?推薦信
1．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你班交換生Jim打算利用寒假在家鍛煉身體，發(fā)來郵件向你咨詢。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 推薦一款A(yù)PP和推薦理由；
2. 給出運(yùn)動(dòng)建議。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華, 你的英國朋友 George 要來北京，其間他想?yún)⒓又袊鴤鹘y(tǒng)文化方面的課程，來信希望你能推薦一個(gè)課程。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1.你推薦的課程；
2.該課程的內(nèi)容；
3.你推薦的理由。
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3．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你校來自英國的交換生Jim發(fā)郵件請(qǐng)你推薦一門學(xué)校特色課程：請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.你推薦的課程；
2.你的理由。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你校英國交換生Jim在給你的郵件中提到他想報(bào)名參加主題為“魅力中國”(Charming China)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻大賽，向你征求創(chuàng)意，請(qǐng)你給 Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 推薦拍攝內(nèi)容；
2. 說明推薦理由。
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100???左右；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你校外籍老師Jim計(jì)劃不久回國，他想從中國帶回一份禮物送給媽媽，寫信向你求助，請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件，向他推薦一份有中國文化特色的禮物。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 禮物名稱；
2. 推薦原因。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友 Jim 現(xiàn)住在北京城區(qū)，打算本周末到郊區(qū)游覽，請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件，為他推薦一個(gè)景點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：
1.景點(diǎn)名稱；
2.推薦理由；
3.出行方式。
注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞： scenic spot 景點(diǎn)
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack想學(xué)習(xí)中文，你推薦他去孔子學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.推薦的理由；2.相關(guān)課程，如中國歷史，傳統(tǒng)文化等。
詞數(shù)：80左右。
參考詞匯: 孔子學(xué)院Confucius Institute???中國歷史Chinese history
傳統(tǒng)文化 traditional culture?????科目subject
Dear Jack,
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Yours
LiHua
8．假設(shè)你的美國筆友Jim一直在學(xué)習(xí)中文，他想看一部中國電影，希望你能推薦一部中國影片。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．電影的背景知識(shí)，及電影的簡要情節(jié)；
2．推薦這部電影的理由。
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少子100詞；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。因?yàn)橐咔椋愕耐饨蘆im無法回國，寫信向你詢問寒假期間可以參加的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 推薦一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)；
2. 介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；
3. 提醒注意事項(xiàng)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80；
2. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華，你的英國筆友Jim要來北京學(xué)習(xí)和生活，他給你發(fā)來郵件，希望你能推薦一個(gè)生活中常用的APP請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.該APP的名稱；
2.其主要功能(至少兩個(gè))以及給你的學(xué)習(xí)或生活帶來的便利。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua












1．Dear Jim,
Knowing that you plan to exercise at home during the winter vacation, I’m writing to recommend an APP called Keep. First of all, it will provide you with courses suitable for you according to your needs. What’s more, it will urge users to complete daily exercise tasks and allow users to share their exercise status.
In addition, I’d like to give you some advice on how to exercise. You can fit exercise into our busy schedule, making it a part of your daily routine. You can also do some indoor sports, such as sit-ups and push-ups. But you should be careful not to exercise too much.
I hope my advice can help you.
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【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給交換生Jim寫一封信，給他推薦一款運(yùn)動(dòng)APP并給出運(yùn)動(dòng)建議。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
首先：First of all→firstly
提供給某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→provide sth. for sb.
此外：what’s more→besides
建議：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：But you should be careful not to exercise too much.
拓展句：But you should be careful not to exercise too much, which is harmful to your health.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you plan to exercise at home during the winter vacation, I’m writing to recommend an APP called Keep.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作Knowing的賓語）
【高分句型2】I hope my advice can help you.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作hope的賓語，省略了that）
2．Dear George,
I am delighted to hear that you want to take a course about Chinese traditional culture. I am writing to recommend one on Beijing Opera.
This course, “Introduction to Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijing next month for two weeks, contains two sections. A lecture on the history of Beijing Opera will introduce its time-honored development, including the detailed process of how it spread. What takes the course to a new height is a theater trip. Stepping into Mei Lanfang Theatre, you’ll get a taste of the performance techniques by appreciating how the voices and motions are perfectly combined on the stage.
I heartily recommend this course to you based on the following reasons. I know you love drama so much, so you will be able to more easily understand Sheng, Dan, Jing, Mo, Chou, the five main characters of Beijing Opera. It is also an interactive course, in which you will have a chance to communicate with opera performers face to face.
I hope my introduction is helpful. Please let me know if you have further questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國朋友推薦一個(gè)關(guān)于中國傳統(tǒng)文化的課程。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
高興的：delighted→glad
欣賞：appreciate→enjoy
進(jìn)入：step into→enter
喜愛：love→be fond of
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：I am writing to recommend one on Beijing Opera.
拓展句：I am writing to recommend one on Beijing Opera, which will help you understand Chinese traditional culture deeply.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to hear that you want to take a course about Chinese traditional culture.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）
【高分句型2】This course, “Introduction to Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijing next month for two weeks, contains two sections.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句）
3．Dear Jim,
How is it going? I’m writing to recommend a distinctive course to you — Chinese Kungfu.
This course is perfect for you. First, it is great for your overall health. Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible. It can also reduce your stress and keep you in a relaxed mood. What’s more, the course is interactive. During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others. I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.
Are you ready to give it a go? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向來自英因的交換生Jim發(fā)郵件推薦一門學(xué)校特色課程。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
推薦：recommend→suggest/advise
此外：besides → what’s more
包括：involve→include
合作：cooperate with→ deal with/get along well with
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others.
拓展句：When you are training, you can get positive feedback and learn how you can cooperate with others.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）
【高分句型2】 I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.（運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語從句）
4．Dear Jim,
I’m glad to know that you are going to take part in the short video contest “Charming China”, and I’d like to share some of my ideas with you.
Maybe you can make a video about the Shougang Big Air Venue, which now provides recreational activities for the public after the Winter Olympics. There you can experience driverless vehicles. Those cute autonomous cars, which integrate artificial intelligence, 5G and Beidou technologies, are used to transport visitors, sell and deliver goods and conduct security patrols. You will impress your audience by filming the vehicles rapidly and accurately reach users and destinations, saving manpower and time.
I’m sure your work will be absolutely eye-catching and prize-winning! Looking forward to your good news!
Yours,
Li Hua
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給想報(bào)名參加主題為“魅力中國”網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻大賽的英國交換生Jim，回信向他提出相關(guān)創(chuàng)意，推薦他拍攝什么東西。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
參加：take part in→participate in
想要做某事：would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
迅速地：rapidly→quickly
引人注目的：eye-catching→conspicuous
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：There you can experience driverless vehicles.
拓展句：The Shougang Big Air Venue is a place where you can experience driverless vehicles.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Maybe you can make a video about the Shougang Big Air Venue, which now provides recreational activities for the public after the Winter Olympics. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
【高分句型2】Those cute autonomous cars, which integrate artificial intelligence, 5G and Beidou technologies, are used to transport visitors, sell and deliver goods and conduct security patrols. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
5．One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you’d like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.
As is known, silk is one of China’s greatest treasures and Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication. Therefore, Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China. Besides, with strong Chinese cultural characteristics, Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age. I’m sure your mother will definitely like one.
Best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外籍老師吉姆回復(fù)郵件，向他介紹一份有中國文化特色的禮物。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
選擇：select→choose
禮物：gift→present
著名的：famous→distinguished
代表：represent→stand for
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Therefore, Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China.
拓展句：Therefore, Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts which can represent China.
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you’d like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）
【高分句型2】As is known, silk is one of China’s greatest treasures and Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）
6．One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How’re you doing? I’m very glad to hear that you’re going to visit a scenic spot in the suburb. Well, I’d like to introduce you a very famous one, the Juyongguan Great Wall, in the north west of Beijing city.
First of all, it has a long history of over 700 years. You can touch the ancient brick walls when walking around there. Besides, you can also stand high and enjoy a beautiful view of the whole scenic spot, which must be a unique experience. Above all, it’s quite convenient to be there, and you can arrive there within two hours by driving or taking bus. Anyway, it’s a great place to see. Enjoy your trip then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國好友Jim寫一封郵件，為他推薦一個(gè)景點(diǎn)。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
高興的：glad→delighted
想要做某事：would like to do sth.=want to do sth.
著名的：famous→well-known
首先：first of all=to begin with
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Well, I’d like to introduce you a very famous one, the Juyongguan Great Wall, in the north west of Beijing city.
拓展句：Well, I’d like to introduce you a very famous one, which is called the Juyongguan Great Wall, in the north west of Beijing city.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]
I’m very glad to hear that you’re going to visit a scenic spot in the suburb.（that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）
[高分句型2]
Besides, you can also stand high and enjoy a beautiful view of the whole scenic spot, which must be a unique experience.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）
7．I’m more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese.I suggest that you go to Confucius Institute which is intended for those who are non-native Chinese speakers.
Confucius Institute offers various interesting subjects including Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese calligraphy.Also, it is required to communicate with your classmates in Chinese for your fluency in using the language.Besides, teachers will introduce some Chinese festivals so that you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Hope my suggestion is helpful and attractive.
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給你想學(xué)習(xí)中文的美國朋友Jack寫封郵件，推薦他去孔子學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
高興的：happy →pleased
和：and →as well as
此外：Moreover →Also
建議：advice = suggestion
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復(fù)合句
原句：Also, it is required to communicate with your classmates in Chinese for your fluency in using the language.
拓展句：Also, you will need to communicate with your classmates in Chinese, which will ensure that you can speak Chinese fluently.
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] I suggest that you go to Confucius Institute which is intended for those who are non-native Chinese speakers.這句話運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞which和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。
[高分句型2] Besides, teachers will introduce some Chinese festivals so that you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.這句話運(yùn)用了so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句。
8．Dear Jim,
I'm more than glad to receive your e-mail saying you are interested in Chinese movies. Among all the movies I've watched, there's one that left a deep impression on me. I will introduce it to you in details, hoping you like it.
American Dreams in China, directed by Peter Chan, is based on the real story of Yu Minhong who is the founder of New Oriental School. The movie, focusing on friendship and dreams, mainly tells us the story of the three partners setting up the largest English training school in China after meeting lots of difficulties. Under the background of Chinese reform and opening up, the movie pays close attention to ordinary people's destiny and life.
The movie deals with the theme of dream in a very clever and interesting manner by combining friendship and love with efforts. The director pictures the changes in Chinese society with beautiful scenes and sentimental soundtrack.
American Dream in China conveys a message that we should stick to our dreams. I strongly recommend it for you because you can see a totally different China in it and experience how Chinese people realize their dreams. I do hope you will enjoy it.
I am looking forward to receiving your feedback and sharing more with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給美國筆友Jim寫封回信，推薦一部中國影片。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：
1．電影的背景知識(shí)，及電影的簡要情節(jié)；
2．推薦這部電影的理由。
第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
more than glad; be interested in; leave a deep impression on; introduce; in details; be based on; founder; focus on; under the background of; pay close attention to; sentimental; convey; strongly recommend; look forward to
第三步：連詞成句
1. I'm more than glad to receive your e-mail saying you are interested in Chinese movies.
2. Among all the movies I've watched, there's one that left a deep impression on me.
3. I will introduce it to you in details, hoping you like it.
4. American Dreams in China, directed by Peter Chan, is based on the real story of Yu Minhong who is the founder of New Oriental School.
5. The movie, focusing on friendship and dreams, mainly tells us the story of the three partners setting up the largest English training school in China after meeting lots of difficulties.
6. Under the background of Chinese reform and opening up, the movie pays close attention to ordinary people's destiny and life.
7. The movie deals with the theme of dream in a very clever and interesting manner by combining friendship and love with efforts.
8. The director pictures the changes in Chinese society with beautiful scenes and sentimental soundtrack.
9. American Dream in China conveys a message that we should stick to our dreams.
10. I strongly recommend it for you because you can see a totally different China in it and experience how Chinese people realize their dreams.
11. I am looking forward to receiving your feedback and sharing more with you.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then, Finally（供參考）
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition（供參考）
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句)（供參考）
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] American Dreams in China, directed by Peter Chan, is based on the real story of Yu Minhong who is the founder of New Oriental School. (運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)定語從句)
[高分句型2] I strongly recommend it for you because you can see a totally different China in it and experience how Chinese people realize their dreams. (運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)
9．Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you can’t go back home during the winter vacation. But it doesn’t matter. You can experience the relaxing and exciting life here in China.
I suggest you visit the Forbidden City. It is a must-see attraction in Beijing. There you can experience the life of the royal family and the way they celebrated the Spring Festival. In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture. Usually the Forbidden City will be more beautifully decorated during the Spring Festival with colorful lights and delicate lanterns. You can immerse yourself in the festive atmosphere. I’m sure the Forbidden City is worth a visit.
As for the preparation, you can book the ticket online in advance. Remember to wear a mask while visiting. You can also check the official website for more information.
I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. Wish you a happy holiday. (179)
Love from
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給外教Jim回封郵件，告訴他寒假期間可以參加的活動(dòng)。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：
1. 推薦一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)；
2. 介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；
3. 提醒注意事項(xiàng)。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
a must-see attraction；in addition；on display；immerse oneself in；as for；in advance； be of some help；
第三步：連詞成句
1.I’m sorry to hear that you can’t go back home during the winter vacation.
2.You can experience the relaxing and exciting life here in China.
3.I suggest you visit the Forbidden City.
4.It is a must-see attraction in Beijing.
5.There you can experience the life of the royal family and the way they celebrated the Spring Festival.
6.In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture.
7.Usually the Forbidden City will be more beautifully decorated during the Spring Festival with colorful lights and delicate lanterns.
8.You can immerse yourself in the festive atmosphere. I’m sure the Forbidden City is worth a visit.
9.As for the preparation, you can book the ticket online in advance.
10.Remember to wear a mask while visiting.
11.You can also check the official website for more information.
12.I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you.
13.If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. Wish you a happy holiday.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）（供參考）
本文使用了表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的銜接詞：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture. （which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）
[高分句型2] I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. （hope后是省略that的賓語從句）
[高分句型3] If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. （if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）
10．Dear Jim,
I'm glad to know that you will come to Beijing to study and live. Here I recommend you a common APP in our life—WeChat.
WeChat has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort. WeChat is also one of the most convenient and safest way to pay, We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. So, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.
I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友Jim寫封郵件，向他推薦一個(gè)生活中常用的APP。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：
1.該APP的名稱；
2.其主要功能(至少兩個(gè))以及給你的學(xué)習(xí)或生活帶來的便利。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
glad to; recommend; common; be part of; convenient; instantly; release; provide; heartfelt emotions; conditions; timely; one of; need to do; worry about; be of some help
第三步：連詞成句
1. I'm glad to know that you will come to Beijing to study and live.
2. Here I recommend you a common APP in our life—WeChat.
3. WeChat has become part of our life.
4. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time.
5. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress.
6. By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort.
7. WeChat is also one of the most convenient and safest way to pay.
8. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all.
9. So, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.
10. I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Besides
2.表因果關(guān)系：So
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort. (運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語)
[高分句型2] So, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. (運(yùn)用了倒裝句)

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