突破07 清晰傳遞信息的表達(dá)法
（以咨詢(xún)信、申請(qǐng)信與道歉信等為例）
【技法演練】
【典例分析】
(2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ改編)假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫(huà)展。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫(xiě)信目的；2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；3.能做的事情。
注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。
【寫(xiě)作示例】
第一步　審五要素，三段謀篇

審主題
審體裁
審語(yǔ)言
審格式
審內(nèi)容
申請(qǐng)做
美術(shù)館
志愿者
申請(qǐng)信
人稱(chēng)：
第一人稱(chēng)
申請(qǐng)信可分三段
第1段(開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山)
自我介紹，說(shuō)明招聘信息，提出申請(qǐng)
時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在
時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)
第2段(介紹自身優(yōu)勢(shì))
具體闡述個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)：語(yǔ)言能力和相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)
尾段(巧妙收尾)
說(shuō)明申請(qǐng)獲準(zhǔn)后的打算并表示期待
第二步　雕詞酌句，設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn)
【技法強(qiáng)化】
1．得知你們當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館即將舉辦的中國(guó)畫(huà)展需要志愿者，我迫不及待地想申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位。
①高級(jí)詞匯和句式(被動(dòng)句)：I've learned in your local art gallery, so .
②高級(jí)句式(利用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)升級(jí))：
.
2．如被錄用，我會(huì)不遺余力地介紹那些展出的作品，耐心地回答問(wèn)題。
①高級(jí)詞匯：If I am accepted,
.
②高級(jí)句式(利用省略句升級(jí))：
.
第三步　巧妙過(guò)渡，完美成篇



【語(yǔ)篇整合】
1．咨詢(xún)信

滿(mǎn)分句式記憶
開(kāi)頭句(自我介紹，說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的)
①I(mǎi)'m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning the English summer camp.
我寫(xiě)信是想看看你是否能給我提供有關(guān)英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)的信息。
②I'm writing to you in the hope of getting some details of the two-week journey.
我寫(xiě)信給你是想了解這兩周旅行的一些細(xì)節(jié)。
③I'm wondering if/whether you could/would offer some specific information related to your advertisement.
不知道你是否能夠告知我有關(guān)你們的廣告的一些具體信息。
篇中句(咨詢(xún)具體信息，強(qiáng)調(diào)所需信息的重要性)
①Could you be so kind as to tell me the detailed arrangement for those online courses?
您能告訴我這些網(wǎng)課的具體安排嗎？
②Another point I'm uncertain about is whether the meals are covered in the total expenses.
我還不確定的另一點(diǎn)是餐費(fèi)是否包含在全部費(fèi)用之中。
③I would be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for taking part in the voluntary activity.
如果你能告訴我對(duì)參加這個(gè)志愿者活動(dòng)是否有任何特殊要求， 我將不勝感激。
④If there is anything else that needs special attention, please inform me at your convenience.
如果還有什么需要特別注意的地方，請(qǐng)?jiān)诜奖愕臅r(shí)候告訴我。
⑤What deserves my special attention is whether there is enough time for shopping.
我特別關(guān)注的是是否有足夠的時(shí)間購(gòu)物。
⑥Nothing can be better if you can take the trouble to offer me some relevant materials about the course.
如果您能給我提供一些這門(mén)課的相關(guān)資料，那就再好不過(guò)了。
結(jié)尾句(表達(dá)想獲取信息的強(qiáng)烈愿望，提供聯(lián)系方式并表示感謝)
①Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感謝您的好意，如能及時(shí)關(guān)注此信，我將不勝感激。
②Please share with me some specific information about your schedule. Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
請(qǐng)告訴我一些有關(guān)你們?nèi)粘贪才诺木唧w信息。盼望盡快收到你的回信。
③I would appreciate it if you could give me more detailed information about your schedule.
如果您能給我更詳細(xì)的日程安排，我將不勝感激。
2．告知信
告知信是告訴對(duì)方有關(guān)活動(dòng)事宜、其他情況類(lèi)變化或讓對(duì)方執(zhí)行有關(guān)事宜的應(yīng)用文。
滿(mǎn)分句式記憶
開(kāi)頭句(開(kāi)篇表明目的)
①Learning you are enthusiastic about the art festival, I'm delighted to share with you some details.
得知你對(duì)藝術(shù)節(jié)很感興趣，我很高興告訴你一些細(xì)節(jié)。
②I'm eager/excited to inform you of a voluntary activity that you may be interested in.
我迫切/激動(dòng)地告訴你一個(gè)你可能感興趣的志愿者活動(dòng)。
③I can hardly wait to share with you the exciting news that a folk music festival is to be held in our city.
我迫不及待地告訴你一個(gè)令人激動(dòng)的消息。我們市即將舉行民間音樂(lè)節(jié)。
篇中句(說(shuō)明相關(guān)情況)
①The next class is about calligraphy, for which you are supposed to make some preparations.
下一節(jié)課程是書(shū)法，你應(yīng)做好上課準(zhǔn)備。
②I hope the change of the course arrangement will not cause you too much trouble/inconvenience.
我希望課程安排的變化不會(huì)給你帶來(lái)太多麻煩/不便。
③Not only was the activity a fabulous feast for the eyes but it also inspired us to work harder.
這次活動(dòng)不僅是一場(chǎng)視覺(jué)盛宴，也激勵(lì)我們更加努力地工作。
結(jié)尾句(結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題，期盼再次聯(lián)系)
①I(mǎi)'d appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
如能盡早回復(fù)我將不勝感激。
②If you want to know anything else, please don't hesitate to contact me.
你如果想知道其他事情，請(qǐng)盡管聯(lián)系我。
3．申請(qǐng)信
申請(qǐng)信是應(yīng)用文中考查頻率較高的形式，用于向組織或個(gè)人提出申請(qǐng)，比如求職申請(qǐng)、加入某組織或活動(dòng)的申請(qǐng)、報(bào)考申請(qǐng)或留學(xué)申請(qǐng)等。
滿(mǎn)分句式記憶
開(kāi)頭句(自我介紹、說(shuō)明招聘信息提出申請(qǐng))
①Learning the school basketball team is looking for new members, I'm excited to apply to be a member of it.
得知校籃球隊(duì)在招收新隊(duì)員，我激動(dòng)地申請(qǐng)成為其中一員。
②From the advertisement I know a host is needed for the coming music festival, so I can't wait to apply for the position.
我從廣告中得知即將到來(lái)的音樂(lè)節(jié)需要主持人，我迫不及待地申請(qǐng)?jiān)撀毼弧?br /> 篇中句(闡述優(yōu)勢(shì)：資格、性格特征、交際能力、語(yǔ)言能力和相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn))
①I(mǎi)'m active and sociable, which equips me with good qualities that a host needs.
我很活躍，善于交際，這使我具備了主持人所需要的良好品質(zhì)。
②With a good command of English, I can communicate with foreign visitors with great ease.
我精通英語(yǔ)能與外國(guó)游客輕松地交流。
③I have taken part in several such great activities in which I have gained relevant experience.
我參加過(guò)幾次這樣的大型活動(dòng)，積累了相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
④Equally importantly, I previously served as a volunteer several times, which is also an advantage over other applicants.
同樣重要的是，我之前做過(guò)幾次志愿者，這也是我相對(duì)于其他申請(qǐng)者的一個(gè)優(yōu)勢(shì)。
結(jié)尾句(說(shuō)明申請(qǐng)獲準(zhǔn)后的打算并表示期待)
①Any favorable consideration of my application will be appreciated. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
如蒙考慮，本人將不勝感激。期待您的早日回復(fù)。
②If accepted, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
如被錄取，我將不遺余力地提供我最佳的服務(wù)。
4．道歉信
道歉信應(yīng)對(duì)自己具體的過(guò)失和疏忽作出解釋(一般要求考生自由發(fā)揮)，道歉的原因一定要真實(shí)而且容易接受，語(yǔ)言要得體委婉，表示出誠(chéng)意。
滿(mǎn)分句式記憶
開(kāi)頭句(說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信意圖，對(duì)某事表示歉意)
①I(mǎi)'m writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for not accompanying you to the gallery at our appointed time.
我寫(xiě)信向你表達(dá)我誠(chéng)摯的歉意，因?yàn)槲覜](méi)有在我們約定的時(shí)間陪你去畫(huà)廊。
②Now, I'm writing you this letter to show my deep regret.
現(xiàn)在，我寫(xiě)信向你表達(dá)我深切的遺憾。
篇中句(具體說(shuō)明道歉的原因，提出補(bǔ)救措施)
①The reason why I won't be available at that time as planned is that my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and I have to care for him.
我不能按計(jì)劃屆時(shí)去，因?yàn)槲易娓缸蛱焱蝗簧×耍冶仨氄疹櫵?br /> ②I have just found I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause too much trouble.
我剛發(fā)現(xiàn)我那天下午要參加一個(gè)重要的班會(huì)。我希望這種變化不會(huì)造成太大的麻煩。
③I feel so sorry for not keeping my word, but would you give me a chance to say sorry to you face to face?
我很抱歉沒(méi)有信守諾言，但你能給我個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)當(dāng)面向你道歉嗎？
④I'll appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time. If not, please keep me informed in advance of what time suits you best.
如果您能允許我另安排時(shí)間，我將不勝感激。如果沒(méi)有，請(qǐng)?zhí)崆案嬖V我何時(shí)最適合你。
結(jié)尾句(再次表明歉意，請(qǐng)求諒解)
①I(mǎi) sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.
對(duì)于這個(gè)意外的變化給您帶來(lái)的不便，我深表歉意。
②Please allow me to say sorry again, and I'll try to make up for my fault.
請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我再次致歉，我將盡力彌補(bǔ)我的過(guò)錯(cuò)。
5．推薦信
推薦信是推薦事物(包括人文歷史、旅游觀光和文體娛樂(lè)等)、某事或某人的書(shū)信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)先點(diǎn)題，表明收到對(duì)方的郵件，然后主體部分陳述詳細(xì)的推薦理由。
滿(mǎn)分句式記憶
開(kāi)頭句(說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的及要推薦的對(duì)象)
①Learning from your last letter that you are eager to explore traditional Chinese culture, I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice.
從你上一封信中得知你渴望探索中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，我認(rèn)為古詩(shī)是你最好的選擇。
②Delighted/Pleased that you are going to pay a visit to Xi'an, I'm writing to recommend some tourist attractions deserving visiting to you.
很高興你要去西安游玩，我寫(xiě)信向你推薦一些值得一游的景點(diǎn)。
③It makes me delighted that you show great interest in Chinese martial arts, and that you desire to learn, I'd like to recommend a martial arts teacher to you.
我很高興你對(duì)中國(guó)武術(shù)很感興趣，并且想學(xué)習(xí)武術(shù)，我推薦一個(gè)武術(shù)老師給你。
篇中句(具體說(shuō)明推薦的理由)
①Additionally, with a history of hundreds of years, the Summer Palace reflects typical ancient Chinese architectural art and wisdom.
此外，有著數(shù)百年歷史的頤和園反映了典型的中國(guó)古代建筑藝術(shù)和智慧。
②As one of the world's wonders, the Great Wall is regarded as the symbol of China, which you can't afford to miss.
長(zhǎng)城是世界奇觀之一，是中國(guó)的象征，不容錯(cuò)過(guò)。
③Visiting the Summer Palace by yourself is bound to greatly promote your understanding of the profound traditional Chinese culture.
游覽頤和園一定會(huì)大大促進(jìn)你對(duì)中國(guó)悠久傳統(tǒng)文化的了解。
結(jié)尾句(期待自己的推薦能讓對(duì)方滿(mǎn)意，期盼再次聯(lián)系)
①I(mǎi) do hope you can take my recommendation into account and whenever you need help, don't hesitate to let me know.
我希望你能考慮我的建議。無(wú)論你何時(shí)需要幫助，請(qǐng)及時(shí)讓我知道。
②Hope my recommendation will help you. Wish you a good time/journey.
希望我的推薦能幫到你。祝你玩得/旅途愉快。
6．投訴信
投訴信常被用來(lái)解決諸如消費(fèi)者利益受損、正常生活或工作受到干擾等問(wèn)題。投訴信不同于申請(qǐng)信或邀請(qǐng)信，要直截了當(dāng)、擲地有聲地表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，不能拖泥帶水。
滿(mǎn)分句式記憶
開(kāi)頭句(表明身份，交代要投訴的問(wèn)題)
①Dissatisfied with your poor service, I couldn't feel more annoyed so I can not help but make an immediate complaint.
我很不滿(mǎn)意你們惡劣的服務(wù)，我非常生氣，只得立即投訴。
②There is much to be desired about your after-sales service, so I'm writing to make a complaint about the problems of it.
你們的售后服務(wù)有很多不足之處，因此我寫(xiě)信投訴它的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題。
③I'm Li Hua, a customer who bought a book from your website a week ago. There exists something wrong with several pages. That's why I'm writing to complain.
我是李華，一周前在你們網(wǎng)站買(mǎi)了一本書(shū)。有幾頁(yè)有問(wèn)題，所以我寫(xiě)信投訴。
篇中句(描述投訴原因，問(wèn)題的經(jīng)過(guò)及產(chǎn)生的后果)
①Personally, it's time your service should be improved to live up to the customers' expectations.
依我看，現(xiàn)在是改進(jìn)服務(wù)以滿(mǎn)足顧客期望的時(shí)候了。
②Worse still, several pages in the book are missing, which makes it impossible for me to make sense of the book.
更糟糕的是，書(shū)里少了幾頁(yè)，這讓我無(wú)法理解這本書(shū)。
③Much to my dissatisfaction, the cellphone is not easy to operate, causing me much inconvenience. What's worse, it often breaks down for no reasons, which shows its poor quality.
令我很不滿(mǎn)意的是，手機(jī)不容易操作，給我?guī)?lái)了很多不便。更糟糕的是，它經(jīng)常毫無(wú)理由地壞掉，這表明它的質(zhì)量很差。
結(jié)尾句(提出解決方案)
①I(mǎi) do hope you will take my complaint seriously and get it settled as soon as possible.
我真的希望你能認(rèn)真對(duì)待我的投訴，并盡快處理它。
②I wonder if I can get my money back, or I wish you could have it repaired or changed. I hope you will do what you can to fix the problem.
我不知道能否把錢(qián)拿回來(lái)，或者我希望你能把它修好或換掉。我希望你能盡力解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。
【技法強(qiáng)化】
Writing 1 告知信
假定你是李華，你所在的書(shū)法班由于書(shū)畫(huà)室修理門(mén)窗推遲課程，請(qǐng)給你同班的外國(guó)朋友Tom寫(xiě)信告知此事，內(nèi)容包括：
1．推遲原因；
2．新的上課時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
3．期待課上見(jiàn)面。
注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。






Writing 2 道歉信
假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tracy下個(gè)月將來(lái)你所在的城市參加夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，想要寄宿你家，但你有事無(wú)法接待。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．解釋原因；
3．提供幫助。
注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。







參考答案
【技法演練】
1．得知你們當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館即將舉辦的中國(guó)畫(huà)展需要志愿者，我迫不及待地想申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位。
①高級(jí)詞匯和句式(被動(dòng)句)：I've learned volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery, so I can't wait to apply for the position.
②高級(jí)句式(利用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)升級(jí))：Learning volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery, I can't wait to apply for the position.
2．如被錄用，我會(huì)不遺余力地介紹那些展出的作品，耐心地回答問(wèn)題。
①高級(jí)詞匯：If I am accepted, I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and answer questions patiently.
②高級(jí)句式(利用省略句升級(jí))：If accepted, I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and answer questions patiently.
【語(yǔ)篇整合】
【技法強(qiáng)化】
Writing 1 告知信
Dear Tom，
I'm writing to inform you the calligraphy class will be put off because the door and windows of the calligraphy studio are being repaired.
According to the notice given by the teacher, it has been arranged that the classes over the next few weeks will be carried out in the lecture hall. Moreover, the time of the course has been changed. It begins at 8：30 am and ends at 10：30 am every Monday and Friday.
I hope you will enjoy the course and get a glimpse of fantastic traditional Chinese culture. Looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours，
Li Hua

Writing 2 道歉信
Dear Tracy，
I'm delighted to know you'll come to my city for a summer camp next month, but I'm terribly sorry that I can't accommodate you at my house.
My family has planned a fortnight's trip and can't return before you arrive. If you don't mind, you can live with my cousin. I've already asked her about the stay and she is more than happy to help you out.
If there's anything else I can do for you, don't hesitate to tell me.
Best，
Li Hua

【拓展運(yùn)用】
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假定你是李華，作為交換生在國(guó)外某學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，得知該校即將舉辦國(guó)際服裝文化節(jié)(International Costume Day),你有意向參加服裝展示環(huán)節(jié)，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件咨詢(xún)相關(guān)信息，內(nèi)容包括:
1.寫(xiě)信目的:
2.咨詢(xún)信息(如服飾要求，展示形式等)
3.表達(dá)期待
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右:
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.
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【參考范文】
Dear ladies or gentlemen,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student in this foreign school. I heard that an International Costume Day will be held in the school. Because I am interested in it and want to participate in it , I want to know more information about it.
First of all, I want to know what are the requirements for clothing, student clothing or fashion clothing. Secondly, please tell me how to display the clothing. Is it to do model display or window display? At last, I want to know where and when it is held. Please tell me the information, thanks a lot!
I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作步驟】
本文為書(shū)信體。書(shū)信體作文一般分為三部分。第一部分?jǐn)⑹鰧?xiě)信的目的，即作為交換生得知該校即將舉辦國(guó)際服裝文化節(jié)，你有意向參加服裝展示環(huán)節(jié)，寫(xiě)一封郵件咨詢(xún)相關(guān)信息。第二部分?jǐn)⑹鱿胫赖男畔?，?nèi)容包括：寫(xiě)信目的；咨詢(xún)信息(如服飾要求，展示形式等)；最后一部分表達(dá)你期待對(duì)方的回復(fù)。字?jǐn)?shù)在100字左右。語(yǔ)言要禮貌得體。
【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】
本文要點(diǎn)完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，句式相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單。文中運(yùn)用了一些較為簡(jiǎn)單的從句，如賓語(yǔ)從句，主要三個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，即I heard that an International Costume Day will be held in the school；I want to know what are the requirements for clothing, student clothing or fashion clothing 和 I want to know where and when it is held。還有狀語(yǔ)從句Because I am interested in it and want to participate in it , I want to know more information about it.
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假定你是李華，得知學(xué)校要舉辦英語(yǔ)周活動(dòng)，其間要舉辦多場(chǎng)晚會(huì)，需要招聘晚會(huì)主持人。請(qǐng)你給英語(yǔ)周組委會(huì)的劉老師寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 信息來(lái)源，申請(qǐng)意愿；
2. 自我介紹，申請(qǐng)理由；
3. 表示謝意， 盼望回復(fù)。
注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右
2.可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)
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【參考范文】
Dear Mr. Liu,
I’m LiHua, a student from Class 6，Senior II. I learned from the school website that during the School English Week, several hosts for parties are wanted. I am writing to apply for the position.
I’m sure I am well qualified for the job. To begin with, I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have once hosted different parties in our school. Therefore, I am experienced, which will contribute to my hosting the party well. Last but not least,organizing activities and have a strong team spirit.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply！
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作步驟】
第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
第一部分是文章的開(kāi)頭段，說(shuō)明信息來(lái)源，表達(dá)申請(qǐng)意愿；第二部分是支持段，自我介紹，說(shuō)明申請(qǐng)的理由；第三部分是結(jié)尾段，表示感謝，盼望回復(fù)。
1. 說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的原因：從學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上得知學(xué)校英語(yǔ)周晚會(huì)需要主持人，申請(qǐng)當(dāng)節(jié)目主持人
2. 自我介紹，說(shuō)明申請(qǐng)的理由
①自我介紹：高二6班的學(xué)生
②申請(qǐng)理由：英語(yǔ)流利，曾主持過(guò)幾次晚會(huì)，有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，有組織能力，有很強(qiáng)的團(tuán)隊(duì)合作精神
3. 表示謝意， 希望盡快得到回復(fù)
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
learn from；apply for；be well qualified for；speak English fluently；experienced；contribute to；host the party；be capable of；have a strong team spirit；appreciate；take … into consideration
第三步：連詞成句
(1) I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 6，Senior II.
(2) I learned from the school website that during the School English Week, several hosts for parties are wanted.
(3) I am writing to apply for the position.
(4) I am well qualified for the job.
(5) I can speak English fluently.
(6) I have once hosted different parties in our school.
(7) I am experienced, which will contribute to my hosting the party well.
(8)I am capable of organizing activities and have a strong team spirit.
(9)I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
(10) Looking forward to your early reply.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。
第四步：連句成篇
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：to begin with…in addition…last but not least
2.表因果關(guān)系：therefore
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰。
【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】
[高分句型1]
I am experienced, which will contribute to my hosting the party well.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）
[高分句型3]
I would be grateful if you could consider my application.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）
3
假如你是小區(qū)居民，昨天你誤拿了別人的快遞，拆開(kāi)看見(jiàn)里面的東西不是自己預(yù)定的，你重新包裝后將快遞退回到快遞點(diǎn)并且給收件人寫(xiě)一封道歉信。
內(nèi)容包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 說(shuō)明原因。
注意: 1. 詞數(shù)應(yīng)為120左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
參考詞匯： pickup point (快遞收取點(diǎn))； a community resident（小區(qū)居民）
Dear Sir or Madam,
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A community resident
【參考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to offer my apologies for taking your package by mistake.
Yesterday, I was looking for my package in the pickup point when someone telephoned me. Distracted, I took yours home without looking at the name carefully. It was not until I opened it that I realized I had picked up the wrong one. I immediately I repackaged it and contacted a delivery man to send it on to the pickup point.
Please accept my sincere apologies.
A community resident
【寫(xiě)作步驟】
1.詞匯積累
展示：show→offer
尋找：search for→look for
打電話：call→telephone
立即：at once=immediately
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句：It was not until I opened it that I realized I had picked up the wrong one.
拓展句：It was not until I opened it that I realized I had picked up the wrong one which had your name on it.
【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】
[高分句型1] Yesterday, I was looking for my package in the pickup point when someone telephoned me. (運(yùn)用了be doing...when...句型)
[高分句型2] It was not until I opened it that I realized I had picked up the wrong one. (運(yùn)用了not until的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型及省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)
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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
“Late again, Mavis! How many times have I told you to come back in time to help me cook dinner?” asked Mrs. Muntari.
“But, mummy, I can’t just walk out in the middle of a game!” said Mavis, who was nearly breathless after running all the way home.
“You shouldn’t be playing the game in the first place,” Mrs. Muntari said as she stopped cooking and looked at Mavis.
“But, mum, I want to play football. Why can’t I? You never tell Adibe or Senzo not to play football. I had to leave the game at half time and rush back so you wouldn’t get cross with me,” said Mavis.
“You’re a girl! It is as simple as that. Boys and girls have different roles to play. I have 11 hungry mouths to feed and I need your help!” Mrs. Muntari tasted the porridge and added some more water. You’re the oldest girl not working, so it is your job to help me. That is the way of our people. Now go and fry some more chicken. Kulu had to help me since you were not here. She burnt her finger and is still crying. I even had to ask your cousin from next door to come and help me.”
At the dinner table, Adibe and Senzo were excitedly talking about today’s game, while eating the chicken that Mavis had fried. They talked about how Mavis scored in the first half with a power shot from the halfway line. It was a great goal as their team was losing 1-0 at that time.
Dad came home then and brought the boys a local newspaper, in which there was news about football scouts from England visiting Ghana. These scouts had asked to be allowed to visit various schools to look for players of the future. Adibe and Senzo looked at each other and cheered, “Wow, I’m going to be like Essien!” And they started arguing which one would make it as a superstar.
Mavis knew that her parents would never allow her to play football. But she decided to secretly take this chance. She began to think about what she could do.
注意: 1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)為150左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Soon it came to the day when the scouts visited Mavis’s school.
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When Mavis arrived at the playground, it was at half time.
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【參考范文】
Paragraph 1：
Soon it came to the day when the scouts visited Mavis’s school. The boys had left for the competition, yet Mavis had to help her mum do the dishes. With an desperate urge to meet the scouts, Mavis decided that she had got to make it to school. While she was racking her brains for a way to sneak out, she heard her little sister crying suddenly. Mum left to comfort her. “It’s the time!” Mavis thought. Despite knowing that her parents might get cross with her, she quickly rushed out and ran all the way to school.
Paragraph 2：
When Mavis arrived at the playground, it was at half time. She noticed one player had his knees terribly injured and the coach was worried, “I can replace him!” Mavis shouted. Though it was unbelievable to let a girl play, the coach agreed. During the second half, Mavis defended keenly and ran flexibly, and she made an amazing shot that caught the attention of the scouts! They turned to the coach for information about Mavis, the only girl among the players. When the game was over, the scouts all stood up and clapped their hands. Mavis was proud. She was pretty sure that football was never just a game for boys.
【文章大意】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了Mavis知道她的父母永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)允許她踢足球，于是她決定偷偷地抓住英國(guó)足球球探訪問(wèn)加納的機(jī)會(huì)，開(kāi)始考慮她能做些什么。在她的努力爭(zhēng)取下，Mavis終于上場(chǎng)，踢出一腳技驚四座的射門(mén)，引起了球探的注意。
【寫(xiě)作步驟】
1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“很快就到了球探參觀Mavis學(xué)校的那一天。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)Mavis是如何趕到學(xué)校的。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)Mavis到達(dá)操場(chǎng)時(shí)，已經(jīng)是半場(chǎng)了。”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)Mavis是如何得到上場(chǎng)機(jī)會(huì)的。
2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：球探參觀Mavis學(xué)?！狹avis努力趕去學(xué)?！狹avis到達(dá)操場(chǎng)——Mavis得到上場(chǎng)機(jī)會(huì)——Mavis踢出一腳技驚四座的射門(mén)
3.詞匯激活
行為類(lèi)
洗碗：do the dishes/ wash the dishes
決定：decide to do/ be determined to do
偷偷溜走：sneak out / sneak away
情緒類(lèi)
極度渴望：with an desperate urge /be eager to do
生氣：be angry about/ be mad at
【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】
[高分句型1] While she was racking her brains for a way to sneak out, she heard her little sister crying suddenly. (運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2] Though it was unbelievable to let a girl play, the coach agreed. (運(yùn)用了though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)
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閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。
Nowadays, the Spring Festival parties are quite different from before. People are not together in the same home but in cyberspace. It is another symptom of the so-called smartphone reliance syndrome（智能手機(jī)依賴(lài)癥）. For many people, they use the smartphone in office, at home, even on the road; they play with it while eating ,drinking, even while bathing. But really it is not the fault of our smartphones, which were created to help us communicate with one even thousand of kilometers away and bring more convenience to our lives.
Ironically, we feel more distanced from each other in the real world. The reason is that we have more choices now, and we have to keep up with virtual conversations for fear of missing something. Smartphones and other smart devices have revolutionized the way we interact with each other. We have adapted to the technology.
However, one group risks being left behind by this trend. The elderly do not accept new technologies as fast as the younger and they can not enjoy the convenience of new technologies either. They even don’t access the Internet much. According to a survey released by China Internet Network Information Center, there were 731 million netizens in China by the end of 2016, but only 4 percent were above the age of 60. The elderly face the loneliness of being “l(fā)eft behind” by their children working in cities far away. Spring Festival is almost the only chance for them to talk with the younger, yet smartphones rob them of this opportunity.
The only way the younger and elder generations can meaningfully interact is that the former put down their smartphones during this holiday and talk with the elderly face to face. And it will also do us a favor. Actually, we won’t be the digital pioneers in 30 years. It is our children that will create and apply the latest technologies, and we, slow to accept new things, will be left to our own devices. If we hope our children will talk with us 30 years later, we need to set a good example for them now.
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【參考范文】
Nowadays many people are addicted to the smartphone intended to bring us convenience(要點(diǎn)1). Actually people accustomed to this technology feel distanced in real life for fear of missing social connections(要點(diǎn)2). The seniors failing to follow the trend lose more opportunities to talk with their children face to face(要點(diǎn)3). Thus, young parents need to put down smartphones and have more face-to-face talks, benefiting the elderly, themselves and the generations to come(要點(diǎn)4).
【文章大意】這是一篇議論文，雖然手機(jī)發(fā)明的初衷是為生活帶來(lái)便利，但本文旨在說(shuō)明依賴(lài)手機(jī)對(duì)我們生活造成的不良影響。影響正常社交、使老年人失去了更多與后輩交流的機(jī)會(huì)。因此我們應(yīng)該適時(shí)放下手機(jī)、更多的面對(duì)面交流。
【寫(xiě)作步驟】
1 要點(diǎn)摘錄
①I(mǎi)t is another symptom of the so-called smartphone reliance syndrome（智能手機(jī)依賴(lài)癥）. But really it is not the fault of our smartphones, which were created to help us communicate with one even thousand of kilometers away and bring more convenience to our lives.
②Ironically, we feel more distanced from each other in the real world. The reason is that we have more choices now, and we have to keep up with virtual conversations for fear of missing somethisa.
③However, one group risks being left behind by this trend. Spring Festival is almost the only chance for them to talk with the younger, yet smartphones rob them of this opportunity.
④The only way the younger and elder generations can meaningfully interact is that the former put down their smartphones during this holiday and talk with the elderly face to face. And it will also do us a favor.
2.縝密構(gòu)思：將摘錄的4個(gè)點(diǎn)分別整合，用更簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言加以概括。
3.遣詞造句
The smartphone reliance syndrome is actually not the fault of smartphones created to bring convenience to far-distanced communications.
Ironically, we actually feel more distanced in the real world for fear of missing virtual conversations and then missing something.
The seniors who risk being left behind by this trend losing the opportunity to talk with the younger because of smartphones.
The young should put down their smartphones to talk with the elderly face to face which will do the elderly, themselves and the next generations a favor.
【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】
[高分句型1] Nowadays many people are addicted to the smartphone intended to bring us convenience. 運(yùn)用一個(gè)包含后置定語(yǔ)的簡(jiǎn)單句對(duì)原文第一段進(jìn)行了概括。其中形容詞短語(yǔ)be addicted to“對(duì)…...上癮”和intended to bring us convenience作后置定語(yǔ)等表達(dá)高級(jí)。
[高分句型2]Thus, young parents need to put down smartphones and have more face-to-face talks, benefiting the elderly, themselves and the generations to come. 用包含連詞and和現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的并列句對(duì)第四段進(jìn)行了概括，現(xiàn)在分詞結(jié)構(gòu)benefiting the elderly, themselves and the generations to come 表示前文“放下手機(jī)面對(duì)面交流”自然而然的結(jié)果，這一表達(dá)比較高級(jí)。



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