
List a writing utline and rganize ideas f each paragraph.
Plish the article and make it better.
Write a letter t ask thers fr help.
Understand and use sme language pints in the sample article.
We’ve learnt abut grups f peple wh need ur help in this unit. Can yu tell me wh these peple are and hw we can help them?
a blind persn
Wh needs help?
Hw can we help them?
a deaf persn
a hmeless persn
an elderly persn
a disabled persn
Other peple wh need ur help
survivrs f disasters
children withut families=rphan (孤兒)
children f migrant wrkers(農(nóng)民工子弟)/left-behind children(留守兒童)
peple with a serius disease
bld disease 血液病
suffer a lt/suffer great pain [?s?f?]遭受痛苦
It will cst a lt fr medical have an peratin.
Befre writing
Peter's letter t ask fr help. Read the letter first.
Dear all,A Grade 9 student at N. 2 Middle Schl needs ur help!The student 's name is Xia Wei. He has been ill in hspital since last mnth. The dctr says that he has a serius bld disease. An peratin may save him, but it will cst ver 300,000 yuan. Xia Wei 's parents are bth farmers. They d nt have enugh mney fr such an peartin. Hwever, it is imprtant fr Xia Wei t have the peratin as sn as pssible. Otherwise, he may lse his life.I am writing t ask fr yur help. Please dnate mney. Many hands make light wrk. If all f us can give a helping hand, he may get well again sn.Thanks a lt fr yur help!Peter
Read Peter’s letter and answer the questins.
1. What is wrng with Xia Wei? He has a serius bld disease.2. What kind f help d his family need? They need mney fr Xia Wei’s peratin.3. Hw can we help Xia Wei? We can dnate mney.
Three elements
1. He has been ill in hspital since last mnth. 他從上個(gè)月開(kāi)始就生病住院了。 現(xiàn)在完成時(shí) 表示從過(guò)去某一時(shí)間開(kāi)始一直持續(xù)到現(xiàn)在的動(dòng)作或事情。 e.g. They have wrked here since 2005. 他們從2005年開(kāi)始就在這工作了。be ill in hspital 生病住院
Language pints
Presentatin
2. have a serius bld disease 有嚴(yán)重的血液疾病 表示“生……病”通常用動(dòng)詞have。如:頭疼 have a headache
3. as sn as pssible 盡可能快地 e.g. 請(qǐng)盡快把書(shū)還給我。 Please return my bk as sn as pssible. 4. lse ne’s life 失去生命, 喪生 e.g. 許多人在這次地震中喪生了。 Many peple lst their lives in the earthquake.
5. Many hands make light wrk. 人多力量大。6. give a helping hand 伸出援助之手7. get well 康復(fù) 句中well是形容詞, 表示“健康的” e.g. — Are yu OK? — Yes. I’m well. — 你好嗎? — 是的,我很好。
A Writing Structure
Para.1:Xia Wei needs ur help.
Para.2:Infrmatin abut Xia Wei.
Para.3:Xia Wei’s family needs mney.
Para.4:We can dnate mney.
Para.5: Thanks fr yur help.
Infrmatin abut the persn r grup in need
What kind f help d they need?
Hw can we help?
Thanks fr yur help
Wh needs help?
Why shuld we help children f migrant wrkers?
visit them regularlyhelp them with their hmewrk/studyplay with them after schlsend them bks t readwe can help them by ding...
t busy with their wrk t lk after themt busy making a living t ... (s... that...)
Wh needs help? …need ur help. in need f ur help badly.2. What backgrund infrmatin d yu knw abut the persn/peple? serius, be badly ill/hurt… d nt have enugh mney d sth. = can’t affrd sth. = t…t… = s…that… = be unable t d It will cst t ... Hw he wishes he culd study at schl like us!
Useful expressins
3. Hw can we help? Why is it necessary fr us t help? We must d smething t help. What they need mst is ... We can… Please… We can help by… It’s…fr/f us t d… An peratin may bring hpe t him.4. Shw ur thanks. If all f us can give a helping hand, ... may... Thanks fr yur help/supprt/kindness. It's time t shw yur lve and kindness.
While writing
可以經(jīng)??赐麄?,在學(xué)業(yè)上給予幫助陪他們玩耍,增加樂(lè)趣帶一些書(shū)籍給他們,因?yàn)椤?。。。。。。。?br/>學(xué)校位于南京東郊,是一所農(nóng)民工子弟學(xué)校。有大約120名學(xué)生,僅僅5位老師。大多數(shù)學(xué)生需要自己照顧自己,因?yàn)楦改该τ谏?jì)無(wú)暇照料。
Brief intrductin
假如你是Daniel,想要呼吁大家?guī)椭鶶uth Primary Schl的學(xué)生
希望大家都能支持,并積極加入到本次活動(dòng)中來(lái)
After writing
一名九年級(jí)學(xué)生 a Grade Nine studenta student in/at Grade Nine生病住院be ill in hspital得了一種嚴(yán)重的血液病have a serius bld disease有足夠的錢(qián)做一次這樣的手術(shù)have enugh mney fr such an peratin
Phrases check
盡快手術(shù)have the peratin as sn as pssible失去生命 lse ne’s life請(qǐng)求你的幫助 ask fr yur help捐錢(qián)給他 dnate mney t him人多力量大Many hands make light wrk.康復(fù) get well again伸出援助之手give a helping hand
A Grade 9 student at ur schl needs ur help! The student’s name is Yun Jiamin. Her tw brthers _______________________________________(生下來(lái)就有智力缺陷) and they are unable t talk. What’s wrse, her father lst his life when she was nly 4 years ld. T them, the mst imprtant thing is_____________________________________________________(不是改善生活,而是互相支持) It never rains but it purs. She has been ill in hspital fr 6 mnths because f a serius bld disease. An peratin may save her, but it will _______________________________(花費(fèi)大約100萬(wàn)元). The dctr said it was ___________________________________________________________(對(duì)她來(lái)說(shuō),盡快做手術(shù)很重要). Hw culd the family affrd(負(fù)擔(dān)) s much mney?
Yun Jiamin needs help
were brn with intellectual disabilities
nt t imprve their lives, but t supprt each ther
cst abut 1 millin yuan.
imprtant fr her t have the peratin as sn as pssible
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