專(zhuān)題22 書(shū)面表達(dá) 三年高考（2019-2021）英語(yǔ)試題分項(xiàng)匯編-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

?三年（2019-2021）高考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編
專(zhuān)題22 書(shū)面表達(dá)提綱式
一、2021年高考真題
1.【2021年6月新高考卷】
你校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年, 請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿, 內(nèi)容包括：
1. 讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；
2. 喜愛(ài)的欄目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Youth and Me
Dear editor,
As the 10th?anniversary ceremony of YOUTH is drawing near, I am writing to take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt congratulations.
Ever since I was young, my parents exposed me to various magazines, but YOUTH was my favorite which has gained high praise from many students including me, a regular reader. Not only does it supply me with a platform to broaden my horizon, but its rich content can also spark my burning passion for English. I am fond of all its columns, but what I enjoy most about the paper is its language and writing style, which contributes greatly to my progress in writing.
I have thousands of blessings and I keenly wish YOUTH could achieve greater success and gain more popularity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，向?？痀outh表達(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福。
1．詞匯積累
建立：found→establish
沮喪的：upset→depressed
得到：receive→obtain
賞析：enjoy→appreciate
2．句式拓展
同義句改寫(xiě)
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.

【讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)】
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.?????

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.??????

答案
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.?One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made some French toast and chicken porridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed for their parents'?bedroom.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.?"Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy!" ?thrilled voice yelling from their throat, the twins hugged their mom tightly. Moved and excited, mother held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to snore. He whistled in astonishment when seeing the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said she had never??tasted a better one. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly.

2.【2021年全國(guó)甲卷】
假定你是李華，你校計(jì)劃舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì)，并在英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站上展示，請(qǐng)你給外國(guó)朋友Chris寫(xiě)封信，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)朋友，內(nèi)容如下：
1. 闡明寫(xiě)信事由；
2. 征求建議；
3. 表達(dá)感謝。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
Hope everything goes well with you! In a bit to foreign students'?richer insight into Chinese culture, a class meeting themed introducing Chinese traditional culture to foreign friends will be launched in our school. I'm writing to ask for your suggestions on the topic.
Since every process and detail is to be posted on an English website that has numerous foreign visitors, I feel at a loss which aspects of our culture fascinates foreign readers. Currently, we have been considering a wide range of choices ranging from local cuisine and ancient costumes to festival traditions and folk music, but we haven't reached any agreement yet. So, I am urgently in need of your suggestion. If you can furnish me with more information, just feel free to inform me.
Your prompt response will be much appreciated. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

3.【2021年全國(guó)乙卷】
你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你以 Be smart online learner 寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿參賽,
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 分析優(yōu)勢(shì)及不足；
2. 提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。

注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2. 題目和首句以為你寫(xiě)好。
Be smart online learners
Just like the old saying goes, "each coin has two sides." On the one hand, providing an easy access to plenty of excellent learning sources, online learning is really a helping hand. On the other hand, what we learn online isn't necessarily what we need, not to mention its constant damage to our eyes.
For me, online learning is, after all, just a tool. It's not the new method itself but the person who use it that really matters. To become a smart online learner, not only should we carefully choose from countless alternatives we may face, but extra attention needs to be attached when we take lessons online. What's more, on condition that we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online learning would be more meaningful.
Thanks, everyone. Hope we all could be smart online learners.
【解析】
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是演講稿，一種常見(jiàn)的應(yīng)用文，與去年英語(yǔ)作文比賽稍有差別。英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)近幾年來(lái)穩(wěn)中求變，在測(cè)試考生的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力，看其是否能夠運(yùn)用學(xué)過(guò)的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)和掌握的技能，進(jìn)行思想交流的同時(shí)，注重文體變化，突出實(shí)用性，更考查學(xué)生能否利用所學(xué)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)、文化知識(shí)等，根據(jù)不同目的和受眾，通過(guò)書(shū)面形式創(chuàng)新語(yǔ)篇。
【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫。復(fù)合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的高端句式，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：providing an easy access to plenty of excellent learning sources, online learning is really a helping hand.；名詞性從句：what we learn online isn't necessarily what we need, not to mention its constant damage to our eyes. 倒裝：To become a smart online learner, not only should we carefully choose from countless alternatives we may face, but extra attention needs to be attached when we take lessons online.；狀語(yǔ)從句：on condition that we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online learning would be more meaningful.等。文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色。

4.【2021年6月北京卷】
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國(guó)好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表達(dá)歉意并說(shuō)明原因；
2. 提出建議并給出理由。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

【參考范文】
Dear Jim,
How are you these days? We have planned to hang around together this weekend, and how much I am expecting that! To my pity, I was informed to attend the nursery house with the Student Union this morning. Since this weekend is the Double Ninth Day, a traditional day celebrated for the senior in China, our school has launched this activity to show our concern and responsibility for the old, which is a meaningful and instructive activity for us teenagers. I am really sorry and how about going out together next weekend, and as a compensation, I would like to teat you a big meal and invite you to visit local museum. If the time is not convenient for you, you can set anytime next week. Please accept my sincere apology for that.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua

5.【2021年6月浙江卷】
? 昨天你去學(xué)校參觀了中國(guó)畫(huà)的展覽，請(qǐng)你為學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇宣傳稿：
? ? ? 1. 時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；
? ? ? 2. 你的感受；? ?
? ? ? 3. 強(qiáng)烈推薦。
注意：
? ? ? 1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
? ? ? 2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【參考范文】
Dear editor,
In order to better experience traditional Chinese culture, the Students’ Union of our school organized a meaningful activity to visit an Chinese painting exhibition in the school hall last weekend.
In the activity, the guide enthusiastically explained each piece in detail and introduced to us the Chinese famous painters we admire most, such as Xu Beihong, Qi Baishi and so on. By participating in the well-organized activities, I’ve benefited a great deal from them. Not only can I cultivate my patience and imagination, but also I can get easier access to our excellent history and culture, which can enrich my mind.
To be honest, it will be a good chance for you to learn about traditional Chinese culture. I strongly appeal to all the students in our school to make use of their spare time to taste these wonderful works carefully!
Yours
Li Hua
【點(diǎn)睛】高級(jí)語(yǔ)塊：better experience；meaningful；enthusiastically；piece；in detail； participating in；benefited a great deal from； access to； enrich；To be honest；strongly appeal to；taste等。高級(jí)句型：In order to，such as；and so on；which；Not only … but also …等。這篇參考范文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、層次清晰：首先告知活動(dòng)的人物、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的，其次簡(jiǎn)要地回順了自己昨天觀看學(xué)生國(guó)畫(huà)作品展的過(guò)程，最后寫(xiě)自己的感受和推薦觀展；多用高級(jí)詞匯、句型使得本范文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、行文流暢。

6.【2021年1月浙江卷】
假定你是李華，下周有新西蘭學(xué)生訪問(wèn)你校，你將作為學(xué)生代表致歡迎辭。請(qǐng)為此寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示歡迎；
2. 介紹活動(dòng)安排；
3. 表達(dá)祝愿。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)為80左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear guests/friends from New Zealand,
On behalf of our school, I feel greatly honored to express our warmest welcome to you. To help you better understand Chinese culture, we've arranged some activities for you.
First comes the practice of Chinese calligraphy in the school hall between 9：00 and 10：00. You will learn to write your Chinese names with a brush. Then it is time for folk dance in the dancing room for about an hour. After the lunch break, you will be guided to the playground, where you will practice Chinese martial arts, which are good for your health.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us and hope your trip in China will turn out a most unforgettable experience in life. Thank you!

解析
寫(xiě)作思路：文章是要你作為學(xué)生代表寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎辭。首先需要表示歡迎，接下來(lái)介紹活動(dòng)安排，最后表達(dá)祝愿。一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，第一人稱(chēng)為主。
【高分短語(yǔ)句型】
Chinese calligraphy（中國(guó)書(shū)法）；brush（毛筆）；folk dance（民間舞蹈）；Chinese martial arts（中國(guó)武術(shù)）。
不定式作目的狀語(yǔ) To help you better understand Chinese culture, we've arranged some activities for you. 為了幫助您更好地了解中國(guó)文化，我們?yōu)槟才帕艘恍┗顒?dòng)。
被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)&定語(yǔ)從句：After the lunch break, you will be guided to the playground, where you will practice Chinese martial arts, which are good for your health. 午休后，你們會(huì)被帶去操場(chǎng)練習(xí)中國(guó)武術(shù)，這對(duì)你們的健康有好處。

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)
閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě),使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school activities. From age 14. he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass（超過(guò)）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（長(zhǎng)號(hào)）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意：
1. 所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3. 續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
4. 續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last. ___________________________..
Paragraph 2
I understand immediately what my parents were worried about. ___________________________.
Paragraph 1:
The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”
Paragraph 2:
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I?received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I?said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.

7.【2021年6月天津卷】
在英國(guó)留學(xué)完畢時(shí)寄居在同學(xué)家里，學(xué)成歸來(lái)后同學(xué)的母親Nancy發(fā)來(lái)祝賀的郵件，并詢(xún)問(wèn)假期計(jì)劃和大學(xué)要選的專(zhuān)業(yè)。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解題】
主題思想：英國(guó)留學(xué)回國(guó)也就是高中畢業(yè)，收到同學(xué)母親Nancy 發(fā)來(lái)祝賀的郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)假期計(jì)劃和大學(xué)要選的專(zhuān)業(yè)。

【參考范文】
Congratulations on your graduation! I am your best friend’s mum, Nancy. I feel so glad that you both are on a new start to university soon. After years of study abroad in our country here in Britain, I think you must have had a good knowledge of English and good adaptation here. All of these are result of your constant efforts I! All your pains pay off!
I just wonder what major you will choose in your university. If you could tell me your choice and your reason behind it, I would really appreciate since I want to take it as a reference to help my kid to choose a proper major. As China is developing very fast, I am planning to send my kid to China to further education maybe. Another request is that I would like to know your vacation plan. For instance, what will you do, where will you go and who will you go with?
Finally, you are welcomed at anytime to my house and be my guest. Congratulations again!

8.【2021年3月天津卷】
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括：
（1）該地方的基本情況（如名稱(chēng)、地理位置等）；
（2）該地方的特色（如文化、景點(diǎn)等）；
（3）你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。
A?Beautiful?Place?in?China
March?19, 2021
By?Li Jin

A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan lrrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujangyan lrrigation Project. It dates from over 2, 000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan lrigation Project.
解析：
(1)寫(xiě)作思路
考查應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。本次書(shū)面表達(dá)要求給英文網(wǎng)站《最美中華》欄目投稿，介紹介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要包含題中已給內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮增加其他內(nèi)容。注意在進(jìn)行文章內(nèi)容描寫(xiě)時(shí)一定要貼合實(shí)際，不能胡編亂造。根據(jù)題干可知，寫(xiě)作時(shí)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第三人稱(chēng)，要求語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，描述內(nèi)容貼合實(shí)際，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。
(2)重點(diǎn)詞匯/句型
a. places of interest名勝古跡；
b. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句；
c. What's more此外；
d. have a chance to do sth.有機(jī)會(huì)做某事；
e. There be句型；
f. It dates from追溯到；
g. play an important part in在……中扮演重要角色；
h. as well as以及；
(3)其他高級(jí)句型
a. It is adj. + for/of sb. to do sth. 某人做某事怎么樣。

二、2020年高考真題
1. 【2020·全國(guó)卷I】
你校正在組織英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)以身邊值得尊敬和愛(ài)戴的人為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括:
1. 人物簡(jiǎn)介；
2. 尊敬和愛(ài)戴的原因。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 短文題目和首句已為你寫(xiě)好。
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【范文】
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
2. 【2020·全國(guó)卷II】
上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括:
1. 農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況；
2. 采摘過(guò)程；
3. 個(gè)人感受
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 題目已為你寫(xiě)好。
題目:My Weekend
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【答案】
My Weekend
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders,?We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.?I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.
I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!
3. 【2020·全國(guó)卷III】
假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:
1. 劇情簡(jiǎn)介；
2. 指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；
3. 商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。
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【范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4. 【2020·天津卷1】
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。下周你校將與英國(guó)友好校舉辦一場(chǎng)在線會(huì)議, 探討如何利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ), 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示撰寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿：
（1）介紹你是如何利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的（至少寫(xiě)出兩點(diǎn)）
（2）簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀銓?duì)利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的看法
（3）請(qǐng)友好校的學(xué)生分享他們的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié), 使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
（3）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
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Thank you.
【范文】
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.

5. 【2020·天津卷2】
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李津。你校于6月8日舉辦了成人禮活動(dòng)，你的英國(guó)朋友Chris很想了解該活動(dòng)。你于當(dāng)晚給Chris回一封電子郵件，介紹關(guān)情況，內(nèi)容包括:
(1)成人禮活動(dòng)內(nèi)容(成長(zhǎng)點(diǎn)滴回顧、觀看校友抗疫事邊錄像)；
(2)對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受；
(3)對(duì)自己未來(lái)的展望。
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；
(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行方連貫；
(3)開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:
成人禮 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠腦炎 COVID-F9
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin

6. 【2020·浙江卷】
假定你是李華，你校來(lái)自愛(ài)爾蘭的外教Peter因病回國(guó)休假。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1. 詢(xún)問(wèn)近況；2. 分享班級(jí)最新消息；3. 表達(dá)祝愿。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear，I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner，a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified，Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear，hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way，but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)，I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence，sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫)，the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意:1. 所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3. 續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
4. 續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。
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7. 【2020·江蘇卷】
請(qǐng)閱讀下面有關(guān)中國(guó)題材紀(jì)錄片(documentary)的對(duì)話(huà)，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150個(gè)詞左右的文章。
Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did you see the BBC documentary on CCTV 9 last week?
Li Jiang: You mean Du Fu: China’s Greatest Poet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!
Su Hua: Just think an English actor recites Chinese poems.
Li Jiang: I don’t really understand every line he recites, but I believe he truly loves the poems himself.
Su Hua: Right. It is reported that the film is well received outside China.
Li Jiang: Yeah, It’s my first time to hear Chinese stories told by an English speaker.
Su Hua: In fact, documentaries about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad. These films can help foreign friends better understand this land-Chinese literature, geography history, food...
Li Jiang: I couldn’t agree more.

（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）
1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上述對(duì)話(huà)的主要內(nèi)容；
2.談?wù)勚袊?guó)題材紀(jì)錄片受到外國(guó)朋友歡迎的原因(至少兩點(diǎn))。
（寫(xiě)作要求）
1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。
（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）
內(nèi)容完整語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
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【答案】
CCTV 9 broadcast Du Fu: China’s Greatest Poet, a documentary produced by BBC. This well-made film provides foreign audiences with a fresh way of better knowing China’s past and present.
Documentaries about China, produced either in China or in other countries, are becoming increasingly popular among foreigners. For one thing, the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.
For another, China enjoys a long history and rich culture. It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. These documentaries present a splendid picture of China in front of their audiences-it history, landscape, art, food, or even traditional Chinese medicine.
Because of these films, some foreigners have begun to think of coming to China. In this way, they can form a true picture of China themselves.
三、2019年高考真題
1. 【2019·全國(guó)卷I】
假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要?jiǎng)“嬷袊?guó)畫(huà)展。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：
1.寫(xiě)信目的；
2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；
3.能做的事情。
注意:：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.

【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。
1.審題立意
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信，人稱(chēng)使用第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在式。
2.謀篇布局
書(shū)信格式，稱(chēng)呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫(xiě)信的目的，中間段寫(xiě)個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。
3.關(guān)鍵詞
根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。通過(guò)詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫(xiě)完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫(xiě)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過(guò)渡性的詞匯，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least，等，使全文銜接自然，語(yǔ)義流暢。
【范文】
Dear sir or madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【點(diǎn)睛】
本文首段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，表達(dá)了寫(xiě)信的目的；第2段詳細(xì)介紹了個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事情，an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此處使用了同位語(yǔ)和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分詞做狀語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)從句及被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分詞和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用使文章富有條理性。此外，還使用了高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)，如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration條件狀語(yǔ)從句。

2. 【2019·全國(guó)卷II】
假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)李華。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括:
1.比賽信息；
2.賽前準(zhǔn)備；
3.表達(dá)期待。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【分析】今年的書(shū)面表達(dá)沿襲近幾年的體裁，仍舊是應(yīng)用文。本次書(shū)面表達(dá)要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件告知隊(duì)友有關(guān)比賽的信息。
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一封告知信。首先要告知寫(xiě)信目的；然后簡(jiǎn)明扼要地告知排球比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及賽前的準(zhǔn)備事項(xiàng)，注意事件信息的三要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，要交代清楚；第三則要表達(dá)對(duì)隊(duì)友的期待和鼓勵(lì)。
【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)，并運(yùn)用了高級(jí)句式。I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.賓語(yǔ)從句；In order to win the match不定式作目狀語(yǔ)。文章語(yǔ)言流暢，上下文轉(zhuǎn)換自然。
3. 【2019·全國(guó)卷III】
假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂(lè)節(jié)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的英國(guó)朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括:
1.時(shí)間；
2.活動(dòng)安排；
3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
今年的書(shū)面表達(dá)要求考生寫(xiě)郵件，告知英國(guó)朋友音樂(lè)節(jié)的情況。
【詳解】首先確定提綱。先介紹寫(xiě)作目的，之后介紹音樂(lè)節(jié)的時(shí)間、活動(dòng)安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。
第二，根據(jù)提綱，確定關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。
第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)。
【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)。并使用了高級(jí)句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定語(yǔ)從句。提升了文章檔次。
4. 【2019·北京卷】
第一節(jié) (15分)
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim打算暑假期間來(lái)北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括:
1.交通出行；
2.必備衣物。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)不少于50；
2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim，
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua

【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】
本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求給朋友寫(xiě)回信。
【詳解】紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華的英國(guó)好友Jim打算暑假期間來(lái)北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。要求給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必備衣物。本文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，用第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。文章可以分為三部分來(lái)寫(xiě)：首先表達(dá)歡迎Jim來(lái)中國(guó)；然后交代交通出行和必備衣物；最后盼望朋友的到來(lái)。注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，為文章增添色彩；注意使用連接詞、銜接詞，使文章自然、流暢。
【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言表述流暢。文章使用了幾個(gè)高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是賓語(yǔ)從句。 where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
5. 【2019·天津卷】
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國(guó)友好校將派教師來(lái)你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動(dòng)?；顒?dòng)期間，英方教師Chris 將做一個(gè)有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫(xiě)一封電子郵件:
（1）你喜歡的講座話(huà)題（從音樂(lè)、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；
（2）選擇該話(huà)題的原因及關(guān)于該話(huà)題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；
（3）希望從中有何收獲。
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100：
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
（3）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】
這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【范文】
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note，music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz，and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
一、評(píng)分原則
1. 本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。
2. 評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后綜合給分。
3. 詞數(shù)少于100的，從總分中減去2分。
4. 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。
5. 拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。每錯(cuò)誤書(shū)寫(xiě)3個(gè)單詞從總分中減去1分，原則上不超過(guò)3分，重復(fù)的不計(jì)。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，將視其對(duì)交際的影響程度的情減分。
6. 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。
二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
1. 你喜歡的講座話(huà)題（從音樂(lè)、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；
2. 選擇該話(huà)題的原因及關(guān)于該話(huà)題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；
3. 希望從中有何收獲。
三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求
分?jǐn)?shù)檔
內(nèi)容
語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯
銜接和連貫
整體效果
第五檔21-25分（很好）
覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、地道；有個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤，但不影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。
有效使用銜接手段，內(nèi)容連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊
具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力；完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第四檔16-20分（好）
覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)要求；表達(dá)基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯(cuò)誤對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解影響不大。
應(yīng)用了簡(jiǎn)單的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)較緊湊。
達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的
第三檔11~15分（一般）
漏掉一些內(nèi)容，覆蓋部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能基本滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)要求；有一些錯(cuò)誤，對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解造成了一定影響。
應(yīng)用了簡(jiǎn)單的連接成分，內(nèi)容基本連貫。
基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第二檔6-10分（較差）
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，有一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。
語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限；錯(cuò)誤較多，且在很大程度上影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。
較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。
信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。
第一檔1~5分（差）
明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容，可能未理解試題要求
語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限；錯(cuò)誤較多，嚴(yán)重影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。
缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。
基本信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。
0分
未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息；內(nèi)容太少，無(wú)法評(píng)判；寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。
6. 【2019·浙江卷】
第一節(jié) 應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作(滿(mǎn)分15分)
假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:
1.表示感謝；
2.回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；
3.臨別祝愿。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】
這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能選漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化.平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、2018年高考真題
1.【2018·全國(guó)卷I】
假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．到達(dá)時(shí)間；
2．合適的禮物；
3．餐桌禮儀。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【試題分析】
書(shū)面表達(dá)具有很強(qiáng)的開(kāi)放性和選擇性，給予考生暢所欲言的空間，擺脫單一方法，唯一答案的思維模式，在展示多彩思維活動(dòng)的同時(shí)，真正考查了考生語(yǔ)言能力、文化意識(shí)、思維品質(zhì)和學(xué)習(xí)能力，讓考生感受英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的趣味與魅力，突出英語(yǔ)學(xué)科的獨(dú)有特征。
2018年全國(guó)卷I書(shū)面表達(dá)體裁為應(yīng)用文電子郵件，內(nèi)容為回復(fù)外國(guó)朋友Terry的郵件，向其介紹在中國(guó)家庭做客方面的相關(guān)習(xí)俗。要求文中涵蓋試題給出的三方面內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，即到達(dá)時(shí)間、合適的禮物和餐桌禮儀。該題型和內(nèi)容設(shè)計(jì)緊密聯(lián)系考生實(shí)際，但是，餐桌禮儀這個(gè)普通得再普通不過(guò)的日常小節(jié)反而在生活中被很多中學(xué)生忽略了。如果沒(méi)有跨文化對(duì)比凝練出的思維品格和文化素養(yǎng)的意識(shí)，學(xué)生很難在短時(shí)間內(nèi)寫(xiě)出中國(guó)老百姓的餐桌禮儀文化。例如受邀赴宴客人可以準(zhǔn)時(shí)到達(dá)但切忌過(guò)早到達(dá)。外地客人所帶禮物常見(jiàn)為能體現(xiàn)客人當(dāng)?shù)靥厣奈锲?。但注意，傳統(tǒng)的中國(guó)人收到禮物后一般不會(huì)當(dāng)著客人的面打開(kāi)。中國(guó)餐桌為圓桌，正對(duì)門(mén)的位置為上座，一般為長(zhǎng)者位置。中國(guó)人特別尊敬長(zhǎng)輩，用餐時(shí)，需等長(zhǎng)輩先動(dòng)筷子。吃飯時(shí)不得發(fā)出聲響，強(qiáng)調(diào)“食不語(yǔ)寢不言”等。中國(guó)地域廣文化差異也很大，給予思維發(fā)散的考生提供了充分表達(dá)自己的空間和機(jī)會(huì)。
在宣傳中國(guó)習(xí)俗文化的同時(shí)，對(duì)考生的跨文化意識(shí)、思維品質(zhì)提出了更高的要求，鼓勵(lì)考生站在外國(guó)人的角度講中國(guó)習(xí)俗特色，積極調(diào)動(dòng)語(yǔ)言，闡明事實(shí)，表明差異。
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本文是一篇電子郵件類(lèi)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。餐桌禮儀也是考生比較熟悉的話(huà)題。成文時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全1．到達(dá)時(shí)間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。二、時(shí)態(tài)：主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)；三、人稱(chēng)：第二、三人稱(chēng)。四、注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
1. 瀏覽信息要點(diǎn)
2.三個(gè)任務(wù)點(diǎn)，第一段內(nèi)容：?jiǎn)柡驅(qū)Ψ?，馬上呈現(xiàn)對(duì)方所涉及的話(huà)題，拜訪中國(guó)家庭，做客時(shí)間的要求和忌諱! 第二段內(nèi)容：做客拜訪的合適禮物，可以適當(dāng)延展，初次拜訪，親密朋友之間拜訪，二次拜訪，家庭情況適合的禮物，通用的禮物等。第三段：table manners,可以描述兩三個(gè)通常的中國(guó)人的餐桌禮節(jié)和忌諱的地方，有鮮明特色之處，最后一句表達(dá)祝愿。
3.時(shí)態(tài)，給對(duì)方的建議和說(shuō)明，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述風(fēng)俗禮儀這是客觀規(guī)律性的東西，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
4.頭腦風(fēng)暴短語(yǔ)、句型結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)始打草稿
5.行文
6.檢查拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法。
【滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours
Li Hua
【素材積累】
做客禮儀：
1. 預(yù)先約定一個(gè)時(shí)間以便對(duì)方事先作好安排。如果事先已經(jīng)約定好了時(shí)間，就應(yīng)遵守約定，準(zhǔn)時(shí)到達(dá)，如需提早十分鐘二十分鐘之內(nèi)可以接受，不要遲到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好準(zhǔn)備。這是一個(gè)基本禮節(jié)問(wèn)題。
2.如果有專(zhuān)屬地域文化特色的禮物是最好的。如果朋友家有長(zhǎng)輩，帶點(diǎn)煙酒和茶葉或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，帶點(diǎn)兒童玩具或買(mǎi)箱牛奶，然后加點(diǎn)煙酒或茶葉；
不要送鐘、梨、傘等這些東西，被認(rèn)為不吉祥。
3.主人會(huì)請(qǐng)客人入座上席，再請(qǐng)長(zhǎng)輩入座客人旁。入座的時(shí)侯要從椅子的左邊進(jìn)入。在中餐結(jié)束時(shí)，筷子應(yīng)整齊地放在靠碗右邊的桌上，并應(yīng)等客人們都放下筷子以后，主人示意離席后方可以離開(kāi)，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，這樣做是很沒(méi)禮貌的表現(xiàn)。
常用詞語(yǔ)和句子
準(zhǔn)時(shí) on time/punctually
餐桌禮儀 table manners
合適的、恰當(dāng)?shù)? appropriate
拜訪 pay a visit to
You are supposed/expected/required to do…
It’s a good idea to…
It’s appropriate/suitable to do …
It’s sensible/reasonable/advisable to do …
It’s good manners to do …
It’s noteworthy that…
I think it would be more helpful if you could do…
It would be wise of you to…
It’s desirable to do …
It’s inappropriate to do …
It’s impolite to do…
It’s unwise/inadvisable to do …
Never （助動(dòng)詞/系動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞）主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞…
It’s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.
【備考啟示】
近年來(lái)高考寫(xiě)作的命題常用的思想就是高起點(diǎn)低落點(diǎn)。高起點(diǎn)題目很高，中國(guó)文化，中國(guó)故事，中國(guó)禮儀等等，但最終都把它們落在應(yīng)用文的框架里，這就是低落點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)這樣的作文，一定要注意不能寫(xiě)過(guò)于具體的內(nèi)容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的寫(xiě)，不要面面俱到，中國(guó)餐桌禮儀內(nèi)容太多，100單詞無(wú)法寫(xiě)。找重點(diǎn)，以點(diǎn)帶面。但選擇重要內(nèi)容本身就是一種能力。
2.【2018·全國(guó)卷I I】
你受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)天地”寫(xiě)一則通知，請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英語(yǔ)短片Growing Together，內(nèi)容包括：
(1)短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；
(2)放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
(3)歡迎對(duì)短片提出意見(jiàn)。
注意：
(1)詞數(shù)100左右；
(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【試題分析】
2018年高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)體裁為通知，替學(xué)校的“英語(yǔ)天地”邀請(qǐng)學(xué)生看英文短片Growing together。繼2015年，2016年，2017年連續(xù)三年考查信件認(rèn)識(shí)人寫(xiě)信之后，全國(guó)二卷考查了應(yīng)用文中的另一典型體裁，內(nèi)容為邀請(qǐng)電影相關(guān)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)的通知。學(xué)生對(duì)該題材和內(nèi)容熟悉，對(duì)詞匯的要求也相對(duì)基礎(chǔ)。
縱觀全國(guó)II卷英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)，從題材上來(lái)講，除了2014年考查了記敘文，十年中九年均考查了應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)用文占90%。所以考生在高考的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的準(zhǔn)備中應(yīng)當(dāng)把重心放在應(yīng)用文上，熟練掌握英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作的幾個(gè)相關(guān)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)，并且熟識(shí)高考英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)詞匯。
2009——2018年高考英語(yǔ)新課標(biāo)卷II書(shū)面表達(dá)
年份
命題形式
文體
內(nèi)容
2009
文字提綱
信件——回信
寫(xiě)信介紹改建后前門(mén)大街的情況
2010
文字提綱
信件——去信
給筆友寫(xiě)信告知招聘廣告信息
2011
文字提綱
信件——祝賀信
寫(xiě)信向?qū)W校輔導(dǎo)中心求助
2012
文字提綱
信件——申請(qǐng)信
申請(qǐng)參加國(guó)際中學(xué)生新加坡夏令營(yíng)
2013
文字提綱
信件——去信
請(qǐng)筆友代賣(mài)自己制作的中國(guó)結(jié)
2014
文字提綱
短文
十年后的我
2015
文字提綱
信件——邀請(qǐng)信
邀請(qǐng)外教一起去敬老院陪老人過(guò)重陽(yáng)節(jié)
2016
文字提綱
信件——邀請(qǐng)信
邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)朋友Peter參加攝影比賽并提供攝影作品
2017
文字提綱
信件——邀請(qǐng)信
寫(xiě)信邀請(qǐng)外教參加剪紙展覽
2018
文字提綱
通知
通知觀看英語(yǔ)短片
【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥】
英語(yǔ)書(shū)面通知的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，多使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、簡(jiǎn)單句。在通知中不應(yīng)當(dāng)過(guò)度的使用較復(fù)雜的詞語(yǔ)和讀起來(lái)拗口的句子。
第二個(gè)注意點(diǎn)：層次一定要清晰，一個(gè)層次要表達(dá)一件事情，使人看起來(lái)一目了然。
【滿(mǎn)分范文】
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is?Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th?. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments. ???
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
The Student Union
3.【2018·全國(guó)卷III】
假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter 來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館；
2. 主要的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；
3. 你喜歡的項(xiàng)目。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右：
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本題作文為提綱式作文，形式依然是書(shū)信，即給英國(guó)朋友Peter介紹學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況，屬于學(xué)校生活話(huà)題。這一話(huà)題貼合學(xué)生生活的實(shí)際，學(xué)生并不陌生，有話(huà)可說(shuō)。
首先可以介紹學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館，場(chǎng)館的位置，大小，開(kāi)放時(shí)間等等。然后簡(jiǎn)要介紹學(xué)校主要開(kāi)設(shè)的體育項(xiàng)目有哪些，可挑選一到兩個(gè)做詳細(xì)介紹，如學(xué)生的活動(dòng)時(shí)間，活動(dòng)形式，以及此類(lèi)活動(dòng)的好處等。再次簡(jiǎn)要分析自己喜歡的體育項(xiàng)目是什么，并簡(jiǎn)單分析喜歡的原因，自己從中得到的益處等。文章可主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱(chēng)的方式來(lái)寫(xiě)。
【滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.（2018·浙江卷）
第一節(jié) 應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作
假定你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)招聘志愿者，接待來(lái)訪的國(guó)外中學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 口語(yǔ)能力：
2. 相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；
3. 應(yīng)聘目的。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)應(yīng)聘信。
第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)招聘志愿者，接待來(lái)訪的國(guó)外中學(xué)生。要求寫(xiě)封應(yīng)聘信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 口語(yǔ)能力：2. 相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；3. 應(yīng)聘目的。
第二步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）。
第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。
第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。
本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
5.（2018·天津卷）
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人興趣小組組長(zhǎng)李津，你的美國(guó)朋友Chris就讀于天津某國(guó)際學(xué)校，他曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。你打算邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì)，參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。
（1）比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
（2）邀請(qǐng)他的原因；
（3）訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議。
注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
（3）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：
世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin

【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本篇書(shū)面要求寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：一、動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1. 代表興趣小組發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；2. 介紹比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等安排；3. 說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)他的原因，包括Chris曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)；4. 告訴他訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議。二、寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，對(duì)于本文來(lái)說(shuō)，以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.?
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
6.（2018·北京卷）
第一節(jié)
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來(lái)北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢(xún)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
(1) 表示歡迎；
(2) 推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；
(3) 建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。
注意：(1). 詞數(shù)不少于50；
(2). 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本文為提綱式作文，文章要求寫(xiě)推薦信，為英國(guó)朋友介紹北京的大學(xué)。首先可以介紹一下寫(xiě)作背景（Jim對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)），表達(dá)歡迎。然后推薦一所大學(xué)，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹推薦的原因（如大學(xué)的特色，可以學(xué)到什么等）。再次簡(jiǎn)單介紹應(yīng)該做哪方面的準(zhǔn)備，如可以提前學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，讀點(diǎn)有關(guān)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的書(shū)，了解中國(guó)的習(xí)俗，讓自己更好地適應(yīng)中國(guó)的生活。文章可采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)可以使用第二人稱(chēng)。

【滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua

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