
圖表作文通常以表格或圖形來呈現(xiàn),體裁多為說明文、應(yīng)用文或議論文,學(xué)生需根據(jù)圖片提供的數(shù)據(jù)和文字進(jìn)行分析,得出令人信服的結(jié)論。常見的命題形式有表格、柱狀圖、餅狀圖、曲線圖等。圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)信息往往較多,寫作時(shí)要讀懂表格和圖形,認(rèn)真分析圖表內(nèi)各數(shù)據(jù)或各信息之間的關(guān)系,抓住主要特征,歸納主題。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為:
1.吸引眼球開頭句①With the apprach f Mther's Day,ur class prepares t hld a class meeting with the theme f “Thank mthers” n that day.隨著母親節(jié)的臨近,我們班準(zhǔn)備在那一天舉行一個(gè)以“感謝母親”為主題的班會。②Tday, bike-sharing is taking ff n the streets f China.如今,共享單車在中國各地的街道上蓬勃發(fā)展。
2.亮點(diǎn)出彩篇中句①Accrding t the result f the survey, we can see that the lder the students are, the mre likely they are t celebrate their mthers' and classmates' birthday.根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果,我們可以看出,學(xué)生年齡越大,他們慶祝母親和同學(xué)生日的可能性就越大。②The reasn fr this phenmenn is that students gradually learn t express gratitude t peple arund them.這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的原因是學(xué)生逐漸學(xué)會了感激周圍的人。
③In additin, bike-sharing can reduce carbn emissins,which is beneficial t envirnmental prtectin.此外,共享單車可以減少碳排放,這有利于環(huán)境保護(hù)。④Mrever,many peple are uncivilized t use them, resulting in serius damage t vehicles and incnvenient use.而且,許多人不文明地使用它們,造成嚴(yán)重的車輛損壞和使用不便。
⑤Hwever, thers tend t believe that iPad csts s much mney that nt everyne can affrd it.然而,其他人傾向于認(rèn)為iPad的價(jià)格太高,并非每個(gè)人都能負(fù)擔(dān)得起。
3.韻味無窮結(jié)尾句①Frm where I stand, each f us shuld give ur mthers a blessing wherever we are.從我的立場來看,無論我們在哪里,我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該給我們的母親一個(gè)祝福。②In my pinin, we shuld make full use f bike-sharing fr the sake f the envirnment and ur health.在我看來,為了環(huán)境和我們的健康,我們應(yīng)該充分利用共享單車。
(2022·全國乙卷改編)學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在開展以Learning English Beynd the Classrm為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1.學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況描述;2.簡單評論;3.你的建議。
注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Learning English Beynd the ClassrmThere are many things we can d t learn English well.
【滿分范文】Learning English Beynd the ClassrmThere are many things we can d t learn English well.As the chart shws, students adpt different ways t learn English beynd the classrm.The percent f the students wh listen t English sngs is as high as 65%.50% f them watch English mvies while nly 18% read English bks.Thse wh visit English-learning websites accunt fr 12%.
The figures f the chart suggest that there are a variety f ways t learn English beynd the classrm with the develpment f mdern technlgy.Students can chse what they like t enrich their English-learning experiences.As far as I am cncerned, students shuld d mre listening and speaking s that they can develp their cmmunicatin skills.
【名師點(diǎn)評】1.范文首先引出話題;然后陳述圖表所顯示的數(shù)據(jù),分析學(xué)生課外學(xué)習(xí)英語的方式;最后針對數(shù)據(jù)發(fā)表評論并針對學(xué)生在課外學(xué)習(xí)英語的方式提出建議。
2.本文思路清晰,分段合理,內(nèi)容充實(shí),圓滿地完成了寫作任務(wù)。范文中使用了大量的亮點(diǎn)詞匯(adpt, accunt fr, enrich, As far as I am cncerned等)。在句式方面,有as引導(dǎo)的定語從句(As the chart shws), wh引導(dǎo)的定語從句(wh listen t English sngs), that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句(that there are a variety f...)以及s that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句(s that they can...)等。
下面圖表是你們班級同學(xué)初高中階段上網(wǎng)情況的調(diào)查對比,請你描述圖表的變化并分析原因。
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】T further understand the differences f nline activities in junir high and in senir high, a survey was carried ut in ur class recently.The result is very interesting. 60% f my classmates played nline games three years ag when in junir high, while nly 20% d that nw. There is little difference between the percentage f chatting, which is abut 32% nw, almst the same as three years ag. Hwever, there is a big difference in learning activities. The percentage rises frm 33% in junir high t abut 82% in senir high.
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