Examples frm literary wrks…
Mary?felt her spirits sink?even lwer. 瑪麗覺得她的情緒更低落了。Mary felt?a wave f anger sweep ver her.? 瑪麗感到一陣憤怒。
Mary?felt her cheeks flush. 瑪麗感到面頰發(fā)紅。When he saw the light frm Mary’s candle, his?eyes widened?even further, but the crying stpped. 當(dāng)他看到瑪麗的蠟燭發(fā)出的光時，他的眼睛睜得更大了，但是哭聲停止了。
He?scwled (怒視), ?slamming the dr behind him. 他怒氣沖沖，摔門而去。She?fumbled (摸索) fr?the key, [her heart?beating faster than a gallping hrse]. 她摸索著找鑰匙，心跳得比一匹疾馳的馬還快。Taking a deep breath, Mary?pushed pen the dr?and stepped inside. 瑪麗深吸了一口氣，推開門走了進去。She?swallwed hard?and stepped int a huge rm. 她使勁咽了一下口水，走進一個大房間。
The rain began again that night. It?beat against the windw, [waking Mary up]. She listened as the wind?hwled?arund the huse and dwn the chimney. She?tried but culd nt?get back t sleep. “Stupid wind!” she thught. 那天晚上又開始下雨了。雨拍打著窗戶，把瑪麗吵醒了。她聽著風(fēng)在房子周圍呼嘯，從煙囪里呼嘯而下。她想睡，但還是睡不著?！坝薮赖娘L(fēng)！”她想。
普通版：He was happy.進階版:動作描寫：Tears f happiness ________ _______ Susan’s ________. (沿著臉頰奔流而下) She?________?_______?______ ________. (落下開心的淚水)I beamed at (笑容滿面) him, “Welcme back, ...” He grinned with delight (咧嘴開心地笑) when he saw us.神態(tài)描寫：Her eyes _______________________________________. (閃爍著快樂的光芒)Her face _______ _______ with pleasure.（容光煥發(fā)）Her?smile _______ _______?the?whle?rm. （她的笑容照亮了整個房間。）The smile n her face ________ _______ _____ _________. (像鉆石一樣閃耀)He cast us a glance, with his face wearing a brad/wide/radiant/warm smile.（她看向我們，面帶燦爛/溫暖的笑容。）Her eyes brimmed ver (溢滿) with warm excited tears. （熱淚盈眶）
pured dwn
shed tears f jy
shne/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with jy
lit up
shne like a diamnd
心理描寫：A wild jy ________ _______ ______ him. (極度的開心控制／占據(jù)了他)Jy?_______ ______?inside?her. (她心中涌起喜悅。)Hearing this, everybdy ______ ________ _______ _______. (欣喜若狂)Her heart was punding/beating with excitement. （砰砰直跳）When his mther kissed him n the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were n the tp f the wrld. (小嬰兒開心極了。)A?ripple?f?excitement?ran?thrugh?them. (一陣陣激動聲穿過他們。)
tk hld f
welled up
was wild with jy
普通版：He was sad.進階版：動作描寫：She?________,?hiding?her?face?in?her?hands. (她掩面啜泣。)He _______ ______ _____________. (失望地嘆了口氣。)He struggled t _____________________________________________ his tears. (抑制淚水)He std silently, tears rlling dwn his cheeks. Her?hands?were?trembling.?She?was?n?the?verge?f?tears. (快要哭了)When he embraced me with his arms pen wide, I felt my thrat chke with sb/tightened. (當(dāng)他張開雙臂擁抱我時，我覺得自己喉頭哽咽。)
sighed with disappintment
fight back/swallw against/hld back/chke back
神態(tài)描寫：The?news?________?a?clud?f?glm?ver?his?face. (蒙上了一層憂郁的陰影)They?sat?there?with?glmy?lks?n?their?faces.???(帶著一臉憂郁。)His eyes brimmed with tears f srrw. (他的眼里噙滿了悲傷的淚水。)?心理描寫：My heart seemed t ____________ (tear). (心都要撕碎了) Upn hearing the bad news, she ______________________________________ __________________ (感到被一股悲傷控制／淹沒／壓倒) and culdn’t help crying bitterly. Grief cmes in waves. (悲傷如潮水一般涌來。)A ripple/wave f sadness welled up inside him. (涌起陣陣悲傷)
felt seized/engulfed/verwhelmed/vercme
by a burst f sadness
普通版：He was nervus.進階版：動作+神態(tài)描寫：At the sight f the fierce wlf, I felt s scared that ____ ________ _________ and _____ ________ _______ ________. (喉嚨發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟)I said nervusly, my vice ___________ (tremble) a bit. With ____ ________ ______ (砰砰跳的心臟) and _______, _______ ________ (冰冷潮濕的手掌), I felt faint.I _______ ______ _______ (因害怕而僵住), t scared t mve an inch.Her?face?turned?________ (蒼白的)?and?std?there?___________(舌頭打結(jié)的). She?was?chked?by?fear. 她因恐懼而窒息。Her?heart?beat?s?vilently?that?she?felt?nearly?suffcated (窒息). 她的心跳得厲害，幾乎窒息而死。
my thrat tightened
my knees felt weak
a punding heart
cld mist palms
frze with terrr
【tngue-tied】
心理+神態(tài)描寫：Her face turned pale, feeling like sitting ____ _______ _____ ________. (如坐針氈。)Fear?slwly?crept?upn?her. 恐懼慢慢地爬上她的心頭。A?fld?f?fear?welled?up?in?him.?/?Fear?flded?ver (淹沒)?him. I felt that the bld in my bdy frze rapidly because f the terrible sight.I was seized by a sudden impulse (沖動) t run.Standing in the classrm, I became increasingly nervus and culd feel my heart beating wildly. (感到心跳加速)
n pins and needles
普通版：He was angry.進階版：動作描寫：He stamped his ft in anger (氣得直跺腳) and ran ut f the rm in a burst f anger.He?was?breathing?fire?and?fury. His vice trembled with anger/rage.Filled with anger/fury, Tm was unable t utter a single wrd.He clenched his fists. He glared at me with burning eyes.My vice sunds like a grwling, angry bear.She threw the invitatin n the table with annyance, murmuring...
氣得說不出話我的聲音聽起來像一只怒吼的熊。怒氣沖沖地跑出房間聲音因生氣而顫抖滿腔怒火惱怒地把…扔開握緊拳頭怒氣沖沖地瞪著我
神態(tài)描寫：His?face?cluded?with?anger. 他氣得臉色陰沉。?心理描寫：He?culd?hardly/scarcely?cntain?his?rage. 他幾乎控制不住怒火。Anger engulfed/swallwed (吞噬) him like a wild beast.
神態(tài)、心理描寫：Tears __________ her eyes (熱淚盈眶), she ffered her heartfelt gratitude.All thse present t listen t her sad stry ____ ________ t tears. (感動得流淚)Tuched deeply/immensely, we… 被深深感動, 我們…With tears streaming dwn her face, she...? 淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來, …
N.1 使用生動的形容詞 （積極&消極）
【關(guān)于風(fēng)的形容詞】積極形容詞：gentle/sft 輕柔的, warm 溫暖的, pleasant 令人愉悅的消極形容詞：icy/freezing 冰冷的, strng/vilent 猛烈的, dreadful可怕的, hwling 呼嘯的, biting 刺骨的, bne-chilling/ bne-piercing 刺骨的e.g. a gentle warm breeze 溫和的暖風(fēng) an icy hwling wind 刺骨的狂風(fēng) 【關(guān)于雨的形容詞】積極形容詞：gentle/light 小的, pleasant 令人愉悅的 消極形容詞：icy/freezing 冰冷的, heavy, dreadful 可怕的【關(guān)于雪的形容詞】積極形容詞：feathery 鵝毛般的, tiny 極小的, pure/clean干凈的純潔的消極形容詞：icy/freezing 冰冷的, heavy, dreadful可怕的e.g. the pure feathery snwflakes 鵝毛般純潔的雪花
【關(guān)于星星的形容詞】積極形容詞：lvely, little, sparkling/shining/glwing/twinkling 亮閃閃的消極形容詞：pale/faint 暗淡的, starless沒有星星的e.g. the few pale stars 零零散散的暗淡的星星 dark starless night 昏暗的沒有星星的夜晚【關(guān)于太陽/陽光的形容詞】積極的形容詞：warm, amber-like 像琥珀一樣的, dazzling 耀眼的消極的形容詞：burning/scrching火辣辣的, scalding炙熱的e.g. the warm amber-like sunshine 溫暖的琥珀色的陽光
Tip1：使用兩個或者三個并列的形容詞來描寫自然景物，效果會更好。
N.2 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膭釉~ （積極&消極）
關(guān)于風(fēng)的動詞：hwl 嚎叫, blw 吹, whip 鞭打, sting 刺痛, kiss 親吻關(guān)于雨的動詞：beat against…拍打, crash against…擊打, pur dwn傾盆關(guān)于雪的動詞：dance 跳舞, flat/fall/drift 飄落, melt away 融化, blanket 裹住, cver 覆蓋關(guān)于星星的動詞：shine/sparkle/twinkle閃耀, wink/blink眨眼睛, hide躲藏, decrate裝飾, dt點綴關(guān)于太陽、陽光的動詞：cme ut出來, rise升起, set落下, kiss親吻, fld in 照射進來, be bathed in沐浴在
舉個例子～積極環(huán)境描寫：The pure feathery snwflakes were dancing gracefully in the air.Mrning sunshine flded in thrugh the pen curtains.The scenery alng the jurney is just like a breath-taking landscape painting. Clusters (群，簇) f stars decrated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.Stars winked at me in a darkening sky. The breeze (微風(fēng)) gently kissed her cheeks. The beach was bathed in the amber-like sunshine. The sky was dtted with sparkling stars. 消極環(huán)境描寫：The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/ stinging my face.The dreadful rain was beating wildly against the windws.Wind and rain nw whipped the huse.A heavy silence blanketed the rm.
Tip2：可以添加相應(yīng)的修飾語來修飾動詞，如副詞、介詞短語或非謂語動詞。
Tip3：巧用修辭手法—明喻、暗喻、擬人
結(jié)語：人物心理綜合刻畫技巧
Techniques:刻畫人物動作、語言、神態(tài)、心理活動；描寫積極、消極環(huán)境。Tips:多用兩個以上并列形容詞；多用修飾語來修飾動詞，如副詞、介詞、非謂語動詞；巧用修辭手法，如明喻、暗喻、擬人、反襯等。Ntice:人物情緒、客觀環(huán)境勿著墨過多，不可宣兵奪主，妨礙情節(jié)發(fā)展
Mac was leisurely jgging in the muntains n a Saturday mrning when he accidentally entered the territry f a female lin and irritated her…
Describe his emtins!
As the fierce beast grwled furiusly at him, Mac’s heart beat s vilently that he felt nearly suffcated (窒息的). 1) 被一種想要逃跑的沖動所支配，他加快了步伐，想要甩掉獅子，卻是徒勞。2) 哦天哪！我肯定是要死在這兒了！”他想道。視線所及，除了道路旁繁茂的 (lush) 楓樹，空無一人，但他現(xiàn)在毫無心情欣賞風(fēng)景。3) Mac鼓起勇氣，開始向獅子猛烈地吼叫，但是這只獅子似乎太鍥而不舍了。4) 他每退后一步，就感到膝蓋又軟了一點。

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