以下對(duì)求助信、祝賀信、慰問(wèn)信類別提供對(duì)應(yīng)的模板和基本寫作技巧。
十、說(shuō)明文
說(shuō)明文用來(lái)解釋或探討各種問(wèn)題,如機(jī)器的制造過(guò)程,自然現(xiàn)象或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因,工程的規(guī)劃或問(wèn)題的解決方案等等。
1. 說(shuō)明事物的順序
我們可以按以下三類順序說(shuō)明事物:
1、時(shí)間順序,即按事物的發(fā)生、發(fā)展的先后順序進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。
2、空間順序,即按事物空間位置的順序,由上至下,由近及遠(yuǎn)或由里至外地說(shuō)明。
3、邏輯順序,即按人們認(rèn)識(shí)事物的規(guī)律進(jìn)行說(shuō)明,如由概括到具體,由整體到部分,由現(xiàn)象到本質(zhì),由表及里,由原因到結(jié)果,由主要到次要,由特點(diǎn)到用途等。
2. 說(shuō)明事物的方法
1、定義法。定義法的目的是讓不知此事物的人對(duì)此物有一個(gè)起碼的了解,以利于下文的展開。如:A thermmeter is an instrument used fr measuring temperature. 就是對(duì)thermmeter下了一個(gè)定義。有些事物也許不好下個(gè)明確定義,但我們可以交待這個(gè)事物的背景,來(lái)源,或列舉出它的一些典型特征,以便讓讀者明白。這類事物可以是術(shù)語(yǔ),也可以是外國(guó)人所不了 的中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)事物,如龍舟節(jié)等。
2、舉例說(shuō)明法。舉出具有代表性的例子,能夠真切地說(shuō)明事物,化抽象為具體,使段落變得有血有肉,豐富起來(lái)。舉例時(shí)常用的表達(dá)有:fr example(例如),fr instance(例如),as an example f (作為……的例子),take… fr example (以……為例)等。
3、比較法。為了突出事物鮮明的特點(diǎn),我們常把它與其他事物進(jìn)行比較。比方說(shuō)我們想向讀者介紹什么是“電腦”,我們可以說(shuō)“It’s a kind f electrical r artificial (人工的)brain.”這樣把電腦和人腦進(jìn)行了比較,從而使人們對(duì)“電腦”有更清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)。
4、細(xì)節(jié)描述法。介紹一種事物,僅用概述性的詞語(yǔ)如beautiful, friendly, bring, gd 或bad 是不夠的。作者要提供一些細(xì)節(jié),使被描述的對(duì)象更加形象具體,從而加深讀者的印象。
除上述幾種方法外,我們還可以通過(guò)引經(jīng)據(jù)典 (即引用專家、名人等的話語(yǔ))、列舉數(shù)字等其他方法說(shuō)明一件事物,從而使文章更加嚴(yán)密,內(nèi)容更具有科學(xué)性,更有說(shuō)服力。也可以綜合運(yùn)用多種方法。
3. 寫作模板
模板01(主題型)
①________ is a mst effective _______t _______. ②Fr mst peple, it’s almst impssible t ______. ③________is really _________.④With the functins f _______,it enables us t _______.⑤It can even ______. ⑥Just imagine, all this can be dne with _______. ⑦A cnvenient tl can certainly make _______, but it desn’t always help _______.⑧T much _________.⑨T many ________.⑩Relying t much n _______ makes ________.
①點(diǎn)明要介紹的事物的必要性 ②介紹該事物對(duì)多數(shù)人的重要意義 ③該事物優(yōu)勢(shì)或顯著特點(diǎn) ④該事物的作用 ⑤進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明該事物的作用 ⑥說(shuō)明該事物的重要性 ⑦承上啟下,介紹事物的另一方面 ⑧該事物的負(fù)面影響一 ⑨該事物的負(fù)面影響二 ⑩總結(jié)說(shuō)明過(guò)分使用該物品給我們帶來(lái)的負(fù)面影響。
模板02(說(shuō)明原因型)
Nwadays, there are mre and mre in sme big cities. It is estimated that ____________________.(用具體數(shù)據(jù)說(shuō)明某現(xiàn)象)
Why have there been s many ? Maybe the reasns can be listed as fllws. The first reasn is that __________________.(原因一)Besides, __________________.(原因二)The third reasn is __________________.(原因三)T sum up, the main cause f is due t__________________ .(指出主要原因)
It is high time that smething shuld be dne. Fr ne thing, __________________.(解決建議一)
Fr anther thing, . All these measures will certainly __________________.(解決建議二)
模板03(描述事物型)
What I have knwn abut is that _________________.(具體描述某事物)
Firstly, __________________.(描述要點(diǎn)一)__________________.(具體闡述要點(diǎn)一)Secndly, __________________.(描述要點(diǎn)二)(具體闡述要點(diǎn)二)__________________. As a cllege student, __________________.(結(jié)合自身描述要點(diǎn)三)
All in all, __________________.(做出總結(jié))Therefre, we shuld __________________.(提出建議)
模板04(問(wèn)題解決型)
In recent days, there has been a prblem , which is becming mre and mre serius.(說(shuō)明問(wèn)題及其現(xiàn)狀)First, __________________. Secnd, __________________.(進(jìn)一步闡釋現(xiàn)狀)
We shuld take a series f effective measures t cpe with the situatin. Fr ne thing, ________. Fr anther thing, ________. Finally, ________.(列舉解決該問(wèn)題的方法)
Persnally, I believe that ________/Cnsequently, I’m cnfident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________.(結(jié)尾段,指出"我"的信心及理由)
模板05(說(shuō)明利弊題型)
Nwadays, many peple prefer A because it is playing a mre and mre imprtant rle in ur daily life. Generally/Generally speaking/On the whle, its advantages can be seen as fllws./it has the fllwing advantages. First f all, _________________ (A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一). Besides,/What’s mre, _________________A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).
Hwever, every cin has tw sides./Everything has bth advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are als apparent./Its disadvantages are als bvius. One f the imprtant disadvantages is that _________________ (A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).T make matters wrse,/T make the matter wrse,/T make things wrse/What’s wrse, _________________(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).
Thrugh the abve analysis, I believe that the psitive aspects verweigh the negative nes./The abve analysis shws us that it has mre advantages than disadvantages. Therefre, I wuld like t _________________ (我的看法).
(Frm the cmparisn between these psitive and negative effects f A, we shuld take it reasnably and d it accrding t the circumstances we are in. Only in this way can we_________________(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)).)
4. 高頻詞句
1簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖表內(nèi)容的句型: 從圖表可以看出
The table/chart shws that …
As can be seen frm the chart…
Frm the table/chart/frms we can see…
The table tells us that…
2表示變化/比較的句型:
There was a great / slight increase/rise in …
There has been a sudden /slw/rapid fall/ drp in… It is 20% lwer /higher than…
The number/rate has nearly dubled, as against that f last year.
The number is … times as much as that f…
It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by … times/ … percent/ 2/3.
3說(shuō)明原因的句型:
The reasn fr …is that…
One may think f the change as a result f…
The change in… largely results frm the fact that…
There are several causes fr this significant grwth in … First…This brings ut the imprtant fact that…
4 結(jié)尾句型:
In summary, it is imprtant….
Frm what has been discussed abve, we may draw the cnclusin that…
Obviusly, if we want t…, it is necessary ….
There is n dubt that attentin must be paid…
5. 高考真題
【真題1】2021.3天津卷:假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目,請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿,介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括:
(1)該地方的基本情況(如名稱、地理位置等);
(2)該地方的特色(如文化、景點(diǎn)等);
(3)你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;
(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China. It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan lrrigatin prject.
Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince. What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes. What's mre, walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals like giant pandas, glden mnkeys. There are als many species f rare plants prtected here. Anther famus scenic spt is Dujangyan lrrigatin Prject. It dates frm ver 2, 000 years ag. Hwever, it is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday.
I'm sure the visitrs will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigu as well as the cnstructin Dujiangyan lrigatin Prject.
【真題2】2018全國(guó)3卷
假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)給他回信
內(nèi)容包括:
1. 學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館;
2. 主要的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目;
3. 你喜歡的項(xiàng)目。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu ding? Yu asked me abut hw ur schl perfrms ur PE classes in yur last letter, s I'm writing t share with yu sme details.
Equipped with tw playgrunds as well as a splendid stadium, ur schl ffers us an pprtunity t d a variety f sprts. Nt nly dwe take vlleyball and basketball curses, but ur schl als hlds all kinds f sprts cmpetitins. Amng all sprts, I'm crazy abutvlleyball. As far as I'm cncerned, there is nthing better than playing vlleyball, which cntributes t us cperating with thers.
Lking frward t hearing frm yu again!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【真題3】2016年四川卷
某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正舉辦"The Seasn I Like Best"的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文投稿,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:
1. 你最喜歡的季節(jié);
2. 你喜歡該季節(jié)的兩條理由(如:氣候、景色、活動(dòng)、感受……)。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 題目已為你寫好;
3. 行文連貫,語(yǔ)篇完整;
4. 文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。
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【思路點(diǎn)撥】
審題時(shí)考生需要注意三點(diǎn):1. 既然是為征文活動(dòng)寫的短文,那么最好增加標(biāo)題(題干已給出),注意和書信類的應(yīng)用文有所區(qū)別。2. 如前所述,內(nèi)容主體雖然只涉及兩個(gè)大方面,但陳述兩條理由的時(shí)候需要有層次地展開:既可以從客觀事實(shí)和主觀感受兩方面來(lái)寫,也可以從季節(jié)本身的自然屬性和發(fā)生在季節(jié)中的人文活動(dòng)入手,這是該作文要求中比較靈活的部分。3. 需要增加文章開頭和結(jié)尾部分,以保證語(yǔ)篇的完整性和邏輯的通暢性,這是該作文要求中比較開放的部分。這三點(diǎn),是難點(diǎn),也是失分點(diǎn)。
【參考范文】
The Seasn I Like Best
Each f us knws that there are fur seasns a year. Different peple like different seasns; my favurite seasn is spring. I lve t smell the fragrance f flwers, see the new green trees and hear the singing f small birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees ver the flwers. Smetimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The rain mistens the trees and the flwers. And I can play utside, t! Whether we like riding bikes, jgging r ging n lng walks, spring allws us t enjy utdr activities that we had t put n the back burner during winter. Of curse, there are many ther reasns t explain why I’m s excited abut spring. Thank yu, spring!
【技巧點(diǎn)撥】
事物介紹類書面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文。說(shuō)明文是用簡(jiǎn)潔的文字介紹事物的特性、構(gòu)造、變化或結(jié)果的文章。高考中,說(shuō)明文常見(jiàn)的話題有:事物介紹、地點(diǎn)描述、方位描寫、變化分析和購(gòu)物指南等。寫這類文章需要注意以下幾點(diǎn):
1. 首先要審題,弄清需要介紹的內(nèi)容,把握信息要點(diǎn)。
2. 寫作內(nèi)容要條理清楚,層次分明。說(shuō)明科技方面的內(nèi)容常用定義法、比較對(duì)比法、分類法和因果法等;
明自然環(huán)境方面的內(nèi)容常用時(shí)空次序法與分類法等。
3. 時(shí)態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),當(dāng)然若是介紹其歷史,要用一般過(guò)去時(shí);語(yǔ)態(tài)可能會(huì)用到被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài);若是介紹地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境等,要善于運(yùn)用there be結(jié)構(gòu)。
4. 人稱多以第三人稱為主。
【真題4】2020.7全國(guó)二卷
上周末,你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫一篇短文,介紹這次活動(dòng),內(nèi)容包括:
1. 農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況; 2. 采摘過(guò)程; 3. 個(gè)人感受。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 題目已為你寫好。
題目:My Weekend
My Weekend
Last weekend,we tk part in a picking activity. We drve frm the schl, and the farm was abut 2 kilmeters away frm ur schl. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds f animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided int tw grups. One grup was respnsible fr picking fruits, the ther packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was ver. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lt frm it. Thrugh this activity, we knw hw hard the farmers are and hw precius the fd is. We shuld treasure the fd planted by the farmers.
十一、求助信
1. 考情分析
①第一種類型:請(qǐng)求提供信息
如:“我”要去海外求學(xué),請(qǐng)求對(duì)方提供相關(guān)學(xué)校的學(xué)費(fèi)、住宿等信息。這種請(qǐng)求信也叫“咨詢信”,
【內(nèi)容分析】
a.客觀描述(靠翻譯)
b.喜愛(ài)/推薦原因
重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備:中國(guó)文化類,如節(jié)日,中國(guó)結(jié),唐詩(shī)等中國(guó)元素相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。
②第二種類型:請(qǐng)求對(duì)方付出建議或者某種行為(腦力或體力)
如:“我”要參加競(jìng)賽,請(qǐng)對(duì)方給“我”建議;
“我”是校報(bào)編輯,請(qǐng)求對(duì)方寫文章。此種請(qǐng)求信也叫“約稿信”。
約稿信的變體:“我”是主辦方代表,請(qǐng)求對(duì)方為某次展覽提供攝影或繪畫作品。
2. 布局思維導(dǎo)圖
3. 寫作模板
Dear ______ (稱謂)
I am ______(自我介紹) . I am writing t seek fr yur help in______(寫信目的).
Nw, I struggle a lt in ______(遇到的困難). I’ve fund that ______(描述自己的困難). Fr ne thing, ______(困難一). Fr anther, ______(困難二).
Therefre, culd yu please put frward sme practical suggestins? I am cnvinced that I will benefit a lt frm yur valuable and timely advice.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd respnd at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
4. 寫作實(shí)操技巧
假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華,今年的高考閱讀量加大,而你的閱讀能力較差,因此學(xué)習(xí)的壓力越來(lái)越大。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你下內(nèi)容向你的前外教Mr Jacksn 求助。希望得到他的幫助。
注意:詞數(shù) 80 左右,可合理添加細(xì)節(jié)。
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【模板套用】
Dear Mr Jacksn (稱謂)
I am Li Hua, preparing fr the Natinal Cllege exam (自我介紹) . I am writing t seek fr yur help in imprving my English (寫信目的).
Nw, I struggle a lt in English reading(遇到的困難). I’ve fund that with the cllege entrance appraching I feel mre stressed than ever(描述自己的困難). Fr ne thing, we have t read mre articles in the exam and all the teachers attach great significance t the capability f reading, asking students t expand vcabulary and d mre exercises (困難一). Fr anther, hard as I try, I still find it hard t imprve, which even makes me can’t sleep (困難二).
Therefre, culd yu please put frward sme practical suggestins? I am cnvinced that I will benefit a lt frm yur valuable and timely advice.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd respnd at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 仿寫演練
假定你是李華,你正在為期中考試緊張復(fù)習(xí),但最近你遇到了一些問(wèn)題導(dǎo)致無(wú)法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。于是你給學(xué)校心理老師Kate寫了一封求助信尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)如下:
1.作業(yè)多,沒(méi)時(shí)間運(yùn)動(dòng);
2. 壓力大,難以入睡;
3. 希望得到Kate的幫助
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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【模板范文】
Dear Kate (稱謂)
I am Li Hua (自我介紹) . I am writing t seek fr yur help in imprving my English (寫信目的).
Nw, I struggle a lt in my study(遇到的困難). I’ve fund that hardly d I take sprts due t t much hmewrk (描述自己的困難). Fr ne thing, it’s difficult fr me t fall asleep every night (困難一). Fr anther, the high expectatin frm my parents makes me extremely feel stressed (困難二).
Therefre, culd yu please put frward sme practical suggestins? I am cnvinced that I will benefit a lt frm yur valuable and timely advice.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd respnd at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 高考真題
【真題1】(2020全國(guó)III)假定你是李華,你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件,請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:
1. 劇情簡(jiǎn)介;2. 指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容;3. 商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
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Dear Miss Evans,
Hw is everything ging! I am writing in sincerity t ask yu a favr regarding a play we adapted accrding t the textbk.
We’d like t cmbine yur culture with urs by adapting the classic nvel The Steambat fr a shrt English play. The play is set n a big strm after midnight, n the raft dwn the river navigatin, we see a steambat that is ging t sink. We saved a scared by. Hwever, the adaptin is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dn’t want anything inapprpriate t spil the play. S wuld yu please spare sme time t review the draft script attached t this email and make necessary changes? If it is cnvenient, may I pay yu a visit at yur ffice next Tuesday t give yu mre details?
Given yur busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if yu ffer t give sme prfessinal advice. Lk frward t yur early reply. Best regards!
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【真題2】(2016·新課標(biāo)卷I)李華,暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職,已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷(resume)。給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信,請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(frmat)。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua. I plan t take a part-time jb in a freign cmpany during the summer hliday. I have already filled in the applicatin frm and had my resume ready fr it. Hwever, I am nt sure abut the wrds and frmat. Therefre, I am writing t ask fr yur help and prfessinal advice.
Wuld yu please spare sme time t read thrugh the materials attached? Wuld yu mind finding ut the mistakes in terms f wrds and frmat? Besides, I’d like yu t crrect the mistakes fund in the materials and frmat.
I wuld much appreciate it if yu culd d me a favr. I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【真題3】(2013·新課標(biāo)卷I)假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信,告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì),帶去他想要的那幅中國(guó)畫,同時(shí)詢問(wèn)他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說(shuō)明:
李明:高個(gè)子,戴眼鏡
航班號(hào):CA985
到達(dá):8月6日上午11:30
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
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Dear Peter,
Hw are yu ding?
I’m writing t tell yu that my uncle Li Ming is ging t yur city fr a cnference, and I’ve asked him t bring yu the Chinese painting yu’ve asked fr befre.
Als, I’d like yu t d me a favr. Wuld yu please meet my uncle at the airprt and take him t his htel since this is his first visit t the U.S.? Thank yu in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua

十二、祝賀信
1. 布局思維導(dǎo)圖
2. 基本模板
Dear ______ (稱謂)
I am writing t extend t yu my utmst cngratulatins n ______(祝賀事由). As ______(身份關(guān)系), I just want yu t knw hw delighted I was when______(祝賀事由) .
Fr these years, yu ______(被祝賀人過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷). Nt nly did/have/were______(被祝賀人的努力), but als______(被祝賀人的努力). It is a reward yu richly deserve fr yur ______(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)) .
All my best wishes fr an even mre prsperus future!
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 寫作實(shí)操技巧
假如你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Michael在學(xué)校舉辦的“中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)”比賽中獲得了外國(guó)選手組一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一封英文電子郵件向他表示祝賀。
1. 祝賀他獲獎(jiǎng);
2. 肯定他付出的努力;
3. 詢問(wèn)何時(shí)方便,一起交流一下中國(guó)古詩(shī)詞學(xué)習(xí)心得。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì) Chinese Petry Cntest
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【模板范文】
Dear Michael (稱謂)
I am writing t extend t yu my utmst cngratulatins n yur winning the first prize f yur grup in the Chinese Petry Cntest (祝賀事由). As yur friend(身份關(guān)系), I just want yu t knw hw delighted I was when I knw yur success(祝賀事由) .
Fr these years, yu’ve shwn great interest in Chinese petry and kept n reciting pems every day (被祝賀人過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷). Nt nly have yu accumulated much knwledge abut Chinese petry (被祝賀人的努力), but als yu have frmed a deep understanding f it (被祝賀人的努力). It is a reward yu richly deserve fr yur appreciatin twards thse pems (被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)) .
All my best wishes fr an even mre prsperus future!
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
4. 仿寫演練
假設(shè)你是李華,來(lái)自美國(guó)的交流生Peter 在你班學(xué)習(xí)半年,與你成為好朋友。目前,他即將完成學(xué)成回國(guó),請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一篇臨別留言。要點(diǎn)包括:
1.祝賀Peter學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)取得的成績(jī);
2. 取得成績(jī)的原因;
3. 你們的友誼和對(duì)他的祝愿。
注意:
1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
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【模板范文】
Dear Peter (稱謂)
I am writing t extend t yu my utmst cngratulatins n yur achievement in yur study (祝賀事由). As yur friend(身份關(guān)系), I just want yu t knw hw delighted I was when I knw have achieved yur gal (祝賀事由) .
Fr the past six mnths, yu astnished us with yur amazing talent in learning Chinese well in a shrt f time (被祝賀人過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷). Nt nly are yu diligent and active, which is vital fr Chinese learning (被祝賀人的努力), but als yu have shwed yur genuine passin fr Chinese reading, which enables yu t have a gd memry fr Chinese characters (被祝賀人的努力). It is a reward yu richly deserve fr yur enthusiasm (被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)) .
Still I knw it’s time fr us t say gdbye. All my best wishes fr an even mre prsperus future!
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua

十三、慰問(wèn)信
1. 布局思維導(dǎo)圖
2. 基本模板
Dear ______ (稱謂)
Wrds fail me t cnvey my wrry when I heard that ______(寫信原由). I am writing t extend sincere pity and care fr yu (I hpe that the unexpected failure/truble wn’t let yu dwn).
Yu must ______(表達(dá)對(duì)遭遇的理解). Hwever,if yu were brave enugh nt t ______(悲觀失望等), which is admirable. Anyway,It can’t be better if yu can lift yur spirits t face up t the result. Plus, ______(提供建議或幫助) . Remember, I wn’t be far away.
I hpe yu can find my encuragement helpful(Hpe yu can have yur trubles remved sn).
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua

2. 寫作實(shí)操技巧
假定你是李華,你的同班同學(xué)王剛的家鄉(xiāng)遭受臺(tái)風(fēng)(Typhn Mujigae)的襲擊,洪水毀壞了家園。你作為班長(zhǎng)給他寫一封信,內(nèi)容如下:1. 表示安慰和關(guān)心;2. 提供幫助。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)80左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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Dear Wang Gang (稱謂)
Wrds fail me t cnvey my wrry when I heard that a hrrible and severe Typhn Mujigae hit yur hmetwn and yur huse is in ruins (寫信原由). I am writing t extend sincere pity and care fr yu.
Yu must have suffered a lt frm the accident(表達(dá)對(duì)遭遇的理解). Hwever,if yu were brave enugh nt t let ut a cry (悲觀失望等), which is admirable. Anyway,It can’t be better if yu can lift yur spirits t face up t the result. Plus, we will spare n effrt t help yu. We’ve made a dnatin f sme mney, expecting it can help yu g thrugh the difficulty. As fr the lessns yu have missed, I am willing t help yu make them up(提供建議或幫助) . Remember, I wn’t be far away.
Hpe yu can have yur trubles remved sn.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 仿寫演練
假如你是李華,你的美國(guó)筆友Mike來(lái)信說(shuō)他現(xiàn)在心情很不好,因?yàn)樵谏现芙Y(jié)束的?;@球比賽中,他所在的班級(jí)籃球隊(duì)以一分之差輸了。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信,內(nèi)容如下:1. 表示安慰;2. 提出建議。
注意:
1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
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Dear Mike (稱謂)
Wrds fail me t cnvey my wrry when I heard that yur team lst the basketball match last weekend (寫信原由). I am writing t extend sincere pity and care fr yu.
Yu must have been in bad md (表達(dá)對(duì)遭遇的理解). Hwever,if yu were brave enugh nt t be depressed(悲觀失望等), which is admirable. Anyway,It can’t be better if yu can lift yur spirits t face up t the result. Plus, the essence f cmpetitin lies nt in victry but in participatin. Besides, yu can als benefit frm yur lss by figuring ut yur strengths and weaknesses (提供建議或幫助) . Remember, I wn’t be far away.
I hpe yu can find my encuragement helpful.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
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