
你的家鄉(xiāng)每天都在發(fā)生著日新月異的變化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示,以“The Changes in My Hmetwn”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文,描述一下你家鄉(xiāng)的變化。內(nèi)容包括:
1. 過(guò)去的家鄉(xiāng)什么樣;
2. 現(xiàn)在的家鄉(xiāng)什么樣;
3. 對(duì)未來(lái)家鄉(xiāng)的期待。
要求: 1. 語(yǔ)法正確,語(yǔ)句通順;2. 詞數(shù)80左右。
[謀篇布局]理清文章要素,構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。
[遣詞造句]就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)和詞語(yǔ)完成句子。1.我的家鄉(xiāng)近幾年發(fā)生了很大的變化。My hmetwn? has changed ?a lt in recent years.2.它曾經(jīng)是一個(gè)安靜的地方。It? used t ?be a quiet place.3.環(huán)境不如以前那么好了。The envirnment is nt? as gd as ?befre.4.我希望我的家鄉(xiāng)越來(lái)越漂亮。I hpe my hmetwn will be? mre and mre ?beautiful.
has changed
mre and mre
[巧妙銜接]文章以時(shí)間為主軸,分別描寫家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去、現(xiàn)在和將來(lái)。使用表示時(shí)間的介詞短語(yǔ)或副詞,如in the past, nwadays, in the future等來(lái)銜接文章,使文章層次分明。
[連句成篇]The Changes in My HmetwnMy hmetwn has changed a lt in recent years. In the past, the air here was very fresh and the river was clean. The huses were small and ld. Peple went t wrk n ft r by bike. It used t be a quiet place.
Nwadays, things are quite different. The huses are big and bright. Many peple have their wn cars. The changes have brught yung peple a mdern life. They all feel happy. But there are fewer trees, and the envirnment is nt as gd as befre.I hpe my hmetwn will be mre and mre beautiful s that we can live a happier life in the future.
澳中友好協(xié)會(huì)準(zhǔn)備舉辦以“A Gift frm the Heart”為題的征文比賽,要求參賽者分享在一些特別的日子里用心準(zhǔn)備的禮物。
寫作要求:詞數(shù):80~120;
參考要點(diǎn):1. 介紹特別的日子;
2. 分享贈(zèng)送的禮物;3. 表述禮物的意義。
A Gift frm the Heart
? It was the last day f ne term. My classmates were very excited at the cming hliday. But my friend, Mike, lked unhappy because he failed the English test.
While thinking abut hw t cheer him up, I saw my English ntebk. Althugh it was very imprtant t me, I decided t give it t him. He lked at me in surprise. He knew hw carefully I tk the ntes. I tld him that I culd als help him learn English.
Mike has made prgress with the help f my gift, the ntebk. It’s nt expensive but it’s frm my heart. ?
一、話題分析本單元以“居住環(huán)境(Living envirnment)” 為話題, 運(yùn)用所學(xué)時(shí)態(tài)和短語(yǔ)描寫物品承載的記憶、講述周圍事物的變化以及對(duì)將來(lái)的展望。
二、素材積累(一)“描寫喜歡的物品或事物”類作文的常用詞匯: favrite thing // give // birthday // like // sweet memries // raise // as fr // in ne’s heart // g back // my childhd // have a big fight // places f interest // different kinds f
(二)“描寫喜歡的物品或事物” 類作文的常用句型: 開(kāi)頭句1. My favrite thing frm childhd is a ty bear. 2. Please allw me t intrduce my beautiful hmetwn t yu. 3. I have a lt f tys and I like the ty rabbit best f all.
中間句1. The ty bear has left me s many sweet memries. 2. It’s special t me because I used t play with it almst every day.
結(jié)尾句1. We culd nt nly make full use f ld things, but als make sme mney in this way. 2. I believe yu will fall in lve with my city and have a wnderful time.
(三) 句子升格1. I dn’t want t part with these tys. (升格為含thugh 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句) → I dn’t want t part with these tys thugh I’m getting lder.
2. I’ll keep it frever. It can remind me f my grandma. (升格為含動(dòng)詞不定式表目的的句子) → I’ll keep it frever t remind me f my grandma.
三、寫作任務(wù)你小時(shí)候最喜歡的東西是什么? 它有什么特別的地方? 它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶? 請(qǐng)寫一篇關(guān)于它的英語(yǔ)短文。不少于 80 詞。
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My favrite thing frm childhd is a ty bear. I have had it fr ten years. My mther gave it t me n my fifth birthday. It’s special t me because I used t play with it almst every day until I was ten years ld. I thught it was ne f my best friends.
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