專題 09 讀后續(xù)寫之高分句型 -2023年新高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文讀后續(xù)寫高分突破+萬(wàn)能金句-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

專題 09
讀后續(xù)寫之高分句型--
新高考滿分作文讀后續(xù)寫高分突破
目錄
非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞...，主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)...
主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)
主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)...，謂語(yǔ)...， and謂語(yǔ)...
形容詞/副詞，主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)...
倒裝句
強(qiáng)調(diào)句
狀語(yǔ)從句
定語(yǔ)從句
隨堂練習(xí)
句型一非謂語(yǔ)...，主+謂...
（2023屆江蘇省南京市第一中學(xué)高三一模試題）Having finished reading this article, I was praised by Ms.
讀完文章后，MS表?yè)P(yáng)了我。
（湖北省高中名校聯(lián)盟2022-2023學(xué)年高三試題） Taking a deep breath, I pressed their drbell and the frnt dr pened.
（2022年全國(guó)新高考I卷） Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run.
口氣，我按響了門鈴然后前門打開(kāi)了。
（河北省衡水市部分學(xué)校2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期測(cè)試） Wanting t d smething fr her in return, I went t the stre with a small gift several days later and tld her hw grateful I was.
句型二主+謂...，非謂語(yǔ)/獨(dú)立主格
1.（2020年浙江卷1月讀后續(xù)寫）My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d.
我的心瘋狂的跳動(dòng)，不知道該怎么辦。
2.The girl began kicking and swinging, trying t get free f the man’s hld.
女孩開(kāi)始又踢又晃，試圖擺脫這個(gè)人的控制。
3.Her brther was lying n his back, trapped under the truck.
她哥哥仰面躺著，被困在卡車下面。
“Shut up!”James yelled ut , his vice quivering with rage.
“閉嘴！” 詹姆斯喊道，他的聲音因?yàn)閼嵟澏丁?br>(湖南省長(zhǎng)沙市雅禮中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三讀后續(xù)寫) “Ding what is right is nt always easy,” he said, handing me the phne, “I am prud f yu.”
句型三主+謂...，謂語(yǔ)...， and謂語(yǔ)...
They put n perfrmances, chatted, and then said gdbye.
他們表演，聊天，然后道別。
She stpped the truck safely utside the garage and then rushed back t the basement.
她把卡車安全地停在車庫(kù)外面，然后沖回地下室。
(2022年新高考全國(guó)I卷讀后續(xù)寫) “Gd jb, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a tthy grin and said, “That was easy!”
他吸引了我的目光，對(duì)我咧嘴一笑，說(shuō)：“這很容易！”
句型四形容詞/副詞，主+謂...
(河北省衡水市部分學(xué)校2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期測(cè)試) Thankfully, this time my husband answered my phne and came t my assistance as sn as pssible.
謝天謝地，這一次我丈夫接了我的電話并且盡快的來(lái)幫我了。
2.Eager and excited, she waved her hands, trying t attract thers’attentin.
她即熱切又興奮，揮動(dòng)雙手，想引起別人的注意。
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay dwn near a stne, missing her family.
Jane又累又害怕，躺在一塊石頭旁邊，想念著她的家人。
Immediately, abslute darkness ruled the frest.
剎那間，森林里一片漆黑。
Afraid that I might hurt the lvely small creature, I autmatically let ut a cry t stp my hrse.
我害怕會(huì)傷害到這個(gè)可愛(ài)的小家伙，于是不由自主地叫了一聲，讓我的馬停下來(lái)。
6. Speechless and happy, she held her sn tightly int her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.她高興地說(shuō)不出話來(lái)，緊緊地抱著兒子，眼里淚水涌動(dòng)。
句型五倒裝句
Nt until then did he knw what had happened.
Only then did he knw what had happened.
到那時(shí)他才知道發(fā)生了什么事。
(2022年浙江卷1月讀后續(xù)寫) I started t wait t leave immediately we arrived at the place, and s did he.
我們一到達(dá)便開(kāi)始著急離開(kāi)，他也是一樣。
句型六強(qiáng)調(diào)句
（2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫） It was nt nly the gift, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much.
并不是禮物本身，而是孩子們對(duì)她的愛(ài)讓她十分感動(dòng)。
2.( 湖北省高中名校聯(lián)盟2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期11月期中試題） It was n that night that I finally realized why my Mm always helped peple with her kind heart.
在那個(gè)夜晚我終于意識(shí)到我媽媽一直善良的在幫助人們。
3.It was at the crucial mment that an excellent idea ccurred t me.
在這個(gè)關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻，我急中生智想到了一個(gè)好主意。
句型七狀語(yǔ)從句
1.（2022年浙江卷6月）As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile.
當(dāng)他們向我這個(gè)方向時(shí)，我露出了燦爛幸福的笑容。
(江蘇省南京市第一中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期質(zhì)量檢測(cè)) When the by wke up hungry, he was amazed at the wnderful fd made by Jeff, wh was really gd at cking.
當(dāng)男孩餓著醒來(lái)時(shí)，他驚訝于杰夫做的美味實(shí)物，杰夫真的很擅長(zhǎng)做飯。
(2022年浙江卷1月讀后續(xù)寫) He was a little surprised t see me when I stepped int his ward with sme flwers and fruits.
當(dāng)看到我拿著鮮花和水果走進(jìn)病房，他有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)吃驚。
(2022年新高考全國(guó)I卷讀后續(xù)寫) As I started t shut encuragement, ther vices arund me tk up the call.
當(dāng)我開(kāi)始大聲鼓勵(lì)時(shí)，我周圍的其他人也跟著喊了起來(lái)。
(2022年浙江卷1月讀后續(xù)寫) Thugh I wanted t share my ideas with him fully, I failed t d s fr fear that I wuld hld him back.
雖然我想跟他充分地分享我的想法，但是我沒(méi)有這樣做，因?yàn)槲液ε聲?huì)阻礙他。
句型八定語(yǔ)從句
（江蘇省南京市第一中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期質(zhì)量檢測(cè)） He held David all the time, trying t give the little by sme warmth, which cnsiderably relieved David’s sadness.
他一直抱著大衛(wèi)，試圖給這個(gè)小男孩一些溫暖，這大大緩解了大衛(wèi)的悲傷。
2.（安徽省十校2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)試題） Smene surprised David with his very wn Xbx, which f curse made the by verjyed. “I was abut t cry upn seeing the gift,” said David.
有人用自己的Xbx游戲機(jī)給了大衛(wèi)一個(gè)驚喜，這當(dāng)然讓男孩欣喜若狂?！翱吹蕉Y物我都快哭出來(lái)了，”大衛(wèi)說(shuō)道。
（2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫） Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key t success.
父親幫他們調(diào)解火，這是成功的關(guān)鍵。
隨堂練習(xí)
(2023屆粵湘鄂名校聯(lián)盟高三上學(xué)期第一次聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題)
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Cdy always knew his family was different. While ther kids went t the beach fr summer vacatin, he and his mm visited the wrld’s largest basket, r the wrld’s largest baseball bat, r the wrld’s largest frk. These are real things. And Cdy’s mm had phts f them during thse trips hanging n the wall.
As a little kid, Cdy thught these vacatins were the best ever. But with time ging by, he started t feel embarrassed. When his classmates wuld ask where he’d gne fr vacatin, he’d say, “N place special.”
On a Sunday mrning, his mm said, “I was reading this article abut the wrld’s largest gathering f peple dressed as turkeys. It was in Texas, and it was nly 661 peple! Five times as many peple live in ur twn. I want t hld a similar event here arund Thanksgiving Day, which is a few weeks away.”
“Mm,” Cdy said. “N.”
“Yes!” Mm said. “I just called the newspaper. The annuncement runs tmrrw. The day after Thanksgiving, everyne will meet in the twn square — dressed as turkeys!”
A few days befre Thanksgiving, Cdy and his mm sat dwn fr dinner. Cdy set dwn his frk. “D yu have any idea what the kids at schl think abut the turkey dress-up?”
“N,” Mm said.
“Well, they have a lt t say.”
Mm lked dwn at her fingernails, then lked at Cdy. “I’m afraid it’s t late t call it ff, sweetie.”
At last, it was the day f the great turkey dress-up. But instead f buncing arund the huse as she’d been all week, Mm was sitting n the living-rm flr, shulders slumped (耷拉著). “I can’t believe the DJ is sick,” she said. “What am I ging t d? Music is what makes a festivity festive! I dn’t knw hw t wrk all this stuff.”
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Mm sighed and leaned back against the cuch.
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With the happy memries brught back by the phts n the wall, Cdy said, “I’ll d it.”
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【答案】【參考范文】
Mm sighed and leaned back against the cuch. With n music, the turkey dress-up might actually have t be canceled, which meant there wuld be n mre embarrassment. Cdy realized this was his chance. Befre his blurting ut what was in his mind, his eyes fell n the framed phts frm their vacatins ver the years which hung n the wall abve the cuch. Cdy lked at the first ne. He was abut five when they went t Kentucky t see the wrld’s largest baseball bat. His smile was almst as big as the bat while his mm’s smile was even bigger. Suddenly, Cdy changed his mind.
With the happy memries brught back by the phts n the wall, Cdy said, “I’ll d it.” “D what?” asked Mm, sitting up. “I’ll be the DJ. I can figure ut the equipment.” She gave him a big hug. “Cdy, yu’re a lifesaver!” Cdy had the music set up, and the twn square was full f peple dressed as turkeys. Cdy’s mm was decked ut in extra-lng feathers. They all appeared t be having fun. Best f all, his mm was having a blast. He realized he and his mm had always been there fr each ther, trying t make each ther smile.
【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了科迪和其媽媽的故事?？频弦恢倍贾浪募彝ヅc眾不同，一開(kāi)始他還覺(jué)得這是好事，但是他逐漸覺(jué)得很尷尬。他媽媽決定舉辦一次活動(dòng)，遇到了困難。后來(lái)他在旅游照片的啟發(fā)下，幫助媽媽解決了困難，舉辦了活動(dòng)。與其同時(shí)，他也意識(shí)到他和他媽媽一直都在身邊，努力讓彼此微笑，是最重要的事情。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“媽媽嘆了口氣，靠在沙發(fā)上?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫科迪媽媽面對(duì)此次困難做出的行動(dòng)以及科迪的反應(yīng)。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“帶著墻上的照片勾起的美好回憶，科迪說(shuō)“我會(huì)做的?！薄笨芍?，第二段可描寫科迪和其媽媽采取的措施以及活動(dòng)的舉辦情況。
2.續(xù)寫線索：科迪態(tài)度變化——媽媽計(jì)劃舉辦活動(dòng)——DJ生病——科迪受啟發(fā)——幫助媽媽
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①意識(shí)到：realize/aware f/recgnize
②改變：change /cnvert/alter
③使……回憶起：bring back /recall/recllect
情緒類
①尷尬：embarrassment /awkwardness
②積極：have fun /enjy neself/have a gd time
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] With n music, the turkey dress-up might actually have t be canceled, which meant there wuld be n mre embarrassment.（由連接詞which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）
[高分句型2] He was abut five when they went t Kentucky t see the wrld’s largest baseball bat.（由連接詞when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
[高分句型3] He realized he and his mm had always been there fr each ther, trying t make each ther smile.（由省略that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句及現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

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