?2022-2023年高中英語學(xué)業(yè)水平考試必備考點(diǎn)歸納與測試
（新教材北師大版）
必刷歷年開放性作文，圖文作文，其他應(yīng)用文

一、其他應(yīng)用文
1．（2022·湖南·寧鄉(xiāng)市教育研究中心高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
你是李華，你們學(xué)校在3月22日“世界水日”( World Water Day)舉辦了一些活動，號召大家節(jié)約用水。請根據(jù)下面提供的信息，給?？⑽陌鎵K投稿，介紹活動情況，并就如何在生活中節(jié)約用水提出具體建議。
Activities:
1. give a talk on water resources；
2. visit the waste water treatment plant (污水處理廠)；
3. visit the exhibition of saving water。
注意：
1. 請勿提及與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息；
2. 短文必須包括所給出的要點(diǎn)；
3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
4. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
World Water Day
On March 22nd, the World Water Day, our school organized various activities to increase awareness of the importance of water.
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2．（2022·北京·高三學(xué)業(yè)考試）
根據(jù)題目所提出的具體要求，在答題卡上寫出一篇連貫完整的短文。詞數(shù)不少于60。
假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack給你發(fā)郵件，請你給他介紹“重陽節(jié)”。請參考下列信息，給他回郵件。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
·fall on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month
·show respect for the elderly
·get together to have a big meal; send the elders gifts
·climb mountains to enjoy beautiful views
·...
Dear Jack,
Glad to know that you’re interested in the Chong Yang Festival in China. I’d like to share something about it with you.
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All the best,
Li Hua
3．（2022·云南·高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
假如你是李華，上周參加了冬季騎行活動，外國網(wǎng)友Peter對你發(fā)布在社交媒體上的照片很感興趣。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)向他介紹有關(guān)情況：
1.時間地點(diǎn)；
2.騎行過程；
3.其他。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
Dear Peter
Knowing you're interested in the photos I posted on the social media,
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I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
4．（2021·黑龍江·哈爾濱三中高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
假如你是李華，請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹一次令你難忘的探險活動，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 活動時間和地點(diǎn)；
2. 活動過程（例如：潛水、登山、徒步等等）；
3. 個人感受。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 題目已為你寫好。
題目：An Unforgettable Trip

二、圖表作文
5．（2020·湖南·高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
假定你是光明中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華，你校將在網(wǎng)上舉行“用英語講中國故事”征文大賽。請根據(jù)以下信息，用英語寫一則書面通知。
Chinese-story-writing Competition
Aims
?To improve students’ writing skills
?To promote students’ understanding of China
Participants(參加者)
All senior high school students
Requirements
?The story should be true and well-researched.
?The story should be amazing and original.
?It is required to write a Chinese story of about 300 words in English.
Prizes
Each of the top 10 students will be awarded 200 yuan worth of books.
Deadline(截止日期)
E-mail your story to gmhs 2020@126.com by July 21st.

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。NOTICE
Chinese-story-writing Competition
There is going to be an online Chinese-story-writing Competition organized by our school.
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Student Union
Guangming High School

三、開放性作文
6．（2022·黑龍江·高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
星光中學(xué)（Xing Guang High School）近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學(xué)校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 時間與地點(diǎn)：12月11日，西樵山；
2. 活動的過程；
3. 你對于這次活動的評論。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右。
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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7．（2022·山西·高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
你校校報英文欄目正在征集以“The scientist I admire most”為主題的征文比賽，請你寫一篇英語短文，介紹我國科學(xué)家袁隆平的事跡。文章內(nèi)容包括：
1.袁隆平的簡介（1930—2021；1953年畢業(yè)后一直從事雜交水稻研究）；
2.其主要成就（培育出雜交水稻，大大提高糧食產(chǎn)量，大量土地被省出來種植其他農(nóng)作物）；
3.袁隆平的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)以及對你的啟示。
參考詞匯：雜交水稻 hybrid rice??產(chǎn)量 yield
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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8．（2022·天津市民族中學(xué)高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
請以My Most Unforgettable Experience為題，寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：
（1） 上學(xué)路上，我碰到一起交通事故，送被摩托車撞傷的男孩去醫(yī)院；
（2） 經(jīng)過緊急處理，男孩恢復(fù)知覺；
（3） 聽說只受了輕微骨折，不久就能出院，我才松了口氣；
（4） 未留姓名離開，體會到“助人是快樂之本”這一諺語的真實(shí)含義。
參考詞匯：come to蘇醒；emergency treatment急救；minor bone fractures輕微骨折；feel at ease松了口氣
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9．（2022·廣西·柳州市第三中學(xué)高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
你校正在組織英語作文比賽。 請以My Favorite Teacher (我最喜愛的老師)為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.對該老師的簡單介紹(含年齡、外貌、所教學(xué)科等)；
2.喜愛該老師的理由。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，標(biāo)題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.不允許出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。
參考詞匯:風(fēng)識淵博的knowledgeable； 幽默的humorous； 友好的friendly； 耐心的patient； 關(guān)愛care about； 幫助help...with...
My Favorite Teacher
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10．（2021·天津市紅橋區(qū)教師發(fā)展中心高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
最近，李華被評為你們班的“每周之星”。請你根據(jù)他/她的事跡（在上周六下午，不顧天氣炎熱，為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝），用英語為班級板報英語角寫一篇100詞左右的短文。
1.李華的事跡及其對同學(xué)的影響；
2.你的評論。
注意：1.文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。
2．參考詞匯：singing contest歌詠比賽 costume服裝
Star Student of the Week
Li Hua has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class.
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11．（2020·貴州·高二學(xué)業(yè)考試）
你受英語社團(tuán)的委托，請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容提示，寫一則到“天頤養(yǎng)老院”看望一位抗戰(zhàn)老兵的英語口頭通知。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.時間：本周六早上8：30出發(fā)，下午4：30返回；
2.出發(fā)地點(diǎn)及交通方式：學(xué)校大門口乘巴士；
3.活動內(nèi)容：贈送鮮花和愛心卡等，幫助打掃衛(wèi)生，表演唱歌、跳舞等節(jié)目。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯與句型：
1.舉行一次有意義的活動 hold a meaningful activity
2.本周六 this Saturday
3.看望一位抗戰(zhàn)老兵 visit a veteran of the anti-Japanese war
4.去天頤養(yǎng)老院 go to Tian Yi Nursing Home
5.在學(xué)校大門口集合 meet at the school gate
6.上午8:30出發(fā) set off at 8:30 a.m.
7.乘巴士 by bus
8.下午4:30返回 come back at 4:30 p.m.
9.活動安排如下 The activity will be arranged as follows
10.贈送鮮花和愛心卡 present him with flowers and love cards
11.幫助打掃衛(wèi)生 help to do some cleaning
12.將有一些表演 There will be some performances
13.例如唱歌、跳舞 such as singing and dancing
14.對你是……的好機(jī)會 It will be a great chance for you to...
15.期待……Look forward to ...
May I have your attention,please?
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That’s all. Thank you.

參考答案：
1．World Water Day
On March 22nd, the World Water Day, our school organized various activities to increase awareness of the importance of water.
In the morning an expert from the Ministry of Water Resources gave us a talk on limited water resources in China. In the afternoon some students visited the waste water treatment plant where they learned how water was recycled. Some other students went to an exhibition on water saving devices, and they brought back good ideas and tips for saving water in daily life. For example, we had better take shorter showers and turn off the tap while brushing our teeth. It’s also best to reuse waste water from the washing machines to clean the floor.
At the end of the day, one student suggested we make every day a water saving day. All students supported it.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就學(xué)校在3月22日“世界水日”舉辦的一些號召大家節(jié)約用水的活動，給?？⑽陌鎵K投稿，介紹活動情況，并就如何在生活中節(jié)約用水提出具體建議。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
增強(qiáng)：increase → enhance
重要性：importance → significance
發(fā)表演講：give a talk → deliver a speech
好的：good → brilliant
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Some other students went to an exhibition on water saving devices, and they brought back good ideas and tips for saving water in daily life.
拓展句：Some other students went to an exhibition on water saving devices, from which they brought back good ideas and tips for saving water in daily life.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】In the afternoon some students visited the waste water treatment plant where they learned how water was recycled.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語從句）
【高分句型2】It’s also best to reuse waste water from the washing machines to clean the floor.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，不定式短語作為真正的主語）
【高分句型3】At the end of the day, one student suggested we make every day a water saving day. （省略引導(dǎo)詞的賓語從句）

2．Dear Jack,
Glad to know that you’re interested in the Chong Yang Festival in China. I’d like to share something about it with you.
The Chong Yang Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month, so it’s also called the Double Ninth Festival. It’s a time to show respect for the elderly. We usually get together to enjoy a big meal with the seniors. Sometimes we younger generations send them gifts to show our love and respect. We always climb mountains with the elders to enjoy beautiful views. Admiring flowers and reading poems together is a good way to express our good wishes for their health and happiness.
Do you have a similar festival in Britain? Looking forward to hearing from you.
All the best,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友Jack寫一封郵件，介紹“重陽節(jié)”。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
叫做：be called→be known as
尊重：respect→esteem
贈送：send→present
表達(dá)：express→convey
2.句式拓展
同義句轉(zhuǎn)換
原句：The Chong Yang Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month, so it’s also called the Double Ninth Festival.
拓展句：The Chong Yang Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month, which is also called the Double Ninth Festival.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Sometimes we younger generations send them gifts to show our love and respect. (動詞不定式作目的狀語)
[高分句型2] Admiring flowers and reading poems together is a good way to express our good wishes for their health and happiness. (動名詞短語作主語，動詞不定式作后置定語)
3．Dear Peter,
Knowing you're interested in the photos I posted on the social media, I’m writing to tell you something about the Winter Cycling activity held last week around our city.
Aiming to raise students’ awareness of sports, the activity started at the school gate and finished at the City Square, covering 20 km. All sports lovers competed fiercely as soon as the match began. Though several cyclists were tired, they still tried their best to keep up with the main team. Through one-hour cycling, all reached the finishing line safely. All the participants were excited to take part in the event, saying that they hope to join in more activities like this. Have you got similar events that you can tell me about?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外國網(wǎng)友Peter寫信介紹上周舉行的冬季騎行活動情況，包括時間地點(diǎn)、騎行過程及其他事項。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
意識：awareness→consciousness
愛好者：lover→enthusiast
一……就：as soon as→instantly
激動的：excited→thrilled
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Aiming to raise students’ awareness of sports, the activity started at the school gate and finished at the City Square, covering 20 km.
拓展句：The activity, which aimed to raise students’ awareness of sports, started at the school gate and finished at the City Square, covering 20 km.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Aiming to raise students’ awareness of sports, the activity started at the school gate and finished at the City Square, covering 20 km.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）
【高分句型2】Though several cyclists were tired, they still tried their best to keep up with the main team.（運(yùn)用了though引導(dǎo)狀語從句）
4．??????????????????????????????An Unforgettable Trip
I had always been looking forward to diving in the sea. Today I, together with my parents, went diving around the Farne islands for the first time in my life, which became the most exciting thing that I have ever done.
I preferred the scenic diving because it was less challenging and I love sea animals. With my instructor guiding, we managed to reach the spot, where we came across thousands of grey seals that live on the island all year. At first I was so scared fearing they would attack me, but the instructor told me they were harmless. One of the seals just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to hug me. The world here was so quiet as if time had stopped.
Finally, I had to leave when my instructor gestured for me to go up. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文，假如你是李華，請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹一次令你難忘的探險活動。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
和……一起：along with→together with
動物：creature→animal
遇到：meet→come across
嘗試：try to do sth.→manage to do sth.
2.句式拓展
并列句變復(fù)合句
原句：At first I was so scared fearing they would attack me, but the instructor told me they were harmless.
拓展句：Although at first I was so scared fearing they would attack me, the instructor told me they were harmless.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Today I, together with my parents, went diving around the Farne islands for the first time in my life, which became the most exciting thing that I have ever done. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2] Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience. (運(yùn)用了although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句)
5．??????????????????????????????????????????NOTICE
??????????????????????????????Chinese-story-writing Competition
There is going to be an online Chinese-story-writing Competition organized by our school.
This Chinese story writing competition whose aims are to improve students’ writing skills and promote students’ understanding of China is for all senior high school students. You should pay attention to some requirements. To begin with, the story should not only be true and well-researched, but also be amazing and original. Forthermore, it is required to write a Chinese story of about 300 words in English. Besides, each of the top 10 students will be awarded 200 yuan worth of books. If you are interested in this activity, please e-mail your story to gmhs 2020@126.com by July 21st.
Looking forward to your active participation.
Student Union
Guangming High School
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表作文。要求考生根據(jù)提供的信息為學(xué)校組織的“用英語講中國故事”征文大賽活動寫一則通知。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
競賽：competition→contest
提升：promote→advance
注意：pay attention to→take note of
新穎的：original→novel
2. 句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：You should pay attention to some requirements.
拓展句：There are some requirements you need to pay attention to.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】This Chinese story writing competition whose aims are to improve students’ writing skills and promote students’ understanding of China is for all senior high school students.(運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
【高分句型2】To begin with, the story should not only be true and well-researched, but also be amazing and original. (運(yùn)用了not only...but also...連接句子)
6． In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 11. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Xijiao Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于新聞報道。星光中學(xué)（Xing Guang High School）近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學(xué)校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
參加：take part in→participate in
出發(fā)：set out →start off
到達(dá)：reach→arrive at
令人愉快的：wonderful→cheerful
2.句式拓展
合并簡單句
原句：In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 11. Hundreds of us took part in it.
拓展句：In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 11, which hundreds of us took part in.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. （運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）
【高分句型2】Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝）
7． The scientist I admire most
Among all the scientists, I admire Yuan Longping most. Yuan Longping, who was born in 1930 and passed away in 2021, is the Father of Hybrid Rice. He had devoted all his life to the research to hybrid rice since he graduated from university in 1953.
Amazingly, he succeeded in producing a new plant that had a higher yield, thus making it possible to convert more rice felds to growing other crops. It was Yuan Longping’s hard-working spirit and perseverance that made him succeed. He is my role model and has been inspiring me to study hard and insist on my dream of making contributions to my country.
I am really proud that we have such a great scientist like Yuan Longping.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文，要求考生寫一篇英語短文，介紹我國科學(xué)家袁隆平的事跡。文章內(nèi)容包括：1.袁隆平的簡介（1930—2021；1953年畢業(yè)后一直從事雜交水稻研究）；2.其主要成就（培育出雜交水稻，大大提高糧食產(chǎn)量，大量土地被省出來種植其他農(nóng)作物）；3.袁隆平的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)以及對你的啟示。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
勤奮的：hard-working→diligent
毅力：perseverance→persistence
堅持：insist on→stick to
對……做出貢獻(xiàn)：make contributions to→contribute to
2. 句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：It was Yuan Longping’s hard-working spirit and perseverance that made him succeed.
拓展句：What made Yuan Longping succeed was his hard-working spirit and perseverance.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Yuan Longping, who was born in 1930 and passed away in 2021, is the Father of Hybrid Rice. (運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2] Amazingly, he succeeded in producing a new plant that had a higher yield, thus making it possible to convert more rice felds to growing other crops. (運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)
8．One possible version：
My Most Unforgettable Experience
One day on my way to school, I ran across a traffic accident, in which a boy was seriously injured by a motorcycle. I rushed to his rescue instinctively. I lifted him in my arms and called a taxi, which took us quickly to a nearby hospital. After emergency treatment, the boy came to. I felt at ease when I knew that he had only suffered from minor bone fractures and would recover in a couple of weeks. I left the hospital without giving my name, but my heart was full of joy and peace. Not until then did I understand the meaning of the proverb: “Helping others is the source of happiness.” This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以My Most Unforgettable Experience為題，寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：（1） 上學(xué)路上，我碰到一起交通事故，送被摩托車撞傷的男孩去醫(yī)院；（2） 經(jīng)過緊急處理，男孩恢復(fù)知覺；（3） 聽說只受了輕微骨折，不久就能出院，我才松了口氣；（4） 未留姓名離開，體會到“助人是快樂之本”這一諺語的真實(shí)含義。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
嚴(yán)重地：seriously→badly
迅速地：quickly→rapidly
高興：joy→delight
難忘的：unforgettable→memorable
2. 句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
拓展句：This may be the most unforgettable experience that happened in my life.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]One day on my way to school, I ran across a traffic accident, in which a boy was seriously injured by a motorcycle.(運(yùn)用了“介詞+which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2]I lifted him in my arms and called a taxi, which took us quickly to a nearby hospital.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
9．?????????????????????????????????My Favorite Teacher
My favorite teacher is Mr. Li teaching us math. He is a tall and handsome man aged 40. He has short hair and always wears a pair of glasses.
Mr. Li is not only knowledgeable but also humorous. He is good at making his classes very lively, which makes us all interested in math. Besides, Mr. Li is friendly and cares about us very much. Whenever we meet with difficulties, we can turn to him for help. He often helps me with my math. He is very patient when explaining the math exercises. I've made great progress with his help.
In a word, Mr. Li is the teacher I love and respect most.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以My Favorite Teacher (我最喜愛的老師)為題，寫一篇短文參賽。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
幽默的：humorous→facetious
困難：difficulty→trouble
進(jìn)步：progress→improvement
擅長：be good at=be expert in
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：My favorite teacher is Mr. Li teaching us math.
拓展句：My favorite teacher is Mr. Li who teaches us math.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]He is good at making his classes very lively, which makes us all interested in math.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）
[高分句型2]Whenever we meet with difficulties, we can turn to him for help.（運(yùn)用了whenever引導(dǎo)的讓步性狀語從句）
10．???????????????????????????Star Student of the Week
Li Hua has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class.
On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Hua went downtown, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon finding the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Li Hua is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. We should learn from her.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文。最近，李華被評為你們班的“每周之星”。請你根據(jù)他/她的事跡（在上周六下午，不顧天氣炎熱，為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝），用英語為班級板報英語角寫一篇100詞左右的短文。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
比賽：competition→contest
尋找：search for→look for
空閑時間：spare time→leisure time
盡最大努力：try one’s best→spare no effort
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
拓展句：We tried our best and won the first prize in the contest because we were deeply moved by her efforts.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon finding the right clothes. (運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)
[高分句型2] Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. (運(yùn)用了過去分詞作狀語)
11．???????? May I have our attention, please?
A meaningful activity is to be held this Saturday and we are going to Tian Yi Nursing Home to visit a veteran of the anti-Japanese war.
Anyone who is going to participate is required to meet at the school gate. The bus will set off at 8:30 a.m. and we plan to come back at 4:30 p.m. The activities will be arranged as follows.
First, we will present him with flowers and love cards. Second, we can help to do some cleaning. There will also be some performances, such as singing and dancing. It will be a great chance for you to learn something about history and appreciate what the old soldier did for us. We look forward to your attendance.
That’s all. Thank you.
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放性作文。要求考生寫一則到“天頤養(yǎng)老院”看望一位抗戰(zhàn)老兵的英語口頭通知。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
有意義的：meaningful→significant
返回：come back→return
一些：some→a few
機(jī)會：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：A meaningful activity is to be held this Saturday and we are going to Tian Yi Nursing Home to visit a veteran of the anti-Japanese war.
拓展句：A meaningful activity, in which we are going to Tian Yi Nursing Home to visit a veteran of the anti-Japanese war, is to be held this Saturday.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Anyone who is going to participate is required to meet at the school gate.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）
【高分句型2】It will be a great chance for you to learn something about history and appreciate what the old soldier did for us. （運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

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