專題11 讀后續(xù)寫技能訓練之三：修辭手法-試卷下載-教習網(wǎng)

目錄
TOC \ "1-2" \h \u \l "_Tc982" 第一部分 simile明喻 PAGEREF _Tc982 2
\l "_Tc4792" Part 1：by using simile marker “l(fā)ike”——用like作喻詞 PAGEREF _Tc4792 2
\l "_Tc1569" Part 2：by using simile marker “”——用作喻詞 PAGEREF _Tc1569 4
\l "_Tc3628" Part 3：by using simile marker “as if”——用as if作喻詞 PAGEREF _Tc3628 5
\l "_Tc18408" 第二部分metaphr暗喻 PAGEREF _Tc18408 7
\l "_Tc31502" Part 1：by using the link wrd “be”——通過be動詞聯(lián)系 PAGEREF _Tc31502 7
\l "_Tc32446" Part 2：by using the verbs——通過動詞聯(lián)系 PAGEREF _Tc32446 8
\l "_Tc8631" 第三部分 persnificatin擬人 PAGEREF _Tc8631 10
\l "_Tc24163" Part 1：把自然現(xiàn)象當作人來描寫 PAGEREF _Tc24163 10
\l "_Tc26760" Part 2：把含蓄抽象的概念當作人來描寫 PAGEREF _Tc26760 11
\l "_Tc14027" Part 3：把動物當作人來描寫 PAGEREF _Tc14027 11
\l "_Tc9227" 第四部分 hyperble 夸張 PAGEREF _Tc9227 13
\l "_Tc126" Part 1：使用數(shù)詞或量詞 PAGEREF _Tc126 13
\l "_Tc2931" Part 2：使用動詞 PAGEREF _Tc2931 14
\l "_Tc9437" Part 3：使用形容詞和副詞 PAGEREF _Tc9437 14
\l "_Tc6196" Part 4：使用介詞短語 PAGEREF _Tc6196 14
【挑戰(zhàn)】請說出下列四張圖的修辭手法？
simile明喻
明喻，明確的比喻將具有某種共同特征的兩種不同事物連接起來的一種修辭手法。明喻的表達方法是：A像B. 例如雪花象鵝毛一樣飛舞.
Part 1：by using simile marker “l(fā)ike”——用like作喻詞
1. The smile n her face shne like a diamnd. （情感描寫）
她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。
2. I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness.（情感描寫）
我感覺自己像漂浮在悲傷的海洋中。
3. The scenery alng the jurney is just like a breath-taking landscape painting. (景物描寫)
沿路的風景就像一幅美麗的山水畫卷。
4. The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(景物描寫)
寒風開始咆哮，像鋒利的小刀一樣刺痛了我的臉。
5. Clusters f stars decrated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.(景物描寫)
繁星像珊珊發(fā)光的珠寶一樣裝飾了浩瀚的天空。
小試牛刀
1. 這本書陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。
2. 他茫然地看著我就像一個傻子。
3. 他就像一頭瘋牛一樣沖我吼。（mad cw）
4. 他非常著急就像熱鍋上的螞蟻一樣。
5. 他僵在那里一動不動就像一塊石頭。
參考答案：
1. The bk has accmpanied me fr quite a lng time like an ld friend.
2. He lked at me blankly like a fl.
3. He shuted at me like a mad cw.
4. He is anxius like an ant n a ht pan.
5. He std still like a stne.
Part 2：by using simile marker “”——用作喻詞
1. The smile n her face was as vibrant as the sun n a summer day（情感描寫）
她臉上的笑容和夏天的太陽一樣充滿活力。
2. Father rushed t his sn's schl, nly t discver the building was as flat as pancake煎餅.(景物描寫)
父親沖到兒子的學校后，才發(fā)現(xiàn)這座建筑已經(jīng)變成一片廢墟。
3. I reached ut t tuch her face, which was as cld as the ice. (人物描寫)
我伸手去摸她的臉，發(fā)現(xiàn)她的臉像冰一樣冰冷。
更多搭配：
as busy as a bee 忙忙碌碌
as hungry as a wlf 饑腸轆轆
as prud as a peacck 傲如孔雀
as brave as a lin 勇猛如獅
as pretty as a picture 美如畫
【牛刀小試】
我的心和蜂蜜一樣甜。
2. 他的心和石頭一樣硬。
3. 他的身體和牛一樣壯實。
4. 我們面前的景色美如一幅畫。
5. 這輛公交車走的像蝸牛一樣慢。
參考答案：
1. My heart is as sweet as hney.
2. His heart is as hard as a stne.
3. His bdy is as strng as a cw.
4. The scenery befre us is as beautiful as a picture.
5. The bus went as slwly as a snail.
Part 3：by using simile marker “as if”——用as if作喻詞
1.Mrs Sather lked at my eyes as if (she were) seeing my inner self lcked away inside. （動作描寫）
Sather老師看著我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我靈魂深處封閉的自我。
2. She swept her sn int her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted t squeeze the breath ut f him.（動作描寫）
她眼睛濕潤，把兒子擁進懷里，仿佛想把他的呼吸擠出來。
3.Her hair grew greyer and greyer, as if( it were )cvered with snw and frst.（肖像描寫）
他的頭發(fā)越來越白了，簡直像蓋了一頭皚皚的霜雪。
4. She felt as if her heart had been ripped frm her bdy.（情感描寫）
她感覺自己心好像從她的身體里被撕開了。
【牛刀小試】
1. 他感覺彷佛整個世界都崩塌了。
2. 他在操場上自由地奔跑彷佛他是一只快樂的小鳥。
3. 他無辜地看著我好像他什么都不知道似的。
4. 他感覺他的心臟被刀子捅了一刀。（stab）
【參考答案】
1. He felt as if the whle wrld had fallen apart n him.
2. He was running n the sprts field as if he was a happy bird.
3. He lked at me inncently as if he didn't knw anything.
4. He felt as if his heart had been stabbed by a knife.
第二部分metaphr暗喻
Metaphr：It is a figure f speech cntaining an implied cmparisn, in which a wrd r phrase rdinarily and primarily used f ne thing is applied t anther. Unlike simile, a wrd r a phrase that cmpares ne thing t anther, using the wrds like r as.
暗喻是比喻修辭的一種，用一種事物比喻另一種事物，本體喻體都出現(xiàn)，中間常用喻詞“是”等連接，有時不用喻詞。暗喻的典型形式為：甲是乙，而不用like, as等喻詞。
Mney smetimes is a pisn.錢有時候是一種毒藥。
She is a walking dictinary. 她是一本活字典。
Part 1：by using the link wrd “be”——通過be動詞聯(lián)系
1. Her hair was a flwing glden river streaming dwn her shulders. （肖像描寫）
她的頭發(fā)像是一條流淌在她肩上的金色河流。
2. The beatutiful park was a scented carpet f clr.(景物描寫)
美麗的公園就是一個芬芳的彩色地毯。
3. Stp being such a baby. (人物描寫)
別這么幼稚好不好。
4. Life is an unexplred river. full f twists and turns.(哲理)
生活就像一條未被涉足的河流，有各種曲折。
Part 2：by using the verbs——通過動詞聯(lián)系
1. I felt a lump in my thrat, tearing welling up in my eyes.（情感描寫）
我如鯁在喉，淚水濕潤了眼眶。
2. He desn't have an idea f his wn. He just parrts what ther peple say.(人物描寫)
他沒有自己的觀點，只會鸚鵡學舌。
3. A heavy silence blanketed the rm.（環(huán)境描寫）
整個房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。
4. The by wlfed dwn the fd.（動作描寫）
小男孩狼吞虎咽。
【牛刀小試1】找出下面句子里面的修辭
1. My very thught was like the ghstly rustle f dead leaves.
2.He lked as if he had just stepped ut f my bk f fairy tales.
3. Wind and rain nw whipped（鞭打） the huse.
參考答案】1. 明喻 2.明喻 3. 暗喻
【牛刀小試2】
1. My mther is like a cat in winter, ffering warmth t me.
2.The wind sunded like a rar f a train passing by.
3. Husehld and medical suplies streamed in by plane, train, truck and car.
【參考答案】1. 明喻 2. 明喻 3. 暗喻
【牛刀小試3】找出下面片段里面的修辭
Yesterday, I went t the park. I rde my bicycle thrugh the evergreen trees which were as tall as skyscrapers. The sun shne thrugh cluds, which were flating pieces f cttn candy in the sky.
昨天，我去了公園。我騎著自行車穿過那些像摩天大樓一樣高的常青樹。陽光透過云層照射進來，那是天上飄著的棉花糖。
Peple were laughing and enjying the cmpany f their families and friends. I rde past a giant garden f beautiful pink, yellw and purple flwers:it was a scented carpet f clr. The park is like a asis (綠洲）in the city.
佩普爾笑著，享受著家人和朋友的陪伴。我騎過一個巨大的花園，花園里開著美麗的粉紅色、黃色和紫色的花：這是一條有香味的彩色地毯。公園就像城市里的綠洲(綠洲。
第三部分 persnificatin擬人
Persnificatin擬人：It gives human frm f feelings t animals, r le and persnal attributes(賦予) t inanimate (無生命的) bjects, r t ideas and abstractins(抽象).
與漢語擬人完全相同，就是賦予物以人的語言屬性。這種擬人化的修辭手法讀起來使人感到特別形象生動，富有情趣。
Part 1：把自然現(xiàn)象當作人來描寫
1. The wind std up and gave a shut . (景物描寫)大風凜冽，發(fā)出怒吼。
2. The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (景物描寫)微風輕柔地親吻著她的臉龐。
3. The feathery snwflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.(景物描寫)
鵝毛般的雪花在空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的圖畫。
4.The mist swallwed him up. (景物描寫)薄霧把他包圍起來。
5.The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.(景物描寫)寒風開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。
6. Stars winked at me in a darkening sky.(景物描寫)夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。
7. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest.(景物描寫)頃刻間，黑暗統(tǒng)治了森林。
Part 2：把含蓄抽象的概念當作人來描寫
1. Fear seized/swallwed him.（情感描寫）恐懼把他吞噬了。
2. Anger chked my wrds.（情感描寫）我氣得說不出話來。
3. A gd idea suddenly struck me.我突然想到一個好主意。
4. Smile tk hld f him.（情感描寫）他笑容滿面。
5. Anxiety trn him int pieces.（情感描寫）她焦慮不安，十分崩潰。
6. Curage/Cnfidence deserted him.（情感描寫）他沒信心了。
7. Excitement deprived me f all pwer f speech.（情感描寫）我興奮的啥也說不出來了。
Part 3：把動物當作人來描寫
1. In the dead f night, the crickets蟋蟀 played n the terrace f the huse.
寂靜的夜，蟋蟀旁若無人地在房子的陽臺上玩。(景物描寫)
2. Birds n the tree are singing a beatiful sng.(景物描寫)
樹上的小鳥在樹上唱著美妙的歌曲。
3. The frgs are giving a cncert---mixed chrus.(景物描寫)
青蛙在舉辦音樂會---混聲大合唱。
4.Fireflies patrl the grass with small lanterns (景物描寫)
螢火蟲提著小燈籠在草叢中巡邏。
【牛刀小試】
1. 夏天的微風輕輕地撫摸著我的臉。
2. 細雨輕輕地親吻著我的臉頰。
3. 我能聽到到處都是鳥兒在歌唱。
4. 這個教堂目睹了這個城市20年的變化。
【參考答案】
1. The summer breeze tuched my face gently.
2. The drizzle kissed me n my cheek gently.
3. I culd hear birds singing everywhere.
4. The church has witnessed the city's changes in the past 20 years.
第四部分 hyperble 夸張
Hyperble：It is the deliberate use f verstatement r understatement t achieve emphasis.
夸張是比喻修辭的一種，是以言過其實的說法表達強調的目的，它可以加強語拾勢，增加表達效果。
Part 1：使用數(shù)詞或量詞
1. My heart brke in abut a millin pieces.（情感描寫）我的心成了碎片。
2. She was half dead with fear.（情感描寫）她嚇得半死。
3. Thanks a millin.非常感謝你。
4. I‘ve tld yu a millin times.我都告訴你多少次了。
5. The backpack weighs a tn.背包很重。
Part 2：使用動詞
1. The yung girl brught the huse dwn with her perfmance.
這位年輕姑娘的表演博得了滿堂喝彩。
2. It made me jump ut f my skin. （情感描寫）嚇得我魂不附體。
3.I almst laughed my head ff.（情感描寫）我都快笑死了。
4. My bld frze.（情感描寫）我的血液都凝固了。
5. She cried her eyes ut. （情感描寫）她痛哭涕流。
6. It brught her heart int her muth.（情感描寫）讓她的心懸到了嗓子眼。
7. My heart sank when he left.（情感描寫）當他離開時我心都碎了。
Part 3：使用形容詞和副詞
在日常對話中，人們常用形容詞或者副詞去修飾微不足道的事情，目的就是為了渲染一種氣氛，強調某種意義的事情。
如副詞：extremely；awfully；terribly；perfectly；hrribly等等
形容詞：miserable; hrrible; splendid等等
例如： It's beautiful, heavenly beautiful.(景物描寫)
那兒很漂亮，就像天堂那般漂亮。
Part 4：使用介詞短語
1. She went hme in a fld f tears.（情感描寫）她淚如泉涌地回家去了。
類似表達：She shed flds f tears.
2. When they tld the news, I was ver the mn/ n the tp f the wrld.（情感描寫）
當他們告訴我這個消息時，我樂不可支。
3. He was bent ut f shape（情感描寫）
他非常生氣（氣到變形）
【牛刀小試1】
1.The wind whispers in the tree.
2. The nise was lud enugh t wake the dead.
3. His speech brught the huse dwn.
4. The ld Venice fell asleep again.
【參考答案】1.擬人 2. 夸張 3.夸張 4. 擬人
【牛刀小試2】
1. The sun brke thrugh the cluds and jumped ut f the sea.
2. The birds danced happily n the branch.
3. She eats like a bird.
【參考答案】1. 擬人 2. 擬人 3. 明喻
1. The lud music almst drve me up a wall.
2. The night gently lays her hand at ur feverd heads.
3. The vlcan spit ut lava frm its muth.
4. He is dying fr this pprtunity.
參考答案：1. 夸張 2. 擬人 3. 擬人 4. 夸張
Scut was as brave as a lin. Scut像獅子一樣勇敢。
請在P5找答案。
Yu are the apple f my eye. 你是我的掌上明珠。
請在P8找答案。
The sun is smiling at us. 太陽在對我們微笑。
請在P10找答案。
She cried s lng that she made a lake.
她哭了這么久，淚流如河（造出了一個湖）。
請在P13找答案。

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