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(2019·全國Ⅲ卷)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 時間；
2. 活動安排；
3. 歡迎他表演節(jié)目。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。




【高分范文】
Dear Allen，
Hw is everything ging? Our schl will hld a music festival next Sunday in the schl hall with the aim f enriching students' after-schl life. ①And I'm writing t invite yu t jin us.
The pening ceremny will start at 9：00 a．m., and the schlmaster will deliver a speech first. ②Then there will be varius fantastic perfrmances given by talented students. ③Yu are particularly welcme t shw up n stage, which will definitely add clur and fun t ur festival.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely，
Li Hua
點評：
1. 詞匯美：文章運用了很多高級詞匯，如deliver a speech, varius, fantastic, talented, particularly, shw up, n stage, definitely, add ... t ...等。
2. 句式美：①句writing后接不定式作目的狀語，invite后接不定式作賓語補足語。
②句given by talented students是過去分詞短語作后置定語。
③句which引導非限制性定語從句。
(2021·江蘇徐州一中模擬)假定你是李華，是學校學生會主席。請你代表學生會寫封郵件給外教Ms Brwn，邀請她參加學生會組織的英語角(English Crner)活動，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 活動時間和地點；
2. 活動內(nèi)容和目的；
3. 希望外教給予指導。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Ms Brwn，





Yurs，
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Ms Brwn，
I'm Li Hua, chairman f the Students' Unin. Representing all the students in ur schl, I'm sincerely inviting yu t take part in ne f ur activities, English Crner.
The activity is aimed nt nly t aruse ur interest in learning English and practise ur ral English, but als t ffer us a chance t make mre friends. During the activity, everyne, bth teachers and students, shuld talk in English. This time, we hpe yu can ffer us sme methds f imprving ur ral English. Yu are als expected t intrduce smething abut yur cuntry. Please cme t jin us in the schl garden frm 4：00 p．m. t 6：00 p．m. every Saturday.
Lking frward t yur participatin.
Yurs，
Li Hua
Ⅱ. 讀后續(xù)寫
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
It was deep int the night many years ag. The rain just came puring dwn utside. An elderly man and his wife entered the lbby (大廳) f a small htel in Philadelphia, USA.[懸念1]
Trying t get ut f the rain, the cuple apprached the frnt desk hping t get a rm t stay in fr the night.
“Culd yu pssibly give us a rm here？” the husband asked.
The clerk, a friendly yung man with a winning smile, lked at the cuple and explained that there were three cnferences in the twn. “All f ur rms are taken，” the clerk said. “But I can't send a nice cuple like yu ut int the rain at ne 'clck at night. Wuld yu perhaps be willing t sleep in my rm? It's nt exactly a suite, but it will be gd enugh t make yu cmfrtable fr the night.”
When the cuple declined, the yung man pressed n. “Dn't wrry abut me. I'll make ut just fine，” the clerk tld them. S the cuple agreed.
As he paid his bill the next mrning, the elderly man said t the clerk, “Yu are the kind f manager wh shuld be the bss f the best htel. Maybe smeday I'll build ne fr yu.[懸念2]”
The clerk lked at them and smiled. The three f them had a gd laugh. As they drve away, the elderly cuple agreed that the helpful clerk was indeed exceptinal, as finding peple wh are bth friendly and helpful isn't easy.
Three years passed. The clerk had almst frgtten the thing when he received a letter frm the elderly man. It recalled that strmy night, when he ffered his kind help t the elderly cuple. In the envelpe, there was a rund-trip ticket t New Yrk, and a letter asking the yung man t pay them a visit. The yung man decided t set ut immediately.[懸念3]
注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右。
“D yu still remember my prmise years ag？” the elderly man said t the yung man.



“Yu must be jking，” the yung man said.



一、理清文章大意
關(guān)鍵：Wh: a yung man and an ld cuple
Where: in a small htel
When: n a rainy night
What: The ld cuple wanted t sleep in the htel fr the night.
Hw: The yung man prvided his wn rm fr the cuple t live in.
大意：文章講述了一位年輕人在一個雨夜把自己的房間提供給一對老夫婦的故事。
二、挖掘文中懸念點
懸念1 思考：這對老夫婦是什么來頭？
懸念2思考：老人是在開玩笑嗎？如果是許諾，他會信守諾言嗎？
懸念3思考：年輕人見到老人之后會發(fā)生什么事情？
三、分析段落開頭語
段首句1思考：
①年輕人還記得那天晚上的事情嗎？
②老人是否會解釋一下那天晚上的承諾？
段首句2思考：
①老人對年輕人的話會怎樣回復？
②新建的賓館在哪里？
③年輕人真的會成為賓館的經(jīng)理嗎？
通過以上思路，預設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下：
Paragraph 1：重提諾言→驚訝→解釋
Paragraph 2：難以置信→誠懇邀請→成功
【高分范文】
“D yu still remember my prmise years ag？” the elderly man said t the yung man. The yung man was puzzled and remembered nthing f what the elderly man had said years befre. He just lked at the elderly man in surprise, shaking his head. “Well，” the elderly man went n. “I prmised t build a htel fr yu when I left yur htel. Yu are s kind and s helpful. I'm sure yu will turn ut t be a gd bss in the future. I have firm trust in yu.
“Yu must be jking，” the yung man said. “I'm serius，” said the elderly man with a smile arund his muth. He then pinted t a great new building there. “That，” said the elderly man, “is the htel I have just built fr yu. I hpe yu can take charge f it.” Thus, the yung clerk became the first manager f the htel. But he had never expected the turn f events that wuld lead him t becme the manager f ne f the wrld's mst famus htels.
點評：
1. 使用恰當?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動。
①shaking his head作狀語，映襯出了人物心理。
②Yu are s kind and s helpful兩個s連用，加強了說話者的語氣。
2. 詞匯與語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準確。
①文章使用了in surprise, turn ut, pint t, take charge f等高級詞匯。
②what the elderly man had said years befre這個賓語從句的使用是一個增分點。
③that wuld lead him ... 是定語從句。

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