【范文解析】你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你建議的線路；2. 你的理由；3. 你的祝愿。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作思維模板Step 1 “五定”審題定體裁半開放式應(yīng)用文(建議信)定話題建議旅游路線定人稱第一、二人稱為主定時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時定結(jié)構(gòu)開頭：建議的路線；主體：理由；結(jié)尾：祝愿Step 2 斟詞酌句◆醒目詞匯1. 文明_________  2. 建議_________3. 很好了解_________  4. 風景_________5. 總之_________  6. 相信_________◆句式升級1. 長江是世界第三大河流，中國第一大河流，中華民族的母親河。慣用表達：Yangtze River, the mother river of Chinese civilization, is the longest river in china and the third longest river in the world.高級表達：(用主語從句和not only... but also...句型改寫上面的句子)____________________________________________________2. 我強烈建議你選這一條。從中你可以更好地了解中國和中國的歷史。慣用表達：I strongly advise you to choose this one. From it, you can have a better understanding of China and Chinese history.高級表達：(用定語從句改寫上面的句子)____________________________________________________Step 3 完美成篇：認真工整，謄寫在卷Dear Jim,I’m pleased to hear that you are going to China for a trip. In your letter, you asked for my suggestions on how to choose a better one from the two routes “Trip to the Yangtze River” and “Trip to Mount Tai”, as for which, I have the following opinions.What is well known to us is that Yangtze River is not only the longest river in China and the third longest river in the world but also the mother river of Chinese civilization. Therefore, I strongly recommend that you choose this one, from which you can have a better understanding of China and Chinese history. In addition, the scenery along the river is amazing, which can make you have an unforgettable moment after your visit. Thus, I’m sure you are eager to come here to make a second trip.In conclusion, I am convinced that the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice. Wish you would enjoy yourself in China. Yours,Li Hua【答案】醒目詞匯：1. civilization  2. recommend3. have a better understanding of  4. scenery5. in conclusion  6. be convinced that 句式升級：1. What is well known to us is that Yangtze River is not only the longest river in China and the third longest river in the world but also the mother river of Chinese civilization.2. I strongly recommend that you choose this one,  from which you can have a better understanding of China and Chinese history.【寫作模板】?建議信模板與套用句式Dear _________,I’m sorry/glad to hear that you _________(事由). In your letter, you said that _________(問題信息). My suggestions are as follows.Firstly, _________ because _________. Secondly, you should _________, for _________. Thirdly, you’d better _________.Only in this way can you _________. What’s more, _________. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.Best wishes.Yours truly,Li Hua?申請信模板與套用句式Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, an outgoing boy _________. I’m writing to apply for the position that you are advertising.For one thing, I _________(優(yōu)勢一). For another, I _________(優(yōu)勢二). My ability to _________(優(yōu)勢三) is out of question. If I’m lucky enough to have the opportunity to work in your _________(對方單位), I would _________(表達決心).Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Li Hua?告知信模板與套用句式Dear _________,Glad that you’ve heard of the good news about the coming _________. I’m writing to inform you of the details.As scheduled, the _________(活動或項目) will take place at _________(地點)on_________(時間). You are expected to _________(具體要求或期望). Besides, attentions should be paid to _________. Hopefully you will be well prepared for it and enjoy yourself/have a good time.If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to ask me.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【模擬演練】1假設(shè)你是高中生李華，欲給你在英國的朋友Peter提如何學(xué)習中文的建議。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一封建議信。信件包括以下要點：1. 寫信目的；2. 給出建議（至少兩條）；3. 表示祝愿。可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。詞數(shù)：100-120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Peter,Learning you have a passion for Chinese learning, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions on how to promote your proficiency in Chinese.Firstly, Chinese classical literature works are highly recommended, through which you will undoubtedly acquire a glimpse of/get a deeper insight into Chinese traditions and cultures. Besides, TV programs and newspaper concerning China are also advisable, helping you have a better understanding of China’s true image. Lastly, engaging with your Chinese friends always serves the purpose to enhance your fluency in oral Chinese.Sincerely hope my suggestions are workable to you and I wish you could make great progress.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給在英國的朋友Peter提如何學(xué)習中文的建議。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1. 寫信目的；2. 給出建議（至少兩條）；3. 表示祝愿。第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）offer you some practical suggestions;a glimpse of; have a better understanding of ; to enhance your fluency in oral Chinese;make great progress; have a passion for第三步：連詞成句1.Learning you have a passion for Chinese learning, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions on how to promote your proficiency in Chinese.2. Firstly, Chinese classical literature works are highly recommended, through which you will undoubtedly acquire a glimpse of/get a deeper insight into Chinese traditions and cultures.3. Besides, TV programs and newspaper concerning China are also advisable, helping you have a better understanding of China’s true image.4.Lastly, engaging with your Chinese friends always serves the purpose to enhance your fluency in oral Chinese.5.Sincerely hope my suggestions are workable to you and I wish you could make great progress.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstly, Besides, Lastly連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【范文點評】[高分句型1]Learning you have a passion for Chinese learning, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions on how to promote your proficiency in Chinese.（分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]Firstly, Chinese classical literature works are highly recommended, through which you will undoubtedly acquire a glimpse of/get a deeper insight into Chinese traditions and cultures.（介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型3]Sincerely hope my suggestions are workable to you and I wish you could make great progress.（and連接的并列句）2假定你是李華，新落成的外文書店為增加訪客量現(xiàn)向市民征求建議，請給書店經(jīng)理Mr. Bowie寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 擁有寬敞的空間以提供良好的閱讀體驗；2. 提供公益講座（public lecture）等服務(wù)；3. 其他建議（至少一條）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Mr. Bowie,I know that new-built Foreign Language Bookstores are now seeking advice from the public to increase the number of visitors. As a book fan, I would like to offer some advice.First, the book store should have enough space to provide good reading experience for our readers. Second, public lectures should be included in the activities to raise the readers’ interest. Third, the book store can donate some books to the poor students so as to attract them to the book store.Hopefully, the book store will be the one where we can enrich our knowledge and relax.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本題考查的作文類型是建議信。題目要求假定你是李華，新落成的外文書店為增加訪客量現(xiàn)向市民征求建議，請給書店經(jīng)理Mr． Bowie 寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 擁有寬敞的空間以提供良好的閱讀體驗；2. 提供公益講座（public lecture）等服務(wù)；3. 其他建議（至少一條）。解析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時進行寫作。要點已經(jīng)給出，要求考生根據(jù)提綱自己發(fā)揮拓展，考生要先想好寫哪幾點，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。[高分句型1]I think that it is necessary to offer good reading experience to our readers, which makes them comfortable. 我認為有必要為我們的讀者提供良好的閱讀體驗，這會他們感到舒服。that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和it作形式主語。[高分句型2]Only in this way mentioned above the book store will be the place where we can enrich our knowledge and relax ourselves.只有這樣，書店才是我們豐富知識、放松身心的地方。部分倒裝和where引導(dǎo)的定語從句。3假如你叫李華，今年暑假一家外企要招聘兼職英語翻譯，你想申請這個職位。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一封英文申請信。要點如下：1. 英語水平；2. 工作經(jīng)歷；3. 與人交往的能力；注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：申請apply for  申請書applicationDear Sir or Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir or madam,I know that your company is looking for a part-time English translator in the summer vacation. I’d like to apply for the job. First, having learned English for seven years or so, I am able to express myself freely. Second, my previous working experience as a translator makes me convinced that I can well manage the job this time. What’s more, as an outgoing person, I am always ready to make friends with many kinds of people from all walks of life.I am eager for the job to be offered by your company and I am sure that I will satisfy all your requirements. Thanks for your reading my application and I’m looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封申請信。首先，本文要求寫一封申請信，因此時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主，人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱為主；其次，要點主要包括介紹自己的英語水平、談?wù)劰ぷ鹘?jīng)歷以及本人的交際能力，寫作時應(yīng)注意適當?shù)赝卣?，盡量使用一些高級詞匯和句式；最后，要注意語句的連貫。【范文點評】本文較好地完成了寫作任務(wù)，段落清晰、要點全面、語言規(guī)范。此外文章亮點紛呈、可讀性強，如：1. 文中使用了一些高級詞匯express，convinced，apply for，all walks of life，satisfy all your requirements，look forward to，application等；2. 文中使用了動詞-ing形式作狀語having learned English for seven years or so，動詞不定式短語作定語to be offered by your company等；3. 文中使用了高級句式I am sure that等；4. 文中恰到好處地使用了過渡詞，使得文章語句跡貫，如first，second，what’s more等。4假如你是李華，南昌二中的一名學(xué)生，得知可向國際兒童基金會（Foundation）申請一個經(jīng)費為2000元的扶貧項目（poverty-relief program），幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。你感興趣，準備申請。請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇文章。1）個人的基本情況和申請理由；2）你對申請項目的具體設(shè)想和項目經(jīng)費的使用計劃；3）你的愿望。聯(lián)系方式：2016hope@ief.org注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好。Dear Sir or Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua, a student currently studying at Nanchang No.2 Middle School. I am writing to apply for the 2000 yuan’s worth of fund aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean ignoring our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions. Our efforts might make a difference in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world?We would be grateful if you could reply at your earliest convenience. You could contact me at 2016hope@icf.org.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】該文體屬于書信作文。首先明確的是一封申請信，所以在措辭時應(yīng)該保持尊敬，謙和地語氣，切記語氣生硬，這時在商務(wù)交流時需切記的一點。其次囊括文本所要求的三個方面，但不代表不可以發(fā)揮自己的想法，總歸來看文章還是有自己的發(fā)揮之處：經(jīng)費的具體設(shè)想和使用方法，本方面需要考生能夠結(jié)合實際情況給出具體的可行操作方案，考查學(xué)生的思辨能力和跨文化交際能力。在過渡時，用詞能夠銜接自然。最后要注明自己的聯(lián)系方式已確保收到回信。【范文亮點】a student currently studying at Nanchang No.2 Middle School使用了同位語從句，students who are financially disadvantaged.使用了定語從句等，這些都豐富了整篇的句式多樣化；apply for，On this account，make a difference等使用了固定搭配短語。We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area.這里明確點出了基金的具體用途，避免了空話現(xiàn)象。5假定你是李華，由于新冠病毒（COVID-19）爆發(fā)，你校決定推遲開學(xué)，請你給回國度假的留學(xué)生Jack寫封郵件，告知此事。內(nèi)容包括：1. 告知推遲開學(xué)；2. 介紹疫情；3. 開學(xué)日期另行通知。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Jack,I am so sorry to inform you that we’ll have to postpone the start of school this term due to the outbreak of COVID-19 during this winter vacation.You must have known that COVID-19 is spreading all over the world, and that the situation is very bad. Many people have been infected and died. It is generally accepted that the best way to avoid being infected is not to gather and stay at home. So in order to defeat this infectious disease, we’ve decided to delay the start of school. The school will not begin until the outbreak is over. The specific time will be announced later.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給留學(xué)生Jack寫信，告知他因為疫情爆發(fā)學(xué)校推遲開學(xué)的決定，以及后續(xù)安排。并給他介紹疫情。體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總 要求：1. 告知推遲開學(xué)；2. 介紹疫情；3. 開學(xué)日期另行通知。第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）inform sb. of sth./ postpone/ outbreak/ due to/ spread/ infect/ avoid doing sth./ gather/ decide to do sth./ delay to do sth.第三步：連詞成句1. I am so sorry to inform you that due to the outbreak of COVID-19 during this winter vacation the start of this term has to be postponed. 2. You must have known that COVID-19 is spreading all over the world, and that the situation is very bad. 3. Unfortunately, many people have been infected and died. 4. It is generally acknowledged that the best way to avoid being infected is not gathering but staying at home. 5. So in order to defeat this infectious disease, we've decided to delay the start of school. 6. The school will not begin until the outbreak is over. 7. The specific time will be announced online later.第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…定語從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）【范文點評】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，例如：I am so sorry to inform you that we'll have to postpone the start of school this term due to the outbreak of COVID-19 during this winter vacation.中that引導(dǎo)賓語從句；It is generally accepted that the best way to avoid being infected is not to gather and stay at home. 中that引導(dǎo)主語從句。6假定你是李華，為方便學(xué)生為偏遠山區(qū)學(xué)校捐贈舊書、雜志等，校學(xué)生會決定設(shè)置舊書回收角。請你寫一封信給生病休假的留學(xué)生Tom告知此事，內(nèi)容包括：1. 詢問近況；2. 告知返校后捐贈書籍；3. 祝愿早日康復(fù)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。Dear Tom,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Tom,How are you doing these days? Do you feel a bit better? I miss you very much. I have some good news to tell you.A recycling corner for old books will be set in our school next week. If students have old books, newspapers and magazines they don’t want to read, they can donate them to it. All the collected books and magazines will be given away to the remote poor mountain schools. Remember to bring some old books when you return to school. We can do our part to help those kids in need.Wish you get well soon. Looking forward to your early return to school.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文。第一步：明確要求。假定你是李華，為方便學(xué)生為偏遠山區(qū)學(xué)校捐贈舊書、雜志等，校學(xué)生會決定設(shè)置舊書回收角。請你寫一封信給生病休假的留學(xué)生Tom告知此事，內(nèi)容包括：1. 詢問近況；2. 告知返校后捐贈書籍；3. 祝愿早日康復(fù)。第二步：列關(guān)鍵詞。如：donate … to，give away，remember to do，do one’s part to do，in need，look forward to等。三步：連詞成句。根據(jù)列出的關(guān)鍵詞造句，注意主謂一致，時態(tài)語態(tài)等語法。第四步：連句成文。注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡。書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【范文點評】此范文表達流暢，語言優(yōu)美，內(nèi)容全面，符合題目要求。其中值得學(xué)習的句型有：定語從句和條件狀語從句：If students have old books, newspapers and magazines they don’t want to read, they can donate them to it.時間狀語從句：Remember to bring some old books when you return to school.
 

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這是一份(新高考)高考英語二輪復(fù)習課時精煉考向49 應(yīng)用文寫作之申請信和告知信(2份打包，解析版+原卷版)，文件包含新高考高考英語二輪復(fù)習課時精煉考向49應(yīng)用文寫作之申請信和告知信解析版doc、新高考高考英語二輪復(fù)習課時精煉考向49應(yīng)用文寫作之申請信和告知信原卷版doc等2份試卷配套教學(xué)資源，其中試卷共20頁， 歡迎下載使用。

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