專題03 讀后續(xù)寫高分技能一（讀透原文）-備戰(zhàn)2024年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分必備攻略（全國通用）課件PPT-試卷下載-教習網(wǎng)

寫作思路與步驟
Writing （續(xù)寫故事）
Plishing（潤色定稿）
讀后續(xù)寫讀什么
Writing （寫故事）
Basic infrmatin(基本信息):
wh; when; where; what; why; hw
動作，情感（感受），對話，表情，獨白，外貌，環(huán)境…
with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu), 非謂語動詞“V-ing/-ed/t d”做狀語，never, s等引導(dǎo)的倒裝句,三大從句，It形式主語句，虛擬語氣…
then, but, therefre, hwever, unfrtunately, bviusly, in fact, t his jy, next day, …
模仿原文語言風格，充分利用原文提示，回扣原文。
2021年普通高等學校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試新高考Ⅰ卷（山東考卷）第二節(jié)(滿分25 分)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther’s Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jenna fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jeff t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff’s hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear! The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.______________________________________________________________________________________________The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On Mther’s day, Jenna and Jeff planned t make breakfast fr their mther as a surprise. But during the prcess several accidents happened and the kitchen became a mess.
1 Reading fr basic infrmatin(讀取基本信息)
Paragraph1: As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.
Paragraph2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
預(yù)測：他們的父親指導(dǎo)幫助他們準備早餐
預(yù)測：母親收到孩子們的禮物早餐，非常感動。
2 Reading fr details (讀取細節(jié))
see the mess clean up the prridge fry the bread
細節(jié)描寫：動作，情感（感受），對話，表情，獨白，外貌，環(huán)境…
happy mther’s day
3 Reading fr transitinal wrds (過渡詞)
4 Reading fr sentence structures (句子結(jié)構(gòu))
Sample writing （范文）
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. “Happy Mther’s Day!” They said tgether ludly. The mther just culdn’t believe her eyes when the breakfast was served alng with a card. Deeply mved, she held them tightly and kissed them again and again. “Mum, have a taste f it” , the twins asked. The mther bit int the tast and said “ It is definitely the mst delicius breakfast I have ever had. I am s prud t be yur mther”.
Paragraph1-2: As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.Seeing the mess in the kitchen, the father was s astnished. But he smiled and cmfrted them after the twins tld him what they planned, “Dn’t wrry, I’ll help yu.” What a relief t hear that! They tk actin immediately. The twins cleaned up the spilled prridge n the stve while their father was frying the bread. Sn the breakfast was ready. The twins hugged their father excitedly fr his timely help.