熱點10 廣場舞 廣場舞無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預測話題是：廣場舞。             【預測題目】（一）你是李華,你很煩惱。最近,每天早晚,你們小區(qū)廣場上都有很多人在跳廣場舞,持續(xù)時間長且噪音大, 給你和小區(qū)里其他人帶來了很多的不便……請你給小區(qū)委員會領導寫封信, 反映現(xiàn)象及其導致的不便(要求涉及生活、學習和工作等方面)并提出合理建議。注意：1、詞數(shù) 120左右;2、短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：廣場舞 square dance 組織者 organizers____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Dear Sir,Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, the long-time dancing and the noise pollution really bring about unbearable inconveniences.We can’t rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working.Here are some suggestions to solve the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and letWould you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?Best wishes,Sincerely yours,Li Hua（二）隨著人們生活水平的提高，“廣場舞”成為一種風潮，甚至把廣場舞跳出了國門。請以廣場舞為主題，完成一篇文章。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】The popularity of square danceIn china, the woman who is more than 40 year-old is called da ma, it has to be admitted that da ma is a powerful group, they own certain money at hand, we always hear about the news about them buying house everywhere or flying to the foreign country to buy the brands. the large group now has invaded the square at night, when the night comes, several groups of da ma go to the square, playing the music and dance until 9 o’clock. about few years ago, only few women would do this, but now, as the economy develops, people live a better life, so they begin to find entertainment. da ma have made the square dance popular, when we go out at night, we may find them dance everywhere.（一）隨著人們生活水平的提高，“廣場舞大媽”們掀起了一場廣場舞熱潮，甚至把廣場舞跳出了國門。請以廣場舞為主題，完成一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：1. 描述當前廣場舞的現(xiàn)狀2. 分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因3. 陳述利弊以及表明個人態(tài)度____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】It is a common phenomenon that people,including the elderly people as well as some young people, will gather in the dancing square late in the evening due to the fact that people’s physical and mental life develop rapidly.When it comes to square dance, it is universally acknowledged that it makes a tremendous difference to people’s life. For instance, not only dancing women promote people’s relationship but also it makes contributions to people’s health. However, dancing has some disadvantages of its own despite its advantages. When dancing, the dancing women play loud music unconsciously, which gives rise to dissatisfaction.Personally speaking, I am definitely in favor of such behaviors. By the way, I do hope the dancing women can try their best to regulate the volume of music. Only in this case can we create a harmonious community together. （二）“廣場舞”square dancing作為一種集體娛樂健身的活動方式越來越受到中國大媽的追捧，但其所產(chǎn)生的噪音，或因搶占地盤所引發(fā)的矛盾也越來越多，請談一談你對“廣場舞”的看法并提出適當建議。advantage
 keep fit
 make new friends
 ...
 disadvantage
 make much noise
 fight for a dancing place
 ...
 My opinion
 
 注意：(1)短文必須涵蓋以上所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關的信息；（3）詞數(shù)：80~100。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Square DancingSquare dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Square DancingSquare dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China. Not only is it a good way of keeping fit, but also it’s a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends. No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident. However, when people in large number dance to loud music, they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear. What’s worse, some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding.In my opinion, we shouldn’t dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others’ life. Let’s dance politely and happily.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了連接詞Not only …but also、However，以及What’s worse，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。 （三）當今中國，什么活動最火？毫無疑問是廣場舞(square dancing)。對于這一社會現(xiàn)象，人們各抒己見。請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇80詞短文，談談它的優(yōu)缺點，并提出你自己的解決辦法。優(yōu)點強身健體；豐富人們的業(yè)余生活；提供認識新朋友的機會缺點噪音污染；影響他人的學習，睡覺和工作解決辦法降低音量；政府提供更多的跳舞場所These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. It’s unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China. It’s unusual to see many public places are crowded with people dancing to the music, especially in the morning and evenings.It’s true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy. It can also enrich our spare time. What’s more, it’s such a good way to communicate with each other and make new friends. However, the loud noise causes noise pollution and disturbs the people who live around the square. They can not work, study, or sleep well. So we sometimes see news about arguments of them.  In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing. In addition, our government should provide more public places for them. Then people can have fun without disturbing others.【解析】試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的?？忌趯懽髦氨匦拚J真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，要求是敘述廣場舞來反映主題，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時。但本文必須用第三人稱。再有就是應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。寫作亮點：文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如It’s true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.復合結(jié)構(gòu)等。還運用了However, So等連詞，并注意了句子的銜接，如：In my opinion, In addition,等等。 （四）近年來，廣場舞風靡全國，廣場上、公園中、小區(qū)里到處可見老年人舞動的身影。今天請同學們以"Square dancing"為題，寫一篇英語短文，談論廣場舞帶給大家的好處和煩惱。AdvantagesDisadvantagesGood for health; make friends; …Noisy; …要求:1.包含表格中的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語言通順、行文連貫、內(nèi)容充實；3.80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）Square dancingIn China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life.                                                                                                                                                                                             I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time.【參考范文】Square dancingIn China, you can see many old people dance to music in the squares or the parks. It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people's study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. I hope the dancers can choose a right place and turn down the music. Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.【解析】1. 題干解讀：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，談談關于廣場舞的問題。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，要把題目所給的提示的要點表達清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述，要注意主謂一致。2. 例文點評：文章主要分三段描述。第一段總的指出廣場舞風靡全國，第二段分別指出廣場舞的優(yōu)點和缺點，第三段提出自己的看法和意見。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容描述的比較全面，語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，語言表達通順，意思明確。3. 高分亮點：短語：public place；take exercise；What’s more；have a bad effect on；because of。句型：who引導的定語從句；that引導的賓語從句；though引導的讓步狀語從句；if引導的條件狀語從句。 It is a new way of life. But every coin has two sides.In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem.Only in this way can dancers and others have a good time. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. It’s true that dancing is a good way to help people keep healthy.These years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in China.To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit.In my opinion, the dancers should turn down their music while dancing. It is a new way of life.            （一）如今，中國掀起了廣場舞（square dancing）熱潮。對于這種現(xiàn)象，人們褒貶不一。請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，談談廣場舞的利與弊，并提出解決措施。利一種健康、省錢的活動 弊噪音污染，影響他人的工作、學習和生活解決措施降低音量；政府提供更多跳舞的空間...... 要求：1. 短文須包括所有要點，不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)：不少于 100。參考詞匯：suffer from 遭受 volume 音量Nowadays square dancing is becoming more and more popular.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have different ideas about square dancing .To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, they think it a green form of exercising to keep fit.Also, it is money-saving. However,some others think square dancing is bad for their lives. The loud music and noise make a difference to their life、study、 work .They feel uncomfortably and suffer from it .In my opinion, I think square dancing is good for people’s health, as long as the dancers show care about  others’ needs and turn down the volume. And then, our government should offer right places for square dancers to dance square dancing【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達是以“廣場舞”這一社會現(xiàn)象為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述 “廣場舞”對我們生活的正反兩方面的影響。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，最后要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中get popular with，be crowded with, to be honest，also，however, make a difference, in my opinion, care about等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密、邏輯清晰；文中還多處使用了賓語從句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學習。 （二）目前廣場舞的話題非常熱。有些人認為：廣場舞能豐富人們的生活，促進身心健康；有些人認為：廣場舞的音樂聲給周邊市民帶來了麻煩，影響了晚間休息。請選擇一個觀點結(jié)合你的經(jīng)歷簡略談談你的看法。   （注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）Suggested phrases:enrich people’s life;bring trouble____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China . Not only is it a good way of keeping fit , but also it is a good time  for the elder to walk outdoor to meet and make friends . Most dancers say that this activity makes them look younger and feel more confident . At the same time , square dancing enrich their life .However , they make so much noise that people around feel uncomfortable . What is worse , sometimes they even fight for a certain place to dance .In my opinion , we should encourage more old women to take part in this outdoor activity . Meanwhile , they aren’t supposed to dance too late or to too loud music in order not to bring trouble..【解析】這是一篇話題作文，主題是關于廣場舞，我們需要介紹不同人對廣場舞的觀點，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷談談你的看法。短文的主要內(nèi)容分為三個部分：首先介紹廣場舞以及它現(xiàn)在的流行程度；其次介紹支持廣場舞的觀點及原因以及反對廣場舞的觀點及原因；最后來發(fā)表自己的觀點。寫作時，首先要注意文章內(nèi)容的完整，需要將上面的這些內(nèi)容都用英語表達出來；其次要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的完整，最好分段來寫，觀點要明確，不能含糊。同時在文章中還需要注意恰當?shù)谋磉_，準確運用英語詞匯和語法，使用一些高級詞匯和句型，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。句子之間注意連接，使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，文章分成了四段敘述，每一段的主題都很明確，敘述也很合理，層次清晰；其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，符合英語的表達習慣，文中多使用簡單句，表達意思清楚、明了。句子之間注意了連接，如however, not only…but also, at the same time, menawhile等。文中較好的句型有Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China . 、Not only is it a good way of keeping fit , but also it is a good time  for the elder to walk outdoor to meet and make friends、At the same time , square dancing enrich their life .、However , they make so much noise that people around feel uncomfortable、Meanwhile , they aren’t supposed to dance too late or to too loud music in order not to bring trouble.等。 （三）近年來廣場舞越來越流行。在公園、小區(qū)甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人們。上周, Helping Hands Club進行了一項問卷調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇英語短文，并談一談對此事的看法。贊   成：● 是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能鍛煉身體● 可以結(jié)交有共同愛好的朋友● 人人都有權利(right)在廣場和空地等公共場所開展活動反   對：● 音樂聲音太大，影響附近居民的正常生活● 媒體報道噪音擾民引起打架傷人你的看法：● ……要求：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包含以上信息，可適當發(fā)揮。2. 自擬你對廣場舞現(xiàn)象的看法，不少于兩點。3. 文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。4. 語句通順，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】One possible version:Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way totake exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people’s study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.【解析】試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，談談關于廣場舞的問題。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意將提示的要點表達清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述，人稱問題較為復雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，如賓語從句，條件狀語從句等。注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。-【亮點說明】這篇范文中出現(xiàn)一些不錯的句式和短語，如Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years.近些年來，廣場舞越來越多的受到人們的歡迎；make a survey做了一個調(diào)查；強調(diào)句式， It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對某人來說怎么樣；In my opinion, 我的看法是；以及由if引導的條件狀語從句等。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。 （四）假如你即將在學校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要點提示如下：（1）幾個月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場舞。（2）從那時起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞。（3）現(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些鄰居有意見，認為音樂很吵，無法入睡。（5）你認為人們可以跳廣場舞，但……參考詞匯：跳廣場舞 do square dancing （對某人）有意見 have a complaint (against sb.)要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3） 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!【參考范文】Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’s more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹在學校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言的發(fā)言稿。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：she is...，some neighbors have a complaint against ...，They think that...以及But they should ...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用連詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意完整地表達提綱中所列內(nèi)容。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了發(fā)言稿的主題，要介紹自己的祖母，接下來介紹祖母現(xiàn)在和過去的比較，以及鄰居們對廣場舞的態(tài)度，最后闡述自己對人們跳廣場舞的觀點。此處be in love with, have a complaint against, a good way to do sth, keep healthy等這些詞組的運用以及 狀語從句so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.的運用也讓文章增色不少。 

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