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Summary Writing
--- Hw t write a better summary?
Writing Types
人物+時(shí)間+地點(diǎn)+事件（起因+發(fā)展+結(jié)果）
描寫(xiě)某事物的性質(zhì)功用，即“對(duì)象+性質(zhì)功用+利好”；針對(duì)某問(wèn)題提出解決方法或措施，即“問(wèn)題+解決方法”；介紹某現(xiàn)象及其原因和結(jié)果，即“現(xiàn)象+原因+結(jié)果”。
記敘文Narratin
Tell a stry
說(shuō)明文Expsitin
Merely state the facts
議論文Argumentatin
Cnvince readers that he is right
phenmennreasn resultsuggestin
Read fr the structure
Key sentences/wrds
1 Cell phnes are ne f the mst useful inventins f the last 50 years, but nt everything that is said abut them is gd. The phnes are frequently blamed fr a number f things, frm thumb injuries and headaches t huse fires. One thery even blames cell phnes fr the disappearance f bees!2 The thery is that the bees' navigatin systems are damaged by the radiatin that is given ff by cell phnes. Bees have a built-in system a little like a GPS, and this helps them find their way back t their hives. But recently, thusands f bees have failed t find their way hme. It is believed that they are dying far frm their hives.3 The prblem was first nticed by beekeepers in the U.S. and is a lt mre cmplicated than it seems at first. Did yu knw that mst f the wrld's crps are pllinated by bees? Withut bees, the crps can't cntinue t grw. Many beekeepers in the U.S. and Eurpe have reprted lsing between 50 and 70 percent f their bees. Rick Smith, a beekeeper in Arizna, says that bees are dying in numbers that "we haven't seen in the past." At ne time Smith had 8,500 hives. Nw the number has been reduced t 1,280.4 Nbdy has prven that the cell phne thery is true, but it's a fact that bees are disappearing in very large numbers. And we can't manage withut them. Einstein said that if all f ur bees disappeared, man wuld nly live fr fur mre years! The situatin needs t be evaluated by the wrld's best scientists. If the cell phne thery is crrect, we need t d smething abut it immediately, befre it's t late.
1 Cell phnes are ne f the mst useful inventins f the last 50 years, but nt everything that is said abut them is gd. The phnes are frequently blamed fr a number f things, frm thumb injuries and headaches t huse fires. One thery even blames cell phnes fr the disappearance f bees!
2 The thery is that the bees' navigatin systems are damaged by the radiatin that is given ff by cell phnes. Bees have a built-in system a little like a GPS, and this helps them find their way back t their hives. But recently, thusands f bees have failed t find their way hme. It is believed that they are dying far frm their hives.
3 The prblem was first nticed by beekeepers in the U.S. and is a lt mre cmplicated than it seems at first. Did yu knw that mst f the wrld's crps are pllinated by bees? Withut bees, the crps can't cntinue t grw. Many beekeepers in the U.S. and Eurpe have reprted lsing between 50 and 70 percent f their bees. Rick Smith, a beekeeper in Arizna, says that bees are dying in numbers that "we haven't seen in the past." At ne time Smith had 8,500 hives. Nw the number has been reduced t 1,280.
4 Nbdy has prven that the cell phne thery is true, but it's a fact that bees are disappearing in very large numbers. And we can't manage withut them. Einstein said that if all f ur bees disappeared, man wuld nly live fr fur mre years! The situatin needs t be evaluated by the wrld's best scientists. If the cell phne thery is crrect, we need t d smething abut it immediately, befre it's t late.
Ways f rewriting
（1）替換：同義詞替換；單詞替換短語(yǔ)；短語(yǔ)替換句子…… （2）轉(zhuǎn)換：詞性轉(zhuǎn)換；句式轉(zhuǎn)換；語(yǔ)態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換；主語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換……
2 The thery is that the bees' navigatin systems are damaged by the radiatin that is given ff by cell phnes…
1 …One thery even blames cell phnes fr the disappearance f bees!
Cell phnes _____________ the ____________ f bees.
Phnes ____________________ the bees’ navigatin system.
What linking wrd can be used t link them?
Think & Discuss
Versin A: Cell phnes are respnsible fr the extinctin f bees as phnes disturb their navigatin systems.
Thinking:Are the statements “the extinctin f bees ” and “phnes” accurate enugh? Why r why nt?If nt, hw t imprve them?
2 The thery is that the bees' navigatin systems are damaged by the radiatin that is given ff by cell phnes. Bees have a built-in system a little like a GPS, and this helps them find their way back t their hives. But recently, thusands f bees have failed t find their way hme. It is believed that they are dying far frm their hives.3 The prblem was first nticed by beekeepers in the U.S. and is a lt mre cmplicated than it seems at first. Did yu knw that mst f the wrld's crps are pllinated by bees? Withut bees, the crps can't cntinue t grw. Many beekeepers in the U.S. and Eurpe have reprted lsing between 50 and 70 percent f their bees. Rick Smith, a beekeeper in Arizna, says that bees are dying in numbers that "we haven't seen in the past." At ne time Smith had 8,500 hives. Nw the number has been reduced t 1,280.
Imprved versin: Cell phnes are respnsible fr the sharp decrease f bees ppulatin as the radiatin f phnes disturbs their navigatin systems.
Tip1: Details shuld be left ut, but als deserve t be read in rder t imprve yur accuracy f wrding.
Versin A: Cell phnes are respnsible fr the sharp decrease f bees ppulatin as the radiatin f phnes disturbs their navigatin systems.
Versin B: Accrding t ne thery, cell phnes are respnsible fr the sharp decrease f bees ppulatin as the radiatin f phnes is said t disturb their navigatin systems.
Other peple’s thery
The writer’s thery
Tip2: The tne f yur writing shuld be cnsistent with that f the passage, which can als imprve yur accuracy.
3 …Did yu knw that mst f the wrld's crps are pllinated by bees? Withut bees, the crps can't cntinue t grw. …
Mst f the wrld’s crps are pllinated by bees.
Thinking:Are the statements “hwever” and “crps stp grwing” accurate enugh? Why r why nt?If nt, try t imprve it.
Hwever, mst crps ________________ withut being pllinated by bees.
Versin A: Hwever, mst crps stp grwing withut being pllinated by bees.
Imprved versin: Wrse still/ Even, mst crps will be extinct withut being pllinated by bees.
Tip3: Understanding the meaning behind the wrds helps us imprve accuracy.
4 …The situatin needs t be evaluated by the wrld's best scientists. If the cell phne thery is crrect, we need t d smething abut it immediately, befre it's t late.
What linking wrds can be used t link them?
Best scientists shuld _______________________________.We_____________________________________ if the thery is true .
Best scientists shuld assess the case s that we can take immediate actins in advance if the thery is true.
Accrding t ne thery, cell phnes are respnsible fr the sharp decrease f bees ppulatin as the radiatin f phnes is said t disturb their navigatin systems. Wrse still/ Even, mst crps will be extinct withut being pllinated by bees. ________, best scientists shuld assess the case s that we can take immediate actins in advance if the thery is true.
One pssible versin
Hw t write a better summary?
Take advantage f details t imprve yur accuracy. Make sure yur tne f writing is cnsistent with that f the passage s that yur accuracy will be imprved.Try t understand the meaning behind the wrds t imprve yur accuracy.
HmewrkRewrite the passage with yur wn wrds.Please plish yur summary befre handing in.

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