. 應(yīng)用文寫作通知你校下周將舉行主題為太空的講座。請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)生會(huì)用英語寫一則通知,內(nèi)容包括:1. 舉辦的目的、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);2. 講座內(nèi)容;3. 講座意義。注意:1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。NOTICE                                                                                                                                                     NOTICETo encourage students to take an interest in space exploration, a lecture whose theme is space is to be held next week.As scheduled, the lecture will be held in the lecture room at three o'clock next Friday afternoon. The lecture is mainly about whether life can exist on other planets. The students will have a better understanding of space through the lecture. Everyone is welcome to attend it.Be sure to come on time. You will benefit from the lecture.The Students' Union1. 詞匯美:文章運(yùn)用了很多高級(jí)詞匯encourage, take an interest in, space exploration, schedule, have a better understanding of, attend, be sure to, on time, benefit from等。2. 句式美:句中含有whose引導(dǎo)的定語從句。As scheduledAs引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,As指代后面主句的內(nèi)容。about后接whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,用得貼切自然。你校學(xué)生會(huì)決定本周五在教學(xué)樓舉行一次應(yīng)對(duì)地震的緊急疏散演練(emergency evacuation drill),請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)生會(huì)用英語寫一則書面通知,內(nèi)容包括:1. 演練目的;2. 具體安排;3. 注意事項(xiàng)。注意:1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 80 左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。NOTICE                                                                                                                                                    【參考范文】 NOTICEIn order to get better prepared in the face of danger, the Students' Union intends to organise an emergency evacuation drill at 3 pm. this Friday in our teaching building.We will arrange many practical activities for the participants. Not only can you learn about some knowledge in case of earthquakes, but also you can get trained in first aid. Positive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and we promise you will not feel disappointed. Please join us.Don't miss the chance and be sure to be punctual for our drill.The Students' Union. 讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。One Sunday, Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine. In the early afternoon, when he was planning to go home, a fierce snowstorm swept into the area. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off the path. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost, all alone[懸念1] He didn't have food, water, a phone, or other supplies. He was getting colder by the minute.Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about all the survival shows he had watched on TV. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use.He decided to stop skiing. There was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed put. The first thing he did was to find shelter from the freezing wind and snow. If he didn't, his body temperature would get very low, which could quickly kill him.[懸念2] Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could.By that evening, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate snow and drank water from a nearby stream so that his body wouldn't lose too much water. Not knowing how much longer he could last, Nicholas did the only thing he could he huddled (蜷縮) in his cave and slept.[懸念3]注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。The next day, Nicholas went out to look for help.                                                                                                                                                    Nicholas might not have survived the snowstorm if he hadn't watched Grylls' survival show Man vs. Wild.                                                                                                                                                    一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵:Who: NicholasWhere: at Sugarloaf Mountain in MaineWhen: one SundayWhat: Nicholas was skiing and a fierce snowstorm came.How: Nicholas tried to survive the snowstorm.大意:Nicholas在滑雪時(shí)遇到了暴風(fēng)雪,被困在了雪地里,他努力保持冷靜通過在電視節(jié)目中學(xué)到的求生技巧努力讓自己保暖維持生存。二、挖掘文中懸念點(diǎn)懸念1思考:Nicholas一個(gè)人在暴風(fēng)雪中迷路,這意味著什么?懸念2思考:他能找到躲避風(fēng)雪的地方嗎?如果找不到他應(yīng)該怎么辦?懸念3思考:他到底能堅(jiān)持多久會(huì)有人發(fā)現(xiàn)他嗎?三、分析段落開頭語段首句1思考:Nicholas是否能找到人?他是否會(huì)返回避難處?他是第幾天被發(fā)現(xiàn)的?段首句2思考:Grylls的生存秀是什么節(jié)目?Grylls身處困境時(shí)會(huì)怎樣?Grylls聽到Nicholas的故事時(shí)會(huì)有何感想?通過以上思路,預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下:Paragraph 1:尋找?guī)椭?/span>原路返回雪洞再次尋找?guī)椭?/span>終于獲救Paragraph 2Grylls求生節(jié)目Grylls是如何求生的Grylls聽說Nicholas的故事之后的反應(yīng)The next day, Nicholas went out to look for help. With great efforts, he fought his way in the snow for hours but couldn't find anyone in sight. He had no choice but to follow his tracks and return to his snow cave, because without shelter, he could be frozen to death that night. On the third day, Nicholas again went out in search of help. He had walked for about two miles when a volunteer searcher spotted him. After two days stuck in the snow, Nicholas was saved. Nicholas might not have survived the snowstorm if he hadn't watched Grylls' survival show Man vs. Wild. In each programme of Man vs. Wild, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to find his way out. Whatever the situation is, Grylls will remain calm and then come up with some good ideas. That's where Nicholas learned the tips that saved his life. When Grylls himself heard about Nicholas' amazing deeds, he was super impressed that Nicholas had made it since he knew better than anyone else how hard Nicholas had to work to stay alive. 1. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動(dòng)。第一段中副詞again作狀語凸顯了Nicholas當(dāng)時(shí)處境的艱難。第二段中amazing一詞表現(xiàn)出了Nicholas求生成功令人驚訝。2. 詞匯與語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。with great efforts, fight one's way, in sight, have no choice but, in search of, spot, abandon, come up with等這些高級(jí)詞匯為續(xù)寫增色不少。After two days stuck in the snow在此處是過去分詞短語作狀語。Whatever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句。That's where Nicholas learned the tips that saved his life.一句中where引導(dǎo)表語從句that引導(dǎo)定語從句。閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。When a tornado (龍卷風(fēng)) touched down in a small town nearby, many families were left completely ruined. Afterwards all the local newspapers carried many human-interest stories featuring some of the families who suffered the hardest.One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of an entirely shattered (破碎的) mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downward. Clutching (緊握) at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear.The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member. With growing interest, I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves. I stuck the picture of the young family on our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins, Brad and Brett, and to three-year-old Meghan.We have so much. And these poor people now have nothing, I said. We'll share what we have with them. I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them on the living room floor. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods.While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favourite things. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up old toys and games.Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, much-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. She came to the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucy's flat, painted-on-face, gave her a final kiss, then laid her gently on top of the other toys.Oh, Honey, I said. You don't have to give Lucy. You love her so much.Meghan nodded seriously, eyes filled with held-back tears. “Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe she'll make that other little girl happy, too.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。The boys had watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favourite doll in the box.                                                                                                                                                                                                                              I looked at my children for a long moment.                                                                                                                                                                                                                             【參考范文】The boys had watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favourite doll in the box. Without a word, Brad rose and went to his room. He came back carrying one of his favourite action figures. He hesitated briefly, clutching the toy, then looked over at Meghan and placed it in the box next to Lucy. A slow smile spread across Brett's face. Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars. Astonished, I realised that the boys had also recognised what little Meghan's gesture meant.I looked at my children for a long moment. Swallowing back tears, I pulled all three of them into my arms. Inspired by my little ones, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week. I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. It's easy to give what we don't want any more, but harder to let go of things we cherish. However, the true spirit of giving is to give with your heart.  

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