招式一：精致措辭 ------ 具體替代籠統(tǒng)
技法示例：
1. 她看了一眼。
She glanced at him.
升級(jí)：She sht her a meaningful lk. 她向他意味深長(zhǎng)地看了一眼。
2. 貝利緊盯著他。
Belli lked at him clsely.
升級(jí)：Belli’s diamnd eyes lcked n t her. 貝利鉆石般的眼睛緊盯著她。
3. 我把他的名字忘記了。
I frgt his name.
升級(jí)：His name had cmpletely slipped frm my memry. 他的名字，我竟忘得一干二凈。
4. 小男孩對(duì)他媽媽說(shuō)對(duì)不起。
The little by said srry t his mther.
The little by hung his head and mumbled an aplgy t his mther. 小男孩垂著頭，咕噥著向他母親道歉。
常見(jiàn)動(dòng)詞升級(jí)示例：
“說(shuō)”：低語(yǔ)whisper / mumble / murmur，結(jié)巴：stutter，宣布annunce / declare，保證prmise / assure，建議prpse / suggest，喊叫：cry ut / shut / scream / yell / exclaim / hwl（因疼痛、憤怒、開(kāi)心等）大聲叫喊，rar咆哮，吼叫，sign嘆息 bast 自夸
“看”： catch a glance f / cast a glimpse f / stare at / gaze at / glare at / peep at / raise ne’s eyes
walk - tipte 躡手躡腳地走，slip, steal int，wind ne’s way;
“抓”：seize / grasp / grab / clutch / take hld f / catch hld f / hld n t
“跑”：rush/dash/race猛沖, 急速移動(dòng)；rise t ne’s feet站起來(lái)；spring / jump t ne’s feet 一躍而起, 跳起；slide / slip int溜進(jìn)；flee away 逃跑
“哭”：weep, sb (啜泣)
“吃”：bite (咬) chew（咀嚼) swallw (吞下)
技法體驗(yàn)：
1. Mary felt her heart race.瑪麗感到她的心跳加速。
2. A great silence surrunded them. 周圍一片寂靜。
3. He strmed ut and slammed the dr shut.他怒氣沖沖地跑了出去，把門重重地關(guān)上。
4. She chked and her eyes brimmed with tears.她喉嚨哽咽，眼里滿是淚水。
5. Abel slammed his ft n the gas and sht up nt the grass and straight tward the bttm f the tree. Able在汽油上用力踩了一下，然后飛快的踏上草坪直直地朝樹(shù)底下走去。
6. Her pulses beat fast, and the bld warmed and relaxed every inch f her bdy.她的心跳加快，熱血溫暖了身體的每個(gè)部位，使她感覺(jué)到身心完全地放松了
招式二：動(dòng)作過(guò)程：一幀變?nèi)龓?（分解---合并---美化）
Step1分解動(dòng)作Divide the actin int several steps；
Step2合并動(dòng)作Cmbine a chain f actins tgether；
Step3美化動(dòng)作Mdify and beautify the actin；
示例：
1. He jumped ff the bus, dashed int the shp, and yelled at the crwd t leave. 他跳下公共汽車，沖進(jìn)商店，大喊大叫讓人群離開(kāi)。
2. He reached deep int his pcket, pulled ut a handful f change, and held it up t the farmer. 他在兜里掏了半天，掏出一把零錢，遞給那個(gè)農(nóng)民。
3. He sprang t his feet, grabbed the bag, and rushed ut f the living rm. 他一躍而起，抓起書(shū)包，沖出起居室。
4. Mac遇到狼上車的動(dòng)作：
分解：jump ff the bicycle — dash int the back seat f the car — slam the dr — lean against the seat
合成美化：Mac jumped ff the bicycle, dashed int the back seat f the car and slammed the dr heavily, leaning against the seat, breathless.
技法示例：
1. 她抱住女兒。
She hugged her daughter.
分解：dash frward --- knee dwn --- gather
合并：She dashed frward, knelt dwn and gathered her daughter int her arms.
美化：With a giant smile n her face, she dashed frward, knelt dwn and gathered her daughter int her arms tightly.
2. 她去捉蝴蝶。
She went t catch the butterfly.
分解：creep爬, bend彎腰, cup（使成杯型）
合并：She crept alng the path, bent ver and cupped her hands arund the butterfly.
美化：She crept alng the path, bent ver swiftly and cupped her hands arund the butterfly gently. 她躡手躡腳地走著小路，迅速?gòu)澫卵?，輕輕地繞著蝴蝶。
3. 朝狼扔石塊。
分解：Pick up --- aim at --- thrw
合并：Having picked up a stne, he aimed at the wlf and threw it t the wlf.
美化：Having picked up a stne firmly, he aimed at the fierce wlf carefully and threw it straight t the wlf with all his strength.
4. 我早上匆忙去上學(xué)。
分解：Put n my cat --- grabbed my schlbag --- rushed t schl
合并：I put n my cat, grabbed my schlbag and rushed t the schl.
美化：Putting n my cat hurriedly, I grabbed my schlbag and rushed t the schl like an arrw.
5. 這個(gè)歌手在臺(tái)上唱歌。
分解：Glanced at the audience --- tk a deep breath --- began t sing
合并：The singer glanced at the audience, tk a deep breath and began t sing.
美化：Anxiusly glancing at the audience, the singer tk a deep breath and began t sing with emtin.
美化手段：
With + 情感名詞的搭配：
with delight / excitement / pleasure/ happiness / jy / satisfactin / anger / rage / patience / fear / terrr / embarrassment / pride / cautin / care / patience / certainty
② with+身體部位：
with its hungry red eyes / its sharp teeth / her shaky hand / her pale lips…
in+名詞：
in surprise / amazement / shck / srrw傷心
in a high / lw / sweet / lud / sft / weak vice 用..的嗓音
In a tne f surprise / curisity / impatience / regret /cmmand命令 用...的語(yǔ)氣
副詞 suddenly / immediately / instantly / rapidly / firmly / slwly / angrily / happily / excitedly
示例：
1. Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed t the center f an pen area, waving her yellw bluse desperately and yelling at the helicpter with excitement.
2. Sailrs came acrss pirates n an island.
--- A few days later, a passing ship came int view at sme distance. We were thrilled and dashed t the shre, waving ur arms in the air with excitement. Unfrtunately, it was a pirate ship. “Quick, back t the hut”. I yelled in terrr. We spang t ur feet and fled. But it was t late, we were sptted by the pirates.
用法體驗(yàn)：
1. 這個(gè)天真的被媽媽抱著的女孩心瘋狂地跳動(dòng)著，興奮地尖叫著，打開(kāi)她一直期待著的精致的禮盒。
With her heart beating wildly, the inncent girl, held by her mm and screaming with excitement, unwrapped her delicate gift bx which she had been lking frward t withut any hesitatin.
2. 我們車上的每個(gè)人都在一旁看著，瘋狂地笑著。Ryan掙扎著站起來(lái)，撣了撣夾克上的灰塵，走到一個(gè)空座位前。
Every ne f us n the bus lked n and laughed crazily, Ryan struggled t his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way t an empty seat.
3. She felt cld.
--- She pulled her cllar up, tightened her scarf, stuck her hands deep int her pckets and turned her face away frm the biting wind.
招式三：動(dòng)作美化：多角度攝像
技法示例：
1. 面部--- 睜大眼睛驚恐萬(wàn)分
肢體 --- 逃走
語(yǔ)言/心理 --- 大喊媽媽
Widening his eyes in extreme hrrr, Sheldn fled away, screaming, “Mm, help!”
2. 心理 --- 受老師鼓舞
肢體 --- 舉起手
語(yǔ)言 --- 小聲說(shuō)“我來(lái)”
Encuraged by the teacher's wrds, he raised his hand, whispering “I vlunteer.” 受到老師的鼓舞，他舉起手，小聲說(shuō)道： “我來(lái)” (whisper小聲說(shuō))
技法體驗(yàn)：
1. Lking straight int my eyes, Mike strke my hair, whispering,“Yu are the mst beautiful girl I've ever seen.”
2. At the sight f the sudden appearance f Ne Zha, these villagers were s scared that they shuted alud with terrr.
3. Burning with anger, he glared at me with his big frightening eyes, yelling, “Yu’re such an idit.”
4. As night was beginning t fall, Jane sat n the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and starved.
A yung man came t the plice statin, surrunded by a grup f jurnalists, declaring that he had sptted the murderer.
5. That starry night, admiring the mn rising abve the distant muntain and accmpanied by the amusing stries f naughty David, we felt we’d had the mst enjyable camping trip. 在那個(gè)繁星滿天的夜晚，我們欣賞著月亮從遠(yuǎn)處的山上升起，伴隨著頑皮的大衛(wèi)的有趣故事，我們感到我們進(jìn)行了一次最愉快的野營(yíng)旅行。
綜合體驗(yàn)：
1. In the mrning, as scheduled, 1. the twins gt up early, tipted t the kitchen and scped sme flur ut f the bag.（雙胞胎早早起床，踞著腳走進(jìn)廚房，從袋子里舀出面粉）Once they set abut making bread，they felt cnfused. At that time，2. their father slid int the kitchen，patting the twins’ shulders and cmfrting them in a sft vice，（他們的爸爸溜進(jìn)廚房，輕拍雙胞胎的肩膀，柔聲安慰道）“Dn’t quit. Yu can vercme the challenge.” The twins made the bread smthly. Then，3. they carried the breakfast，advanced upstairs and wke up their mther. （他們端著早餐，向樓上走去，喊醒他們的媽媽）.With her eyes glittering with excitement, the mther was s cntent that she gathered her children int her arms.
2. 患有腦疾的小男孩David參加越野比賽，賽前他信心動(dòng)搖想要放棄，“我“鼓勵(lì)他積極面對(duì)困難，戰(zhàn)勝自我，David接受了我的建議，盡管困難重重他依然勇敢地完成了比賽，贏得其了同學(xué)們的喝彩。(選自2022年高考全國(guó)1卷)
I watched as David mved t the starting line with the ther runners. He turned his head arund t lk at me and I signaled t him with a thumbs up, feeling prud f him. He smiled, tk a deep breath and gt ready fr the race，eyes brimming with determinatin. With a bang, every runner (跑得像箭一樣快) sht like an arrw. He ran with all his strength, in spite f his abnrmal steps. Eventually, he finished the running. As David, the last ne, made it t the finishing line, (時(shí)間像靜止了一樣) time seemed t stand still. Thunderus applause brke ut, with the name David eching again and again.

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