felt s frightening. N time t waste. I uncvered my sewing_machine and gt t wrk.
幾個(gè)星期過去了，但我什么也沒縫。一天下午，我走進(jìn)縫紉室撣去灰塵，想到了。絎縫的碎片覆蓋著桌子。里面充滿了我老同學(xué)們豐富多彩的信息。我拿了一個(gè)：“仁愛姐妹，永遠(yuǎn)的朋友！”筆跡很亂，但說法是真的。我?guī)缀蹩梢韵胂笪业睦吓笥丫驮谖疑磉?，低語(yǔ)著鼓勵(lì)和愛。也許我并不像我想的那么孤單。突然間，我的項(xiàng)目不再感到那么可怕了。不要浪費(fèi)任何時(shí)間。我打開了我的縫紉機(jī)，開始工作了。
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I arrived at ur frty-fifth anniversary party equipped with pictures f the finished quilt. The ladies cheered as the phts went frm hand t hand. I culdn't wait fr them t hld the real thing, fr them t be cvered in the cmfrt f ld friends, just like I had been when I needed it mst. N matter hw much the distance was, whether it was frm heaven r Earth acrss the cuntry, Claudi and my friends wuld always be there fr me in spirit.
我到達(dá)了我們的-五十周年派對(duì)配備完成被子的照片。，女士們歡呼起來。我迫不及待地讓他們拿著真正的東西，讓他們得到老朋友的安慰，就像我最需要它的時(shí)候一樣。無論距離有多遠(yuǎn)，無論是從天堂還是從大地出發(fā)，克勞迪奧和我的朋友們都將在精神上永遠(yuǎn)陪伴著我。
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