?押全國卷（乙卷）第71題
書面表達：書信、電子郵件類

寫好高考“書面表達”絕非一日之功，關(guān)鍵在于平時扎扎實實的訓(xùn)練。但是，在夯實語言基本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的應(yīng)試技巧，也非常重要。根據(jù)“書面表達”常見錯誤及評卷要求，建議使用“一式，兩頭，三寫，四關(guān)”的應(yīng)試搶分技巧。具體為：
一式 寫對格式
要求記住英語常用文體的格式和應(yīng)用文體的寫作方式和特點。
二頭 寫好兩頭
要求靈活運用熟悉的句式和表達手法，使文章開頭和結(jié)尾結(jié)構(gòu)正確，言簡意賅。
三寫 規(guī)范三寫
在高考英語書面表達的評分標準中，正確拼寫和使用標點符號及書寫的美觀程度也是影響得分的一個重要指標，因此考生要高度重視。許多考生只重視書面表達內(nèi)容的訓(xùn)練和提高，卻忽視了卷面規(guī)范書寫的訓(xùn)練，導(dǎo)致本不該的失分。
四關(guān) 突破四關(guān)
所謂“四關(guān)”是指突破內(nèi)容要點關(guān)、行文邏輯關(guān)、語法規(guī)則關(guān)和習(xí)慣表達關(guān)。要求內(nèi)容要點準確全面，行文邏輯通順嚴密，語言運用正確得當(dāng)，表達方式符合英語習(xí)慣。
應(yīng)用文主要以書信和電子郵件為主。書信是很常見的應(yīng)用文文體。通常由五部分組成：信頭(Heading)、稱呼(Salutation)、正文(Body)、結(jié)束語(Complementary)和簽名(Signature)。
個人信件的目的一般是向朋友、親戚、公司領(lǐng)導(dǎo)寫信，說明自己的近期狀況、對某個事情的看法或者自己的建議等。
在熟人之間寫信，可以不要信頭。稱呼從左邊頂格寫。正文從稱呼下一行寫起，每段開頭空出三到五個字母。結(jié)束語一般是禮貌的客套語。右下方是簽名。
應(yīng)用文書信有申請信、求職信、求助信、推薦信、邀請信、感謝信、祝賀信、道歉信、 投訴信、勸慰信、建議信等。

當(dāng)然，在備考過程中，有針對性地背誦一些高分句式，套用合適的寫作模塊，可以幫助大家在短時間內(nèi)在書面表達上搶得高分！
經(jīng)典句式
1．求職信、申請信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①I'm Li Hua, a student presently studying in Xinhua Middle School. Learning the announcement of the summer camp posted on your website, I show great interest in it immediately.
我叫李華，是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生。得知你們網(wǎng)站上發(fā)布的夏令營公告，我立刻對它表現(xiàn)出極大的興趣。
②Now I'm writing this letter to seek an opportunity to work for you as a volunteer.
現(xiàn)在我寫這封信是為了尋找給你們當(dāng)志愿者的機會。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①The reasons why I apply for the position are as follows.
我申請這個職位的理由如下。
②To start with, this activity is such a golden opportunity to meet the outstanding teenagers worldwide that I really don't want to miss it. In my opinion, not only can being a guide broaden my horizons but it can also allow me to spread our culture all over the world. In addition, the voluntary service will offer a precious chance to contribute to our society, which appeals to me very much. Last but not least, great passion for the job paves the way for me to be determined to make it.
首先，這個活動是個黃金機會，可以認識世界各地的優(yōu)秀青少年，我真的不想錯過。在我看來，做一名導(dǎo)游不僅可以拓寬我的視野，而且可以讓我把我們的文化傳播到世界各地。此外，志愿服務(wù)將提供一個寶貴的機會，為我們的社會作出貢獻，這非常吸引我。最后但同樣重要的是，對這份工作強烈的熱情使我決心順利完成它。
③As far as I'm concerned, I'm qualified for the voluntary job.
我認為，我能勝任這項志愿者的工作。
④To start with, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate well with others. In addition, I'm outgoing, which makes it possible for me to get along well with others. Furthermore, my interest and skill in teamwork and sports contribute to my application for the job. Meanwhile, my experience of such kind of jobs lays a solid foundation for my success.
我精通英語，這樣我可以與他人順利溝通。除此之外，我很開朗，這使我可以與他人友好相處。還有，我在團隊合作與運動方面的興趣和技能有利于我申請這份工作。同時，我在這方面的工作經(jīng)驗為我成功做好這類工作奠定了堅實的基礎(chǔ)。
⑤Dear sir, while this experience more than qualifies me to join any successful teams, it is my personal goals that lead to my interest in being part of your team. There is no doubt that I'm the right person.
先生，盡管我的經(jīng)驗足以讓我成為任何一個成功團隊的成員，是我的個人追求才使我對成為貴團隊的一員感興趣。毫無疑問我是合適的人選。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①I am longing to join you in the volunteer work.
我盼望和你們一起做志愿者工作。
②I'm fully convinced that my experience, and my organizational skills, fueled by my beliefs, make your team and me in complete harmony.
我相信我的經(jīng)歷和組織方面的才能，加上我的信念的推動，能使我與貴團隊水乳交融。
③Can we arrange an interview at your earliest convenience? I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
在您方便的時候我們能安排一次面試嗎？如果您考慮我的申請，我將感激不盡。
2．咨詢信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①I'm writing to see whether it is possible for you to provide me with some information regarding the summer school during the vacation.
我寫信問一下您是否可以給我提供一些關(guān)于暑期學(xué)校的信息。
②I've finally made my decision to go to college for further education after high school. Now I need some detailed information concerning the college.
我最后決定高中后去上大學(xué)?，F(xiàn)在我需要了解大學(xué)的一些詳細信息。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①I've been longing to go abroad mainly for two reasons. One is that I can know more about foreign culture, and the other is that it can broaden my horizons.
我盼望著出國，有兩個原因。一是了解外國文化，二是拓寬視野。
②But I have some worries. For one thing, my English is so limited. For another, I may suffer from culture shock.
但是我也有一些顧慮。一方面我英語水平有限，另一方面我會遇到文化沖擊。
③What I'd like to find out is how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
我需要了解的是學(xué)費要付多少錢，住宿是否包括在內(nèi)。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①Would you please do me the favor to offer me some practical advice?
你能幫我個忙，給我一些切實可行的建議嗎？
②I'd be forever grateful if you could send me information concerning the summer school.
如果您能提供一些關(guān)于暑期學(xué)校的信息，我將感激不盡。
③Thank you for your generosity, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感謝你的慷慨，如能迅速回復(fù)我將感激不盡。
3．活動介紹類信件
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①I feel delighted that you're so interested in the Campus Culture Festival in our school, so I'm writing to share with you a brief introduction to it.
我很高興你對我們學(xué)校的校園文化節(jié)這么感興趣，所以我寫信給你簡單介紹一下。
②To satisfy your thirst for Chinese traditional culture, our school organizes a related lecture. It is really a good chance that you can't miss.
為了滿足你們對中國傳統(tǒng)文化的渴望，我們學(xué)校組織了一次相關(guān)的講座。這是一個很好的機會，你不能錯過。
③In reply to your letter asking about the activity, I'd like to show you our arrangements.
為了答復(fù)你方關(guān)于這次活動的來信，我想把我們的安排告訴你。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①Aimed at arousing your interest in English study，deepening your understanding of western culture as well as broadening your horizons, the English Culture Week is to be held from November 11th to 17th this year.
英語文化周將于今年11月11日至17日舉行，旨在激發(fā)你們對英語學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，加深對西方文化的了解，開闊你們的視野。
②As scheduled, the lecture is supposed to take place in our school auditorium at 2：00 on Friday afternoon.
按計劃，講座將于星期五下午兩點在我們學(xué)校禮堂舉行。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①Not only does the activity broaden my horizons but it also inspires me to work harder.
這項活動不僅開闊了我的視野，而且激勵我更加努力地工作。
②I'm fully convinced you'll have a profound comprehension of the ancient Chinese culture and economy, which will surely have your knowledge widened and your horizons broadened.
我完全相信你會對中國古代文化和經(jīng)濟有深刻的理解，這必將擴大你的知識面，開拓你的視野。
③Therefore, don't hesitate to show yourself. Just immerse yourself in the sea of joy and have fun!
因此，不要猶豫展示你自己。讓自己沉浸在歡樂的海洋中，盡情享受吧！
4．感謝信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①I'm grateful to you for your patience, expertise and genuine concern.
我很感激你的耐心、專業(yè)知識和真誠的關(guān)懷。
②I'd like to take this opportunity to express my sincere gratitude to you for your timely help.
我想利用這次機會對您的及時幫助表示真誠的感謝。
③I'm writing to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for the warm welcome you extended to my friend Kevin when he visited your school last week.
我的朋友凱文上周去參觀貴校的時候受到了您的熱情款待。為此，我寫信向您表示衷心的感謝。
④Now I'm writing to express my gratitude to you on behalf of my school and myself.
現(xiàn)在我寫信代表我們學(xué)校和自己向您表示感謝。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①But for your help during my one year's stay in New York, I wouldn't have adapted to it so quickly.
在紐約一年的時間里，要不是你的幫助，我不可能如此迅速地適應(yīng)。
②What impressed me most is the beautiful scenery and friendly people in your country.
給我印象最深的是你們國家那美麗的風(fēng)景和友善的人們。
③More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there.
更重要的是，你的幫助和善意使我更容易理解英國文化，并且適應(yīng)那里的生活。
④It was with your generous help and tender care that I had a wonderful time there.
正是您的悉心照顧和慷慨幫助才使我在那里度過了美好的時光。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①Words fail me to express my thanks to you./My gratitude to you is beyond my description.
對您的感謝我無法用語言來表達。
②Please accept my sincere gratitude for your participating in today's lecture.
感謝您來參加今天的講座，請接受我誠摯的謝意。
5．求助信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①Recently I have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annoyed. I am writing to ask you for help.
最近，我和父母吵架了，這令我很煩惱。為此我寫信向你尋求幫助。
②Now I'm writing to ask you for help. During the summer holidays, I'd like to get a job. Would you please do me a favor?
現(xiàn)在我寫信向您求助。暑假期間我想找份工作。您能幫我這個忙嗎？
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①I'm not sure whether I have got my ideas across, so I have no choice but to turn to you in the hope that you can correct the mistakes as well as give me some favorable advice on writing.
我不知道是否把我的意思表達清楚了，所以我只好向您求助，希望您能幫忙糾錯，同時針對寫作給我一些可行的建議。
②As it is getting close to the end of the semester, we need to find a part-time job for social practice. I intend to apply for one position in a company.
隨著本學(xué)期的結(jié)束，我們需要為社會實踐做些兼職工作，我打算申請一家公司的職位。
③Because it is the first time that I have written an application, I wonder if there is something to pay attention to. So, I'm writing you the letter, hoping you can do me a favor.
因為這是我第一次寫個人申請，不知道該注意什么。所以我寫信求助，希望您能幫忙。
④It is the first time for me to apply for a job, and I'm not quite familiar with the format of the resume and the job application, which I have prepared. So would you please do me the favor to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials?
這是我第一次申請工作，雖然我對個人簡歷以及工作申請的格式不熟悉，但這些我已經(jīng)準備好了。所以您能幫我糾正材料中措辭和格式方面的錯誤嗎？
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor.
如果您能幫忙，我將感激不盡。
②If possible, when can I come to meet you at your earliest convenience? Will Friday afternoon do?
如果可能的話，在您方便的時候我去見您？星期五下午行嗎？
6．建議信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①I've heard from you, learning that you're worried about your driving test. Don't worry about it. I'd like to share some of my ideas as follows.
來信收到，獲悉你擔(dān)心駕照考試。不用擔(dān)心。我想分享如下看法。
②Learning your keen interest in traveling, I suggest you visit the Changjiang River, the longest river in China.
了解到你喜歡旅游，我建議你游覽長江，這是中國最長的河流。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①As for my point of view, to start with, you'd better do more reading.
至于我的觀點，首先，你最好多閱讀。
②To be honest, nothing is more thrilling than rowing the dragon boat in a team.
說實話，沒有什么比和隊友一起劃龍舟更刺激的了。
③In addition, it's a good idea to prepare your lessons in advance.
另外，提前準備功課是個好主意。
④Last but not least, it would help if you could stay calm when in trouble.
最后，遇到問題的時候保持冷靜也大有裨益。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①What do you think of my suggestions?
你認為我的建議如何？
②I'd be appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考慮我的建議，我感激不盡。
③Hopefully, my suggestions will be of some help to you.
希望我的建議對你有幫助。
7．邀請信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①Learning that you're interested in traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to sincerely invite you to attend the Chinese Character Dictation Contest to be held in our school.
獲悉您對中國傳統(tǒng)文化感興趣，我寫信誠邀您參加我們學(xué)校舉辦的漢字聽寫大賽。
②On behalf of our school, I have the honor to invite you to be a judge of our English Speaking Contest.
我有幸代表學(xué)校邀請您擔(dān)任英語演講比賽的評委。
③Would you please give us the pleasure of your company? I would feel greatly honored if you could participate in our activity.
請您賞光作陪好嗎？如若您能來參加我們的活動，我會感到非常榮幸。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①There will be a variety of activities, such as reading poems, performing plays and so on.
將會有各種不同的活動，例如詩歌朗誦、戲劇表演等等。
②Twelve students are expected to deliver their brilliant speeches on the given topic “Chinese Dream”．
期待12名同學(xué)關(guān)于“中國夢”的精彩演講。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①My family and I would feel honoured if you could come.
如果您愿意來，我和家人會感到很榮幸的。
②I'd appreciate it if you could come at your earliest convenience.
如果您能盡早來，我將不勝感激。
③If you do not have any prior appointment on July 1, we're looking forward to the pleasure of your company.
如果七月一日您沒有其他重要安排，我們期待您的光臨。
8．投訴信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①While I was on holiday in your country about a week ago, I bought a white iPad in your shop for 268 dollars. Unfortunately, there seemed to be something wrong with it.
一周前我在你們國家度假時，我在你們店里花了268美元買了一臺白色的iPad。不幸的是，它似乎有些問題。
②I am writing to protest the problem of too much homework in our school.
我寫信來抗議我們學(xué)校作業(yè)太多的問題。
③I'm writing to make a complaint about your service standard.
我寫信投訴你們的服務(wù)水平。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.
我們立即對該事件進行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果證實損失起因于不恰當(dāng)?shù)陌b，供應(yīng)商應(yīng)全權(quán)負責(zé)。
②To improve the situation, it is advisable for you to take the following measures.
為了改善這種狀況，你最好采取以下措施。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①I think it's not my fault, so I'm writing to you in order to find a way out. I insist that you change it for another one or give me a refund. I would appreciate it if my demand was satisfied.
我認為這不是我的錯，所以我寫信給你是為了找到一個解決辦法。我堅持要你換一個，否則退錢給我。如果我的要求得到滿足，我會很感激的。
②I do hope you can better your service and that mistake won't arise again in the future.
我希望你能改善你的服務(wù)，這樣的錯誤將來不會再發(fā)生了。
9．道歉信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
I'm writing this letter to convey my heartfelt apology to you for not writing you back in time.
我寫這封信是為了向你表達我衷心的歉意，因為我沒有及時給你回信。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①I'm sorry for my not being able to attend your party due to the fact that my parents and I will head to the airport to meet my grandparents.
很抱歉我不能參加你們的聚會，因為我和我的父母將去機場接我的祖父母。
②The reason why I fail to show up is that I have something urgent to attend to.
我之所以沒來是因為我有急事要處理。
③As for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame.
這種不可彌補的損失，皆由我起。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies.
我真誠地希望你能理解我的處境，接受我的道歉。
②Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused by my absence.
再次對我的缺席造成的不便表示歉意。
10．推薦信
(1)吸引讀者的開頭句
①How is everything going recently? I'm happy to hear from you, knowing that you're coming to China. I'd like to share with you my recommendation about your journey.
最近一切都好嗎？我很高興收到你的來信，得知你將來中國。我想和你分享一下我對你旅行的建議。
②I'm more than pleased to hear from you, learning that you'll go back home and want to buy your parents a gift. I'd like to share my suggestion with you.
我很高興收到你的來信，聽說你將回家，想給父母買禮物。我想和你分享我的建議。
(2)吸引讀者的文中句
①Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River.
在這兩個去長江和泰山的旅行中，都是非常受歡迎的。就我個人而言，我更喜歡沿著長江旅行。
②In my opinion, the trip to Mountain Tai will be a better choice. I recommend it for the following reasons.
在我看來，泰山之行將是一個更好的選擇。我推薦它的原因如下。
③As you know, there are a variety of nice gifts with Chinese characteristics which are available. Personally, I think Chinese stamps would be a nice choice.
如你所知，有各種中國特色的精美禮品可供選擇。就個人而言，我認為中國郵票是個不錯的選擇。
④As you know, it is the longest river of Chinese civilization. By visiting it, you are sure to have a good knowledge of the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
如你所知，它是中國文明中最長的河流。通過參觀它，你一定會對中國和中國人民的歷史有很好的了解。而且，河邊的風(fēng)景令人驚嘆，有許多著名的觀光景點。這就是為什么我認為沿著長江旅行將是一個更好的選擇。
⑤Do you want to know why I recommend this to you? The reasons are as follows. To start with, stamps are considered works of art of minitype, which hold commemorative value and can be a permanent collection. What's more, stamps cover natural landscapes, major events and so on, making it possible for your parents to have a better understanding of China from them. Last but not least, stamps are easy to carry.
你想知道我為什么推薦這個給你嗎？原因如下。首先，郵票被認為是小型藝術(shù)作品，具有紀念價值，可以是永久性的收藏。更重要的是，郵票涵蓋了自然景觀、重大事件等，使你的父母能夠從中更好地了解中國。最后但同樣重要的是，郵票便于攜帶。
(3)吸引讀者的結(jié)尾句
①What do you think of it? Hopefully, my recommendation will help. I hope you will have a good time in China.
你覺得怎么樣？希望我的推薦會有幫助。我希望你們在中國過得愉快。
②What do you think of my suggestions? Hopefully, it can be of some help to you. If you want to learn more, don't hesitate to contact me.
你覺得我的建議怎么樣？希望能對你有所幫助。如果你還想了解更多，請毫不猶豫聯(lián)系我。
應(yīng)用文一　電子郵件
寫作點撥
英文電子郵件與英文書信的寫法和格式大體相同，但也有不同之處。英文電子郵件一般由以下五部分組成：
1．標題欄
這是英文書信中沒有的。標題欄中有“收件人”“抄送”和“主題”三個框。在“收件人”框中填寫收件人的電子郵件地址。如要將郵件同時發(fā)送給多人，可在“抄送”框中填入其他人的電子郵件地址。在“主題”框中簡要地概括郵件的內(nèi)容，可以用一個單詞，如Greetings(問候)，也可以用短語，如Personal information(個人情況)，還可以是一個內(nèi)容完整但語言簡短的句子。
2．稱呼語
如果是同學(xué)或親朋好友間的郵件，可以直呼其名，如Mike；但如果是發(fā)給老師、長輩或上級，最好在稱呼前加上稱謂或職位。職位可用Doctor, Professor等，如Professor Li。男性用Mr; 女性用Miss(未婚), Mrs(已婚), Ms(不知婚否)。
3．正文
大多數(shù)電子郵件篇幅短小，語言簡單明了。如果是寫給不熟悉的人，一般要先進行自我介紹；反之，則可直接進入正題。要多使用短句、簡單句，少用或不用長句。一是便于閱讀，再者使意思清楚。如果內(nèi)容很長，可就重點部分做些介紹，而把詳細內(nèi)容以“附件”的形式發(fā)出。
4．結(jié)尾客套語
英文書信的信尾客套語常用“Best wishes！”“Good luck to you！”等，而電子郵件通常很簡明，如Best, Thanks, Yours等。
5．落款
直接寫發(fā)件人的姓名即可，且與客套語對齊。
經(jīng)典句式
1．段首常用語
(1)Thank you for your letter of Dec. 15th ...
(2)I'm glad/pleased to tell you that ...
(3)I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
(4)Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.
(5)How are you getting along with your study?
2．話題引入常用語
(1)I'm glad to tell you something about ...
(2)As far as I know/am concerned/can see ...
3．段尾常用語
(1)Please write to me soon and tell me about your ...
(2)I'm looking forward to your reply.
(3)With kind/best regards/wishes.
(4)A prompt reply would be greatly appreciated.
4．電子郵件格式樣例

對應(yīng)訓(xùn)練
假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內(nèi)容包括：
1.時間和地點；
2.內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；
3.課前準備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。
注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[審題謀篇通思路]
本題要求考生以李華的身份寫一封電子郵件告知正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語的英國朋友Leslie下次上課的計劃?？煞譃槿蝸韺懀?br /> 第一段：表達問候，說明寫信的目的——詳細告訴一些事情。
第二段：介紹下次上課的時間和地點；內(nèi)容是學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；需要做的課前準備是簡要了解唐朝的歷史。
第三段：希望早點收到回復(fù)。
[修訂提升爭高分]
Dear Leslie，
How is everything getting along with you? I'm writing to tell you something in detail.
To start with, I intend to stress that we are going to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.(用what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句改寫：1.To_start_with,_what_I_intend_to_stress_is_that_we_are_going_to_start_our_next_lesson_in_Classroom_8_of_the_Teaching_Building_at_10_am_next_Friday.)(添加過渡性詞語：2.What's_more/Besides/In_addition/Moreover), in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it is of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry. There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance and it will make the class go smoothly. (用含which引導(dǎo)的定語從句的復(fù)合句改寫：3.There_is_no_doubt_that_you_are_supposed_to_know_about_the_history_of_the_Tang_Dynasty_in_advance,_which_will_make_the_class_go_smoothly.)
I'd appreciate it if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
應(yīng)用文二　建議信
寫作點撥
建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可以是寫給個人，也可以是寫給某個組織或機構(gòu)。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陳述建議，具體為：
第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。
第二段：應(yīng)該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后指出需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓對方認為是在投訴，而不是在提建議。
第三段：對提出的建議進行總結(jié)。要注意有禮貌，使對方容易接受。
經(jīng)典句式
1．段首常用語
(1)I am writing to express my views concerning ...
(2)You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some suggestions.
2．表達建議常用語
(1)I think the most suitable ... for you is ...
(2)I would like to suggest that ...
(3)You'd better ... /It's better to ...
(4)As far as I am concerned ... /In my opinion ...
(5)For one thing ... ; for another ...
(6)If I were you, I would ...
(7)It seems to me that you could ...
3．段尾常用語
(1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
(4)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
(5)I will be ready to discuss this matter in further detail.
4．建議信格式模板
Dear ________，
I am ________. Your suggestions on ________ are ________. As is known to all, ________. My suggestions are as follows：
Firstly, ________. (People can ________.)
Secondly, ________. (To make economic profits, ________.)
Thirdly, ________. (Many of them ________.)
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you further./Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated.
Good luck with your ____________.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
對應(yīng)訓(xùn)練
假定你是李華，你的好友王芳喜歡打排球，但老師和家長都極力勸她放棄打排球，全身心投入高考。為此，她非常糾結(jié)和郁悶。請你給她寫一封建議信，幫她解決這個困擾。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[審題謀篇通思路]
本文要求考生以李華的身份給好友王芳寫信，幫助她解決關(guān)于“是否放棄打排球”的困擾?？煞譃槿蝸韺懀?br /> 第一段：表示聽到王芳的麻煩感到難過，表明自己很樂意給對方提出建議。
第二段：提出三條建議：(1)理解老師和家長；(2)減少打排球的時間而不是徹底放棄；(3)合理安排時間，找到學(xué)習(xí)和愛好之間的平衡。
第三段：表達祝愿。
[修訂提升爭高分]
Dear Wang Fang，
I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. You are faced with a problem. And I am glad to give you some advice on it.(用定語從句合并為一句：1.And_I_am_glad_to_give_you_some_advice_on_the_problem_(that/which)_you_are_faced_with.) As you said, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball so that you'll have more time preparing for the College Entrance Examination.
(添加過渡性詞語：2.First/First_of_all), you should understand your teachers and parents, who just want the best for you. Second, I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up. Third, you should arrange your time properly. As long as you can keep a balance between your study and hobby, your teachers and parents will surely not be against (用高級詞匯替換：3.object_to) it.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
應(yīng)用文三　申請信
寫作點撥
申請信有很多種，有求職申請信、加入某組織的申請信、報考申請信、學(xué)位申請信或留學(xué)申請信等。寫申請信時要注意言簡意賅，語氣誠懇禮貌，要避免浮夸。如果是留學(xué)申請或獎學(xué)金申請，要注意提供以下信息：寫明申請學(xué)校和專業(yè)，介紹個人履歷，索取對方學(xué)校相關(guān)信息，附上個人經(jīng)歷等材料。
申請信一般都包括以下幾個部分：申請的原因，具備的條件，懇請所申請單位考慮自己的申請并表示謝意，期望回復(fù)。具體為：
第一段：說明寫信的目的，介紹自己的身份，對所申請職位或?qū)W位的單位或院校的了解以及自己將會為對方所作的貢獻，信息的來源等，這一段要寫得簡短而又能吸引收信人的注意力。
第二段：介紹自己的學(xué)歷或工作經(jīng)歷，本人的個性，已經(jīng)取得的成績，說明為何對這一職位或?qū)W校感興趣以及對未來的打算等。
第三段：表示感謝和期待對方優(yōu)先考慮自己的申請，以求得面試等機會。這段尤其要注意語氣應(yīng)禮貌、自信。
經(jīng)典句式
1．說明應(yīng)聘原因常用語
(1)I learned from sb./the newspaper that your company wanted to hire ...
(2)I was told that ...
(3)I have just read in the newspaper that ...
(4)I am writing to inquire opportunities for ...
2．介紹個人簡歷和優(yōu)勢常用語
(1)Now I'd like to introduce myself to you.
(2)My name is ... .I'm ... years old. I'm ... cm tall.
(3)I graduated from ... University in 2003.
(4)I like swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time.
(5)I work hard and I can get along/on well with others.
(6)I'm good at English and my spoken English is fairly good.
(7)I can understand Japanese and I can talk to foreigners in Japanese freely.
(8)I am currently studying ...
(9)I would be interested in ...
(10)My main specialty is ...
3．表示感謝，表達決心，請求答復(fù)并提供聯(lián)系方式常用語
(1)Thank you very much.
(2)Thank you for your consideration of my application.
(3)If you agree with me, I'll work hard and try to be a(n) ...
(4)I am available for an interview ...
(5)I look forward to hearing from you.
(6)If you agree with me, please write a letter to me or phone me. I live at ...
(7)My telephone number is ...
4．申請信格式模板
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in __________ (報紙名稱) of __________ (廣告發(fā)布時間)．
I am __________ from __________. As a(n) __________， I have been __________. Besides, I won __________ in __________. If you consider me an appropriate candidate for the job, please call me at __________.
I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
對應(yīng)訓(xùn)練
假定你是李華，請用英文寫一封申請信，申請作為“志愿家庭”接待來你校交換學(xué)習(xí)的英國中學(xué)生Johnson，內(nèi)容包括：
1.自我介紹；
2.家庭條件及個人優(yōu)勢；
3.安排英國朋友參加的活動。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：接待家庭host family
[審題謀篇通思路]
本題要求考生以李華的身份申請作為“志愿家庭”接待來你校交換學(xué)習(xí)的英國中學(xué)生Johnson?？煞譃槿蝸韺懀?br /> 第一段：表達自己申請成為“志愿家庭”的愿望。
第二段：介紹自己家所具備的條件，如父母友好、家的位置便利、自己英語好、便于交流等。
第三段：再次表達自己的申請愿望，懇請對方考慮自己的申請并表示感謝。
[修訂提升爭高分]
Dear Sir/Madam，
I sincerely hope my family can have the honor to be a host family.
My parents are caring and friendly. Our home is next to the city center, so easy shopping access and convenient transportation are available. (改寫為定語從句：1.Our_home_is_next_to_the_city_center_where_easy_shopping_access_and_convenient_transportation_are_available.) We can offer one separate room for the student. I have a good command of English. It makes it possible for me to communicate with foreigners freely in daily life. (合并為一個簡單句：2.My_good_command
_of_English_makes_it_possible_for_me_to_communicate_with_foreigners_freely_in_daily_life.) So I am convinced that I will be a qualified host. If given the chance, I'll invite our guest to join in my family get-together. Besides, we can show him around the city and get him to know more about the real life and culture of China. (改為含有現(xiàn)在分詞短語的句子：3.Besides,_we_can_show_him_around_the_city,_getting_him_to_know_more_about_the_real_life_and_culture_in_China.)
In a word, I'm eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign friend. I hope you can take my application into consideration. Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
應(yīng)用文四　邀請信
寫作點撥
邀請信是寫信人對收信人的一種盛情邀約，一般分為正式和非正式兩種，格式與其他信函相同。具體寫作步驟如下：
第一段：說明寫作意圖。
第二段：具體交代情景，包括受邀請的人、邀請收信人要做什么、地點以及具體的時間等內(nèi)容，并且強調(diào)受邀人參加的理由。
第三段：表示期待收信人的回復(fù)。
經(jīng)典句式
1．段首常用語
(1)I am writing to invite you to ...
(2)I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...
(3)I wonder if you can come ...
(4)How would you like to join us in ...?
2．段尾常用語
(1)Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to ...?
(2)My family and I would feel very honoured if you could come.
(3)We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
(4)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
3．邀請信格式模板
Dear ________，
How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a(n) ________ (內(nèi)容) at/in ________ (地點) on ________ (時間). We would be honoured to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at ________ (具體時間). This will be followed by a(n) ________ (進一步的安排). At around ________ (時間), ________ (另一個安排)．
Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? I really hope you can make it. My phone number is ________.
Looking forward to ________.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
對應(yīng)訓(xùn)練
假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙(paper－cutting)藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.展覽時間、地點；
2.展覽內(nèi)容。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[審題謀篇通思路]
本題要求考生以李華的身份邀請外教Henry來看中國剪紙展覽?？煞譃樗亩危?br /> 第一段：介紹寫信的目的——邀請外教Henry來看中國的剪紙藝術(shù)展。
第二段：介紹這次展覽的時間、地點和內(nèi)容。
第三段：請收信人對發(fā)出的邀請做出反饋——如果感興趣，請給我發(fā)郵件。
第四段：表示期盼。
[修訂提升爭高分]
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to invite you to see the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition. It is a Chinese folk art with a long history.
The exhibition will be held in the City Museum, starting from June 16th and lasting for more than a week. A large number of paper-cut works by experts throughout China will be on show, and some of them are made by famous artists. (改為定語從句：1.A_large_number_of_paper-cut_works_by_experts_throughout_China_will_be_on_show,_some_of_which_are_made_by_famous_artists.) The paper cuts are about different (用高級詞匯替換：2.various) things. When we visit the exhibition (用非謂語動詞改寫：3.Visiting_the_exhibition), we will not only enjoy the folk art works, but also learn a lot.
If you're interested in the Chinese folk art, please e-mail me. We can visit the exhibition any day.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
應(yīng)用文五　求助信
寫作點撥
求助信是針對自己遇到的問題，向別人尋求幫助的信件。一般分三部分：(1)開頭部分：先進行問候，然后說明寫信的目的；(2)主體部分：詳細說明自己所遇到的困難并請求幫助；(3)結(jié)尾部分：表示感謝和期盼之情。
經(jīng)典句式
1．開頭部分常用語
(1)My name is ... I'm writing to ask for some help.
(2)I have met much difficulty in learning English.
(3)Faced with so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for help.
(4)I wonder whether/if you could do me a favor ...
(5)In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ... so that ... Also, I would like you to ...
(6)I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
2．結(jié)尾部分常用語
(1)I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
(2)I will appreciate any of your help.
3．求助信格式模板
Dear ________，
My name is ________ (自我介紹). I'm writing to you to ask for some help. I have met much difficulty in ________ (求助內(nèi)容). First, I find ________ (困難1). Besides, ________ (困難2). What's more, ________ (困難3)．
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for some help. Would you like to ________ (委婉提出請求1)? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ________ (請求內(nèi)容2) so that ________ (請求目的). Also, I would like you to ________ (請求內(nèi)容3)．
I'm sure that I can make great progress in ________ (表達期待)．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
對應(yīng)訓(xùn)練
假定你是高中生李華，你們學(xué)校要在三月十日舉辦英語配音比賽(dubbing contest)，你想?yún)①?，但是不知道該選什么電影。你給筆友Peter寫封郵件，請他推薦。比賽要求：
1.主題是關(guān)于友誼；
2.時間限定在4到5分鐘；
3.每個節(jié)目最多6個角色。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[審題謀篇通思路]
本題要求考生以李華的身份向Peter寫信求助，想?yún)⒓优湟舯荣?，卻不知該選什么電影。所以請Peter推薦合適的電影。正文可分為三段來寫：
第一段：問候?qū)Ψ讲⒔淮鷮懶诺哪康摹笾?br /> 第二段：說明自己遇到的具體困難——想?yún)⒓优湟舯荣?，但是不知道選擇哪部電影合適，所以求推薦。
第三段：表示感謝和期盼之情。
[修訂提升爭高分]
Dear Peter，
How is everything going? I am writing to you, hoping to seek help. (用in the hope of改寫： 1.I_am_writing_to_you_in_the_hope_of_seeking_help.)
Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th. I am eager to have a try. However, I don't know which film is suitable. (改寫為并列句：2.I_am_eager_to_have_a_try_but_I_don't_know_which_film_is_suitable.)
As a movie fan，would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship. And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes. (添加過渡性詞語：3.What's_more/In_addition/Moreover
/Besides), there should not be more than six characters in each video.
I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
應(yīng)用文六　道歉信
寫作點撥
道歉信通常是在因自己的過失或疏忽給別人帶來了麻煩或損失并發(fā)覺的情況下，為了向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢舛鴮懙男偶＞唧w寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：
第一部分：表明寫作意圖，對某事表示歉意。
第二部分：說明道歉的具體原因并做出解釋。
第三部分：再次表明歉意，請求諒解，并提出彌補措施。
經(jīng)典句式
1．開頭部分常用語
(1)I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ...
(2)I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing to ...
(3)I remember we planned to ... but now because ... I cannot ... with you as planned.
(4)I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.
(5)I am very sorry for my not being able to ... due to the fact that ...
(6)I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to ...
(7)I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for ...
2．結(jié)尾部分常用語
(1)Please allow me to say sorry again.
(2)Will you please accept my apology?
(3)With apologies once again./With many apologies.
(4)Please accept my sincere apology for ... once more.
(5)I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
3．道歉信格式模板
Dear ________，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that ________ (陳述需道歉的事由). Now I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for ________ (請求對方原諒的事由). The reason for my delay/absence was/is that ________ (解釋過失的原因). Therefore it's not in my power to ________ (過失導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果)．
I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to ________ (提出彌補措施). Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused by me.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
對應(yīng)訓(xùn)練
假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.說明原因；
3.另約時間。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[審題謀篇通思路]
本題要求考生以李華的身份寫一封因為不能按時赴約而向朋友Bob表示道歉的郵件，可分為三段來寫：
第一段：表達問候，然后說明寫信的原因——為不能和朋友一起去書店而道歉。
第二段：解釋不能去的原因——忙于準備即將到來的期末考試。
第三段：再次希望對方接受自己的道歉，并提出另約時間的建議(用商量的語氣提出)。
[修訂提升爭高分]
Dear Bob，
How is everything going? I'm writing to express my regret for being unable to go to the bookstore with you next weekend. (用for引導(dǎo)的并列句改寫：1.I'm_writing_to_express_my_regret,_for_I_won't_be_able_to_go_to_the_bookstore_with_you_next_weekend.) I feel terribly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
My final exam will be held in two weeks and it makes me worried. (用what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句改寫：2.What_makes_me_worried_is_my_final_exam_which/that_will_be_held_in_two_weeks.) So I have to make preparations for it at that time. I appreciate that you understand the importance of the exam and I must try my best (用高級詞匯替換：3.spare_no_effort) to do well in my final exam if possible.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Could we make another appointment to go to the bookstore together? Please let me know what time is OK for you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
應(yīng)用文七　投訴信
寫作點撥
在生活中，人們經(jīng)常會遇到一些令人煩心的事情，比如消費權(quán)益受損、正常生活和工作受到干擾等，此時寫投訴信不失為一個解決問題的辦法。
投訴信通常包括以下幾個方面的內(nèi)容：說明投訴的原因并表示遺憾；實事求是地闡述問題發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，切記不要夸大其詞；指出問題引起的后果；提出批評及處理的建議或敦促對方采取措施，或者提出期望的賠償以及補救方式。組織提綱時要遵循“三步走”的寫作規(guī)律：
第一段：表明來信所要投訴的問題，盡可能做到客觀、禮貌，給讀信人留下好印象。應(yīng)該記住讀信人不一定就是犯錯誤的責(zé)任人，他的合作對事情的最終圓滿解決有著非常重要的作用。
第二段：寫明投訴的原因、問題的經(jīng)過及產(chǎn)生的后果?？梢哉f具體的理由，也可以說問題的具體體現(xiàn)方式。
第三段：提出解決方案，不需展開。這段應(yīng)體現(xiàn)書信的禮貌原則，可以用類似“如果你能……，我將十分感激”這樣的表達方式，還要注意做到客觀、公正。
經(jīng)典句式
1．段首常用語
(1)I am writing to make a complaint about ...
(2)I am most reluctant to complain, but ...
(3)One annoying aspect of your service is ...
(4)I have been pleased with your service for years, but now I feel very disappointed.
(5)I would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault ...
(6)I am writing to inform you that I find ... unsatisfactory.
(7)I wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about ...
2．段尾常用語
(1)It would be highly appreciated if you could ...
(2)I believe you will take my complaints seriously and ...
(3)I hope you will give due attention to this matter.
(4)I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.
(5)I would not be more satisfied if you could kindly ...
(6)I would appreciate it very much if you could ...
3．投訴信格式模板
Dear ________，
I am ________ (自我介紹). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about ________ (投訴的事情)．
The reason for my dissatisfaction is ________ (總體介紹). In the first place, ________ (抱怨的第一個方面). In addition, ________ (抱怨的第二個方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感覺) to ________ (被投訴的事情給自己帶來的消極影響)．
I would appreciate it very much if you could ________ (提出建議和請求), preferably ________ (進一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ________ (設(shè)定解決事情的最后期限)．
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
________
對應(yīng)訓(xùn)練
假設(shè)你是李華，兩周前你從網(wǎng)上訂購了一套英語書蟲系列讀物(Bookworm Series)，昨天才收到貨，且包裝破損、數(shù)量不足。請就此向網(wǎng)站客服寫封郵件投訴。要點如下：
1.介紹購物情況；
2.反映存在問題；
3.提出解決方案。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[審題謀篇通思路]
本題要求考生以李華的身份進行投訴：從網(wǎng)上買的書送貨太慢、包裝破損、數(shù)量不足。主體部分可分為三段：
第一段：介紹在網(wǎng)上訂購一套英語書蟲系列讀物的事實。
第二段：提出存在的問題——送貨慢、書的封面破損、書的數(shù)量不足。
第三段：表達自己對這次購物的失望，表明自己的訴求——要么退錢，要么郵寄一套新書給自己。
[修訂提升爭高分]
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago.
However, I didn't receive them until yesterday. And the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn, which made me very disappointed. (用含有disappointment的句子改寫：1.And_much_to_my_disappointment,_the_books_were_so_poorly_packed_up_that_the_cover_of_one_book_was_torn.)(添加過渡性詞語：2.To_make_matters_worse/Worse_still/What's_worse), it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I'm sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. You can return my money. You can also deliver a new set of books to me. (用either ... or ... 改寫：3.You_can_either_return_my_
money_or_deliver_a_new_set_of_books_to_me.) Besides, I'd like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
典例訓(xùn)練一
[2021·全國卷Ⅱ]假定你是李華。你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1．闡明寫信事由；
2．征求建議；
3．表示感謝。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
(一)“三定”審題
1．定體裁：電子郵件。
2．定人稱：本文以第一、三人稱為主。
3．定時態(tài)：主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。
(二)“三段”謀篇
第一段(開篇點題)：點名寫信目的；第二段(2個要點，缺一不可)：學(xué)校計劃舉辦中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會， 并在英文網(wǎng)站上展示；向外國朋友征求哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國人；第三段(巧妙收尾)：表達感謝。
1．為了弘揚中國傳統(tǒng)文化，并在英語網(wǎng)站上發(fā)布一些班會，我們學(xué)校將組織以中國傳統(tǒng)文化為主題的班會。
____________________________ and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organise class meetings, ______________________________________．(高頻詞匯＋定語從句)
2．我們可以選擇各種各樣的主題。
We can choose a variety of themes, ______________________________________．(通過舉例增加細節(jié))
3．我想知道你是否能告訴我你最喜歡他們中的哪一個，以及哪些外國人更可能對他們感興趣。
I'm wondering if you can let me know ____________________________________．(運用復(fù)合句， 彰顯寫作水準)
4．謝謝你的幫助。如果你能在方便的時候盡早回復(fù)，我將不勝感激。
Thank you for your help. ________________________________________________．(詞匯不重，彰顯水準)
應(yīng)用文八 電子郵件
電子郵件指用電子手段傳送信件、資料等信息的通信方法，英文電子郵件和普通書信的寫法和格式大體相同。
(一) 謹記寫作范式

(二)充盈寫作語料庫
1．I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago.
我很高興收到你兩天前寄給我的信。
2．I'm glad to hear from you and I'd like to share my experience of helping my parents do housework.
很高興收到你的來信，我想和你分享我?guī)椭改缸黾覄?wù)的經(jīng)驗。
1．If necessary, we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.
如果有必要，本周我們可以找個時間安排一次面談。
2．Of all the courses, I like Chinese Painting best because it helps us experience the inner harmony of man and nature and taste the beauty of Chinese culture.
在所有的課程中，我最喜歡中國畫，因為它讓我們體會到人與自然的內(nèi)在和諧，品味中國文化之美。
I'd appreciate it if you could make a response at your earliest convenience.
如果您能在方便時盡早回信，我將非常感激。
對點演練(注意卷面書寫喲)
[2021·寧夏銀川4月質(zhì)檢]假定你是李華，你校外教Lucy近期要回國，你班同學(xué)準備舉行晚會為她送行。請你寫一封電子郵件，告知她相關(guān)情況，內(nèi)容包括：
1．晚會目的；
2．晚會時間、地點；
3．晚會的內(nèi)容。
注意：1.字數(shù)100字左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：a farewell party歡送會
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　應(yīng)用文八 電子郵件
滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．In order to promote Chinese traditional culture　the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture
2．such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper-cutting and so on
3．which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in
4．I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience
滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡　完美成篇
Dear Chris，
How are you doing these days? I'm writing to ask you some advice.
In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organise class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper-cutting and so on. I'm wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.
Thank you for your help. I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear Lucy，
Hearing that you'll return to your hometown, all the students in our class are determined to hold a farewell party for you to extend our gratitude for your selfless devotion to all of us.
The party will be held at 6：30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade three. At the beginning of the party, a surprising gift will be presented to you, which conveys our best wishes for you. And then, some students will show their talents in singing English songs taught by you so that they will make it possible for all of you to remember the happy time we have spent together. At last, a special game will be designed in order to make all of us have a wonderful time together.
Hope that you can join us. We can't wait to see you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
典例訓(xùn)練二
假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊正在招收新隊員。請給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件邀請他加入，內(nèi)容包括：
1．球隊活動；
2．報名方式及截止日期。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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[思路構(gòu)建]
根據(jù)寫作提綱，本篇書信應(yīng)包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：
1. 介紹活動背景；
2.寫信目的(邀請對方加入校乒乓球隊)；
3.球隊活動；
4.告知報名方式及截止日期；
5.結(jié)尾處，告知對方自己隨時可以提供幫助。
注意：1.這是一封邀請信，寫信的目的是邀請對方加入校乒乓球隊，切忌寫成一封簡單的介紹信。2.適當(dāng)增加要點，給對方介紹入隊的好處。3.一定要告訴對方，怎樣申請加入球隊及報名的具體時間和地點。4.在寫作時，要注意邀請信的交際性。
[點石成金]

【范文賞讀】
Dear Eric，
How is everything going? Informed that our school ping-pong team is looking for new members among us students, I couldn't help sharing the good news with you. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping-pong.
Of course, a variety of activities will surely satisfy your thirst. The activities include practising by yourselves and competing with better players, offering a good chance for you to improve your skills. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.
Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office. You can go there any time this Friday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

Passage 1（2021 ?全國高考甲卷?第71題）
假定你是李華。你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1.闡明寫信事由；
2.征求建議；
3.表示感謝。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【范文賞讀】
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就學(xué)校主辦的主題班會向好友Chris詢問哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國朋友。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
主題：topic→theme
傳統(tǒng)的：traditional→conventional
獲得：get→obtain
解決：solve→work out
2.句式拓展
同義句改寫
原句：Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
拓展句：It is because this activity will be presented on the English website that I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
【點睛】
[高分句型1] Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. (運用了whose引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2] Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. (運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)
Passage 2（2020 全國高考Ⅲ卷?第71題）
假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1．劇情簡介；
2．指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；
3．商定時間、地點。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
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I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
(一)“三定”審題
1．定體裁：本文為求助信。
2．定人稱：本文以第一人稱為主。
3．定時態(tài)：主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。
(二)“三段”謀篇
第一段(開篇點題)：點名寫信目的；
第二段(3個要點，缺一不可)：劇情簡介；指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；商定時間和地點；
第三段(巧妙收尾)：表達期待。
1．我寫信是想請您指導(dǎo)一部根據(jù)我們的一篇課文改編的短劇。
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(高頻詞匯＋定語從句＋被動語態(tài))
2．這篇課文講述了一個名叫黛西的女孩的故事，她和一些野生動物交談，并下定決心幫助保護環(huán)境。
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(非謂語動詞作定語＋定語從句)
3．如果您方便的話，我們可以在本周日早上8點在我們學(xué)校的藝術(shù)大廳見面嗎？
(1)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday ________________________？(高頻詞匯)
(2)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday ________________________？(if條件狀語從句)
4．我們真誠地希望你能幫我們這個忙，幫助我們提高演技。
We sincerely hope you can __________________________________________．(詞匯不重，彰顯水準)
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滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句　設(shè)計亮點
1．I'm writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.
2．The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.
3．(1)at your earliest convenience
(2)if it is convenient for you
4．do us a favour and help improve our performance
滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡　完美成篇
【范文賞讀】
Dear Miss Evans，
I'm writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.
The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment. We need you to give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, body-action, plot, setting and so on. Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday if it is convenient for you? We sincerely hope you can do us a favour and help improve our performance.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Passage 3（2019 ?全國高考卷Ⅲ?第71題）
假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：
1．時間；
2．活動安排；
3．歡迎他表演節(jié)目。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【范文賞讀】
Dear Allen，
I'm Li Hua, your Chinese friend. I'm glad to tell you that a Chinese classical music concert will be held in the music hall of our school on November 8th. According to the concert poster, many music masterpieces will be played by a famous band. Knowing that you are fond of classical music, I'd like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance. I'm sure it is a good chance to perform your favorite music.
If it is convenient for you, I'll meet you at the entrance of the music hall at 7：00 that evening.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Passage 4（2019 ?全國高考卷Ⅱ?第71題）
假定你是校排球隊隊長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括：
1．比賽信息；
2．賽前準備；
3．表達期待。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【范文賞讀】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Hua, the captain of our school volleyball team. I am writing to inform you that our team is going to play in the National League. Every participating team is great and ready for the game. It can be predicted that this is a close match.
Our team is now busy preparing for the game, from living to daily training. We are confident that we can win this competition. But we sincerely hope you will give us your guidance and encouragement. I'm sure that you will certainly wish us to win.
Thank you for your expectation and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Passage 5（2019 ?全國高考卷Ⅰ?第71題）
假定你是李華，暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：
1．寫信目的；
2．個人優(yōu)勢；
3．能做的事情。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
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Yours，
Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua. I'm a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in London now. I'm glad to learn that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition. I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition. So I am writing this letter asking to be a volunteer.
I am good at English and familiar with Chinese paintings. I would like to volunteer to help visitors, introduce Chinese paintings, spread Chinese culture, and strengthen world cultural exchanges. My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China. I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request.
Yours，
Li_Hua

Test 1
[2021·太原市高三年級模擬三] 假定你是李華，準備與新西蘭的朋友Rosy去參觀中國園林博物館?，F(xiàn)收到該館暫時閉館通知，請寫一封信告知她，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示遺憾；
2．推遲原因；
3．新的安排。
提示：中國園林博物館the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Rosy，
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Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear Rosy，
How are things going with you? I'm pretty sorry to say that there is a new notification that the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture will close until further notice. It is a pity that we won't be able to visit it as planned.
The reason for the museum's temporary closing is that it needs to be updated, which means we will have the opportunity to witness a new face of it in the near future. In spite of this, we can still make some other plans. For example, the Summer Palace is a good alternative, which is sure to leave an equally deep impression on us.
What do you suggest we should do together? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 2
[2021·河北省高三六校聯(lián)考]假定你是李華，你和戲曲社的留學(xué)生朋友Johnson打算周日外出，請你寫信告知他具體安排。內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．見面時間和地點；
2．觀看京劇表演；
3．其他活動。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Dear Johnson，
I'm writing to tell you the arrangements I've made for our one-day relaxation.
Shall we meet at our school gate at around 9 am and then take the subway to the city theater? I've heard some famous Peking Opera artists will give performances in the city theater, which can hold hundreds of audience. Knowing you are a Peking Opera lover, I feel you can't miss it. After seeing the performances, it's convenient for us to have lunch at a nearby restaurant. Then we can go to the bookstore to buy some books on Chinese poems. Do tell me if you have any better ideas.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 3
[2021·河北省九校高三聯(lián)考] 假定你是李華，你校近期將舉辦漢服表演秀(Hanfu clothing show)。請你給你校交換生Tina寫一封電子郵件邀請她參加。要點如下：
1．活動目的；
2．演出時間、地點；
3．演出內(nèi)容。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【范文賞讀】
Dear Tina，
Our school is organizing a Hanfu clothing show. Knowing that you are a huge fan of traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to attend the event.
The event is to be held to enrich students' extracurricular activities and spread an excellent wealth of traditional Chinese culture. It will kick off at three o'clock on Friday afternoon on the second floor of the Art Center at out school, which will last approximately two hours. Performers wearing traditional Hanfu clothing will present the unique styles and attractions combined with classical folk dance.It will make you feel as if you were in ancient times!
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 4
[2021·東北三省四市高考模擬]假定你是李華，暑期在紐約學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)夭┪镳^要舉辦中國瓷器(china)展。請你給負責(zé)人寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：
1．寫信意圖；
2．個人優(yōu)勢。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir，
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Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear Sir，
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in New York now. I have learned from your advertisement that a Chinese china exhibition will be held in the local museum, so I am writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I can speak fluent English as well as standard Chinese. Besides, I once learned a lot about china in our school china club and have been crazy about collecting a variety of china cups. Young and energetic, I'm keen on communicating with foreign friends. Thus, I'm convinced that I'm qualified for the job.
I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Test 5
[2021·沈陽市教學(xué)質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(一)]假定你是李華，你校學(xué)生會要舉行一場關(guān)于垃圾分類的宣傳活動。請你給外教Mr. Smith寫一封英文郵件，邀請他參加。主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．活動時間、地點；
2．活動內(nèi)容。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：垃圾分類garbage sorting
Dear Mr. Smith，
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Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear Mr. Smith，
I'm writing on behalf of the Students' Union to invite you to join us in the activity about garbage sorting.
To protect the environment, garbage sorting is being carried out all over China. Therefore, our school plans to hold a promoting activity in the school hall at 6 p．m. on Friday. During the activity, several videos and lectures about garbage sorting will be provided, through which we are sure to learn more about how to sort and deal with the garbage scientifically.
If you are to participate, please let us know at your convenience. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Test 6
[2021·長春市普通高中高三統(tǒng)一測試]假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Smith為了讓他的同學(xué)更好地了解中國，準備組織一個主題為“Hello China”的活動，向你尋求建議。請你寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．寫作目的；
2．活動建議：介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化和當(dāng)代成就；
3．期待與祝愿。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear, Smith，
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Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear Smith，
I'm glad to know that you are launching a campaign “Hello China” aimed at making your classmates have a better understanding of China. And I'd like to give you some advice concerning it.
In the campaign you can introduce your classmates to Chinese calligraphy, paper cutting, Beijing opera and so on. And then offer them a wonderful visit of the Great Wall through virtual reality technology, for it symbolizes Chinese national spirit and wisdom. In addition, you can show China's modern achievements to them, including the high-speed train system and the mobile payment service, which bring much convenience to people's lives and affect the world.
Wish your campaign a great success.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
Test 7
[2021·濟南外國語學(xué)校模擬]假定你是李華。下個周將有一個來自美國的學(xué)生代表團訪問你校，學(xué)校向全校學(xué)生招募形象大使，參與接待來訪的美國學(xué)生。你寫信申請，內(nèi)容包括：
1．希望成為形象大使；2.介紹自己的優(yōu)勢(英語口語，性格等)；3.對形象大使的認識。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；3.形象大使：Goodwill Ambassador
Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua.
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Li Hua
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Dear sir，,I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to apply for the opportunity to be one of the Goodwill Ambassadors.,I'm a student in senior two who has a good knowledge of English and can communicate with native speakers freely. As an outgoing and hard-working boy， I often devote my spare time to making friends with foreigners， watching English movies and reading English novels， which makes me quite familiar with western cultures. As a Goodwill Ambassador， not only can I exchange ideas with the guests and spread Chinese culture， but also I can put my talent into good use.,I'd appreciate it if you offer me the precious opportunity. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
Test 8
[2021·濰坊市高考模擬]假定你是李華，隨著“祝融號”探測器(Zhurong rover)成功著陸火星，你校決定舉行關(guān)于火星的科技講座。請給來自新西蘭的留學(xué)生朋友John寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：
1．講座的時間和地點；
2．講座的目的和主要內(nèi)容；
3．發(fā)出邀請。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear John，
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Your sincerely，
Li Hua
Test 9
[2021·濰坊市高考模擬]假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Noah在給你的郵件中說他對中國古代建筑很感興趣，并打算利用暑假參觀一下。請你給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．推薦要參觀的建筑；
2．約定參觀的時間；
3．提出其他建議。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Test 10
[2021·山東省泰安市高三模擬]假定你是李華，你校來自英國的交換生Frank計劃本周末組織英語角活動，他請你提供一些建議，請你給他回信。內(nèi)容包括：
1．確定時間、地點；
2．合理使用手機。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Test 11
[2021·濟南市高考針對性訓(xùn)練]假定你是李華，在即將畢業(yè)之際，請你代表全班同學(xué)給外教Frank寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示感謝；
2．回憶美好瞬間；
3．表達祝愿。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Frank，
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Li Hua
Test 8
【范文賞讀】
Dear John，
As you know, China's Zhurong rover successfully landed on Mars last week, which has inspired us students greatly. In order to meet our passion for Mars, our school has decided to hold a Sci-Tech lecture.
A famous astronomy professor from Peking University is to give us the lecture on exploring for signs of water and life on the mysterious red planet. The activity is scheduled in the school Lecture Hall from 9 to 11 next Sunday morning. If it interests you, come and join us.
Hope to see you on the big day.
Your sincerely，
Li Hua
Test 9
【范文賞讀】
Dear Noah，
I'm really glad that you take great interest in ancient Chinese architecture.
Millions of ancient buildings have survived in China's history. However, there is no better place to visit than the Forbidden City in Beijing. It served as a royal palace for centuries. Summer is a good time for traveling, so shall we go there on August 1? I believe you'll have a better experience if you know its history. You'd better do some research online.
Please let me know if you need further information.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 10
【范文賞讀】
Dear Frank，
I'm delighted to give you some suggestions about the English corner.
Firstly，I think it can be held in the small park near the playground from 3 pm to 5 pm this Saturday. Besides，during the activity，it is not acceptable for people to get addicted to playing with the cellphones without communicating with each other. Finally，people should be asked to take away the rubbish when leaving the park.
I hope my suggestions are useful. Expecting to take part in the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 11
【范文賞讀】
Dear Frank，
On the occasion of graduation, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send our sincere gratitude for your kind help with our English learning on behalf of the whole class.
I still remember what you have devoted to improving our oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with us. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express our thankfulness to you.
I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever!
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 12
[2019·湖南六校聯(lián)考]假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jamie來信說他對中國傳統(tǒng)文學(xué)非常感興趣，但在閱讀時遇到了困難，比如很多漢字不認識，讀不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的幫助。請給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示理解并給予安慰；
2．提出建議。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：中國傳統(tǒng)文學(xué)traditional Chinese literature；漢字Chinese character
Dear Jamie，
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Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear_Jamie，
I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It's never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don't have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters, Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I'm always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and practicing. You are sure to make progress !
Best_wishes!
Yours，
Li_Hua
Test 13
[2019·昆明市診斷]假定你是李華，你的好友Peter在你校上周舉辦的“美麗校園”攝影比賽中獲獎了。請根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封郵件：
1．表示祝賀；
2．你對獲獎作品的看法；
3．希望他分享攝影經(jīng)驗。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter，
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Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear_Peter，
Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week.
Your work stands out in the competition, which is quite representative of all works and close to the theme reflecting our school culture. Besides, skills of taking photos are also in the prior position. In a word, you've done well in all the required aspects. So you've got the prize and I feel proud of you. Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart!
I hope you can share your skills of taking pictures with me.
Yours，
Li_Hua

Test 1
假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter正在一家孔子學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)漢語和中國文化，得知中國人很重視家風(fēng)傳承。他在給你的電子郵件中提到很想了解你的家風(fēng)以及家風(fēng)對你的影響。請你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：家風(fēng)family spirits
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Dear Peter，
I'm glad to know you are learning Chinese language and culture. In your last letter, you said you wanted to know something about my family spirits. Here I'm writing to share something about my family spirits with you.
There are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family. My parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery and diligence and they set good examples for me and my brother.
My family spirits have a lasting influence on me. Brought up in a friendly atmosphere, I never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. Thanks to these good qualities, I have made great achievements in my study and life.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
Test 2
假如你是李華，你的好友王明自進入高三以來一直覺得壓力很大，學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)不大好。請你給他寫封電子郵件，以幫助他振作起來。
寫作要點：1.給他一些建議；
2.送上祝福。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Dear Wang Ming，
I am sorry to hear about your situation. But I hope you will soon cheer up. The following are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.
First, try to build up your confidence. Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term and complicated process and confidence plays an important role. So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens. Second, you should find out your own strengths and weaknesses in your study, and seek help from both teachers and classmates in the face of difficulties and stress. Last but not least, you are supposed to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourself. Always remember “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 3
假設(shè)你是李華，正在英國學(xué)習(xí)，想成為學(xué)校的一個“中西文化交流俱樂部”的成員。請根據(jù)下列要點用英文給組織者寫一封申請信：
1.個人情況：姓名、年齡；
2.個人條件：英語口語流利，對西方文化感興趣，善于與人交流；
3.目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解更多中西文化之間的差異。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua and I'm 17 years old. I am interested in joining the Chinese and Western Cultural Communication Club.
I can speak English fluently. What's more, I'm very interested in Western culture. So, I've read many great works by famous writers, such as Gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre. To be frank, I'm good at communicating and expressing myself. By joining the club, I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences. I'd also like to know more about the differences between Chinese and Western traditions and history.
I hope to be admitted to the club and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Test 4
假如你是李華，校學(xué)生會主席，得知著名英國教授Matrix將來你校參加英語教師培訓(xùn)會(2019年3月28日～3月30日)，特邀請Matrix在開會期間給你校學(xué)生作一個關(guān)于英語寫作的講座。
請按下列要點寫一封邀請信：
1.本人簡介；
2.講座內(nèi)容；
3.表示感謝。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：學(xué)生會Student Union；培訓(xùn)會training conference
Dear Professor Matrix，
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【范文賞讀】
Dear_Professor_Matrix，
I'm Li Hua, chairman of Student Union. I am very excited to learn that you are coming to attend the English teachers' training conference in our school from 28th to 30th, March, 2019.
On behalf of the students in our school, I have the honor to invite you to give us a lecture on English writing. Would you please spare some time if it is convenient for you?
We would be grateful if you could accept our invitation. I am sure that your wonderful lecture will have a great influence on us.
Looking_forward_to_your_reply.
Yours_sincerely，
Li_Hua
Test 5
假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個月來北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加一次英語演講比賽，你在對演講的資料收集、文字語言運用和演講方法等方面遇到了困難。請根據(jù)以下要點提示給Tom寫一封求助信。
1.詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；
2.談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請Tom幫忙；
3.告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Dear Tom，
How time flies! You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month, during which you must have achieved a lot. Well, how's everything going?
I am glad to tell you that I will attend the English speech contest to be held in Beijing in July, which is absolutely a great opportunity for me to improve myself. And now I am trying my best to make preparations for it. However, I have some difficulty in collecting relevant information and putting what I have learned into practice, which bothers me a lot. In addition, the most difficult thing is that I have no idea how to attract the audience's attention. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor.
Looking forward to your reply. By the way, after the contest, I am to drop in on you. Hope to meet you there soon.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
Test 6
假設(shè)你是李華，你和Tom約好下周末去北京游玩，但你因故不能赴約，請你給Tom寫一封100詞左右的電子郵件。要點如下：
1．表達歉意；
2．說明理由；
3．另約時間。
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Dear Tom，
I'm writing to apologize to you for not being able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you.
I indeed arranged my schedule to join you. However, I was so absent－minded that I forgot I had promised to attend a charity activity, which will be held on the same day. As a consequence, I must attend the charity party which aims to raise funds for wildlife protection. So I am afraid I'll not be able to keep the appointment as arranged.
Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. Is it convenient for you if I put off our plan until the first weekend of next month? Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 7
假設(shè)你是李華，最近跟父母去國外旅行時所居住的旅館服務(wù)不好。請根據(jù)以下要點提示給旅館老板寫一封英文投訴信，信中應(yīng)包括下列內(nèi)容：
1.空調(diào)不能正常運行；
2.浴室不干凈；
3.晚上周圍噪聲很大，且不給更換房間；
4.服務(wù)員態(tài)度隨意，漠不關(guān)心。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.短文須包括所給要點，但不必逐句翻譯；
3.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
4.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Room 512.
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
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Dear_Sir_or_Madam，
I_am_writing_to_complain_about_your_hotel_service._My_ parents_and_I_had
_a_terrible_stay_in_Room_512.
Firstly, the air conditioner wouldn't work. When I asked the staff for help, no one came. Secondly, I found the bathroom rather dirty. What was worse, the noise outside was so loud that we were unable to sleep at night. I asked to change rooms, but was refused for the reason that the hotel was full. It was surprising that the hotel staff treated us in a very casual and indifferent manner.
For the above reasons, I have to say that the service in your hotel is completely unacceptable at so many levels. Therefore, I hope you can apologize and refund my money.
Looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.
Yours_faithfully，
Li_Hua
Test 8
[2021·云南民族大學(xué)附中月考]假定你是李華，已高中畢業(yè)20年，今日從報紙上獲悉母校將要舉行100周年校慶，你將要給你遠在美國的高中同桌Peter發(fā)一封100詞左右的電子郵件，相約一起回母校參加活動，要點如下：
1．問候昔日同桌，回憶同學(xué)友情；2.校慶活動介紹；3.捐設(shè)獎學(xué)金。
參考詞匯：百年校慶100th anniversary celebration; 獎學(xué)金scholarship
Dear Peter，
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Li Hua
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Dear Peter，,How is everything going recently? I'm writing to invite you to go back to our senior high school to celebrate her 100th anniversary. It has been 20 years since we graduated from high school. Do you still remember the days we spent studying and playing together? Till now, these memories remain fresh.,As I know, the celebration will last for 3 days from October 1st to October 3rd. Schoolmates will gather to meet their old friends. An evening party will be held to feast people's eyes. At the party, folk songs will be performed, poem recitation and students' group dance included. When we meet, I suppose money should be raised to set up a scholarship which is used to provide financial support for the students from rural areas. What do you think about it？,I am looking forward to your early coming.
Yours，
Test 9
[2021·湖南師大附中月考]假定你是李華，你校網(wǎng)站準備面向在華外籍高中生舉辦一次“我眼中的中國”征文活動。請你給在某國際學(xué)校就讀的你的好友Eric發(fā)一封電子郵件告知此事，并鼓勵他投稿。內(nèi)容包括：
1．語言：英文或中文；2.截止時間：2021年11月15日；3.聯(lián)系方式：editingcentre@163.com
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Eric，
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【范文賞讀】
Dear Eric,
How are things going with you? To promote mutual understanding, our school website is launching an essay-writing campaign intended for foreign high school students in China. I'm writing to inform you of the information in detail and hope you will contribute your wonderful work.
The theme of the campaign is “China in My Eyes”. You can write in either Chinese or English about what impresses you most in China. If you like, please submit your work to editingcentre@163.com before Nov. 15，2019.
Expecting your wonderful experiences in China to be shared soon. If you need my help, please don't hesitate to let me know.
Yours，
Test 10
[2021·武漢部分示范高中聯(lián)考]假定你是某國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，你校正在組織學(xué)生作為交流生到英國學(xué)習(xí)兩個月，你非常想得到這次交流學(xué)習(xí)的機會。請你根據(jù)以下提示給校長寫封申請信：
1. 父母支持；2. 個人優(yōu)勢；3. 表達愿望。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【范文賞讀】
Dear Mr. President，
I'm more than happy to learn some of us students will have the opportunity to study in England as exchangestudents for two months. And I'm anxious for the chance.
Firstly, my parents strongly support me for they believe studying abroad can broaden my horizons. Secondly，my good command of English enables me to communicate with others freely. Besides, having great interest in England and English, I'm eager to further improve my English and experience English culture in person.
I'd appreciate it if you could give consideration to my application. Looking forward to your approval.
Yours，
Li Hua

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