歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times. As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar (吼叫),the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1： A few minutes later, the bear came back. ____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.___________________________________________________________________
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
原文出處 2009年國家地理雜志FACE TO FACE WITH POLAR BEARSOne fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside "the plar bear capital f the wrld"---the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears-like all wild animals---shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur spaghetti and garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high, wire fence. He clawed, bit, and shved the wire mesh. He std n his hind legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, banged pts, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear-he just grwled and went back t trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws. I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter, I snapped sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn't last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested l use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I crept up t ur uninvited guest and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar, the bear ran back t the lake t wash his eyes.
回答下面幾個(gè)問題，檢測一下你是否讀懂了原材料。
Q2: What were the writer and Elli ding when the bear came?
Q1: What’s the relatinship between the writer and Elli?
Q3: Why did the bear cme?
Q4: What did the writer and Elli d seeing the bear?
Q5: Hw was the bear when it ran t the lake?
Very angry.
Husband and wife.
They were cking dinner.
Because f the smell f fd.
They tried all the defense actins they knew, radied the camp fr help, and tk sme pictures f the bear.
研讀以下句子，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？
(Para 1) One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. (Para 3) … a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. (Para 6) He tld me a helicpter was n its way ...(Para 7) The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them.
They were here t take phtgraphs f plar bears.
The writer and his wife were baking bread.
A helicpter was t cme.
The bear didn’t get hurt.
閱讀完材料，試著完成下面的故事山吧！
The bear came back angry and they had t try new ideas.
The cuple went t a twn in Canada t take phts f plar bears.
A bear came unexpectedly while the cuple was cking dinner.
Frightened, the cuple tried all the means f defense they knew but nne f them wrked.
The helicpter arrived t their rescue.
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal：t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
我們有一個(gè)夢想：給北極熊拍照。
給北極熊拍照很刺激也很危險(xiǎn)，預(yù)示著侯文可能遇到危險(xiǎn)。
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
故事的開端：饑餓的北極熊被我們的食物吸引想要過來吃食物。
看到北極熊面對(duì)面， 我們害怕， 想方設(shè)法趕走他們。
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter（相遇）, I tk sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar（吼叫）, the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
驅(qū)趕北極熊的方法。最后北極熊被趕走了。
研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？
Para. 1: A few minutes later, the bear came back.
Para. 2: At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
Accrding t Para. 2, the cuple must have tried hard t keep themselves safe frm the bear; if this was the case, what did they d? What was happening when the helicpter arrived?
Did the helicpter cme t their rescue? What might happen next?
Paragraph 1 ：?A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ：?At that very mment, the helicpter arrived._______________________________________________________________________
接下來可通過場景渲染，描寫當(dāng)時(shí)令人顫栗驚恐的畫面。
如果想要進(jìn)行續(xù)寫兩段的合理銜接，第一段的結(jié)尾可描寫成“After thrughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trtted frward a few steps.”這樣可以營造出危急的場景。
“我們”看到直升機(jī)的到來，感到絕處逢生的喜悅，可以以人物心理描寫作為第二段的開頭，重點(diǎn)描寫喜極而泣的狀態(tài)，例如“My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved.”
Analysis f the beginning sentences
Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear came back.Para 2: At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
At the very mment
3. a tense situatin between us
1. ur actin and ______feelings f seeing the helicpter
1. ur respnse and ______ feelings after seeing the bear
2. the bear's actin
2. hw we escaped
3. ur final thught f the experience
A few minutes later, the bear came back. ____________________________________________________________ _____________________（這只毛茸茸的動(dòng)物對(duì)柵欄發(fā)起攻擊，柵欄立刻就豁開了一個(gè)口子。V-ing作狀語）Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. _______________________________________________________（雖然我很想用相機(jī)給不斷逼近的熊拍照，但我還是毫不猶豫地抓起面包向遠(yuǎn)處扔去。as倒裝）Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Ellie scream and shake all the time.
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. ___________________________________________________________（當(dāng)我們升入空中時(shí)，我們看見這只頑固的熊已經(jīng)向我們營地跑了回去。see…ding）When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. _______________________________________________________________ （和人一樣，北極熊也有病痛和情緒，也會(huì)感到害怕。并列謂語）Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
根據(jù)括號(hào)中的提示，補(bǔ)出范文缺失的部分，并關(guān)注哪些語言回答了“首句精研”的問題。
Paragraph 1 ：?A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
The bear’s raring sund frightened us.
We tk the chance t take phts f the bear.
The bear trtted frward a few steps
Paragraph 2 ：?At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
I was s happy t see smene cme t rescue us.
We used pepper spray t keep away with the bear.
We thrw fd t the bear.
We were rescued.
1.吼叫聲和尖叫聲打破寂靜，尖銳刺耳，久久未消。
Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.
pierced the silence
needle-like shrillness
2. 這些噪音把埃利和我嚇得臉色發(fā)白。
The?nises turned?Elli?and I pale with hrrr.
pale with hrrr
3. 我擔(dān)心那個(gè)大東西會(huì)毀掉我們的整個(gè)柵欄。
I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle?fence.
destry ur whle fence
4. 他不停地吼叫，打破了寂靜。
He rared repeatedly, and the nise shattered the silence.
He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence.
rared repeatedly
5. 埃利抓住這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)給熊拍了幾張照片。
Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures?f the bear.
seized this pprtunity
take sme pictures f the bear
6. 動(dòng)物的聲音在我們周圍回蕩。
The animal’s nises eched all arund us.
A few minutes later, the bear came back. The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time. At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time.
A few minutes later, the bear came back.
It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
2018年6月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫——邏輯連貫
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.
A few minutes later, the bear came back. The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. Obviusly, the pepper spray nly made him even mre furius. I feared the giant wuld tear dwn the fence at any minute. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear with my camera, I, withut hesitatin, grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. Hwever, in nt even a minute did the hungry animal finish the bread and cme back again, making Elli scream and shake all the time.
2020年7月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫——精彩語言
At the very mment, the helicpter arrived. It hvered ver the camp, making a deafening nise all arund us. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I, safe and sund, gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed the bear had a brken tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: Beware f a bear with a tthache.
檢測一下你對(duì)范文的亮點(diǎn)語塊掌握了嗎？
對(duì)……發(fā)動(dòng)進(jìn)攻隨時(shí)回到……拆毀在……上空盤旋安然無恙沖洗我們的照片當(dāng)心……
launch an attack n at any minute head back t tear dwn hver ver safe and sunddevelp ur picturesbeware f
閱讀下面的補(bǔ)充語料，積累一些續(xù)寫素材吧！
1. Irritated by the spray, the bear greeted us with a hwl f rage.2. Seeing the appraching bear, I threw ut the bread withut hesitatin.3. Ellie threw a bag ver the fence, which landed in a bush faraway.4. Try as we might, we culd nt get rid f the bear.5. With the bear running away, I sighed with relief.6. … t scared t mve.7. Extremely pleased and relieved, we waved …8. The animal tk a few hesitant steps back and eventually disappeared …9.The pictures, taken with difficulty and hanging n my wall, remind me f the rare encunter and narrw escape.10. The clse-ups we tk were definitely wrth the danger we experienced.
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The?nises turned?Elli?and I pale with hrrr. I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle?fence. He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence. Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures?f the bear. The animal’s nises eched all arund us. We betrayed ur feelings by huddling tgether, shivering with fear. After thrughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trtted frward a few steps.
注意環(huán)境描寫和動(dòng)作描寫。
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved. Elli used pepper?spray again t buy us enugh time. But this time the bear became mre alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity f hunger, s we thrw all the fd we have. He then turned away and started devuring. As we were climbing the rpe ladder, Elli prayed like thusand times t shw thankfulness f being?safe?and sund.

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