建議信1.假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在做關于中學生運動情況的調查,想了解你的運動情況。請你給他回復郵件,內容包括:1.你喜歡的一項運動;2.這項運動給你帶來的益處;3.關于運動的建議。注意:1.詞數100左右;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入詞數。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua2.假定你是李華,你的美國朋友Peter得知:在中國,微信成為人們的重要溝通方式。想知道你對微信的看法及你對中學生使用微信的建議。請根據下面要點用英語寫一封信,內容包括:1.微信帶來的便利;2. 微信帶來的不利之處;3. 你對中學生使用微信的建議。注意:1. 詞數100左右;2. 可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。Dear Peter,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3.假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你的英國筆友Jim在郵件中說打算寒假來中國旅游。請你給他回復郵件邀請他來北京過春節(jié),內容包括:1.春節(jié)的意義;2.春節(jié)期間的典型活動;3.在京期間的建議。Dear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4.假設你是紅星中學高二(1)班的李華,近日你的英國筆友Chris給你寫信,向你尋求漢語學習方面的建議,請給他寫一封回信,內容包括:1. 說明具體建議(至少3條);2. 表達你愿意幫助他。注意:1. 信的開頭和結尾已寫好;2. 詞數不少于60詞。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的美國朋友Chris在給你的郵件中提到他最近在準備SAT考試(美國高考),心理壓力比較大,很苦惱,希望得到你的幫助。請你給他回信,內容包括:1.安慰對方;2.分析心理壓力過大會導致的后果; 3.給出相應的建議及其理由。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的美國朋友Jim要來北京旅游,他寫信尋求你對旅游地的建議,請你給他寫封回信,內容包括:1)景點名稱;2)參觀內容;3)推薦理由。注意:1)詞數不少于50;2)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7.你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來中國旅行,有兩條線路可以選擇:長江之行或者泰山之旅。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信,內容包括:1.你建議的線路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.詞數不少于50;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。Dear Jim,   Yours,Li Hua148假定你是李華,你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老師家做客,但是她不知道中國人做客有哪些傳統(tǒng),她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,請你給她一些建議。請你依據下列要點,給她回復一封電子郵件。要點如下:1.適當地送一些禮物;2.介紹中國的餐桌禮儀。注意:1.詞數100左右。(開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數)2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。Dear Lucy,I have received your email. You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher’s home.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua9假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的美國筆友Chris在給你郵件中提到他最近在準備SAT考試(美國高考),心理壓力很大,很苦惱,希望得到你的幫助。請你給他回信,內容包括:1.安慰對方;2.分析心理壓力過大會導致的后果;3.給出相應的建議及其理由。注意:詞數不少于100。Dear Chris,_______________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10.假如你是李華, 你的加拿大朋友 Mike 在與你同一城市的國際學校讀書。你收到他的 email, 了解到他最近因為一次考試沒有考好而煩惱, 請按照以下內容給 Mike 寫一封回信。1.寬慰;2.給予改進學習的建議(查找失敗原因;向老師求助; 勞逸結合);3.邀請周末去打籃球。注意:1. 字數 100 字左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入字數。Dear Mike ,I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hoping everything will be fine with you.Yours,Li Hua             1Dear Jim,How is everything going? Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.I have benefited much from playing basketball. It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.This is my experience and understanding of sports. What about yours? So looking forward to your sharing.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文,要求考生給英國朋友Jim寫封郵件,向他介紹你的運動情況。【詳解】第一步:審題體裁:應用文時態(tài):根據提示,時態(tài)主要為一般現在時,少量現在完成時。結構:總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求:1. 介紹你喜歡的一項運動;2. 介紹這項運動給你帶來的益處;3. 提出關于運動的建議。第二步:列提綱 (重點詞組)play basketball; take part in competitions; benefit much from playing basketball; keep fit; refresh myself during the stressful school days; more courageous and persistent; the key to success; many friends with the same interest; do physical exercise            regularly第三步:連詞成句1.Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.2.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. 3.I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.4.I have benefited much from playing basketball. 5.It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. 6.In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. 7.It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.8.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.9.This is my experience and understanding of sports. 10.So looking forward to your sharing.根據提示及關鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)1.表并列補充關系:In addition 2.表因果關系:Therefore連句成文,注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。【點睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.(現在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.suggest后的賓語從句用了虛擬語氣)2Dear Peter,Wechat has become increasingly popular in recent years. To begin with, its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Besides, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Meanwhile, it is a great way of sharing information and getting like-minded people together. However, every coin has two sides and Wechat is not an exception. Firstly, excessive use of Wechat means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives. Secondly, when using Wechat, people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it, which will definitely affect their study and work. Therefore, in our daily life, we students should often take part in outdoor activities and communicate with others on our own initiative to avoid online addiction. Additionally, always be mindful of protecting your privacy when chatting with strangers online.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文,要求考生給美國朋友Peter寫封郵件,談談你對微信的看法及你對中學生使用微信的建議。【詳解】第一步:審題體裁:應用文時態(tài):根據提示,時態(tài)主要為一般現在時。結構:總分法要求:1.微信帶來的便利;2. 微信帶來的不利之處;3. 你對中學生使用微信的建議。第二步:列提綱be popular; a cheap way of communication; cut down cost; share information; less chance of; face-to-face interaction; tend to; get addicted to; affect study and work; take part in outdoor activities; avoid online addiction; be mindful of; protect privacy 第三步:連詞成句(包含關鍵句,至少3句)1. Wechat has become increasingly popular in recent years.2. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. 3. Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. 4. It is a great way of sharing information and getting like-minded people together. 5. Excessive use of Wechat means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives. 6. When using Wechat, people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it, which will definitely affect their study and work. 7. In our daily life, we students should often take part in outdoor activities and communicate with others on our own initiative to avoid online addiction. 8. Always be mindful of protecting your privacy when chatting with strangers online.根據提示及關鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步:連句成篇1.表文章結構順序:To begin with, Firstly, Secondly2.表并列補充關系: Besides, meanwhile, Moreover, Additionally3.表轉折對比關系:However, every coin has two sides and … is not an exception. 4.表因果關系:Therefore 連句成文,注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。【點睛】[高分句型1] Besides, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call.(該句使用了非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2] Secondly, when using Wechat, people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it, which will definitely affect their study and work. (該句使用了“when+doing…”時間狀語從句的省略和非限制性定語從句)3Dear Jim,I’m glad to know that you will come to China during the winter vacation. How about coming to Beijing to celebrate the Spring Festival with my family?Spring Festival is highly valued by every Chinese family. It is a great time for family reunion. We will stay together, talk about ups and downs in the whole year and welcome the new year. There are many traditional activities, such as doing a thorough cleaning to have a new look for the new year, pasting handwritten couplets and character Fu on front door to bring good luck and preparing a variety of foods, especially Jiaozi on the Eve.During your stay, the subway is convenient for you to go around. And I suggest visiting the Forbidden City and the Temple of Heaven, which will be surely filled with the festival atmosphere.I will be glad to be your guide. Wish you a nice trip.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達是一封邀請信。假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你的英國筆友Jim在郵件中說打算寒假來中國旅游,請你給他回復郵件邀請他來北京過春節(jié)。【詳解】這是一篇提綱類作文,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。動筆前,一定要認真分析要點,不能遺漏要點:1.春節(jié)的意義;2.春節(jié)期間的典型活動;3.在京期間的建議。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。根據寫作要點我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和短語及句子有:during the winter vacationcelebrate the Spring Festival,family reunion,stay togethertalk about ups and downs,traditional activitiesbring good luck,prepare a variety of foods,The subway is convenient for you to go around,visit the Forbidden City and the Temple of Heavenbe surely filled with the festival atmosphere. I will be glad to be your guide. Wish you a nice trip.可以使用的銜接詞:1.表文章結構順序:First of all,Firstly/FirstSecondly/Second… And then,Finally,In the end,At last,Above all等;2.表并列補充關系:What is more,Besides,Moreover,FurthermoreIn addition,as well asnot only…but (also)等。通過詞匯鋪墊,我們就很容易地行文了,文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯誤。【點睛】范文內容完整,要點全面,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數適當,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系。作者在范文中使用了主從復合句:I’m glad to know that you will come to China during the winter vacation. 這句話運用了that引導的賓語從句;And I suggest visiting the Forbidden City and the Temple of Heaven, which will be surely filled with the festival atmosphere.這句話運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句。使用了一些固定詞組,如: ups and downsa variety of,be filled with。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式,顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、層次分明,上下句轉換自然,為文章增色添彩。4Dear Chris,Hope this letter finds you well! Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties .It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning .With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter, my suggestions are as follows.First, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis .Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting. Last but not least,as an old saying goesthe meaning of one book will appear after you have read it many timesSo read as many Chinese books,magazines and newspapers as possiblewhich will help you to expand your vocabulary.Those are the tips on my mind now .I would always be pleased to offer you help .I do hope you will find these proposals practical.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文,要求考生寫一封書信,在信中寫明:學習漢語的具體建議(至少3條);表達愿意幫助他。【詳解】第一步:審題體裁:應用文——書信。要點:1.學習漢語的建議1)找個中國人做練習漢語的拍檔2)多看中國電影,多聽中國歌曲來提高學習漢語的興趣3)多讀中文的書、雜志和報紙,擴大詞匯量。2.如果有問題非常愿意提供幫助結構:總分總。第二步:列提綱一、框架1.信件一開始就說明寫信的原因和目的,解釋漢語確實難學的原因。2.詳細給出學習漢語的建議:1)找個中國人做練習漢語的拍檔2)多看中國電影,多聽中國歌曲來提高學習漢語的興趣3)多讀中文的書、雜志和報紙,擴大詞匯量3.在學習漢語方面愿意提供幫助。4.希望他能找到學習漢語的好方法。二、段落主題句Last time you said you had some difficulties with learning Chinese .I think it's inevitable .My suggestions are as follows.Find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis .Watch Chinese movies and listen to Chinese songs Read many Chinese books,magazines and newspapers as possible.I would always be pleased to help you .I hope you will find these proposals practical.第三步:展開用說明法將主題句展開。第四步: 潤色修改【點睛】范文格式正確,完成了試題規(guī)定的任務,覆蓋所有內容要點,應用了很多的語法結構和詞匯:賓語從句Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties .定語從句So read as many Chinese books,magazines and newspapers as possible,which will help you to expand your vocabulary.并列句It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning .非謂語動詞Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.等,這篇范文的另一亮點是:句子間的承接詞FirstBesides,Last but not least.它們的使用使整篇文章的層次分明,條理清晰,結構流暢。開頭使用Hope this letter finds you well!這樣的表述,使信件更為正式,最后表達希望的句子中用了do表強調,使希望更為真誠,文中中國諺語書讀百遍,其義自見的使用也給文章增色,完全達到了預期的寫作目的。5Dear Chris,I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test. Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build up your confidence. Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed.I believe it will all work out. Cheer up!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇考查的作文類型是建議信。【詳解】第1步:根據提示可知, 假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的美國朋友Chris在給你的郵件中提到他最近在準備SAT考試(美國高考),心理壓力比較大,很苦惱,希望得到你的幫助。請你給他回信,內容包括:1.安慰對方;2.分析心理壓力過大會導致的后果; 3.給出相應的建議及其理由。2步:根據寫作要求, 確定關鍵詞(組):under a lot of pressure(壓力很大);deal with(處理);boost energy(增加能量);build up(建立);take your mind off(轉移注意力)等。3步:根據提示及關鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句, 注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應用一般過去時和一般現在時。4步:連句成文, 注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡, 書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰, 保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點睛】[高分句型1]The reason why I’m writing to you is that I want to share some ways to deal with stress. 我給你寫信的原因是我想分享一些處理壓力的方法。運用why引導的定語從句和that引導的表語從句。[高分句型2]Not only can exercises like walking or running boost energy but also it can build up your confidence. 像步行或跑步這樣的鍛煉不僅能增加能量,還能建立你的信心。運用not only...but also...句式和倒裝句。6Dear Jim,I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing, which is an extremely smart decision. As your close friend, I’m really glad to give you some advice.I do think the Great Wall is a perfect choice. As is known to all, the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world. It was first built in the ancient dynasties and rebuilt in the modern times, since it is the pride and honor of the Chinese people.People will usually choose to visit The Badaling Great Wall in Yanqing district, in the northwest of the capital city. As it is a little far away from the city center, you may go there either by bus or take a train. Having arrived at the foot of the Great Wall, you will first of all take some photos at the large square with a symbolic monument carved with the Chinese characters for The Badaling Great Wall, very impressive. Then you may start your climbing up the Great Wall steps, which is kind of tiring and energy-consuming. However, along the way, you may enjoy the breath-taking sceneries, enormous monuments full of culture, and splendid beacon towers, which will surely fulfills your journey with unimaginable joy and excitement. Averagely, it will take you two hours to get to the top, where you will enjoy a great sense of achievement.As is said in China, he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man. The Great Wall is the treasure of our country, and one of the most important and representative sightseeing of Beijing. It is, of course, a must-see for you! You can’t miss it! Just come and enjoy yourself!Yours,Li Hua【詳解】這是美國朋友Jim要來北京旅游,他寫信尋求你對旅游地的建議,請你給他寫封回信,可以對北京的各個景點進行介紹。根據要求可知用第一人稱和一般現在時態(tài),其中重點講述對景點的介紹,并給出推薦理由。在寫作時可以使用一些高級詞匯和好的句型來增加亮點,另外因為是建議信,所以在用詞上要注意是建議性的。最后一定要進行檢查看是否有漏點或拼寫錯誤。【亮點說明】As is said in China, he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.句中,as引導非限制性定語從句,指代主句,譯為正如;定語從句who does not reach the Great Wall修飾先行詞he,he是主句的主語。7Dear Jim,I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.  That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope you’ll have a good time in China.YoursLi Hua【分析】這是一篇應用文,要求寫一封信。【詳解】首先,學生要仔細閱讀提示:你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來中國旅行,有兩條線路可以選擇:長江之行或者泰山之旅。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信,內容包括:1.你建議的線路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點。 其次,要注意提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語, 按照一定邏輯關系來寫。 最后,要根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習慣。本文是一封信,按照內容要求可以確定文章的框架結構,三段式,其中第一段寫你所建議的路線,第二部分是本文的主體,要闡述你所建議的路線的原因,好讓 他們有很好的掌握,最后一段,提出你的祝愿。寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞,同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。【點睛】本文內容齊全,結構嚴謹,層次分明,布局合理,語言精練,同時運用高級句子。表語從句的使用:That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高級詞匯的使用:highly recommended。連接副詞的合理使用:Personally,moreover。8Dear Lucy, I have received your email. You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China. Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese. Firstly, when you visit a Chinese family, you’d better bring some gifts. In China, it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand. So, you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk. What’s more, table manners are also of great importance. We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes. When at table, you should not eat first, but follow the host or the senior one. Sometimes, the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions, and you should show your appreciation. All in all, just as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.” I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher’s home. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給交流生Lucy寫郵件,就在中國家庭做客時的一些傳統(tǒng)做法,給Lucy提出一些建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累 建議:suggestion → tip買:buy → purchase美味的:delicious →delicate總而言之:all in all → in a word2.句式拓展 同義句轉換原句:What’s more, table manners are also of great importance.拓展句:Moreover, what is of great importance are table manners. 【點睛】【高分句型1In China, it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand. (it作形式主語,動詞不定式作真正的主語)【高分句型2All in all, just as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.”(運用了as引導的定語從句,when引導的時間狀語從句,as引導的方式狀語從句) 9Dear Chris,I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test. Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress. But don’t worry too much, or you may find yourself problems with sleep, appetite, or even memory. Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence. Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed. It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener; having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better.I believe it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.Yours,Li Hua【詳解】這是一篇提綱類作文。你的美國筆友由于備考壓力過大,苦惱的他希望得到你的幫助,對此,需要給他回一封信。信的稱謂已經給出,第一段首先要安慰朋友,不要讓他過于焦慮,并告訴他壓力過大導致的后果。第二段給出一些具體的減輕壓力的方法,以及這樣做的理由。最后一段是鼓勵朋友的話。文章內容要點已經給出。但考生在寫這篇文章時,要注意以下幾點:1. 這封信主要是向壓力過大的朋友提供幫助,所以以一般現在時為主。2. 要點要齊全。但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列??梢允褂眠m當的連接詞,使上下文行文流暢,銜接自然流暢。3. 注意文章的結構要清晰,細節(jié)把控要到位。給出的建議要附帶上相應的理由,否則會顯得說服力不夠,內容不夠豐滿。此外,要注意信件的寫作格式。【范文亮點】優(yōu)秀詞匯和短語:upcoming即將到來的,suffer遭受,appetite食欲,deal with處理,boost energy增強精力,build confidence建立信心,take your mind off思想放空,cheer up振奮起來優(yōu)秀句式和行文脈絡:1.Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed另外一個方法是和朋友一起享受游戲,這可以幫你減輕思想上的壓力,讓你更加放松。(運用了to do 不定式作表語,運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)2.全文運用了The first thing,Another wayalso這些連接詞使行文流暢。而且全文結構清晰,最后還寫了振奮朋友精神的話,作為一封給朋友提供幫助的信件,這些細節(jié)處理的很好。10Dear Mike,I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time .So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to .First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun.Hoping everything will be fine with you.Yours,Li Hua【導語】這是一篇應用文。文章要求考生給加拿大朋友 Mike寫一封回信, 對于他最近因為一次考試沒有考好而煩惱表示寬慰,同時給予他改進學習的建議并邀請他周末一起打籃球。【詳解】1.詞匯積累向某人求助:turn to sb. for help→ask sb. for help足夠的:adequate→enough肯定地:certainly→definitely玩的高興:have fun→have a good time2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句:So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.拓展句:So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies, which will be of great benefit to you.【點睛】[高分句型1]...you are advised to do what I will tell you to.(運用了賓語從句)[高分句型2]Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them.(運用了部分倒裝)

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